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Update 58 Abhi Meets Mahesh And ???​

Dosto kal wale update mein main ne date lekar ek ghalati kiya tha 2010 be badle 2011 likha tha, aur Sweta ke saath guzare 6 saal ko 7 saal likha tha. Wo hua yeh tha ke December 2010 ki baat ho raha tha aur main kyunke December tha iss liye agle saal 2011 ko soch raha tha, dimagh mein 2011 bassa hua tha so likh diya tha, weise 2011 mein bhi Shweta ke saath tha Abhi to 7 saal hi hote hein magar pura saal nahin tha iss liye ke beech 2011 mein hi kuch aisa hua jo nah Shweta ne socha tha aur nah khud Abhi ne socha tha weisa kuch hoga kabhi….

To kal jinn logon ne mere edit karke correct karne se pehle updates padh liye the unnko ab dikhega ke main ne 2011 ke badle 2010 likha hai aur 7 saal ke badle 6 saal likha hua hai Shweta aur Abhi ke rishte ko….

Aaj ke update se ap log samajh jaoge mujhse yeh ghalati kyun aur kaise ho gayi thi kyunke yeh 2011 hi tha jiss mein aisa kuch hua ta iss liye mere dimagh mein 2011 bassa hua tha aur wohi likh diya tha kal ke update mein. Sorry for that mistake which I corrected later.

To November 1st 2010 ko Manoj accident mein mara gaya tha aur December mein Abhi ko pata chala jiss se wo bahot affect hue the iss liye ke khud ko guilty feel karne laga tha iss liye ke ussne badd duah diya tha uss bus stop par aur exactly wahin Manoj ki death hui aur bahot buri tarah ki death hui thi.

December end hua, 2011 start hua…. Abhi restless, bechain rehne laga Manoj ko soch kar, usske vidhwa wife aur chhote bachon ko soch kar…. Wo unn logon ka financial help karna chahta tha…. chaahe wahan nahin jata magar apne company ki taraf se kissi ko bhej kar Manoj ki wife aur bachon ko financial help karne ko soch raha tha.

Aur wo Abhi ne successfully kiya. Apne accountant aur usske assistant ko udhar bheja company ke taraf se, magar Abruhi company ke taraf se nahin, varna unn logon ko pata chal jata …. Abhi ne ek virtual company create kiya jo gharibon ke help ke liye banayaa Abhi ne aur uss company ke taraf se financial help bheja Manoj ke family ke liye. Abhi bilkool anonymous raha uss mein. Wahan par kissi ko bhi pata nahin chala ke Abhi ne help kiya unn logon ki. Aur agar Abruhi company ke taraf se help karta tab to sabko pata chal jata ke Abhi ne financial help diya tha….

Yeh baat Abhi ne shweta ko bhi nahin bataya….. Abhi Shweta se bhi nahin mila 2011 ke March mahine tak, haan phone se baat aur messages hote the….

Phir April mein kyunke Abhi ka birthday ata hai tab Abhi Shweta mile aur fir milne lage pehle ki tarah aur sab thoda mamool par agaya Abhi ke liye….. financial help karne ke baad Abhi ko sukoon haasil hua Manoj wale baat ko lekar.

Ab kuch aise hone wala tha jiss ke baad, Shwetha ke liye bahut bura hua aur wo khud ko kossne lagi ke kyun ussne aaj tal Abhi ko wo raaz nahin bataayi….

Shweta ke zarye nahin Abhi ko Ruhi se sab sach ka pata chala!!

Abhi aur Ruhi mile 2011 mein!! June ka mahina tha….. donon 24 December 1986 ke baad 2011 ke June mahine mein mile… 25 saal baad!!! Kia aalam tha!!! kia rona dhona hua- kaise mile? Kahan mile? Kia hua? Okay sab araam se batata hoon nah!!

Abhi Manoj ke maut ke baad sochne laga ke kabhi bhi usska bhi death ho sakta hai achanak… to ussne khud se kaha ke “marne se pehle ek baar Ruhi se mil leta to mujhe sukoon milta, Ruhi ko wo diaries padhne ko zaroor dena hoga, ussko bhi marne se pehle pata chalna chahiye mujh par kia guzra tha unn dinon…. Bus ek baar sirf Ruhi se mil leta main marne se pehle!!”

June mahine mein Abhi achanak ek din Mahesh se mila kareeb 7 ya 8 saal baad, wo ab police inspector ban gaya tha. Milte hi sab se pehli baat jo Abhi ne kiya wo tha Manoj ki death ki sympathy pesh karna Mahesh ko. Aur ab Mahesh bhi shadi shuda tha aur baap tha teen bachon ke. Mahesh ne Abhi se kaha,

“Abhi bhai, hum bahot dinon baad mile hein aaj chalo ek chai pite hein uss hotel mein baith kar kuch baatein karte hein.”

Abhi raazi hua. Assal mein Abhi ne aaj dil mein yeh soch liya tha ke aaj wo Mahesh se Ruhi ka haal puchega.

To donon baithe, ek ek cup chai ke saath. Abhi Mahesh ke chehre mein dekh raha tha, mature ho gaya tha Mahesh ab, usske chehre mein wo tenderness nahin thi ab jo Abhi Hamesha dekha karta tha Mahesh ke chehre mein, magar wo gentleness ab bhi tha Mahesh mein. Mahesh kuch kehna chahta tha Abhi se magar Abhi ko dikh gaya tha ke Mahesh jhijhak raha hai ya samajh nahin raha hai ke kaise shuru karen, iss liye Abhi ne hi baat kiya yeh keh kar;

“are Mahesh kyun jhijhak rahe ho kaho nah jo kehna hai we are two men talking yaar, ghabra rahe ho ya kissi baat ka darr hai? Kaho nah bhai!”

Mahesh ne muskuraya, aur Abhi ke chehre mein laal chehre se kaha,

“Bhai last time jitney baar bhi main aap se mila tha to Ruhi ko bataya tha. Ruhi har baar kehti rahi ke agle bar aap se milun to aap ko ghar aane ko kahun, magar har baar aap agle baar milte the to hum mein sirf casual baat hote aur mujh mein himmat nahin hoti thi aap se ghar aane ko kehne ke liye, iss liye ke jiss tarah se aap ko ghar se nikala gaya tha main hamesha sochta tha ke aap inkaar karoge aane se….”

Abhi ke jism mein ek thartharaahat si hui Mahesh ki baton ko sun kar…. Ek afsos bhi hua ussko aur uss din ko socha jiss din wo uss pump station par gaya tha aur phir wapas nahin gaya…. Ruhi ne ussko bulaya tha wo bhi koyi 17 saal pehle aur Abhi gaya hi nahin…. Itna afsos ho raha tha Abhi ko…. Usske Aankhen bhar aaye Mahesh ko dekhte hue aur iss se pehle ke Abhi kuch kehta Mahesh ne sar niche jhukaate hue kaha,

“Bhai hum sab aap ke gunehgaar hein, aap ka dil toda tha hum sab ne, kusoor mera bhi hai ke uss din main ne kuch nahin kaha tha, chhup raha tha uss din halaan ke main Ruhi ko bahot pyar karta hoon magar uss roz usske liye kuch nahin kar paaya tha, bhai Manoj bada bhai tha mera iss liye usske saamne main kuch nahin bol saka tha…. bhai ussne bahot ghalat kiya tha aap ke saath sabko pata hai ghar mein….. Ruhi bahot royi thi aur 5 saal tak Manoj se baat nahin kiya tha uss din ke baad…. Bhai jab Manoj mara to ghar mein sab ne yehi kaha ke ussko aap ki aur Ruhi ke dil todne ka saza mili….. Manoj ki wife aap ko nahin jaanti magar Ruhi ne usskko sab kuch bata diya tha shadi ke baad ke khud Manoj ki wife ne bhi kaha ke aap ki aur Ruhi ki badd duah lagi Manoj ko…… Abhi bhai hum sab ko maaf kardo please….. aap ghar chaliye nah Ruhi aap ka intezaar kar rahi hai barson se!!”

