Romance Usski Gali Mein Jaana Chorr Diya (Exclusively For XForum) COMPLETED

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Thnx for mega double update bhai.

 

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Update 38 Ruhi Leaves – Completion Of The Bus​

Ruhi aur baaki ke jaane wale log ghar se nikle; usski badi behen, behnoy, unnke do bache….. Ruhi bus ke paas se guzarte hue teen baar bus ke andar Abhi ko dhunda apne nazron se… bus mein karib 10 log the uss waqt to Ruhi ko dhundna para, aur jab usski nazar Abhi par pari to ussne turant sar niche jhuka liya. Usski haath mein ek halki si bag thi aur kaandhe par usskki handbag.... Abhi se dekha nahin jaa raha tha, usske dil par uss waqt kia guzar raha tha bayaan karna mushkil tha….

Ruhi ki badi behen aur behnoy bachchon ke saath ruk gaye kissi se baat karne ko, aur Ruhi apni cousin ke ghar tak reach hui thi aur ruk kar apne badi behen ka wait karne lagi…. Uss waqt Ruhi ki nazrein bus mein Abhi ko dhund rahe the; aur Abhi ne khud ko sunil ke piche chhupaye hue Ruhi ko dekh raha tha, Sunil ne kaha,

“Abhi wo tumko dhund rahi hai saamne to aa!”

Abhi ne Sunil ke piche se kaha,

“kia faeda yaar?!”

Sunil: “are yaar kia pata ussko kuch kehna hai idhar aa”

Aur Sunil hatt gaya taake Ruhi Abhi ko dekh sake, ab donon aamne saamne the… Abhi ka chehra utra hua tha, aankhen sujh gaye, saaf dikh raha tha… Ruhi bahot udaas chehre se Abhi ke chehre mein dekhti rahi, phir Ruhi se dekha nah gaya, ussne aasmaan mein dekha, phir nazrein niche kar liya aur usske aansoo behne lage Abhi ke liye…. Abhi Ruhi ko nahin dekh paa raha tha agar dekhta rehta to khud rone lagta to Abhi ne chehre mudh liya, aur khud ko phir se Sunil ke piche kar liya tab dekha Ruhi ke taraf to dekha ke Ruhi ussko phir dhund rahi hai rote hue….. Abhi ne sunil se pucha,

“main jaun uss se puchne ke ab kyun ro rahi hai jab mujhko thukda diya?!”

Sunil ne kaha,

“haan ja, ja Abhi aur thoda suna de ussko jaane se pehle”

Aur Abhi bus ke piche wale door se jump mara aur Ruhi ke paas pahuncha, Ruhi ne apna chehra dusri taraf mod liya jab dekha ke Abhi usske taraf badh raha hai….

Sirf koyi 3 minats mila Abhi ko Ruhi se baat karne ki kyunke tab tak Ruhi ki behen aur behnoy ne dekh liya ke Abhi Ruhi ke paas gaya hai to weh log badhne lage donon ke taraf aur Ruhi ki maa bhi aane lagi thi Abhi aur Ruhi ke taraf…… jo Abhi ne kiya uss waqt kissi ne bhi socha nahin tha ke wo sabke saamne open mein weisa karega… aur Ruhi ne bhi virodh nahin kiya aur Abhi ko karne diya jo wo karna chahta tha, magar sirf 3 minat mein sab hua…. Aisa laga ke jaise 3 seconds mein sab kuch ho gaya jaise ek pal mein sab hua….

Abhi ne pehle Ruhi ka haath thaama, wo ro rahi thi, bina kuch kahe Abhi ne Ruhi ke donon bazu ko usski bag sameth apne kaandhe par kiya, Ruhi ne apne baahon ko lapet liya Abhi ke kaandhe par aur Abhi ne ruhi se kaha,

“I want to hug you for a last time, don’t stop me please, send all others to hell, live this moment for me for a last time I beg of you Ruhi, if you ever loved me for one second don’t stop me….”

Ruhi roti gayi aur Abhi ne Ruhi ko zor se apne baahon mein jakra, aur bus se aur Ruhi ke family members se peeth kar liya Ruhi ko baahon mein jakre hue aur Ruhi ke thudi ko apne chehre ke taraf uthaya Abhi ne, uss pal ko Ruhi ne khudko completely samarpan kar diya Abhi ko aur apne aakhon ko band kar liya…. Ruhi ke aansoowon ne behte hue usski gaal par ek lakeer jaise khinch chuki thi, Abhi ne Ruhi ke honton par apna honth rakha aur donon ne ek dusre ko kiss kiya sare aam sabke saamne, yahan tak ke main road se koyi jaa raha tha to sab dekha hoga ke ek ladka aur ladki khada kiss kar rahe hein…..

Magar ek baat thi, buss mein se kissi ko wo kiss nazar nahin ayaa nah hi Ruhi ke kissi bhi parent ko kiss karte hue dikhe. Wo iss liye ke Abhi oonche kad ka tha aur ussne peeth kar liya tha unn sab logon se aur usska sar jhuka hua tha Ruhi ke chehre par buss piche se sirf aisa lag raha tha ke Abhi Ruhi ko baahon mein bhar ke hug kar raha hai…..

Kiss karte waqt Abhi ke munh mein Ruhi ke aansoo bhi jaa rahe the aur ussko namkeen taste ho raha tha aur Ruhi Abhi ke aanso taste kar rahi thi, donon ek dusre ke aansoo pee rahe the uss pal ko….Abhi ne unn sab ke paas aate hue kadmon ko sun raha tha to jaise jaise unn sab ke chalte hue kadam paas aane lage to Abhi ne kiss rok diya, aur sab saamne aaye to donon sirf ek dusre ke baahon meikn jakre hue the….

Jiss waqt Ruhi ka jeeb Abhi ke munh mein agaya tha, Ruhi ka rona stop ho gaya tha bilkool, aur wo Abhi ka kiss enjoy karne lagi thi aur ussne khud Abhi ko apne baahon mein bhar liya tha.

Magar jab Ruhi ki badi behen paas aagayi, aur Ruhi ki ma bhi paas aayi aur kaha,

“Ruhi tu itni besharam kaise ho sakti hai chorr ussko!”

Ruhi jaise kuch nahin sunn rahi thi, aur usske aankhon se phir aansoo behne lage to Abhi ne usske chehre mein dekhte hue dhire se kaha,

“This was your Christmas gift, you will remember this on ALL the next Christmas which will come in your life, and I know that you love me a lot but something is hindering you to accept my love… do not forget you will receive a new year card from me before the new year, I will no longer be here after today, its my last day here…. So please be back before 30th to receive my letter with the postman. I love you and will always do till the end of my life never forget that. Even if you get married to someone else my love for you will remain the same – even if I get married to someone else still my love for you will NEVER change, always remember this Ruhi. Farewell my love, don’t know if I will ever see you again, but I pray I do! Bye Ruhi”

Jab Abhi apna last, line bol raha tha usske aankkhon se thamne ka naam nahin le raha tha, abi ke honth thartharaa rahe the aur ruhi bhi jhar jhar behte aansoo se Abhi ke chehre mein dekhte hue ussko sun rahi thi…. Aur usski badi behen donon ke baahon ko ek dusre se chhurra rahi thi yeh kehte hue,

“chorro nah ek dusre ko dekho sab log dekh rahe hein kyun aise tamasha bana rahe ho tum donon!!”

Ruhi ki maa ne kaha,

“kia film ki shooting chal rahi hai yahan?!”

Aur Ruhi boli… Abhi ne nahin socha tha ke wo kuch jawaab degi; Ruhi ne apne aankh ko ponchte hue apni maa ko ek teerchi nazar se dekhte hue kaha,

“haan shooting chal rahi thi, aap ne nahin dekha?!”

Tab tak donon ek dusre ke baahon se alag ho gaye the magar donon ek dusre ke nazron ki gehraayi mein dekh rahe the aur phir Ruhi ki aankhen bhar aayi aur kaampte hue honthon se Ruhi ne bilak bilak kar Abhi se kaha,

“Bye Abhi, merry Christmas and happy new year to you, and I am really very very sorry for you, my heart will cry for you Abhi bye I am going Abhi!!”

Ruhi bahot zor se rote hue chal kar main road ke taraf badhi aur Abhi wahin baith gaya zameen par rote hue apne chehre ko apne haath mein thaam kar, aur jab bhi Ruhi mudhkar Abhi ko dekhti to wo aur zor se roti gayi….

Abhi ko aisa feel ho raha tha ke Ruhi bhaag kar wapas usske paas aegi, Abhi soch raha tha ke kyun Ruhi weisa nahin kar rahi, Abhi last moment tak ek aas lagaaye baitha raha ke Ruhi wapas aegi, nahin jaegi apne behen ke saath…. Magar Abhi ne tab khud se kaha ke yeh kissi movie ki climax scene nahin hai jo Ruhi bhaag kar usske paas wapas aati, yeh hakikat tha, aur Ruhi bilkool wapas nahin aayi balke chali gayi bus mein apni behen ke saath, usske ghar jisska pata Abhi ko bilkool nahin tha….

Abhi ne tab socha ke jaan bujh kar usske ghar walon ne ussko kaahin aur bhej diya varna Ruhi tut jaati Abhi ke pyar mein, agar wo yaha rehti to Abhi ussko convince kar leta aur sabko mana leta haan karne ke liye…..

Abhi kaam nahin kar paa raha tha, ussne Saeed se kaha ke ussko rest lena hoga wo kamzor feel karne laga tha, to saeed ne ussko jaa kar bus ke andar ek seat par araam karne ko kaha.

Sunil ne pucha,

“Abhi usske pita ne ki kaha tumse? Tum uss se baat karne gaye the nah kuch der pehle?”

Abhi ne apne sar ko thaame hue dabe awaaz mein jawaab diya,

“Ruhi ko apne saath lekar jaega S.Arabia”

Sunil ne kaha,

“namumkin, nahin ho sakta, jhoot kaha uss ne tumse.”

Abhi:”mujhe pata hai sab jhoot kaha yaar, kal usski maa ne yeh sab kaha tha mujhe, issi liye kal mujhe nahin milne diya Ruhi ke baap se taake weh log ussko seekha sake ke ussko kia bolna hai mujhe. Matlab saaf hai ke mujhko inkaar karna tha so kar diya sab ne Ruhi ke ilawa!!! Agar Ruhi mujhse pyar nahin karti to abhi uss tarah se mujhse sabke saamne lipat kar nahin roti, mujhe kiss nahin karti open mein aise!”

Tab sunil ne kaha,

“Ek baat bolun bhai, yeh family aise hi hein, khaas kar Ruhi ki maa, mere time mein bhi usne yehi kiya tha, yahan se Ruhi ki behen ko bhej diya tha apni nani ke yahan, usska mangitar uss se wahan milne jata tha yahan nahin…. Ruhi ki maa kissi par bharosa nahin karti, ussko darr thi ke kahin main Ruhi ki behen ko uda na le jaun kabhi! Ab dekho ussne tumse Ruhi ko bhi alag kar diya, yahan se door kar diya taake tum ussko aur nah apne pyar mein jakar sako. Isska matlab saaf hai ke Ruhi tumse pyar karti hai aur ghar mein Ruhi ne awaaz uthaayi hogi aur kaha hoga ke wo tumse shaadi karegi issi liye usski maa ne usko yahan se hatta diya!”

Baithe baithe Abhi Ruhi ko yaad karte hue phir rone laga…. Saeed ne aur baaki ke logon ne dekha, sab udaas the, sabko khush hona chahiye ta kyunke aakhri din tha kaam par, sab Khushi ke saath finish karna tha magar Abhi ke rone se, aur Ruhi ke chale jaane se ek maatam jaisa chhah gaya tha wahan….. jiss din se uss bus mein kaam shuru hua uss din se Abhi Ruhi ki love story shuru hui…. Jaise jaise bus banta gaya weise weise Abhi Ruhi ka pyar badhta gaya bus ke saath… hona yeh chahiye the ke jab bus ban gayi tab Abhi aur Ruhi ki mangni ya shaadi honi chahiye the matlab donon ka pyar official hona chahiye tha – yeh Abhi ne aisa hi likha tha apne diary mein.

Saeed ne Abhi ko phir rote suna to kaha, “Abhi phir se? are ruk ja dekh sab log tumko dekh rahe rahe hein, idhar aa meri madad kar issko fix karne mein… yaar aaj bhi late raat tak kaam karna hai kia, chal aa khatam karte hein nah!”

Mehboob ne kaha,

“are mujhe nahin pata tha tu to bada rotlu nikla Abhi, main tujhe mard samajhta tha!”

Abhi ko Mehboob se nafrat ho gaya tha jab se Ruhi ne ussko bataya tha ke wo usske pyar ke khilaaf hai, to Mehboob ko Abhi ne jawaab diya,

“kyun mard ko dard nahin hota? Mard ke aansoo nahin hote to ankhen fodh dena chahiye bina aansoo ke aankh hein to!!”

Ruhi chali gayi, Abhi ki khushiyon ko apne saath lekar, aur chorr gayi thi Abhi ke liye, dard, udaasi, gham, tanhaayi, akelapan, aur aansoo.

Abhi ko kaam jaari rakhna tha aur asaan nahin tha usske liye uss haal mein kaam karna, uss haalaat ko face karna…. Abhi ne khud ko bahot mushkilon se sambhaalte hue apne kaam mein dhyan diya, kaam karna shuru to kiya magar reh reh kar Ruhi ki yaadon mein chalajata aur achanak se ro padhta…. Ussne uss din ko achanak yaad kiya jiss din Ruhi ke chaati mein apne sar daalkar usski khushbhoo sungh raha tha, ab bhi ussko Ruhi ki wo khushbhoo mehek rahe the… hamara zehen bhi ajib o gharib computer hai jo sab apne memory mein save rakhta hai yahan tak ke ek khushbhoo jo kitne din piche naak se sungh kar zehen mein gaya tha aaj bhi yaad karne se wo khushbhoo yaad ata hai…. Sirf Ruhi ki jism ki uss khushbhoo ko yaad karke Abhi ro baitha…. Phir sambhala khudko aur kaam karne laga…..

Ruhi ki maa ko afsos ho raha tha Abhi ke liye. Wo abhi ko kaafi der se dekh rahi thi, aur wo khud emotional ho gayi thi Abhi ko dekh kar aur usske dard ko samajh kar…. wo jaanti thi ke Abhi iss waqt kiss dard se guzar raha hoga…..

Shaam ke 6 baj chuke the, kaam jaari tha, Ruhi ki maa ne Abhi se pucha,

“Naaraaz ho?

Abhi ne kaha,

“bilkool nahin, udaas hoon haan, ghum mein dooba hua hoon haan magar naraz nahin hoon”

Aur Ruhi ki maa ne kuch aise baatein kahe Abhi se jiss se Abhi ko thoda sukoon mila, ussko ek umeed ki kiran phir se dikhaayi diye…

Ruhi ki maa ne kaha,

“Hum ne khaas kar iss liye aap ki proposal ko accept nahin kiya kyun ke aap jo kaam kar rahe ho yeh permanent kaam nahin hai, yeh kaam aaj hai to kal nahin, aaj yahan se kaam end hoga to kia karoge? Jab tak dusra kaam nahin milta bekaar rahoge nah? issi liye! Mere cousins aur nephews hein jo yeh kaam karte hein aur aksar bekaar rehte hein, unemployed hein, mujhe apni Ruhi ki fikar hai Abhi.”

Abhi ne heirat se ussko dekha aur kaha,

“Oh my God! Yehi vajah thi ki aap ne accept nahin kiya?”

Ruhi ki maa: “haan Abhi buss issi liye”

Abhi ke dimaagh mein kuch chal raha tha uss waqt aur ussne pucha,

“Aur agar main kal koyi aur behtar kaam kar raha hunga tab?!”

Ruhi ki maa: “dekho Abhi, kal ko agar tum koyi behtar kaam kar rahe ho aur tab tak Ruhi ki shadi nahin hui hogi tab hum zaroor consider karenge tumhare proposal ko!”

Abhi ko bahot araam mila aur pucha,

“Ruhi aaj wapas nahin aegi?”

Ruhi ki maa ne kaha,

“Nahin wo apne chacha ke ghar rahegi aur supermarket mein help karegi kyunke tumko pata hi hoga ke sheher mein kitne bhidh baadh hote hein Christmas aur new year ke mauke par, late night shopping hote hein to kaam bahut ziada hote hein to Ruhi help karegi apne chacha ko, Manoj bhi wahin kaam karta hai nah har roz…”

Abhi ne yaad kiya ke haan ek baar Manoj ne usse bataya tha ke wo ek supermarket mein kaam karta hai, ek chhota sa self service tha naam tha supermarket. To Abhi ne pucha,

“To Ruhi kab ghar wapas aegi ab?”

Jawaab diya usski maa ne,

“Sunday ko aegi, magar New Year ko wahin rahegi shayad.”

Abhi ne tab pucha,

“Aur wo supermarket kidhar hai exactly?”

Ruhi ki maa ne exact address de diya ke Royal cinema ke paas hai….

Ab wo sheher Abhi ke ghar se ziada door nahin tha aur Abhi udhar aksar jata tha aur ussko exactly pata tha royal cinema kahan hai kyunke uss cinema hall mein Abhi kayi baar movie dekhne gaya hai, Abhi uss jagah ko bahot achhi tarah pehchaanta tha…

Abhi ne socha ke kyun Ruhi ki maa ne ussko saare information de diye Ruhi ke baare mein ke kahan reh rahi hai, kahan supermarket hai, matlab wo chahti hai ke abhi uss se udhar milne jaaye…. Jab usski beti aur Abhi milkar rone lage the to uss se dekha nah gaya aur shayad ab pachta rahi thi donon ko juda karke aur ab chahhti thi ke Abhi uss se udhar jaa kar mile….

Abhi bahot khush hua aur ab relax feel karne laga tha. To phir Abhi ab normal kaam karne laga.

Aaj bhi kal raat ki tarah Mehboob ke ghar dinner kiya gaya. Abhi kitna chahta tha ke Ruhi wahan hoti, kal bhi raat ko dinner kiye the sab to Ruhi nahin thi aur aaj bhi nahin hai….

Jab Abhi washroom jaa raha tha wash karne dinner se pehle to Mahesh ne Abhi ko awaaz diya,

“hey Abhi?!”

