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Casinar

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I loved this update with the core of my heart. The love Abhi bestowed over Aruhi was overwhelming, intense, full of love, marvelous, fantastic.
The seaside scene was fabulously described and the bonding and love between Aruhi and Abhi was spectacular. Loved everything at the seaside, from the swiming, to sand castle building, to the walking on the sand and the sunset watch. Everything is written and described fabulously.
However I had pinch in the heart for Shweta. She had a bad childhood and was watching all silently trying not to disturb the pleasure of Aruhi and Abhi. She must be living her childhood in Aruhi as well and thinking of the days Abhi was taking her in his lap and giving his love to her..... I still remember the days Shweta on seeing Abhi how she was running into his arms shouting "Abhiiiiiiii"
So I feel Shweta must be living those moments watching her daughter having the same happiness with the same man she loved and enjoyed her childhood.
What a change of time and what a coincidence that today Shweta chose the same man for her daughter as well.
Fantastic heart touching update Casinar ji. :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause:

Heartfelt thanks Amity dear
 

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And this update comes to add even more beauty to the last one. The love and pleasure Aruhi got with Abhi now gets multiplied by Navina with whom Aruhi immediately gets connected to get along like a glove in the hand. Navina's motherly nature attracts kids since she have had great experience in teaching and handling students.
A woman with no children gives more attention and care to children and so was Navina and Aruhi chose to spend the night with her instead of her mother.
Abhi is left alone with Shweta and he starts being naughty whereas Shweta is scared and worried since its yhe first time she is in Abhi's house and Navina is around.
Excellent writing and lovely update Casinar ji. Very much appreciated.
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Thanks very very much for the appreciation Amity dear :love:
 

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Pyar bhara update hai Casi ji.
Aruhi ko itna pyar mil jaegac
achanak se ek hi din me socha nahin hoga na Aruhi ne na Shweta ne.
Navina ki khushi shayad Aruhi se bahut jiada tha magar jiss tarah se Aruhi ghul mil gayi Navina se itni jaldi lagta hai dil ke taar pehle se jude hue the donon ke.
Abhi ko bhi khushi hua hoga Navina ko Aruhi ke saath utna khush dekh kar. Navina Aruhi k sath itni khush think Abhi ko Shweta ke saath akele chorr diya donon ko intimacy de kar. Wah kia wife hai.
Abhi ne Shweta ko akela paakar ashiki karne laga usske saath jabke Shweta ko darr lag raha tha aur Abhi ko jiada maja araha tha Shweta ko uss situation mein paakar.
Majedar aur pyar se bharpur updare. Too good.
Appreciation k liye tehe dil se dhanyavad Swathi dear :love:
 

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  1. ab tk sare updates bht hi kamal ke rahe.abhi or ruhi ka pyar dono ke pyar ka parwan chadhna
  2. abhi ka ruhi ke family ko maanna or uski family ka mana krna
  3. ruhi ka abhi se door jana or abhi ka ek mushkil daur se gujarna
  4. navina ki abhi ke life mein as a frnd entry or uski life partner banna
  5. abhi ke career mein taraki krna or ek naya mukaam hasil krna

Thanks very very much kirti dear.... aap aaye mujhe khushi hui.... buss shuru se saath rehte to aur bhi maza ata.
Anyway mujhe behad khushi hui aap ko thread par dekh kar. Swagat hai aap ka.
 

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ruhi ki agar baat ki jaye toh sbse bura usi ke sath hua phle teenage mein uska maa banna jiske wajah se use kafi kuch sahna pda lekin utne kam age mein bhi usne apni beti(shweta) ke liye acha socha or uski chachi ne use goad le liya kbhi kisi chiz ki kami nhi hone di chahe nature ki jaisi bhi ho.ruhi ke life mein abhi ki entry hona lekin uske family wlo ke chalte use abhi se bhi dur hona pada.
Bahot bahot shukriya appreciation ke liye kirti dear
 

