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First thing Navina wants to see Abhi always happy and secondly Navina can never be a mother, so she allowed Abhi to adopt Aruhi, I am very happy with it.
Today Mehboob could not recognize Abhi but I still remember Mehboob and his dirty antics. According to me, Abhi should have slapped Mahboob once or twice. :mad2:The tone in which Abhi responded to Ruhi's mother made my heart rejoice.
I would not like to say anything about the diary because we all know about it. Ruhi is now showing courage, I wish it was earlier. I think Abhi will take Shweta to Ruhi.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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Happy Holi...

heartfelt thanks to you Akash bro for the lovely appreciative review
 

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Too good mate. Superb. Excellent.
Loved the way Abhi abused Mehboob and Ruhi's parents. Too good.
Was waiting for a head to head with them and it happened today. Well done my dear.
Abhi still feels things when he talk of those days spent in the yard. It was felt when talked about what the diaries contained inside. That was awesome.
Loved this update Casinar. Good job

thanks very very much Vikram bro for the appreciation my friend
 

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Hmmmm
Very good update......
Well written and described

Abhi or Ruhi ki baate chal rahi hai or abhi to kaafi lambi chalne waali hai.....lekin dono ki life ko ulat palat kar dene waale chije aa rahi hai....dhire dhire....

Baat kare details ki to.....

Abhi ke eyebrows ji taarif sabhi ne ki.....OR Ruhi to fan hai unki..... lekin abhi Shweta ja naam nahi le paya ...
May be shaayad Shweta or uska Rishta kiss ko bataane ke liye nahi hai.....isliye....

Ye to same to same go gaya......kahte hai PAST REPEATS ITSELF......ab jahan sakte hai ki Shweta ki situation bhi Ruhi ki tarah ho gayi.....Single mother......
OR jaise Ruhi ka relation Abhi se hua waise hee Shweta ka abhi se hua.....wo baat alag hai ki unka bahut aage badh gaya.....

Abhi ka sawaal tha ak todte dil ki aawaz.....lekin Ruhi ko tana laga.....kyoki Abhi ne wo kaha jo sach tha.....

Ruhi ki saari baat sahi hai.....uski tadap uske aansu or uska dard.....lekin ye baat bhi sach hai ki kaante agar khud hee boye hai to jhelna bhi padega.....
OR ye kab hua....
Ruhi kah rahi hai ki jab bhi aap karna chah rahe the tab aapko khula chhod dena chahiye tha.....jab bhi matlab kitni bar....

Ak bar ghar ke piche to bas grab wagera hua tha or phir lunch par thoda jise ki Ruhi ne rok diya tha....
Uske baad kabhi bhi Abhi ne khud pahale ki ho mujhe to yaad nahi.....
Ha lekin uske baad har baar Ruhi khud saamne se offer karti aayi thi....

Ruhi virgin nahi thi lekin phir bhi usne Abhi ko aage badhne nahi diya....kyoki wo do chijo ke bich fansi thi.....Amit or abhi.....

OR jo wo kah rahi hai feeling or itne samay tak Abhi ka ahsaas har pal ko yaad karna.....iske baare mai to mai pahle bhi kaha chuka hu....last review mai.....

Abhi ka time ho jaane par Ruhi ko turant chhod kar Navina ke aas jana ko kahna....uske mann mai jo Navina ke ye fikar or pyar hai use dikhata hai....

Ab bhale hee Ruhi mil jaaye lekin jo jagah Abhi ki life mai Navina ki hai use Ruhi chah kar bhi nahi le sakti.....chahe kitni bhi koshish kar le.....
OR abhi khud bhi Navina ko ak farishta maanta hai.....

Ruhi ne diary ko kuch hee padha....baaki uski maa ne use padhne nahi diya....lekin apne liye Abhi ka description padh kar use khushi hui.....
Navina ke baare mai wo jaanti hai....OR uska sochna ki kaash ""Abhi kehta ki ohh time ho gaya mujhe Ruhi ke pass jana hai....""
Lekin ye hua nahi....reality ye hai ki ab Navina us jagah hai or us se bahut jyada achchi tarah uss jagah ko sambhal rahi hai....

