Romance Usski Gali Mein Jaana Chorr Diya (Exclusively For XForum) COMPLETED

[Casinar]

Fabulous update bro. Wonderful. Great narration with marvellous descriptions plus a sketch to help readers understand how the place was and where the bus was etc.
They way you described the feelings and status of the mind of Abhi at that moment is awesomely told.
Abhi is trying to find his lost Ruhi in the girl and looks like already fallen for her. Rest to see either he is going to succeed to get her love or not. Heavy task for him ahead it seems. I want to see either the girl will also have feelings for him. And how all other persons around will take that.
You have created a wonderful situation bro. It will really be very interesting to follow what happens next.
Fantastic job mate. Keep it up my dear.

thanks very very much for the appreciation rowdy bro

 

[Casinar]

Bahut hi pyari aur majedar update. Mujhko bahut passand aya. Jo sketch banaaye hai aap ne bahut helpful hai.
Abhi diwana hone laga, pyar ho gaya ussko. Ab kaise kaam karega wo. Din bhar uss ladki ko dekhta rahega.
Beautiful update.

bahot shukriya Swarhi dear

 

[Casinar]

Majedar update hai bidu maja agaya yaar.
Ab yeh ladki paagal bana dega apne hero ko lagta hai. Kaise kaam karega Abhi wahan. Ishk karega ya kaam.
Bahut mast likha hai jhakaas update.

bahot shukriya King bhai

 

[Casinar]

huum to ruhi ke didaar ho gaye akhir jaise jaise ye bus taiyaar hogi in dono ka pyar bhi badh jayega..wonderfull update bhaiya ji

bahot shukriya rahul yara

 

[Casinar]

Shaandaar update hai casi bhai. Behtareen likha hai aap ne. Itni detail k buss maja agaya. To pehle Ruhi k chhote bhai se baat kiya aur last mein usski maa se
Chalo start to hua. To hamara hero handsome tall man hai aur strong personality wala bhi hai tab to Ruhi bhi usske taraf jarur jhukegi.
Bus k pics se mast idea mil gaya bhai k kia kaam karna hai Abhi aurvteam ko bus mein.
Umeed hai k Abhi k liye sab sahi se guzre.
Lajawaab update bhai.

shukriya appreciation ke liye Shambhu bhai

 

[Casinar]

wow badhya update bidu
to aakhir ab Abhi ne Ruhi ke bhai aur maa se baat kar liye
khud apna hero ke dil ka haal normal nahin hsi
diwana ho raha hai aur heroine bhi muskurane lagi
matlab hope hai to dekhte hein aage kia hota hai ab
mast likha hai bhai, mast detail mein sab kuch bataya hai aap ne bus ki haalat dekh kar mujhe to hassi agaya

bahot bahot shukriya King bhai passand karne ke liye

 

[Casinar]

Ruhi abhi ko dekh rahi hai chup chup ke abhi bhi ruhi ko dekh rha chupke se kuch to baat bani hai
Very interesting update

thanks very much james bro

 

[Casinar]

Behtareen update,
Ladakpan ki baate lage raho,
Nain matakke ke Saath kaam pe bhi Dhyan Dena.

bahot shukriya Chintu bai

 

[Casinar]

Behtareen update Shah bhai.
Feelings jo Abhi k dikha rahe ho jabardast hai. Usske dil haal ko samajhna aur samjhana aap hi dikha sakte ho.
Uss aangan mein din bhar rehna aur kaam karna, Ruhi ko dil mein basaaye rakhna, ussko sochna, uss se baat karne k liye mauka dhundna, usski ek jhalak k liye tarasna ye sab sirf ek ishk ka mara hi samajh sakta hai jisse aap ne baakhubi bayaan kiya hai.
Alag se usska kaam kia hai, kaise hota hai, uss jagah ka mahaul kiss time kaisa hota hai, ye sab behtareen tarike se dikhaya hai aap ne. Upar se bus ki pics laga kar aap ne samajhne mein aur bhi asaan kar diya.
Ye muhabat dhire dhire parwaan chadhega ye samajh mein agaya.
Dekhte hein aage kia hota hai.
Sab lagta hai ke hakikat mein beete hue wakiyah dikha rage ho aap.
Too good bhai.

bahot bahot shukriya Husein bhai itni pyari review ke liye

 

[Casinar]

Dreaming is true, This happens when you like a girl very much and you are always lost in her thoughts. Right now, there is only one-sided love, let's see what Ruhi has in mind. Ruhi is settled in Abhi's heart, meaning Abhi is mad for Ruhi.
Today the work has started. Now as soon as the bus is ready, love will grow between them. You have described each scene in detail. It has just begun and let's see what happens next.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Till then waiting for the next part of the story. Thank You...

thanks very very much aakash bro