Abhi ne mudhkar dekha to Mahesh ne kaha,

“udhar andhera hai idhar aao hamare kitchen ke basin ke paas haath dho lo”

Magar Abhi ne kaha ke thik hai chalta hai, par Mahesh ne zid kiya ke wo wahan aakar haath dhoe… to Abhi gaya Ruhi ki kitchen mein aaj dusri baar gaya tha, magar aaj Ruhi ke bina gaya tha wahan… basin ke paas saboon se apne haath dhoya Abhi ne, aur khayaalon mein sochne laga ke kitne baar ussne Ruhi ko uss basin ke paas bartan dhote hue dekha hai… kitna khush hota wo agar aaj Ruhi yahin hoti, to kitni khush wo bhi hoti Abhi ko apne kitchen mein ek baar aur dekh kar….

Haath dhone ke baad Abhi ne uss table ko kiss kiya aur table se baat kiya, ek sandesha chorra Abhi ne uss table se ke wo Ruhi ko bata de ke Abhi aya tha idhar aur ussko kiss send kiya hai.

Dinner ke baad kaam chalu raha aur Abhi Ruhi ko bahot miss karne laga…. Raton mein iskh ka bhoot ziada chadhta hai, kal raat bhi Ruhi nahin thi aaj bhi nahin aur Abhi par ishk ka bhoot sawaar tha…tadap raha tha wo Ruhi ko yaad karte hue….

Jab se Abhi Christmas eve ki night celebrate karna shuru kiya hai doston ke beech aaj pehli baar tha ke iss raat ko Abhi kaam kar raha tha jiss waqt ussko sheher mein ghumna, mauj masti karna chahiye tha…. aur Abhi ne socha iss waqt Ruhi supermarket mein hogi kyunke late night shopping hota tha iss raat ko….

Raat ko 12 baje kaam finish hua… bus COMPLETE HO GAYA… aur start kiya gaya aur khud Mehboob ne drive kiya… George saath tha, sunil, aur baaki ke sab saath the bus mein….

Abhi ne Rahima ke paas ek message chorra Ruhi ke liye, Abhi ne Rahima se kaha,

“pleae Ruhi ko mera sandesha pahucha dena, kehna ke main ne ussko merry xmas wish kiya aur kehna ke jaise ke ussne mujhe kaha main bahot patience rakhunga”

Manoj wapas agaya tha kaam se, aur wo bhi bus mein aya. Abhi ko aur 40 bus ke photos diye…., Abhi ne ussko pay kiya… Aur road par bus ki kayi aur photos liya ussne jo Abhi ko baad mein dega ussne kaha.

Mehboob khud drive karte hue Abhi ke team ko wapas ghar chorrne ja raha tha, bus almost bhara hua tha, bus mein Rahima, Farzina, Reza, sunil, George, sunil ka assistant, Manoj, Mahesh, George ka apprentice, aur Reza ke behnein bhare hue the Sirf Ruhi ki kami thi bus mein…. Kamaal hai Abhi ne socha, agar aaj wo hoti to wo bhi saath baithti Abhi ke saath bus mein wahan se 40 kms tak drive karte hue Abhi ke ghar tak jaati aur Abhi ka ghar bhi dekh leti….. magar afsos!

Jab bus Abhi ke ghar ke saamne ruka to Mehboob aur Reza ne kaha

“Achah to Abhi yahan rehta hai wo raha usska ghar… hmmm!!”

Subha ke 1 baj chuka tha jab Abhi ne apna diary khola aur likhna shuru kiya….. phir sone gaya to usska takiya bheeg gaya itna wo ro raha tha Ruhi ko sochte hue ……

To be continued….. (5700 words from both updates)

Casi bhai bahut bahut dard hua mujhe.
Bahut bahut emotional update hai.
Main der tak rota raha. Khud ko abhi samajh baitha main.
Jab Ruhi aur Abhi sabke saamne gale milkar roye to main bhi roya. Bahut dard hua hab Ruhi ne kaha I am going Abhi main fut ke roya.
Ek tassalli hai ke Abhi k paas address hai to ye umeed hai k Abhi jarur udhar jaega.
Bhai kamaal ka writer ho aap. Likh kar itna rulaya wah bhai wah
Hats off itna badhya kahani likhne k liye Casi bhai.

 

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Update 37 The Last Day & Night In Ruhi’s Aangan​

Wednesday 24th December – Christmas Eve.

Abhi ne iss din ke liye apni diary mein likha hai:

It has been the last and worst day and night in Ruhi’s yard.

Subha subha Ruhi ki maa Abhi ke saath hanss rahi thi. Aur Abhi ko Ruhi nazar aayi kitchen ke andar. Aaj Ruhi ek nayi nightdress mein thi. Ek khubsurat nightdress jo safed thi aur uss par bade bade red, black aur green dots the. Ruhi dada ji ke armchair par baithi hui thi.

Abhi ne usski maa se baat ki. Aur uss aurat ne iss baar kaha,

“Sorry Abhi, Ruhi ke papa ne ussko iss baar apne saath Saudi Arabia lejaane ka faisla kiya hai!!”

Abhi ko itna ghussa aya ke usska mann kiya ke ussko gaaliyon se nehla de ussi waqt. Abhi ne socha issi liye wo kal hi Ruhi ke baap se bat karna chahta tha iss se pehle ke Ruhi ki maa khud koyi bahana bana kar apne pati ke munh mein koyi baat khud nah daal de…. Abhi samajh gaya ke kal raat ko Ruhi ki maa ne khud sab kuch bata diya hoga apne pati ko ke Abhi Ruhi se pyar karta hai magar ussko Rishta nahin passand kyunke ussko Abhi ka kaam nahin passand, to apne pati se keh diya hoga ke aaj wo ladka aap se Ruhi ka haath mangega to aap mana kar dena…..

Abhi issi liye nahin chahta tha ke koyi aur Ruhi ke pita se baat kare issi liye wo sabse pehle baat karna chahta tha Ruhi ke pita se kal raat ko…..

Abhi sab kuch apne dimaagh mein rewind karte hue soch raha tha aur samajhne ki koshish kar raha tha ke jiss din Ruhi gayi thi apne nani ke ghar tabhi se Ruhi berukhi se pesh ane lagi Abhi ke saath, aur kal raat ko isi baat ke liye Ruhi ke papa ko bhi legaye sab wahan aur issi baare mein baat kiye gaye honge aur sabne milkar decide kiya hoga ke Abhi ko yeh jawaab de diya jaaye ke Ruhi ke pita Ruhi ko apne saath lekar jaa raha hai iss baar….. Abhi ko puri film dikh gayi usske dimaagh mein… to Abhi ne Ruhi ki maa se kaha,

“koyi mujhko laakhon rupay bhi dede nah to main yakeen nahin karunga? Saudi Arabia mein koyi apni beti ko lejata hai? Ladki ko? Unn vehshi, tharki Arab logon ke beech? Aap mujhko ullo samajhte ho nah aunty? Thik hai wohi samajhiye aap mujhe….”

Ruhi ki maa ne kaha,

“tum khud puchlo agar yakeen nahin hai to!”

Abhi: “puchunga to ab wo to yehi kahega nah? sab mile hue hein iss mein koyi shak nahin, jo aap ne ussko kehne ko kaha wohi kahega wo…. Zaahir si baat hai.”

Din bhar Abhi ranjh o ghum mein raha. Usski maansik stithi normal nahin raha din bhar….. ussko saans lene mein takliff hota raha baar baar….. Ruhi dikhi ussko kayi baar magar baat karna naamumkin tha….

Aur din ke 2.30 ko Abhi ko pata chala ke Ruhi ki badi behen ussko apne saath lekar jaa rahi hai, Ruhi apni behen ke ghar kuch dinon ko beetaane ke liye jaa rahi thi…. Abhi ko zabardast jhatka laga ye khabar sunkar…. Usska uss aangan mein aakhri din tha aur wo chahta tha ke Ruhi ko wo jee bhar ke dekhe aur mauka milne par uss se baat kare apna pyar ka waasta de Ruhi ko…. Magar jab suna ke Ruhi jaa rahi hai to Abhi jaise tut gaya… Farzina ne Abhi ko bataya ke Ruhi apni badi behen ke saath jaa rahi hai, ab pata nahin ke Ruhi ne khud farzinah ko yeh kehne liye bheja tha ya nahin, Abhi ko shak tha ke khud Ruhi ne hi Farzinah ko kaha tha Abhi ko jaakar bataane ke liye ke wo jaa rahi hai…. Abhi ko shcok laga, shock par shock, dard par dard, Abhi ki sehen shakti kum hote dikhaayi diye….magar ussko abhi aur bhi bada shock jhelna baaki tha…

Bus ke andar se Ruhi ki khidki dikhta tha, aur Ruhi baal banaate hue dikh rahi thi, jaise Ruhi jaan bujh kar Abhi to dikha rahi thi taake Abhi ko pata chale ke wo jaa rahi hai. Abhi ke paas ek hi mauka aur ek hi raasta tha ke wo wahan jaaye uss khidki ke paas aur ek AAKHRI baar wahan se Ruhi se baat kare…

Abhi ne kaam ko maara goli aur gaya Ruhi ke khidki ke paas…. Ussne dekha Ruhi ne uss yellow suit ko pehna hua tha jiss mein uss din apni maa ke saath apni nani ke yahan gayi thi, halki si make mein thi aur kayamat lag rahi thi… usski maa wahin thi aur Ruhi khudko aine mein dekh rahi thi baal banaate hue…. Abhi ne ek book diya tha Ruhi ko koyi 20 din pehle, to Abhi ne kaha,

“hey Ruhi, mera kitab….” Abhi ki awaaz nahin nikal rahi thi… Ruhi ne nahin suna aur usskki maa ne Ruhi se kaha,

“Wo apna kitab mang raha hai Ruhi”

Ruhi ne thoda chahunkte hue kaha,

“Are haan, main to bilkool hi bhool gayi thi ke ek aap ki kitaab mere paas hai itne dinon se, sorry abhi laayi!”

Ruhi ne uss book ko Abhi ko wapas kiya.

Abhi bahot bahot udaas tha,wo kamzor dikh raha tha, lagta tha bimaar hai. Phir bhi Abhi ne pucha,

“Ruhi kia decide kiya tumne?!”

Ruhi ne kaha,

“Be Patient Abhi!”

Abhi ne ek gehri saans lete hue kaha,

“Abhi issi waqt tum mujhse aise baat kar rahi ho jaise hum ajnabee hein, tum jaise badal gayi ho, jaise tum meri Ruhi nahin koyi aur ho, kyun Ruhi, kal to itna royi thi jab mujhe choat lagi thi nah, tab bhi tum nahin samjhi mere dil ka haal Ruhi?”

Ruhi zor se hanssi…. Wo ek hanssi nahin thi kuch aur tha, wo Abhi ko aur ziada hurt karne ki ek tamacha tha Abhi ke gaal par.

Ruhi ne tab ek chewing gum ke do tukde kiye aur ek tudka Abhi ko diya aur dusra tukda apne munh mein le liya….. wo chewing wo tha jo Ruhi chabaati thi jab Abhi ko piche kiss karne jaati thi…. ek din Ruhi ek chewing chabah rahi thi aur Ruhi ko kiss karte waqt, Abhi ne Ruhi ke munh se usski chewing gum ko apne munh mein le liya tha….. uss roz donon ne phir chewing gum par baat kiye the aur uss din ko bhi Ruhi ne aise hi ek tudka chewing gum diya tha Abhi ko….. aur aaj apni maa ke saamne ussne wohi kiya…… kyun aisa kiya tha Ruhi ne? kyun puraane yaadon ko taaza kar rahi thi ab?! Magar Abhi ko passand aya tha ke Ruhi ne ussko aadha chewing gum diya….

Abhi ka Ruhi ke saath yeh akhri conversation ho raha tha. Abhi ke samajh mein nahin araha tha ke ab wo Ruhi se kia kahe. Sab kuch jaise ulat phulat ho gaya tha, sab bigar gaya tha, jo kuch Abhi ne socha tha kuch bhi veisa nahin ho raha tha sirf iss liye ke Ruhi to jaa rahi thi…. Ulta Abhi ne socha tha aaj wo khud jaega, aaj usska last din hoga wahan aur ussne bahot kuch socha tha ke kaam finish karne ke baad wo Ruhi se baat karne jaega chaahe ghanton bhar hi kyun nah sahhi magar aaj wo apne dil ka haal bayan karta Ruhi se, uske parents se, sab se rokar Ruhi ka haath maangta magar ab Ruhi hi nahin rahegi to kia karega…. Abhi ke paas ab shabd nahin baaki tha kehne ke liye….

Abhi soch raha the ke sirf Ruhi yeh keh deti ke wo Abhi se pyar karti hai aur uss se shaadi karna chahti hai to koyi inkaar nahin karte. Magar ab to lag aisa raha tha ke Ruhi khud nahin chahti thi kyukne wo buss wo buss “NAHIN, NO,” kehti jaa rahi thi.

Abhi ne Ruhi se kaha,

“Ab ‘NO’ keh rahi ho Ruhi, kia Christmas ka tohfa diya aaj tumne mujhko Ruhi!”

Ruhi ne chehre par bina koyi afsos ya ghum dikhaate hue kaha,

“I am very sorry for you Abhi”

Abhi ne kaha,

“kia tum apne papa se nahin keh sakti ke tum bhi mujhe chahti ho?!”

Ruhi ne fake Muskaan mein jawaab diya,

“magar main khud desh chorr rahi hoon nah Abhi!”

Abhi ne kaha,

“Okay main intezaar karunga tumhare lautne ka.”

Tab Ruhi ki badi behen ne kaha,

“kab tak? Aap kab tak intezaar karoge isska?”

Abhi: “100 saalon tak!”

Badi behen khamosh ho gayi.

Abhi ne Ruhi ki maa se Ruhi ki father ko bulane ko kaha. Ruhi ki maa ne usse bulaya, baap aaya aur sach mein ek hasmukh chehre wala insaan tha, wo aakar Ruhi ki bed par baitha Abhi ko dekhte hue, aur Abhi ne ussko samjhaya, ke wo aur Ruhi kitna ek dusre se pyar karte hein….. jab Abhi sab keh raha tha Ruhi ke pita se uss waqt Ruhi aine ke saamne khadi khud ko sanwaar rahi thi magar baar baar Abhi ko bhi dekh rahi thi ussko usski pita se baat karte hue….

Ruhi ke pita ne Abhi ko jo jawaab diya wo 100% fake tha, jissko sunkar Abhi samajh gaya ke wo saare baatein banawati the aur Ruhi ki maa ne wo sab kehne ke liye kaha tha ussko. Baap ne Abhi se kaha,

“Dekho main pehle se plan kar chuka hoon ke Ruhi ko apne saath leja raha hoon iss baar, aur phir uss ladke ko hum ne zuban de diya hai wo France mein hai aur wapas aakar Ruhi ko lejaega!”

Tab Ruhi ne Abhi ke taraf dekhte hue kaha,

“Dekha? Main ne kaha tha magar aap yakeen nahin kar rahe the!”

Abhi ne apne dil ke andar khud se kaha,

“Tu bhi jhooti hai Ruhi, jiss din tumne apni virginity wali baat bataayi thi tab to kaha tha ke wo saare abroad wale ladke wali baatein jhoot the, aur ab keh rahi ho ke sach hai…”

Phir Abhi ne Ruhi ke pita se kaha,

“Dekhiye agar main aap se kahun ke main wait karunga, ke iss baar jab aap Ruhi ke saath wapas aao tab aunga, chahe aur 3 saal lag jaye main Ruhi ka intezaar karunga to?”

Baap ne kaha,

“Magar Ruhi ko wo France se lene aega nah, hum ne ussko pehle zuban de diye hain!”

Ruhi ne tab Abhi se apne donon eyebrows uchkaaya kuch iss tarah ke jaise Abhi haar gaya aur wo aur usske pita jeey gaye, aur phir Ruhi ne kaha,

“Dekho Abhi, aap ko bahot saare khubsurat ladkiyan mil jaenge, aap handsome ho, intelligent ho, tez ho, main koyi rani maharani nahin, mujh mein kuch aisa nahin hai ke aap ko sirf main hi chahiye, main bahot buri hoon pucho meri maa se ke main kitni buri ladki hoon!”

Ruh ki maa ne turant Ruhi ki baat par haami bharte hue kaha,

“haan Ruhi bahot hi buri ladki hai”

Abhi ne ussko turant jawaab diya,

“main Ruhi ko kissi tarah se bhi accept karta hoon!”

Usski badi behen ne kaha,

“aap wait karte karte thak jaoge, bore ho jaoge aur aap ko koyi aur mil jaegi dekh lena!”

Abhi ke honth thartharaane lage the kyunke ussko ab dikh gaya tha ke Ruhi to haath se gayi ab…. Usske aankhon se paani behne hi wala tha, ke Abhi ne sar niche jhukaya…. Ruhi ko pata chal gaya ke Abhi ab rone wala hai, to usski bhi aankhen badh aayi, maa, baap, badi behen sab Aabhi ke chehre mein khamosh ghaur se dekh rahe the, sab ko pata tha wo tut chuka hai aur ab ro padega…

Abhi ne sar jhukaaye hue hi kaha,

“okay”

Aur mudh gaya jaane ke liye, to Ruhi ki maa ne ussko awaaz di, Abhi wapas mudha, apne chehre ko uss kitab se chhupaate aur aankh ponchte hue,

Ruhi ke papa ne kaha,

“ghussa mat hona, sorry.”

Abhi ne kaha,

“koyi baat nahin”

Sab ke nazrein Abhi ke chehre par the, sab ko pata tha Abhi ko jhatka laga hai aur ussko bahot dard ho raha hoga, sab ko Abhi ke chehre mein wo ghum, wo dukh dikh raha tha, sab ko pata tha Abhi ke aakhen bhar aaye hein, aur sab ko yeh bhi pata tha ke Abhi apne emotions ko chhupaane ki koshish kar raha hai aur book se apna munh chhupa raha hai….. Ruhi ka brother-in-law khud Abhi ko uss tarah se tutte hue dekh kar heyraan tha aur Abhi ke chehre mein bahot dard bhare chehre se dekhe jaa raha tha….. Ruhi ki badi behen ke aankhen bhar aaye, Ruhi ki maa ke aankhen bhar aaye…. Magar iss baar Ruhi ki aankhen nahin bari thi, aur Ruhi ne Abhi se kaha,

“LOOK ABHI, I AM REALLY VERY SORRY FOR YOU, I MEANT IT, MY HEART FEELS IT FOR YOU ABHI. WISH YOU MUCH COURAGE AND PATIENCE ABHI.”

Abhi ne Ruhi ko halki si Muskaan se dekha aur tapakte aansoowon se usske chehre mein dekhte hue kaha.

“The deception does exist right? So, its okay, never mind Ruhi, you be happy always, that’s all I can wish for you!”

