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Romance Usski Gali Mein Jaana Chorr Diya (Exclusively For XForum) COMPLETED

Casinar

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Wooow bahut badhya update casi bhai. Iss update mein aap ne kayi saal dikha diye. Abhi bahut aage badh chuka hai. Karodpati ban gaya.
Mahesh se bhi kayi baar mil chuka. Celebrity bhi ban gaya youngest business man ban kar. Tv media ne ussko dikhaya. Haan ek band company ko ek jawan ladke ne dobara chalaya aur khub kaamyaab hua to charcha hoga hi business world mein wohi hua Abhi ke saath. Navina ka saatu bhi majbut raha.
Aur 8 saal baad bhi Abhi ke dil mein Ruhi ubhar kar aayi achanak.
Amitabh ke naam se dost bulaate the aur usske kad k kaaran Ruhi se bhi iss bare mein baat hui thi to itna keh diya message dene k liye to wo kaafi hoga Ruhi k liye pehchaane k liye ke mesg Abhi k taraf se tha.
Update bahut strong hai bhai aur mod jabardast hai..... utsukta badhne laga hai k kia hoga ab
Agle update ka besabri se intejar rahega bhai

bahot shukriya appreciation ke liye supar bhai
 

Casinar

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Amitabh Bachchan jitna lamba aadmi puch raha tha usske baare mein kehna wo samajh jaegi....
Are beshak samaj jaegi itni saare batein kiye the donon ne Amitabh ko lekar. Abhi ko lambu bulaate the usske dost. Ruhi ne pucha tha kia Amitabh ji ke sath foto hai to Abhi ne kaha tha haan usska kad bhi utna hi hai jitna Amitabh ki to Ruhi ko itna khabar milegi to pehchaan legi k Abhi aya tha usse dhundne.... kia update hai casi bhai ...

Jabardast update..... kayi saal beet gaye aur Abhi Mahesh se bhi mila, uss se pata chala ke Ruhi k ghar mein sabko pata hai usske baare mein.... wow matlab Ruhi ko bhi pata hoga... aur ab to pata chal gaya ke 8 saal hi gaye aur abhi tak Ruhi yahin hai na shadi hui na kahin foreign gayi...
Mast situation hai bhai....
Ab kia hoga? Kia abhi fir jaega uss pump wale se puchne? Kia Ruhi ko message milegi?
Jaldi batana bhai
Shaandaar, lajawaab update hai bhai
tehe dil se shukriya appreciate karne ke liye Shambhi bhai
 

Casinar

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:superb::good: amazing update casi bhai,
Behad hi shandaar aur lajawab update hai bhai,
abhi ki bhent ek baar phir mahesh se ho gayi hai,
Aur wo usase dosto ki tarah hi mila hai,
aur ruhi 8 saalon ke baad bhi yahin hai,
vahi abhi ne filling station waale ko massage de diya hai ki vo ruhi ko bata de ki abhi uske baare mein puchh raha tha,
ab dekhte hain ki inn 8 saalon mein ruhi ke saath kya hua,
Waiting for next update

appreciate karne ke liye bahot shukriya aman bhai... aaj ke update mein aap ko kuch ziada pata chalega dost
 

Casinar

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Kia update likha hai casi bhai.
Jabardast, lajawaab, shaandaar, jhakaas.
Itna kuch ho gaya? 8 saal beet gaye jabse Ruhi se door hua? Pheeewww
Acha to Navina ke saath Abhi khushi khushi life bita raha hai, aur Navina se khush bhi hai.
Business bhi bahut badhya chalta gaya jab se shuru kiya.
Mahesh mila Abhi ko kuch saal baad aur uss se dost ki tarah mila aur baat kiye donon ne.
Abhi ko bahut khushi hui jab Mahesh se ussko pata chala ke TV par sab ne ussko dekha aur khud Mahesh ne Abhi ko kaha ke wo ab bada aadmi ban gaya hai aur ye ABRUHI naam bhi liya Mahesh ne matlab Mahesh ko pata hai k usski behen ka naam juda hai Abhi k business title mein.
Abhi ne Mahesh se Ruhi k baare mein nahin pucha.
Magar ek din Abhi gujra uss gali se jissko ussne chhorr diya tha. 8 saal baad gaya udhar kaam k liye aur Ruhi ke ghar k saamne wale filling station par jaan bujh kar ruka.....
Ye part bahut tough hai boss....
Main samajh gaya Abhi par uss waqt kia beet raha hoga....
Usske dimaag me sab wo drisht aaye honge jo ussne Ruhi k saath beetaaye hein....


Aur usski kitchen ke stairs par nazar jamaaye dekhta raha k kahin Ruhi dikh jaaye usse....
Pump wale ne toka to Abhi ne Ruhi k bare me pucha to pata chala ke woh ab bhi yahin hai..... wooooow
Aur karna kia tha message chorra uss aadmi se ke kehna Amit ji jaisa lamba aadmi Ruhi k baare me puch raha tha..... bhai ye part padh kar mere aankhen bhar aaye
Mere liye ye bahut emotional tha.
Aap Genius writer hi casi bahi
:bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow:

bahot bahot shukriya itni achi aur bada review ke liye indian bhai :hug:
 

