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Update 3 A new turn in Abhi’s Life

Ek jaana maana bus owner tha Mehboob Jaan naam ka. Usske 4 buses running already the roads par. Magar usski nazar ek puraane sade hue bus par padi kahin ek jangal mein jo kissi bus owner ne dump kar diya tha. Uss par ghaans phuss, pawde bhi ug uthe the. Mehboob Jaan ne uss bus ka moaena kiya to paaya ke usski chassi bilkool mazbut aut achchah hai, magar engine tha hi nahin bus mein sirf chasis samet sada hua coach tha uss par. Mehboob jaan ne socha ke 50,000 mein ek second hand engine to mil hi jaega, chasis sahi hai to sirf coach building karna padega aur bus wapas road par chalaya jaa sakta hai. Chasis ka number note kiya ussne aur legal matter ke liye road traffic branch walon ke contact se pata kar liya ke sab legally banaya jaa sakta hai agar wo bus ko wapas road par lana chaahe to.

To ussko ab Saeed se milna baaki tha jo ussne kiya. Saeed ko lekar wo bus dikhaane legaya. Uss bus mein kaam wohi karna tha jo bilkool ek naye bus mein kiya jaata hai shuru se ant tak. Matlab chasis se shuru karna hoga aur end tak coach building karni hogi. Eise kaam ke liye garage mein 20 laakh rupay lag jata hai. Aur agar naye bus par coach building karna hota hai tab 40 se 50 laakh lagta hai. Yeh sab Mehboob ko bhi pata tha aur Saeed ko bhi. Mehboob ne Saeed se pucha ke kitne ki material takreeban kharidne padenge? Aur bus ko pura banaane mein kitna time lagega?

Saeed ke dimaagh mein kayi batein chal rahe thee uss waqt. Wo soch raha tha garage ke hisaab se kitna paisa lagta mehbob ko aur ab saeed garage wala kaam pura karne wala tha to kitna paisa lena chahiye ussko Mehboob se ek pura bus ki coach banaane ke liye. Saeed ne socha ke Abhi se milkar decision lena padega ussko, to ussne Mehboob se kaha,

“Mujhe apne workers se baat karna hoga pehle, yeh unn ke haath mein hein ke kitne dinon mein kaam pura ho sakta hai aur materials ke liye ek quotation banwa kar dunga aap ko, bahot saare sheets of alluminium kharidne honge, bahot metals kharidne honge pura frame ke liye aur bus ke tamaam seats ke liye alag se metals lene honge aur saare seats bhi banana hein, tamaam shishe bus ke kharidne hein….sab kuch from zero start karna hai….. upar se saare rivets, floorings, ceilings ke pannels, sides ke frames, sab kuch shuru se start karna hai bilkool jaise ek naya bus banta hai weise karna hai….”

Mehboob ne kaha ke wo sab karne ko tayyaar hai ussko wo bus wapas road par chahiye hi chahiye!

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Saeed jaakar Abhi se mila aur ussko lekar uss jangal mein bus dikhaane legaya aur donon milkar discuss karne lage ke kitna cost hoga saare meterials ka aur kitna paisa lena padega Mehboob se bus ko road par laane ke liye aur kitne dinon mein kaamm pura ho sakta hai.

Saeed aur Abhi phir usske ghar par mile aur kagaz kalam lekar baithe donon sab kuch likhne ke liye.

Saare materials ko soch soch kar likha gaya ek ek karke, sab yaad karte hue ke bus ki coach banaane ke liye kia kia istemaal hota hai, ek kil se lekar alliminium sheets tak sab kuch likha gaya aur daam ek kone mein note kiya gaya.

Ek pura quotation tayaar kiya abhi ne. kyunke wo padha likha tha to iss liye Saeed ne Abhi par count kiya wo sab tayyaar karne ke liye. Sab kuch kalam aur kaagaz par kiya gaya computer to tha nahin tab.

Usske baad ab donon ne discuss kiye ke kitna paisa lena hoga Mehboob se uss kaam ke liye. Saeed aur Abhi ne milkar discuss kiya ke company ki garage mein to uss kaam ke liye kum se kum do ya teen laakh liye jaate aur 3 mahinon mein kaam pura kiya jaata…. To baat yeh hui ke garage mein aur bhi kayi mulaazim kaam karte tab 3 mahinon mein kaam pura hota, yahan to 4 mulazim hein to ziada din to lagenge hi…… 6 mahine socha donon ne… phir socha ke Mehboob ko 6 mahine bahot ziada lagenge, to 4 se 5 mahine kehne ko socha donon ne. Tab baat aayi paise ki, labour ki, matlan mazdoori ki….. Saeed ne kaha ke 75,000 mangega. Aur kaha ke wo 50,000 lega aur Abhi ko 25,000 dega.

Abhi ne kaha,

“75,000? Aap paagal ho kia saeed ji? 3 laakh ka kaam aap 75 hazaar rupay mein karoge? Aur do workers ke bhi payment karne honge to keise mujhko 25 aur aap 50 loge unn mein se? Main kehta hoon do laakh mangna hai Mehboob ji se iss kaam ke liye.”

Abhi door ka sochta tha. Saeed ji ke liye 75 hazaar bahot bada rakam tha iss liye ussko ziada maangna ajeeb lag raha tha, magar Abhi ko pata tha ke Mehboob ji agar garage ko 3 laakh ki payment kar sakte hein to 2 laakh to de paega iss kaam ke liye. To Saeed ji ne kaha,

“Dekho Abhi, mujh mein himmat nahin hai Mehboob ji se itna bada rakam maangne ki, ek kaam karte hein, tum mere saath chalo, main tumko apne assistant kehkar milwaunga uss se aur tum price discuss karna unnke saath dekhte hein kia hota hai.”

