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Romance Usski Gali Mein Jaana Chorr Diya (Exclusively For XForum) COMPLETED

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Update 2 What Will Abhi Do Now?

Aur teesri salary milne ke baad company ka dilwala nikla gaya aur band hogaya…… yeh sab kyun aur kaise hua agle update mein dekhte hein…..

Ab aaguey….

Company band iss liye hua ke jiss company ko aaj ki owners ke baap ne shuru kiya tha ab 4 bhai chala rahe the…. Charon mein tutu main main hota rehta tha company ke profits ko lekar inn mein se har ek jiada paisa chahta tha, koyi udata phirta tha paisa, sabhi ke wives the aur inn mein se kayi ke wives aise the jo bekaar mein kharch karte, desh videsh ghumne jaate, bekaar ke samaan kharidte, bade bade 5 star hotelon mein din guzaarte, high society walon ke beech waqt guzaarte, aur itna expense karte jitney ki heysiyat thi hi nahin…. Loan par loan lete gaye company ke naam par karonron mein aur bank ko pay back nahin kar paaye iss liye sab chaupath ho gaya….. company ke 300 karamchaari raaste par aagaye… kuch nahin ho paaya, seal lag gaye kaarkhaane mein aur sab apne jobs kho baithe…. Abhi bhi bekaar ho gaya….

Iss ek mahine mein abhi ne bahot enjoy kiya life ko. Har roz peena, ghumna, doston ke saath eysh karna, ache ache jagah jaana, Goa bhi chala gaya mauj masti karne, ladkiyon ko cherrna etc…

Phir takriban ek mahine tak dar dar ke thokrein khaane ke baad, Abhi ko ek din usska master milne aya. Master matlab jiss se Abhi ne company mein kaam seekha tha. usska naam tha Saeed. Saeed koyi 55 saal ka adher aadmi tha aur kyunke Abhi ne bahot jaldi kaam seekha tha aur bahot acha aur saaf kaam karta tha Saeed Abhi ko passand karta tha as a worker.

Ab hota yeh tha uss company mein ke jitney bhi bus owners the wahan se bus kharidne waale, unn logon se Saeed ki jaan pehchaan the. Wo ek bahot purana mulazim tha uss company ka to bus ke maalik log Saeed ko pehchaante the aur kabhi koyi bus ka hissa bigad jata tha to company mein marammat karne ki bajaaye weh log Saeed ke ghar jaakar uss se milte the aur bus ki marammat karne ko kehte jo saeed kar deta tha. Ab samajhlo ke uss marammat ko company mein bus lejaate to 50,000 rupay lagta, to wohi kaam Saeed bus owner ke ghar jaakar kar deta tha aur 10,000 mein kaam ho jata tha.

Iss liye ek din Saeed Abhi se milne aya aur kaha ke usske saath kaam par chalna hai. To Abhi gaya saeed ke saath aur koyi 25 kms ki doorie par ek bus owner tha jisski bus ka accident hua tha aur bus ke front side bilkool bigar gaya tha, to ussko wapas banana tha. uss kaam ke liye 20,000 manga Saeed ne aur owner daam par raazi hua aur kaam shuru hua. 20 dinon mein kaam ko pura kiya Saeed aur Abhi ne.

Saeed ne unn 20 dinon ke liye Abhi ko 5,000 diye aur apne liye 15,000 rakha. Abbi ke liye 5,000 kaafi tha 20 dinon ke kaam ke liye aur ussne Saeed se kaha ke weise hi aur kaam dhundein to kum se kum rozi roti chalta rahega, to Saeed ne kaha dhundna to mushkil hai magar bus owners khud usske paas ayenge tabhi kaam milega.

Jab wo bus wapas kaam karne laga to baaki ke bus owners jinko pata tha uss bus ki accident hui thi aur bus bilkool bigar gaya tha saamne se, phir 20 din baad uss bus ko wapas kaam karte hue dekh kar baaki ke bus owners heyraan hue aur pucha ke kiss ne bus ki marammat itni jaldi kar diye ke lagta hi nahin ke kabhi accident hua tha. iss tarah se saeed ka naam mashoor hone laga bus owners ke darmiyaan. Ek ke munh se dusre ke kaan tak baat feylti gayi aur saeed aur Abhi kaafi mashoor ho gaye tamaam bus owners ke beech. Thik ek hafte baad ek purane bus owner ne apne bus ki marammat karne ko socha kyunke usska bus kaafi purana tha 15 saal se kuch nahin kiya tha uss bus mein aur bahot saare andar ke lohe lagbhag sadh gaye the aur jab bus chalti thi to bahot saare shor hote the aur awaazein sunaayi dete the, passengers complaints karte the. To uss owner ne Saeed se contact kiye aur ek general repair ka kaam shuru hua uss bus mein jo Abhi aur saeed ne karna shuru kiya. Kaam bahot ziada tha bus mein, chasis se lekar upar ke tamaam welded lohe kharaab ho gaye the, naye lohe kharidne the aur kaafi sara alliminium ke tin bhi puraane ho gaye the wo bhi kharidna tha, to uss mein welding ka kaam bhi tha aur alliminium ke bhi, saare bus ke seats nikaale gaye, floorings mein dobara naye rivets lagaane the, wapas seats lagaane the, paint bhi karna tha, bus ke tamaan shishe bhi utaar kar naye rubber lagana tha tin mein jiss par sheeshe chipakte hein; iss liye Abhi ke ilawa Saeed ne aur do mulazimon ko dhunda saath kaam karne ke liye.

Yeh kaam 2 mahinon tak chala. Aur daam hua 60,000 rupay jo owner ne Khushi Khushi diya kyunke ussko pata tha yehi kaam agar company ki garage mein karwata to kariban 2 laakh rupay lag sakte the. Uss mein se Abhi ko 15,000 mila. Abhi bahot khush hua. Ussko life mein pehli baar itna paisa ek saath mila tha ussko. Itna paisa ussne kabhi dekha hi nahin tha ek saath. Ghar mein baap ko ussne 10,000 thama diya. Maa baap donon behad khush hue, bhai behen sab bahot khush hue. Baap ko ab samajh mein aya ke usska beta ab kuch ban gaya hai aur ghar ko sambhaal paega usske marne ke baad.

Abhi apne doston ko nahin bhoola tha, ussne kaafi saare programns banaaye doston ke beech, jinn dinon wo mushkil mein tha, tangi chal rahi thi, unn dinon jinn doston ne usska help kiya tha financially, abhi ne unn sabhi doston ke liye party diye, khub mauj masti kiye, daru pina, picnic jaana, goa jana ladkiyon ko taadna, flirt karna vaghaira vaghaira… wohi jo har naujawaan karta hai abhi bhi bilkool weisa hi tha aur sab kuch enjoy kiya karta tha….

Do hafte tak koyi kaam nahin mila tha to unn do hafton tak Abhi har roz peeta, masti karta, movies dekhne jaata, khub ghumta, long drives par jaata etc…

Phir chhote chhote kaam mile saeed ko jo hafte bhar mein pura ho jaata, chhote marammat, kabhi front windshield badalna, kabhi kahin ke seat banana, kabhi kuch aur karna…magar har kaam karne ke liye saeed abhi ko saath zaroor lejata tha kyunke akele unn kaamon ko karna naamumkin hote the.

Weise ahiste ahiste abhi kuch nah kuch kar liya karta tha jiss se jeb mein paisa bana rehta tha. kabhi iss sheher ke bus owner se jaan pehchaan hota to kabhi door kissi sheher mein, lagbhag 10 se 15 shehron tak ghum chuke the Saeed aur Abhi bus ke marammat karte hue. Fihaal sab sahi chalne laga tha…. magar abhi ke dil mein ek khaalipan sa mehsoos hota tha…. Wo apne dil ki maalkin ki talaash mein bhi laga hua tha…

Pure do saal beet gaye company ko bandh hue, aur inn do saalon mein takriban 20 se 25 bus owners ke yahan kaam kar liye the Saeed aur Abhi ne. Donon mashoor ho gaye the as bus coach builders. Aur door door tak desh mein innke naam ho gaye the bus ke maalikon ke beech.

Abhi raat ko jab apne diary mein likhta to udaas ho jaata aur likhta ke abhi tak usski zindagi mein wo nahin aayi hai jisski usse talaash hai. Likhta ke kahin na kahin to koyi bani hogi usske liye aur wo bhi abhi ka intezaar kar rahi hogi kissi kone mein. Abhi sochta, tassavur mein khote hue kehta ke…

“Wo din kaisa hoga jab ussko pehli baar dekhunga? Wo mujhko dekh kar kaisa feel karegi? Kia mere nazron mein wo padh paegi ke main usske liye bana hoon? Kia main ussko pehchaan lunga? Aur wo? Kia wo mujhko ek nazar mein hi pehchaan legi? Haan main to ussko dekhte hi samajh jaunga ke wo mere liye bani hai…. Kia mujhko uss tak pahunchne mein mushkilein pesh ayenge? Ya sab kuch asaan se ho jaega? Bichadna to nahin padega jaise Ruhi se bichda hoon?.”