Casinar

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Abhi has bought a lot of cars and computers and houses, which means Abhi is getting a good profit from the garage. I know, even today Ruhi is attached to Abhi's heart and Abhi is with Ruhi's heart. It is very old time, there was no internet at that time, Abhi is making good progress. Even today, just by taking the name of Ruhi, Abhi's heartbeat becomes fast, meaning love remains intact. Abhi leaves the message for Ruhi, now do not know what will happen.
Until the story of Ruhi is revealed, nothing can be said. Ruhi's brother keeps on meeting Abhi, did Ruhi's brother tell Ruhi that Abhi should meet him. Ruhi is not married yet, Ruhi's story is getting mysterious.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
:heart::heart::heart:

thanks very very much for the lovely appreciation Aakash bro...
in update 5 you will get to k.know a bit about ruhi bro... that is tomorrow
 

Casinar

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Fantastic, marvellous, awesome update my friend.
What do I say? What an update! Wonderful man.
Very nicely written and narrated. Your way of delivering is just out of the world. Very impressed by the you write, narrate and describe.
Coming to the update itself, I'd say that after years of hard work Abhi very well deserved the success he is enjoying as a very rich and successful business man.
Navina is the perfect wife supporting Abhi in all the ways.
Abhi met Mahesh with him he was in good terms the days Abhi worked in their yard. They met several times and had friendly talks.....
And Abhi was once going towards the east in connection with his work when he had to pass on the main road lives Ruhi..... this was 8 years since he left that place
And I ask myself why Abhi questioned about Ruhi when he has such a lovely wife at home?
He has a wife who loves him so much and takes so good care of him?
It showed that Abhi has not really forgotten Ruhi even after so many years. It was a painful moment I felt. Abhi must have gone through a terrible emotional trauma at that moment.
But he left a message for Ruhi when he learnt that Ruhi after 8 years is still here.....
But I am asking myself..... how shall we now know either Ruhi got that message as we are knowing all through Abhi only??!
Anyway, just great this update. Loved it. :claps: :claps: :claps: :claps: :claps:

Vikram bro thank you from the bottom of my heart for this lovely review
very much appreciated bro :hug:
 

Casinar

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Bahut badhya aur dumdaar update hai cadi ji.
Navina aur Abhi ke rishte me sab sahi chal raha aur business bhi awwal hai.
Abhi desh ke kone kone mein kaam k silsile me ghumta hai aur aise me Mahesh se milakat ho gayi aur donon dost ki tarah mile. Great.
Maheah se Abhi ko pata chala ke uss ke ghar mein bhi sab ne ussko TV par dekha hai aur sab usske naam aur kaam ae wakif hai.
Abhi ko khushi hui magar ussko tab nahin pata tha nahin tha ke Ruhi yahin hai ya shadi karke France chali gayi ya nahin.
Phir aise hi kaam k liye udhar se gujarna hua to Abhi ruk gaya Ruhi ke ghar k saamne main road par aut dekhne laga Ruhi ke aangan me usski kitchen aur stairs ke taraf...
Casi ji bahut hard tha ye part. Bahut dukh hua hoga Abhi ko wo sab yaad karte aur jeete hue....
Jiss tarah se usska dil dhadka, jiss tarah se Abhi ne uss aadmi se sawaal kiya Ruhi ke bare me wo mujhe bahut hi emotional laga.
Mesg diya Ruhi k liye magar kia Ruhi ko mesg milega bhi ya nahin pata nahin humko pata chalega bhi ya nahin.
Fantastic update casi ji hats off iss shaandar update ke liye. :superb:

Aap ka bahot bahot shukriya Savi ji iss appreciative review ke liye :love:
 

Casinar

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Wonderful update Casinar ji.
You have in this update shown a lapse of time in Abhi's life. His life as a couple plus business life.
The improvement in his status and richness.
He has become a successful person business wise but deep in his heart there is still room for Ruhi.
His relationship with Mahesh, little brother of Ruhi was always good in the past so when he met him it was cordial between them. They met like friends but DIDZ not talk about Ruhi.
They met several times.
And through Mahesh Abhi learnt that he is popular as a successful business man in Ruhi's house as well.
He was still not aware eithet Ruhi is in the country or not. He must surely be thinking that she is in France with that guy who was supposed to marry her.
So if Abhi believed that Ruhi is abroaf he must have thought that Ruhi is not aware about him. She must ve carelessly enjoying her life in the European country. But Abhi must hv felt happy that Ruhi's mother must be regretting having rejected him as Ruhi's husband.

But by councidence once Abhi was travelling through the main road of Ruhi and he stopped at the filling station opposite her house and started staring at her kitchen and the stairs he used to watch Ruhi and all souvenirs must have invaded his mind at that moment..... he must hv lived those days spent in that yard within the few minutes he looked there. His heartbeats increased, he became emotional and asked about her with the guy working at the pump station.
And he learnt that Ruhi IS STILL HERE....
THAT MUST HV BEEN TERRIBLE FOR ABHI.... I FELT A TUMULT OF EMOTION READING THAT PART AND could feel what Abhi must hv felt at that moment. It was a difficult moment for him I am sure.
He left a message that if Ruhi got it within a second she will know the message was from Abhi.
Wooooowww just fantastic this update casinar ji. Even I felt my heartbeat racing reading this.
You hv written this update like you WERE LIVING those moments yourself. Hats off my dear.
:applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause:


Wow, Amity dear, I feel indebted to you for this lovely, beautiful appreciative review.
thanks very very much my dear :love: :happy:
 
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