Romance Usski Gali Mein Jaana Chorr Diya (Exclusively For XForum) COMPLETED

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Nice Update....

Thanks mere dost

 

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Abhi ki Har Ek saans mein Rohi Jaise bus gai hai aapko kam karte waqt bhi use Har Jagah ruhi Hi Najar Aati Hai 3 4 aur 5 tarikh ko Abhi ruhi ko milane Ka Vada Kiya Pata nahin ab Abhi Ruhi Ko Mil payega Yah nahin nice update

Haan bhai aisa hi hota hai jab koyi sincerely pyar karta hai kissi se tab... saanson mein hi bass jaate hein.
Thanks very very much james yara

 

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Kia koi kisi se itna piyar kr sakta h

Wah bahi Kia dhmake dar khoob Surat andaz se update likhi h ap ne sir g

Fantastic excellent birrilant update

Bahot bahot shukriya Asif bhai
Haan bhai koyi bhi kissi se bhi itna pyar kar sakta hai

 

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Wow post office ki van ko follow kia kia baat hai, kia idea paaya Abhi hats off. Matlab abhi tak usski galiyon me jana end nahin hua hai kyun ke abhi 3rd se 5th ko ek baar aur jana hoga.
Super update bhai.
Kia pyar hai, kia lagao hai Abhi k Ruhi k liye ke jahan bhi kaam karne jata ab sirf Ruhi hi najar ata usse.
Lajawab, shandaar, behtareen update casi bhai .

Bahot shukriya Indian bhai appreciation k liye

 

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Behtareen update,
Lagta hai abi ne ruhi ko wo khat lete hue aakhari baar dekh raha tha, filhal abhi ke liye.
Kya hota hai abhi ki jindagi me Dekhate hai, kaise wo is gam se nikalega.
Bhai abhi ki family ko bhi dikhao, please.

Are wah Chintu bhai aap ne kaise jaan liye k Abhi aakhri baar Ruhi ko dekh raha hai??
Haan bhai aaj ki update me aap ko pata chal jaega aur ziada

 

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Interesting update hai.
Khayaalon me bhi kabhi aisa nahin socha tha k ek post office van ka bhi picha kiya ja sakta hai. Ehat an amazing idea. Wow. Superb. Fascinating indeed. Kia dinag use kiya Abhi ne aur kaamyab bhi hua Ruhi ko apne hath chithi lete hue dekh kar. Kaisa feel kiya hoga uss waqt Abhi ne usska andaja laga sakta hoon main.
Ye to maan lo uss jamane mein Abhi ne aaj ke jaise instant message bheja video call jaisa aur Ruhi ko dekha bhi. Kon kehta hai k uss jamane mein video call nahin tha. Abhi ne kar dikhaya tha Ruhi ko message letw hue
Bahut behtareen update hai bhai.
Abhi ko charon taraf buss Ruhi najar ata hai yehi to ishk hai sacha wala. Hai na casi bhai?

Tehe dil se aap ka shukriya Nayan bhai iss review k liye

 

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Woooooowww.....
So this is the updated......
Fantastically written...as well beautifully described......both updates

To sabse pahle baat kar lete hai.....update or aapki writing ki....
Details par baad me aate hai.....

Update kaafi jyada emotional tha......matlab pichle kuch updates se aap jo hype create kar rahe the.....wo shaayad inhi do updates ke liye thi.....
OR mujhe bahut achcha laga raha hai ye kahte hue ki aap kaamyaab hue......
Ye dono updates bilkul uss level ke the jiss level par aap excitement ko le gaye the.......

Ab baat kare writing ki.......
To Aapne in dono updates ka emotional part kaafi jyada strong rakha hai.....OR saath hee dono updates ki lambai bhi.....

Matlab itne bade updates me bas emotional stuff ko rakhna.....OR saath hee iss tarah se jise ki readers feel bhi kar sake......or likhi hui har line dusri se itna achcha relate kar rahi thi......

Aisa tab hee ho sakta hai jab koi aap jaisa writer likh raha ho.......fantastic writing skills man......


Ak sach baat batata hu......aapke pichle kuch updates emotional aa rahe hai.....unn sabhi par baaki readers ne bas ak hee baat likhi hai....
KYO RULA RAHE HO.......KITNA RULAAOGE.....RONE LAG GAYA/GAYI....ETC.....

Lekin sach kahu to mujhe aisa kuch nahi laga tha......Mere liye to wo saare updates ak normal way me chal rahe the.....

Lekin......lekin.....ye waale dono updates.....ne mujhe bhi mazbur kar diya.....feel karne ke liye Abhi ka pain.....

Believe me.....mujhe inn updates ko padhkar bahut time baad dil se feel hua hai......

Aapke inn updates ne or aapki writing ne mujhe xossip waale ak bande ki yaad dila di.....ak kaafi behtareen writer tha......
Ho sakta he aap bhi jaante ho.....AASHIQ TERA.......naam se or uss ki stoey ka naam tha TUNE MERE JANA KABHI NAHI JANA......OR TAWAIF

Kaafi achcha writer tha....aapne usi ki yaad dilaa di aaj.......brilliant.....

Aaj taarif kuch jyada nahi ho gayi ...

Khair ab ham badhte hai details ki taraf....

(Phone me thodi dikkat hai isliye baaki ka dusre post me deta hu)

bahot bahot shukriya Vikram bhai, aaj aap ne updates ko padha aur review diya , mujhe bahot bahot khushi hui
iss baar aap ke review ko main detail mein nahin review karunga buss thanks thanks and thanks very very much
khushi iss baat ki ziada hui mujhe ke aap ko at last EMOTIONS DIKHE matlab main ne convey karne mein kaamyaabi haasil kiya. that was the aim bro... and i am happy that it reached your heart. thanks so very very much

 

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Ruhi ki maa ne Abhi ko NO kaha, wo kitne aas lagaaye baitha tha main Abhi ke shoes mein rehkar padhti hoon main ne socha Abhi ko kaisa feel hua hoga, iss liye rona aaya tha

Manne to rona aata hee na he....

Khair sabkaa apna apna point of view se.....
Thanks...

jaise eke main ne kaha tha har kissi ki apni apni padhne aur feel karne ki nazarya hota hai, it depends on individuals... koyi bahot ziada emotional hota hai, koyi buss upar upar padhta hai to koyi character mein doob jaata hai

 

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Lovely update casi ji.
Brilliant idea of following post office van aur Ruhi ko apne hath me chithi lete dekhna.
Thanks k iss update me aap ne nahin rulaya mujhe.
Umeed hai k ab Ruhi Abhi ka wait karegi aur uss din sab milkar baat karenge.......
Very nice update.

thanks very very much Swathi dear

 

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waiting new update

in a few mins rahul