Abhi ne sahi kaha Navina kabhi bhi use nahi roke gi.....balki usne khud ak bar kaha tha ki agar kabhi Ruhi use mile to use saath le aaye.....use Ruhi se koi problem nahi hai.....


Abhi kyo pata lagata uski galati....jabki Abhi ko uske pyar par bharosa tha....OR use ye bhi pata tha ki kabhi Ruhi khud hee use bataayegi.....
Ruhi ne to khud hee use bataane mai der kar di.....

Ruhi ki galati badi thi isliye to wo sab se dab kar raha rahi thi or uski maa ka ye kadam ak time tak sahi bhi tha.....
Rajasthani mai ak kaha water hai.... doodh se jala chhachh bhi phook phook kar pita hai....
Uski maa ye hee kar rahi thi.....lekin jo Ruhi ne kaha ki wo sab kuch uski maa ke anusar kar rahi thi wo sahi nahi hai....

Kya Abhi se bhi Rishta banaane ko uski maa ne kaha tha....ya mahboob ne....
Agar use Abhi khud pasand na hota to wo use mana kar sakti thi....OR I'm sure Abhi uski baat maan jata lekin nahi kiya....


HA to ab fasa Abhi.....Abhi ke pyar concern sacrifice sab ko....ak hee bar mai khatm kar diya.....OR jo Abhi shuruwaat se loyal or har tarah se sahi tha.....ab wo puri tarah se galat ho gaya.....

Ak had se bhi jyada bada shock or ak aisi stithi.....jisme ki sochne samjh ne ki shakti nahi rahti....OR dimaag bilkul blank ho jata hai.....ye hai abhi ki situation......
Jitna achcha use tab lag raha hoga jab use Shweta ke jariye Ruhi ka feel mila tha usska se kai guna jyada ab use khud par gussa aa raha hoga.....for sure....

Shweta ke ak bachaane faisle ne kaafi kuch badal diya.....Abhi ko khud ki hee nazar mai doshi saabit kar diya....


OR ye baat to maine pahle hee bata di thi ki Shweta Ruhi se badla le rahi hai.....wo na Ruhi se baat karti hai na uske yanha aati hai.....

Abhi ne kaha bhi tha ki agar wo ak bachche ki maa bhi hai tab bhi wo us se shaadi kar lega.....lekin shaayad usne uss baat ko suna nahi.....ohh ha yaad aaya tab to Ruhi ko uss par vishwas hee nahi tha ki abhi ka pyar sachcha hai.....

Ruhi ne kaafi early age mai hee ye sab kar liya tha or wo pregnant bhi thi....OK...chhoti umar ki galatiya....koi na.....lekin....

Lekin usne abortion ke baare mai kyo nahi socha....kyoki Shweta ko paida hone diya....jab ki abortion kaafi achcha option tha.....OR uss time abortion kaafi aasani se koi bhi doctors kar dete the....

OR agar Ruhi ke pariwar ko iss baat se dikkat thi ki abortion ke kaaran logo ko pata chal jaayega to phir 9 mahine jab Bachcha uske pet mai tha tab konsa wo har waqt ghar mai hee kaid hokar rahi hogi.....
Tab kya logo ko uske chahre se uski age or uske baby bump nahi dikha hoga....


WAISE AK BAAT HAI.....MUJHE LAGA THA KI JAB RUHI OR ABHI MILENGE TAB SABHI BAATE CLEAR HO JAAYENGI.....

LEKIN CLEAR HONA TO DUR YANHA TO NAYE SAWAAL KHADE HO RAHE HAI.....

Khair dekhte hai aage kya Hota hai.....
Anyways
Very good update
Thanks.....