Abhi jaise emotional aadmi kia yeh sab sunkar bina roye reh sakta tha……? nahin nah? usske aakhon se jharr jharr aansoo behne lage the aur khud Mahesh ne bhi ro diye yeh sab kehte hue….

Kaampte honton se Abhi ne pucha,

“kaisi hai meri Ruhi Mahesh?”

Mahesh: “Aap chal kar khud dekh lijiye nah bhai! Har baar jab aap se mila hoon to ussko bataya, wo naraaz hoti ke iss baar kyun nahin bulaya aap ko… hum shayad 5 ya 6 baar mile hein nah? to unn paanchon baar Ruhi mujhse rote hue aap ko kehne ko kaha ke ussne aap ko bulaya hai…. Usske taraf se bulawa hai bhai chaloge nah aap?! - aur ab Manoj bhi nahin hai aap ko kuch kehne ke liye….”

Abhi: “25 saal baad uss ghar mein jana padega mujhe Mahesh? Wo aangan, wo ghar, wo kapde dhone wala pathar, wo gulab ka bagicha… sab weise hi hein aaj bhi kia?”

Mahesh: “chalo nah bhai, khud chal kar dekh lo…. Sab kuch badal gaya hai ab…. Jahan wo bagicha tha wahan mera ghar hai aur Ruhi mere saath hi rehti hai…. Jahan pehle hamara ghar tha wahan mummy papa rehte hein aur upar Manoj rehta tha aur ab usski wife aur bache hein!! Sab kuch badal gaya hein piche 25 Saalon mein bhai….”

Bina chai khatam kiye Abhi ne kaha,

“Chalo bhai chalte hein aaj phir uss gali mein jahan jaana chorr diya tha!”

Mahesh police ki car mein tha, Abhi ne ussko follow kiya apne car se…. 14 kms drive karna tha aur 15 mins mein reach ho gaye..

Uss aagan mein pehle Mahesh gaya aur usske piche Abhi ne apne car ko kiya aur ussko sab naya lag raha tha kuch bhi weisa nahin tha…. bilkool alag jagah tha… wo aangan ab sirf ek lamba sa lane ban gaya tha… har kissi ne ek ek ghar bana liya tha donon taraf right side aur left side mein bhi…. Jo space tha pehle kitchen aur Mehboob ke ghar ke beech wo ab tha hi nahin…. Jahan Ruhi ki kitchen hua karta tha aaj ek garage tha, jahan bagicha tha ab Mahesh ka ghar tha, haan Mehboob ka ghar ab bhi wohi tha, magar Ruhi ka purana tin aur ladki wala ghar ab concrete ka bara ek mala wala ghar tha, niche Ruhi ke parents rehte the aur upar Manoj ki wife aur bache…. Wo lane ab asphalted tha… naya naya asphalted lag raha tha… jo bada sa peyr hua karta tha jiss ke niche bus tha wo peyr ab exist hi nahin karta tha…. koi bus bhi nahin tha kahin…. Ek Toyota Hiace 15 seater jo naya lag raha tha wo lane ke aakhri end par tha, maan lo Ruhi ke old kitchen ke bhi baad mein….. jo feeling Abhi paana chahta tha wo bilkool bhi nahin mila ussko…wo fiza nahin thi, wo hawa nahin the, wo sukoon nahin thi uss lane mein jo unn dinon uss aangan mein hua karta tha…. sab kuch badla badla sa tha jaise kissi aur jagah pahunch gaya tha Abhi…..

Abhi apni zehen mein aaj bhi uss aanagn ko weisa hi sochta tha jaise chorra tha 25 saal pehle…. Ussko bilkool bhi nahin pata tha itna badlaav agaya hoga uss aangan mein …. Last time bhi jab 8 saal ke baad aya tha pump station par tab tak to sab baraabar tha…. magar aaj sab kuch bilkool hi alag tha….

Mahesh apne police car se utra aur Abhi ke karib aakar dhire se kaha,

“Main ussko surprise karunga, aap kuch mat bolna aap ko usske saamne khada karunga okay?!”

Abhi ne ek gehri saans li…. Usska dil zoron se dhadakne laga tha, haath peyr thoda kaampne lage the, phir bhi ek naya bana hua ghar ke darwaze se enter kiya Abhi ne Mahesh ke piche…. Aur jiss waqt Abhi andar jaa raha tha ek adher aadmi nikla ussi ghar se jissne Abhi ke chehre mein dekha, Abhi ne bhi ussko dekha thoda sa daadhi tha aadmi ka, aur wo Ruhi ke pehle wale ghar ke taraf gaye, aur terrace se hokar uss ghar mein gaya tab Abhi ne yaad kiya ke wo zaroor Ruhi ke pita hoga…. Ab bhi zinda hai wo Abhi ne socha!

Mahesh ne Abhi ko corridor mein wait karne ko kaha, aur ek kamre mein gaya aur kaha,

“Dekho to kaun aya hai pehchanon isse!”

Tab Mahesh ne Abhi ka haath pakar ke kamre ke andar kiya….

Abhi ke saamne ek patli si aurat ek wheelchair par baithi chasme ke saath Abhi ke chehre mein dekh rahi thi!!!”

To be continued…. (2134 words)

Shocking hai bhai
Aise achanak se Abhi chala gaya aaj Ruhi ke saamne.
Mahesh nahin milta to shayad jata hi nahin.
Aaj bhi Ruhi wahin hai.... intejar karti rahi 25 saalon tak.
Bhut rona araha hai bhai kia likhun

 

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Update 58 Abhi Meets Mahesh And ???​

Dosto kal wale update mein main ne date lekar ek ghalati kiya tha 2010 be badle 2011 likha tha, aur Sweta ke saath guzare 6 saal ko 7 saal likha tha. Wo hua yeh tha ke December 2010 ki baat ho raha tha aur main kyunke December tha iss liye agle saal 2011 ko soch raha tha, dimagh mein 2011 bassa hua tha so likh diya tha, weise 2011 mein bhi Shweta ke saath tha Abhi to 7 saal hi hote hein magar pura saal nahin tha iss liye ke beech 2011 mein hi kuch aisa hua jo nah Shweta ne socha tha aur nah khud Abhi ne socha tha weisa kuch hoga kabhi….

To kal jinn logon ne mere edit karke correct karne se pehle updates padh liye the unnko ab dikhega ke main ne 2011 ke badle 2010 likha hai aur 7 saal ke badle 6 saal likha hua hai Shweta aur Abhi ke rishte ko….