Abhi maan gaya. Aur donon mile Mehboob ji ke ghar par. Abhi ne quotation de diya Mehboob ji ko. Derr laakh ki materials kharidne the Mehboob ji ko. Tab ussne Saeed ji se pucha ke kitna lenge iss kaam ke liye aur kitne dinon mein kaam pura hoga. To Saeed ne Mehboob se kaha,

“Ussi se puchiye nah janaab, yeh Abhi hai nah wohi sab accounting karta hai. Wo sahi figures dega aap ko.”

Mehboob ke yahan aane se pehle to baat 2 laakh ki hui thi magar yahan Abhi ne Mehboob se 3 laakh ki farmaayish kiye! Saeed ji ko jhatka laga 3 laakh sunkar! Magar Mehboob ji ne abhi se pucha,

“3 laakh kuch ziada nahin hai barkhurdaar? Garage mein bhi to utna hi lagta nah?”

Abhi ne kaha,

“Kia aap ke yahan garage hai janaab? Ya aap ke yahan hum khule hawa mein kaam karenge, dhoop mein tapte hue saare kaam karne honge, inn sab ko khayal mein rakhte hue hi nah humne sab kuch socha hai? Aur phir do aur mulaazim honge hamaare saath, unnke bhi to payments karne honge, travellings ka bhi socha hai humne saare mulazim ke travelling ka khayal bhi to karna padta hai nah?”

Mehboob ji ne muskuraate hue wapas Saeed ji ko dekha aur kaha,

“Are saeed bhai aap to apne finance manager ko lekar saath aaye ho ya yeh aap ka HR hai?!” aur wo hanss pade.

Mehboob ji ne 3 laakh ko Manzoor kiya jiss se Saeed ji ko zabardast jhatka laga, ussne to sapne mein bhi nahin socha tha ke life mein kabhi kissi se 3 laakh maangega kaam karne ke liye.

Saeed chup chaap baitha raha aur Abhi ko sab deal pura karne diya.

Mehboob ji ne pucha ke kitne dinon mein kaam pura hoga. Abhi ne kaha 5 se 6 mahine to lag jaega, aur Mehboob ji ko mechanics wale kaam alag se karwane honge engine ko lekar aur paintings bhi alag se wo karwaega apne taraf se. Mehboob ji raazi hue aur pucha ke payment kaise karega sab ek saath kaam pura hone ke baad ya advance payment chahiye?

Bina Saeed ko dekhe ya puche Abhi ne kaha,

“Agar aap 1 laakh de dete hamein kaam shuru hone se pehle to hamaare liye asaan hota baaki ke mulazimon ki payment karne ke liye kyunke unn logon ko weekly payment karte hein hum.”

Saeed ji ko ek aur jhatka laga abhi ki baat ko sunkar. Ussne to life mein kabhi 1 lakh rupay nah liya tha nah dekha tha. Aur 22 saal ki umar ka Abhi 1 lakh rupay maang raha tha ek bus owner se, wo bhi advance aur 2 lakh kaam pura hone ke baad milne wala tha….. Saeed soch raha tha ke sala ussne to 75 hazaar pura kaam ke liye maangne wala tha! aur yahan abhi advance 1 lakh mang raha hai aur Mehboob dene ko tayyaar tha!

Mehboob ji ne ek cheque kata 1 laakh rupay ki aur Abhi ko thama diya Saeed ko dekhte hue. Phir pucha ke kaam shuru kab hoga. To Abhi ne kaha kaam kal se hi shuru hoga, bus ko tow kiya jaega unnke aangan mein aaj hi.

Wahan se nikle to Saeed ne abhi se kaha,

“kamaal karte ho tum abhi? Sala 2 laakh ki baat hui thi aur tumne 3 laakh mang liya?”

Abhi ne zor se hansste hue kaha,

“Yeh ek laakh mera apna kamaayi hai saeed ji. Iss mein se main aap ko kuch nahin dene wala” aur zoron se hanssta gaya. Saeed ji khamosh rahe.

Kuch der baad Abhi ne pucha,

“yeh cheque aap apne account mein debit karoge ya main apne account mein daal dun?”

Saeed ne kaha,

“are beta mera to aaj tak koyi bank account hai hi nahin! To tumhi dalo apne account mein nah!”

Uss din life mein pehli baar Abhi ki bank account mein 1 lakh rupay deposit kiya gaya! Jiss bande ko 10 rupay ke liye tarasna padta tha, ek cigarette pine ke liye doston se maangna padta tha aaj 1 lakh rupay deposit kiya gaya usske account mein ussko khud yakeen nahin ho raha tha!

Shaam ko bus tow kiya gaya aur Mehboob ji ke aangan mein ek bade se peyr ke niche rakha gaya. Saeed aur Abhi wahin maujood the. Bus ko dekh kar log hanss rahe the. Pados ke log aakar bus ko dekhne lage jiss par ghanns phuss uge hue the, itna mayla tha, ganda tha, gande hare rang ke paani kayi jaga jama hua tha bus mein, jo ek do sheeshe bache hue the sab dark green gande iss kadar dikh rahe the ke ghin araha tha… kuch log Mehboob ji ko paagal keh rahe the ke ek sade hue bus ko jangal se uthakar apne aanagn mein laa rakha tha….

Abhi sun raha tha sabhi ke comments ko aur apne dil mein kaha,

“saalo, teen mahine baad tumhi log taarif karne aoge iss bus ki….”

Aur yahan par shuru hoti hai Abhi ki Romantic kahani… Abhi ne achanak kissi mahila ki awaaz ko kuch yun phukaarte hue suna;

“Ari oh Ruhi kia kar rahi hai aa dekh tere Mehboob chacha ne kia laya hai aangan mein!”