Abhi almost har raat ko yeh sab sochta, yehi kuch likhta apne diary mein, aur kabhi uss copy book ko padhta jiss mein usske aur Ruhi ke beech ka tamaam kissa likha hai ussne, wo padhkar usske aakhen nam ho jaate aur wo ruhi ko sochne lagta aur sochta ke iss waqt Ruhi kitni badi ho gayi hogi, wo kitni khubsurat lag rahi hogi. Agar aaj wo yahan hoti to wo Abhi ke baahon mein hoti…. Abhi har raat ko kuch eisa sochte hue neendh ke aagosh mein chala jata….

To be continued…..

Bhai issko kal padh liya tha par reply karna bhool gaya tha sorry.
Bahut shaandar update hai ye wala bhi bhai
 

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Update 3 A new turn in Abhi’s Life

Ek jaana maana bus owner tha Mehboob Jaan naam ka. Usske 4 buses running already the roads par. Magar usski nazar ek puraane sade hue bus par padi kahin ek jangal mein jo kissi bus owner ne dump kar diya tha. Uss par ghaans phuss, pawde bhi ug uthe the. Mehboob Jaan ne uss bus ka moaena kiya to paaya ke usski chassi bilkool mazbut aut achchah hai, magar engine tha hi nahin bus mein sirf chasis samet sada hua coach tha uss par. Mehboob jaan ne socha ke 50,000 mein ek second hand engine to mil hi jaega, chasis sahi hai to sirf coach building karna padega aur bus wapas road par chalaya jaa sakta hai. Chasis ka number note kiya ussne aur legal matter ke liye road traffic branch walon ke contact se pata kar liya ke sab legally banaya jaa sakta hai agar wo bus ko wapas road par lana chaahe to.

To ussko ab Saeed se milna baaki tha jo ussne kiya. Saeed ko lekar wo bus dikhaane legaya. Uss bus mein kaam wohi karna tha jo bilkool ek naye bus mein kiya jaata hai shuru se ant tak. Matlab chasis se shuru karna hoga aur end tak coach building karni hogi. Eise kaam ke liye garage mein 20 laakh rupay lag jata hai. Aur agar naye bus par coach building karna hota hai tab 40 se 50 laakh lagta hai. Yeh sab Mehboob ko bhi pata tha aur Saeed ko bhi. Mehboob ne Saeed se pucha ke kitne ki material takreeban kharidne padenge? Aur bus ko pura banaane mein kitna time lagega?

Saeed ke dimaagh mein kayi batein chal rahe thee uss waqt. Wo soch raha tha garage ke hisaab se kitna paisa lagta mehbob ko aur ab saeed garage wala kaam pura karne wala tha to kitna paisa lena chahiye ussko Mehboob se ek pura bus ki coach banaane ke liye. Saeed ne socha ke Abhi se milkar decision lena padega ussko, to ussne Mehboob se kaha,

“Mujhe apne workers se baat karna hoga pehle, yeh unn ke haath mein hein ke kitne dinon mein kaam pura ho sakta hai aur materials ke liye ek quotation banwa kar dunga aap ko, bahot saare sheets of alluminium kharidne honge, bahot metals kharidne honge pura frame ke liye aur bus ke tamaam seats ke liye alag se metals lene honge aur saare seats bhi banana hein, tamaam shishe bus ke kharidne hein….sab kuch from zero start karna hai….. upar se saare rivets, floorings, ceilings ke pannels, sides ke frames, sab kuch shuru se start karna hai bilkool jaise ek naya bus banta hai weise karna hai….”

Mehboob ne kaha ke wo sab karne ko tayyaar hai ussko wo bus wapas road par chahiye hi chahiye!

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Saeed jaakar Abhi se mila aur ussko lekar uss jangal mein bus dikhaane legaya aur donon milkar discuss karne lage ke kitna cost hoga saare meterials ka aur kitna paisa lena padega Mehboob se bus ko road par laane ke liye aur kitne dinon mein kaamm pura ho sakta hai.

Saeed aur Abhi phir usske ghar par mile aur kagaz kalam lekar baithe donon sab kuch likhne ke liye.

Saare materials ko soch soch kar likha gaya ek ek karke, sab yaad karte hue ke bus ki coach banaane ke liye kia kia istemaal hota hai, ek kil se lekar alliminium sheets tak sab kuch likha gaya aur daam ek kone mein note kiya gaya.

Ek pura quotation tayaar kiya abhi ne. kyunke wo padha likha tha to iss liye Saeed ne Abhi par count kiya wo sab tayyaar karne ke liye. Sab kuch kalam aur kaagaz par kiya gaya computer to tha nahin tab.

Usske baad ab donon ne discuss kiye ke kitna paisa lena hoga Mehboob se uss kaam ke liye. Saeed aur Abhi ne milkar discuss kiya ke company ki garage mein to uss kaam ke liye kum se kum do ya teen laakh liye jaate aur 3 mahinon mein kaam pura kiya jaata…. To baat yeh hui ke garage mein aur bhi kayi mulaazim kaam karte tab 3 mahinon mein kaam pura hota, yahan to 4 mulazim hein to ziada din to lagenge hi…… 6 mahine socha donon ne… phir socha ke Mehboob ko 6 mahine bahot ziada lagenge, to 4 se 5 mahine kehne ko socha donon ne. Tab baat aayi paise ki, labour ki, matlan mazdoori ki….. Saeed ne kaha ke 75,000 mangega. Aur kaha ke wo 50,000 lega aur Abhi ko 25,000 dega.

Abhi ne kaha,

“75,000? Aap paagal ho kia saeed ji? 3 laakh ka kaam aap 75 hazaar rupay mein karoge? Aur do workers ke bhi payment karne honge to keise mujhko 25 aur aap 50 loge unn mein se? Main kehta hoon do laakh mangna hai Mehboob ji se iss kaam ke liye.”

Abhi door ka sochta tha. Saeed ji ke liye 75 hazaar bahot bada rakam tha iss liye ussko ziada maangna ajeeb lag raha tha, magar Abhi ko pata tha ke Mehboob ji agar garage ko 3 laakh ki payment kar sakte hein to 2 laakh to de paega iss kaam ke liye. To Saeed ji ne kaha,

“Dekho Abhi, mujh mein himmat nahin hai Mehboob ji se itna bada rakam maangne ki, ek kaam karte hein, tum mere saath chalo, main tumko apne assistant kehkar milwaunga uss se aur tum price discuss karna unnke saath dekhte hein kia hota hai.”

Abhi maan gaya. Aur donon mile Mehboob ji ke ghar par. Abhi ne quotation de diya Mehboob ji ko. Derr laakh ki materials kharidne the Mehboob ji ko. Tab ussne Saeed ji se pucha ke kitna lenge iss kaam ke liye aur kitne dinon mein kaam pura hoga. To Saeed ne Mehboob se kaha,

“Ussi se puchiye nah janaab, yeh Abhi hai nah wohi sab accounting karta hai. Wo sahi figures dega aap ko.”

Mehboob ke yahan aane se pehle to baat 2 laakh ki hui thi magar yahan Abhi ne Mehboob se 3 laakh ki farmaayish kiye! Saeed ji ko jhatka laga 3 laakh sunkar! Magar Mehboob ji ne abhi se pucha,

“3 laakh kuch ziada nahin hai barkhurdaar? Garage mein bhi to utna hi lagta nah?”

Abhi ne kaha,

“Kia aap ke yahan garage hai janaab? Ya aap ke yahan hum khule hawa mein kaam karenge, dhoop mein tapte hue saare kaam karne honge, inn sab ko khayal mein rakhte hue hi nah humne sab kuch socha hai? Aur phir do aur mulaazim honge hamaare saath, unnke bhi to payments karne honge, travellings ka bhi socha hai humne saare mulazim ke travelling ka khayal bhi to karna padta hai nah?”

Mehboob ji ne muskuraate hue wapas Saeed ji ko dekha aur kaha,

“Are saeed bhai aap to apne finance manager ko lekar saath aaye ho ya yeh aap ka HR hai?!” aur wo hanss pade.

Mehboob ji ne 3 laakh ko Manzoor kiya jiss se Saeed ji ko zabardast jhatka laga, ussne to sapne mein bhi nahin socha tha ke life mein kabhi kissi se 3 laakh maangega kaam karne ke liye.

Saeed chup chaap baitha raha aur Abhi ko sab deal pura karne diya.