Vikram bhai abi sirf reply post kar raha hoon, baad mein edit karke detail mein reply karunga, abhi update post karni hai iss liye filhaal itna hi.. thodi der mein kucb aur likhunga yahan

Ye to same to same go gaya......kahte hai PAST REPEATS ITSELF......ab jahan sakte hai ki Shweta ki situation bhi Ruhi ki tarah ho gayi.....Single mother......
OR jaise Ruhi ka relation Abhi se hua waise hee Shweta ka abhi se hua.....wo baat alag hai ki unka bahut aage badh gaya.....
exactly bhai maa beti ki jaise same takdeer the... donon single mothers nikle aur donon ke life mein abhi hi aaye ...kamaal ki baat hai nah bhai? donon ke takdeer jude to Abhi se hi

Ruhi kah rahi hai ki jab bhi aap karna chah rahe the tab aapko khula chhod dena chahiye tha.....jab bhi matlab kitni bar....
Abhi ne kayi baar kaha tha khat mein bhi aur piche kiss karte waqt bhi.... usski jism par chaaron taraf hatah malta tha abhi, boobs press karta tha, utejit ota tha.... main ne details iss liye tab nahin likha tha kyunke tab aisa lagta ke abhi hawas ka bhooa hai kuch aur nazar ata agar update mein weisa likhta to.... :D

Ha lekin uske baad har baar Ruhi khud saamne se offer karti aayi thi....
Vikram bhai ruhi ne bhi saamne aakar offer nahin kiya tha...sirf uss raat ko wo chahti thi jiss raat ko abhi usske ghar ruka tha varna Ruhi ne kabhi apne aap offer nahin kiya, wo ulta hamesha rokti rahi abhi ko, abhi bahut ziada usske taraf sexually aage badhta tha :D

Ruhi virgin nahi thi lekin phir bhi usne Abhi ko aage badhne nahi diya....kyoki wo do chijo ke bich fansi thi.....Amit or abhi.....
Ek aur badi reason thi jiski vaja se Ruhi abhi ko aage nahin badhne deti thi usski vajah ko Ruhi khud bataane wali hai agli mulaakaat mein ..... yeh abhi ko bilkool pata nahin tha, ab 25 saal baad pata chalega abhi ko bhi aur aap readers ko bhi

Ab bhale hee Ruhi mil jaaye lekin jo jagah Abhi ki life mai Navina ki hai use Ruhi chah kar bhi nahi le sakti.....chahe kitni bhi koshish kar le.....
OR abhi khud bhi Navina ko ak farishta maanta hai.....
Ruhi ne khud kaha abhi se ke Navina bahot achi aurat hai, ke abhi ko sahi wife mila hai, Ruhi ko Reza ki behen ke zarye pata chal gaya tha ke navina kitni achi insaan hai .... Ruhi kabhi bhi navina ki jagah nahin lena chahegi, balke usski izat karegi hamesha, Ruhi ko bhi lagega ke navina ek angel hi hai khud kahegi ek din :D

Ruhi ki galati badi thi isliye to wo sab se dab kar raha rahi thi or uski maa ka ye kadam ak time tak sahi bhi tha.....
Rajasthani mai ak kaha water hai.... doodh se jala chhachh bhi phook phook kar pita hai....
Uski maa ye hee kar rahi thi.....lekin jo Ruhi ne kaha ki wo sab kuch uski maa ke anusar kar rahi thi wo sahi nahi hai....
Bhai next update padhne ke baad aap apna opinion change kar loge :D

Kya Abhi se bhi Rishta banaane ko uski maa ne kaha tha....ya mahboob ne....
Agar use Abhi khud pasand na hota to wo use mana kar sakti thi....OR I'm sure Abhi uski baat maan jata lekin nahi kiya....
yeh bhi Ruhi bataegi jab abhi diaries wapas lene jaega

Jitna achcha use tab lag raha hoga jab use Shweta ke jariye Ruhi ka feel mila tha usska se kai guna jyada ab use khud par gussa aa raha hoga.....for sure....
haan , right abhi ko bahot ghussa aya tha jaan kar ke Ruhi ki beti hai shweta... magar aap aage ki update padhoge tab nah pata chalega ke jab Abhi ussi ghusse mein gaya Shweta ko thapad lagaane tab kia hua!!
Ruhi ne kaafi early age mai hee ye sab kar liya tha or wo pregnant bhi thi....OK...chhoti umar ki galatiya....koi na.....lekin....