To be continued………..
 
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Update 3 A new turn in Abhi’s Life

Ek jaana maana bus owner tha Mehboob Jaan naam ka. Usske 4 buses running already the roads par. Magar usski nazar ek puraane sade hue bus par padi kahin ek jangal mein jo kissi bus owner ne dump kar diya tha. Uss par ghaans phuss, pawde bhi ug uthe the. Mehboob Jaan ne uss bus ka moaena kiya to paaya ke usski chassi bilkool mazbut aut achchah hai, magar engine tha hi nahin bus mein sirf chasis samet sada hua coach tha uss par. Mehboob jaan ne socha ke 50,000 mein ek second hand engine to mil hi jaega, chasis sahi hai to sirf coach building karna padega aur bus wapas road par chalaya jaa sakta hai. Chasis ka number note kiya ussne aur legal matter ke liye road traffic branch walon ke contact se pata kar liya ke sab legally banaya jaa sakta hai agar wo bus ko wapas road par lana chaahe to.

To ussko ab Saeed se milna baaki tha jo ussne kiya. Saeed ko lekar wo bus dikhaane legaya. Uss bus mein kaam wohi karna tha jo bilkool ek naye bus mein kiya jaata hai shuru se ant tak. Matlab chasis se shuru karna hoga aur end tak coach building karni hogi. Eise kaam ke liye garage mein 20 laakh rupay lag jata hai. Aur agar naye bus par coach building karna hota hai tab 40 se 50 laakh lagta hai. Yeh sab Mehboob ko bhi pata tha aur Saeed ko bhi. Mehboob ne Saeed se pucha ke kitne ki material takreeban kharidne padenge? Aur bus ko pura banaane mein kitna time lagega?

Saeed ke dimaagh mein kayi batein chal rahe thee uss waqt. Wo soch raha tha garage ke hisaab se kitna paisa lagta mehbob ko aur ab saeed garage wala kaam pura karne wala tha to kitna paisa lena chahiye ussko Mehboob se ek pura bus ki coach banaane ke liye. Saeed ne socha ke Abhi se milkar decision lena padega ussko, to ussne Mehboob se kaha,

“Mujhe apne workers se baat karna hoga pehle, yeh unn ke haath mein hein ke kitne dinon mein kaam pura ho sakta hai aur materials ke liye ek quotation banwa kar dunga aap ko, bahot saare sheets of alluminium kharidne honge, bahot metals kharidne honge pura frame ke liye aur bus ke tamaam seats ke liye alag se metals lene honge aur saare seats bhi banana hein, tamaam shishe bus ke kharidne hein….sab kuch from zero start karna hai….. upar se saare rivets, floorings, ceilings ke pannels, sides ke frames, sab kuch shuru se start karna hai bilkool jaise ek naya bus banta hai weise karna hai….”

Mehboob ne kaha ke wo sab karne ko tayyaar hai ussko wo bus wapas road par chahiye hi chahiye!

*******************************************************

Saeed jaakar Abhi se mila aur ussko lekar uss jangal mein bus dikhaane legaya aur donon milkar discuss karne lage ke kitna cost hoga saare meterials ka aur kitna paisa lena padega Mehboob se bus ko road par laane ke liye aur kitne dinon mein kaamm pura ho sakta hai.

Saeed aur Abhi phir usske ghar par mile aur kagaz kalam lekar baithe donon sab kuch likhne ke liye.

Saare materials ko soch soch kar likha gaya ek ek karke, sab yaad karte hue ke bus ki coach banaane ke liye kia kia istemaal hota hai, ek kil se lekar alliminium sheets tak sab kuch likha gaya aur daam ek kone mein note kiya gaya.

Ek pura quotation tayaar kiya abhi ne. kyunke wo padha likha tha to iss liye Saeed ne Abhi par count kiya wo sab tayyaar karne ke liye. Sab kuch kalam aur kaagaz par kiya gaya computer to tha nahin tab.

Usske baad ab donon ne discuss kiye ke kitna paisa lena hoga Mehboob se uss kaam ke liye. Saeed aur Abhi ne milkar discuss kiya ke company ki garage mein to uss kaam ke liye kum se kum do ya teen laakh liye jaate aur 3 mahinon mein kaam pura kiya jaata…. To baat yeh hui ke garage mein aur bhi kayi mulaazim kaam karte tab 3 mahinon mein kaam pura hota, yahan to 4 mulazim hein to ziada din to lagenge hi…… 6 mahine socha donon ne… phir socha ke Mehboob ko 6 mahine bahot ziada lagenge, to 4 se 5 mahine kehne ko socha donon ne. Tab baat aayi paise ki, labour ki, matlan mazdoori ki….. Saeed ne kaha ke 75,000 mangega. Aur kaha ke wo 50,000 lega aur Abhi ko 25,000 dega.

Abhi ne kaha,

“75,000? Aap paagal ho kia saeed ji? 3 laakh ka kaam aap 75 hazaar rupay mein karoge? Aur do workers ke bhi payment karne honge to keise mujhko 25 aur aap 50 loge unn mein se? Main kehta hoon do laakh mangna hai Mehboob ji se iss kaam ke liye.”

Abhi door ka sochta tha. Saeed ji ke liye 75 hazaar bahot bada rakam tha iss liye ussko ziada maangna ajeeb lag raha tha, magar Abhi ko pata tha ke Mehboob ji agar garage ko 3 laakh ki payment kar sakte hein to 2 laakh to de paega iss kaam ke liye. To Saeed ji ne kaha,

“Dekho Abhi, mujh mein himmat nahin hai Mehboob ji se itna bada rakam maangne ki, ek kaam karte hein, tum mere saath chalo, main tumko apne assistant kehkar milwaunga uss se aur tum price discuss karna unnke saath dekhte hein kia hota hai.”