Mehboob ji ne pucha ke kitne dinon mein kaam pura hoga. Abhi ne kaha 5 se 6 mahine to lag jaega, aur Mehboob ji ko mechanics wale kaam alag se karwane honge engine ko lekar aur paintings bhi alag se wo karwaega apne taraf se. Mehboob ji raazi hue aur pucha ke payment kaise karega sab ek saath kaam pura hone ke baad ya advance payment chahiye?

Bina Saeed ko dekhe ya puche Abhi ne kaha,

“Agar aap 1 laakh de dete hamein kaam shuru hone se pehle to hamaare liye asaan hota baaki ke mulazimon ki payment karne ke liye kyunke unn logon ko weekly payment karte hein hum.”

Saeed ji ko ek aur jhatka laga abhi ki baat ko sunkar. Ussne to life mein kabhi 1 lakh rupay nah liya tha nah dekha tha. Aur 22 saal ki umar ka Abhi 1 lakh rupay maang raha tha ek bus owner se, wo bhi advance aur 2 lakh kaam pura hone ke baad milne wala tha….. Saeed soch raha tha ke sala ussne to 75 hazaar pura kaam ke liye maangne wala tha! aur yahan abhi advance 1 lakh mang raha hai aur Mehboob dene ko tayyaar tha!

Mehboob ji ne ek cheque kata 1 laakh rupay ki aur Abhi ko thama diya Saeed ko dekhte hue. Phir pucha ke kaam shuru kab hoga. To Abhi ne kaha kaam kal se hi shuru hoga, bus ko tow kiya jaega unnke aangan mein aaj hi.

Wahan se nikle to Saeed ne abhi se kaha,

“kamaal karte ho tum abhi? Sala 2 laakh ki baat hui thi aur tumne 3 laakh mang liya?”

Abhi ne zor se hansste hue kaha,

“Yeh ek laakh mera apna kamaayi hai saeed ji. Iss mein se main aap ko kuch nahin dene wala” aur zoron se hanssta gaya. Saeed ji khamosh rahe.

Kuch der baad Abhi ne pucha,

“yeh cheque aap apne account mein debit karoge ya main apne account mein daal dun?”

Saeed ne kaha,

“are beta mera to aaj tak koyi bank account hai hi nahin! To tumhi dalo apne account mein nah!”

Uss din life mein pehli baar Abhi ki bank account mein 1 lakh rupay deposit kiya gaya! Jiss bande ko 10 rupay ke liye tarasna padta tha, ek cigarette pine ke liye doston se maangna padta tha aaj 1 lakh rupay deposit kiya gaya usske account mein ussko khud yakeen nahin ho raha tha!

Shaam ko bus tow kiya gaya aur Mehboob ji ke aangan mein ek bade se peyr ke niche rakha gaya. Saeed aur Abhi wahin maujood the. Bus ko dekh kar log hanss rahe the. Pados ke log aakar bus ko dekhne lage jiss par ghanns phuss uge hue the, itna mayla tha, ganda tha, gande hare rang ke paani kayi jaga jama hua tha bus mein, jo ek do sheeshe bache hue the sab dark green gande iss kadar dikh rahe the ke ghin araha tha… kuch log Mehboob ji ko paagal keh rahe the ke ek sade hue bus ko jangal se uthakar apne aanagn mein laa rakha tha….

Abhi sun raha tha sabhi ke comments ko aur apne dil mein kaha,

“saalo, teen mahine baad tumhi log taarif karne aoge iss bus ki….”

Aur yahan par shuru hoti hai Abhi ki Romantic kahani… Abhi ne achanak kissi mahila ki awaaz ko kuch yun phukaarte hue suna;

“Ari oh Ruhi kia kar rahi hai aa dekh tere Mehboob chacha ne kia laya hai aangan mein!”

To be continued………..

Wow kia update hai. Bahut acha laga k Abhi ne kuch kar dikhaya. Iss umar mein hi laakh rupay kamana asaan baat nahin hai. Saeed ji khud hairan reh gaye k baat 2 lakh ki hui aur 3 lakh kehkar Abhi ne deal tey kar liya aur 1 lakh advance bhi le liya. Shabash.
Magar update ki end mein yeh kia?
Kiss ne Ruhi ko awaaz diye?
Suspense kal khulega tab tak hum wait karte hai Casi ji.
Superb update
 

Nayan Radhee

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Update 3 A new turn in Abhi’s Life

Ek jaana maana bus owner tha Mehboob Jaan naam ka. Usske 4 buses running already the roads par. Magar usski nazar ek puraane sade hue bus par padi kahin ek jangal mein jo kissi bus owner ne dump kar diya tha. Uss par ghaans phuss, pawde bhi ug uthe the. Mehboob Jaan ne uss bus ka moaena kiya to paaya ke usski chassi bilkool mazbut aut achchah hai, magar engine tha hi nahin bus mein sirf chasis samet sada hua coach tha uss par. Mehboob jaan ne socha ke 50,000 mein ek second hand engine to mil hi jaega, chasis sahi hai to sirf coach building karna padega aur bus wapas road par chalaya jaa sakta hai. Chasis ka number note kiya ussne aur legal matter ke liye road traffic branch walon ke contact se pata kar liya ke sab legally banaya jaa sakta hai agar wo bus ko wapas road par lana chaahe to.

To ussko ab Saeed se milna baaki tha jo ussne kiya. Saeed ko lekar wo bus dikhaane legaya. Uss bus mein kaam wohi karna tha jo bilkool ek naye bus mein kiya jaata hai shuru se ant tak. Matlab chasis se shuru karna hoga aur end tak coach building karni hogi. Eise kaam ke liye garage mein 20 laakh rupay lag jata hai. Aur agar naye bus par coach building karna hota hai tab 40 se 50 laakh lagta hai. Yeh sab Mehboob ko bhi pata tha aur Saeed ko bhi. Mehboob ne Saeed se pucha ke kitne ki material takreeban kharidne padenge? Aur bus ko pura banaane mein kitna time lagega?

Saeed ke dimaagh mein kayi batein chal rahe thee uss waqt. Wo soch raha tha garage ke hisaab se kitna paisa lagta mehbob ko aur ab saeed garage wala kaam pura karne wala tha to kitna paisa lena chahiye ussko Mehboob se ek pura bus ki coach banaane ke liye. Saeed ne socha ke Abhi se milkar decision lena padega ussko, to ussne Mehboob se kaha,

“Mujhe apne workers se baat karna hoga pehle, yeh unn ke haath mein hein ke kitne dinon mein kaam pura ho sakta hai aur materials ke liye ek quotation banwa kar dunga aap ko, bahot saare sheets of alluminium kharidne honge, bahot metals kharidne honge pura frame ke liye aur bus ke tamaam seats ke liye alag se metals lene honge aur saare seats bhi banana hein, tamaam shishe bus ke kharidne hein….sab kuch from zero start karna hai….. upar se saare rivets, floorings, ceilings ke pannels, sides ke frames, sab kuch shuru se start karna hai bilkool jaise ek naya bus banta hai weise karna hai….”

Mehboob ne kaha ke wo sab karne ko tayyaar hai ussko wo bus wapas road par chahiye hi chahiye!

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Saeed jaakar Abhi se mila aur ussko lekar uss jangal mein bus dikhaane legaya aur donon milkar discuss karne lage ke kitna cost hoga saare meterials ka aur kitna paisa lena padega Mehboob se bus ko road par laane ke liye aur kitne dinon mein kaamm pura ho sakta hai.

Saeed aur Abhi phir usske ghar par mile aur kagaz kalam lekar baithe donon sab kuch likhne ke liye.

Saare materials ko soch soch kar likha gaya ek ek karke, sab yaad karte hue ke bus ki coach banaane ke liye kia kia istemaal hota hai, ek kil se lekar alliminium sheets tak sab kuch likha gaya aur daam ek kone mein note kiya gaya.

Ek pura quotation tayaar kiya abhi ne. kyunke wo padha likha tha to iss liye Saeed ne Abhi par count kiya wo sab tayyaar karne ke liye. Sab kuch kalam aur kaagaz par kiya gaya computer to tha nahin tab.

Usske baad ab donon ne discuss kiye ke kitna paisa lena hoga Mehboob se uss kaam ke liye. Saeed aur Abhi ne milkar discuss kiya ke company ki garage mein to uss kaam ke liye kum se kum do ya teen laakh liye jaate aur 3 mahinon mein kaam pura kiya jaata…. To baat yeh hui ke garage mein aur bhi kayi mulaazim kaam karte tab 3 mahinon mein kaam pura hota, yahan to 4 mulazim hein to ziada din to lagenge hi…… 6 mahine socha donon ne… phir socha ke Mehboob ko 6 mahine bahot ziada lagenge, to 4 se 5 mahine kehne ko socha donon ne. Tab baat aayi paise ki, labour ki, matlan mazdoori ki….. Saeed ne kaha ke 75,000 mangega. Aur kaha ke wo 50,000 lega aur Abhi ko 25,000 dega.