Abhi wapas bus mein jaa baitah aur rone laga, rokna namumkin tha….. ek baar to zor se roya…. Bus ke sabhi kaam karne waale Abhi ke paas aa gaye, koyi usske sar thapthapa, koyi usske peeth par haatyh ferrta, koyi ussko paani deta, sab ussko shant karaane mein lage hue tha…. Mehboob bhi wahin tha, aur wo bhi Abhi ko support karne ka dhong kar raha tha….. Abhi khud ko rokne ki koshish mein laga hua tha magar nahin kar paa raha tha, rona ruk hi nahin raha tha usska

Koyi 30 mins baad Abhi chhup hua aur jo kaam karna baaki tha uss mein lag gaya phir bhi baar baar ro deta tha kaam karte hue…. Pata nahin kia kia soch soch kar rone lagta…..

Aur aayi wo waqt jo Abhi ke liye kayamat se kum nahin tha….

To be continued in the next post immediately….

Bhai kuch bhi hi ye Ruhi Abhi se bahut pyar karti hai. Guarantee hai mera jhoot bol rahi hai Abhi ko kyunke usski maa ne ussko wo sab kehne ki kaha hai.
Ruhi ne bus wo chewing gum diya Abhi ko yehi saboot hai ke wo Abhi ko bahuy pyar karti hai magar majboor hai.
Bhai bahut emotional update hai, Abhi k liye bahut feel ho raha hai mujhe. Main samajh sakta hoon uss par kia beet rahi hai. Bahut mushkil hai iss situation ko jhelna.
Wonderful writing bhai

 

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Update 38 Ruhi Leaves – Completion Of The Bus​

Ruhi aur baaki ke jaane wale log ghar se nikle; usski badi behen, behnoy, unnke do bache….. Ruhi bus ke paas se guzarte hue teen baar bus ke andar Abhi ko dhunda apne nazron se… bus mein karib 10 log the uss waqt to Ruhi ko dhundna para, aur jab usski nazar Abhi par pari to ussne turant sar niche jhuka liya. Usski haath mein ek halki si bag thi aur kaandhe par usskki handbag.... Abhi se dekha nahin jaa raha tha, usske dil par uss waqt kia guzar raha tha bayaan karna mushkil tha….

Ruhi ki badi behen aur behnoy bachchon ke saath ruk gaye kissi se baat karne ko, aur Ruhi apni cousin ke ghar tak reach hui thi aur ruk kar apne badi behen ka wait karne lagi…. Uss waqt Ruhi ki nazrein bus mein Abhi ko dhund rahe the; aur Abhi ne khud ko sunil ke piche chhupaye hue Ruhi ko dekh raha tha, Sunil ne kaha,

“Abhi wo tumko dhund rahi hai saamne to aa!”

Abhi ne Sunil ke piche se kaha,

“kia faeda yaar?!”

Sunil: “are yaar kia pata ussko kuch kehna hai idhar aa”

Aur Sunil hatt gaya taake Ruhi Abhi ko dekh sake, ab donon aamne saamne the… Abhi ka chehra utra hua tha, aankhen sujh gaye, saaf dikh raha tha… Ruhi bahot udaas chehre se Abhi ke chehre mein dekhti rahi, phir Ruhi se dekha nah gaya, ussne aasmaan mein dekha, phir nazrein niche kar liya aur usske aansoo behne lage Abhi ke liye…. Abhi Ruhi ko nahin dekh paa raha tha agar dekhta rehta to khud rone lagta to Abhi ne chehre mudh liya, aur khud ko phir se Sunil ke piche kar liya tab dekha Ruhi ke taraf to dekha ke Ruhi ussko phir dhund rahi hai rote hue….. Abhi ne sunil se pucha,

“main jaun uss se puchne ke ab kyun ro rahi hai jab mujhko thukda diya?!”

Sunil ne kaha,

“haan ja, ja Abhi aur thoda suna de ussko jaane se pehle”

Aur Abhi bus ke piche wale door se jump mara aur Ruhi ke paas pahuncha, Ruhi ne apna chehra dusri taraf mod liya jab dekha ke Abhi usske taraf badh raha hai….

Sirf koyi 3 minats mila Abhi ko Ruhi se baat karne ki kyunke tab tak Ruhi ki behen aur behnoy ne dekh liya ke Abhi Ruhi ke paas gaya hai to weh log badhne lage donon ke taraf aur Ruhi ki maa bhi aane lagi thi Abhi aur Ruhi ke taraf…… jo Abhi ne kiya uss waqt kissi ne bhi socha nahin tha ke wo sabke saamne open mein weisa karega… aur Ruhi ne bhi virodh nahin kiya aur Abhi ko karne diya jo wo karna chahta tha, magar sirf 3 minat mein sab hua…. Aisa laga ke jaise 3 seconds mein sab kuch ho gaya jaise ek pal mein sab hua….

Abhi ne pehle Ruhi ka haath thaama, wo ro rahi thi, bina kuch kahe Abhi ne Ruhi ke donon bazu ko usski bag sameth apne kaandhe par kiya, Ruhi ne apne baahon ko lapet liya Abhi ke kaandhe par aur Abhi ne ruhi se kaha,

“I want to hug you for a last time, don’t stop me please, send all others to hell, live this moment for me for a last time I beg of you Ruhi, if you ever loved me for one second don’t stop me….”

Ruhi roti gayi aur Abhi ne Ruhi ko zor se apne baahon mein jakra, aur bus se aur Ruhi ke family members se peeth kar liya Ruhi ko baahon mein jakre hue aur Ruhi ke thudi ko apne chehre ke taraf uthaya Abhi ne, uss pal ko Ruhi ne khudko completely samarpan kar diya Abhi ko aur apne aakhon ko band kar liya…. Ruhi ke aansoowon ne behte hue usski gaal par ek lakeer jaise khinch chuki thi, Abhi ne Ruhi ke honton par apna honth rakha aur donon ne ek dusre ko kiss kiya sare aam sabke saamne, yahan tak ke main road se koyi jaa raha tha to sab dekha hoga ke ek ladka aur ladki khada kiss kar rahe hein…..

Magar ek baat thi, buss mein se kissi ko wo kiss nazar nahin ayaa nah hi Ruhi ke kissi bhi parent ko kiss karte hue dikhe. Wo iss liye ke Abhi oonche kad ka tha aur ussne peeth kar liya tha unn sab logon se aur usska sar jhuka hua tha Ruhi ke chehre par buss piche se sirf aisa lag raha tha ke Abhi Ruhi ko baahon mein bhar ke hug kar raha hai…..

Kiss karte waqt Abhi ke munh mein Ruhi ke aansoo bhi jaa rahe the aur ussko namkeen taste ho raha tha aur Ruhi Abhi ke aanso taste kar rahi thi, donon ek dusre ke aansoo pee rahe the uss pal ko….Abhi ne unn sab ke paas aate hue kadmon ko sun raha tha to jaise jaise unn sab ke chalte hue kadam paas aane lage to Abhi ne kiss rok diya, aur sab saamne aaye to donon sirf ek dusre ke baahon meikn jakre hue the….

Jiss waqt Ruhi ka jeeb Abhi ke munh mein agaya tha, Ruhi ka rona stop ho gaya tha bilkool, aur wo Abhi ka kiss enjoy karne lagi thi aur ussne khud Abhi ko apne baahon mein bhar liya tha.

Magar jab Ruhi ki badi behen paas aagayi, aur Ruhi ki ma bhi paas aayi aur kaha,

“Ruhi tu itni besharam kaise ho sakti hai chorr ussko!”

Ruhi jaise kuch nahin sunn rahi thi, aur usske aankhon se phir aansoo behne lage to Abhi ne usske chehre mein dekhte hue dhire se kaha,

“This was your Christmas gift, you will remember this on ALL the next Christmas which will come in your life, and I know that you love me a lot but something is hindering you to accept my love… do not forget you will receive a new year card from me before the new year, I will no longer be here after today, its my last day here…. So please be back before 30th to receive my letter with the postman. I love you and will always do till the end of my life never forget that. Even if you get married to someone else my love for you will remain the same – even if I get married to someone else still my love for you will NEVER change, always remember this Ruhi. Farewell my love, don’t know if I will ever see you again, but I pray I do! Bye Ruhi”

Jab Abhi apna last, line bol raha tha usske aankkhon se thamne ka naam nahin le raha tha, abi ke honth thartharaa rahe the aur ruhi bhi jhar jhar behte aansoo se Abhi ke chehre mein dekhte hue ussko sun rahi thi…. Aur usski badi behen donon ke baahon ko ek dusre se chhurra rahi thi yeh kehte hue,

“chorro nah ek dusre ko dekho sab log dekh rahe hein kyun aise tamasha bana rahe ho tum donon!!”

Ruhi ki maa ne kaha,

“kia film ki shooting chal rahi hai yahan?!”

Aur Ruhi boli… Abhi ne nahin socha tha ke wo kuch jawaab degi; Ruhi ne apne aankh ko ponchte hue apni maa ko ek teerchi nazar se dekhte hue kaha,

“haan shooting chal rahi thi, aap ne nahin dekha?!”

Tab tak donon ek dusre ke baahon se alag ho gaye the magar donon ek dusre ke nazron ki gehraayi mein dekh rahe the aur phir Ruhi ki aankhen bhar aayi aur kaampte hue honthon se Ruhi ne bilak bilak kar Abhi se kaha,

“Bye Abhi, merry Christmas and happy new year to you, and I am really very very sorry for you, my heart will cry for you Abhi bye I am going Abhi!!”

Ruhi bahot zor se rote hue chal kar main road ke taraf badhi aur Abhi wahin baith gaya zameen par rote hue apne chehre ko apne haath mein thaam kar, aur jab bhi Ruhi mudhkar Abhi ko dekhti to wo aur zor se roti gayi….

Abhi ko aisa feel ho raha tha ke Ruhi bhaag kar wapas usske paas aegi, Abhi soch raha tha ke kyun Ruhi weisa nahin kar rahi, Abhi last moment tak ek aas lagaaye baitha raha ke Ruhi wapas aegi, nahin jaegi apne behen ke saath…. Magar Abhi ne tab khud se kaha ke yeh kissi movie ki climax scene nahin hai jo Ruhi bhaag kar usske paas wapas aati, yeh hakikat tha, aur Ruhi bilkool wapas nahin aayi balke chali gayi bus mein apni behen ke saath, usske ghar jisska pata Abhi ko bilkool nahin tha….

Abhi ne tab socha ke jaan bujh kar usske ghar walon ne ussko kaahin aur bhej diya varna Ruhi tut jaati Abhi ke pyar mein, agar wo yaha rehti to Abhi ussko convince kar leta aur sabko mana leta haan karne ke liye…..

Abhi kaam nahin kar paa raha tha, ussne Saeed se kaha ke ussko rest lena hoga wo kamzor feel karne laga tha, to saeed ne ussko jaa kar bus ke andar ek seat par araam karne ko kaha.

Sunil ne pucha,

“Abhi usske pita ne ki kaha tumse? Tum uss se baat karne gaye the nah kuch der pehle?”

Abhi ne apne sar ko thaame hue dabe awaaz mein jawaab diya,

“Ruhi ko apne saath lekar jaega S.Arabia”

Sunil ne kaha,

“namumkin, nahin ho sakta, jhoot kaha uss ne tumse.”

Abhi:”mujhe pata hai sab jhoot kaha yaar, kal usski maa ne yeh sab kaha tha mujhe, issi liye kal mujhe nahin milne diya Ruhi ke baap se taake weh log ussko seekha sake ke ussko kia bolna hai mujhe. Matlab saaf hai ke mujhko inkaar karna tha so kar diya sab ne Ruhi ke ilawa!!! Agar Ruhi mujhse pyar nahin karti to abhi uss tarah se mujhse sabke saamne lipat kar nahin roti, mujhe kiss nahin karti open mein aise!”

Tab sunil ne kaha,

“Ek baat bolun bhai, yeh family aise hi hein, khaas kar Ruhi ki maa, mere time mein bhi usne yehi kiya tha, yahan se Ruhi ki behen ko bhej diya tha apni nani ke yahan, usska mangitar uss se wahan milne jata tha yahan nahin…. Ruhi ki maa kissi par bharosa nahin karti, ussko darr thi ke kahin main Ruhi ki behen ko uda na le jaun kabhi! Ab dekho ussne tumse Ruhi ko bhi alag kar diya, yahan se door kar diya taake tum ussko aur nah apne pyar mein jakar sako. Isska matlab saaf hai ke Ruhi tumse pyar karti hai aur ghar mein Ruhi ne awaaz uthaayi hogi aur kaha hoga ke wo tumse shaadi karegi issi liye usski maa ne usko yahan se hatta diya!”

Baithe baithe Abhi Ruhi ko yaad karte hue phir rone laga…. Saeed ne aur baaki ke logon ne dekha, sab udaas the, sabko khush hona chahiye ta kyunke aakhri din tha kaam par, sab Khushi ke saath finish karna tha magar Abhi ke rone se, aur Ruhi ke chale jaane se ek maatam jaisa chhah gaya tha wahan….. jiss din se uss bus mein kaam shuru hua uss din se Abhi Ruhi ki love story shuru hui…. Jaise jaise bus banta gaya weise weise Abhi Ruhi ka pyar badhta gaya bus ke saath… hona yeh chahiye the ke jab bus ban gayi tab Abhi aur Ruhi ki mangni ya shaadi honi chahiye the matlab donon ka pyar official hona chahiye tha – yeh Abhi ne aisa hi likha tha apne diary mein.

Saeed ne Abhi ko phir rote suna to kaha, “Abhi phir se? are ruk ja dekh sab log tumko dekh rahe rahe hein, idhar aa meri madad kar issko fix karne mein… yaar aaj bhi late raat tak kaam karna hai kia, chal aa khatam karte hein nah!”

Mehboob ne kaha,

“are mujhe nahin pata tha tu to bada rotlu nikla Abhi, main tujhe mard samajhta tha!”

Abhi ko Mehboob se nafrat ho gaya tha jab se Ruhi ne ussko bataya tha ke wo usske pyar ke khilaaf hai, to Mehboob ko Abhi ne jawaab diya,

“kyun mard ko dard nahin hota? Mard ke aansoo nahin hote to ankhen fodh dena chahiye bina aansoo ke aankh hein to!!”

Ruhi chali gayi, Abhi ki khushiyon ko apne saath lekar, aur chorr gayi thi Abhi ke liye, dard, udaasi, gham, tanhaayi, akelapan, aur aansoo.

Abhi ko kaam jaari rakhna tha aur asaan nahin tha usske liye uss haal mein kaam karna, uss haalaat ko face karna…. Abhi ne khud ko bahot mushkilon se sambhaalte hue apne kaam mein dhyan diya, kaam karna shuru to kiya magar reh reh kar Ruhi ki yaadon mein chalajata aur achanak se ro padhta…. Ussne uss din ko achanak yaad kiya jiss din Ruhi ke chaati mein apne sar daalkar usski khushbhoo sungh raha tha, ab bhi ussko Ruhi ki wo khushbhoo mehek rahe the… hamara zehen bhi ajib o gharib computer hai jo sab apne memory mein save rakhta hai yahan tak ke ek khushbhoo jo kitne din piche naak se sungh kar zehen mein gaya tha aaj bhi yaad karne se wo khushbhoo yaad ata hai…. Sirf Ruhi ki jism ki uss khushbhoo ko yaad karke Abhi ro baitha…. Phir sambhala khudko aur kaam karne laga…..

Ruhi ki maa ko afsos ho raha tha Abhi ke liye. Wo abhi ko kaafi der se dekh rahi thi, aur wo khud emotional ho gayi thi Abhi ko dekh kar aur usske dard ko samajh kar…. wo jaanti thi ke Abhi iss waqt kiss dard se guzar raha hoga…..

Shaam ke 6 baj chuke the, kaam jaari tha, Ruhi ki maa ne Abhi se pucha,

“Naaraaz ho?

Abhi ne kaha,

“bilkool nahin, udaas hoon haan, ghum mein dooba hua hoon haan magar naraz nahin hoon”

Aur Ruhi ki maa ne kuch aise baatein kahe Abhi se jiss se Abhi ko thoda sukoon mila, ussko ek umeed ki kiran phir se dikhaayi diye…

Ruhi ki maa ne kaha,

“Hum ne khaas kar iss liye aap ki proposal ko accept nahin kiya kyun ke aap jo kaam kar rahe ho yeh permanent kaam nahin hai, yeh kaam aaj hai to kal nahin, aaj yahan se kaam end hoga to kia karoge? Jab tak dusra kaam nahin milta bekaar rahoge nah? issi liye! Mere cousins aur nephews hein jo yeh kaam karte hein aur aksar bekaar rehte hein, unemployed hein, mujhe apni Ruhi ki fikar hai Abhi.”

Abhi ne heirat se ussko dekha aur kaha,

“Oh my God! Yehi vajah thi ki aap ne accept nahin kiya?”

Ruhi ki maa: “haan Abhi buss issi liye”

Abhi ke dimaagh mein kuch chal raha tha uss waqt aur ussne pucha,

“Aur agar main kal koyi aur behtar kaam kar raha hunga tab?!”

Ruhi ki maa: “dekho Abhi, kal ko agar tum koyi behtar kaam kar rahe ho aur tab tak Ruhi ki shadi nahin hui hogi tab hum zaroor consider karenge tumhare proposal ko!”

Abhi ko bahot araam mila aur pucha,

“Ruhi aaj wapas nahin aegi?”

Ruhi ki maa ne kaha,

“Nahin wo apne chacha ke ghar rahegi aur supermarket mein help karegi kyunke tumko pata hi hoga ke sheher mein kitne bhidh baadh hote hein Christmas aur new year ke mauke par, late night shopping hote hein to kaam bahut ziada hote hein to Ruhi help karegi apne chacha ko, Manoj bhi wahin kaam karta hai nah har roz…”

Abhi ne yaad kiya ke haan ek baar Manoj ne usse bataya tha ke wo ek supermarket mein kaam karta hai, ek chhota sa self service tha naam tha supermarket. To Abhi ne pucha,

“To Ruhi kab ghar wapas aegi ab?”

Jawaab diya usski maa ne,

“Sunday ko aegi, magar New Year ko wahin rahegi shayad.”

Abhi ne tab pucha,

“Aur wo supermarket kidhar hai exactly?”

Ruhi ki maa ne exact address de diya ke Royal cinema ke paas hai….