Abhi maan gaya. Aur donon mile Mehboob ji ke ghar par. Abhi ne quotation de diya Mehboob ji ko. Derr laakh ki materials kharidne the Mehboob ji ko. Tab ussne Saeed ji se pucha ke kitna lenge iss kaam ke liye aur kitne dinon mein kaam pura hoga. To Saeed ne Mehboob se kaha,

“Ussi se puchiye nah janaab, yeh Abhi hai nah wohi sab accounting karta hai. Wo sahi figures dega aap ko.”

Mehboob ke yahan aane se pehle to baat 2 laakh ki hui thi magar yahan Abhi ne Mehboob se 3 laakh ki farmaayish kiye! Saeed ji ko jhatka laga 3 laakh sunkar! Magar Mehboob ji ne abhi se pucha,

“3 laakh kuch ziada nahin hai barkhurdaar? Garage mein bhi to utna hi lagta nah?”

Abhi ne kaha,

“Kia aap ke yahan garage hai janaab? Ya aap ke yahan hum khule hawa mein kaam karenge, dhoop mein tapte hue saare kaam karne honge, inn sab ko khayal mein rakhte hue hi nah humne sab kuch socha hai? Aur phir do aur mulaazim honge hamaare saath, unnke bhi to payments karne honge, travellings ka bhi socha hai humne saare mulazim ke travelling ka khayal bhi to karna padta hai nah?”

Mehboob ji ne muskuraate hue wapas Saeed ji ko dekha aur kaha,

“Are saeed bhai aap to apne finance manager ko lekar saath aaye ho ya yeh aap ka HR hai?!” aur wo hanss pade.

Mehboob ji ne 3 laakh ko Manzoor kiya jiss se Saeed ji ko zabardast jhatka laga, ussne to sapne mein bhi nahin socha tha ke life mein kabhi kissi se 3 laakh maangega kaam karne ke liye.

Saeed chup chaap baitha raha aur Abhi ko sab deal pura karne diya.

Mehboob ji ne pucha ke kitne dinon mein kaam pura hoga. Abhi ne kaha 5 se 6 mahine to lag jaega, aur Mehboob ji ko mechanics wale kaam alag se karwane honge engine ko lekar aur paintings bhi alag se wo karwaega apne taraf se. Mehboob ji raazi hue aur pucha ke payment kaise karega sab ek saath kaam pura hone ke baad ya advance payment chahiye?

Bina Saeed ko dekhe ya puche Abhi ne kaha,

“Agar aap 1 laakh de dete hamein kaam shuru hone se pehle to hamaare liye asaan hota baaki ke mulazimon ki payment karne ke liye kyunke unn logon ko weekly payment karte hein hum.”

Saeed ji ko ek aur jhatka laga abhi ki baat ko sunkar. Ussne to life mein kabhi 1 lakh rupay nah liya tha nah dekha tha. Aur 22 saal ki umar ka Abhi 1 lakh rupay maang raha tha ek bus owner se, wo bhi advance aur 2 lakh kaam pura hone ke baad milne wala tha….. Saeed soch raha tha ke sala ussne to 75 hazaar pura kaam ke liye maangne wala tha! aur yahan abhi advance 1 lakh mang raha hai aur Mehboob dene ko tayyaar tha!

Mehboob ji ne ek cheque kata 1 laakh rupay ki aur Abhi ko thama diya Saeed ko dekhte hue. Phir pucha ke kaam shuru kab hoga. To Abhi ne kaha kaam kal se hi shuru hoga, bus ko tow kiya jaega unnke aangan mein aaj hi.

Wahan se nikle to Saeed ne abhi se kaha,

“kamaal karte ho tum abhi? Sala 2 laakh ki baat hui thi aur tumne 3 laakh mang liya?”

Abhi ne zor se hansste hue kaha,

“Yeh ek laakh mera apna kamaayi hai saeed ji. Iss mein se main aap ko kuch nahin dene wala” aur zoron se hanssta gaya. Saeed ji khamosh rahe.

Kuch der baad Abhi ne pucha,

“yeh cheque aap apne account mein debit karoge ya main apne account mein daal dun?”

Saeed ne kaha,

“are beta mera to aaj tak koyi bank account hai hi nahin! To tumhi dalo apne account mein nah!”

Uss din life mein pehli baar Abhi ki bank account mein 1 lakh rupay deposit kiya gaya! Jiss bande ko 10 rupay ke liye tarasna padta tha, ek cigarette pine ke liye doston se maangna padta tha aaj 1 lakh rupay deposit kiya gaya usske account mein ussko khud yakeen nahin ho raha tha!

Shaam ko bus tow kiya gaya aur Mehboob ji ke aangan mein ek bade se peyr ke niche rakha gaya. Saeed aur Abhi wahin maujood the. Bus ko dekh kar log hanss rahe the. Pados ke log aakar bus ko dekhne lage jiss par ghanns phuss uge hue the, itna mayla tha, ganda tha, gande hare rang ke paani kayi jaga jama hua tha bus mein, jo ek do sheeshe bache hue the sab dark green gande iss kadar dikh rahe the ke ghin araha tha… kuch log Mehboob ji ko paagal keh rahe the ke ek sade hue bus ko jangal se uthakar apne aanagn mein laa rakha tha….

Abhi sun raha tha sabhi ke comments ko aur apne dil mein kaha,

“saalo, teen mahine baad tumhi log taarif karne aoge iss bus ki….”

Aur yahan par shuru hoti hai Abhi ki Romantic kahani… Abhi ne achanak kissi mahila ki awaaz ko kuch yun phukaarte hue suna;

“Ari oh Ruhi kia kar rahi hai aa dekh tere Mehboob chacha ne kia laya hai aangan mein!”

