Romance Usski Gali Mein Jaana Chorr Diya (Exclusively For XForum) COMPLETED

[Suparseupar]

Update 49 The Progress​

Abhi ne garage open hone ke ek mahine baad ek car le liya tha. Imported Japanese Toyota tha. Ussi mein jaata Navina ke ghar, rehta aur donon ghar par nahin milte to baahar ussi car mein ghumne jaate, aksar seaside par paaye jaate donon weekends mein.

Ab ajeeb baat yeh thi ke Abhi ki destiny shaayad desh ke purab wale hisse se juda hua tha, Ruhi hi udhar se hi thi, Navina bhi udhar ki hi thi, magar do different ilaake se the donon. East jaate hue ek chhota sa sheher tha aur wahan se ek do raha tha, straight jao to Ruhi ke ghar ke saamne se guzarna hota, aur right mudo to Navina ke ilaake ko jaata rasta… magar apne ghar se Abhi nikalta to uss East ke chhote sheher tak jaane ke liye wohi rasta lena padta jo wo leta tha Ruhi ke ghar ke taraf jaane ke liye….

Ab ek mashoor sea side East mein tha aur wahan jaane ke liye Ruhi ke main road se jana hota tha aur ek weekend ko Abhi aur Navina ne uss seaside jaane ko decide kiya…. Navina ko pata tha ke Ruhi ke ilaake se guzarna hoga wahan jaane ke liye, magar ussne ek baat bhi nahin kiya Abhi se uss baare mein… aur jab Abhi drive karte hue wahan se guzra, to Ruhi ki aangan mein dekha tak nahin siddha apna rasta dekhta gaya…. Navina ko pata hi nahin chala ke kidhar Ruhi rehti thi….

Jab samundar kinare donon car se utre tab navina ne pucha,

“Hum Ruhi ke mohalle se guzre the nah Abhi, aap ne mujhe kyun nahin bataya wo kidhar rehti hai? Usska ghar to bata sakte the mujhe at least.”

Abhi ne samundar ke door horizon ko dekhte hue kaha,

“Mujhe khud nahin pata chala ke main kab wahan se guzar gaya!”

Abhi ne jhoot kaha tha, assal mein Abhi chahta tha ke Manoj ya Ruhi ki maa ussko dekhe drive karte hue uss main road par, magar koyi nazar nahin aya tha…. aur Abhi ne sach mein ziada dhyaan diya hi nahin wahan se guzarte waqt.

Abhi aur Navina ne ek dusre ko mangni ke baad se shaadi ke 3 din pehle tak khat likhte rahe bina kissi din miss kiye…. Aur total 3,700 khat the ek dusre ke paas. Tamaam weh khat aaj bhi teen carton ke boxes mein maujood hein.

Abhi jab bank ke loan ko repay karne jata to kabhi manager se milta, kuch baatein hote ke kaam kaise chal raha hai etc…. tab ek din abhi ne manager ke desk par ek chota sa TV set jaisa dekha aur pucha ke wo kia hai. Manager ne kaha ke wo ek computer hai. Catode ray Wale computers the unn dinon, flat screen tha hi nahi computer hi sahi tarah se commercialised nahin hua tha sirf kissi bade bade company wale istemaal karte the aur bank wale… ziada tar IBM aur apple wale commercialised the, Microsoft tab utna popular nahin hue the… 1985 mein Microsoft ne windows 1.0 commercialised kiya tha… Abhi ko tab computer ka naam bhi nahin pata tha.

Uss din bank manager ne Abhi se kaha ke usske company ke liye bhi ek computer hona chahiye jiss mein wo tamaan workers ke naam ID, address, salary, company ki budget etc sab save kar sakta tha aur istemaal kar sakta tha….

Aur kuch mahinon baad Abhi ke garage wale office mein pehla computer laya gaya…. Secretary ko part time course follow karna pada uss computer par kaam karne ke liye, aur 3 mahine baad company ke saare important files save hone laga computer par. aur 1988 se hi Abhi ne computer chalana seekh liya tha aur ek computer khud apne liye bhi kharida ghar ke liye…

Aur dhire dhire jaise jaise computer ki generation badhta aur badalta gaya weise weise Abhi bhi change karta gaya aur ziada jaanta gaya computer ke baare mein.

1990’s mein internet par sab kuch hona shuru ho gaya tha aur Abhi tabhi se internet par connected tha aur apne company ke silsile mein foreign se comunicate karta emails se. Aur laptop naya naya aya tha tab aur Abhi ne tab ek laptop bhi le liya jo hamesha usski car mein rehta tha , sirf raat ko laptop ghar jaata jab Abhi ghar mein daakhil hota tha…

1990 mein hi Abhi ne apna pehla mobile kharida… wo ek analogue mobile tha Motorola make ki, wo yeh tha issko aaj bhi Abhi ne sambhal kar rakha hai kyunke yeh usska pehla mobile tha 1990 mein aya tha naya naya desh mein….

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To inn do saalon mein Abhi aur Navina ek dusre se khub mile, ghumein, maja kiye aur last mein donon ki shaadi fix hui aur bade dhoom dhaam se shaadi hui donon ki.

Ab Abhi ki company kaafi popular ho gaya tha Abruhi. Television walon ne usska interview liya tha jiss din ussne garage ko reopen kiya tha kyunke sab se youngest entrepreneur tha jissko bank ne karib ek crore loan dekar garage ko usske hawaale kiya tha. press mein bhi usski interview aur photos aaye the….

Unn dinon Abhi soch raha tha kia Ruhi aur usskki maa ne TV par usskko dekha hoga? Paper mein usski photo aur company ka naam dekha hoga? Ruhi ko kaisa laga hoga usska naam Abhi ke naam ke saat judhkar, Abruhi bante dekh kar?? Kia Ruhi ki maa aur khud Ruhi ko pachtawa nahin hua hoga?

Abhi ko uss waqt pata bhi nahin tha ke Ruhi kidhar hai, ussko pata nahin tha ke Ruhi uss Amit ke saath France chali gayi ya kahin aur kissi se shadi kar liya or what!! Agar Abhi chahta to Sunil ko khat likh kar Ruhi ke baare mein pata laga sakta tha magar ussne weisa nahin kiya…. Abhi yeh chahta tha ke agar Ruhi ko Abhi se pyar hai to Ruhi ko Abhi ke taraf ana chahiye tha. Jitna apne taraf se karna tha wo Abhi ne kar liya tha, bahot ziada hi kiya aur jhela tha Abhi ne Ruhi ke liye, to Ruhi ki baari thi Abhi ne socha iss liye ussne kabhi jaanne ki koshish nahin kiya pehle 5 saalon mein.

Abhi aur Navina ki married life bahot mast chal raha tha, Abhi ka kaam mast se bhi mast chal raha tha. Abhi ne apne garage ki advertisement ke saath ek ek chithi type karwa kar khud drive karte hue har ek bus owner ke ghar chorrne gaya tha…. North se south tak, east se west tak har bus owner ko ek ek chithi banta Abhi ne apne garage ko advertise karte hue… sirf ek bus owner ko chithi nahin diya Abhi ne, wo tha Mehboob.

Ab bus ki coach building ke ilawa aluminium ke kaam bhi hote the, usska ek alag team tha garage mein, weh log ziada tar outdoor kaam karte the, bade bade buildings mein aluminium frames laga kar window panes lagana etc… bade oonche 20 se 50 maale ke buildings mein weh kaam kiya jaata tha cranes se…. usske liye tender bhade jaate the agar governments ke buildings hote the… aur aksar daam kum hote the iss liye Abhi ko tender milta rehta tha… Abhi small profit mein kaam karta tha iss liye ussko bahot ziada kaam milta rehta tha garage mein.

Aur wohi kaam chote gharon mein bhi kiya jaata aur koyi gharib ke liye cost ziada hota to Abhi free mein weise logon ke ghar mein aluminium works kar diya karta tha, free of cost!

1994. Shaadi ke 5 saal baad Abhi ko ek din ek police station mein alluminiun ke khidki change karke naye lagwane the. Usske aadmi wahan kaam kar rahe the to Abhi check karne ko gaya tha ke kaam kahan tak hua hai wahan…. Aur Abhi ko kaun mila wahan? Mahesh, Ruhi ka chota bhai, ab wo police officer tha….. Abhi ne ussko dekha, muskuraya aur Mahesh khud aya Abhi se milne….

Mahesh ne Abhi se shake hand kiya, aur kaha,

“Hi, Abhi aap to bahot bade aadmi ban gaye ho ab, hmmm ABRUHI hehehehe aap ko TV par kayi baar dekha hoon, kaafi aage badh gaye ho ab life mein, very good very good mujhe Khushi hui Abhi.”

Abhi ne Mahesh ka haath apne haath mein pakre rakha Mahesh se baat karte hue, aur pucha ke wo kab police mein bharti hua yeh sab…. Abhi ko uss se Ruhi ke baare mein puchne ka mann kiya magar nahin pucha kyunke Mahesh ne Ruhi ki baat nahin kiya, bus ek dost ki tarah mila uss se aur casual baat kiya to Abhi ne bhi normal baat kiya Mahesh se…. Ruhi ki baat hi nahin hui…. Uss din ke baad Abhi Mahesh se kayi baar mila wahan aur kabhi uss sheher mein jahan usski chachi ki supermarket tha…. har baar donon doston ki tarah milte aur kuch der baat karte aur alag ho jaate….