Abhi ne kaha,

“75,000? Aap paagal ho kia saeed ji? 3 laakh ka kaam aap 75 hazaar rupay mein karoge? Aur do workers ke bhi payment karne honge to keise mujhko 25 aur aap 50 loge unn mein se? Main kehta hoon do laakh mangna hai Mehboob ji se iss kaam ke liye.”

Abhi door ka sochta tha. Saeed ji ke liye 75 hazaar bahot bada rakam tha iss liye ussko ziada maangna ajeeb lag raha tha, magar Abhi ko pata tha ke Mehboob ji agar garage ko 3 laakh ki payment kar sakte hein to 2 laakh to de paega iss kaam ke liye. To Saeed ji ne kaha,

“Dekho Abhi, mujh mein himmat nahin hai Mehboob ji se itna bada rakam maangne ki, ek kaam karte hein, tum mere saath chalo, main tumko apne assistant kehkar milwaunga uss se aur tum price discuss karna unnke saath dekhte hein kia hota hai.”

Abhi maan gaya. Aur donon mile Mehboob ji ke ghar par. Abhi ne quotation de diya Mehboob ji ko. Derr laakh ki materials kharidne the Mehboob ji ko. Tab ussne Saeed ji se pucha ke kitna lenge iss kaam ke liye aur kitne dinon mein kaam pura hoga. To Saeed ne Mehboob se kaha,

“Ussi se puchiye nah janaab, yeh Abhi hai nah wohi sab accounting karta hai. Wo sahi figures dega aap ko.”

Mehboob ke yahan aane se pehle to baat 2 laakh ki hui thi magar yahan Abhi ne Mehboob se 3 laakh ki farmaayish kiye! Saeed ji ko jhatka laga 3 laakh sunkar! Magar Mehboob ji ne abhi se pucha,

“3 laakh kuch ziada nahin hai barkhurdaar? Garage mein bhi to utna hi lagta nah?”

Abhi ne kaha,

“Kia aap ke yahan garage hai janaab? Ya aap ke yahan hum khule hawa mein kaam karenge, dhoop mein tapte hue saare kaam karne honge, inn sab ko khayal mein rakhte hue hi nah humne sab kuch socha hai? Aur phir do aur mulaazim honge hamaare saath, unnke bhi to payments karne honge, travellings ka bhi socha hai humne saare mulazim ke travelling ka khayal bhi to karna padta hai nah?”

Mehboob ji ne muskuraate hue wapas Saeed ji ko dekha aur kaha,

“Are saeed bhai aap to apne finance manager ko lekar saath aaye ho ya yeh aap ka HR hai?!” aur wo hanss pade.

Mehboob ji ne 3 laakh ko Manzoor kiya jiss se Saeed ji ko zabardast jhatka laga, ussne to sapne mein bhi nahin socha tha ke life mein kabhi kissi se 3 laakh maangega kaam karne ke liye.

Saeed chup chaap baitha raha aur Abhi ko sab deal pura karne diya.

Mehboob ji ne pucha ke kitne dinon mein kaam pura hoga. Abhi ne kaha 5 se 6 mahine to lag jaega, aur Mehboob ji ko mechanics wale kaam alag se karwane honge engine ko lekar aur paintings bhi alag se wo karwaega apne taraf se. Mehboob ji raazi hue aur pucha ke payment kaise karega sab ek saath kaam pura hone ke baad ya advance payment chahiye?

Bina Saeed ko dekhe ya puche Abhi ne kaha,

“Agar aap 1 laakh de dete hamein kaam shuru hone se pehle to hamaare liye asaan hota baaki ke mulazimon ki payment karne ke liye kyunke unn logon ko weekly payment karte hein hum.”

Saeed ji ko ek aur jhatka laga abhi ki baat ko sunkar. Ussne to life mein kabhi 1 lakh rupay nah liya tha nah dekha tha. Aur 22 saal ki umar ka Abhi 1 lakh rupay maang raha tha ek bus owner se, wo bhi advance aur 2 lakh kaam pura hone ke baad milne wala tha….. Saeed soch raha tha ke sala ussne to 75 hazaar pura kaam ke liye maangne wala tha! aur yahan abhi advance 1 lakh mang raha hai aur Mehboob dene ko tayyaar tha!

Mehboob ji ne ek cheque kata 1 laakh rupay ki aur Abhi ko thama diya Saeed ko dekhte hue. Phir pucha ke kaam shuru kab hoga. To Abhi ne kaha kaam kal se hi shuru hoga, bus ko tow kiya jaega unnke aangan mein aaj hi.

Wahan se nikle to Saeed ne abhi se kaha,

“kamaal karte ho tum abhi? Sala 2 laakh ki baat hui thi aur tumne 3 laakh mang liya?”

Abhi ne zor se hansste hue kaha,

“Yeh ek laakh mera apna kamaayi hai saeed ji. Iss mein se main aap ko kuch nahin dene wala” aur zoron se hanssta gaya. Saeed ji khamosh rahe.

Kuch der baad Abhi ne pucha,

“yeh cheque aap apne account mein debit karoge ya main apne account mein daal dun?”

Saeed ne kaha,

“are beta mera to aaj tak koyi bank account hai hi nahin! To tumhi dalo apne account mein nah!”

Uss din life mein pehli baar Abhi ki bank account mein 1 lakh rupay deposit kiya gaya! Jiss bande ko 10 rupay ke liye tarasna padta tha, ek cigarette pine ke liye doston se maangna padta tha aaj 1 lakh rupay deposit kiya gaya usske account mein ussko khud yakeen nahin ho raha tha!

Shaam ko bus tow kiya gaya aur Mehboob ji ke aangan mein ek bade se peyr ke niche rakha gaya. Saeed aur Abhi wahin maujood the. Bus ko dekh kar log hanss rahe the. Pados ke log aakar bus ko dekhne lage jiss par ghanns phuss uge hue the, itna mayla tha, ganda tha, gande hare rang ke paani kayi jaga jama hua tha bus mein, jo ek do sheeshe bache hue the sab dark green gande iss kadar dikh rahe the ke ghin araha tha… kuch log Mehboob ji ko paagal keh rahe the ke ek sade hue bus ko jangal se uthakar apne aanagn mein laa rakha tha….

Abhi sun raha tha sabhi ke comments ko aur apne dil mein kaha,

“saalo, teen mahine baad tumhi log taarif karne aoge iss bus ki….”

Aur yahan par shuru hoti hai Abhi ki Romantic kahani… Abhi ne achanak kissi mahila ki awaaz ko kuch yun phukaarte hue suna;

“Ari oh Ruhi kia kar rahi hai aa dekh tere Mehboob chacha ne kia laya hai aangan mein!”

To be continued………..

Bahut shaandaar update Casi bhai.
Maja agaya.
Kaun si Ruhi ko phukara gaya bhai??
 

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Update 3 A new turn in Abhi’s Life

Ek jaana maana bus owner tha Mehboob Jaan naam ka. Usske 4 buses running already the roads par. Magar usski nazar ek puraane sade hue bus par padi kahin ek jangal mein jo kissi bus owner ne dump kar diya tha. Uss par ghaans phuss, pawde bhi ug uthe the. Mehboob Jaan ne uss bus ka moaena kiya to paaya ke usski chassi bilkool mazbut aut achchah hai, magar engine tha hi nahin bus mein sirf chasis samet sada hua coach tha uss par. Mehboob jaan ne socha ke 50,000 mein ek second hand engine to mil hi jaega, chasis sahi hai to sirf coach building karna padega aur bus wapas road par chalaya jaa sakta hai. Chasis ka number note kiya ussne aur legal matter ke liye road traffic branch walon ke contact se pata kar liya ke sab legally banaya jaa sakta hai agar wo bus ko wapas road par lana chaahe to.

To ussko ab Saeed se milna baaki tha jo ussne kiya. Saeed ko lekar wo bus dikhaane legaya. Uss bus mein kaam wohi karna tha jo bilkool ek naye bus mein kiya jaata hai shuru se ant tak. Matlab chasis se shuru karna hoga aur end tak coach building karni hogi. Eise kaam ke liye garage mein 20 laakh rupay lag jata hai. Aur agar naye bus par coach building karna hota hai tab 40 se 50 laakh lagta hai. Yeh sab Mehboob ko bhi pata tha aur Saeed ko bhi. Mehboob ne Saeed se pucha ke kitne ki material takreeban kharidne padenge? Aur bus ko pura banaane mein kitna time lagega?