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shweta ko jb woh 18 saal ki thi tb use pta chala ki ruhi uski maa hai toh woh use nafrat krne lgi or use se badla lene ke liye abhi ke sath pyshical ho gyi shaadi shuda hote hue bhi or us ab is mein ye kah skte h ki dono bahak gye the.lekin inka ye risha aage bhi continue raha jisko shweta ne pyar ka naam diya asal mein pyaar toh kahi tha hi nhi sirf attraction tha kyu ki woh abhi or ruhi ka bachapan se dekhti aai thi or jb use apne husband se woh pyar nhi mila toh use abhi yaad aane lga.jo galti woh kr rhi hai us mein woh apni beti ko bhi ghasit liya.shweta ke wapas aane se story bilkul track se hat gyi aisa mera maanna hai

thanks very much once again.....
kahani track se nahin hatti to kia hota? wahin thehra rehta , ruhi aur Ab to alah ho gaye the..... sab ek hi jagah thehra rehta nah?
hattna hi tha uss track se aur wapas jaana tha udhar kissi tarah jo gaya :D
 

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Very beautiful update mate.
Aruhi got easily connected with Navina. Her gentle and loving nature made the kid love her even more and Abhi and Shweta were given time to spend together without being disturbed.
Shweta was feeling embarassed aa she was scared that Navina would know or may come accross them but Abhi was all at ease since he knew Navina is aware of all. And Abhi enjoyed the moments seeing shweta in the scared position.
I loved it very much when Abhi emphasized that Navina will remain his priority and will live with her the most.
Lovely update Casinar. Am sorry for replying late. The fact is that I read it before sleeping and immediately fell asleep after reading.

thanks very very much for the appreciation Vikram bro
 

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Update 69 The Next Morning

Abhi: “Navina ke paas obviously…. This is my real house. I will stay here the most. Navina will always be my priority, yeh hamesha yaad rakhna tum…. Usske baghair main aaj yeh nahin hota jo abhi hoon…. Wo nahin hoti to pata nahin main aaj kahan hota, ho sakta hai ke apne life mein aaj itna bada ghar bhi nahin hota mera, ho sakta hai navina meri life mein nahin aati to mera garage bhi nahin hota….. kuch bhi nahin hota agar Navina mujhe nahin milti to!! She is my angel, farishta hai wo meri life ki!”



Ab aaguey….

Navina itni achi thi ke Aruhi usske saath itni ghul mil gayi jaise wo sach mein usski ek aur maa thi. Aruhi usske saath rehna chahti thi. Wapas ghar nahin jaana chahti thi. Dinner kiya bhi to Navina ke saath, kitchen ke saare kaam jab Navina karne gayi to Shweta usski help karne gayi to Aruhi bhi saath rahi apni maa ke nahin balke Navina ke saath.

Raat ke 11 baj gaye the aur tab tak Aruhi Navina ke goad mein thi, jab Shweta ne uss se jaane ke liye kaha to Aruhi ne bina jhijak ke kaha,

“Nahin aaj main badi mummy ke saath rahungi, usske paas soungi main.”

Shweta ko jaise ek khatra dikha. Ye khatra ke usski beti chhiin jaegi. Shweta ko dikh gaya ke Navina mein maamta bhara hua tha…. wo thi to teacher/lecturer, life bhar ussko bachon se paala pada hai aur usske saare students Navina ko behad pyar karte hein… unn students mein se seinkron ussko maa bulate the, Navina ke students mein se kayi ladkiyan aaj maa ban chuke hein aur ab bhi milte hein to Navina ko maa bulaate hein…. Navina hai hi aisi sirf pyar karti hai, pyar baantti hai sabke saath

Shweta ko darr tha ke kahin aisa nah ho ke maa hote hue bhi wo ek din bina aulad ke nah reh jaaye….. iss bare mein ek kone mein jaa kar Shweta ne Abhi se baat kiye…. Tab Abhi ne Shweta ko samjhaya ke agar Navina ke maamta mein se thoda pyar Aruhi ko mil jata hai to harj kia hai, usski biological maa to Shweta hi rahegi, bahot samjhaane ke baad Shweta maan gayi ke aaj Aruhi Navina ke saath reh sakti hai….

To decide hua ke Shweta bhi aaj abhi ke ghar hi rahegi….. magar Shweta apni ghar jaana chahti thi, apni mummy matlab wohi Ruhi ki chahi ke ghar….