Abhi ko ab pata chal gaya tha ke Ruhi ne bhi ussko TV par dekha hoga, usske ghar mein agar Mahesh ne Abhi ko dekha to matlab sab ne ussko dekha hoga aur ABRUHI company se sab wakif honge, Ruhi ki maa ko bhi sab pata chala hoga ke Abhi ek crorepati ban gaya hai aur usski Ruhi ke liye Abhi sahi ladka tha, aur pachta rahi hogi…. Iss se Abhi ko bahot Khushi milta tha jab sochta tha ke Ruhi ki maa par kia beet rahi hogi jab jab Abhi ko aur usski company ko TV par dikhaya gaya hoga….

Aur ek din Abhi ko East mein jana tha ek building ke liye quotation banaane. Abhi jab Ruhi ki main road se guzra to jaan bujh kar uss filling station par ruka fuel lene ke bahane. Filling station se Ruhi ki kitchen ki stairs saaf dikhaayi deta tha…. Abhi car se nikla aur Ruhi ke kitchen ke taraf dekhne laga…

Ye Abhi wo wala Abhi nahin tha jo unn dinon uss aangan mein gande kapdon mein kaam karta tha aur Ruhi se pyar ki bheek manga karta tha…. pichle 5 saalon mein Abhi ne itna tarraki kar liya tha ke ab usske paas ek BMW, Ek Mercrdes bentz, aur ek Audi tha, cars ka shauk tha abhi ko, rodeo jaisa drivings karta tha…. usska ghar pata nahin kitne crore ka tha; usske pehnaav se dikhta tha ek raiz aadmi hai…. Aur jab Abhi ko koyi nahin dikha stair par to pump par kaam karne wale aadmi ne Abhi se pucha,

“kuch chahiye kia Sir, fuel to full hai aap ki BMW mein to aap kyun ruke yahan Sir?

Abhi khayaalon mein khoya hua uss pump wale se pucha,

“uss ghar mein wahan last wala jo hai, Manoj, Mahesh, weh donon yahin rehte hein nah?”

Aadmi ne kaha,

“haan sir ji, donon bhai wahin rehte hein, aap jaante ho unhe Sir?”

Abhi ne weise hi khayaalon mein khoya hua udhar hi dekhte hue kaha,

“Ruhi?! Ruhi ko jaante ho tum?! Wo yahin hai kia?!”

Aadmi ne pucha,

“magar Sir aap kyun sawaal kar rahe ho? agar unnko jaante ho to wahan chale kyun nahin jaate aap?”

Abhi ne jaise ek sapna dekhte hue kaha,

“Ruhi France jaane wali thi gayi ke nahin bata mujhe, tab se abhi 8 saal ho gaye; gayi ke nahin bata mujhe!!”

Abhi ka dil zoron se dhadakne laga tha, wohi pehle ki tarah jab Ruhi ka naam leta tha, tab yehi haal hota tha, usske jaise saans fullne lage the uss aadmi se sawaal karte hue… Abhi ke nazar usski kitchen se hatt nahin raha tha aur uss aadmi se jawaab ka wait kar raha tha to aadmi ne kaha,

“Suna tha jaane wali thi Sir, magar gayi nahin hai abhi tak yahin hai!!”

Abhi tab tak aise hanffne laga tha jaise 100 metres bhaag kar aya tha, uss aadmi ka jawaab sun kar Abhi ne usske chehhre mein dekhte hue ek ajeeb si muskurahat mein kaha,

“Aath saal, 8 saal hahahaha dekhta hoon kab jaati hai!”

Aur Abhi car ke driving wale seat par baitha, to aadmi ne jhuk kar kaha,

“Sir koyi message ho to batadun Ruhi ji ko?!”

Abhi ne ussko ek 100 ka note dete hue kaha,

Bus itna kehna ke Amitabh Bachchan jitna lamba aadmi puch raha tha usske baare mein wo samajh jaegi.

To be continued….

Wooow bahut badhya update casi bhai. Iss update mein aap ne kayi saal dikha diye. Abhi bahut aage badh chuka hai. Karodpati ban gaya.
Mahesh se bhi kayi baar mil chuka. Celebrity bhi ban gaya youngest business man ban kar. Tv media ne ussko dikhaya. Haan ek band company ko ek jawan ladke ne dobara chalaya aur khub kaamyaab hua to charcha hoga hi business world mein wohi hua Abhi ke saath. Navina ka saatu bhi majbut raha.
Aur 8 saal baad bhi Abhi ke dil mein Ruhi ubhar kar aayi achanak.
Amitabh ke naam se dost bulaate the aur usske kad k kaaran Ruhi se bhi iss bare mein baat hui thi to itna keh diya message dene k liye to wo kaafi hoga Ruhi k liye pehchaane k liye ke mesg Abhi k taraf se tha.
Update bahut strong hai bhai aur mod jabardast hai..... utsukta badhne laga hai k kia hoga ab
Agle update ka besabri se intejar rahega bhai

 

[Jaggu]

Update 10 The Saturday​

Kal Ruhi uss se puchegi ke usske payr mein kia hua, kal Ruhi usska ziada khayal karegi, kal Ruhi ko bahut afsos hoga yeh jaan kar ke Abhi ko choat lagi hai kaam mein, kal jab injection karwane jaega to Ruhi shayad usske sath jaegi ya ussko jaate waqt dekhegi, aur Abhi khud Ruhi ko apne saath chalne ko kahega…. Yeh sab sochte, Ruhi ko dil mein bassa kar Abhi ko neendh agayi, ussko apne payr ka dard bhi mehsoos nahin hua itna khoya hua tha Ruhi ki yaad mein.


Ab aaguey….

Ek hafta guzra. Saturday ka din aya aur uss din ko Abhi team 2 baje kaam end karte the.

Subha ko Ruhi nahin dikha uss roz kyunke Abhi late aya tha, 7.15 ko reach hua, to jaldi se dress change karke kaam par lag gaya.

Har subha ab Abhi ko pata chal gaya tha ke Ruhi kitne baje kahan dikhegi aur kia kia kaam kiss samaye ko Ruhi karti hai.

Har subha kareeb 8 baje ghar ke saamne wale hisse ko saaf karti hai, jhadu lagaati hai, aur wo bus ke bilkool kareeb hai, jahan se Ruhi Abhi ko dekha karti hai, muskuraati hai uss se, parde ko khinchti hai taake Abhi bhi ussko dekh sake. Phir Ruhi terrace saaf karti hai, jhadu lagaati hai aur pocha karti hai, wo ghar ke baahar hoti hai aur bilkool Abhi ke nazdik rehti hai uss waqt. Phir karib 10 baje har roz Ruhi kapde dhone wale pathar ke paas dikhti hai kuch kapde dhote hue.

Kapde dhone ke baad Ruhi har roz ussi pathar par apne peyr uthakar pathar par ragadhti hai uss par paani daalte hue. Har baar jab wo weisa karti hai to Abhi kaam dhaam rok kar Ruhi ko bade pyar de dekhta hai, ussko admire karta hai. Yeh sab ek routine ke jaisa ho gaya tha Abhi ke liye aur Ruhi ke liye bhi. Sab kuch jo Ruhi karti thi, har baar mudhkar dekhti thi ke Abhi ussko dekh raha hai ya nahin. Aur kabhi Abhi ussko nahin dekh raha hota to Ruhi wait karti thi ke Abhi ussko dekhe.

To Saturday ko kyunke 2 baje kaam end karna tha to Saeed team rush mein rehte the aur sab kuch jaldi karte the time par end karne ke liye. Ab baaki ke do workers ko payment karna tha unnko weekly basis par tankhwa dena tha, iss liye Saeed ne Abhi se pucha ke kaise unnka payment karenge. Unnko travelling ke paise alag se dene the plus salary. To decide hua ke jo ek lakh advance mila hai uss mein se hi payment karenge aur agar Saeed aur Abhi ko bhi zaroorat pade to ussi paise se lene honge, magar Abhi ne kaha ke saath saath account matlab hisaab rakhna hoga ke agle 5 ya 6 mahinon mein kitna expense hue uss ek laakh mein se.

Saeed ne kaha kyunke sab jaante hai ke deal usski hai uss bus ko banaane mein to ussko payment karna chahiye workers ko. Matlab Saeed apna haq chahta tha ke wo boss hai wo payment karega workers ko, Saeed chahta tha ke uss aangan mein sabko pata chale ke wo tankhwa deta hai kaam karne walon ko. To Saeed ne Abhi se kaha ke uss ek laakh mein se 50,000 nikaal kar ussko dein aur Saeed uss mein se har hafte ko payment karega unn do workers ko. Abhi maan gaya aur bank jaakar 50 k nikaal kar Saeed bhai ko de diya. Abhi samajh gaya ke Saeed apna rob jamana chahta tha, wahan par sabke saamne Tony ko aur dusre worker ko payment karega aur khudko boss dikhayega. Abhi ko uss se koyi problem nahin tha ussne paisa de diya Saeed ko. Baad mein Saeed ne Abhi se kaha,

“Tumko bhi paisa chahiye to bolo Abhi main tumko bhi payment karta hoon baaki workers ki tarah!”