Aaj ke update se ap log samajh jaoge mujhse yeh ghalati kyun aur kaise ho gayi thi kyunke yeh 2011 hi tha jiss mein aisa kuch hua ta iss liye mere dimagh mein 2011 bassa hua tha aur wohi likh diya tha kal ke update mein. Sorry for that mistake which I corrected later.

To November 1st 2010 ko Manoj accident mein mara gaya tha aur December mein Abhi ko pata chala jiss se wo bahot affect hue the iss liye ke khud ko guilty feel karne laga tha iss liye ke ussne badd duah diya tha uss bus stop par aur exactly wahin Manoj ki death hui aur bahot buri tarah ki death hui thi.

December end hua, 2011 start hua…. Abhi restless, bechain rehne laga Manoj ko soch kar, usske vidhwa wife aur chhote bachon ko soch kar…. Wo unn logon ka financial help karna chahta tha…. chaahe wahan nahin jata magar apne company ki taraf se kissi ko bhej kar Manoj ki wife aur bachon ko financial help karne ko soch raha tha.

Aur wo Abhi ne successfully kiya. Apne accountant aur usske assistant ko udhar bheja company ke taraf se, magar Abruhi company ke taraf se nahin, varna unn logon ko pata chal jata …. Abhi ne ek virtual company create kiya jo gharibon ke help ke liye banayaa Abhi ne aur uss company ke taraf se financial help bheja Manoj ke family ke liye. Abhi bilkool anonymous raha uss mein. Wahan par kissi ko bhi pata nahin chala ke Abhi ne help kiya unn logon ki. Aur agar Abruhi company ke taraf se help karta tab to sabko pata chal jata ke Abhi ne financial help diya tha….

Yeh baat Abhi ne shweta ko bhi nahin bataya….. Abhi Shweta se bhi nahin mila 2011 ke March mahine tak, haan phone se baat aur messages hote the….

Phir April mein kyunke Abhi ka birthday ata hai tab Abhi Shweta mile aur fir milne lage pehle ki tarah aur sab thoda mamool par agaya Abhi ke liye….. financial help karne ke baad Abhi ko sukoon haasil hua Manoj wale baat ko lekar.

Ab kuch aise hone wala tha jiss ke baad, Shwetha ke liye bahut bura hua aur wo khud ko kossne lagi ke kyun ussne aaj tal Abhi ko wo raaz nahin bataayi….

Shweta ke zarye nahin Abhi ko Ruhi se sab sach ka pata chala!!

Abhi aur Ruhi mile 2011 mein!! June ka mahina tha….. donon 24 December 1986 ke baad 2011 ke June mahine mein mile… 25 saal baad!!! Kia aalam tha!!! kia rona dhona hua- kaise mile? Kahan mile? Kia hua? Okay sab araam se batata hoon nah!!

Abhi Manoj ke maut ke baad sochne laga ke kabhi bhi usska bhi death ho sakta hai achanak… to ussne khud se kaha ke “marne se pehle ek baar Ruhi se mil leta to mujhe sukoon milta, Ruhi ko wo diaries padhne ko zaroor dena hoga, ussko bhi marne se pehle pata chalna chahiye mujh par kia guzra tha unn dinon…. Bus ek baar sirf Ruhi se mil leta main marne se pehle!!”

June mahine mein Abhi achanak ek din Mahesh se mila kareeb 7 ya 8 saal baad, wo ab police inspector ban gaya tha. Milte hi sab se pehli baat jo Abhi ne kiya wo tha Manoj ki death ki sympathy pesh karna Mahesh ko. Aur ab Mahesh bhi shadi shuda tha aur baap tha teen bachon ke. Mahesh ne Abhi se kaha,

“Abhi bhai, hum bahot dinon baad mile hein aaj chalo ek chai pite hein uss hotel mein baith kar kuch baatein karte hein.”

Abhi raazi hua. Assal mein Abhi ne aaj dil mein yeh soch liya tha ke aaj wo Mahesh se Ruhi ka haal puchega.

To donon baithe, ek ek cup chai ke saath. Abhi Mahesh ke chehre mein dekh raha tha, mature ho gaya tha Mahesh ab, usske chehre mein wo tenderness nahin thi ab jo Abhi Hamesha dekha karta tha Mahesh ke chehre mein, magar wo gentleness ab bhi tha Mahesh mein. Mahesh kuch kehna chahta tha Abhi se magar Abhi ko dikh gaya tha ke Mahesh jhijhak raha hai ya samajh nahin raha hai ke kaise shuru karen, iss liye Abhi ne hi baat kiya yeh keh kar;

“are Mahesh kyun jhijhak rahe ho kaho nah jo kehna hai we are two men talking yaar, ghabra rahe ho ya kissi baat ka darr hai? Kaho nah bhai!”

Mahesh ne muskuraya, aur Abhi ke chehre mein laal chehre se kaha,

“Bhai last time jitney baar bhi main aap se mila tha to Ruhi ko bataya tha. Ruhi har baar kehti rahi ke agle bar aap se milun to aap ko ghar aane ko kahun, magar har baar aap agle baar milte the to hum mein sirf casual baat hote aur mujh mein himmat nahin hoti thi aap se ghar aane ko kehne ke liye, iss liye ke jiss tarah se aap ko ghar se nikala gaya tha main hamesha sochta tha ke aap inkaar karoge aane se….”

Abhi ke jism mein ek thartharaahat si hui Mahesh ki baton ko sun kar…. Ek afsos bhi hua ussko aur uss din ko socha jiss din wo uss pump station par gaya tha aur phir wapas nahin gaya…. Ruhi ne ussko bulaya tha wo bhi koyi 17 saal pehle aur Abhi gaya hi nahin…. Itna afsos ho raha tha Abhi ko…. Usske Aankhen bhar aaye Mahesh ko dekhte hue aur iss se pehle ke Abhi kuch kehta Mahesh ne sar niche jhukaate hue kaha,

“Bhai hum sab aap ke gunehgaar hein, aap ka dil toda tha hum sab ne, kusoor mera bhi hai ke uss din main ne kuch nahin kaha tha, chhup raha tha uss din halaan ke main Ruhi ko bahot pyar karta hoon magar uss roz usske liye kuch nahin kar paaya tha, bhai Manoj bada bhai tha mera iss liye usske saamne main kuch nahin bol saka tha…. bhai ussne bahot ghalat kiya tha aap ke saath sabko pata hai ghar mein….. Ruhi bahot royi thi aur 5 saal tak Manoj se baat nahin kiya tha uss din ke baad…. Bhai jab Manoj mara to ghar mein sab ne yehi kaha ke ussko aap ki aur Ruhi ke dil todne ka saza mili….. Manoj ki wife aap ko nahin jaanti magar Ruhi ne usskko sab kuch bata diya tha shadi ke baad ke khud Manoj ki wife ne bhi kaha ke aap ki aur Ruhi ki badd duah lagi Manoj ko…… Abhi bhai hum sab ko maaf kardo please….. aap ghar chaliye nah Ruhi aap ka intezaar kar rahi hai barson se!!”