Lekin usne abortion ke baare mai kyo nahi socha....kyoki Shweta ko paida hone diya....jab ki abortion kaafi achcha option tha.....OR uss time abortion kaafi aasani se koi bhi doctors kar dete the....
Vikram bhai ab aap ek wek late reply kar rahe ho to mujhe khud pata nahin ke issi update mein ya bad ke update mein keh diya gaya hai, detail de diya gaya hai ke jab 4th month ho chuke the tab Ruhi ko pata chala ke wo pregnant hai aur doctor ne kaha abortion karne mein khatra hai bache ko janam dena hi hoga... yeh nahin padha aap ne?

OR agar Ruhi ke pariwar ko iss baat se dikkat thi ki abortion ke kaaran logo ko pata chal jaayega to phir 9 mahine jab Bachcha uske pet mai tha tab konsa wo har waqt ghar mai hee kaid hokar rahi hogi.....
Tab kya logo ko uske chahre se uski age or uske baby bump nahi dikha hoga....
kia vikram bhai aap ne thik se update nahin padha kia yaar? kahan se 9 mahinon tak Ruhi ghar mein thi? wo to Sheher mein thi apni chachi ke paas!!
WAISE AK BAAT HAI.....MUJHE LAGA THA KI JAB RUHI OR ABHI MILENGE TAB SABHI BAATE CLEAR HO JAAYENGI.....

LEKIN CLEAR HONA TO DUR YANHA TO NAYE SAWAAL KHADE HO RAHE HAI.....
haan clear ho sakte the agar main 3 se 5 updates ek saath deta tab.... 7000 words likhta tab....
Anyway thank loads vikram bhai iss detailed review aur aap ke vichaar ke liye ab main ne bhi detailed counter reply de diye hein padhna zaroor :D
 
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Update 67 Abhi, Shweta And Aruhi

Abhi unn donon ke lekar ek lawyer se mila, Aruhi ko legally adopt karne ke liye….. magistrate se bhi milna pada chamber mein aur aakhir mein apne paison ke dum se Abhi ne kuch chakkar chalaaye jiss se kaam jitni jaldi ho sake kiya jaaye. Jawaab mila ke 10 ya 15 dinon mein legal adoption ke paper ban jayenge filhaal application bhar diya gaya….. Uss mein ek chhota sa problem yeh tha ke Aruhi ke asli pita doctor sahab ke signature bhi chahiyega kyunke wo alimony deta tha Abhi tak Aruhi ko, to jab Abhi ka adoption accept ho jaega usska alimony dena bandh ho jaega kaha gaya Abhi ko.

Abhi ne saara kaam lawyer ke haath mein chorr diya ussko tagda paisa de kar, ab wohi jaega uss doctor ke signs lene tab tak lawyer aur magistrate donon ne kaha ke abhi se hi Aruhi ko samajh liya jaye ke wo adopt kar chuka hai…. Paisa bolta hai bhai!!

Abhi bahot khush tha aur ab Aruhi ko khush karna chahta tha, Aruhi ko shikayat thi nah ke usska papa usske saath nahin rehta, kahin door kaam karta hai ghar kayi dinon baad aata hai, aur aata bhi hai to turant chala jata hai…. To Abhi ne Shweta aur Aruhi ko lekar ghumne gaya….

Jaane se pehle Abhi ne Aruhi ko goad mein lekar pucha,

“hmmm to ab bata papa ke saath aaj kahin ghumne chalegi?!”

Aruhi ne Abhi ke gaal par pappy dete hue kaha,

“yessss papa, aaj first time aap ke saath ghumne jaungi, varna sirf mamma lejaati hai mujhe!”

Abhi ne Aruhi ko chumte hue pucha,

“To bata kahan jaegi papa ki gudya!”