Abhi ne yeh socha tha ke baaki ke kaam jaise kiye the donon ne weise hi kaam khatam karne par ek percentage Abhi ko milega aur baaki Saeed lega, iss liye ussne Saeed se kaha ke nahin kaam khatam hone ke baad last day ko adjustment karenge.

Abhi ne socha tha 3 lakh ka deal karwaya ussne to 1 lakh usska hoga aur 2 lakh Saeed ko lene dega aur unn do lakh mein se hi Saeed workers ke payment karenge magar yahan Saeed ne unn paison mein se 50k le liya tha, magar phir bhi Abhi ne kuch nahin kaha.

Subha 9 baj chuke the aur Ruhi nahin dikha tha Abhi ko ke achanak kapde dhone wale pathar par Ruhi dikhi payr dhote hue. Abhi ne socha aaj kapde to nahin dho rahi hai to payr kyun dho rahi hai iss waqt. Ruhi Abhi ko mudhkar dekh rahi thi aur muskura rahi thi. Abhi ne puchna chaha ke kapde nahin hai dhone ko magar door se oonchi awaaz mein to nahin puch sakta tha aur Saturday tha kaam ko jaldi pura karna tha to jaakar baat karna munasib nahin samjha Abhi ne. Abhi ne yeh bhi ghaur kiya ke aaj ghar ke saamne wale hisse ke parde bhi nahin hattaya tha Ruhi ne aur nah hi terrace par jhadu lagaya tha aur nah poncha kiya tha Ruhi ne…..

Abhi ko dispensary injection ke liye jana tha to chala gaya kuch der baad. Jab wapas aya to bus ke uss taraf kaam karna tha jiss taraf ek bada darkhat tha, to wahan lag gaya kaam mein Abhi phir bhi baar baar Ruhi ke ghar ke taraf dekhe jaa raha tha ke kahin Ruhi nah dikh jaaye.

Aur karib 10 baje Abhi ne Ruhi ko ek khubsurat suit mein apne kitchen se nikalte dekha, kaandhe par ek khubsurat handbag thi aur haath mein ek chota sa bag, sajh dhaj ke kahin jaa rahi thi. Kyun ke Abhi bus ke uss taraaf tha, wahan nahin jahan se Ruhi guzri, to Abhi ko saahas nahin hua ke uss taraf se iss taraf aaye Ruhi se baat karne ke liye, wo chahunk gaya kyunke ussne bilkool bhi expect nahin kiya tha ke Ruhi kahin baahar jaegi, kyunke iss baare mein Ruhi ne ussko bola bhi to nahin tha. To Abhi wahin uss darkhat ke paas khada raha Ruhi ko dekhte hue, ussko appreciate karte hue, usski khubsurti jo bahut ziada nikar gayi thi uss suit mein aur usski halki make up mein ziada hi khubsurat dikh rahi thi… yahan tak ke Saeed aur Tony bhi Ruhi ko dekhne lage. Behad khubsurat dikh rahi thi. Ek beauty queen lag rahi thi……. Hua yeh tha nah ke har roz sab ussko gharelu kapdon mein dekhte the aur aaj kahin jaa rahi thi saj dhaj kar to saw gunah ziada khubsurat dikh rahi thi to sabke nazrein uss par pade.

Tony ne apni kehuni ko Abhi se takraate hue dhire se “pheewwww” kiya. Abhi muskuraya Ruhi ke chehre mein dekhte hue. Kaam ruk gaya tha Ruhi ko admire karne ke liye…. Abhi dekhna chahta tha ke Ruhi usske taraf dekhegi ya nahin. Abhi kadha raha usske chehre mein dekhte hue, magar Ruhi ne sar niche jhuka liya tha shayad iss liye ke ussko pata tha ke saare mard ussi ko dekh rahe the….. Ruhi araam se chal rahi thi sar jhukaaye aur jab wo bus ke karib aayi to sar jhuke hue hi the magar uss ne halke se nazron ko teerchi karke bus ke uss hisse par kiya jahan Abhi tha, matlab Ruhi ko weisa karne se sirf Abhi ka haath aur pair dikhe honge. Phir ussne apne honton ko daanton mein dabaya ek halki si Muskaan ke saath aur aage badh gayi.

Jab ruhi ne bus ko paar kar diya, chalte hue aage chali gayi tab Abhi bus ke saamne gaya, aur Ruhi ko piche se dekhne laga, wo kahin jaa rahi thi, uss aangan mein chalte hue jaa rahi thi main road ke taraf… Abhi pray karne laga ke wo mudh kar ek baar to piche dekhe…. Aur main road par nikalne se pehle Ruhi mudi, Abhi ko dekha ussko ddekhte hue, muskuraayi aur chali gayi… Abhi bahot khush hua jiss tarah se Ruhi ne ussko dekha aur muskuraya.

Abhi wapas darkhat ke paas gaya to Tony ne uss se kaha,

“Tum usske piche kyun nahin gaye? Jitna time ussne ne liya yahan se main road tak pahunchne ko tum uss se kitne saare baatein kar lete, puch to lete ke kahan jaa rahi hai kab wapas aegi… dekha nahin wo kitni dhire dhire araam se chal rahi thi? Shayad tumko mauka de rahi thi ke tum uss se baat karne aao! Budhoo ho tum bhi re Abhi!”

Abhi ne socha ke Tony sahi keh raha tha aur kaha,

“Ab bhi to jaa sakta hoon nah? wo bus top tak reach hui hogi nah? to wahin uss se puch sakta hoon nah ke kahan jaa rahi hai!”

Tony ne kaha,

“To jaldi jaa buss agayi to ussko bus ke andar ghuss ke baat karega kia tu?!”

To abhi daudna chaha magar nahin daud paaya kyunke usske payr mein zakham jo tha… phir bhi tez chala aur main road reach hua to dekha ek bus bus stop se ab jaa raha hai aur Ruhi uss mein chadh gayi thi, Ruhi ki ek jhalak dikhi buss!!!

Abhi niraash wapas aya aur Tony ne pucha kia hua to bataya Abhi ne ke wo bus mein baith chuki thi aur bus jaane laga tha!

Saeed ne bhi Abhi jo jaate aur wapas aate dekha to hansste hue kaha,

“kia hua Abhi? Chali gayi wo tujhe akela chorr kar aaj hahahaha!”

Abhi ne munh banaate hue apna kaam jaari rakha. Phir Abhi ne Tony se kaha,

“sala agar mujhe pata hota ke ussko kahin jana hai to injection karwane nahin jata pehle … usske saath chal kar jata dispensary, issi bahane ussko pata chal jata ke mujhe ghav laga hai dhat!”

Tony ne kaha,

“don’t worry yaar, behtar mauke ayenge!”

Aur kaam jaari raha sham 2 baje tak. Abhi ki nazar raaste par tha, uss aangan mein tha har baar dekhte hue ke Ruhi wapas aaye…. Yahan tak ke Abhi ne tony se bhi keh diya ke nazar chawkanna rakhe aur jaise Ruhi wapas aati dikhe to ussko agaah kare. Matlab Tony aur Abhi donon ne nazron ko bithaaye rakhe the…..

Magar Ruhi nahin aayi aur kaam end hua, sab washroom gaye tab bhi Abhi ne Tony se kaha ke baari baari jayenge wash karne, ussko watch karne ko kaha ke Ruhi wapas aaye to ussko bataaye, phir Tony wash karne gaya aur Abhi ne watch kiya magar Ruhi nahin dikhi aur 2.30 ho gaye…. Saeed ne Tony aur dusre aadmi ko salary diye aur sab aangan mein chalte hue jaa rahe the wapas…..

Abhi ka dil ro raha tha kyunke ussko Ruhi ki kami khal rahi thi… kal Sunday hai kaam par nahin ana hai aur ab Monday ko Ruhi dikhegi iss liye Abhi ko ghutan sa feel ho raha tha bina Ruhi se mile wapas ghar jaana. Ussko jaise saans lene mein takliff ho raha tha Ruhi ko sochte hue.

Koyi 3 metres the main road par pahunchne ke liye ke Abhi ke saamne Ruhi nazar aayi wapas aate hue! Tony sab se aaguey tha wo main road reach ho raha tha, aur Ruhi ne jaise ussko paar kiya Tony ne mudhkar Abhi ko haath se Ruhi ko dikhaya hansste hue.

Abhi ka dil machal gaya, chehra laal ho gaya Khushi to hui magar usske samajh mein nahin aya ke ab kia karen, kia kahe! Wahin ruk gaya jahan pahuncha tha aur Ruhi ke chehre mein dekhne laga. Ufff kitni khubsurat dikh rahi thi, had se ziada khubsurat thi yeh ladki Abhi ne mann mein socha. Aur Ruhi ne Abhi ko dekhte hi pehle hanssi, phir sar jhukaate hue honton ko dant mein dabaya aur dhire dhire chalte hue Abhi ke laevel tak pahunchi tab nazron ko uthakar Abhi ko dekha aur aage muskuraate hue badhne lagi. Abhi ne ek lavz bhi nahin kaha buss dekhta raha. Piche se ruhi ke khubsurat baalon ko dekha Abhi ne, kitne lambe baal the usske butt tak reach ho rahe the Ruhi ke baal, aur thickness zabardast the, Abhi ko weise hi baal bahot passand the, usski bachpan wali Ruhi kE baal bilkool weise hi the; baalon ke end bit mein thode ghungraale the…. Ruhi buss muskuraati gayi aur jab Abhi ko pass kar diya to hanss padi. Abhi ne dekha aur sochne laga ke kyun hanss rahi hai, ussko Khushi ho rahi hai mujhko tadpaane mein shaayad. Magar Abhi ka dil ab bahot khush tha. Ruhi koyi 4/5 kadam aage jaa chuki thi tab abhi ne kaha,

“bye, do have a nice weekend my dear!”