To be continued………..
Fantastic update sir
 

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Wow......kya baat hain..... abhinav toh sach mein bahot Tej nikla......mechanic se shidha real business man k tarah deal karne laga ... Saeed toh soch bhi nahi sakta tha ki abhinav repairing ke liye aise tej dimag lagake paiso k demand karega.... ush jamane mein 100K woh bhi advance mein... wah...


hmm abhi joh pados ke log hansh rahen hain mehboob ke upor... Lekin wohin jab bus newly ban kar ready ho jayegi toh inhi log ko mirchi lagegi......

Yeh kya Ruhi bewafa phir aa gayi kya story mein.. ... naah......
Maybe yeh woh wali ruhi nahin hain jise abhinav dilo jaan se chahta hain....
Sayad yahin se abhinav ke life mein changes aayenge..... ek nayi kadi ki suruwat......
Let's see what happens next...
Brilliant update casi sir... Great going :applause::applause::applause::applause:
 
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Update 3 A new turn in Abhi’s Life

Ek jaana maana bus owner tha Mehboob Jaan naam ka. Usske 4 buses running already the roads par. Magar usski nazar ek puraane sade hue bus par padi kahin ek jangal mein jo kissi bus owner ne dump kar diya tha. Uss par ghaans phuss, pawde bhi ug uthe the. Mehboob Jaan ne uss bus ka moaena kiya to paaya ke usski chassi bilkool mazbut aut achchah hai, magar engine tha hi nahin bus mein sirf chasis samet sada hua coach tha uss par. Mehboob jaan ne socha ke 50,000 mein ek second hand engine to mil hi jaega, chasis sahi hai to sirf coach building karna padega aur bus wapas road par chalaya jaa sakta hai. Chasis ka number note kiya ussne aur legal matter ke liye road traffic branch walon ke contact se pata kar liya ke sab legally banaya jaa sakta hai agar wo bus ko wapas road par lana chaahe to.

To ussko ab Saeed se milna baaki tha jo ussne kiya. Saeed ko lekar wo bus dikhaane legaya. Uss bus mein kaam wohi karna tha jo bilkool ek naye bus mein kiya jaata hai shuru se ant tak. Matlab chasis se shuru karna hoga aur end tak coach building karni hogi. Eise kaam ke liye garage mein 20 laakh rupay lag jata hai. Aur agar naye bus par coach building karna hota hai tab 40 se 50 laakh lagta hai. Yeh sab Mehboob ko bhi pata tha aur Saeed ko bhi. Mehboob ne Saeed se pucha ke kitne ki material takreeban kharidne padenge? Aur bus ko pura banaane mein kitna time lagega?

Saeed ke dimaagh mein kayi batein chal rahe thee uss waqt. Wo soch raha tha garage ke hisaab se kitna paisa lagta mehbob ko aur ab saeed garage wala kaam pura karne wala tha to kitna paisa lena chahiye ussko Mehboob se ek pura bus ki coach banaane ke liye. Saeed ne socha ke Abhi se milkar decision lena padega ussko, to ussne Mehboob se kaha,

“Mujhe apne workers se baat karna hoga pehle, yeh unn ke haath mein hein ke kitne dinon mein kaam pura ho sakta hai aur materials ke liye ek quotation banwa kar dunga aap ko, bahot saare sheets of alluminium kharidne honge, bahot metals kharidne honge pura frame ke liye aur bus ke tamaam seats ke liye alag se metals lene honge aur saare seats bhi banana hein, tamaam shishe bus ke kharidne hein….sab kuch from zero start karna hai….. upar se saare rivets, floorings, ceilings ke pannels, sides ke frames, sab kuch shuru se start karna hai bilkool jaise ek naya bus banta hai weise karna hai….”

Mehboob ne kaha ke wo sab karne ko tayyaar hai ussko wo bus wapas road par chahiye hi chahiye!

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Saeed jaakar Abhi se mila aur ussko lekar uss jangal mein bus dikhaane legaya aur donon milkar discuss karne lage ke kitna cost hoga saare meterials ka aur kitna paisa lena padega Mehboob se bus ko road par laane ke liye aur kitne dinon mein kaamm pura ho sakta hai.

Saeed aur Abhi phir usske ghar par mile aur kagaz kalam lekar baithe donon sab kuch likhne ke liye.

Saare materials ko soch soch kar likha gaya ek ek karke, sab yaad karte hue ke bus ki coach banaane ke liye kia kia istemaal hota hai, ek kil se lekar alliminium sheets tak sab kuch likha gaya aur daam ek kone mein note kiya gaya.

Ek pura quotation tayaar kiya abhi ne. kyunke wo padha likha tha to iss liye Saeed ne Abhi par count kiya wo sab tayyaar karne ke liye. Sab kuch kalam aur kaagaz par kiya gaya computer to tha nahin tab.

Usske baad ab donon ne discuss kiye ke kitna paisa lena hoga Mehboob se uss kaam ke liye. Saeed aur Abhi ne milkar discuss kiya ke company ki garage mein to uss kaam ke liye kum se kum do ya teen laakh liye jaate aur 3 mahinon mein kaam pura kiya jaata…. To baat yeh hui ke garage mein aur bhi kayi mulaazim kaam karte tab 3 mahinon mein kaam pura hota, yahan to 4 mulazim hein to ziada din to lagenge hi…… 6 mahine socha donon ne… phir socha ke Mehboob ko 6 mahine bahot ziada lagenge, to 4 se 5 mahine kehne ko socha donon ne. Tab baat aayi paise ki, labour ki, matlan mazdoori ki….. Saeed ne kaha ke 75,000 mangega. Aur kaha ke wo 50,000 lega aur Abhi ko 25,000 dega.