Aruhi: “seaside!”

Abhi: “seaside? Yeh bhi koyi ghumne ki jagah hai kia?!”

Aruhi: “haan hai nah, main swim karungi, sand castle banaungi, sand par walk karenge, bahut maza aega papa, sunset bhi dekhenge….”

Abhi ne socha tha jiss taraf Ruhi rehti hai uss taraf ke seaside jaega magar jab Aruhi ke kaha ke sunset dekhegi tab samjha ke west ke seaside jana hoga…..

Jab tak Abhi Aruhi ko uss tarah se goad mein lekar khelta batiyata raha, Shweta bade pyar se donon ko dekh rahi thi aur usski aankhen bhar aayi….

Abhi tab ek shop par ruka aur khudke liye Shweta aur Aruhi ke liye bhi swimming costumes kharide aur gaye drive karte hue west ki ek mashoor seaside par.

Car ke andar hi sab ne swimming costume badle aur seedhe samundar ke namkin paani mein teenon paaye gaye.

Shweta ko swimming aati thi to Abhi Aruhi ko swimming sikhaane laga….. Aruhi darr rahi thi, aur Abhi ussko apne haathon mein flat sulaakar haath peyr chalana seekhaya jaise swim karna seekhaate hein…. Ghanton bhar paani mein rahe teenon…. Aruhi bahot khush thi aur bahot hi enjoy kar rahi thi.

Shweta Abhi aur Aruhi ko pyar bhade nazron se dekhe jaa rahi rahi thi. Ussko bahot Khushi ho rahi thi ke Aruhi ko ek pita mil gaya aur kitni khush thi Aruhi… baar baar chilla rahi rahi “papa yeh papa wo, papa aise, papa mujhe swim karao…. Papa mujhe utha kar feinko paani mein…..”

Jab thand lagne lage, Aruhi thoda kaampne lagi tab Abhi ne paani se nikalne ko decide kiya aur ussne khud Aruhi ko paani se nikala apne goad mein uthakar aur ussko towel mein lapeta…. Shweta ko kuch karne ki zarorat hi nahin padi, Abhi ne hi Aruhi ko change kiya dusra dress pehnaya, jabke Shweta apni kapde change kar rahi thi….

Usske baad ab Aruhi ko sand castle banana tha to Abhi hi legaya ussko… aur bap beti milkar sand castle banaane lage…. Shweta khadi dekh rahi thi….. Shweta jaan bujh kar donon ke beech nahin arahi thi… jitna Aruhi ko baap ki kami mehsoos hui thi pichle 7 saalon mein wo Abhi ek din mein pura kar raha tha aur Shweta ko itni Khushi ho rahi thi Aruhi ko utna khush dekh kar ke khud apni bachpan yaad karne lagi thi, ke ussko itna pyar nahin mila tha bilkool bachpan mein, jo usska baap bana tha ussko lagao hi nahin tha Shweta se, maa busy rehti thi kaam mein ussko nursery chorr diya jaat tha, din bhar nursery mein rehti, hosh sambhala to kindergarten mein rehti thi, shaam 5 baje ek van ussko ya to supermarket mein chorrta jahan se baap raat ko usse band karta tan Shweta ghar aati, maa to hospital mein rehti ya to raat bhar ya din bhar… Shweta ko nah maa ki nah baap ka pyar mila tha….

Issi liye Shweta Ruhi se itna naraaz thi aur jab ussko pata chala ke usski asli maa Ruhi thi to uss se issi vajah se ladaayi karke ussko chorr aayi thi, ke ussne ussko kisi aur ke ghar kyun chorra tha aur uskso maa baap ka pyar nahin naseeb hua.

Ussko bhi pyar aur sneh mila to Abhi se hi, bachpan mein bhi aur Jawaani mein bhi ussko sirf Abhi se hi sacha pyar mila tha, iss liye Shweta Abhi ko khona nahin chahti thi, aur ab Shweta ko pakka yakeen ho gaya tha ke ab Abhi uss se kabhi door ho hi nahin sakta kyunke ab Aruhi ke zarye Abhi hamesha ke liye usske paas bhi rahega. Shweta bhi bahot khush thi ke ab usski beti ke badaulat ussko Abhi mil gaya tha hamesha ke liye.