Ruhi ne koyi jawaab nahin diya magar mudhkar Abhi ko hansste hue dekha aur aage badhne lagi tab Abhi ne awaaz ko toda ooncha karte hue kaha,

“bad manners again a wish should be replied nah!”

Ruhi palti, hanssi aur apne honton par ungli ko rakh ke ‘sshhh’ kiya aur aage chali gayi…… jiss waqt Ruhi ne weisa kiya to Abhi ne ussko goodbye wave kiya.

Ab abhi ko sukoon mila. Bus stop par Tony ko join kiya aur Tony ne kaha,

“chal ek beer offer karta hoon tujhe aur tumhare Ruhi ke baare mein baat karte hein.

Abhi ne kaha,

“are nahin usske ilaake mein beer nahin pina mujhe sala kissi ne wahan bata diya ke main yahan beer pee raha hoon to baat bigar jaegi!”

Tony ne kaha ke phir apne sheher pahunch kar beer piyenge. Abhi maan gaya aur donon apne sheher jaakar ek bar mein baithe beer pite hue paaye gaye! Abhi khush tha aur Ruhi ke baare mein ghanton bhar baat karta gaya Tony ke saath.

To be continued…… (2305 words)

Kia likhte ho bhai.
Ruhi ki yawan ko jiss tarah se aap ne darshaya hai wo lajawaab hai bhai.
Bahut passand aya ye update

 

[shambhu]

 

[shambhu]

Update 49 The Progress​

Abhi ne garage open hone ke ek mahine baad ek car le liya tha. Imported Japanese Toyota tha. Ussi mein jaata Navina ke ghar, rehta aur donon ghar par nahin milte to baahar ussi car mein ghumne jaate, aksar seaside par paaye jaate donon weekends mein.

Ab ajeeb baat yeh thi ke Abhi ki destiny shaayad desh ke purab wale hisse se juda hua tha, Ruhi hi udhar se hi thi, Navina bhi udhar ki hi thi, magar do different ilaake se the donon. East jaate hue ek chhota sa sheher tha aur wahan se ek do raha tha, straight jao to Ruhi ke ghar ke saamne se guzarna hota, aur right mudo to Navina ke ilaake ko jaata rasta… magar apne ghar se Abhi nikalta to uss East ke chhote sheher tak jaane ke liye wohi rasta lena padta jo wo leta tha Ruhi ke ghar ke taraf jaane ke liye….

Ab ek mashoor sea side East mein tha aur wahan jaane ke liye Ruhi ke main road se jana hota tha aur ek weekend ko Abhi aur Navina ne uss seaside jaane ko decide kiya…. Navina ko pata tha ke Ruhi ke ilaake se guzarna hoga wahan jaane ke liye, magar ussne ek baat bhi nahin kiya Abhi se uss baare mein… aur jab Abhi drive karte hue wahan se guzra, to Ruhi ki aangan mein dekha tak nahin siddha apna rasta dekhta gaya…. Navina ko pata hi nahin chala ke kidhar Ruhi rehti thi….

Jab samundar kinare donon car se utre tab navina ne pucha,

“Hum Ruhi ke mohalle se guzre the nah Abhi, aap ne mujhe kyun nahin bataya wo kidhar rehti hai? Usska ghar to bata sakte the mujhe at least.”

Abhi ne samundar ke door horizon ko dekhte hue kaha,

“Mujhe khud nahin pata chala ke main kab wahan se guzar gaya!”

Abhi ne jhoot kaha tha, assal mein Abhi chahta tha ke Manoj ya Ruhi ki maa ussko dekhe drive karte hue uss main road par, magar koyi nazar nahin aya tha…. aur Abhi ne sach mein ziada dhyaan diya hi nahin wahan se guzarte waqt.

Abhi aur Navina ne ek dusre ko mangni ke baad se shaadi ke 3 din pehle tak khat likhte rahe bina kissi din miss kiye…. Aur total 3,700 khat the ek dusre ke paas. Tamaam weh khat aaj bhi teen carton ke boxes mein maujood hein.

Abhi jab bank ke loan ko repay karne jata to kabhi manager se milta, kuch baatein hote ke kaam kaise chal raha hai etc…. tab ek din abhi ne manager ke desk par ek chota sa TV set jaisa dekha aur pucha ke wo kia hai. Manager ne kaha ke wo ek computer hai. Catode ray Wale computers the unn dinon, flat screen tha hi nahi computer hi sahi tarah se commercialised nahin hua tha sirf kissi bade bade company wale istemaal karte the aur bank wale… ziada tar IBM aur apple wale commercialised the, Microsoft tab utna popular nahin hue the… 1985 mein Microsoft ne windows 1.0 commercialised kiya tha… Abhi ko tab computer ka naam bhi nahin pata tha.

Uss din bank manager ne Abhi se kaha ke usske company ke liye bhi ek computer hona chahiye jiss mein wo tamaan workers ke naam ID, address, salary, company ki budget etc sab save kar sakta tha aur istemaal kar sakta tha….

Aur kuch mahinon baad Abhi ke garage wale office mein pehla computer laya gaya…. Secretary ko part time course follow karna pada uss computer par kaam karne ke liye, aur 3 mahine baad company ke saare important files save hone laga computer par. aur 1988 se hi Abhi ne computer chalana seekh liya tha aur ek computer khud apne liye bhi kharida ghar ke liye…

Aur dhire dhire jaise jaise computer ki generation badhta aur badalta gaya weise weise Abhi bhi change karta gaya aur ziada jaanta gaya computer ke baare mein.

1990’s mein internet par sab kuch hona shuru ho gaya tha aur Abhi tabhi se internet par connected tha aur apne company ke silsile mein foreign se comunicate karta emails se. Aur laptop naya naya aya tha tab aur Abhi ne tab ek laptop bhi le liya jo hamesha usski car mein rehta tha , sirf raat ko laptop ghar jaata jab Abhi ghar mein daakhil hota tha…

1990 mein hi Abhi ne apna pehla mobile kharida… wo ek analogue mobile tha Motorola make ki, wo yeh tha issko aaj bhi Abhi ne sambhal kar rakha hai kyunke yeh usska pehla mobile tha 1990 mein aya tha naya naya desh mein….

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To inn do saalon mein Abhi aur Navina ek dusre se khub mile, ghumein, maja kiye aur last mein donon ki shaadi fix hui aur bade dhoom dhaam se shaadi hui donon ki.

Ab Abhi ki company kaafi popular ho gaya tha Abruhi. Television walon ne usska interview liya tha jiss din ussne garage ko reopen kiya tha kyunke sab se youngest entrepreneur tha jissko bank ne karib ek crore loan dekar garage ko usske hawaale kiya tha. press mein bhi usski interview aur photos aaye the….

Unn dinon Abhi soch raha tha kia Ruhi aur usskki maa ne TV par usskko dekha hoga? Paper mein usski photo aur company ka naam dekha hoga? Ruhi ko kaisa laga hoga usska naam Abhi ke naam ke saat judhkar, Abruhi bante dekh kar?? Kia Ruhi ki maa aur khud Ruhi ko pachtawa nahin hua hoga?

Abhi ko uss waqt pata bhi nahin tha ke Ruhi kidhar hai, ussko pata nahin tha ke Ruhi uss Amit ke saath France chali gayi ya kahin aur kissi se shadi kar liya or what!! Agar Abhi chahta to Sunil ko khat likh kar Ruhi ke baare mein pata laga sakta tha magar ussne weisa nahin kiya…. Abhi yeh chahta tha ke agar Ruhi ko Abhi se pyar hai to Ruhi ko Abhi ke taraf ana chahiye tha. Jitna apne taraf se karna tha wo Abhi ne kar liya tha, bahot ziada hi kiya aur jhela tha Abhi ne Ruhi ke liye, to Ruhi ki baari thi Abhi ne socha iss liye ussne kabhi jaanne ki koshish nahin kiya pehle 5 saalon mein.

Abhi aur Navina ki married life bahot mast chal raha tha, Abhi ka kaam mast se bhi mast chal raha tha. Abhi ne apne garage ki advertisement ke saath ek ek chithi type karwa kar khud drive karte hue har ek bus owner ke ghar chorrne gaya tha…. North se south tak, east se west tak har bus owner ko ek ek chithi banta Abhi ne apne garage ko advertise karte hue… sirf ek bus owner ko chithi nahin diya Abhi ne, wo tha Mehboob.

Ab bus ki coach building ke ilawa aluminium ke kaam bhi hote the, usska ek alag team tha garage mein, weh log ziada tar outdoor kaam karte the, bade bade buildings mein aluminium frames laga kar window panes lagana etc… bade oonche 20 se 50 maale ke buildings mein weh kaam kiya jaata tha cranes se…. usske liye tender bhade jaate the agar governments ke buildings hote the… aur aksar daam kum hote the iss liye Abhi ko tender milta rehta tha… Abhi small profit mein kaam karta tha iss liye ussko bahot ziada kaam milta rehta tha garage mein.