Abhi ne kaha,

“75,000? Aap paagal ho kia saeed ji? 3 laakh ka kaam aap 75 hazaar rupay mein karoge? Aur do workers ke bhi payment karne honge to keise mujhko 25 aur aap 50 loge unn mein se? Main kehta hoon do laakh mangna hai Mehboob ji se iss kaam ke liye.”

Abhi door ka sochta tha. Saeed ji ke liye 75 hazaar bahot bada rakam tha iss liye ussko ziada maangna ajeeb lag raha tha, magar Abhi ko pata tha ke Mehboob ji agar garage ko 3 laakh ki payment kar sakte hein to 2 laakh to de paega iss kaam ke liye. To Saeed ji ne kaha,

“Dekho Abhi, mujh mein himmat nahin hai Mehboob ji se itna bada rakam maangne ki, ek kaam karte hein, tum mere saath chalo, main tumko apne assistant kehkar milwaunga uss se aur tum price discuss karna unnke saath dekhte hein kia hota hai.”

Abhi maan gaya. Aur donon mile Mehboob ji ke ghar par. Abhi ne quotation de diya Mehboob ji ko. Derr laakh ki materials kharidne the Mehboob ji ko. Tab ussne Saeed ji se pucha ke kitna lenge iss kaam ke liye aur kitne dinon mein kaam pura hoga. To Saeed ne Mehboob se kaha,

“Ussi se puchiye nah janaab, yeh Abhi hai nah wohi sab accounting karta hai. Wo sahi figures dega aap ko.”

Mehboob ke yahan aane se pehle to baat 2 laakh ki hui thi magar yahan Abhi ne Mehboob se 3 laakh ki farmaayish kiye! Saeed ji ko jhatka laga 3 laakh sunkar! Magar Mehboob ji ne abhi se pucha,

“3 laakh kuch ziada nahin hai barkhurdaar? Garage mein bhi to utna hi lagta nah?”

Abhi ne kaha,

“Kia aap ke yahan garage hai janaab? Ya aap ke yahan hum khule hawa mein kaam karenge, dhoop mein tapte hue saare kaam karne honge, inn sab ko khayal mein rakhte hue hi nah humne sab kuch socha hai? Aur phir do aur mulaazim honge hamaare saath, unnke bhi to payments karne honge, travellings ka bhi socha hai humne saare mulazim ke travelling ka khayal bhi to karna padta hai nah?”

Mehboob ji ne muskuraate hue wapas Saeed ji ko dekha aur kaha,

“Are saeed bhai aap to apne finance manager ko lekar saath aaye ho ya yeh aap ka HR hai?!” aur wo hanss pade.

Mehboob ji ne 3 laakh ko Manzoor kiya jiss se Saeed ji ko zabardast jhatka laga, ussne to sapne mein bhi nahin socha tha ke life mein kabhi kissi se 3 laakh maangega kaam karne ke liye.

Saeed chup chaap baitha raha aur Abhi ko sab deal pura karne diya.

Mehboob ji ne pucha ke kitne dinon mein kaam pura hoga. Abhi ne kaha 5 se 6 mahine to lag jaega, aur Mehboob ji ko mechanics wale kaam alag se karwane honge engine ko lekar aur paintings bhi alag se wo karwaega apne taraf se. Mehboob ji raazi hue aur pucha ke payment kaise karega sab ek saath kaam pura hone ke baad ya advance payment chahiye?

Bina Saeed ko dekhe ya puche Abhi ne kaha,

“Agar aap 1 laakh de dete hamein kaam shuru hone se pehle to hamaare liye asaan hota baaki ke mulazimon ki payment karne ke liye kyunke unn logon ko weekly payment karte hein hum.”

Saeed ji ko ek aur jhatka laga abhi ki baat ko sunkar. Ussne to life mein kabhi 1 lakh rupay nah liya tha nah dekha tha. Aur 22 saal ki umar ka Abhi 1 lakh rupay maang raha tha ek bus owner se, wo bhi advance aur 2 lakh kaam pura hone ke baad milne wala tha….. Saeed soch raha tha ke sala ussne to 75 hazaar pura kaam ke liye maangne wala tha! aur yahan abhi advance 1 lakh mang raha hai aur Mehboob dene ko tayyaar tha!

Mehboob ji ne ek cheque kata 1 laakh rupay ki aur Abhi ko thama diya Saeed ko dekhte hue. Phir pucha ke kaam shuru kab hoga. To Abhi ne kaha kaam kal se hi shuru hoga, bus ko tow kiya jaega unnke aangan mein aaj hi.

Wahan se nikle to Saeed ne abhi se kaha,

“kamaal karte ho tum abhi? Sala 2 laakh ki baat hui thi aur tumne 3 laakh mang liya?”

Abhi ne zor se hansste hue kaha,

“Yeh ek laakh mera apna kamaayi hai saeed ji. Iss mein se main aap ko kuch nahin dene wala” aur zoron se hanssta gaya. Saeed ji khamosh rahe.

Kuch der baad Abhi ne pucha,

“yeh cheque aap apne account mein debit karoge ya main apne account mein daal dun?”

Saeed ne kaha,

“are beta mera to aaj tak koyi bank account hai hi nahin! To tumhi dalo apne account mein nah!”

Uss din life mein pehli baar Abhi ki bank account mein 1 lakh rupay deposit kiya gaya! Jiss bande ko 10 rupay ke liye tarasna padta tha, ek cigarette pine ke liye doston se maangna padta tha aaj 1 lakh rupay deposit kiya gaya usske account mein ussko khud yakeen nahin ho raha tha!

