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Romance Usski Gali Mein Jaana Chorr Diya (Exclusively For XForum) COMPLETED

Casinar

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Behtareen update hai casi bhai. Bahut badhya, shaandaar, lajawaab.
Kia likha hai aap ne bhai dil ko chhuh gaya itna pyara hai
Kaash har kissi ko Navina jaisi wife milti to baat ban jaate yaar. Sahi likha hai aap ne k Abhi ka dil tuta hua tha to usske jholi me bhagwaan ne Navina ki nagina daal diya
Mujhe ye update itna passand aya k issko BEST update kahunga.
Ab iss mein Ruhi to bilkool hi fit nahin baithti to socha raha hoon usska a kia role hoga
Anyhow you know best bhai.
Hats off :claps: :claps: :claps: :claps:

Appreciation ke liye bahot bahot shukriya shambhi bhai
 

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Casinar

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Uttam update casi ji. Behtareen likha hai aap ne. Jabardast update hai jo mujhe behad passand hai.
Ab Navina ne dil jeet liya aap ne ussko bana hi aisa diya ke Ruhi feeka pad gayi ab aur kahani me ab aap ne twist dekar Navina ko heroine bana diya.
Jiss tarah se aap ne Navina ko importance aur powerful banaya hai, iss role mein to usske mukable Ruhi ab nahin ubhar sakti kyunke Abhi ki life mein ab Navina ki ehmiyat bahut jiada aur strong ho gayi hai. To mera ek sawaal hai kyunke aap ne shuru se kaha hai ke Ruhi end mein wapas aegi, kayi saalon baad. Aap ne kaha hai ke Abhi ko Ruhi wapas milegi to mera sawaal hai ke Navina ki itni strong aur poweful bhumika ke hote hue Ruhi ki ehmiyat kia re jaati hai kahani mein ab?
Khair ye update hi bahut powerful aur strong likha hai aap ne. Thanks aur dhsnyswad casi ji. :superb:
tehe dil se dhanyawaad Savi dear :love:
 

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Abhi is trying his best, as he is an expert in this work and it will also benefit him a lot but no solution was found. Eventually, Navina helps Abhi, perhaps she loves Abhi too much and the two get married. Navina is also very good and takes full care of Abhi. The most heartening thing is that Abhi's work was successful and all this was due to Navina.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...

thanks very very much for the appreciation Aakash bro
 

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Wow bidu kia update diyela hai ekdum jhakaas bole to faaaddduuuuu update.
Bahut hi badhya likha hai bidu. Aap ki talent ubhar kar saame aata hai aise writing dekh kar. Shabaash. Jiyo bidu jiyo.
Ruhi ko aisa gayab kiya ke sab jaise bhool hi gaye ussko sirf do update mein Navina ko ek aise heere ki tarah taraash kar pesh kiya ke sabki banke reh gayi wo. Wah isse kehte hein writing ki kala. Salute hai aap ko.
bahot bahot shukriya King bhai appreciate karne ke liye
 

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Awesone, fabulous. Magnificent update Casi bro.
It is very beautifully written. Too good. Lovely.
The compatibility between Abhi and Navina is like made with perfection.
You wrote it very well that the sky put Navina in Abhi's since he suffered a lot and had a broken heart.
Navina came like an angel in Abhi's life and she made his life like a garden of roses. She brought only luck, happiness, peace, love and prosperity in the miserable life of Abhi.
She was the real LUXMI for Abhi.
And the life of Abhi took a huge favourable turn success started licking Abhi's feet.
I wont say more bro but you fully deserved to be praised for this wonderful writing and unexpected twist in the story. You always amaze me in all your stories. You always have extreme stuff to get your uodates3 spiced differently. Hats off my friend.
:adore: :adore: :adore: :adore: :adore:

thanks very very much for the lovely appreciation Rowdy bro
 
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