Aur wohi kaam chote gharon mein bhi kiya jaata aur koyi gharib ke liye cost ziada hota to Abhi free mein weise logon ke ghar mein aluminium works kar diya karta tha, free of cost!

1994. Shaadi ke 5 saal baad Abhi ko ek din ek police station mein alluminiun ke khidki change karke naye lagwane the. Usske aadmi wahan kaam kar rahe the to Abhi check karne ko gaya tha ke kaam kahan tak hua hai wahan…. Aur Abhi ko kaun mila wahan? Mahesh, Ruhi ka chota bhai, ab wo police officer tha….. Abhi ne ussko dekha, muskuraya aur Mahesh khud aya Abhi se milne….

Mahesh ne Abhi se shake hand kiya, aur kaha,

“Hi, Abhi aap to bahot bade aadmi ban gaye ho ab, hmmm ABRUHI hehehehe aap ko TV par kayi baar dekha hoon, kaafi aage badh gaye ho ab life mein, very good very good mujhe Khushi hui Abhi.”

Abhi ne Mahesh ka haath apne haath mein pakre rakha Mahesh se baat karte hue, aur pucha ke wo kab police mein bharti hua yeh sab…. Abhi ko uss se Ruhi ke baare mein puchne ka mann kiya magar nahin pucha kyunke Mahesh ne Ruhi ki baat nahin kiya, bus ek dost ki tarah mila uss se aur casual baat kiya to Abhi ne bhi normal baat kiya Mahesh se…. Ruhi ki baat hi nahin hui…. Uss din ke baad Abhi Mahesh se kayi baar mila wahan aur kabhi uss sheher mein jahan usski chachi ki supermarket tha…. har baar donon doston ki tarah milte aur kuch der baat karte aur alag ho jaate….

Abhi ko ab pata chal gaya tha ke Ruhi ne bhi ussko TV par dekha hoga, usske ghar mein agar Mahesh ne Abhi ko dekha to matlab sab ne ussko dekha hoga aur ABRUHI company se sab wakif honge, Ruhi ki maa ko bhi sab pata chala hoga ke Abhi ek crorepati ban gaya hai aur usski Ruhi ke liye Abhi sahi ladka tha, aur pachta rahi hogi…. Iss se Abhi ko bahot Khushi milta tha jab sochta tha ke Ruhi ki maa par kia beet rahi hogi jab jab Abhi ko aur usski company ko TV par dikhaya gaya hoga….

Aur ek din Abhi ko East mein jana tha ek building ke liye quotation banaane. Abhi jab Ruhi ki main road se guzra to jaan bujh kar uss filling station par ruka fuel lene ke bahane. Filling station se Ruhi ki kitchen ki stairs saaf dikhaayi deta tha…. Abhi car se nikla aur Ruhi ke kitchen ke taraf dekhne laga…

Ye Abhi wo wala Abhi nahin tha jo unn dinon uss aangan mein gande kapdon mein kaam karta tha aur Ruhi se pyar ki bheek manga karta tha…. pichle 5 saalon mein Abhi ne itna tarraki kar liya tha ke ab usske paas ek BMW, Ek Mercrdes bentz, aur ek Audi tha, cars ka shauk tha abhi ko, rodeo jaisa drivings karta tha…. usska ghar pata nahin kitne crore ka tha; usske pehnaav se dikhta tha ek raiz aadmi hai…. Aur jab Abhi ko koyi nahin dikha stair par to pump par kaam karne wale aadmi ne Abhi se pucha,

“kuch chahiye kia Sir, fuel to full hai aap ki BMW mein to aap kyun ruke yahan Sir?

Abhi khayaalon mein khoya hua uss pump wale se pucha,

“uss ghar mein wahan last wala jo hai, Manoj, Mahesh, weh donon yahin rehte hein nah?”

Aadmi ne kaha,

“haan sir ji, donon bhai wahin rehte hein, aap jaante ho unhe Sir?”

Abhi ne weise hi khayaalon mein khoya hua udhar hi dekhte hue kaha,

“Ruhi?! Ruhi ko jaante ho tum?! Wo yahin hai kia?!”

Aadmi ne pucha,

“magar Sir aap kyun sawaal kar rahe ho? agar unnko jaante ho to wahan chale kyun nahin jaate aap?”

Abhi ne jaise ek sapna dekhte hue kaha,

“Ruhi France jaane wali thi gayi ke nahin bata mujhe, tab se abhi 8 saal ho gaye; gayi ke nahin bata mujhe!!”

Abhi ka dil zoron se dhadakne laga tha, wohi pehle ki tarah jab Ruhi ka naam leta tha, tab yehi haal hota tha, usske jaise saans fullne lage the uss aadmi se sawaal karte hue… Abhi ke nazar usski kitchen se hatt nahin raha tha aur uss aadmi se jawaab ka wait kar raha tha to aadmi ne kaha,

“Suna tha jaane wali thi Sir, magar gayi nahin hai abhi tak yahin hai!!”

Abhi tab tak aise hanffne laga tha jaise 100 metres bhaag kar aya tha, uss aadmi ka jawaab sun kar Abhi ne usske chehhre mein dekhte hue ek ajeeb si muskurahat mein kaha,

“Aath saal, 8 saal hahahaha dekhta hoon kab jaati hai!”

Aur Abhi car ke driving wale seat par baitha, to aadmi ne jhuk kar kaha,

“Sir koyi message ho to batadun Ruhi ji ko?!”

Abhi ne ussko ek 100 ka note dete hue kaha,

Bus itna kehna ke Amitabh Bachchan jitna lamba aadmi puch raha tha usske baare mein wo samajh jaegi.

To be continued….

Amitabh Bachchan jitna lamba aadmi puch raha tha usske baare mein kehna wo samajh jaegi....
Are beshak samaj jaegi itni saare batein kiye the donon ne Amitabh ko lekar. Abhi ko lambu bulaate the usske dost. Ruhi ne pucha tha kia Amitabh ji ke sath foto hai to Abhi ne kaha tha haan usska kad bhi utna hi hai jitna Amitabh ki to Ruhi ko itna khabar milegi to pehchaan legi k Abhi aya tha usse dhundne.... kia update hai casi bhai ...

Jabardast update..... kayi saal beet gaye aur Abhi Mahesh se bhi mila, uss se pata chala ke Ruhi k ghar mein sabko pata hai usske baare mein.... wow matlab Ruhi ko bhi pata hoga... aur ab to pata chal gaya ke 8 saal hi gaye aur abhi tak Ruhi yahin hai na shadi hui na kahin foreign gayi...
Mast situation hai bhai....
Ab kia hoga? Kia abhi fir jaega uss pump wale se puchne? Kia Ruhi ko message milegi?
Jaldi batana bhai
Shaandaar, lajawaab update hai bhai

 

[aman rathore]

amazing update casi bhai,
Behad hi shandaar aur lajawab update hai bhai,
abhi ki bhent ek baar phir mahesh se ho gayi hai,
Aur wo usase dosto ki tarah hi mila hai,
aur ruhi 8 saalon ke baad bhi yahin hai,
vahi abhi ne filling station waale ko massage de diya hai ki vo ruhi ko bata de ki abhi uske baare mein puchh raha tha,
ab dekhte hain ki inn 8 saalon mein ruhi ke saath kya hua,
Waiting for next update

 

[Indian001]

 

[Indian001]

Update 49 The Progress​

Abhi ne garage open hone ke ek mahine baad ek car le liya tha. Imported Japanese Toyota tha. Ussi mein jaata Navina ke ghar, rehta aur donon ghar par nahin milte to baahar ussi car mein ghumne jaate, aksar seaside par paaye jaate donon weekends mein.

Ab ajeeb baat yeh thi ke Abhi ki destiny shaayad desh ke purab wale hisse se juda hua tha, Ruhi hi udhar se hi thi, Navina bhi udhar ki hi thi, magar do different ilaake se the donon. East jaate hue ek chhota sa sheher tha aur wahan se ek do raha tha, straight jao to Ruhi ke ghar ke saamne se guzarna hota, aur right mudo to Navina ke ilaake ko jaata rasta… magar apne ghar se Abhi nikalta to uss East ke chhote sheher tak jaane ke liye wohi rasta lena padta jo wo leta tha Ruhi ke ghar ke taraf jaane ke liye….

Ab ek mashoor sea side East mein tha aur wahan jaane ke liye Ruhi ke main road se jana hota tha aur ek weekend ko Abhi aur Navina ne uss seaside jaane ko decide kiya…. Navina ko pata tha ke Ruhi ke ilaake se guzarna hoga wahan jaane ke liye, magar ussne ek baat bhi nahin kiya Abhi se uss baare mein… aur jab Abhi drive karte hue wahan se guzra, to Ruhi ki aangan mein dekha tak nahin siddha apna rasta dekhta gaya…. Navina ko pata hi nahin chala ke kidhar Ruhi rehti thi….

Jab samundar kinare donon car se utre tab navina ne pucha,

“Hum Ruhi ke mohalle se guzre the nah Abhi, aap ne mujhe kyun nahin bataya wo kidhar rehti hai? Usska ghar to bata sakte the mujhe at least.”

Abhi ne samundar ke door horizon ko dekhte hue kaha,

“Mujhe khud nahin pata chala ke main kab wahan se guzar gaya!”