Ab wo sheher Abhi ke ghar se ziada door nahin tha aur Abhi udhar aksar jata tha aur ussko exactly pata tha royal cinema kahan hai kyunke uss cinema hall mein Abhi kayi baar movie dekhne gaya hai, Abhi uss jagah ko bahot achhi tarah pehchaanta tha…

Abhi ne socha ke kyun Ruhi ki maa ne ussko saare information de diye Ruhi ke baare mein ke kahan reh rahi hai, kahan supermarket hai, matlab wo chahti hai ke abhi uss se udhar milne jaaye…. Jab usski beti aur Abhi milkar rone lage the to uss se dekha nah gaya aur shayad ab pachta rahi thi donon ko juda karke aur ab chahhti thi ke Abhi uss se udhar jaa kar mile….

Abhi bahot khush hua aur ab relax feel karne laga tha. To phir Abhi ab normal kaam karne laga.

Aaj bhi kal raat ki tarah Mehboob ke ghar dinner kiya gaya. Abhi kitna chahta tha ke Ruhi wahan hoti, kal bhi raat ko dinner kiye the sab to Ruhi nahin thi aur aaj bhi nahin hai….

Jab Abhi washroom jaa raha tha wash karne dinner se pehle to Mahesh ne Abhi ko awaaz diya,

“hey Abhi?!”

Abhi ne mudhkar dekha to Mahesh ne kaha,

“udhar andhera hai idhar aao hamare kitchen ke basin ke paas haath dho lo”

Magar Abhi ne kaha ke thik hai chalta hai, par Mahesh ne zid kiya ke wo wahan aakar haath dhoe… to Abhi gaya Ruhi ki kitchen mein aaj dusri baar gaya tha, magar aaj Ruhi ke bina gaya tha wahan… basin ke paas saboon se apne haath dhoya Abhi ne, aur khayaalon mein sochne laga ke kitne baar ussne Ruhi ko uss basin ke paas bartan dhote hue dekha hai… kitna khush hota wo agar aaj Ruhi yahin hoti, to kitni khush wo bhi hoti Abhi ko apne kitchen mein ek baar aur dekh kar….

Haath dhone ke baad Abhi ne uss table ko kiss kiya aur table se baat kiya, ek sandesha chorra Abhi ne uss table se ke wo Ruhi ko bata de ke Abhi aya tha idhar aur ussko kiss send kiya hai.

Dinner ke baad kaam chalu raha aur Abhi Ruhi ko bahot miss karne laga…. Raton mein iskh ka bhoot ziada chadhta hai, kal raat bhi Ruhi nahin thi aaj bhi nahin aur Abhi par ishk ka bhoot sawaar tha…tadap raha tha wo Ruhi ko yaad karte hue….

Jab se Abhi Christmas eve ki night celebrate karna shuru kiya hai doston ke beech aaj pehli baar tha ke iss raat ko Abhi kaam kar raha tha jiss waqt ussko sheher mein ghumna, mauj masti karna chahiye tha…. aur Abhi ne socha iss waqt Ruhi supermarket mein hogi kyunke late night shopping hota tha iss raat ko….

Raat ko 12 baje kaam finish hua… bus COMPLETE HO GAYA… aur start kiya gaya aur khud Mehboob ne drive kiya… George saath tha, sunil, aur baaki ke sab saath the bus mein….

Abhi ne Rahima ke paas ek message chorra Ruhi ke liye, Abhi ne Rahima se kaha,

“pleae Ruhi ko mera sandesha pahucha dena, kehna ke main ne ussko merry xmas wish kiya aur kehna ke jaise ke ussne mujhe kaha main bahot patience rakhunga”

Manoj wapas agaya tha kaam se, aur wo bhi bus mein aya. Abhi ko aur 40 bus ke photos diye…., Abhi ne ussko pay kiya… Aur road par bus ki kayi aur photos liya ussne jo Abhi ko baad mein dega ussne kaha.

Mehboob khud drive karte hue Abhi ke team ko wapas ghar chorrne ja raha tha, bus almost bhara hua tha, bus mein Rahima, Farzina, Reza, sunil, George, sunil ka assistant, Manoj, Mahesh, George ka apprentice, aur Reza ke behnein bhare hue the Sirf Ruhi ki kami thi bus mein…. Kamaal hai Abhi ne socha, agar aaj wo hoti to wo bhi saath baithti Abhi ke saath bus mein wahan se 40 kms tak drive karte hue Abhi ke ghar tak jaati aur Abhi ka ghar bhi dekh leti….. magar afsos!

Jab bus Abhi ke ghar ke saamne ruka to Mehboob aur Reza ne kaha

“Achah to Abhi yahan rehta hai wo raha usska ghar… hmmm!!”

Subha ke 1 baj chuka tha jab Abhi ne apna diary khola aur likhna shuru kiya….. phir sone gaya to usska takiya bheeg gaya itna wo ro raha tha Ruhi ko sochte hue ……

To be continued….. (5700 words from both updates)

Kitna rulaoge Casi bhai? Kitne dinon se rula rahe ho? May be 6 last update se sirf rona jaari hai iss thread par.
Lekhak to aap kamaal ka ho hi, itni achi script, itna bada update 570p words magar pura ke pura sad painful dard se bhapur, itna bada emotional update likhte kaise ho ye jaanna hai mujhe. Saare scenes aur situations original hai nah kabhi dekha na suna nah kabhi padha.
Itni achi aur badhya plot aur kahani aap ko sujha kaise bhai? Hats off bhai.
Ab aata hun update par. Main ne last review mein kaha nah ke Ruhi Abhi se bahut pyar karti hai, dekha nah main ne sahi kaha varna sabke saamne Abhi ko iss tarah se gale nahin milti nahin roti Abhi ke gale lag ke, aur rote hue nahin kehti ke main jaa rahi hoon Abhi. ..... kitna sad aur emotional tha wo bichadne wala scene yaar. Kaise create kiya aap ne itna badhya scene casi bhai? :boe:
Mujhe magar asha ki kiran dikhayi diye jab khud Abhi ki maa ko pachtawa hua aur saB bak diya mummy ji ne ke Ruhi kahan thehregi aur address de diya usski chacha ke shop ka jahan Ruhi ka bhai Manoj kaam karta hai aur Ruhi bhi wahin hogi help karne ko.
Kyun de diya mummy ne pata?
Kia chahti hai wo ke Abhi jaakar mile Ruhi se? Jitna donon ki juda karna chahti hai utna hi apne aap ussne bak diya..
Abhi ka aakhri din aur raat dukhdai raha uss aangan mein afsos ke jaisa Abhi chahta tha ke last day end ho vaisa nahin hua.
Aakhir bus ban gayi, magar Abhi ka pyar nahin ban paaya very very sad.

 

[kamdev99008]

casinar bhai.....................ab to kahani aise mod par hai

ki

mein koi review hi nahin de sakta

ruhi ka hi pata nahin ki wo kya chahti hai.................kabhi haan...kabhi naa
aur abhi.... wo khud to chhodo......... ruhi ke kahne par bhi patience nahin rakh pa raha
aisa hota hai........... pyar mein ..............khone ka dar

ruhi ki maa ne jo logic diya..... abhi ke kam ki wajah se proposal reject karne ka
wo sahi bhi ho sakta hai
aur bahana bhi........... kisi aur wajah ko chhupane ka

ab ............abhi na sahi.....
lekin mein....mein patience rakhunga
faisla hone tak..... aar ya paar

keep it up dear bro

 

[Amity]

Update 37 The Last Day & Night In Ruhi’s Aangan​

Wednesday 24th December – Christmas Eve.

Abhi ne iss din ke liye apni diary mein likha hai:

It has been the last and worst day and night in Ruhi’s yard.

Subha subha Ruhi ki maa Abhi ke saath hanss rahi thi. Aur Abhi ko Ruhi nazar aayi kitchen ke andar. Aaj Ruhi ek nayi nightdress mein thi. Ek khubsurat nightdress jo safed thi aur uss par bade bade red, black aur green dots the. Ruhi dada ji ke armchair par baithi hui thi.

Abhi ne usski maa se baat ki. Aur uss aurat ne iss baar kaha,

“Sorry Abhi, Ruhi ke papa ne ussko iss baar apne saath Saudi Arabia lejaane ka faisla kiya hai!!”

Abhi ko itna ghussa aya ke usska mann kiya ke ussko gaaliyon se nehla de ussi waqt. Abhi ne socha issi liye wo kal hi Ruhi ke baap se bat karna chahta tha iss se pehle ke Ruhi ki maa khud koyi bahana bana kar apne pati ke munh mein koyi baat khud nah daal de…. Abhi samajh gaya ke kal raat ko Ruhi ki maa ne khud sab kuch bata diya hoga apne pati ko ke Abhi Ruhi se pyar karta hai magar ussko Rishta nahin passand kyunke ussko Abhi ka kaam nahin passand, to apne pati se keh diya hoga ke aaj wo ladka aap se Ruhi ka haath mangega to aap mana kar dena…..

Abhi issi liye nahin chahta tha ke koyi aur Ruhi ke pita se baat kare issi liye wo sabse pehle baat karna chahta tha Ruhi ke pita se kal raat ko…..

Abhi sab kuch apne dimaagh mein rewind karte hue soch raha tha aur samajhne ki koshish kar raha tha ke jiss din Ruhi gayi thi apne nani ke ghar tabhi se Ruhi berukhi se pesh ane lagi Abhi ke saath, aur kal raat ko isi baat ke liye Ruhi ke papa ko bhi legaye sab wahan aur issi baare mein baat kiye gaye honge aur sabne milkar decide kiya hoga ke Abhi ko yeh jawaab de diya jaaye ke Ruhi ke pita Ruhi ko apne saath lekar jaa raha hai iss baar….. Abhi ko puri film dikh gayi usske dimaagh mein… to Abhi ne Ruhi ki maa se kaha,

“koyi mujhko laakhon rupay bhi dede nah to main yakeen nahin karunga? Saudi Arabia mein koyi apni beti ko lejata hai? Ladki ko? Unn vehshi, tharki Arab logon ke beech? Aap mujhko ullo samajhte ho nah aunty? Thik hai wohi samajhiye aap mujhe….”

Ruhi ki maa ne kaha,

“tum khud puchlo agar yakeen nahin hai to!”

Abhi: “puchunga to ab wo to yehi kahega nah? sab mile hue hein iss mein koyi shak nahin, jo aap ne ussko kehne ko kaha wohi kahega wo…. Zaahir si baat hai.”

Din bhar Abhi ranjh o ghum mein raha. Usski maansik stithi normal nahin raha din bhar….. ussko saans lene mein takliff hota raha baar baar….. Ruhi dikhi ussko kayi baar magar baat karna naamumkin tha….

Aur din ke 2.30 ko Abhi ko pata chala ke Ruhi ki badi behen ussko apne saath lekar jaa rahi hai, Ruhi apni behen ke ghar kuch dinon ko beetaane ke liye jaa rahi thi…. Abhi ko zabardast jhatka laga ye khabar sunkar…. Usska uss aangan mein aakhri din tha aur wo chahta tha ke Ruhi ko wo jee bhar ke dekhe aur mauka milne par uss se baat kare apna pyar ka waasta de Ruhi ko…. Magar jab suna ke Ruhi jaa rahi hai to Abhi jaise tut gaya… Farzina ne Abhi ko bataya ke Ruhi apni badi behen ke saath jaa rahi hai, ab pata nahin ke Ruhi ne khud farzinah ko yeh kehne liye bheja tha ya nahin, Abhi ko shak tha ke khud Ruhi ne hi Farzinah ko kaha tha Abhi ko jaakar bataane ke liye ke wo jaa rahi hai…. Abhi ko shcok laga, shock par shock, dard par dard, Abhi ki sehen shakti kum hote dikhaayi diye….magar ussko abhi aur bhi bada shock jhelna baaki tha…

Bus ke andar se Ruhi ki khidki dikhta tha, aur Ruhi baal banaate hue dikh rahi thi, jaise Ruhi jaan bujh kar Abhi to dikha rahi thi taake Abhi ko pata chale ke wo jaa rahi hai. Abhi ke paas ek hi mauka aur ek hi raasta tha ke wo wahan jaaye uss khidki ke paas aur ek AAKHRI baar wahan se Ruhi se baat kare…

Abhi ne kaam ko maara goli aur gaya Ruhi ke khidki ke paas…. Ussne dekha Ruhi ne uss yellow suit ko pehna hua tha jiss mein uss din apni maa ke saath apni nani ke yahan gayi thi, halki si make mein thi aur kayamat lag rahi thi… usski maa wahin thi aur Ruhi khudko aine mein dekh rahi thi baal banaate hue…. Abhi ne ek book diya tha Ruhi ko koyi 20 din pehle, to Abhi ne kaha,

“hey Ruhi, mera kitab….” Abhi ki awaaz nahin nikal rahi thi… Ruhi ne nahin suna aur usskki maa ne Ruhi se kaha,

“Wo apna kitab mang raha hai Ruhi”

Ruhi ne thoda chahunkte hue kaha,

“Are haan, main to bilkool hi bhool gayi thi ke ek aap ki kitaab mere paas hai itne dinon se, sorry abhi laayi!”

Ruhi ne uss book ko Abhi ko wapas kiya.

Abhi bahot bahot udaas tha,wo kamzor dikh raha tha, lagta tha bimaar hai. Phir bhi Abhi ne pucha,

“Ruhi kia decide kiya tumne?!”

Ruhi ne kaha,

“Be Patient Abhi!”

Abhi ne ek gehri saans lete hue kaha,

“Abhi issi waqt tum mujhse aise baat kar rahi ho jaise hum ajnabee hein, tum jaise badal gayi ho, jaise tum meri Ruhi nahin koyi aur ho, kyun Ruhi, kal to itna royi thi jab mujhe choat lagi thi nah, tab bhi tum nahin samjhi mere dil ka haal Ruhi?”

Ruhi zor se hanssi…. Wo ek hanssi nahin thi kuch aur tha, wo Abhi ko aur ziada hurt karne ki ek tamacha tha Abhi ke gaal par.

Ruhi ne tab ek chewing gum ke do tukde kiye aur ek tudka Abhi ko diya aur dusra tukda apne munh mein le liya….. wo chewing wo tha jo Ruhi chabaati thi jab Abhi ko piche kiss karne jaati thi…. ek din Ruhi ek chewing chabah rahi thi aur Ruhi ko kiss karte waqt, Abhi ne Ruhi ke munh se usski chewing gum ko apne munh mein le liya tha….. uss roz donon ne phir chewing gum par baat kiye the aur uss din ko bhi Ruhi ne aise hi ek tudka chewing gum diya tha Abhi ko….. aur aaj apni maa ke saamne ussne wohi kiya…… kyun aisa kiya tha Ruhi ne? kyun puraane yaadon ko taaza kar rahi thi ab?! Magar Abhi ko passand aya tha ke Ruhi ne ussko aadha chewing gum diya….

Abhi ka Ruhi ke saath yeh akhri conversation ho raha tha. Abhi ke samajh mein nahin araha tha ke ab wo Ruhi se kia kahe. Sab kuch jaise ulat phulat ho gaya tha, sab bigar gaya tha, jo kuch Abhi ne socha tha kuch bhi veisa nahin ho raha tha sirf iss liye ke Ruhi to jaa rahi thi…. Ulta Abhi ne socha tha aaj wo khud jaega, aaj usska last din hoga wahan aur ussne bahot kuch socha tha ke kaam finish karne ke baad wo Ruhi se baat karne jaega chaahe ghanton bhar hi kyun nah sahhi magar aaj wo apne dil ka haal bayan karta Ruhi se, uske parents se, sab se rokar Ruhi ka haath maangta magar ab Ruhi hi nahin rahegi to kia karega…. Abhi ke paas ab shabd nahin baaki tha kehne ke liye….

Abhi soch raha the ke sirf Ruhi yeh keh deti ke wo Abhi se pyar karti hai aur uss se shaadi karna chahti hai to koyi inkaar nahin karte. Magar ab to lag aisa raha tha ke Ruhi khud nahin chahti thi kyukne wo buss wo buss “NAHIN, NO,” kehti jaa rahi thi.

Abhi ne Ruhi se kaha,

“Ab ‘NO’ keh rahi ho Ruhi, kia Christmas ka tohfa diya aaj tumne mujhko Ruhi!”

Ruhi ne chehre par bina koyi afsos ya ghum dikhaate hue kaha,

“I am very sorry for you Abhi”

Abhi ne kaha,

“kia tum apne papa se nahin keh sakti ke tum bhi mujhe chahti ho?!”

Ruhi ne fake Muskaan mein jawaab diya,

“magar main khud desh chorr rahi hoon nah Abhi!”

Abhi ne kaha,

“Okay main intezaar karunga tumhare lautne ka.”

Tab Ruhi ki badi behen ne kaha,

“kab tak? Aap kab tak intezaar karoge isska?”

Abhi: “100 saalon tak!”

Badi behen khamosh ho gayi.

Abhi ne Ruhi ki maa se Ruhi ki father ko bulane ko kaha. Ruhi ki maa ne usse bulaya, baap aaya aur sach mein ek hasmukh chehre wala insaan tha, wo aakar Ruhi ki bed par baitha Abhi ko dekhte hue, aur Abhi ne ussko samjhaya, ke wo aur Ruhi kitna ek dusre se pyar karte hein….. jab Abhi sab keh raha tha Ruhi ke pita se uss waqt Ruhi aine ke saamne khadi khud ko sanwaar rahi thi magar baar baar Abhi ko bhi dekh rahi thi ussko usski pita se baat karte hue….

Ruhi ke pita ne Abhi ko jo jawaab diya wo 100% fake tha, jissko sunkar Abhi samajh gaya ke wo saare baatein banawati the aur Ruhi ki maa ne wo sab kehne ke liye kaha tha ussko. Baap ne Abhi se kaha,

“Dekho main pehle se plan kar chuka hoon ke Ruhi ko apne saath leja raha hoon iss baar, aur phir uss ladke ko hum ne zuban de diya hai wo France mein hai aur wapas aakar Ruhi ko lejaega!”

Tab Ruhi ne Abhi ke taraf dekhte hue kaha,

“Dekha? Main ne kaha tha magar aap yakeen nahin kar rahe the!”

Abhi ne apne dil ke andar khud se kaha,

“Tu bhi jhooti hai Ruhi, jiss din tumne apni virginity wali baat bataayi thi tab to kaha tha ke wo saare abroad wale ladke wali baatein jhoot the, aur ab keh rahi ho ke sach hai…”

Phir Abhi ne Ruhi ke pita se kaha,

“Dekhiye agar main aap se kahun ke main wait karunga, ke iss baar jab aap Ruhi ke saath wapas aao tab aunga, chahe aur 3 saal lag jaye main Ruhi ka intezaar karunga to?”

Baap ne kaha,

“Magar Ruhi ko wo France se lene aega nah, hum ne ussko pehle zuban de diye hain!”