Abhi jaise emotional aadmi kia yeh sab sunkar bina roye reh sakta tha……? nahin nah? usske aakhon se jharr jharr aansoo behne lage the aur khud Mahesh ne bhi ro diye yeh sab kehte hue….

Kaampte honton se Abhi ne pucha,

“kaisi hai meri Ruhi Mahesh?”

Mahesh: “Aap chal kar khud dekh lijiye nah bhai! Har baar jab aap se mila hoon to ussko bataya, wo naraaz hoti ke iss baar kyun nahin bulaya aap ko… hum shayad 5 ya 6 baar mile hein nah? to unn paanchon baar Ruhi mujhse rote hue aap ko kehne ko kaha ke ussne aap ko bulaya hai…. Usske taraf se bulawa hai bhai chaloge nah aap?! - aur ab Manoj bhi nahin hai aap ko kuch kehne ke liye….”

Abhi: “25 saal baad uss ghar mein jana padega mujhe Mahesh? Wo aangan, wo ghar, wo kapde dhone wala pathar, wo gulab ka bagicha… sab weise hi hein aaj bhi kia?”

Mahesh: “chalo nah bhai, khud chal kar dekh lo…. Sab kuch badal gaya hai ab…. Jahan wo bagicha tha wahan mera ghar hai aur Ruhi mere saath hi rehti hai…. Jahan pehle hamara ghar tha wahan mummy papa rehte hein aur upar Manoj rehta tha aur ab usski wife aur bache hein!! Sab kuch badal gaya hein piche 25 Saalon mein bhai….”

Bina chai khatam kiye Abhi ne kaha,

“Chalo bhai chalte hein aaj phir uss gali mein jahan jaana chorr diya tha!”

Mahesh police ki car mein tha, Abhi ne ussko follow kiya apne car se…. 14 kms drive karna tha aur 15 mins mein reach ho gaye..

Uss aagan mein pehle Mahesh gaya aur usske piche Abhi ne apne car ko kiya aur ussko sab naya lag raha tha kuch bhi weisa nahin tha…. bilkool alag jagah tha… wo aangan ab sirf ek lamba sa lane ban gaya tha… har kissi ne ek ek ghar bana liya tha donon taraf right side aur left side mein bhi…. Jo space tha pehle kitchen aur Mehboob ke ghar ke beech wo ab tha hi nahin…. Jahan Ruhi ki kitchen hua karta tha aaj ek garage tha, jahan bagicha tha ab Mahesh ka ghar tha, haan Mehboob ka ghar ab bhi wohi tha, magar Ruhi ka purana tin aur ladki wala ghar ab concrete ka bara ek mala wala ghar tha, niche Ruhi ke parents rehte the aur upar Manoj ki wife aur bache…. Wo lane ab asphalted tha… naya naya asphalted lag raha tha… jo bada sa peyr hua karta tha jiss ke niche bus tha wo peyr ab exist hi nahin karta tha…. koi bus bhi nahin tha kahin…. Ek Toyota Hiace 15 seater jo naya lag raha tha wo lane ke aakhri end par tha, maan lo Ruhi ke old kitchen ke bhi baad mein….. jo feeling Abhi paana chahta tha wo bilkool bhi nahin mila ussko…wo fiza nahin thi, wo hawa nahin the, wo sukoon nahin thi uss lane mein jo unn dinon uss aangan mein hua karta tha…. sab kuch badla badla sa tha jaise kissi aur jagah pahunch gaya tha Abhi…..

Abhi apni zehen mein aaj bhi uss aanagn ko weisa hi sochta tha jaise chorra tha 25 saal pehle…. Ussko bilkool bhi nahin pata tha itna badlaav agaya hoga uss aangan mein …. Last time bhi jab 8 saal ke baad aya tha pump station par tab tak to sab baraabar tha…. magar aaj sab kuch bilkool hi alag tha….

Mahesh apne police car se utra aur Abhi ke karib aakar dhire se kaha,

“Main ussko surprise karunga, aap kuch mat bolna aap ko usske saamne khada karunga okay?!”

Abhi ne ek gehri saans li…. Usska dil zoron se dhadakne laga tha, haath peyr thoda kaampne lage the, phir bhi ek naya bana hua ghar ke darwaze se enter kiya Abhi ne Mahesh ke piche…. Aur jiss waqt Abhi andar jaa raha tha ek adher aadmi nikla ussi ghar se jissne Abhi ke chehre mein dekha, Abhi ne bhi ussko dekha thoda sa daadhi tha aadmi ka, aur wo Ruhi ke pehle wale ghar ke taraf gaye, aur terrace se hokar uss ghar mein gaya tab Abhi ne yaad kiya ke wo zaroor Ruhi ke pita hoga…. Ab bhi zinda hai wo Abhi ne socha!

Mahesh ne Abhi ko corridor mein wait karne ko kaha, aur ek kamre mein gaya aur kaha,

“Dekho to kaun aya hai pehchanon isse!”

Tab Mahesh ne Abhi ka haath pakar ke kamre ke andar kiya….

Abhi ke saamne ek patli si aurat ek wheelchair par baithi chasme ke saath Abhi ke chehre mein dekh rahi thi!!!”

To be continued…. (2134 words)

Casi bhai dil bhari ho gaya iss update ko padh kar yaar.
Ruhu ki kia haalat ho gayi yaar?
Abhi 25 saal baad usske saamne pesh hua.... aur apne Ruhi ko uss haal mein dekh kar uss par kia beet raha hoga... wo to chilla kar ro dega bhai...
Aur Ruhi jo itne saalon se usska intejar kar rahi hai uss par kia gujar rahi hogi Abhi ko aaj 25 saal pehle apne saamne dekh kar?
Main andar andar rone laga hoon magar sochna nahin chahta k kia hua hoga..... aap k agle update me hi ab padhunga, pata hai bahut rona hai nxt update mei.

 

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[king cobra]

Update 58 Abhi Meets Mahesh And ???​

Dosto kal wale update mein main ne date lekar ek ghalati kiya tha 2010 be badle 2011 likha tha, aur Sweta ke saath guzare 6 saal ko 7 saal likha tha. Wo hua yeh tha ke December 2010 ki baat ho raha tha aur main kyunke December tha iss liye agle saal 2011 ko soch raha tha, dimagh mein 2011 bassa hua tha so likh diya tha, weise 2011 mein bhi Shweta ke saath tha Abhi to 7 saal hi hote hein magar pura saal nahin tha iss liye ke beech 2011 mein hi kuch aisa hua jo nah Shweta ne socha tha aur nah khud Abhi ne socha tha weisa kuch hoga kabhi….

To kal jinn logon ne mere edit karke correct karne se pehle updates padh liye the unnko ab dikhega ke main ne 2011 ke badle 2010 likha hai aur 7 saal ke badle 6 saal likha hua hai Shweta aur Abhi ke rishte ko….

Aaj ke update se ap log samajh jaoge mujhse yeh ghalati kyun aur kaise ho gayi thi kyunke yeh 2011 hi tha jiss mein aisa kuch hua ta iss liye mere dimagh mein 2011 bassa hua tha aur wohi likh diya tha kal ke update mein. Sorry for that mistake which I corrected later.