Ghanton bhar castle banaate tutte, phir banaane ke baad, Aruhi ne mobile se photos liye unn castles ki aur Abhi se khud ke pics nikalwaaye castles ke paas baith kar…. Usske baad donon sand walk ke liye nikle…. Kayi kilometres tak walk kiye teenon ne reth par nange paon…. Aur tab sunset dekhne ko baithe….

Kitna khubsurat hota hai suraj ko samundar mein doobki lagaate hue dekhna issko describe karne ki zaroorat to nahin sab ne dekha hi hoga…. Bahot saare photos liye Abhi ne uss dhalte suraj ki. Ahiste ahiste suraj ka rang laal hota gaya aur jab aakhri hissa reh gaya to usski khubsurti aur bhi badhti gayi door se lagta tha samundar mein door aag lagi hui hai….

Abhi ne tab Navina ko phone kiya, aaj usski University ka course nahin tha to navina 3.30 ko ghar aajati hai unn dinon…. Abhi ne Navina se kaha ke wo Shweta aur Aruhi ko ghar laa raha hai wahin dinner karenge donon. Navina bhi khush hui kyunke wo Aruhi se milna chahti thi…. Aur beshak Shweta se bhi.

Ab Shweta ko ajib lag raha tha wo nahin jana chahti thi… magar Abhi ne ussko samjhaya ke jana to padega aur ab aksar aisa hota rahega, kabhi Aruhi usske saath usske ghar par rahega, Navina ko bhi bache ka pyar chahiye….. tab Shweta samjhi aur agree kiya jaane ke liye apni lecturer ke paas.

Abhi ne Shweta ko pata nahin chalne diya ke Navina ko usske aur Shweta ke rishte ke baare mein pata hai, aur text karke Navina ko bhi bata diya ke unn donon ke sambandh ke baare mein Shweta se koyi bhi baat nah karen, buss aise lagna chahiye ke Shweta ko bilkool nah lage ke Navina ko Shweta aur Abhi ke sambandh ke baare mein pata hai….

Navina ne reply kiya ke wo samajh gayi wo aisa kuch nahin pata chalne degi.

Jab sab Abhi ke ghar reach hue to Shweta Abhi ke ghar aur aangan ko dekhti reh gayi….. andhera ho chuka tha phir bhi Abhi ke aangan mein itne lights the ke din lag raha tha wahan…. Shweta ne dhire se Abhi se kaha,

“Aap ka ghar to ek mahal jaisa hai…. How beautiful, yeh garden kaun maintain karta hai? Kitni khubsurat hai, wow look at those roses, kitne saare phool hein aap ki gartden mein wow!!”

Aur Aruhi ne pehla sawaal yeh kiya,

“Papa hum kisske yahan aaye hein? Kaun rehta hai idhar?!”

Abhi ne Aruhi ko goad mein uthaate hue kaha,

“Baby idhar tumhari badi mummy rehti hai!”

Shweta Aruhi ko dekh rahi thi aur Aruhi Shweta ko, to Shweta ne apna sar haan mein hillate hue Aruhi ko ikraar karne ka ishara kiya, magar Aruhi ne phir bhi Abhi se sawaal kiya,

“Badi mummy? Wo kaun hoti hai? Itne dinon se kyun nahin mili wo mujhe? Aur wo yahan kyun rehti hai? Hamaare saath kyun nahin rehti?!”

Abhi ke samajh mein agaya ke ab bahot sare sawaalon ka jawaab bana kar dena hoga Aruhi ko aur teenon ghar ke darwaze ke taraf bahdne lage jahan Navina apni khubsurat smile se sabko receive karne ko wait kar rahi thi.

To be continued…..
wish all my friends, readers, fans, followers, Admins, mods, sumos of XF a very Happy Holi
 
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