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Romance Usski Gali Mein Jaana Chorr Diya (Exclusively For XForum) COMPLETED

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Dimaagh ka garam, Dil ka naram
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Fantastic update bhai dil to jeet hi lete ho aap hamesha Casi bhai. Ab dil mein buss gaye aap yaar. Wah. Kia likha hai bhai. Kia dil ki baaton ko bayaan kiya hai aap ne. Abhi ki dil ki baat aap ne kuch iss tarah se bayaan kiya hai jaise k aap khud uss haalaat se guzar rahe ho aur sab aap par hi beet raha hai. Wooow jabardast, shaandaar laajawaab update hai bhai. Truely romantic, realistic update. Hats off casi bhai. :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow:
bahot shukriya nayan bhai passand karne ke liye yaara
 

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Excellent writing Casi bro your writing is impeccable, awesome, mindblowing. I wonder how do you wrote such detailed scenes, you describe and narrate feelings and emotions! Wooooowww. Amazing. Just fabulous. You hv perfectly described Abhi's state of mind and all his feelings on that particular moment. That is breathtaking. Great my dear. Suoerb3, extraordinary.
My admiration for you has increased 100 times more. You are a wonderful writer.
Just loved each and every sentence of this update. Hats off mate. Respect sent to you bro. Am very IMPRESSED.
You are a unique writer I must say. I will NEVER ever miss anything written by you. :hug:
:adore: :adore::adore: :adore: :adore:

thanks so very much for the lovely appreciation Vikram bro
 

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Itni badi update Casi ji? Ok ab padhne ja rahi hoon
:reading:
Kia kahun, kia likhun? Samajh mein nahin araha. Kia likha hai casi ji? Ufff mere dil ki gehraayi ko chhuh gayi. Meri life mein kuch eise haalaat hue the.... lagta hai aap ne meri life mein jhank kar likha hai. Koyi tha meri life mein aur ek subha main rose pick kar rahi thi aur subha savere koyi aya tha meri life mein....
Casi ji, iss update ne mujhko bahut rulaya uss insaan ki yaad dila kar.
Casi ji tussi great ho ji. Iss kahani ko main apne dil k bahut karib rakhungi. Mujhe yakeen hai iss kahani ki bahut hisse meri life se milti julti aayegi.
Abhi ko sochkar mujhe bahut rona araha hai kyunke iss kahani ki title se lagta hai wo udhar jaana bandh kar dega :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:
bahot bahot shukriya savi ji iss appreciation ke liye, main khush hua :love:
 

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Lajawaab update bidu kia likha hai yaar wow!
Sala apun ko kuch jiada hi passand agaya ye update.
Abhi k jigra k andar bidu ghuss k dekhta hai kia jo itna tagda likha usske dil ka haal ko.
Sala bilkool sahi dil ka haal bataya usska. Sala apun bhi feel ho gaya usska haal, Usski pareshani, usska uljhan. Sab feel hua apun ko bhi. Ekjack waisa hich hota hai love mein jaisa likha hai.
Abhi upar se sab likhta bhi hai. Writer hai apun ka hero. English writer hai hmmm.
Ruhi bhi interest de rela hai hero ko magar subha ko good morning ka reply nahin kiya to apun ko bhi gussa aya saali par, magar jo end kiya aap ne update ko nah bidu uss end ne saare gile shikwe door kar diya jhakaas end line likha jab Ruhi ne Abhi k close hokar bola k cigarrete nai pine ka :laugh:
Faaadu update diya hai boss.

bahot shukriya King bhia, khushi hai ke aap ko bhi passand araha hai yeh kahani
 

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so ankhon ki gustakhiya maaf kar....
badi nain matakka chal rahe hain dono ke bich.... akhir chakkar kya hain.... ek taraf ruhi ki nazar abhi ke upor.... joh hat hi nahin rahi hain.... toh dushri taraf abhinav, safai abhiyan suru kar diya hain.. khud ko saaf suthra banane pe tula hain... ek bhi bhi daag nahin rahneka.. naa body par aur naa hi kapdon par....

he he he he..... abhi & his imaginations ... jaane kaha se kaha pahonch jaati hain... thik se baat bhi na hua hain aur yeh janab TV dekhne lage uski sath...

are........ kahin yeh subha wali ladki ruhi ki judwa bahan nahin..... sayad isliye aisi ajib si behave kar rahi thi..... kya pata :dazed:
Aur phir jab next time apni mom ke sath joh aayi hain... jharu maar rahin hain.. wohin ruhi hain..
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update casi sir... Great going :applause::applause::applause:

bahot bahot Shukriya Naina ji appreciation ke liye :happy:
 
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