Saeed ke dimaagh mein kayi batein chal rahe thee uss waqt. Wo soch raha tha garage ke hisaab se kitna paisa lagta mehbob ko aur ab saeed garage wala kaam pura karne wala tha to kitna paisa lena chahiye ussko Mehboob se ek pura bus ki coach banaane ke liye. Saeed ne socha ke Abhi se milkar decision lena padega ussko, to ussne Mehboob se kaha,

“Mujhe apne workers se baat karna hoga pehle, yeh unn ke haath mein hein ke kitne dinon mein kaam pura ho sakta hai aur materials ke liye ek quotation banwa kar dunga aap ko, bahot saare sheets of alluminium kharidne honge, bahot metals kharidne honge pura frame ke liye aur bus ke tamaam seats ke liye alag se metals lene honge aur saare seats bhi banana hein, tamaam shishe bus ke kharidne hein….sab kuch from zero start karna hai….. upar se saare rivets, floorings, ceilings ke pannels, sides ke frames, sab kuch shuru se start karna hai bilkool jaise ek naya bus banta hai weise karna hai….”

Mehboob ne kaha ke wo sab karne ko tayyaar hai ussko wo bus wapas road par chahiye hi chahiye!

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Saeed jaakar Abhi se mila aur ussko lekar uss jangal mein bus dikhaane legaya aur donon milkar discuss karne lage ke kitna cost hoga saare meterials ka aur kitna paisa lena padega Mehboob se bus ko road par laane ke liye aur kitne dinon mein kaamm pura ho sakta hai.

Saeed aur Abhi phir usske ghar par mile aur kagaz kalam lekar baithe donon sab kuch likhne ke liye.

Saare materials ko soch soch kar likha gaya ek ek karke, sab yaad karte hue ke bus ki coach banaane ke liye kia kia istemaal hota hai, ek kil se lekar alliminium sheets tak sab kuch likha gaya aur daam ek kone mein note kiya gaya.

Ek pura quotation tayaar kiya abhi ne. kyunke wo padha likha tha to iss liye Saeed ne Abhi par count kiya wo sab tayyaar karne ke liye. Sab kuch kalam aur kaagaz par kiya gaya computer to tha nahin tab.

Usske baad ab donon ne discuss kiye ke kitna paisa lena hoga Mehboob se uss kaam ke liye. Saeed aur Abhi ne milkar discuss kiya ke company ki garage mein to uss kaam ke liye kum se kum do ya teen laakh liye jaate aur 3 mahinon mein kaam pura kiya jaata…. To baat yeh hui ke garage mein aur bhi kayi mulaazim kaam karte tab 3 mahinon mein kaam pura hota, yahan to 4 mulazim hein to ziada din to lagenge hi…… 6 mahine socha donon ne… phir socha ke Mehboob ko 6 mahine bahot ziada lagenge, to 4 se 5 mahine kehne ko socha donon ne. Tab baat aayi paise ki, labour ki, matlan mazdoori ki….. Saeed ne kaha ke 75,000 mangega. Aur kaha ke wo 50,000 lega aur Abhi ko 25,000 dega.

Abhi ne kaha,

“75,000? Aap paagal ho kia saeed ji? 3 laakh ka kaam aap 75 hazaar rupay mein karoge? Aur do workers ke bhi payment karne honge to keise mujhko 25 aur aap 50 loge unn mein se? Main kehta hoon do laakh mangna hai Mehboob ji se iss kaam ke liye.”

Abhi door ka sochta tha. Saeed ji ke liye 75 hazaar bahot bada rakam tha iss liye ussko ziada maangna ajeeb lag raha tha, magar Abhi ko pata tha ke Mehboob ji agar garage ko 3 laakh ki payment kar sakte hein to 2 laakh to de paega iss kaam ke liye. To Saeed ji ne kaha,

“Dekho Abhi, mujh mein himmat nahin hai Mehboob ji se itna bada rakam maangne ki, ek kaam karte hein, tum mere saath chalo, main tumko apne assistant kehkar milwaunga uss se aur tum price discuss karna unnke saath dekhte hein kia hota hai.”

Abhi maan gaya. Aur donon mile Mehboob ji ke ghar par. Abhi ne quotation de diya Mehboob ji ko. Derr laakh ki materials kharidne the Mehboob ji ko. Tab ussne Saeed ji se pucha ke kitna lenge iss kaam ke liye aur kitne dinon mein kaam pura hoga. To Saeed ne Mehboob se kaha,

“Ussi se puchiye nah janaab, yeh Abhi hai nah wohi sab accounting karta hai. Wo sahi figures dega aap ko.”

Mehboob ke yahan aane se pehle to baat 2 laakh ki hui thi magar yahan Abhi ne Mehboob se 3 laakh ki farmaayish kiye! Saeed ji ko jhatka laga 3 laakh sunkar! Magar Mehboob ji ne abhi se pucha,

“3 laakh kuch ziada nahin hai barkhurdaar? Garage mein bhi to utna hi lagta nah?”

Abhi ne kaha,

“Kia aap ke yahan garage hai janaab? Ya aap ke yahan hum khule hawa mein kaam karenge, dhoop mein tapte hue saare kaam karne honge, inn sab ko khayal mein rakhte hue hi nah humne sab kuch socha hai? Aur phir do aur mulaazim honge hamaare saath, unnke bhi to payments karne honge, travellings ka bhi socha hai humne saare mulazim ke travelling ka khayal bhi to karna padta hai nah?”

Mehboob ji ne muskuraate hue wapas Saeed ji ko dekha aur kaha,

“Are saeed bhai aap to apne finance manager ko lekar saath aaye ho ya yeh aap ka HR hai?!” aur wo hanss pade.

Mehboob ji ne 3 laakh ko Manzoor kiya jiss se Saeed ji ko zabardast jhatka laga, ussne to sapne mein bhi nahin socha tha ke life mein kabhi kissi se 3 laakh maangega kaam karne ke liye.

Saeed chup chaap baitha raha aur Abhi ko sab deal pura karne diya.

Mehboob ji ne pucha ke kitne dinon mein kaam pura hoga. Abhi ne kaha 5 se 6 mahine to lag jaega, aur Mehboob ji ko mechanics wale kaam alag se karwane honge engine ko lekar aur paintings bhi alag se wo karwaega apne taraf se. Mehboob ji raazi hue aur pucha ke payment kaise karega sab ek saath kaam pura hone ke baad ya advance payment chahiye?

Bina Saeed ko dekhe ya puche Abhi ne kaha,

“Agar aap 1 laakh de dete hamein kaam shuru hone se pehle to hamaare liye asaan hota baaki ke mulazimon ki payment karne ke liye kyunke unn logon ko weekly payment karte hein hum.”

Saeed ji ko ek aur jhatka laga abhi ki baat ko sunkar. Ussne to life mein kabhi 1 lakh rupay nah liya tha nah dekha tha. Aur 22 saal ki umar ka Abhi 1 lakh rupay maang raha tha ek bus owner se, wo bhi advance aur 2 lakh kaam pura hone ke baad milne wala tha….. Saeed soch raha tha ke sala ussne to 75 hazaar pura kaam ke liye maangne wala tha! aur yahan abhi advance 1 lakh mang raha hai aur Mehboob dene ko tayyaar tha!

Mehboob ji ne ek cheque kata 1 laakh rupay ki aur Abhi ko thama diya Saeed ko dekhte hue. Phir pucha ke kaam shuru kab hoga. To Abhi ne kaha kaam kal se hi shuru hoga, bus ko tow kiya jaega unnke aangan mein aaj hi.

Wahan se nikle to Saeed ne abhi se kaha,

“kamaal karte ho tum abhi? Sala 2 laakh ki baat hui thi aur tumne 3 laakh mang liya?”

Abhi ne zor se hansste hue kaha,

“Yeh ek laakh mera apna kamaayi hai saeed ji. Iss mein se main aap ko kuch nahin dene wala” aur zoron se hanssta gaya. Saeed ji khamosh rahe.

Kuch der baad Abhi ne pucha,

“yeh cheque aap apne account mein debit karoge ya main apne account mein daal dun?”

Saeed ne kaha,

“are beta mera to aaj tak koyi bank account hai hi nahin! To tumhi dalo apne account mein nah!”

Uss din life mein pehli baar Abhi ki bank account mein 1 lakh rupay deposit kiya gaya! Jiss bande ko 10 rupay ke liye tarasna padta tha, ek cigarette pine ke liye doston se maangna padta tha aaj 1 lakh rupay deposit kiya gaya usske account mein ussko khud yakeen nahin ho raha tha!