Ruhi ne tab Abhi se apne donon eyebrows uchkaaya kuch iss tarah ke jaise Abhi haar gaya aur wo aur usske pita jeey gaye, aur phir Ruhi ne kaha,

“Dekho Abhi, aap ko bahot saare khubsurat ladkiyan mil jaenge, aap handsome ho, intelligent ho, tez ho, main koyi rani maharani nahin, mujh mein kuch aisa nahin hai ke aap ko sirf main hi chahiye, main bahot buri hoon pucho meri maa se ke main kitni buri ladki hoon!”

Ruh ki maa ne turant Ruhi ki baat par haami bharte hue kaha,

“haan Ruhi bahot hi buri ladki hai”

Abhi ne ussko turant jawaab diya,

“main Ruhi ko kissi tarah se bhi accept karta hoon!”

Usski badi behen ne kaha,

“aap wait karte karte thak jaoge, bore ho jaoge aur aap ko koyi aur mil jaegi dekh lena!”

Abhi ke honth thartharaane lage the kyunke ussko ab dikh gaya tha ke Ruhi to haath se gayi ab…. Usske aankhon se paani behne hi wala tha, ke Abhi ne sar niche jhukaya…. Ruhi ko pata chal gaya ke Abhi ab rone wala hai, to usski bhi aankhen badh aayi, maa, baap, badi behen sab Aabhi ke chehre mein khamosh ghaur se dekh rahe the, sab ko pata tha wo tut chuka hai aur ab ro padega…

Abhi ne sar jhukaaye hue hi kaha,

“okay”

Aur mudh gaya jaane ke liye, to Ruhi ki maa ne ussko awaaz di, Abhi wapas mudha, apne chehre ko uss kitab se chhupaate aur aankh ponchte hue,

Ruhi ke papa ne kaha,

“ghussa mat hona, sorry.”

Abhi ne kaha,

“koyi baat nahin”

Sab ke nazrein Abhi ke chehre par the, sab ko pata tha Abhi ko jhatka laga hai aur ussko bahot dard ho raha hoga, sab ko Abhi ke chehre mein wo ghum, wo dukh dikh raha tha, sab ko pata tha Abhi ke aakhen bhar aaye hein, aur sab ko yeh bhi pata tha ke Abhi apne emotions ko chhupaane ki koshish kar raha hai aur book se apna munh chhupa raha hai….. Ruhi ka brother-in-law khud Abhi ko uss tarah se tutte hue dekh kar heyraan tha aur Abhi ke chehre mein bahot dard bhare chehre se dekhe jaa raha tha….. Ruhi ki badi behen ke aankhen bhar aaye, Ruhi ki maa ke aankhen bhar aaye…. Magar iss baar Ruhi ki aankhen nahin bari thi, aur Ruhi ne Abhi se kaha,

“LOOK ABHI, I AM REALLY VERY SORRY FOR YOU, I MEANT IT, MY HEART FEELS IT FOR YOU ABHI. WISH YOU MUCH COURAGE AND PATIENCE ABHI.”

Abhi ne Ruhi ko halki si Muskaan se dekha aur tapakte aansoowon se usske chehre mein dekhte hue kaha.

“The deception does exist right? So, its okay, never mind Ruhi, you be happy always, that’s all I can wish for you!”

Abhi wapas bus mein jaa baitah aur rone laga, rokna namumkin tha….. ek baar to zor se roya…. Bus ke sabhi kaam karne waale Abhi ke paas aa gaye, koyi usske sar thapthapa, koyi usske peeth par haatyh ferrta, koyi ussko paani deta, sab ussko shant karaane mein lage hue tha…. Mehboob bhi wahin tha, aur wo bhi Abhi ko support karne ka dhong kar raha tha….. Abhi khud ko rokne ki koshish mein laga hua tha magar nahin kar paa raha tha, rona ruk hi nahin raha tha usska

Koyi 30 mins baad Abhi chhup hua aur jo kaam karna baaki tha uss mein lag gaya phir bhi baar baar ro deta tha kaam karte hue…. Pata nahin kia kia soch soch kar rone lagta…..

Aur aayi wo waqt jo Abhi ke liye kayamat se kum nahin tha….

To be continued in the next post immediately….

Heartbreaking to the extreme.
Oh my God.
How is Abhi bearing so much pain. Poor Abhi.
What does Ruhi's parent want then? Are they looking for a real prince for Ruhi?
They are lying this is obvious. The father is a cool person but is a yes man no doubt.
But why Ruhi did not raise her voice?
Why she is also telling Abhi all that her parents are saying?
Why is she siding with her parents? There must be something behind all these.
I think either there is someone at her grandmother's place who is preventing Ruhi and family to accept Abhi or the parents are squarely against the union.
What does it mean when a girl gives a boy a chewing gum? It has a certain meaning, does Ruhi know that?
They all refused Abhi who wept and went back in the bus to continue his work but is it possible to work in such a condition?
Poor Abhi . My heart aches for him.

 

[king cobra]

Itna bada bada update

 

[Amity]

Update 38 Ruhi Leaves – Completion Of The Bus​

Ruhi aur baaki ke jaane wale log ghar se nikle; usski badi behen, behnoy, unnke do bache….. Ruhi bus ke paas se guzarte hue teen baar bus ke andar Abhi ko dhunda apne nazron se… bus mein karib 10 log the uss waqt to Ruhi ko dhundna para, aur jab usski nazar Abhi par pari to ussne turant sar niche jhuka liya. Usski haath mein ek halki si bag thi aur kaandhe par usskki handbag.... Abhi se dekha nahin jaa raha tha, usske dil par uss waqt kia guzar raha tha bayaan karna mushkil tha….

Ruhi ki badi behen aur behnoy bachchon ke saath ruk gaye kissi se baat karne ko, aur Ruhi apni cousin ke ghar tak reach hui thi aur ruk kar apne badi behen ka wait karne lagi…. Uss waqt Ruhi ki nazrein bus mein Abhi ko dhund rahe the; aur Abhi ne khud ko sunil ke piche chhupaye hue Ruhi ko dekh raha tha, Sunil ne kaha,

“Abhi wo tumko dhund rahi hai saamne to aa!”

Abhi ne Sunil ke piche se kaha,

“kia faeda yaar?!”

Sunil: “are yaar kia pata ussko kuch kehna hai idhar aa”

Aur Sunil hatt gaya taake Ruhi Abhi ko dekh sake, ab donon aamne saamne the… Abhi ka chehra utra hua tha, aankhen sujh gaye, saaf dikh raha tha… Ruhi bahot udaas chehre se Abhi ke chehre mein dekhti rahi, phir Ruhi se dekha nah gaya, ussne aasmaan mein dekha, phir nazrein niche kar liya aur usske aansoo behne lage Abhi ke liye…. Abhi Ruhi ko nahin dekh paa raha tha agar dekhta rehta to khud rone lagta to Abhi ne chehre mudh liya, aur khud ko phir se Sunil ke piche kar liya tab dekha Ruhi ke taraf to dekha ke Ruhi ussko phir dhund rahi hai rote hue….. Abhi ne sunil se pucha,

“main jaun uss se puchne ke ab kyun ro rahi hai jab mujhko thukda diya?!”

Sunil ne kaha,

“haan ja, ja Abhi aur thoda suna de ussko jaane se pehle”

Aur Abhi bus ke piche wale door se jump mara aur Ruhi ke paas pahuncha, Ruhi ne apna chehra dusri taraf mod liya jab dekha ke Abhi usske taraf badh raha hai….

Sirf koyi 3 minats mila Abhi ko Ruhi se baat karne ki kyunke tab tak Ruhi ki behen aur behnoy ne dekh liya ke Abhi Ruhi ke paas gaya hai to weh log badhne lage donon ke taraf aur Ruhi ki maa bhi aane lagi thi Abhi aur Ruhi ke taraf…… jo Abhi ne kiya uss waqt kissi ne bhi socha nahin tha ke wo sabke saamne open mein weisa karega… aur Ruhi ne bhi virodh nahin kiya aur Abhi ko karne diya jo wo karna chahta tha, magar sirf 3 minat mein sab hua…. Aisa laga ke jaise 3 seconds mein sab kuch ho gaya jaise ek pal mein sab hua….

Abhi ne pehle Ruhi ka haath thaama, wo ro rahi thi, bina kuch kahe Abhi ne Ruhi ke donon bazu ko usski bag sameth apne kaandhe par kiya, Ruhi ne apne baahon ko lapet liya Abhi ke kaandhe par aur Abhi ne ruhi se kaha,

“I want to hug you for a last time, don’t stop me please, send all others to hell, live this moment for me for a last time I beg of you Ruhi, if you ever loved me for one second don’t stop me….”

Ruhi roti gayi aur Abhi ne Ruhi ko zor se apne baahon mein jakra, aur bus se aur Ruhi ke family members se peeth kar liya Ruhi ko baahon mein jakre hue aur Ruhi ke thudi ko apne chehre ke taraf uthaya Abhi ne, uss pal ko Ruhi ne khudko completely samarpan kar diya Abhi ko aur apne aakhon ko band kar liya…. Ruhi ke aansoowon ne behte hue usski gaal par ek lakeer jaise khinch chuki thi, Abhi ne Ruhi ke honton par apna honth rakha aur donon ne ek dusre ko kiss kiya sare aam sabke saamne, yahan tak ke main road se koyi jaa raha tha to sab dekha hoga ke ek ladka aur ladki khada kiss kar rahe hein…..

Magar ek baat thi, buss mein se kissi ko wo kiss nazar nahin ayaa nah hi Ruhi ke kissi bhi parent ko kiss karte hue dikhe. Wo iss liye ke Abhi oonche kad ka tha aur ussne peeth kar liya tha unn sab logon se aur usska sar jhuka hua tha Ruhi ke chehre par buss piche se sirf aisa lag raha tha ke Abhi Ruhi ko baahon mein bhar ke hug kar raha hai…..

Kiss karte waqt Abhi ke munh mein Ruhi ke aansoo bhi jaa rahe the aur ussko namkeen taste ho raha tha aur Ruhi Abhi ke aanso taste kar rahi thi, donon ek dusre ke aansoo pee rahe the uss pal ko….Abhi ne unn sab ke paas aate hue kadmon ko sun raha tha to jaise jaise unn sab ke chalte hue kadam paas aane lage to Abhi ne kiss rok diya, aur sab saamne aaye to donon sirf ek dusre ke baahon meikn jakre hue the….

Jiss waqt Ruhi ka jeeb Abhi ke munh mein agaya tha, Ruhi ka rona stop ho gaya tha bilkool, aur wo Abhi ka kiss enjoy karne lagi thi aur ussne khud Abhi ko apne baahon mein bhar liya tha.

Magar jab Ruhi ki badi behen paas aagayi, aur Ruhi ki ma bhi paas aayi aur kaha,

“Ruhi tu itni besharam kaise ho sakti hai chorr ussko!”

Ruhi jaise kuch nahin sunn rahi thi, aur usske aankhon se phir aansoo behne lage to Abhi ne usske chehre mein dekhte hue dhire se kaha,

“This was your Christmas gift, you will remember this on ALL the next Christmas which will come in your life, and I know that you love me a lot but something is hindering you to accept my love… do not forget you will receive a new year card from me before the new year, I will no longer be here after today, its my last day here…. So please be back before 30th to receive my letter with the postman. I love you and will always do till the end of my life never forget that. Even if you get married to someone else my love for you will remain the same – even if I get married to someone else still my love for you will NEVER change, always remember this Ruhi. Farewell my love, don’t know if I will ever see you again, but I pray I do! Bye Ruhi”

Jab Abhi apna last, line bol raha tha usske aankkhon se thamne ka naam nahin le raha tha, abi ke honth thartharaa rahe the aur ruhi bhi jhar jhar behte aansoo se Abhi ke chehre mein dekhte hue ussko sun rahi thi…. Aur usski badi behen donon ke baahon ko ek dusre se chhurra rahi thi yeh kehte hue,

“chorro nah ek dusre ko dekho sab log dekh rahe hein kyun aise tamasha bana rahe ho tum donon!!”

Ruhi ki maa ne kaha,

“kia film ki shooting chal rahi hai yahan?!”

Aur Ruhi boli… Abhi ne nahin socha tha ke wo kuch jawaab degi; Ruhi ne apne aankh ko ponchte hue apni maa ko ek teerchi nazar se dekhte hue kaha,

“haan shooting chal rahi thi, aap ne nahin dekha?!”

Tab tak donon ek dusre ke baahon se alag ho gaye the magar donon ek dusre ke nazron ki gehraayi mein dekh rahe the aur phir Ruhi ki aankhen bhar aayi aur kaampte hue honthon se Ruhi ne bilak bilak kar Abhi se kaha,

“Bye Abhi, merry Christmas and happy new year to you, and I am really very very sorry for you, my heart will cry for you Abhi bye I am going Abhi!!”

Ruhi bahot zor se rote hue chal kar main road ke taraf badhi aur Abhi wahin baith gaya zameen par rote hue apne chehre ko apne haath mein thaam kar, aur jab bhi Ruhi mudhkar Abhi ko dekhti to wo aur zor se roti gayi….

Abhi ko aisa feel ho raha tha ke Ruhi bhaag kar wapas usske paas aegi, Abhi soch raha tha ke kyun Ruhi weisa nahin kar rahi, Abhi last moment tak ek aas lagaaye baitha raha ke Ruhi wapas aegi, nahin jaegi apne behen ke saath…. Magar Abhi ne tab khud se kaha ke yeh kissi movie ki climax scene nahin hai jo Ruhi bhaag kar usske paas wapas aati, yeh hakikat tha, aur Ruhi bilkool wapas nahin aayi balke chali gayi bus mein apni behen ke saath, usske ghar jisska pata Abhi ko bilkool nahin tha….

Abhi ne tab socha ke jaan bujh kar usske ghar walon ne ussko kaahin aur bhej diya varna Ruhi tut jaati Abhi ke pyar mein, agar wo yaha rehti to Abhi ussko convince kar leta aur sabko mana leta haan karne ke liye…..

Abhi kaam nahin kar paa raha tha, ussne Saeed se kaha ke ussko rest lena hoga wo kamzor feel karne laga tha, to saeed ne ussko jaa kar bus ke andar ek seat par araam karne ko kaha.

Sunil ne pucha,

“Abhi usske pita ne ki kaha tumse? Tum uss se baat karne gaye the nah kuch der pehle?”

Abhi ne apne sar ko thaame hue dabe awaaz mein jawaab diya,

“Ruhi ko apne saath lekar jaega S.Arabia”

Sunil ne kaha,

“namumkin, nahin ho sakta, jhoot kaha uss ne tumse.”

Abhi:”mujhe pata hai sab jhoot kaha yaar, kal usski maa ne yeh sab kaha tha mujhe, issi liye kal mujhe nahin milne diya Ruhi ke baap se taake weh log ussko seekha sake ke ussko kia bolna hai mujhe. Matlab saaf hai ke mujhko inkaar karna tha so kar diya sab ne Ruhi ke ilawa!!! Agar Ruhi mujhse pyar nahin karti to abhi uss tarah se mujhse sabke saamne lipat kar nahin roti, mujhe kiss nahin karti open mein aise!”

Tab sunil ne kaha,

“Ek baat bolun bhai, yeh family aise hi hein, khaas kar Ruhi ki maa, mere time mein bhi usne yehi kiya tha, yahan se Ruhi ki behen ko bhej diya tha apni nani ke yahan, usska mangitar uss se wahan milne jata tha yahan nahin…. Ruhi ki maa kissi par bharosa nahin karti, ussko darr thi ke kahin main Ruhi ki behen ko uda na le jaun kabhi! Ab dekho ussne tumse Ruhi ko bhi alag kar diya, yahan se door kar diya taake tum ussko aur nah apne pyar mein jakar sako. Isska matlab saaf hai ke Ruhi tumse pyar karti hai aur ghar mein Ruhi ne awaaz uthaayi hogi aur kaha hoga ke wo tumse shaadi karegi issi liye usski maa ne usko yahan se hatta diya!”

Baithe baithe Abhi Ruhi ko yaad karte hue phir rone laga…. Saeed ne aur baaki ke logon ne dekha, sab udaas the, sabko khush hona chahiye ta kyunke aakhri din tha kaam par, sab Khushi ke saath finish karna tha magar Abhi ke rone se, aur Ruhi ke chale jaane se ek maatam jaisa chhah gaya tha wahan….. jiss din se uss bus mein kaam shuru hua uss din se Abhi Ruhi ki love story shuru hui…. Jaise jaise bus banta gaya weise weise Abhi Ruhi ka pyar badhta gaya bus ke saath… hona yeh chahiye the ke jab bus ban gayi tab Abhi aur Ruhi ki mangni ya shaadi honi chahiye the matlab donon ka pyar official hona chahiye tha – yeh Abhi ne aisa hi likha tha apne diary mein.

Saeed ne Abhi ko phir rote suna to kaha, “Abhi phir se? are ruk ja dekh sab log tumko dekh rahe rahe hein, idhar aa meri madad kar issko fix karne mein… yaar aaj bhi late raat tak kaam karna hai kia, chal aa khatam karte hein nah!”

Mehboob ne kaha,

“are mujhe nahin pata tha tu to bada rotlu nikla Abhi, main tujhe mard samajhta tha!”

Abhi ko Mehboob se nafrat ho gaya tha jab se Ruhi ne ussko bataya tha ke wo usske pyar ke khilaaf hai, to Mehboob ko Abhi ne jawaab diya,

“kyun mard ko dard nahin hota? Mard ke aansoo nahin hote to ankhen fodh dena chahiye bina aansoo ke aankh hein to!!”

Ruhi chali gayi, Abhi ki khushiyon ko apne saath lekar, aur chorr gayi thi Abhi ke liye, dard, udaasi, gham, tanhaayi, akelapan, aur aansoo.

Abhi ko kaam jaari rakhna tha aur asaan nahin tha usske liye uss haal mein kaam karna, uss haalaat ko face karna…. Abhi ne khud ko bahot mushkilon se sambhaalte hue apne kaam mein dhyan diya, kaam karna shuru to kiya magar reh reh kar Ruhi ki yaadon mein chalajata aur achanak se ro padhta…. Ussne uss din ko achanak yaad kiya jiss din Ruhi ke chaati mein apne sar daalkar usski khushbhoo sungh raha tha, ab bhi ussko Ruhi ki wo khushbhoo mehek rahe the… hamara zehen bhi ajib o gharib computer hai jo sab apne memory mein save rakhta hai yahan tak ke ek khushbhoo jo kitne din piche naak se sungh kar zehen mein gaya tha aaj bhi yaad karne se wo khushbhoo yaad ata hai…. Sirf Ruhi ki jism ki uss khushbhoo ko yaad karke Abhi ro baitha…. Phir sambhala khudko aur kaam karne laga…..