To November 1st 2010 ko Manoj accident mein mara gaya tha aur December mein Abhi ko pata chala jiss se wo bahot affect hue the iss liye ke khud ko guilty feel karne laga tha iss liye ke ussne badd duah diya tha uss bus stop par aur exactly wahin Manoj ki death hui aur bahot buri tarah ki death hui thi.

December end hua, 2011 start hua…. Abhi restless, bechain rehne laga Manoj ko soch kar, usske vidhwa wife aur chhote bachon ko soch kar…. Wo unn logon ka financial help karna chahta tha…. chaahe wahan nahin jata magar apne company ki taraf se kissi ko bhej kar Manoj ki wife aur bachon ko financial help karne ko soch raha tha.

Aur wo Abhi ne successfully kiya. Apne accountant aur usske assistant ko udhar bheja company ke taraf se, magar Abruhi company ke taraf se nahin, varna unn logon ko pata chal jata …. Abhi ne ek virtual company create kiya jo gharibon ke help ke liye banayaa Abhi ne aur uss company ke taraf se financial help bheja Manoj ke family ke liye. Abhi bilkool anonymous raha uss mein. Wahan par kissi ko bhi pata nahin chala ke Abhi ne help kiya unn logon ki. Aur agar Abruhi company ke taraf se help karta tab to sabko pata chal jata ke Abhi ne financial help diya tha….

Yeh baat Abhi ne shweta ko bhi nahin bataya….. Abhi Shweta se bhi nahin mila 2011 ke March mahine tak, haan phone se baat aur messages hote the….

Phir April mein kyunke Abhi ka birthday ata hai tab Abhi Shweta mile aur fir milne lage pehle ki tarah aur sab thoda mamool par agaya Abhi ke liye….. financial help karne ke baad Abhi ko sukoon haasil hua Manoj wale baat ko lekar.

Ab kuch aise hone wala tha jiss ke baad, Shwetha ke liye bahut bura hua aur wo khud ko kossne lagi ke kyun ussne aaj tal Abhi ko wo raaz nahin bataayi….

Shweta ke zarye nahin Abhi ko Ruhi se sab sach ka pata chala!!

Abhi aur Ruhi mile 2011 mein!! June ka mahina tha….. donon 24 December 1986 ke baad 2011 ke June mahine mein mile… 25 saal baad!!! Kia aalam tha!!! kia rona dhona hua- kaise mile? Kahan mile? Kia hua? Okay sab araam se batata hoon nah!!

Abhi Manoj ke maut ke baad sochne laga ke kabhi bhi usska bhi death ho sakta hai achanak… to ussne khud se kaha ke “marne se pehle ek baar Ruhi se mil leta to mujhe sukoon milta, Ruhi ko wo diaries padhne ko zaroor dena hoga, ussko bhi marne se pehle pata chalna chahiye mujh par kia guzra tha unn dinon…. Bus ek baar sirf Ruhi se mil leta main marne se pehle!!”

June mahine mein Abhi achanak ek din Mahesh se mila kareeb 7 ya 8 saal baad, wo ab police inspector ban gaya tha. Milte hi sab se pehli baat jo Abhi ne kiya wo tha Manoj ki death ki sympathy pesh karna Mahesh ko. Aur ab Mahesh bhi shadi shuda tha aur baap tha teen bachon ke. Mahesh ne Abhi se kaha,

“Abhi bhai, hum bahot dinon baad mile hein aaj chalo ek chai pite hein uss hotel mein baith kar kuch baatein karte hein.”

Abhi raazi hua. Assal mein Abhi ne aaj dil mein yeh soch liya tha ke aaj wo Mahesh se Ruhi ka haal puchega.

To donon baithe, ek ek cup chai ke saath. Abhi Mahesh ke chehre mein dekh raha tha, mature ho gaya tha Mahesh ab, usske chehre mein wo tenderness nahin thi ab jo Abhi Hamesha dekha karta tha Mahesh ke chehre mein, magar wo gentleness ab bhi tha Mahesh mein. Mahesh kuch kehna chahta tha Abhi se magar Abhi ko dikh gaya tha ke Mahesh jhijhak raha hai ya samajh nahin raha hai ke kaise shuru karen, iss liye Abhi ne hi baat kiya yeh keh kar;

“are Mahesh kyun jhijhak rahe ho kaho nah jo kehna hai we are two men talking yaar, ghabra rahe ho ya kissi baat ka darr hai? Kaho nah bhai!”

Mahesh ne muskuraya, aur Abhi ke chehre mein laal chehre se kaha,

“Bhai last time jitney baar bhi main aap se mila tha to Ruhi ko bataya tha. Ruhi har baar kehti rahi ke agle bar aap se milun to aap ko ghar aane ko kahun, magar har baar aap agle baar milte the to hum mein sirf casual baat hote aur mujh mein himmat nahin hoti thi aap se ghar aane ko kehne ke liye, iss liye ke jiss tarah se aap ko ghar se nikala gaya tha main hamesha sochta tha ke aap inkaar karoge aane se….”

Abhi ke jism mein ek thartharaahat si hui Mahesh ki baton ko sun kar…. Ek afsos bhi hua ussko aur uss din ko socha jiss din wo uss pump station par gaya tha aur phir wapas nahin gaya…. Ruhi ne ussko bulaya tha wo bhi koyi 17 saal pehle aur Abhi gaya hi nahin…. Itna afsos ho raha tha Abhi ko…. Usske Aankhen bhar aaye Mahesh ko dekhte hue aur iss se pehle ke Abhi kuch kehta Mahesh ne sar niche jhukaate hue kaha,

“Bhai hum sab aap ke gunehgaar hein, aap ka dil toda tha hum sab ne, kusoor mera bhi hai ke uss din main ne kuch nahin kaha tha, chhup raha tha uss din halaan ke main Ruhi ko bahot pyar karta hoon magar uss roz usske liye kuch nahin kar paaya tha, bhai Manoj bada bhai tha mera iss liye usske saamne main kuch nahin bol saka tha…. bhai ussne bahot ghalat kiya tha aap ke saath sabko pata hai ghar mein….. Ruhi bahot royi thi aur 5 saal tak Manoj se baat nahin kiya tha uss din ke baad…. Bhai jab Manoj mara to ghar mein sab ne yehi kaha ke ussko aap ki aur Ruhi ke dil todne ka saza mili….. Manoj ki wife aap ko nahin jaanti magar Ruhi ne usskko sab kuch bata diya tha shadi ke baad ke khud Manoj ki wife ne bhi kaha ke aap ki aur Ruhi ki badd duah lagi Manoj ko…… Abhi bhai hum sab ko maaf kardo please….. aap ghar chaliye nah Ruhi aap ka intezaar kar rahi hai barson se!!”

Abhi jaise emotional aadmi kia yeh sab sunkar bina roye reh sakta tha……? nahin nah? usske aakhon se jharr jharr aansoo behne lage the aur khud Mahesh ne bhi ro diye yeh sab kehte hue….

Kaampte honton se Abhi ne pucha,

“kaisi hai meri Ruhi Mahesh?”