Shaam ko bus tow kiya gaya aur Mehboob ji ke aangan mein ek bade se peyr ke niche rakha gaya. Saeed aur Abhi wahin maujood the. Bus ko dekh kar log hanss rahe the. Pados ke log aakar bus ko dekhne lage jiss par ghanns phuss uge hue the, itna mayla tha, ganda tha, gande hare rang ke paani kayi jaga jama hua tha bus mein, jo ek do sheeshe bache hue the sab dark green gande iss kadar dikh rahe the ke ghin araha tha… kuch log Mehboob ji ko paagal keh rahe the ke ek sade hue bus ko jangal se uthakar apne aanagn mein laa rakha tha….

Abhi sun raha tha sabhi ke comments ko aur apne dil mein kaha,

“saalo, teen mahine baad tumhi log taarif karne aoge iss bus ki….”

Aur yahan par shuru hoti hai Abhi ki Romantic kahani… Abhi ne achanak kissi mahila ki awaaz ko kuch yun phukaarte hue suna;

“Ari oh Ruhi kia kar rahi hai aa dekh tere Mehboob chacha ne kia laya hai aangan mein!”

To be continued………..

Very beautiful update mate.
What a narration. So beautifully told. You are such a wonderful story teller my dear.
Very happy to read Abhi dealing like a true businessman. He successfully achieved what Saeed would never have done. Saeed had initally thought to ask Rs.75k only. But Abhi told him that at least 2lakh should be asked and during the deal he asked 3 lakhs which the owner accepted. Wow!
A youngster aged 22 makes a deal of 3lakhs while an old experienced man was asking 75K only.
Abhi is sure of his capabilities. He knows that he will turn the worn out bus into a full bus to be fit on the road so he deserves to get his due. Very interesting.
Now people are laughing seeing an old rotten bus in the yard of the owner and that could be hurt Abhi so he will show them into what he is going to turn the bus.
And you end the update with a suspense. Who called the name of Ruhi there? Abhi alone is acquainted to that name and obviously he is the one to feel something by hearing that name and his attention will be drawn that way. Who is that Ruhi overthere?
Excellent update casi bro. Marvellous. Am very keen to know what happens ahead, so eagerly waiting for the next update. :adore: :adore: :adore: :adore:
 

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Update 3 A new turn in Abhi’s Life

Ek jaana maana bus owner tha Mehboob Jaan naam ka. Usske 4 buses running already the roads par. Magar usski nazar ek puraane sade hue bus par padi kahin ek jangal mein jo kissi bus owner ne dump kar diya tha. Uss par ghaans phuss, pawde bhi ug uthe the. Mehboob Jaan ne uss bus ka moaena kiya to paaya ke usski chassi bilkool mazbut aut achchah hai, magar engine tha hi nahin bus mein sirf chasis samet sada hua coach tha uss par. Mehboob jaan ne socha ke 50,000 mein ek second hand engine to mil hi jaega, chasis sahi hai to sirf coach building karna padega aur bus wapas road par chalaya jaa sakta hai. Chasis ka number note kiya ussne aur legal matter ke liye road traffic branch walon ke contact se pata kar liya ke sab legally banaya jaa sakta hai agar wo bus ko wapas road par lana chaahe to.

To ussko ab Saeed se milna baaki tha jo ussne kiya. Saeed ko lekar wo bus dikhaane legaya. Uss bus mein kaam wohi karna tha jo bilkool ek naye bus mein kiya jaata hai shuru se ant tak. Matlab chasis se shuru karna hoga aur end tak coach building karni hogi. Eise kaam ke liye garage mein 20 laakh rupay lag jata hai. Aur agar naye bus par coach building karna hota hai tab 40 se 50 laakh lagta hai. Yeh sab Mehboob ko bhi pata tha aur Saeed ko bhi. Mehboob ne Saeed se pucha ke kitne ki material takreeban kharidne padenge? Aur bus ko pura banaane mein kitna time lagega?

Saeed ke dimaagh mein kayi batein chal rahe thee uss waqt. Wo soch raha tha garage ke hisaab se kitna paisa lagta mehbob ko aur ab saeed garage wala kaam pura karne wala tha to kitna paisa lena chahiye ussko Mehboob se ek pura bus ki coach banaane ke liye. Saeed ne socha ke Abhi se milkar decision lena padega ussko, to ussne Mehboob se kaha,

“Mujhe apne workers se baat karna hoga pehle, yeh unn ke haath mein hein ke kitne dinon mein kaam pura ho sakta hai aur materials ke liye ek quotation banwa kar dunga aap ko, bahot saare sheets of alluminium kharidne honge, bahot metals kharidne honge pura frame ke liye aur bus ke tamaam seats ke liye alag se metals lene honge aur saare seats bhi banana hein, tamaam shishe bus ke kharidne hein….sab kuch from zero start karna hai….. upar se saare rivets, floorings, ceilings ke pannels, sides ke frames, sab kuch shuru se start karna hai bilkool jaise ek naya bus banta hai weise karna hai….”

Mehboob ne kaha ke wo sab karne ko tayyaar hai ussko wo bus wapas road par chahiye hi chahiye!

*******************************************************

Saeed jaakar Abhi se mila aur ussko lekar uss jangal mein bus dikhaane legaya aur donon milkar discuss karne lage ke kitna cost hoga saare meterials ka aur kitna paisa lena padega Mehboob se bus ko road par laane ke liye aur kitne dinon mein kaamm pura ho sakta hai.

Saeed aur Abhi phir usske ghar par mile aur kagaz kalam lekar baithe donon sab kuch likhne ke liye.

Saare materials ko soch soch kar likha gaya ek ek karke, sab yaad karte hue ke bus ki coach banaane ke liye kia kia istemaal hota hai, ek kil se lekar alliminium sheets tak sab kuch likha gaya aur daam ek kone mein note kiya gaya.

Ek pura quotation tayaar kiya abhi ne. kyunke wo padha likha tha to iss liye Saeed ne Abhi par count kiya wo sab tayyaar karne ke liye. Sab kuch kalam aur kaagaz par kiya gaya computer to tha nahin tab.

Usske baad ab donon ne discuss kiye ke kitna paisa lena hoga Mehboob se uss kaam ke liye. Saeed aur Abhi ne milkar discuss kiya ke company ki garage mein to uss kaam ke liye kum se kum do ya teen laakh liye jaate aur 3 mahinon mein kaam pura kiya jaata…. To baat yeh hui ke garage mein aur bhi kayi mulaazim kaam karte tab 3 mahinon mein kaam pura hota, yahan to 4 mulazim hein to ziada din to lagenge hi…… 6 mahine socha donon ne… phir socha ke Mehboob ko 6 mahine bahot ziada lagenge, to 4 se 5 mahine kehne ko socha donon ne. Tab baat aayi paise ki, labour ki, matlan mazdoori ki….. Saeed ne kaha ke 75,000 mangega. Aur kaha ke wo 50,000 lega aur Abhi ko 25,000 dega.

Abhi ne kaha,

“75,000? Aap paagal ho kia saeed ji? 3 laakh ka kaam aap 75 hazaar rupay mein karoge? Aur do workers ke bhi payment karne honge to keise mujhko 25 aur aap 50 loge unn mein se? Main kehta hoon do laakh mangna hai Mehboob ji se iss kaam ke liye.”

Abhi door ka sochta tha. Saeed ji ke liye 75 hazaar bahot bada rakam tha iss liye ussko ziada maangna ajeeb lag raha tha, magar Abhi ko pata tha ke Mehboob ji agar garage ko 3 laakh ki payment kar sakte hein to 2 laakh to de paega iss kaam ke liye. To Saeed ji ne kaha,

“Dekho Abhi, mujh mein himmat nahin hai Mehboob ji se itna bada rakam maangne ki, ek kaam karte hein, tum mere saath chalo, main tumko apne assistant kehkar milwaunga uss se aur tum price discuss karna unnke saath dekhte hein kia hota hai.”

Abhi maan gaya. Aur donon mile Mehboob ji ke ghar par. Abhi ne quotation de diya Mehboob ji ko. Derr laakh ki materials kharidne the Mehboob ji ko. Tab ussne Saeed ji se pucha ke kitna lenge iss kaam ke liye aur kitne dinon mein kaam pura hoga. To Saeed ne Mehboob se kaha,

“Ussi se puchiye nah janaab, yeh Abhi hai nah wohi sab accounting karta hai. Wo sahi figures dega aap ko.”

Mehboob ke yahan aane se pehle to baat 2 laakh ki hui thi magar yahan Abhi ne Mehboob se 3 laakh ki farmaayish kiye! Saeed ji ko jhatka laga 3 laakh sunkar! Magar Mehboob ji ne abhi se pucha,

“3 laakh kuch ziada nahin hai barkhurdaar? Garage mein bhi to utna hi lagta nah?”