Shaam ko bus tow kiya gaya aur Mehboob ji ke aangan mein ek bade se peyr ke niche rakha gaya. Saeed aur Abhi wahin maujood the. Bus ko dekh kar log hanss rahe the. Pados ke log aakar bus ko dekhne lage jiss par ghanns phuss uge hue the, itna mayla tha, ganda tha, gande hare rang ke paani kayi jaga jama hua tha bus mein, jo ek do sheeshe bache hue the sab dark green gande iss kadar dikh rahe the ke ghin araha tha… kuch log Mehboob ji ko paagal keh rahe the ke ek sade hue bus ko jangal se uthakar apne aanagn mein laa rakha tha….

Abhi sun raha tha sabhi ke comments ko aur apne dil mein kaha,

“saalo, teen mahine baad tumhi log taarif karne aoge iss bus ki….”

Aur yahan par shuru hoti hai Abhi ki Romantic kahani… Abhi ne achanak kissi mahila ki awaaz ko kuch yun phukaarte hue suna;

“Ari oh Ruhi kia kar rahi hai aa dekh tere Mehboob chacha ne kia laya hai aangan mein!”

To be continued………..

Super update bhai. Kia details diya hai aap ne.
Shaandaar writing bhai. 1 lakh kama liye Abhi ne wooow!
To Ruhi naam aakhir goonj uthe Abhi k kaan mein.
Chalo dekhte hein romance kaise hota hai ab.
Super update bro. Loved it.
 

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Saeed and Abhi have got a new project, that's great. Both have become famous by working at a rate that is lower than the company rate. Abhi was very good at making deals. Your story is very old times, maybe 3 lakh is too much for this reason. Ruhi is mentioned in today's update. Now it is difficult to wait.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story. Thank You...:heart::heart::heart:
 

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'Wah bhai kamal kardiya'
'Abhi ko rato rat malamal kar diy'
'Abhi ko ruhi ki awaz suna ke'
'us bechare ka jena muhal kardiya'
'wah casi bhai tum ne to kamal kardiya'
'yeh update deke tum ne to'
'dil hamara khushi se nihal kardiya'
'aur agli update ke intezar me'
'dil hamara bechain o behal kardiya'
KEEP ROCKING BRO
 

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Update 3 A new turn in Abhi’s Life

Ek jaana maana bus owner tha Mehboob Jaan naam ka. Usske 4 buses running already the roads par. Magar usski nazar ek puraane sade hue bus par padi kahin ek jangal mein jo kissi bus owner ne dump kar diya tha. Uss par ghaans phuss, pawde bhi ug uthe the. Mehboob Jaan ne uss bus ka moaena kiya to paaya ke usski chassi bilkool mazbut aut achchah hai, magar engine tha hi nahin bus mein sirf chasis samet sada hua coach tha uss par. Mehboob jaan ne socha ke 50,000 mein ek second hand engine to mil hi jaega, chasis sahi hai to sirf coach building karna padega aur bus wapas road par chalaya jaa sakta hai. Chasis ka number note kiya ussne aur legal matter ke liye road traffic branch walon ke contact se pata kar liya ke sab legally banaya jaa sakta hai agar wo bus ko wapas road par lana chaahe to.

To ussko ab Saeed se milna baaki tha jo ussne kiya. Saeed ko lekar wo bus dikhaane legaya. Uss bus mein kaam wohi karna tha jo bilkool ek naye bus mein kiya jaata hai shuru se ant tak. Matlab chasis se shuru karna hoga aur end tak coach building karni hogi. Eise kaam ke liye garage mein 20 laakh rupay lag jata hai. Aur agar naye bus par coach building karna hota hai tab 40 se 50 laakh lagta hai. Yeh sab Mehboob ko bhi pata tha aur Saeed ko bhi. Mehboob ne Saeed se pucha ke kitne ki material takreeban kharidne padenge? Aur bus ko pura banaane mein kitna time lagega?

Saeed ke dimaagh mein kayi batein chal rahe thee uss waqt. Wo soch raha tha garage ke hisaab se kitna paisa lagta mehbob ko aur ab saeed garage wala kaam pura karne wala tha to kitna paisa lena chahiye ussko Mehboob se ek pura bus ki coach banaane ke liye. Saeed ne socha ke Abhi se milkar decision lena padega ussko, to ussne Mehboob se kaha,

“Mujhe apne workers se baat karna hoga pehle, yeh unn ke haath mein hein ke kitne dinon mein kaam pura ho sakta hai aur materials ke liye ek quotation banwa kar dunga aap ko, bahot saare sheets of alluminium kharidne honge, bahot metals kharidne honge pura frame ke liye aur bus ke tamaam seats ke liye alag se metals lene honge aur saare seats bhi banana hein, tamaam shishe bus ke kharidne hein….sab kuch from zero start karna hai….. upar se saare rivets, floorings, ceilings ke pannels, sides ke frames, sab kuch shuru se start karna hai bilkool jaise ek naya bus banta hai weise karna hai….”

Mehboob ne kaha ke wo sab karne ko tayyaar hai ussko wo bus wapas road par chahiye hi chahiye!

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Saeed jaakar Abhi se mila aur ussko lekar uss jangal mein bus dikhaane legaya aur donon milkar discuss karne lage ke kitna cost hoga saare meterials ka aur kitna paisa lena padega Mehboob se bus ko road par laane ke liye aur kitne dinon mein kaamm pura ho sakta hai.

Saeed aur Abhi phir usske ghar par mile aur kagaz kalam lekar baithe donon sab kuch likhne ke liye.

Saare materials ko soch soch kar likha gaya ek ek karke, sab yaad karte hue ke bus ki coach banaane ke liye kia kia istemaal hota hai, ek kil se lekar alliminium sheets tak sab kuch likha gaya aur daam ek kone mein note kiya gaya.