Mahesh: “Aap chal kar khud dekh lijiye nah bhai! Har baar jab aap se mila hoon to ussko bataya, wo naraaz hoti ke iss baar kyun nahin bulaya aap ko… hum shayad 5 ya 6 baar mile hein nah? to unn paanchon baar Ruhi mujhse rote hue aap ko kehne ko kaha ke ussne aap ko bulaya hai…. Usske taraf se bulawa hai bhai chaloge nah aap?! - aur ab Manoj bhi nahin hai aap ko kuch kehne ke liye….”

Abhi: “25 saal baad uss ghar mein jana padega mujhe Mahesh? Wo aangan, wo ghar, wo kapde dhone wala pathar, wo gulab ka bagicha… sab weise hi hein aaj bhi kia?”

Mahesh: “chalo nah bhai, khud chal kar dekh lo…. Sab kuch badal gaya hai ab…. Jahan wo bagicha tha wahan mera ghar hai aur Ruhi mere saath hi rehti hai…. Jahan pehle hamara ghar tha wahan mummy papa rehte hein aur upar Manoj rehta tha aur ab usski wife aur bache hein!! Sab kuch badal gaya hein piche 25 Saalon mein bhai….”

Bina chai khatam kiye Abhi ne kaha,

“Chalo bhai chalte hein aaj phir uss gali mein jahan jaana chorr diya tha!”

Mahesh police ki car mein tha, Abhi ne ussko follow kiya apne car se…. 14 kms drive karna tha aur 15 mins mein reach ho gaye..

Uss aagan mein pehle Mahesh gaya aur usske piche Abhi ne apne car ko kiya aur ussko sab naya lag raha tha kuch bhi weisa nahin tha…. bilkool alag jagah tha… wo aangan ab sirf ek lamba sa lane ban gaya tha… har kissi ne ek ek ghar bana liya tha donon taraf right side aur left side mein bhi…. Jo space tha pehle kitchen aur Mehboob ke ghar ke beech wo ab tha hi nahin…. Jahan Ruhi ki kitchen hua karta tha aaj ek garage tha, jahan bagicha tha ab Mahesh ka ghar tha, haan Mehboob ka ghar ab bhi wohi tha, magar Ruhi ka purana tin aur ladki wala ghar ab concrete ka bara ek mala wala ghar tha, niche Ruhi ke parents rehte the aur upar Manoj ki wife aur bache…. Wo lane ab asphalted tha… naya naya asphalted lag raha tha… jo bada sa peyr hua karta tha jiss ke niche bus tha wo peyr ab exist hi nahin karta tha…. koi bus bhi nahin tha kahin…. Ek Toyota Hiace 15 seater jo naya lag raha tha wo lane ke aakhri end par tha, maan lo Ruhi ke old kitchen ke bhi baad mein….. jo feeling Abhi paana chahta tha wo bilkool bhi nahin mila ussko…wo fiza nahin thi, wo hawa nahin the, wo sukoon nahin thi uss lane mein jo unn dinon uss aangan mein hua karta tha…. sab kuch badla badla sa tha jaise kissi aur jagah pahunch gaya tha Abhi…..

Abhi apni zehen mein aaj bhi uss aanagn ko weisa hi sochta tha jaise chorra tha 25 saal pehle…. Ussko bilkool bhi nahin pata tha itna badlaav agaya hoga uss aangan mein …. Last time bhi jab 8 saal ke baad aya tha pump station par tab tak to sab baraabar tha…. magar aaj sab kuch bilkool hi alag tha….

Mahesh apne police car se utra aur Abhi ke karib aakar dhire se kaha,

“Main ussko surprise karunga, aap kuch mat bolna aap ko usske saamne khada karunga okay?!”

Abhi ne ek gehri saans li…. Usska dil zoron se dhadakne laga tha, haath peyr thoda kaampne lage the, phir bhi ek naya bana hua ghar ke darwaze se enter kiya Abhi ne Mahesh ke piche…. Aur jiss waqt Abhi andar jaa raha tha ek adher aadmi nikla ussi ghar se jissne Abhi ke chehre mein dekha, Abhi ne bhi ussko dekha thoda sa daadhi tha aadmi ka, aur wo Ruhi ke pehle wale ghar ke taraf gaye, aur terrace se hokar uss ghar mein gaya tab Abhi ne yaad kiya ke wo zaroor Ruhi ke pita hoga…. Ab bhi zinda hai wo Abhi ne socha!

Mahesh ne Abhi ko corridor mein wait karne ko kaha, aur ek kamre mein gaya aur kaha,

“Dekho to kaun aya hai pehchanon isse!”

Tab Mahesh ne Abhi ka haath pakar ke kamre ke andar kiya….

Abhi ke saamne ek patli si aurat ek wheelchair par baithi chasme ke saath Abhi ke chehre mein dekh rahi thi!!!”

To be continued…. (2134 words)

Bidu ye bahut badhya update hua.
Aakhir donon aamne samne to aaye. Magar ab kahin kuch bura to nahin hoga na?
Ruhi ka pita nikla tha wahan se kahin wo ab aakar Abhi ko dhakka to nahin dega na?
Apun thoda ulta, negative kehta so that aisa na ho
Agar sab sahi chala to agla update bahut hi emotional hone wala hai

 

[Vikram]

now

 

[Komal singh]

 

[Aakash.]

Abhi is a good boy from the beginning and today he is the same after so many years, Manoj did very bad with Abhi but still Abhi is worried about his family, you can guess this yourself. Abhi did a good job helping Manoj's family.
Now what can I say, Abhi has thought about dying but has not met Ruhi yet. I do not understand how it is. I had already suspected that Mahesh would have told Ruhi, I also said in my previous review. I don't think Mahesh is wrong.
I also remember every part of Ruhi's house, every single moment they spent there, I am scared thinking about Abhi's heart condition what would have gone through his heart. Over time everything changes.
Age does not matter in love, love is always young. Even today Abhi's condition is the same when he first met Ruhi.
Why is Ruhi in a wheelchair? What happened to her? Today for the first time I think the update is incomplete.
Pain, pain and just pain!
I want to cry but I am not able to cry, this is my condition. There is a strange fear while reading the update. Now just waiting for the next update.

There are many questions in mind but I do not want to ask.​

 

[Vikram]

Update 58 Abhi Meets Mahesh And ???​

Dosto kal wale update mein main ne date lekar ek ghalati kiya tha 2010 be badle 2011 likha tha, aur Sweta ke saath guzare 6 saal ko 7 saal likha tha. Wo hua yeh tha ke December 2010 ki baat ho raha tha aur main kyunke December tha iss liye agle saal 2011 ko soch raha tha, dimagh mein 2011 bassa hua tha so likh diya tha, weise 2011 mein bhi Shweta ke saath tha Abhi to 7 saal hi hote hein magar pura saal nahin tha iss liye ke beech 2011 mein hi kuch aisa hua jo nah Shweta ne socha tha aur nah khud Abhi ne socha tha weisa kuch hoga kabhi….

To kal jinn logon ne mere edit karke correct karne se pehle updates padh liye the unnko ab dikhega ke main ne 2011 ke badle 2010 likha hai aur 7 saal ke badle 6 saal likha hua hai Shweta aur Abhi ke rishte ko….

Aaj ke update se ap log samajh jaoge mujhse yeh ghalati kyun aur kaise ho gayi thi kyunke yeh 2011 hi tha jiss mein aisa kuch hua ta iss liye mere dimagh mein 2011 bassa hua tha aur wohi likh diya tha kal ke update mein. Sorry for that mistake which I corrected later.