Tab Navina ne Abhi ko ek taraf bula kar kaha ke wo chala jaaye aaj Shweta ke saath rahe raat bhar, aur kal subha aakar Aruhi ko lejaaye…. Magar Abhi ne Navina se kaha ke behtar hoga ke aaj Shweta yahin ruk jati… to dhire se Navina ne kaha,

“okay you go to sleep with her I don’t mind, mujhe Aruhi mil gayi main bahot khush hoon Aruhi will sleep in your place on my bed tonight!”

To Abhi gaya Shweta ko manaane ke wo aaj raat ko ussi ke ghar ruk jaaye…. Aur Shweta maan gayi…. Aruhi ko neendh aane lagi thi, to Navina ussko lekar apni bedroom mein chali gayi… ussko Abhi ka ek tshirt pehnaya gaya ek nighdress bana kar…. Aur Navina ne Shweta ko apni ek nighdress diya pehenne ke liye…..

Abhi Shweta ko ek dusre room mein legaya…. Shweta ko nahin pata tha ke Abhi ussi ke saath soega…. Wo chahunk gayi jab Abhi ko undress hote dekha….. wo nahin maan rahi thi…. Well usska mann to bahot tha ke Abhi ke saath love making kare magar ussne bilkool nahin socha tha ke Navina ke hote hue usske ghar mein yeh mumkin hoga…..

Iss raat ko Abhi to normal tha magar Shweta ne daarte hue love making kiya Abhi ke saath…. Abhi iss liye normal tha, bilkool josh mein tha, kyunke wo apne ghar mein tha aur Navina ki razamandi thi, magar Shweta iss liye darr rahi thi kyunke ussko darr tha ke Navina ko pata nah chal jaaye ke Abhi usske saat usske bed par hai…. Ishk farmaate waqt Shweta kaamp rahi thi aur dheemi dheemi awaaz mein baar baar keh rahi thi,

“uff jaldi karo, mujhe darr lag raha hai, aap ki wife sun legi, kia hoga agar ussko pata chala to, ofo mere saare kapde mat utaro, agar ussne kamra achanak open kiya to mujhe kapde pehhene ka mauka hi nahin milega…. Uff chhorro nah buss karo I am scared Abhi… kia kar rahe ho aap… ab buss bhi karo nah…..”

Shweta itni darrti, tadapti jaa rahi thi ke Abhi ko aur bhi ziada maza araha tha sab karne mein….

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Subha ko Navina pehle uth gayi thi, kitchen mein busy thi breakfast tayyaar karne mein….. kitchen mein plates aur cups ki awaaz se Shweta ki neendh tuti, to ghabraate hue Abhi ko jagaya aur kaha,

“Aap ki wife jaag gayi hai aap jaldi se niklo…. Dekho please ussko khabar nahin hona chahiye ke aap mere paas soye the raat bhar…. Bolo aap ab kia karoge kaise nikloge yahan se?!”

Abhi ne ubaasi lete hue kaha,

“Don’t worry darling, kitchen to niche hai nah, hum to upar hein main nikal lunga ussko pata bhi nahin chalega… aur tab main tumhare door knock karne aunga tumko uthaane ke liye okay? Stop worrying sweetheart.”

Aur Abhi ne wohi kiya…. Kuch der baad Shweta ke darwaze ko knock kiya aur oochi awaaz mein kaha,

“hello Shweta it’s time to wake up…. Chalo aao tumko dikhata hon kidhar toothbrush, toothpaste etc rakhe hue hein….”

Niche se Navina Abhi ko dekh kar usske saath hanss rahi thi….

Kuch der baad Aruhi aur Shweta ne jaldi se breakfat liye aur abhi unn donon ko pehle unnke ghar chorrne gaya. Wahan se Ab Shweta ki zimedaari thi tayyaar hona aur Aruhi ko tayyaar karke school bhejna. Ahi wapas aya aur Navina ko lekar college chorrne gaya, phir ussko time mila Navina ko chorr kar wapas Shweta ke jaakar unn donon ko lekar Aruhi ko usske school chorra aur Shweta ko usski school.

Shweta bahot khush thi. School jaate waqt Shweta ne Abhi ko raaste bhar usske baahon ke niche haath daal kar apne sar ko usske kaandhe par rakhe hue gayi.