Ruhi ki maa ko afsos ho raha tha Abhi ke liye. Wo abhi ko kaafi der se dekh rahi thi, aur wo khud emotional ho gayi thi Abhi ko dekh kar aur usske dard ko samajh kar…. wo jaanti thi ke Abhi iss waqt kiss dard se guzar raha hoga…..

Shaam ke 6 baj chuke the, kaam jaari tha, Ruhi ki maa ne Abhi se pucha,

“Naaraaz ho?

Abhi ne kaha,

“bilkool nahin, udaas hoon haan, ghum mein dooba hua hoon haan magar naraz nahin hoon”

Aur Ruhi ki maa ne kuch aise baatein kahe Abhi se jiss se Abhi ko thoda sukoon mila, ussko ek umeed ki kiran phir se dikhaayi diye…

Ruhi ki maa ne kaha,

“Hum ne khaas kar iss liye aap ki proposal ko accept nahin kiya kyun ke aap jo kaam kar rahe ho yeh permanent kaam nahin hai, yeh kaam aaj hai to kal nahin, aaj yahan se kaam end hoga to kia karoge? Jab tak dusra kaam nahin milta bekaar rahoge nah? issi liye! Mere cousins aur nephews hein jo yeh kaam karte hein aur aksar bekaar rehte hein, unemployed hein, mujhe apni Ruhi ki fikar hai Abhi.”

Abhi ne heirat se ussko dekha aur kaha,

“Oh my God! Yehi vajah thi ki aap ne accept nahin kiya?”

Ruhi ki maa: “haan Abhi buss issi liye”

Abhi ke dimaagh mein kuch chal raha tha uss waqt aur ussne pucha,

“Aur agar main kal koyi aur behtar kaam kar raha hunga tab?!”

Ruhi ki maa: “dekho Abhi, kal ko agar tum koyi behtar kaam kar rahe ho aur tab tak Ruhi ki shadi nahin hui hogi tab hum zaroor consider karenge tumhare proposal ko!”

Abhi ko bahot araam mila aur pucha,

“Ruhi aaj wapas nahin aegi?”

Ruhi ki maa ne kaha,

“Nahin wo apne chacha ke ghar rahegi aur supermarket mein help karegi kyunke tumko pata hi hoga ke sheher mein kitne bhidh baadh hote hein Christmas aur new year ke mauke par, late night shopping hote hein to kaam bahut ziada hote hein to Ruhi help karegi apne chacha ko, Manoj bhi wahin kaam karta hai nah har roz…”

Abhi ne yaad kiya ke haan ek baar Manoj ne usse bataya tha ke wo ek supermarket mein kaam karta hai, ek chhota sa self service tha naam tha supermarket. To Abhi ne pucha,

“To Ruhi kab ghar wapas aegi ab?”

Jawaab diya usski maa ne,

“Sunday ko aegi, magar New Year ko wahin rahegi shayad.”

Abhi ne tab pucha,

“Aur wo supermarket kidhar hai exactly?”

Ruhi ki maa ne exact address de diya ke Royal cinema ke paas hai….

Ab wo sheher Abhi ke ghar se ziada door nahin tha aur Abhi udhar aksar jata tha aur ussko exactly pata tha royal cinema kahan hai kyunke uss cinema hall mein Abhi kayi baar movie dekhne gaya hai, Abhi uss jagah ko bahot achhi tarah pehchaanta tha…

Abhi ne socha ke kyun Ruhi ki maa ne ussko saare information de diye Ruhi ke baare mein ke kahan reh rahi hai, kahan supermarket hai, matlab wo chahti hai ke abhi uss se udhar milne jaaye…. Jab usski beti aur Abhi milkar rone lage the to uss se dekha nah gaya aur shayad ab pachta rahi thi donon ko juda karke aur ab chahhti thi ke Abhi uss se udhar jaa kar mile….

Abhi bahot khush hua aur ab relax feel karne laga tha. To phir Abhi ab normal kaam karne laga.

Aaj bhi kal raat ki tarah Mehboob ke ghar dinner kiya gaya. Abhi kitna chahta tha ke Ruhi wahan hoti, kal bhi raat ko dinner kiye the sab to Ruhi nahin thi aur aaj bhi nahin hai….

Jab Abhi washroom jaa raha tha wash karne dinner se pehle to Mahesh ne Abhi ko awaaz diya,

“hey Abhi?!”

Abhi ne mudhkar dekha to Mahesh ne kaha,

“udhar andhera hai idhar aao hamare kitchen ke basin ke paas haath dho lo”

Magar Abhi ne kaha ke thik hai chalta hai, par Mahesh ne zid kiya ke wo wahan aakar haath dhoe… to Abhi gaya Ruhi ki kitchen mein aaj dusri baar gaya tha, magar aaj Ruhi ke bina gaya tha wahan… basin ke paas saboon se apne haath dhoya Abhi ne, aur khayaalon mein sochne laga ke kitne baar ussne Ruhi ko uss basin ke paas bartan dhote hue dekha hai… kitna khush hota wo agar aaj Ruhi yahin hoti, to kitni khush wo bhi hoti Abhi ko apne kitchen mein ek baar aur dekh kar….

Haath dhone ke baad Abhi ne uss table ko kiss kiya aur table se baat kiya, ek sandesha chorra Abhi ne uss table se ke wo Ruhi ko bata de ke Abhi aya tha idhar aur ussko kiss send kiya hai.

Dinner ke baad kaam chalu raha aur Abhi Ruhi ko bahot miss karne laga…. Raton mein iskh ka bhoot ziada chadhta hai, kal raat bhi Ruhi nahin thi aaj bhi nahin aur Abhi par ishk ka bhoot sawaar tha…tadap raha tha wo Ruhi ko yaad karte hue….

Jab se Abhi Christmas eve ki night celebrate karna shuru kiya hai doston ke beech aaj pehli baar tha ke iss raat ko Abhi kaam kar raha tha jiss waqt ussko sheher mein ghumna, mauj masti karna chahiye tha…. aur Abhi ne socha iss waqt Ruhi supermarket mein hogi kyunke late night shopping hota tha iss raat ko….

Raat ko 12 baje kaam finish hua… bus COMPLETE HO GAYA… aur start kiya gaya aur khud Mehboob ne drive kiya… George saath tha, sunil, aur baaki ke sab saath the bus mein….

Abhi ne Rahima ke paas ek message chorra Ruhi ke liye, Abhi ne Rahima se kaha,

“pleae Ruhi ko mera sandesha pahucha dena, kehna ke main ne ussko merry xmas wish kiya aur kehna ke jaise ke ussne mujhe kaha main bahot patience rakhunga”

Manoj wapas agaya tha kaam se, aur wo bhi bus mein aya. Abhi ko aur 40 bus ke photos diye…., Abhi ne ussko pay kiya… Aur road par bus ki kayi aur photos liya ussne jo Abhi ko baad mein dega ussne kaha.

Mehboob khud drive karte hue Abhi ke team ko wapas ghar chorrne ja raha tha, bus almost bhara hua tha, bus mein Rahima, Farzina, Reza, sunil, George, sunil ka assistant, Manoj, Mahesh, George ka apprentice, aur Reza ke behnein bhare hue the Sirf Ruhi ki kami thi bus mein…. Kamaal hai Abhi ne socha, agar aaj wo hoti to wo bhi saath baithti Abhi ke saath bus mein wahan se 40 kms tak drive karte hue Abhi ke ghar tak jaati aur Abhi ka ghar bhi dekh leti….. magar afsos!

Jab bus Abhi ke ghar ke saamne ruka to Mehboob aur Reza ne kaha

“Achah to Abhi yahan rehta hai wo raha usska ghar… hmmm!!”

Subha ke 1 baj chuka tha jab Abhi ne apna diary khola aur likhna shuru kiya….. phir sone gaya to usska takiya bheeg gaya itna wo ro raha tha Ruhi ko sochte hue ……

To be continued….. (5700 words from both updates)

Very very very painful and tearful update casinar ji.
You are a GENIUS to succeed to write an emotional update of 5000 plus words. Not an easy task at all . Respect you for that.
My eyes were leaving tears like I had lost someone dear to me. I felt my heart torn into pieces and I wonder what must have been going with Abhi and Ruhi.
Ruhi loves Abhi very much but she is may be forced to do that she is forced to leave. Her parents are moving her away purposely so that Abhi cant convince her in the last day.
Ruhi's mother must have visualized what the scenarion could have been if it was Abhi who would be leaving the place after the completion of the work, then Abhi would have met Ruhi to say goodbye and Ruhi could not have held her tears she would have asked Abhi to keep coming even when the work is terminated there.
Sunil reminded Abhi that Ruhi 's mother did the same with her elder sister. So the the game is played with Ruhi to keep her away from Abhi.
Her mother planned all this to get Ruhi out specially on the last day of work. Remember yesterday was supposed to be the last day and so yesterday also she had taken Ruhi away with her expecting when she will return Abhi woulb be gone by then. So when she learnt that today is the last day of work she again moved Ruhi away so that Abhi does not come to say goodbye to Ruhi as it is sure that Ruhi would weep a lot seeing Abhi going for ever.
I feel that is the main reason of moving Ruhi so that she does not keep the memory of a separation with Abhi....
The part where Abhi hugged Ruhi and they kissed then the parting was too emotional.... that made me cry a lot. I got to stop reading cry then continue to read.
The way Ruhi said "bye Abhi, I am going Abhi" was heartbreakin. And what Abhi told her was also terribly touching.
Wonderful, fantastic, mindblowing, amazing, fabulous, magnificent update casinar ji.

 

[king cobra]

Update 37 The Last Day & Night In Ruhi’s Aangan​

Wednesday 24th December – Christmas Eve.

Abhi ne iss din ke liye apni diary mein likha hai:

It has been the last and worst day and night in Ruhi’s yard.

Subha subha Ruhi ki maa Abhi ke saath hanss rahi thi. Aur Abhi ko Ruhi nazar aayi kitchen ke andar. Aaj Ruhi ek nayi nightdress mein thi. Ek khubsurat nightdress jo safed thi aur uss par bade bade red, black aur green dots the. Ruhi dada ji ke armchair par baithi hui thi.

Abhi ne usski maa se baat ki. Aur uss aurat ne iss baar kaha,

“Sorry Abhi, Ruhi ke papa ne ussko iss baar apne saath Saudi Arabia lejaane ka faisla kiya hai!!”

Abhi ko itna ghussa aya ke usska mann kiya ke ussko gaaliyon se nehla de ussi waqt. Abhi ne socha issi liye wo kal hi Ruhi ke baap se bat karna chahta tha iss se pehle ke Ruhi ki maa khud koyi bahana bana kar apne pati ke munh mein koyi baat khud nah daal de…. Abhi samajh gaya ke kal raat ko Ruhi ki maa ne khud sab kuch bata diya hoga apne pati ko ke Abhi Ruhi se pyar karta hai magar ussko Rishta nahin passand kyunke ussko Abhi ka kaam nahin passand, to apne pati se keh diya hoga ke aaj wo ladka aap se Ruhi ka haath mangega to aap mana kar dena…..

Abhi issi liye nahin chahta tha ke koyi aur Ruhi ke pita se baat kare issi liye wo sabse pehle baat karna chahta tha Ruhi ke pita se kal raat ko…..

Abhi sab kuch apne dimaagh mein rewind karte hue soch raha tha aur samajhne ki koshish kar raha tha ke jiss din Ruhi gayi thi apne nani ke ghar tabhi se Ruhi berukhi se pesh ane lagi Abhi ke saath, aur kal raat ko isi baat ke liye Ruhi ke papa ko bhi legaye sab wahan aur issi baare mein baat kiye gaye honge aur sabne milkar decide kiya hoga ke Abhi ko yeh jawaab de diya jaaye ke Ruhi ke pita Ruhi ko apne saath lekar jaa raha hai iss baar….. Abhi ko puri film dikh gayi usske dimaagh mein… to Abhi ne Ruhi ki maa se kaha,

“koyi mujhko laakhon rupay bhi dede nah to main yakeen nahin karunga? Saudi Arabia mein koyi apni beti ko lejata hai? Ladki ko? Unn vehshi, tharki Arab logon ke beech? Aap mujhko ullo samajhte ho nah aunty? Thik hai wohi samajhiye aap mujhe….”

Ruhi ki maa ne kaha,

“tum khud puchlo agar yakeen nahin hai to!”

Abhi: “puchunga to ab wo to yehi kahega nah? sab mile hue hein iss mein koyi shak nahin, jo aap ne ussko kehne ko kaha wohi kahega wo…. Zaahir si baat hai.”

Din bhar Abhi ranjh o ghum mein raha. Usski maansik stithi normal nahin raha din bhar….. ussko saans lene mein takliff hota raha baar baar….. Ruhi dikhi ussko kayi baar magar baat karna naamumkin tha….

Aur din ke 2.30 ko Abhi ko pata chala ke Ruhi ki badi behen ussko apne saath lekar jaa rahi hai, Ruhi apni behen ke ghar kuch dinon ko beetaane ke liye jaa rahi thi…. Abhi ko zabardast jhatka laga ye khabar sunkar…. Usska uss aangan mein aakhri din tha aur wo chahta tha ke Ruhi ko wo jee bhar ke dekhe aur mauka milne par uss se baat kare apna pyar ka waasta de Ruhi ko…. Magar jab suna ke Ruhi jaa rahi hai to Abhi jaise tut gaya… Farzina ne Abhi ko bataya ke Ruhi apni badi behen ke saath jaa rahi hai, ab pata nahin ke Ruhi ne khud farzinah ko yeh kehne liye bheja tha ya nahin, Abhi ko shak tha ke khud Ruhi ne hi Farzinah ko kaha tha Abhi ko jaakar bataane ke liye ke wo jaa rahi hai…. Abhi ko shcok laga, shock par shock, dard par dard, Abhi ki sehen shakti kum hote dikhaayi diye….magar ussko abhi aur bhi bada shock jhelna baaki tha…

Bus ke andar se Ruhi ki khidki dikhta tha, aur Ruhi baal banaate hue dikh rahi thi, jaise Ruhi jaan bujh kar Abhi to dikha rahi thi taake Abhi ko pata chale ke wo jaa rahi hai. Abhi ke paas ek hi mauka aur ek hi raasta tha ke wo wahan jaaye uss khidki ke paas aur ek AAKHRI baar wahan se Ruhi se baat kare…

Abhi ne kaam ko maara goli aur gaya Ruhi ke khidki ke paas…. Ussne dekha Ruhi ne uss yellow suit ko pehna hua tha jiss mein uss din apni maa ke saath apni nani ke yahan gayi thi, halki si make mein thi aur kayamat lag rahi thi… usski maa wahin thi aur Ruhi khudko aine mein dekh rahi thi baal banaate hue…. Abhi ne ek book diya tha Ruhi ko koyi 20 din pehle, to Abhi ne kaha,

“hey Ruhi, mera kitab….” Abhi ki awaaz nahin nikal rahi thi… Ruhi ne nahin suna aur usskki maa ne Ruhi se kaha,

“Wo apna kitab mang raha hai Ruhi”

Ruhi ne thoda chahunkte hue kaha,

“Are haan, main to bilkool hi bhool gayi thi ke ek aap ki kitaab mere paas hai itne dinon se, sorry abhi laayi!”

Ruhi ne uss book ko Abhi ko wapas kiya.

Abhi bahot bahot udaas tha,wo kamzor dikh raha tha, lagta tha bimaar hai. Phir bhi Abhi ne pucha,

“Ruhi kia decide kiya tumne?!”

Ruhi ne kaha,

“Be Patient Abhi!”

Abhi ne ek gehri saans lete hue kaha,

“Abhi issi waqt tum mujhse aise baat kar rahi ho jaise hum ajnabee hein, tum jaise badal gayi ho, jaise tum meri Ruhi nahin koyi aur ho, kyun Ruhi, kal to itna royi thi jab mujhe choat lagi thi nah, tab bhi tum nahin samjhi mere dil ka haal Ruhi?”

Ruhi zor se hanssi…. Wo ek hanssi nahin thi kuch aur tha, wo Abhi ko aur ziada hurt karne ki ek tamacha tha Abhi ke gaal par.

Ruhi ne tab ek chewing gum ke do tukde kiye aur ek tudka Abhi ko diya aur dusra tukda apne munh mein le liya….. wo chewing wo tha jo Ruhi chabaati thi jab Abhi ko piche kiss karne jaati thi…. ek din Ruhi ek chewing chabah rahi thi aur Ruhi ko kiss karte waqt, Abhi ne Ruhi ke munh se usski chewing gum ko apne munh mein le liya tha….. uss roz donon ne phir chewing gum par baat kiye the aur uss din ko bhi Ruhi ne aise hi ek tudka chewing gum diya tha Abhi ko….. aur aaj apni maa ke saamne ussne wohi kiya…… kyun aisa kiya tha Ruhi ne? kyun puraane yaadon ko taaza kar rahi thi ab?! Magar Abhi ko passand aya tha ke Ruhi ne ussko aadha chewing gum diya….

Abhi ka Ruhi ke saath yeh akhri conversation ho raha tha. Abhi ke samajh mein nahin araha tha ke ab wo Ruhi se kia kahe. Sab kuch jaise ulat phulat ho gaya tha, sab bigar gaya tha, jo kuch Abhi ne socha tha kuch bhi veisa nahin ho raha tha sirf iss liye ke Ruhi to jaa rahi thi…. Ulta Abhi ne socha tha aaj wo khud jaega, aaj usska last din hoga wahan aur ussne bahot kuch socha tha ke kaam finish karne ke baad wo Ruhi se baat karne jaega chaahe ghanton bhar hi kyun nah sahhi magar aaj wo apne dil ka haal bayan karta Ruhi se, uske parents se, sab se rokar Ruhi ka haath maangta magar ab Ruhi hi nahin rahegi to kia karega…. Abhi ke paas ab shabd nahin baaki tha kehne ke liye….

Abhi soch raha the ke sirf Ruhi yeh keh deti ke wo Abhi se pyar karti hai aur uss se shaadi karna chahti hai to koyi inkaar nahin karte. Magar ab to lag aisa raha tha ke Ruhi khud nahin chahti thi kyukne wo buss wo buss “NAHIN, NO,” kehti jaa rahi thi.

Abhi ne Ruhi se kaha,

“Ab ‘NO’ keh rahi ho Ruhi, kia Christmas ka tohfa diya aaj tumne mujhko Ruhi!”

Ruhi ne chehre par bina koyi afsos ya ghum dikhaate hue kaha,

“I am very sorry for you Abhi”

Abhi ne kaha,

“kia tum apne papa se nahin keh sakti ke tum bhi mujhe chahti ho?!”