Abhi ne jhoot kaha tha, assal mein Abhi chahta tha ke Manoj ya Ruhi ki maa ussko dekhe drive karte hue uss main road par, magar koyi nazar nahin aya tha…. aur Abhi ne sach mein ziada dhyaan diya hi nahin wahan se guzarte waqt.

Abhi aur Navina ne ek dusre ko mangni ke baad se shaadi ke 3 din pehle tak khat likhte rahe bina kissi din miss kiye…. Aur total 3,700 khat the ek dusre ke paas. Tamaam weh khat aaj bhi teen carton ke boxes mein maujood hein.

Abhi jab bank ke loan ko repay karne jata to kabhi manager se milta, kuch baatein hote ke kaam kaise chal raha hai etc…. tab ek din abhi ne manager ke desk par ek chota sa TV set jaisa dekha aur pucha ke wo kia hai. Manager ne kaha ke wo ek computer hai. Catode ray Wale computers the unn dinon, flat screen tha hi nahi computer hi sahi tarah se commercialised nahin hua tha sirf kissi bade bade company wale istemaal karte the aur bank wale… ziada tar IBM aur apple wale commercialised the, Microsoft tab utna popular nahin hue the… 1985 mein Microsoft ne windows 1.0 commercialised kiya tha… Abhi ko tab computer ka naam bhi nahin pata tha.

Uss din bank manager ne Abhi se kaha ke usske company ke liye bhi ek computer hona chahiye jiss mein wo tamaan workers ke naam ID, address, salary, company ki budget etc sab save kar sakta tha aur istemaal kar sakta tha….

Aur kuch mahinon baad Abhi ke garage wale office mein pehla computer laya gaya…. Secretary ko part time course follow karna pada uss computer par kaam karne ke liye, aur 3 mahine baad company ke saare important files save hone laga computer par. aur 1988 se hi Abhi ne computer chalana seekh liya tha aur ek computer khud apne liye bhi kharida ghar ke liye…

Aur dhire dhire jaise jaise computer ki generation badhta aur badalta gaya weise weise Abhi bhi change karta gaya aur ziada jaanta gaya computer ke baare mein.

1990’s mein internet par sab kuch hona shuru ho gaya tha aur Abhi tabhi se internet par connected tha aur apne company ke silsile mein foreign se comunicate karta emails se. Aur laptop naya naya aya tha tab aur Abhi ne tab ek laptop bhi le liya jo hamesha usski car mein rehta tha , sirf raat ko laptop ghar jaata jab Abhi ghar mein daakhil hota tha…

1990 mein hi Abhi ne apna pehla mobile kharida… wo ek analogue mobile tha Motorola make ki, wo yeh tha issko aaj bhi Abhi ne sambhal kar rakha hai kyunke yeh usska pehla mobile tha 1990 mein aya tha naya naya desh mein….

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To inn do saalon mein Abhi aur Navina ek dusre se khub mile, ghumein, maja kiye aur last mein donon ki shaadi fix hui aur bade dhoom dhaam se shaadi hui donon ki.

Ab Abhi ki company kaafi popular ho gaya tha Abruhi. Television walon ne usska interview liya tha jiss din ussne garage ko reopen kiya tha kyunke sab se youngest entrepreneur tha jissko bank ne karib ek crore loan dekar garage ko usske hawaale kiya tha. press mein bhi usski interview aur photos aaye the….

Unn dinon Abhi soch raha tha kia Ruhi aur usskki maa ne TV par usskko dekha hoga? Paper mein usski photo aur company ka naam dekha hoga? Ruhi ko kaisa laga hoga usska naam Abhi ke naam ke saat judhkar, Abruhi bante dekh kar?? Kia Ruhi ki maa aur khud Ruhi ko pachtawa nahin hua hoga?

Abhi ko uss waqt pata bhi nahin tha ke Ruhi kidhar hai, ussko pata nahin tha ke Ruhi uss Amit ke saath France chali gayi ya kahin aur kissi se shadi kar liya or what!! Agar Abhi chahta to Sunil ko khat likh kar Ruhi ke baare mein pata laga sakta tha magar ussne weisa nahin kiya…. Abhi yeh chahta tha ke agar Ruhi ko Abhi se pyar hai to Ruhi ko Abhi ke taraf ana chahiye tha. Jitna apne taraf se karna tha wo Abhi ne kar liya tha, bahot ziada hi kiya aur jhela tha Abhi ne Ruhi ke liye, to Ruhi ki baari thi Abhi ne socha iss liye ussne kabhi jaanne ki koshish nahin kiya pehle 5 saalon mein.

Abhi aur Navina ki married life bahot mast chal raha tha, Abhi ka kaam mast se bhi mast chal raha tha. Abhi ne apne garage ki advertisement ke saath ek ek chithi type karwa kar khud drive karte hue har ek bus owner ke ghar chorrne gaya tha…. North se south tak, east se west tak har bus owner ko ek ek chithi banta Abhi ne apne garage ko advertise karte hue… sirf ek bus owner ko chithi nahin diya Abhi ne, wo tha Mehboob.

Ab bus ki coach building ke ilawa aluminium ke kaam bhi hote the, usska ek alag team tha garage mein, weh log ziada tar outdoor kaam karte the, bade bade buildings mein aluminium frames laga kar window panes lagana etc… bade oonche 20 se 50 maale ke buildings mein weh kaam kiya jaata tha cranes se…. usske liye tender bhade jaate the agar governments ke buildings hote the… aur aksar daam kum hote the iss liye Abhi ko tender milta rehta tha… Abhi small profit mein kaam karta tha iss liye ussko bahot ziada kaam milta rehta tha garage mein.

Aur wohi kaam chote gharon mein bhi kiya jaata aur koyi gharib ke liye cost ziada hota to Abhi free mein weise logon ke ghar mein aluminium works kar diya karta tha, free of cost!

1994. Shaadi ke 5 saal baad Abhi ko ek din ek police station mein alluminiun ke khidki change karke naye lagwane the. Usske aadmi wahan kaam kar rahe the to Abhi check karne ko gaya tha ke kaam kahan tak hua hai wahan…. Aur Abhi ko kaun mila wahan? Mahesh, Ruhi ka chota bhai, ab wo police officer tha….. Abhi ne ussko dekha, muskuraya aur Mahesh khud aya Abhi se milne….

Mahesh ne Abhi se shake hand kiya, aur kaha,

“Hi, Abhi aap to bahot bade aadmi ban gaye ho ab, hmmm ABRUHI hehehehe aap ko TV par kayi baar dekha hoon, kaafi aage badh gaye ho ab life mein, very good very good mujhe Khushi hui Abhi.”

Abhi ne Mahesh ka haath apne haath mein pakre rakha Mahesh se baat karte hue, aur pucha ke wo kab police mein bharti hua yeh sab…. Abhi ko uss se Ruhi ke baare mein puchne ka mann kiya magar nahin pucha kyunke Mahesh ne Ruhi ki baat nahin kiya, bus ek dost ki tarah mila uss se aur casual baat kiya to Abhi ne bhi normal baat kiya Mahesh se…. Ruhi ki baat hi nahin hui…. Uss din ke baad Abhi Mahesh se kayi baar mila wahan aur kabhi uss sheher mein jahan usski chachi ki supermarket tha…. har baar donon doston ki tarah milte aur kuch der baat karte aur alag ho jaate….

Abhi ko ab pata chal gaya tha ke Ruhi ne bhi ussko TV par dekha hoga, usske ghar mein agar Mahesh ne Abhi ko dekha to matlab sab ne ussko dekha hoga aur ABRUHI company se sab wakif honge, Ruhi ki maa ko bhi sab pata chala hoga ke Abhi ek crorepati ban gaya hai aur usski Ruhi ke liye Abhi sahi ladka tha, aur pachta rahi hogi…. Iss se Abhi ko bahot Khushi milta tha jab sochta tha ke Ruhi ki maa par kia beet rahi hogi jab jab Abhi ko aur usski company ko TV par dikhaya gaya hoga….

Aur ek din Abhi ko East mein jana tha ek building ke liye quotation banaane. Abhi jab Ruhi ki main road se guzra to jaan bujh kar uss filling station par ruka fuel lene ke bahane. Filling station se Ruhi ki kitchen ki stairs saaf dikhaayi deta tha…. Abhi car se nikla aur Ruhi ke kitchen ke taraf dekhne laga…

Ye Abhi wo wala Abhi nahin tha jo unn dinon uss aangan mein gande kapdon mein kaam karta tha aur Ruhi se pyar ki bheek manga karta tha…. pichle 5 saalon mein Abhi ne itna tarraki kar liya tha ke ab usske paas ek BMW, Ek Mercrdes bentz, aur ek Audi tha, cars ka shauk tha abhi ko, rodeo jaisa drivings karta tha…. usska ghar pata nahin kitne crore ka tha; usske pehnaav se dikhta tha ek raiz aadmi hai…. Aur jab Abhi ko koyi nahin dikha stair par to pump par kaam karne wale aadmi ne Abhi se pucha,

“kuch chahiye kia Sir, fuel to full hai aap ki BMW mein to aap kyun ruke yahan Sir?

Abhi khayaalon mein khoya hua uss pump wale se pucha,

“uss ghar mein wahan last wala jo hai, Manoj, Mahesh, weh donon yahin rehte hein nah?”