Abhi ne kaha,

“Kia aap ke yahan garage hai janaab? Ya aap ke yahan hum khule hawa mein kaam karenge, dhoop mein tapte hue saare kaam karne honge, inn sab ko khayal mein rakhte hue hi nah humne sab kuch socha hai? Aur phir do aur mulaazim honge hamaare saath, unnke bhi to payments karne honge, travellings ka bhi socha hai humne saare mulazim ke travelling ka khayal bhi to karna padta hai nah?”

Mehboob ji ne muskuraate hue wapas Saeed ji ko dekha aur kaha,

“Are saeed bhai aap to apne finance manager ko lekar saath aaye ho ya yeh aap ka HR hai?!” aur wo hanss pade.

Mehboob ji ne 3 laakh ko Manzoor kiya jiss se Saeed ji ko zabardast jhatka laga, ussne to sapne mein bhi nahin socha tha ke life mein kabhi kissi se 3 laakh maangega kaam karne ke liye.

Saeed chup chaap baitha raha aur Abhi ko sab deal pura karne diya.

Mehboob ji ne pucha ke kitne dinon mein kaam pura hoga. Abhi ne kaha 5 se 6 mahine to lag jaega, aur Mehboob ji ko mechanics wale kaam alag se karwane honge engine ko lekar aur paintings bhi alag se wo karwaega apne taraf se. Mehboob ji raazi hue aur pucha ke payment kaise karega sab ek saath kaam pura hone ke baad ya advance payment chahiye?

Bina Saeed ko dekhe ya puche Abhi ne kaha,

“Agar aap 1 laakh de dete hamein kaam shuru hone se pehle to hamaare liye asaan hota baaki ke mulazimon ki payment karne ke liye kyunke unn logon ko weekly payment karte hein hum.”

Saeed ji ko ek aur jhatka laga abhi ki baat ko sunkar. Ussne to life mein kabhi 1 lakh rupay nah liya tha nah dekha tha. Aur 22 saal ki umar ka Abhi 1 lakh rupay maang raha tha ek bus owner se, wo bhi advance aur 2 lakh kaam pura hone ke baad milne wala tha….. Saeed soch raha tha ke sala ussne to 75 hazaar pura kaam ke liye maangne wala tha! aur yahan abhi advance 1 lakh mang raha hai aur Mehboob dene ko tayyaar tha!

Mehboob ji ne ek cheque kata 1 laakh rupay ki aur Abhi ko thama diya Saeed ko dekhte hue. Phir pucha ke kaam shuru kab hoga. To Abhi ne kaha kaam kal se hi shuru hoga, bus ko tow kiya jaega unnke aangan mein aaj hi.

Wahan se nikle to Saeed ne abhi se kaha,

“kamaal karte ho tum abhi? Sala 2 laakh ki baat hui thi aur tumne 3 laakh mang liya?”

Abhi ne zor se hansste hue kaha,

“Yeh ek laakh mera apna kamaayi hai saeed ji. Iss mein se main aap ko kuch nahin dene wala” aur zoron se hanssta gaya. Saeed ji khamosh rahe.

Kuch der baad Abhi ne pucha,

“yeh cheque aap apne account mein debit karoge ya main apne account mein daal dun?”

Saeed ne kaha,

“are beta mera to aaj tak koyi bank account hai hi nahin! To tumhi dalo apne account mein nah!”

Uss din life mein pehli baar Abhi ki bank account mein 1 lakh rupay deposit kiya gaya! Jiss bande ko 10 rupay ke liye tarasna padta tha, ek cigarette pine ke liye doston se maangna padta tha aaj 1 lakh rupay deposit kiya gaya usske account mein ussko khud yakeen nahin ho raha tha!

Shaam ko bus tow kiya gaya aur Mehboob ji ke aangan mein ek bade se peyr ke niche rakha gaya. Saeed aur Abhi wahin maujood the. Bus ko dekh kar log hanss rahe the. Pados ke log aakar bus ko dekhne lage jiss par ghanns phuss uge hue the, itna mayla tha, ganda tha, gande hare rang ke paani kayi jaga jama hua tha bus mein, jo ek do sheeshe bache hue the sab dark green gande iss kadar dikh rahe the ke ghin araha tha… kuch log Mehboob ji ko paagal keh rahe the ke ek sade hue bus ko jangal se uthakar apne aanagn mein laa rakha tha….

Abhi sun raha tha sabhi ke comments ko aur apne dil mein kaha,

“saalo, teen mahine baad tumhi log taarif karne aoge iss bus ki….”

Aur yahan par shuru hoti hai Abhi ki Romantic kahani… Abhi ne achanak kissi mahila ki awaaz ko kuch yun phukaarte hue suna;

“Ari oh Ruhi kia kar rahi hai aa dekh tere Mehboob chacha ne kia laya hai aangan mein!”

To be continued………..

Wah. Maja agaya bidu. Bahut khushi hui iss update ko padhkar.
Itna acha laga jab Abhi ne uss deal ko kara k kia kahun.
Bole to ekdum jhakaaaaasssss.
Are ab kaun Ruhi ko awaz de reli hai? Apba Hero to paagal ho jaega udhar kaam karte hue lagta hai.
Maja aega bidu bahut maja aega.
:yourock:
 

kamdev99008

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abhi ki jindgi mein jab bhi kuchh achchha hona shuru hota hai.............
kambakht musibat aa hi jati hai...........

pahle 2500 ki naukri mili (us jamane mein 2500 ki naukri aaj ke 25000 ki naukri se kai guna jyada badi hoti thi)
tab company band ho gayi

ab business ki pahli deal ki abhi ne 3 lac ki...........aur 1 lakh uske account me bhi aa gaya.....
tabhi ye ruhiiiiiiii fir se

isi ko shayad kismat kahte hain (badkismati bhi :D)

ab bechara business mein dil kaise laga payega.............
dil to ruhi se lag jayega

keep it up casinar bhai.....................bahut jabardast plot ban raha hai........
kabhi farsh par to kabhi arsh par..................aur..........kabhi arsh par to kabhi farsh par
 

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Update 3 A new turn in Abhi’s Life

Ek jaana maana bus owner tha Mehboob Jaan naam ka. Usske 4 buses running already the roads par. Magar usski nazar ek puraane sade hue bus par padi kahin ek jangal mein jo kissi bus owner ne dump kar diya tha. Uss par ghaans phuss, pawde bhi ug uthe the. Mehboob Jaan ne uss bus ka moaena kiya to paaya ke usski chassi bilkool mazbut aut achchah hai, magar engine tha hi nahin bus mein sirf chasis samet sada hua coach tha uss par. Mehboob jaan ne socha ke 50,000 mein ek second hand engine to mil hi jaega, chasis sahi hai to sirf coach building karna padega aur bus wapas road par chalaya jaa sakta hai. Chasis ka number note kiya ussne aur legal matter ke liye road traffic branch walon ke contact se pata kar liya ke sab legally banaya jaa sakta hai agar wo bus ko wapas road par lana chaahe to.

To ussko ab Saeed se milna baaki tha jo ussne kiya. Saeed ko lekar wo bus dikhaane legaya. Uss bus mein kaam wohi karna tha jo bilkool ek naye bus mein kiya jaata hai shuru se ant tak. Matlab chasis se shuru karna hoga aur end tak coach building karni hogi. Eise kaam ke liye garage mein 20 laakh rupay lag jata hai. Aur agar naye bus par coach building karna hota hai tab 40 se 50 laakh lagta hai. Yeh sab Mehboob ko bhi pata tha aur Saeed ko bhi. Mehboob ne Saeed se pucha ke kitne ki material takreeban kharidne padenge? Aur bus ko pura banaane mein kitna time lagega?

Saeed ke dimaagh mein kayi batein chal rahe thee uss waqt. Wo soch raha tha garage ke hisaab se kitna paisa lagta mehbob ko aur ab saeed garage wala kaam pura karne wala tha to kitna paisa lena chahiye ussko Mehboob se ek pura bus ki coach banaane ke liye. Saeed ne socha ke Abhi se milkar decision lena padega ussko, to ussne Mehboob se kaha,

“Mujhe apne workers se baat karna hoga pehle, yeh unn ke haath mein hein ke kitne dinon mein kaam pura ho sakta hai aur materials ke liye ek quotation banwa kar dunga aap ko, bahot saare sheets of alluminium kharidne honge, bahot metals kharidne honge pura frame ke liye aur bus ke tamaam seats ke liye alag se metals lene honge aur saare seats bhi banana hein, tamaam shishe bus ke kharidne hein….sab kuch from zero start karna hai….. upar se saare rivets, floorings, ceilings ke pannels, sides ke frames, sab kuch shuru se start karna hai bilkool jaise ek naya bus banta hai weise karna hai….”

Mehboob ne kaha ke wo sab karne ko tayyaar hai ussko wo bus wapas road par chahiye hi chahiye!

