Romance Usski Gali Mein Jaana Chorr Diya (Exclusively For XForum) COMPLETED

[Casinar]

Bhai issko kal padh liya tha par reply karna bhool gaya tha sorry.
Bahut shaandar update hai ye wala bhi bhai

koyi baat nahin bhai thanks loads

 

[Casinar]

Wow kia update hai. Bahut acha laga k Abhi ne kuch kar dikhaya. Iss umar mein hi laakh rupay kamana asaan baat nahin hai. Saeed ji khud hairan reh gaye k baat 2 lakh ki hui aur 3 lakh kehkar Abhi ne deal tey kar liya aur 1 lakh advance bhi le liya. Shabash.
Magar update ki end mein yeh kia?
Kiss ne Ruhi ko awaaz diye?
Suspense kal khulega tab tak hum wait karte hai Casi ji.
Superb update

heartfelt thanks savi dear for the appreciation

 

[Casinar]

Bahut shaandaar update Casi bhai.
Maja agaya.
Kaun si Ruhi ko phukara gaya bhai??

bahot shukriya nayan bhai

 

[Casinar]

Ab ye ruhi ki entry kaha se ho gayi.
Maza aa gaya update padhkar.

bahot shukriya Chintu bhai, mujhe khushi hai ke tumko passand aya dost

 

[Casinar]

huum achcha business kiya usne maja aa gawa bhai ab bas ko nawa behtar banana hai taki use dekhkar aur kaam mile..ab ye ruhi kaun aayi dekhte hain

bahot shukriya rahul yara

 

[Casinar]

Very beautiful update mate.
What a narration. So beautifully told. You are such a wonderful story teller my dear.
Very happy to read Abhi dealing like a true businessman. He successfully achieved what Saeed would never have done. Saeed had initally thought to ask Rs.75k only. But Abhi told him that at least 2lakh should be asked and during the deal he asked 3 lakhs which the owner accepted. Wow!
A youngster aged 22 makes a deal of 3lakhs while an old experienced man was asking 75K only.
Abhi is sure of his capabilities. He knows that he will turn the worn out bus into a full bus to be fit on the road so he deserves to get his due. Very interesting.
Now people are laughing seeing an old rotten bus in the yard of the owner and that could be hurt Abhi so he will show them into what he is going to turn the bus.
And you end the update with a suspense. Who called the name of Ruhi there? Abhi alone is acquainted to that name and obviously he is the one to feel something by hearing that name and his attention will be drawn that way. Who is that Ruhi overthere?
Excellent update casi bro. Marvellous. Am very keen to know what happens ahead, so eagerly waiting for the next update.

wow thanks from the depth of my heart for this lovely review Rowdy bro

 

[Casinar]

Wah. Maja agaya bidu. Bahut khushi hui iss update ko padhkar.
Itna acha laga jab Abhi ne uss deal ko kara k kia kahun.
Bole to ekdum jhakaaaaasssss.
Are ab kaun Ruhi ko awaz de reli hai? Apba Hero to paagal ho jaega udhar kaam karte hue lagta hai.
Maja aega bidu bahut maja aega.

bahot shukriya King bro

 

[Casinar]

abhi ki jindgi mein jab bhi kuchh achchha hona shuru hota hai.............
kambakht musibat aa hi jati hai...........

pahle 2500 ki naukri mili (us jamane mein 2500 ki naukri aaj ke 25000 ki naukri se kai guna jyada badi hoti thi)
tab company band ho gayi

ab business ki pahli deal ki abhi ne 3 lac ki...........aur 1 lakh uske account me bhi aa gaya.....
tabhi ye ruhiiiiiiii fir se

isi ko shayad kismat kahte hain (badkismati bhi )

ab bechara business mein dil kaise laga payega.............
dil to ruhi se lag jayega

keep it up casinar bhai.....................bahut jabardast plot ban raha hai........
kabhi farsh par to kabhi arsh par..................aur..........kabhi arsh par to kabhi farsh par

aap ki iss pyari appreciation ke liye tehe dil se dhanyawad Kaamdev bhai

 

[Casinar]

Superb. Excellent writing bro.
Wonderful update. Abhi turning into a business man. Hope he becomes a business tycoon if it is not asking too much.
But where from comes Ruhi here? Is she the love he is looking for? Wont he he now feel disturbed?
Loved the update bro. Keep it up. You are doing amazingly good.

thanks very very much for the appreciation vikram bro

 

[Casinar]

Bahut shaandaar aur lajawaab update hai bhai. Iss kahani ka plot bada jabardast dikh raha hai.
Shuru mein gharibi ka aalam. Phir jado jahad ka mausam.
Bachpan ka bichda pyar, pyar ki talash, phir pyar ka saamna.
Naukri ka milna, bade mushkil se 3 saal mein seekhna aur jab salary achi hui to company ka bandh hona.
Phir businessman ki tarah deal karna are ek moti rakam kamana aur phir achaanak ussi Ruhi ka naam ka kaanon mein shehed ki tarah ghulna.
Wah Casi bhai kia likha hai aap ne. Main ne abhi abhi shuru se dobara saare updates ko ek saath padha. Bahut jabardast story hai bhai. Yeh aap hi likh sakte ho.

bahot baot shukriya Shambhu bhai