Ruhi ne fake Muskaan mein jawaab diya,

“magar main khud desh chorr rahi hoon nah Abhi!”

Abhi ne kaha,

“Okay main intezaar karunga tumhare lautne ka.”

Tab Ruhi ki badi behen ne kaha,

“kab tak? Aap kab tak intezaar karoge isska?”

Abhi: “100 saalon tak!”

Badi behen khamosh ho gayi.

Abhi ne Ruhi ki maa se Ruhi ki father ko bulane ko kaha. Ruhi ki maa ne usse bulaya, baap aaya aur sach mein ek hasmukh chehre wala insaan tha, wo aakar Ruhi ki bed par baitha Abhi ko dekhte hue, aur Abhi ne ussko samjhaya, ke wo aur Ruhi kitna ek dusre se pyar karte hein….. jab Abhi sab keh raha tha Ruhi ke pita se uss waqt Ruhi aine ke saamne khadi khud ko sanwaar rahi thi magar baar baar Abhi ko bhi dekh rahi thi ussko usski pita se baat karte hue….

Ruhi ke pita ne Abhi ko jo jawaab diya wo 100% fake tha, jissko sunkar Abhi samajh gaya ke wo saare baatein banawati the aur Ruhi ki maa ne wo sab kehne ke liye kaha tha ussko. Baap ne Abhi se kaha,

“Dekho main pehle se plan kar chuka hoon ke Ruhi ko apne saath leja raha hoon iss baar, aur phir uss ladke ko hum ne zuban de diya hai wo France mein hai aur wapas aakar Ruhi ko lejaega!”

Tab Ruhi ne Abhi ke taraf dekhte hue kaha,

“Dekha? Main ne kaha tha magar aap yakeen nahin kar rahe the!”

Abhi ne apne dil ke andar khud se kaha,

“Tu bhi jhooti hai Ruhi, jiss din tumne apni virginity wali baat bataayi thi tab to kaha tha ke wo saare abroad wale ladke wali baatein jhoot the, aur ab keh rahi ho ke sach hai…”

Phir Abhi ne Ruhi ke pita se kaha,

“Dekhiye agar main aap se kahun ke main wait karunga, ke iss baar jab aap Ruhi ke saath wapas aao tab aunga, chahe aur 3 saal lag jaye main Ruhi ka intezaar karunga to?”

Baap ne kaha,

“Magar Ruhi ko wo France se lene aega nah, hum ne ussko pehle zuban de diye hain!”

Ruhi ne tab Abhi se apne donon eyebrows uchkaaya kuch iss tarah ke jaise Abhi haar gaya aur wo aur usske pita jeey gaye, aur phir Ruhi ne kaha,

“Dekho Abhi, aap ko bahot saare khubsurat ladkiyan mil jaenge, aap handsome ho, intelligent ho, tez ho, main koyi rani maharani nahin, mujh mein kuch aisa nahin hai ke aap ko sirf main hi chahiye, main bahot buri hoon pucho meri maa se ke main kitni buri ladki hoon!”

Ruh ki maa ne turant Ruhi ki baat par haami bharte hue kaha,

“haan Ruhi bahot hi buri ladki hai”

Abhi ne ussko turant jawaab diya,

“main Ruhi ko kissi tarah se bhi accept karta hoon!”

Usski badi behen ne kaha,

“aap wait karte karte thak jaoge, bore ho jaoge aur aap ko koyi aur mil jaegi dekh lena!”

Abhi ke honth thartharaane lage the kyunke ussko ab dikh gaya tha ke Ruhi to haath se gayi ab…. Usske aankhon se paani behne hi wala tha, ke Abhi ne sar niche jhukaya…. Ruhi ko pata chal gaya ke Abhi ab rone wala hai, to usski bhi aankhen badh aayi, maa, baap, badi behen sab Aabhi ke chehre mein khamosh ghaur se dekh rahe the, sab ko pata tha wo tut chuka hai aur ab ro padega…

Abhi ne sar jhukaaye hue hi kaha,

“okay”

Aur mudh gaya jaane ke liye, to Ruhi ki maa ne ussko awaaz di, Abhi wapas mudha, apne chehre ko uss kitab se chhupaate aur aankh ponchte hue,

Ruhi ke papa ne kaha,

“ghussa mat hona, sorry.”

Abhi ne kaha,

“koyi baat nahin”

Sab ke nazrein Abhi ke chehre par the, sab ko pata tha Abhi ko jhatka laga hai aur ussko bahot dard ho raha hoga, sab ko Abhi ke chehre mein wo ghum, wo dukh dikh raha tha, sab ko pata tha Abhi ke aakhen bhar aaye hein, aur sab ko yeh bhi pata tha ke Abhi apne emotions ko chhupaane ki koshish kar raha hai aur book se apna munh chhupa raha hai….. Ruhi ka brother-in-law khud Abhi ko uss tarah se tutte hue dekh kar heyraan tha aur Abhi ke chehre mein bahot dard bhare chehre se dekhe jaa raha tha….. Ruhi ki badi behen ke aankhen bhar aaye, Ruhi ki maa ke aankhen bhar aaye…. Magar iss baar Ruhi ki aankhen nahin bari thi, aur Ruhi ne Abhi se kaha,

“LOOK ABHI, I AM REALLY VERY SORRY FOR YOU, I MEANT IT, MY HEART FEELS IT FOR YOU ABHI. WISH YOU MUCH COURAGE AND PATIENCE ABHI.”

Abhi ne Ruhi ko halki si Muskaan se dekha aur tapakte aansoowon se usske chehre mein dekhte hue kaha.

“The deception does exist right? So, its okay, never mind Ruhi, you be happy always, that’s all I can wish for you!”

Abhi wapas bus mein jaa baitah aur rone laga, rokna namumkin tha….. ek baar to zor se roya…. Bus ke sabhi kaam karne waale Abhi ke paas aa gaye, koyi usske sar thapthapa, koyi usske peeth par haatyh ferrta, koyi ussko paani deta, sab ussko shant karaane mein lage hue tha…. Mehboob bhi wahin tha, aur wo bhi Abhi ko support karne ka dhong kar raha tha….. Abhi khud ko rokne ki koshish mein laga hua tha magar nahin kar paa raha tha, rona ruk hi nahin raha tha usska

Koyi 30 mins baad Abhi chhup hua aur jo kaam karna baaki tha uss mein lag gaya phir bhi baar baar ro deta tha kaam karte hue…. Pata nahin kia kia soch soch kar rone lagta…..

Aur aayi wo waqt jo Abhi ke liye kayamat se kum nahin tha….

To be continued in the next post immediately….

Bidu bache ki jaan loge Kia?
Kitna rulaya yaar
Itna emotional update
Andar ghuss ke mara hai tumne bidu aur kia kahun.
Likha to behtareen aafreen hai

 

[Vikram singh rana]

Update 32 The Last Sunday At Work​

Agla din Sunday tha, 21st December, phir bhi kaam par jana tha kyunke kaam ko aur 3 dinon mein end karna tha. Raat bhar Abhi thik se soya nahin tha, karwatein badalta raha Ruhi ki yaad mein usski badalti hui adaaon ko sochte hue. Kyun wo badalne lagi thi? Kyun Mehboob se darrne lagi thi? Kyun usski maa bhi kuch ajeeb behave karne lagi thi….. Abhi apna chain o sukoon khone laga tha inn dinon ko….

Ruhi ki aangan mein daakhil hone se pehle Abhi soch raha tha ke kaash aaj Ruhi subha ko dikh jaaye; kum se kum aaj bagiche mein phool todti hui dikh jaaye to ussko good morning kahega pichli baar ki tarah…..

Angan mein dakhil hua, sar niche jhukaaye soch mein doobe Abhi chala jaa raha tha ke usski mangi hui duah kubool hote dikhayi diye, Ruhi bagiche mein gulaab tod rahi thi!! Abhi ka dil uss din ki tarah dhadka, ruk gaya, khush bhi tha aur ghum ne bhi ghar kiya hua tha usske dil ke andar, phir bhi kaha, “good morning Ruhi”

Ruhi ne jawab nahin diya magar muskuraate hue Abhi ko dekha. Abhi khada ho gaya uss se baat karne ke liye, tab Ruhi ne kaha,

“Uff aap jao, sab log ghar par hein Manoj bhi yahin hai aaj Sunday hai aap jao nah please! Mujhse baat mat karo, aur mujhko baar baar dekhna mat kaam karte waqt.”

Mayus, Abhi wahan se bina kuch kahe gaya washroom ke taraf change karne. Change kar liya to Mehboob ke kitchen ke paas se guzra to paya ke Ruhi bhi udhar aayi hui hai, wo apni yellow nightdress mein thi, jo bahot lambi dress thi, jissko Ruhi ko ek haath se sambhaalna padta tha chalne ke liye thoda sa upar uthakar…. To wo aur Abhi bilkool ek dusrte ke karib the, phir Abhi ne kaha,

“Tum ne aaj bhi good morning ka jawaab nahin diya? Kia tum log iss ilaake mein good morning nahin wish karte ko ek dusre ko? Lagta hai tumko aadat nahin good morning karne ki nah?!”

Ruhi ne danton mein jaise sorry kehte hue apne honth ko dabaya aur Rahima ki kitchen mein ghuss gayi mudhkar Abhi ko dekhte hue.

Baad mein Abhi bus ke andar kaam karne laga aur Ruhi kitchen ki stairs par khadi Abhi ko dekh rahi thi ek muskaan ke saath. Abhi aisa feel kar raha tha jaise shuru ke dinon mein naye naye mile the donon, pehli baar… jaise Abhi nayi nayi pehchaan hui thi donon ke….

Phir jab baaki ke log kaam par aaye to Ruhi ghayab ho gayi 2 ghante tak nahin dikhi. Ruhi ki maa kapde dhote hue nazar aayi to Abhi ne uss se pucha ke Ruhi kidhar hai to ussne kaha ke Ruhi bimaar hai!

Abhi ko kaam karte hue hathode se lag gaya usski ek ungli mein, khoon nikal raha tha, Ruhi ki maa ne wo dekha, to Abhi gaya Ruhi ki maa se yeh kehne ke Ruhi ko bata dein ke aaj 1 baje wapas chala jaega kyun ke Sunday hai; to Ruhi uss se milne aaye jaane se pehle kyunke Abhi ko kuch bahot zaroori baatein karni hai Ruhi se aaj. Magar Ruhi ki maa ne Abhi se kaha ke Ruhi nahin mil paegi uss se aaj kyunke usska bada bhai ghar par hai, bahot saare log hein aangan mein kyunke Sunday hai aur sab log donon ko dekhenge aur Mehboob ko passand nahin hai. Magar Ruhi ki maa andar gayi aur kuch dawa lekar aayi aur Abhi ki ghayal ungli mein lagaya, aur pucha kuch araam mila ke nahin. To abhi ne jawaab diya,

“Aap ne ungli par to araam de diya aunty, kaleje mein lagi hui Ruhi se kehdo nah ke wahan thoda marham lagaa de please.”

Yeh kehte hue Abhi ke aankeh bhar aaye, Ruhi ki maa ne Abhi ko ghaur se tarasti nazron se dekha aur kaha,

“Bahot bade bade baatein karte ho tum Abhi, aise hi baton se meri beti ko apna diwana banaya hai nah? Magar buss itna kahungi ke dhiraj rakho tum jo hona hai so hoga.”

Jab 1 baj gaya to Abhi ne dekha khidki ke paas Ruhi ki maa khadi hai aur Ruhi usske bagal mein Abhi ko dekhte hue hanss rahi hai aur apne jeeb se chedha Abhi ko apni maa ke saamne hamesha ki tarah. To Abhi ne socha isska matlab yeh hua ke jo kuch bhi Abhi ne Ruhi ki maa se kaha wo sab ussne andar jaakar Ruhi ko bataya. Maa beti mein jabardasr bonding thi, pyar ki batein jo ek aashik ne kaha apni beti tak pahunchane ke liye wo maa ne jaa kar beti ko bataya wah kia baat hai Abhi ne yeh sochte hue khud se kaha ke ho sakta hai maa se kissi ne aise romance nahin kiya hoga iss liye ussko Abhi ka aashikana andaz bahut passand arahe the iss liye usske message ko apni beti tak pahuncha rahi thi.

Ruhi koyi 15 minat tak wahin khidki par tek lagaaye hue Abhi ko dekhti rahi, jeeb se ussko chedti rahi, 1.15 ho gaya, magar Saeed kaam end nahin kar raha tha, aur Ruhi ab tak apni nightdress mein hi thi to Abhi ne khud se kaha Ruhi ki tabiyat sach mein thik nahin hai varna itne der tak Sunday ke roz wo nightdress mein nahin rehti. Jiss tarah se Ruhi Abhi ko dekhti, chedhti, wo Abhi ko behad passand tha, aur ussko himmat hoti thi aur usska hausla badhta tha aur Abhi khud se kehta ke ‘yeh ladki kitna pyar karti hai mujhse varna yeh sab kyun karti? Tabiyat thik nahin phir bhi 15 mins se ziada khidki ke paas khadi hokar mujhko nahin dekhti’

Jab Abhi washroom se dho dha kar apne safar karne wala saaf suthra dress pehen kar aya to Ruhi wahin khadi paayi gayi khidki se tek lagaye hue. Matlab kyunke Abhi ne ussko wait karne ko kaha tha wo wait kar rahi thi, Abhi ne kaha tha 1 baje, aur 1 baje se 1.30 ho gaye the aur wo wahin wait karti rahi, kyunke Abhi ne message bheja tha usski maa se ke ussko kuch bahot zaroori baat karni hai. Aur maa ne sab bilkool exact bataya hoga Ruhi ko ke Abhi ne tujhe bolne ko kaha hai ke wo aaj 1 baje kaam end karega aur tujhse milne ko kaha hai ussko kuch bahot zaroori batein karna hai tujhse!

“Wah mummy ji sahi message pahunchaya aap ne apni beti ko! Thanks mummy ji. Hone wali sasu maa.” Aisa Abhi keh raha tha apne dil ke andar.

To jab Abhi ne Ruhi ko wahin khidki ke papas paaya jaate waqt to khidki ke taraf badha Ruhi se baat karne ke liye. Ruhi muskurate hue ussko apne taraf aate hue dekh rahi thi. Abhi usske karib reach hua to sabse pehle kaha,

“Nightdress mein ho, raat ho gayi kia?!”

Ruhi aur usski maa donon hanss pade. Phir maa ne kaha,

“bahut lazy hai yeh kia tumko aisi lazy ladki chahiye Abhi?!”

Abhi ne kaha,

“Chalega, main usske hisse ke kaamon ko kar diya karunga jiss din ussko aise lazy feel hogi to, Waise mujhe pata hai ke Ruhi bilkool lazy nahin hai, kyunke itne dinon se usse itne saare ghar ke kaamon ko karte dekhte aya hoon, kitchen mein pakaati hai, mujhko kitna acha pakwan paka ke khilaayi hai issne, jhadu poncha lagaati hai, kapde dhoti hai…. To lazy kaise hui aunty ji!”

Ruhi muskura rahi thi Abhi ke chehre mein dekhte hue ke kiss tarah se Abhi usski taarif kar raha tha, usske chehre mein ek chamak thi Abhi ko admiration se dekhte hue. Maa ne kaha,

“Sun ri Ruhi teri to badi taarif kar raha hai yeh, tujhko patana ata hai issko, bada honshiyaar hai yeh Abhi!”

Ruhi ne Abhi ko dekhte hue hi apni mummy se kaha,

“main ne kaha tha nah aap se ke bahot honshiyaar hai Abhi!”

Phir Ruhi ne Abhi se pucha,

“Abhi aap ne kaha ke aap mere hisse ke kaamon ko kar doge jab main lazy feel karungi to, to aap mujhe bataaiye ke aap ko gharke kaun sa kaam karna ata hai?!”

Jo jawaab Abhi ne diya Ruhi aur usski maa ko wo sun kar donon maa aur beti dang reh gaye aur Abhi ko iss tarah dekhte rahe ke jaise kabhi nahin dekha tha ussko.

Abhi ne jawaab mein yeh kaha,

“Main bada beta hoon apni maa ka, baaki 3 bhai aur mujhse chhote hein, behnein to last mein paida hue, main ne donon ko pala, khilaya apne haathon se, aur bhaiyon ko bhi. Jab bhi maa bimaar hoti mujhe hi ghar ke saare kaam karne padte the, kapde dhona, har subha ko aata gundna aur roti pakana, chai banana, bhaiyon ko nehlana, khana dena, school ke liye tayaar karna, school bhejna, aur khud tayyar hona aur school jaana, wapas aana, sab ke liye khana pakana, pathar par kapde dhona jaise aap donon dhote ho, bade bade chaadar ko dhona aise hi pathar par, pathar par masala peesna…. Aur saare bartanon ko dhona, saaf karna, ghar mein har roz jhadu lagana, pooncha lagana….. SAB KUCH KARNA AATA HAI MUJHE!”

Yeh sab sunne ke baad Ruhi ke aankhen bilkool bhar aaye the, aur lagta tha ke wo lapak kar Abhi ke gale mein baahein bhad degi….. Ruhi ki maa bilkool khamosh ho gayi thi kuch der tak aur Abhi ke chehre mein dekhi jaa rahi thi… phir donon maa beti ne ek dusre ko dekha, aur Ruhi ki maa ne puccha,

“tumhari maa aksar bimaar rehti hai kia?”

Abhi: “Ab nahin, jinn dinon main padhta tha tab bahot bimaar rehti thi, 3 operation hui usski tab thik hui, stones hue the bladder mein aur ek baar goiter ki operation kiya tha phir ek baar peth mein kuch hua tha…unn dinon main 8 se 18 saal ka tha…. mere 19 hone ke baad maa kabhi bimaar nahin hui, aur tab tak Naina badi ho gayi aur ab wo maa ki madad karti hai kitchen mein aur baaki ke ghar ke kaamon mein. Naina ne bahot saare ghar ke kaam mujhse seekhi hai maa se nahin! Aaj bhi kuch pakaati hai to mujhse puchne aati hai ke yeh aisa karna hai ya waisa? Namak kitna dalna hai etc…..”

Ruhi sab phir se bade dhyan se sun rahi thi aur kaha,

“hmmm to aap ko pakana bhi ata hai, uss din mera pakaya hua jo khaya tha kaisa tha?”

Abhi: “ari aaj puch rahi ho? best tha sweetheart!”

Aur aakhir mein Abhi ne Ruhi ko piche aane ko kaha kyunke ussko kuch zaroori kehna tha Abhi ne kaha ussko. Magar Ruhi ne kaha “nah” aur Abhi ko jeeb se chidhaya aur ghar ke andar bhaag gayi!”