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Saeed jaakar Abhi se mila aur ussko lekar uss jangal mein bus dikhaane legaya aur donon milkar discuss karne lage ke kitna cost hoga saare meterials ka aur kitna paisa lena padega Mehboob se bus ko road par laane ke liye aur kitne dinon mein kaamm pura ho sakta hai.

Saeed aur Abhi phir usske ghar par mile aur kagaz kalam lekar baithe donon sab kuch likhne ke liye.

Saare materials ko soch soch kar likha gaya ek ek karke, sab yaad karte hue ke bus ki coach banaane ke liye kia kia istemaal hota hai, ek kil se lekar alliminium sheets tak sab kuch likha gaya aur daam ek kone mein note kiya gaya.

Ek pura quotation tayaar kiya abhi ne. kyunke wo padha likha tha to iss liye Saeed ne Abhi par count kiya wo sab tayyaar karne ke liye. Sab kuch kalam aur kaagaz par kiya gaya computer to tha nahin tab.

Usske baad ab donon ne discuss kiye ke kitna paisa lena hoga Mehboob se uss kaam ke liye. Saeed aur Abhi ne milkar discuss kiya ke company ki garage mein to uss kaam ke liye kum se kum do ya teen laakh liye jaate aur 3 mahinon mein kaam pura kiya jaata…. To baat yeh hui ke garage mein aur bhi kayi mulaazim kaam karte tab 3 mahinon mein kaam pura hota, yahan to 4 mulazim hein to ziada din to lagenge hi…… 6 mahine socha donon ne… phir socha ke Mehboob ko 6 mahine bahot ziada lagenge, to 4 se 5 mahine kehne ko socha donon ne. Tab baat aayi paise ki, labour ki, matlan mazdoori ki….. Saeed ne kaha ke 75,000 mangega. Aur kaha ke wo 50,000 lega aur Abhi ko 25,000 dega.

Abhi ne kaha,

“75,000? Aap paagal ho kia saeed ji? 3 laakh ka kaam aap 75 hazaar rupay mein karoge? Aur do workers ke bhi payment karne honge to keise mujhko 25 aur aap 50 loge unn mein se? Main kehta hoon do laakh mangna hai Mehboob ji se iss kaam ke liye.”

Abhi door ka sochta tha. Saeed ji ke liye 75 hazaar bahot bada rakam tha iss liye ussko ziada maangna ajeeb lag raha tha, magar Abhi ko pata tha ke Mehboob ji agar garage ko 3 laakh ki payment kar sakte hein to 2 laakh to de paega iss kaam ke liye. To Saeed ji ne kaha,

“Dekho Abhi, mujh mein himmat nahin hai Mehboob ji se itna bada rakam maangne ki, ek kaam karte hein, tum mere saath chalo, main tumko apne assistant kehkar milwaunga uss se aur tum price discuss karna unnke saath dekhte hein kia hota hai.”

Abhi maan gaya. Aur donon mile Mehboob ji ke ghar par. Abhi ne quotation de diya Mehboob ji ko. Derr laakh ki materials kharidne the Mehboob ji ko. Tab ussne Saeed ji se pucha ke kitna lenge iss kaam ke liye aur kitne dinon mein kaam pura hoga. To Saeed ne Mehboob se kaha,

“Ussi se puchiye nah janaab, yeh Abhi hai nah wohi sab accounting karta hai. Wo sahi figures dega aap ko.”

Mehboob ke yahan aane se pehle to baat 2 laakh ki hui thi magar yahan Abhi ne Mehboob se 3 laakh ki farmaayish kiye! Saeed ji ko jhatka laga 3 laakh sunkar! Magar Mehboob ji ne abhi se pucha,

“3 laakh kuch ziada nahin hai barkhurdaar? Garage mein bhi to utna hi lagta nah?”

Abhi ne kaha,

“Kia aap ke yahan garage hai janaab? Ya aap ke yahan hum khule hawa mein kaam karenge, dhoop mein tapte hue saare kaam karne honge, inn sab ko khayal mein rakhte hue hi nah humne sab kuch socha hai? Aur phir do aur mulaazim honge hamaare saath, unnke bhi to payments karne honge, travellings ka bhi socha hai humne saare mulazim ke travelling ka khayal bhi to karna padta hai nah?”

Mehboob ji ne muskuraate hue wapas Saeed ji ko dekha aur kaha,

“Are saeed bhai aap to apne finance manager ko lekar saath aaye ho ya yeh aap ka HR hai?!” aur wo hanss pade.

Mehboob ji ne 3 laakh ko Manzoor kiya jiss se Saeed ji ko zabardast jhatka laga, ussne to sapne mein bhi nahin socha tha ke life mein kabhi kissi se 3 laakh maangega kaam karne ke liye.

Saeed chup chaap baitha raha aur Abhi ko sab deal pura karne diya.

Mehboob ji ne pucha ke kitne dinon mein kaam pura hoga. Abhi ne kaha 5 se 6 mahine to lag jaega, aur Mehboob ji ko mechanics wale kaam alag se karwane honge engine ko lekar aur paintings bhi alag se wo karwaega apne taraf se. Mehboob ji raazi hue aur pucha ke payment kaise karega sab ek saath kaam pura hone ke baad ya advance payment chahiye?

Bina Saeed ko dekhe ya puche Abhi ne kaha,

“Agar aap 1 laakh de dete hamein kaam shuru hone se pehle to hamaare liye asaan hota baaki ke mulazimon ki payment karne ke liye kyunke unn logon ko weekly payment karte hein hum.”

Saeed ji ko ek aur jhatka laga abhi ki baat ko sunkar. Ussne to life mein kabhi 1 lakh rupay nah liya tha nah dekha tha. Aur 22 saal ki umar ka Abhi 1 lakh rupay maang raha tha ek bus owner se, wo bhi advance aur 2 lakh kaam pura hone ke baad milne wala tha….. Saeed soch raha tha ke sala ussne to 75 hazaar pura kaam ke liye maangne wala tha! aur yahan abhi advance 1 lakh mang raha hai aur Mehboob dene ko tayyaar tha!

Mehboob ji ne ek cheque kata 1 laakh rupay ki aur Abhi ko thama diya Saeed ko dekhte hue. Phir pucha ke kaam shuru kab hoga. To Abhi ne kaha kaam kal se hi shuru hoga, bus ko tow kiya jaega unnke aangan mein aaj hi.

Wahan se nikle to Saeed ne abhi se kaha,

“kamaal karte ho tum abhi? Sala 2 laakh ki baat hui thi aur tumne 3 laakh mang liya?”

Abhi ne zor se hansste hue kaha,

“Yeh ek laakh mera apna kamaayi hai saeed ji. Iss mein se main aap ko kuch nahin dene wala” aur zoron se hanssta gaya. Saeed ji khamosh rahe.

Kuch der baad Abhi ne pucha,

“yeh cheque aap apne account mein debit karoge ya main apne account mein daal dun?”

Saeed ne kaha,

“are beta mera to aaj tak koyi bank account hai hi nahin! To tumhi dalo apne account mein nah!”

Uss din life mein pehli baar Abhi ki bank account mein 1 lakh rupay deposit kiya gaya! Jiss bande ko 10 rupay ke liye tarasna padta tha, ek cigarette pine ke liye doston se maangna padta tha aaj 1 lakh rupay deposit kiya gaya usske account mein ussko khud yakeen nahin ho raha tha!

Shaam ko bus tow kiya gaya aur Mehboob ji ke aangan mein ek bade se peyr ke niche rakha gaya. Saeed aur Abhi wahin maujood the. Bus ko dekh kar log hanss rahe the. Pados ke log aakar bus ko dekhne lage jiss par ghanns phuss uge hue the, itna mayla tha, ganda tha, gande hare rang ke paani kayi jaga jama hua tha bus mein, jo ek do sheeshe bache hue the sab dark green gande iss kadar dikh rahe the ke ghin araha tha… kuch log Mehboob ji ko paagal keh rahe the ke ek sade hue bus ko jangal se uthakar apne aanagn mein laa rakha tha….

Abhi sun raha tha sabhi ke comments ko aur apne dil mein kaha,

“saalo, teen mahine baad tumhi log taarif karne aoge iss bus ki….”

Aur yahan par shuru hoti hai Abhi ki Romantic kahani… Abhi ne achanak kissi mahila ki awaaz ko kuch yun phukaarte hue suna;

“Ari oh Ruhi kia kar rahi hai aa dekh tere Mehboob chacha ne kia laya hai aangan mein!”

To be continued………..

Superb. Excellent writing bro.
Wonderful update. Abhi turning into a business man. Hope he becomes a business tycoon if it is not asking too much.
But where from comes Ruhi here? Is she the love he is looking for? Wont he he now feel disturbed?
Loved the update bro. Keep it up. You are doing amazingly good. :bow:
 
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