To November 1st 2010 ko Manoj accident mein mara gaya tha aur December mein Abhi ko pata chala jiss se wo bahot affect hue the iss liye ke khud ko guilty feel karne laga tha iss liye ke ussne badd duah diya tha uss bus stop par aur exactly wahin Manoj ki death hui aur bahot buri tarah ki death hui thi.

December end hua, 2011 start hua…. Abhi restless, bechain rehne laga Manoj ko soch kar, usske vidhwa wife aur chhote bachon ko soch kar…. Wo unn logon ka financial help karna chahta tha…. chaahe wahan nahin jata magar apne company ki taraf se kissi ko bhej kar Manoj ki wife aur bachon ko financial help karne ko soch raha tha.

Aur wo Abhi ne successfully kiya. Apne accountant aur usske assistant ko udhar bheja company ke taraf se, magar Abruhi company ke taraf se nahin, varna unn logon ko pata chal jata …. Abhi ne ek virtual company create kiya jo gharibon ke help ke liye banayaa Abhi ne aur uss company ke taraf se financial help bheja Manoj ke family ke liye. Abhi bilkool anonymous raha uss mein. Wahan par kissi ko bhi pata nahin chala ke Abhi ne help kiya unn logon ki. Aur agar Abruhi company ke taraf se help karta tab to sabko pata chal jata ke Abhi ne financial help diya tha….

Yeh baat Abhi ne shweta ko bhi nahin bataya….. Abhi Shweta se bhi nahin mila 2011 ke March mahine tak, haan phone se baat aur messages hote the….

Phir April mein kyunke Abhi ka birthday ata hai tab Abhi Shweta mile aur fir milne lage pehle ki tarah aur sab thoda mamool par agaya Abhi ke liye….. financial help karne ke baad Abhi ko sukoon haasil hua Manoj wale baat ko lekar.

Ab kuch aise hone wala tha jiss ke baad, Shwetha ke liye bahut bura hua aur wo khud ko kossne lagi ke kyun ussne aaj tal Abhi ko wo raaz nahin bataayi….

Shweta ke zarye nahin Abhi ko Ruhi se sab sach ka pata chala!!

Abhi aur Ruhi mile 2011 mein!! June ka mahina tha….. donon 24 December 1986 ke baad 2011 ke June mahine mein mile… 25 saal baad!!! Kia aalam tha!!! kia rona dhona hua- kaise mile? Kahan mile? Kia hua? Okay sab araam se batata hoon nah!!

Abhi Manoj ke maut ke baad sochne laga ke kabhi bhi usska bhi death ho sakta hai achanak… to ussne khud se kaha ke “marne se pehle ek baar Ruhi se mil leta to mujhe sukoon milta, Ruhi ko wo diaries padhne ko zaroor dena hoga, ussko bhi marne se pehle pata chalna chahiye mujh par kia guzra tha unn dinon…. Bus ek baar sirf Ruhi se mil leta main marne se pehle!!”

June mahine mein Abhi achanak ek din Mahesh se mila kareeb 7 ya 8 saal baad, wo ab police inspector ban gaya tha. Milte hi sab se pehli baat jo Abhi ne kiya wo tha Manoj ki death ki sympathy pesh karna Mahesh ko. Aur ab Mahesh bhi shadi shuda tha aur baap tha teen bachon ke. Mahesh ne Abhi se kaha,

“Abhi bhai, hum bahot dinon baad mile hein aaj chalo ek chai pite hein uss hotel mein baith kar kuch baatein karte hein.”

Abhi raazi hua. Assal mein Abhi ne aaj dil mein yeh soch liya tha ke aaj wo Mahesh se Ruhi ka haal puchega.

To donon baithe, ek ek cup chai ke saath. Abhi Mahesh ke chehre mein dekh raha tha, mature ho gaya tha Mahesh ab, usske chehre mein wo tenderness nahin thi ab jo Abhi Hamesha dekha karta tha Mahesh ke chehre mein, magar wo gentleness ab bhi tha Mahesh mein. Mahesh kuch kehna chahta tha Abhi se magar Abhi ko dikh gaya tha ke Mahesh jhijhak raha hai ya samajh nahin raha hai ke kaise shuru karen, iss liye Abhi ne hi baat kiya yeh keh kar;

“are Mahesh kyun jhijhak rahe ho kaho nah jo kehna hai we are two men talking yaar, ghabra rahe ho ya kissi baat ka darr hai? Kaho nah bhai!”

Mahesh ne muskuraya, aur Abhi ke chehre mein laal chehre se kaha,

“Bhai last time jitney baar bhi main aap se mila tha to Ruhi ko bataya tha. Ruhi har baar kehti rahi ke agle bar aap se milun to aap ko ghar aane ko kahun, magar har baar aap agle baar milte the to hum mein sirf casual baat hote aur mujh mein himmat nahin hoti thi aap se ghar aane ko kehne ke liye, iss liye ke jiss tarah se aap ko ghar se nikala gaya tha main hamesha sochta tha ke aap inkaar karoge aane se….”

Abhi ke jism mein ek thartharaahat si hui Mahesh ki baton ko sun kar…. Ek afsos bhi hua ussko aur uss din ko socha jiss din wo uss pump station par gaya tha aur phir wapas nahin gaya…. Ruhi ne ussko bulaya tha wo bhi koyi 17 saal pehle aur Abhi gaya hi nahin…. Itna afsos ho raha tha Abhi ko…. Usske Aankhen bhar aaye Mahesh ko dekhte hue aur iss se pehle ke Abhi kuch kehta Mahesh ne sar niche jhukaate hue kaha,

“Bhai hum sab aap ke gunehgaar hein, aap ka dil toda tha hum sab ne, kusoor mera bhi hai ke uss din main ne kuch nahin kaha tha, chhup raha tha uss din halaan ke main Ruhi ko bahot pyar karta hoon magar uss roz usske liye kuch nahin kar paaya tha, bhai Manoj bada bhai tha mera iss liye usske saamne main kuch nahin bol saka tha…. bhai ussne bahot ghalat kiya tha aap ke saath sabko pata hai ghar mein….. Ruhi bahot royi thi aur 5 saal tak Manoj se baat nahin kiya tha uss din ke baad…. Bhai jab Manoj mara to ghar mein sab ne yehi kaha ke ussko aap ki aur Ruhi ke dil todne ka saza mili….. Manoj ki wife aap ko nahin jaanti magar Ruhi ne usskko sab kuch bata diya tha shadi ke baad ke khud Manoj ki wife ne bhi kaha ke aap ki aur Ruhi ki badd duah lagi Manoj ko…… Abhi bhai hum sab ko maaf kardo please….. aap ghar chaliye nah Ruhi aap ka intezaar kar rahi hai barson se!!”

Abhi jaise emotional aadmi kia yeh sab sunkar bina roye reh sakta tha……? nahin nah? usske aakhon se jharr jharr aansoo behne lage the aur khud Mahesh ne bhi ro diye yeh sab kehte hue….

Kaampte honton se Abhi ne pucha,

“kaisi hai meri Ruhi Mahesh?”