Abhi ne usskimaa ko dekhte hue kaha,

“kamaal hai samajhti nahin ke “ZAROORI” ka matlab kia hai yeh ladki?!”

Ruhi ki maa ne dhire se kaha,

“Nahin aa paegi, Manoj ghar par hai, baahar Mehboob hai ussko sunna padega jab aap chale jaoge to, ab aap jao Abhi…..”

Abhi jaane laga tha ke Ruhi ki maa ne hansste hue kaha,

“Weise, aap kia kuch karte ho ghar ke kaamon ko bata kar ussko aur ziada pata liya lagta hai, hai nah Abhi?”

Aur Abhi ko wapas ghar lautna pada bina Ruhi se apna important baat kahe….. jaate hue baar baar mudhkar dekhta gaya ke kaash Ruhi kitchen ke paas dikhe ya khidki ke paas aaye magar nahin dikhi…..

Ghar jaane se pehle Abhi ne a Christmas wishing card kharida Ruhi ke liye, ek bada sa card liya ussne.

Abhi ne khud se kaha ke wo ab Ruhi ko samajh nahin paa raha hai. Kahan ab Ruhi ko uss se aur ziada karib ana chahiye tha magar Ruhi uss se ziada doorie banaayi hui thi. Iss se pehle Ruhi uss se ghanton se ziada baatein kiya karti thi aur ab 5 mins bhi nahin karti aur kehti ke log dekh rahe hein….

Ghar wapas aakar Abhi ne sab kuch apne diary mein likha, shaam ke 5 baje bed par leytne gaya, ussko jagaane se mana kiya Naina aur apni maa ko - aur raat ko barah baje jaaga… Itni thakaan thi ke ussko hosh hi nahin raha ke kab din hai aur kab raat.

Aur raat ke 2 baje Abhi ne Ruhi ke liye dusra khat likha jissko wishing Christmas card ke sath kal post karega Ruhi ke hi ilaake wale post office mein.

To be continued….(2002 words)

Update 33 – Last Monday At Work​

December 22nd

Ye din Abhi ke liye sabse bhaadi din tha uss aagan mein Abhi ke liye kaam karte hue dinon mein. Iss liye ke iss din ko Ruhi ne Abhi ko bilkool bhi bhaav nahin diya tha, baat nah se barabar hui thi, aur doorie to jaise ajnabiyon ke beech hote hein weisa tha. English mein Abhi ne likha tha, “She did not take any care at all about me, no consideration, like I did not even exist!”

Subha ko ek baar Abhi ne Ruhi ko dekha to buss itna keh paya, “hey Ruhi” magar Ruhi seedha chalti gayi aur Abhi ko oonchi awaaz mein kehna para, “you will receive a letter from the post office today, keep watching” Ruhi abhi se sirf door reh rahi thi.

Kuch der baad Abhi gaya uss ilaake ke post office aur Ruhi ki wishing card ko post kiya as a registered letter.

Post office se Abhi wapas aya to dekha ke Ruhi uss red skirt aur white blouse mein dressed thi jisski 3 din pehle Abhi ne usse pehenne ki farmaayish kiya tha.

Aur ek baar Abhi ne Ruhi ko cycle par apne ek cousin sis ke saath shop jaate hue dekha.

Aur 1.30 ko Abhi ne Ruhi ko postman se letter lete hue dekha. Letter, yaane wishing card lekar ek nazar Ruhi ne Abhi ko dekha aur bhaag kar ghar ke andar gayi aur zor se apni maa ko awaaz diya……

Abhi ne apna kaam jaari rakha…. Ussko pata tha ke andar usska khat padh rahi hogi, shayad apni maa ko sab bata rahi hogi ke Abhi ne kia kaha hai chithi mein….

Ab iss baar chithi mein abhi ne kia likha tha?

Likha tha English mein hi, magar kaha kuch aisa tha Ruhi ko uss letter mein:

“Ruhi sabse pehle main tumse ek sawaal puchta hoon, Ruhi mujhe batao ke hum donon ke bich pichle 3 dinon se kia chal raha hai? Pichle 3 dinon se tum mujhse ek distance rakhne lagi ho kyun Ruhi main janna chahta hoon ke baat kia hai? Tum ko mere aur bahut ziada karib hona chahiye tha inn dinon magar tum ne to aur bhi doorie bana rakha hai kyun Ruhi, kyun?

Iss se pehle tum mujhse openly baat karti thi bina kissi darr ke, aur ab jabke hum donon ne aapas mein baat kar liye hein, tum mere paas bhi nahin arahi ho?! main ab kia samjhun Ruhi? Isska kia matlab hai? Ruhi tum mere paas aane ke liye kiss se darti ho ab? Kisska darr hai tumhein mujhe batao please. Hum kuch ghalat to nahin kar rahe hein nah to darna kyun hai?

Tumhari yeh berukhi mujh par kia kayamat dhaati hai pata hai tumhein? Mujh par kia guzarta hai isska ehsaas hai tumko Ruhi? Meri jaan pe ban aati hai Ruhi….”

Aur bahot kuch likha tha abhi ne uss letter mein jaise likha tha usski pita ane wala hai to ruhi ke taraf se apne pita ko convince karne ko kaha tha, aur apne taraf se Abhi apna pura koshish karega usske pita ko manane ko ke wo donon ke rishte ke liye haan kahe. Abhi ne likha tha

“Tumne kaha tha ke tumhare papa bahot cool aur narm dil insaan hai, to agar tum uss se kahogi ke tum mujhse pyar karti ho to wo kabhi inkaar nahin karega, mere taraf se main bhi uss se kahunga ke main tumko dil o jaan se chahta hoon, udhar tum kahogi ke tum mujhe chahti ho to wo zaroor maan jaega, magar agar tumne kuch nahin kaha aur sirf mere taraf se kaha jaega to ho sakta hai ke wo samjhe ke mera pyar ek tarfa hai, iss liye tumko bhi baat karna hoga Ruhi, don’t forget that my love.”

Yeh bhi likha tha ke shayad 23rd ya 24th ko kaam ka aakhri din hoga aur Abhi ne request kiya tha Ruhi se ke last day ko wo pure din Abhi ke samne rahe, wo ussko din bhar dekhna chahta tha aakri din ko….

To Abhi kaam karte hue khud apne likhe hue shabdon ko yaad kar raha tha aur soch raha tha ke abhi andar Ruhi wohi sab padh rahi hogi aur apni khub surat xmas ki wishing card dekh rahi hogi aur uss par printed khubsurat lavzon ko padh rahi hogi.

Aur haan aakhir mein P.S likha tha Abhi ne khat ne niche bold mein:

P.S: (24th ko main chala jaunga, magar 31st tak tumko ek aur khat post karunga New Year ke mauke par…. uss mein tumko din aur tariq bataunga ke kab apne parents ke saath tumko dekhne aunga, ya ho sakta hai ke ek baar main akele aunga, usske baad tumhare parents se discuss karne ke baad tab apne parents ko lekar aunga tumhare ghar. So, wait for another letter from me by the 31st Decamber.)

Chithi padhne ke baad Ruhi terrace par aayi aur Abhi ko pyar bhade nazron se dekha. Abhi ne socha ke agar wo khat nahin milta aaj to shayad usske saamne aati hi nahin wo.

Ruhi ki maa Abhi ko Ruhi ke piche se dekh kar Abhi ke saath hanss rahi thi, aur Abhi Ruhi ke chehre mein dekh raha tha, aur Ruhi Abhi ko fix dekh rahi thi magar Abhi samajh gaya ke Ruhi uss se kuch kehne ki koshish kar rahi thi magar nahin keh paa rahi thi kyunke bahot sare log the bus mein aur bus ke aage piche chaaron taraf. Manoj, Mahesh, Mehboob, Ruhi ke chachi aur cousins sab the bus ke aas paas. Painting ho gayi thi lag bhag aur bus khubsurat dikhe lagi thi….. phir bhi bus ke andar bahot sare chhote chhote kaam baaki the jo Abhi pura kar raha tha….

Phir bhi Ruhi ne ek baar haath ke ishaare se abhi ko jaise kissi chiz ke liya mana kiya haath ko naah mein hillate hue. Abhi kuch bhi nahin samjha. Magar Ruhi muskura bhi rahi thi saath mein. Abhi Ruhi se baat karne ki koshish kar raha tha magar Ruhi ne Mehboob ke taraf apni ungli point kiya, matlab usske hote hue wo baat nahi karegi. Kuch der tak Ruhi khush dikhi aur Abhi ke aas paas rahi magar kuch der baad phir se wo distance rakhne lagi.

Ruhi apne bhai Mahesh, apni chacha ki beti, aur Farzinah ke saath hassi mazaak kar rahi thi, aur Abhi ko bilkool dekh hi nahin rahi thi jaise Abhi wahan tha hi nahin….. Abhi tadap raha tha, usska dil dukhne laga tha, ussko ghutan feel hone laga tha…. Abhi ko zor se chilla kar rone ka mann kar raha tha….. ussko headache ar heartache ek saath ho raha tha Ruhi ki behaviour se…. Abhi chahta tha ke Ruhi uss se uss tarah se pesh aaye jeise 7 din pehle thi, jaise uss din ko thi jiss raat ko Abhi ne usske ghar guzara tha, Abhi uss din ki tarah Ruhi ke saath rehna chahta tha jinn dinon ko har baar Ruhi ke sath ghar ke piche jaa kar ussko baahon mein bharke kiss kiya karta tha…. Abhi ko Ruhi ko zoron se baahon mein bharne ka mann kar raha tha , wo jaise till till mar raha tha, ghutan feel ho raha tha aur ussko saans lene mein takliff hone laga tha….

Phir bhi ussko kaam karna tha, itne chhote chote boring kaam the buss ke andar aur Abhi ka dimaaghi haalat kuch aisa tha ke kaam nahin ho paa raha tha uss se….

Kaam late end kiya uss din. Jab abhi tools rakhne jaa raha tha washroom mein to Ruhi apne bhai Mahesh aur cousin sis ke saath peyr ke niche baithi hanssi mazaak kar rahi thi… Abhi ka dil dukh raha tha aur wo hanss rahi thi…. Abhi ko ghussa bhi aa raha tha kyunke usske dimaagh ne kaam karna band kar diya tha uss waqt….

Aur jab Abhi unn teenon ke paas se guzra to Ruhi ne kuch aise baatein kiye Abhi ko sunaane ke liye ke Abhi dang reh gaya… Ruhi ne apni cousin sis se hansste hue aur chidhaate hue kaha,

"To tum kia samajh rahi ho ke main tumse shaadi karungi? Kyun tum sach mein samajh rahi ho ke main tumse shaadi karungi? Hahahahaha!!”

Yeh kia tha? Abhi ke liye tha? ya weh log sirf mazaak kar rahe the? Magar Abhi ne to apne pe liya…. Ruhi ne uss baat ko repeat kiya nazrein churaate hue Abhi ko dekh kar jissko Abhi ne dekha… matlab Abhi ne Ruhi ko hansste hue aur uss se nazrein churaate hue dekha jab wo baat ko repeat kar rahi thi ke , KIA TUM SAMAJHTE HO KE MAIN TUMSE SHAADI KARUNGI?

Wo sab dekhne aur sunne ke baad Abhi ko laga ke usske dil ke kayi tukde hue turant ussi waqt… ussko laga ke usski saansein rukne lage hein, laga ke wo hosh khone wala hai, usske aankhon ke saamne andhera sa chha gaya, aur wo jahan tha wahin baith gaya, deewaar se tek lagaate hue…. Tony guzar raha tha, to Abhi ke paas baith kar pucha ke kia hua….

Tab Ruhi aur team khamosh ho gaye the Abhi ko uss haalat mein dekh kar….. kuch der baad Sunil ne abhi se pucha ke kia hua… abhi ne kaha,

“yaar mujhe ab lagta hai ke Ruhi chahti hi nahin ke main usska haath mangun shaadi ke liye… lagta hai usska pyar ek jhoot tha mere liye….”

Sunil ne kaha,

“main uss se baat karun? Thik hai main baat karta hoon ruhi se!”

Magar Abhi ne roka sunil ko aur kaha agar zaroorat padegi tab ussko batayega….. Abhi apna self respect nahin khona chahta tha magar yeh bhi kehta khud se ke jung aur muhabat mein sab kuch jayiz hai to self respect khona kaun si badi baat hai….

Abhi socne laga ke itne saare baat likha tha ussne uss khat mein jissko Ruhi ne kuch der pehle padha, apni dil ki baat likha tha, Ruhi se kaha tha ke uss par kia beet raha hai usski berukhi aur doorie rakhne se, aur Ruhi uss tarah se behave kar rahi thi, ulta Ruhi ko uss khat ko padhne ke baad Abhi ko emotional support dena chahiye tha, magar Ruhi to sab ulta kar rahi thi…. Kiss se apna dil ka dukhda rota abhi ab? Kaun sunta usske dil ka haal, kiss se Abhi apne dil ke andar bhade ghutan ko share karta, kiss ke kandhe par sar rakh kar rota…. Kaun tha samajhne wala ke Abhi par kia beet raha tha… jo samajhne wali thi, wohi sitam par sitam dhaaye jaa rahi thi Abhi par….

Abhi ko akele sab kuch khamoshi se sehna tha. khamosh raha, apne andar sab chhupaaye rakha Abhi ne….

Jab Abhi jaane ke liye tayyar ho gaya to Ruhi wahin baithi rahi, ek nazar utha kar abhi ko dekha tak nahin, Abhi ne bhi bina kuch kahe chup chap nikal aya wahan se…..

Ghar pahunchne ke baad Abhi apne diary mein sab kuch likhte hue khub roya, apne diary ko apne dil ke dukhde ko sunaya Abhi ne….

Soch raha tha kal shayad aakhri din hoga Ruhi ke aangan mein aur ussko pata tha ke kal Ruhi ke pita aane wala tha, to ussko dikh gaya ke kal ka din aur bura hoga kyunke Ruhi apne pita ke wapas aane ki khushi mein ussko aur bhi ziada ignore karegi…. Phir bhi Abhi ne soch liya tha ke apne taraf se jo ussko karna hai wo kar ke rahega, Ruhi ke pita se baat zaroor karega yeh tey tha abhi ke taraf se….

To be continued……

Woooooowww........
Very good and fantastic updates......
Very well written and beautifully described........

Mostly second update.....and abhi's pain......kaafi achchi tarah se aapne ise dikhaya hai......
A very good creation.......


And now let's latke about story......

To pahle baat karte hai abhi ke point of view se........
Ab Abhi ka dimaag chal raha hai......kyoki wo bhi ab chijo me differences ko jaan ne laga hai......Ruhi ke behaviour ki or uske love ki tulna karne laga hai.....sachchai se.....ak tarah se kahe to Ruhi ko observ karne laga hai....
OR kisi ke observation se hee hame saamne waale ke baare me sahi sahi chije pata chalti hai.....
Uske dikhaave or uski reality ke bich ka difference pata chalta hai......


Abhi ke liye Ruhi ka ye ignorance isliye bhi jaanleva hai kyoki.........
Ruhi pahle bhi kai bar aisa kar chuki hai....lekin tab Abhi uss chij ko dil se sochta tha......OR jab bhi Ruhi aisa karti thi use lagta tha ki Ruhi kisi kaam mai fast hui hai.....ya uski koi mazburi hai.....

Lekin ab Abhi dil ke saath dimaag bhi lagaane laga hai.....OR kisi bhi chij me ye jaruri bhi hai.....
Use pata hai ki Ruhi ki koi mazburi nahi hai.....na hee use koi rok ne wala .....phir bhi agar Ruhi use ignore kar rahi hai.....

To wo sirf isliye.....KYOKI WO KHUD CHAHTI HAI USE IGNORE KARNA.....

Abhi ko yeh baat samajh aa chuki hai.....OR yahi baat uske liye jyada takleef dene waali hai.....

Abhi ne khat likha lekin khat me 3 din kyo likha....Ruhi to use 15 se hee ignore kar rahi hai......bas ye hai ki pichle 3 din se ye thoda jyada ho gaya hai.....

Ruhi ki maa ne kaha ki Ruhi bimaar hai....OK.....Abhi ki baat jab uski maa ne use bataayi tab wo khidki par aa gayi....ye bhi thik hai.....
Thik nahi hai wo hai ki wo abhi ke bulaane par piche kyo nahi aayi.....kya sirf darwaze par ya piche ke hisse mai hee log dekhte hai.....
Jis Khidki par do log aaram se khade hai or bahar ki tarah jhuk kar baat kar rahe hai....wo kisi bhi tarah chhoti to nahi hogi.....to kya uss khidki se baat karte hue log nahi dekhenge......

Ha wo jo Abhi ne ghar ke kaam or apne maa ke baare me bataya wo kaafi achcha laga.....kyoki same situation mere saath bhi hai.....

Ruhi ki maa ne kaha ki jo hona hai wo hoga hee.....iss baat ka kya matlab nikala jaaye samajh nahi aa raha.....
Ak tarah wo dono ke bich massanger ka kaam kar rahi hai to dusri taraf Abhi ko mana bhi kar rahi hai ki Ruhi bahar nahi aayegi......

Ab baat kare Ruhi ki to....
TO waise to Mai iss story me romance padhne ke liye aata hu.....lekin aaj ka or pichle kuch updates mujhe romantic kam thrilling jyada lage.....OR aaj ka to khas kar....

Aisa laga jaise koi pre planed game chal raha hai.....Jo ki kaafi bada hai....OR kaafi achche se khela gaya hai.....
Jiski ki kisi ko bhi bhanak nahi hai.....other then.....RUHI'S family.....

OR Ruhi ki current activities or uska aisi situation me bhi dil jamaane waali baat kahna....sab isi baat ki taraf ishaara karta.....ki it's a big game......

Ab baat kare Ruhi ki to Ruhi ka behaviour Abhi strange nahi hua hai......wo starting se hee hai......
Mid ke kuch updates me kaafi achcha tha.....lekin unme bhi kanhi na kanhi koi na koi gadbad jarur thi......puri tarah kabhi bhi wo samarpit nahi lagi.....Abhi ki tarah

Bas ab wo none stability kaafi jyada badh gayi hai......


Ab baat kare Ruhi ke uss line ki .....to

Abhi agar ham ise aise dekhe ki wo mazaak kar rahi hai....to aisi situation me or iss stage par mazaak kaafi dikkat wala ho sakta hai........

OR agar ye sach hai to......ab kabhi bhi Ruhi ise clear nahi kar paayegi.....

Dekhte hai aage kya Hota hai....
Anyways
Very beautiful update....
Thanks....