Aur baat katte hue ussne kaha,

“Aruhi kaha ke usski badi maa bahot hi achi hai aur usske paas har weekend bitaane jaegi.”

Abhi khush hua aur kaha,

“That’s great. Main bhi yehi chahta tha. Uss tarah se Navina weekends mein busy rahegi Aruhi ke saath and we can have time to spend together won’t you be happy sweetheart?”

Shweta ne khushi se haan kaha aur kaha,

“Socha nahin tha itna sab kuch ho jaega aur sab itna asaan bhi hoga…. Mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hai ke Navina hum donon ke baare mein jaanti hai? Does not she know about us Abhi?!”

Abhi: “Do you think if she would have known she would be quiet and accepted that I sleep with you?”

Shweta: “No, but she is so kind that I feel that she is aware but does not want to hurt us by letting us know that she is aware of our relationship.”

Abhi: “Do you want me to ask her?”

Shweta: “Are you mad? Yeh koyi puchne ki baat hai?!”

Abhi: “Then stop thinking about it.!”

Abhi ne Shweta ko school chorrne ke baad garage gaya aur apne working uniform mein bus mein kaam karne gaya…. Haan ab tamaam workers ke uniform hote the, dark blue colour ki , har ek worker ko har saal ek pair shoes, gloves aur 2 set of uniforms deta tha Abhi.

Abhi ko aaj bhi bus mein kaam karna passand tha. Har roz to nahin karta tha, magar jab bhi free rehta zaroor apne uniform mein garage mein paaya jata tha kissi bus mein weld karte hue ya kabhi alluminium sheets chipkaate hue….. aur kabhi kissi naye bande ko kaam seekhata Abhi.

Abhi ne plan kiya tha ke Aruhi aur Shweta ko saath lekar Ruhi se milne jaega, magar ab plan badal raha tha kyunke ussko Ruhi se pehle akele mein milna tha Diaries lene ke liye aur Ruhi se uss baare mein kuch aur baat karne ke liye usske baad Shweta aur Aruhi ko lekar jata wahan.

To Abhi ne Ruhi ko usski mobile par phone kiya…. 25 saalon mein aaj pehli baar dono ek dusre se baat karne jaa rahe the phone par.

Jaise Ruhi ne Abhi ki awaaz suni usska rona shuru ho gaya…. Iss liye ro rahi thi ke puri diaries padh liya tha aur itna royi thi har ek din ko diaries mein padhte hue aur Abhi ko miss karte aur uss par saare sitam karte hue dekh kar itna royi thi ke kal se usski aankhen sujhe hue the, aur upar se Abhi ke jawaab likh rahi thi….

Abhi ne ussko bataya ke jiss surprise ko wo dene wala tha kal nahin dega balke do din ke baad surprise dega ussko, kal sirf diaries aur usska jawab wapas lene ko aega.

Ruhi ne kaha ussko koyi surprise nahin chahiye ussko sirf abhi wapas chahiye…. Aur phone par hi rote hue Ruhi Abhi se maafi maangne lagi uss par der mahinon tak zulm karne ke liye, usske dil ko dukhaane ke liye, ussko utna tadpaane ke liye….

Abhi ne kaha ke kal batein karenge magar Ruhi bolti jaa rahi thi,

“Abhi mujhe isska ehsaas bilkool nahin tha unn dinon ke aap ko itna dukh de rahi thi main, diaries padhne ke baad ek ek baat saaf saamne dikh rahe the mujhe, ap ne ek ek pal ko itni clear likhe hein ke mujhe laga 1986 wapas agaya hai ya main wahan pahunch gayi hoon, Abhi main sach mein unn saare palon ko phir se jiya hoon aap ke diaries padhte hue, Abhi pease mujhe maaf kar dijiye, main ne aap par bahot zulam kiye the unn dinon please forgive me Abhi, mujhe issi liye upar wale ne sazaa di hai ke main aaj abahij ho chuki hoon, aap ke sacha aur saaf dil ko main ne bahot thess pahunchaye hein…..”

Abhi ke aankhen bhar aaye aur kaam ka bahana karte hue call ko end kiya aur kaha kal uss se milne aa raha hai.

To be continued…………
 
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