Mahesh: “Aap chal kar khud dekh lijiye nah bhai! Har baar jab aap se mila hoon to ussko bataya, wo naraaz hoti ke iss baar kyun nahin bulaya aap ko… hum shayad 5 ya 6 baar mile hein nah? to unn paanchon baar Ruhi mujhse rote hue aap ko kehne ko kaha ke ussne aap ko bulaya hai…. Usske taraf se bulawa hai bhai chaloge nah aap?! - aur ab Manoj bhi nahin hai aap ko kuch kehne ke liye….”

Abhi: “25 saal baad uss ghar mein jana padega mujhe Mahesh? Wo aangan, wo ghar, wo kapde dhone wala pathar, wo gulab ka bagicha… sab weise hi hein aaj bhi kia?”

Mahesh: “chalo nah bhai, khud chal kar dekh lo…. Sab kuch badal gaya hai ab…. Jahan wo bagicha tha wahan mera ghar hai aur Ruhi mere saath hi rehti hai…. Jahan pehle hamara ghar tha wahan mummy papa rehte hein aur upar Manoj rehta tha aur ab usski wife aur bache hein!! Sab kuch badal gaya hein piche 25 Saalon mein bhai….”

Bina chai khatam kiye Abhi ne kaha,

“Chalo bhai chalte hein aaj phir uss gali mein jahan jaana chorr diya tha!”

Mahesh police ki car mein tha, Abhi ne ussko follow kiya apne car se…. 14 kms drive karna tha aur 15 mins mein reach ho gaye..

Uss aagan mein pehle Mahesh gaya aur usske piche Abhi ne apne car ko kiya aur ussko sab naya lag raha tha kuch bhi weisa nahin tha…. bilkool alag jagah tha… wo aangan ab sirf ek lamba sa lane ban gaya tha… har kissi ne ek ek ghar bana liya tha donon taraf right side aur left side mein bhi…. Jo space tha pehle kitchen aur Mehboob ke ghar ke beech wo ab tha hi nahin…. Jahan Ruhi ki kitchen hua karta tha aaj ek garage tha, jahan bagicha tha ab Mahesh ka ghar tha, haan Mehboob ka ghar ab bhi wohi tha, magar Ruhi ka purana tin aur ladki wala ghar ab concrete ka bara ek mala wala ghar tha, niche Ruhi ke parents rehte the aur upar Manoj ki wife aur bache…. Wo lane ab asphalted tha… naya naya asphalted lag raha tha… jo bada sa peyr hua karta tha jiss ke niche bus tha wo peyr ab exist hi nahin karta tha…. koi bus bhi nahin tha kahin…. Ek Toyota Hiace 15 seater jo naya lag raha tha wo lane ke aakhri end par tha, maan lo Ruhi ke old kitchen ke bhi baad mein….. jo feeling Abhi paana chahta tha wo bilkool bhi nahin mila ussko…wo fiza nahin thi, wo hawa nahin the, wo sukoon nahin thi uss lane mein jo unn dinon uss aangan mein hua karta tha…. sab kuch badla badla sa tha jaise kissi aur jagah pahunch gaya tha Abhi…..

Abhi apni zehen mein aaj bhi uss aanagn ko weisa hi sochta tha jaise chorra tha 25 saal pehle…. Ussko bilkool bhi nahin pata tha itna badlaav agaya hoga uss aangan mein …. Last time bhi jab 8 saal ke baad aya tha pump station par tab tak to sab baraabar tha…. magar aaj sab kuch bilkool hi alag tha….

Mahesh apne police car se utra aur Abhi ke karib aakar dhire se kaha,

“Main ussko surprise karunga, aap kuch mat bolna aap ko usske saamne khada karunga okay?!”

Abhi ne ek gehri saans li…. Usska dil zoron se dhadakne laga tha, haath peyr thoda kaampne lage the, phir bhi ek naya bana hua ghar ke darwaze se enter kiya Abhi ne Mahesh ke piche…. Aur jiss waqt Abhi andar jaa raha tha ek adher aadmi nikla ussi ghar se jissne Abhi ke chehre mein dekha, Abhi ne bhi ussko dekha thoda sa daadhi tha aadmi ka, aur wo Ruhi ke pehle wale ghar ke taraf gaye, aur terrace se hokar uss ghar mein gaya tab Abhi ne yaad kiya ke wo zaroor Ruhi ke pita hoga…. Ab bhi zinda hai wo Abhi ne socha!

Mahesh ne Abhi ko corridor mein wait karne ko kaha, aur ek kamre mein gaya aur kaha,

“Dekho to kaun aya hai pehchanon isse!”

Tab Mahesh ne Abhi ka haath pakar ke kamre ke andar kiya….

Abhi ke saamne ek patli si aurat ek wheelchair par baithi chasme ke saath Abhi ke chehre mein dekh rahi thi!!!”

To be continued…. (2134 words)

Has been waitimg for this for so long. Never thought it will come like this. Completely unexpected indeed. But shocking yes.
I was amazed to know that Ruhi was waiting and wishing to see Abhi. She was expecting him to come to her place. WHY?
WHY should Abhi hv gone when he was insulted and driven out of that house RUHI did nothing at that time?? Why should she be expecting him to come there again?
Why even after that Abhi had been to leave the diaries she was in the house still she had not then come to see him? I do not agree with all that Mahesh said to Abhi although Ruhi really had told Mahesh..... If I was Abhi I would hv asked all this with Mahesh.but I think because so nany years gone Abhi kept quiet.
Yeah the place is no more like it used to be. Abhi always visualised the place to be as it was the days he worked there, but of course after 25 years there must hv been great changes no doubt. And Abhi did not get the feelings he used to get there in that yard in 1986.
And now I am thinking is or was Abhi still expecting to see Ruhi also the way he used to see her 25 years ago? Will he see the Ruhi he has captured in his mind in 1986?
How did he ferl in seeing a thin, old lady sitting bon a wheel chair?
I know super emotional scene will be followed now.
Fantastic update Casinar

 

[Vikram]

Kamdev bhai I am extremely sorry yaar. Aap ko pata hai ke main update dene mein kabhi bhi kanjoosi karta hi nahin, kayi double aur tripple updates bhi diya hoon, 5700 words ke update bhi diya hoon issi thread par... magar bhai afsos ke raat ko likhta hoon der kabhi 3 baje tak likhta hoon, magar kal ki raat aap se behtar kissko pata ke kaise guzra tha.... aap se hi baat karte aadhi raat chali gayi thi phir aap se kaha tha nah kiss se baat karne ja raha hoon aap se baat karne ke baad
Bhai subha ho gayi uss se baat karte sirf 1 ghanta soya.... aaj issi liye update late aya kyunke ussko 1 ghanta post karne se pehle likha gaya tha...
Weise aaj main double update hi dene wala tha. Plan dimagh mein kar liya tha ke kahan stop karunga magar tab bahut der ho jaati update likhte likhte... iss liye itne mein stop kar diya....
Fikar nahin dost kal compensate kar dunga kyunke unn donon ke bich jitna sunna sunana hai wo kaafi lamba jaega tab flashback shuru hogi Ruhi ki life ki.
Sorry bhai ab kal hi aega update.

Respect your dedication and sincererity Casinar