Aadmi ne kaha,

“haan sir ji, donon bhai wahin rehte hein, aap jaante ho unhe Sir?”

Abhi ne weise hi khayaalon mein khoya hua udhar hi dekhte hue kaha,

“Ruhi?! Ruhi ko jaante ho tum?! Wo yahin hai kia?!”

Aadmi ne pucha,

“magar Sir aap kyun sawaal kar rahe ho? agar unnko jaante ho to wahan chale kyun nahin jaate aap?”

Abhi ne jaise ek sapna dekhte hue kaha,

“Ruhi France jaane wali thi gayi ke nahin bata mujhe, tab se abhi 8 saal ho gaye; gayi ke nahin bata mujhe!!”

Abhi ka dil zoron se dhadakne laga tha, wohi pehle ki tarah jab Ruhi ka naam leta tha, tab yehi haal hota tha, usske jaise saans fullne lage the uss aadmi se sawaal karte hue… Abhi ke nazar usski kitchen se hatt nahin raha tha aur uss aadmi se jawaab ka wait kar raha tha to aadmi ne kaha,

“Suna tha jaane wali thi Sir, magar gayi nahin hai abhi tak yahin hai!!”

Abhi tab tak aise hanffne laga tha jaise 100 metres bhaag kar aya tha, uss aadmi ka jawaab sun kar Abhi ne usske chehhre mein dekhte hue ek ajeeb si muskurahat mein kaha,

“Aath saal, 8 saal hahahaha dekhta hoon kab jaati hai!”

Aur Abhi car ke driving wale seat par baitha, to aadmi ne jhuk kar kaha,

“Sir koyi message ho to batadun Ruhi ji ko?!”

Abhi ne ussko ek 100 ka note dete hue kaha,

Bus itna kehna ke Amitabh Bachchan jitna lamba aadmi puch raha tha usske baare mein wo samajh jaegi.

To be continued….

Kia update likha hai casi bhai.
Jabardast, lajawaab, shaandaar, jhakaas.
Itna kuch ho gaya? 8 saal beet gaye jabse Ruhi se door hua? Pheeewww
Acha to Navina ke saath Abhi khushi khushi life bita raha hai, aur Navina se khush bhi hai.
Business bhi bahut badhya chalta gaya jab se shuru kiya.
Mahesh mila Abhi ko kuch saal baad aur uss se dost ki tarah mila aur baat kiye donon ne.
Abhi ko bahut khushi hui jab Mahesh se ussko pata chala ke TV par sab ne ussko dekha aur khud Mahesh ne Abhi ko kaha ke wo ab bada aadmi ban gaya hai aur ye ABRUHI naam bhi liya Mahesh ne matlab Mahesh ko pata hai k usski behen ka naam juda hai Abhi k business title mein.
Abhi ne Mahesh se Ruhi k baare mein nahin pucha.
Magar ek din Abhi gujra uss gali se jissko ussne chhorr diya tha. 8 saal baad gaya udhar kaam k liye aur Ruhi ke ghar k saamne wale filling station par jaan bujh kar ruka.....
Ye part bahut tough hai boss....
Main samajh gaya Abhi par uss waqt kia beet raha hoga....
Usske dimaag me sab wo drisht aaye honge jo ussne Ruhi k saath beetaaye hein....


Aur usski kitchen ke stairs par nazar jamaaye dekhta raha k kahin Ruhi dikh jaaye usse....
Pump wale ne toka to Abhi ne Ruhi k bare me pucha to pata chala ke woh ab bhi yahin hai..... wooooow
Aur karna kia tha message chorra uss aadmi se ke kehna Amit ji jaisa lamba aadmi Ruhi k baare me puch raha tha..... bhai ye part padh kar mere aankhen bhar aaye
Mere liye ye bahut emotional tha.
Aap Genius writer hi casi bahi

 

[Aakash.]

Abhi has bought a lot of cars and computers and houses, which means Abhi is getting a good profit from the garage. I know, even today Ruhi is attached to Abhi's heart and Abhi is with Ruhi's heart. It is very old time, there was no internet at that time, Abhi is making good progress. Even today, just by taking the name of Ruhi, Abhi's heartbeat becomes fast, meaning love remains intact. Abhi leaves the message for Ruhi, now do not know what will happen.
Until the story of Ruhi is revealed, nothing can be said. Ruhi's brother keeps on meeting Abhi, did Ruhi's brother tell Ruhi that Abhi should meet him. Ruhi is not married yet, Ruhi's story is getting mysterious.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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[Vikram]

Update 49 The Progress​

Abhi ne garage open hone ke ek mahine baad ek car le liya tha. Imported Japanese Toyota tha. Ussi mein jaata Navina ke ghar, rehta aur donon ghar par nahin milte to baahar ussi car mein ghumne jaate, aksar seaside par paaye jaate donon weekends mein.

Ab ajeeb baat yeh thi ke Abhi ki destiny shaayad desh ke purab wale hisse se juda hua tha, Ruhi hi udhar se hi thi, Navina bhi udhar ki hi thi, magar do different ilaake se the donon. East jaate hue ek chhota sa sheher tha aur wahan se ek do raha tha, straight jao to Ruhi ke ghar ke saamne se guzarna hota, aur right mudo to Navina ke ilaake ko jaata rasta… magar apne ghar se Abhi nikalta to uss East ke chhote sheher tak jaane ke liye wohi rasta lena padta jo wo leta tha Ruhi ke ghar ke taraf jaane ke liye….

Ab ek mashoor sea side East mein tha aur wahan jaane ke liye Ruhi ke main road se jana hota tha aur ek weekend ko Abhi aur Navina ne uss seaside jaane ko decide kiya…. Navina ko pata tha ke Ruhi ke ilaake se guzarna hoga wahan jaane ke liye, magar ussne ek baat bhi nahin kiya Abhi se uss baare mein… aur jab Abhi drive karte hue wahan se guzra, to Ruhi ki aangan mein dekha tak nahin siddha apna rasta dekhta gaya…. Navina ko pata hi nahin chala ke kidhar Ruhi rehti thi….

Jab samundar kinare donon car se utre tab navina ne pucha,

“Hum Ruhi ke mohalle se guzre the nah Abhi, aap ne mujhe kyun nahin bataya wo kidhar rehti hai? Usska ghar to bata sakte the mujhe at least.”

Abhi ne samundar ke door horizon ko dekhte hue kaha,

“Mujhe khud nahin pata chala ke main kab wahan se guzar gaya!”

Abhi ne jhoot kaha tha, assal mein Abhi chahta tha ke Manoj ya Ruhi ki maa ussko dekhe drive karte hue uss main road par, magar koyi nazar nahin aya tha…. aur Abhi ne sach mein ziada dhyaan diya hi nahin wahan se guzarte waqt.

Abhi aur Navina ne ek dusre ko mangni ke baad se shaadi ke 3 din pehle tak khat likhte rahe bina kissi din miss kiye…. Aur total 3,700 khat the ek dusre ke paas. Tamaam weh khat aaj bhi teen carton ke boxes mein maujood hein.

Abhi jab bank ke loan ko repay karne jata to kabhi manager se milta, kuch baatein hote ke kaam kaise chal raha hai etc…. tab ek din abhi ne manager ke desk par ek chota sa TV set jaisa dekha aur pucha ke wo kia hai. Manager ne kaha ke wo ek computer hai. Catode ray Wale computers the unn dinon, flat screen tha hi nahi computer hi sahi tarah se commercialised nahin hua tha sirf kissi bade bade company wale istemaal karte the aur bank wale… ziada tar IBM aur apple wale commercialised the, Microsoft tab utna popular nahin hue the… 1985 mein Microsoft ne windows 1.0 commercialised kiya tha… Abhi ko tab computer ka naam bhi nahin pata tha.

Uss din bank manager ne Abhi se kaha ke usske company ke liye bhi ek computer hona chahiye jiss mein wo tamaan workers ke naam ID, address, salary, company ki budget etc sab save kar sakta tha aur istemaal kar sakta tha….

Aur kuch mahinon baad Abhi ke garage wale office mein pehla computer laya gaya…. Secretary ko part time course follow karna pada uss computer par kaam karne ke liye, aur 3 mahine baad company ke saare important files save hone laga computer par. aur 1988 se hi Abhi ne computer chalana seekh liya tha aur ek computer khud apne liye bhi kharida ghar ke liye…

Aur dhire dhire jaise jaise computer ki generation badhta aur badalta gaya weise weise Abhi bhi change karta gaya aur ziada jaanta gaya computer ke baare mein.

1990’s mein internet par sab kuch hona shuru ho gaya tha aur Abhi tabhi se internet par connected tha aur apne company ke silsile mein foreign se comunicate karta emails se. Aur laptop naya naya aya tha tab aur Abhi ne tab ek laptop bhi le liya jo hamesha usski car mein rehta tha , sirf raat ko laptop ghar jaata jab Abhi ghar mein daakhil hota tha…

1990 mein hi Abhi ne apna pehla mobile kharida… wo ek analogue mobile tha Motorola make ki, wo yeh tha issko aaj bhi Abhi ne sambhal kar rakha hai kyunke yeh usska pehla mobile tha 1990 mein aya tha naya naya desh mein….

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To inn do saalon mein Abhi aur Navina ek dusre se khub mile, ghumein, maja kiye aur last mein donon ki shaadi fix hui aur bade dhoom dhaam se shaadi hui donon ki.

Ab Abhi ki company kaafi popular ho gaya tha Abruhi. Television walon ne usska interview liya tha jiss din ussne garage ko reopen kiya tha kyunke sab se youngest entrepreneur tha jissko bank ne karib ek crore loan dekar garage ko usske hawaale kiya tha. press mein bhi usski interview aur photos aaye the….

Unn dinon Abhi soch raha tha kia Ruhi aur usskki maa ne TV par usskko dekha hoga? Paper mein usski photo aur company ka naam dekha hoga? Ruhi ko kaisa laga hoga usska naam Abhi ke naam ke saat judhkar, Abruhi bante dekh kar?? Kia Ruhi ki maa aur khud Ruhi ko pachtawa nahin hua hoga?

Abhi ko uss waqt pata bhi nahin tha ke Ruhi kidhar hai, ussko pata nahin tha ke Ruhi uss Amit ke saath France chali gayi ya kahin aur kissi se shadi kar liya or what!! Agar Abhi chahta to Sunil ko khat likh kar Ruhi ke baare mein pata laga sakta tha magar ussne weisa nahin kiya…. Abhi yeh chahta tha ke agar Ruhi ko Abhi se pyar hai to Ruhi ko Abhi ke taraf ana chahiye tha. Jitna apne taraf se karna tha wo Abhi ne kar liya tha, bahot ziada hi kiya aur jhela tha Abhi ne Ruhi ke liye, to Ruhi ki baari thi Abhi ne socha iss liye ussne kabhi jaanne ki koshish nahin kiya pehle 5 saalon mein.

Abhi aur Navina ki married life bahot mast chal raha tha, Abhi ka kaam mast se bhi mast chal raha tha. Abhi ne apne garage ki advertisement ke saath ek ek chithi type karwa kar khud drive karte hue har ek bus owner ke ghar chorrne gaya tha…. North se south tak, east se west tak har bus owner ko ek ek chithi banta Abhi ne apne garage ko advertise karte hue… sirf ek bus owner ko chithi nahin diya Abhi ne, wo tha Mehboob.

Ab bus ki coach building ke ilawa aluminium ke kaam bhi hote the, usska ek alag team tha garage mein, weh log ziada tar outdoor kaam karte the, bade bade buildings mein aluminium frames laga kar window panes lagana etc… bade oonche 20 se 50 maale ke buildings mein weh kaam kiya jaata tha cranes se…. usske liye tender bhade jaate the agar governments ke buildings hote the… aur aksar daam kum hote the iss liye Abhi ko tender milta rehta tha… Abhi small profit mein kaam karta tha iss liye ussko bahot ziada kaam milta rehta tha garage mein.

Aur wohi kaam chote gharon mein bhi kiya jaata aur koyi gharib ke liye cost ziada hota to Abhi free mein weise logon ke ghar mein aluminium works kar diya karta tha, free of cost!

1994. Shaadi ke 5 saal baad Abhi ko ek din ek police station mein alluminiun ke khidki change karke naye lagwane the. Usske aadmi wahan kaam kar rahe the to Abhi check karne ko gaya tha ke kaam kahan tak hua hai wahan…. Aur Abhi ko kaun mila wahan? Mahesh, Ruhi ka chota bhai, ab wo police officer tha….. Abhi ne ussko dekha, muskuraya aur Mahesh khud aya Abhi se milne….

Mahesh ne Abhi se shake hand kiya, aur kaha,

“Hi, Abhi aap to bahot bade aadmi ban gaye ho ab, hmmm ABRUHI hehehehe aap ko TV par kayi baar dekha hoon, kaafi aage badh gaye ho ab life mein, very good very good mujhe Khushi hui Abhi.”

Abhi ne Mahesh ka haath apne haath mein pakre rakha Mahesh se baat karte hue, aur pucha ke wo kab police mein bharti hua yeh sab…. Abhi ko uss se Ruhi ke baare mein puchne ka mann kiya magar nahin pucha kyunke Mahesh ne Ruhi ki baat nahin kiya, bus ek dost ki tarah mila uss se aur casual baat kiya to Abhi ne bhi normal baat kiya Mahesh se…. Ruhi ki baat hi nahin hui…. Uss din ke baad Abhi Mahesh se kayi baar mila wahan aur kabhi uss sheher mein jahan usski chachi ki supermarket tha…. har baar donon doston ki tarah milte aur kuch der baat karte aur alag ho jaate….

Abhi ko ab pata chal gaya tha ke Ruhi ne bhi ussko TV par dekha hoga, usske ghar mein agar Mahesh ne Abhi ko dekha to matlab sab ne ussko dekha hoga aur ABRUHI company se sab wakif honge, Ruhi ki maa ko bhi sab pata chala hoga ke Abhi ek crorepati ban gaya hai aur usski Ruhi ke liye Abhi sahi ladka tha, aur pachta rahi hogi…. Iss se Abhi ko bahot Khushi milta tha jab sochta tha ke Ruhi ki maa par kia beet rahi hogi jab jab Abhi ko aur usski company ko TV par dikhaya gaya hoga….

Aur ek din Abhi ko East mein jana tha ek building ke liye quotation banaane. Abhi jab Ruhi ki main road se guzra to jaan bujh kar uss filling station par ruka fuel lene ke bahane. Filling station se Ruhi ki kitchen ki stairs saaf dikhaayi deta tha…. Abhi car se nikla aur Ruhi ke kitchen ke taraf dekhne laga…

Ye Abhi wo wala Abhi nahin tha jo unn dinon uss aangan mein gande kapdon mein kaam karta tha aur Ruhi se pyar ki bheek manga karta tha…. pichle 5 saalon mein Abhi ne itna tarraki kar liya tha ke ab usske paas ek BMW, Ek Mercrdes bentz, aur ek Audi tha, cars ka shauk tha abhi ko, rodeo jaisa drivings karta tha…. usska ghar pata nahin kitne crore ka tha; usske pehnaav se dikhta tha ek raiz aadmi hai…. Aur jab Abhi ko koyi nahin dikha stair par to pump par kaam karne wale aadmi ne Abhi se pucha,

“kuch chahiye kia Sir, fuel to full hai aap ki BMW mein to aap kyun ruke yahan Sir?

Abhi khayaalon mein khoya hua uss pump wale se pucha,

“uss ghar mein wahan last wala jo hai, Manoj, Mahesh, weh donon yahin rehte hein nah?”

Aadmi ne kaha,

“haan sir ji, donon bhai wahin rehte hein, aap jaante ho unhe Sir?”

Abhi ne weise hi khayaalon mein khoya hua udhar hi dekhte hue kaha,

“Ruhi?! Ruhi ko jaante ho tum?! Wo yahin hai kia?!”

Aadmi ne pucha,

“magar Sir aap kyun sawaal kar rahe ho? agar unnko jaante ho to wahan chale kyun nahin jaate aap?”

Abhi ne jaise ek sapna dekhte hue kaha,

“Ruhi France jaane wali thi gayi ke nahin bata mujhe, tab se abhi 8 saal ho gaye; gayi ke nahin bata mujhe!!”

Abhi ka dil zoron se dhadakne laga tha, wohi pehle ki tarah jab Ruhi ka naam leta tha, tab yehi haal hota tha, usske jaise saans fullne lage the uss aadmi se sawaal karte hue… Abhi ke nazar usski kitchen se hatt nahin raha tha aur uss aadmi se jawaab ka wait kar raha tha to aadmi ne kaha,

“Suna tha jaane wali thi Sir, magar gayi nahin hai abhi tak yahin hai!!”

Abhi tab tak aise hanffne laga tha jaise 100 metres bhaag kar aya tha, uss aadmi ka jawaab sun kar Abhi ne usske chehhre mein dekhte hue ek ajeeb si muskurahat mein kaha,

“Aath saal, 8 saal hahahaha dekhta hoon kab jaati hai!”

Aur Abhi car ke driving wale seat par baitha, to aadmi ne jhuk kar kaha,

“Sir koyi message ho to batadun Ruhi ji ko?!”

Abhi ne ussko ek 100 ka note dete hue kaha,

Bus itna kehna ke Amitabh Bachchan jitna lamba aadmi puch raha tha usske baare mein wo samajh jaegi.

To be continued….

Fantastic, marvellous, awesome update my friend.
What do I say? What an update! Wonderful man.
Very nicely written and narrated. Your way of delivering is just out of the world. Very impressed by the you write, narrate and describe.
Coming to the update itself, I'd say that after years of hard work Abhi very well deserved the success he is enjoying as a very rich and successful business man.
Navina is the perfect wife supporting Abhi in all the ways.
Abhi met Mahesh with him he was in good terms the days Abhi worked in their yard. They met several times and had friendly talks.....
And Abhi was once going towards the east in connection with his work when he had to pass on the main road lives Ruhi..... this was 8 years since he left that place
And I ask myself why Abhi questioned about Ruhi when he has such a lovely wife at home?
He has a wife who loves him so much and takes so good care of him?
It showed that Abhi has not really forgotten Ruhi even after so many years. It was a painful moment I felt. Abhi must have gone through a terrible emotional trauma at that moment.
But he left a message for Ruhi when he learnt that Ruhi after 8 years is still here.....
But I am asking myself..... how shall we now know either Ruhi got that message as we are knowing all through Abhi only??!
Anyway, just great this update. Loved it.

 

[Savi]