Ek pura quotation tayaar kiya abhi ne. kyunke wo padha likha tha to iss liye Saeed ne Abhi par count kiya wo sab tayyaar karne ke liye. Sab kuch kalam aur kaagaz par kiya gaya computer to tha nahin tab.

Usske baad ab donon ne discuss kiye ke kitna paisa lena hoga Mehboob se uss kaam ke liye. Saeed aur Abhi ne milkar discuss kiya ke company ki garage mein to uss kaam ke liye kum se kum do ya teen laakh liye jaate aur 3 mahinon mein kaam pura kiya jaata…. To baat yeh hui ke garage mein aur bhi kayi mulaazim kaam karte tab 3 mahinon mein kaam pura hota, yahan to 4 mulazim hein to ziada din to lagenge hi…… 6 mahine socha donon ne… phir socha ke Mehboob ko 6 mahine bahot ziada lagenge, to 4 se 5 mahine kehne ko socha donon ne. Tab baat aayi paise ki, labour ki, matlan mazdoori ki….. Saeed ne kaha ke 75,000 mangega. Aur kaha ke wo 50,000 lega aur Abhi ko 25,000 dega.

Abhi ne kaha,

“75,000? Aap paagal ho kia saeed ji? 3 laakh ka kaam aap 75 hazaar rupay mein karoge? Aur do workers ke bhi payment karne honge to keise mujhko 25 aur aap 50 loge unn mein se? Main kehta hoon do laakh mangna hai Mehboob ji se iss kaam ke liye.”

Abhi door ka sochta tha. Saeed ji ke liye 75 hazaar bahot bada rakam tha iss liye ussko ziada maangna ajeeb lag raha tha, magar Abhi ko pata tha ke Mehboob ji agar garage ko 3 laakh ki payment kar sakte hein to 2 laakh to de paega iss kaam ke liye. To Saeed ji ne kaha,

“Dekho Abhi, mujh mein himmat nahin hai Mehboob ji se itna bada rakam maangne ki, ek kaam karte hein, tum mere saath chalo, main tumko apne assistant kehkar milwaunga uss se aur tum price discuss karna unnke saath dekhte hein kia hota hai.”

Abhi maan gaya. Aur donon mile Mehboob ji ke ghar par. Abhi ne quotation de diya Mehboob ji ko. Derr laakh ki materials kharidne the Mehboob ji ko. Tab ussne Saeed ji se pucha ke kitna lenge iss kaam ke liye aur kitne dinon mein kaam pura hoga. To Saeed ne Mehboob se kaha,

“Ussi se puchiye nah janaab, yeh Abhi hai nah wohi sab accounting karta hai. Wo sahi figures dega aap ko.”

Mehboob ke yahan aane se pehle to baat 2 laakh ki hui thi magar yahan Abhi ne Mehboob se 3 laakh ki farmaayish kiye! Saeed ji ko jhatka laga 3 laakh sunkar! Magar Mehboob ji ne abhi se pucha,

“3 laakh kuch ziada nahin hai barkhurdaar? Garage mein bhi to utna hi lagta nah?”

Abhi ne kaha,

“Kia aap ke yahan garage hai janaab? Ya aap ke yahan hum khule hawa mein kaam karenge, dhoop mein tapte hue saare kaam karne honge, inn sab ko khayal mein rakhte hue hi nah humne sab kuch socha hai? Aur phir do aur mulaazim honge hamaare saath, unnke bhi to payments karne honge, travellings ka bhi socha hai humne saare mulazim ke travelling ka khayal bhi to karna padta hai nah?”

Mehboob ji ne muskuraate hue wapas Saeed ji ko dekha aur kaha,

“Are saeed bhai aap to apne finance manager ko lekar saath aaye ho ya yeh aap ka HR hai?!” aur wo hanss pade.

Mehboob ji ne 3 laakh ko Manzoor kiya jiss se Saeed ji ko zabardast jhatka laga, ussne to sapne mein bhi nahin socha tha ke life mein kabhi kissi se 3 laakh maangega kaam karne ke liye.

Saeed chup chaap baitha raha aur Abhi ko sab deal pura karne diya.

Mehboob ji ne pucha ke kitne dinon mein kaam pura hoga. Abhi ne kaha 5 se 6 mahine to lag jaega, aur Mehboob ji ko mechanics wale kaam alag se karwane honge engine ko lekar aur paintings bhi alag se wo karwaega apne taraf se. Mehboob ji raazi hue aur pucha ke payment kaise karega sab ek saath kaam pura hone ke baad ya advance payment chahiye?

Bina Saeed ko dekhe ya puche Abhi ne kaha,

“Agar aap 1 laakh de dete hamein kaam shuru hone se pehle to hamaare liye asaan hota baaki ke mulazimon ki payment karne ke liye kyunke unn logon ko weekly payment karte hein hum.”

Saeed ji ko ek aur jhatka laga abhi ki baat ko sunkar. Ussne to life mein kabhi 1 lakh rupay nah liya tha nah dekha tha. Aur 22 saal ki umar ka Abhi 1 lakh rupay maang raha tha ek bus owner se, wo bhi advance aur 2 lakh kaam pura hone ke baad milne wala tha….. Saeed soch raha tha ke sala ussne to 75 hazaar pura kaam ke liye maangne wala tha! aur yahan abhi advance 1 lakh mang raha hai aur Mehboob dene ko tayyaar tha!

Mehboob ji ne ek cheque kata 1 laakh rupay ki aur Abhi ko thama diya Saeed ko dekhte hue. Phir pucha ke kaam shuru kab hoga. To Abhi ne kaha kaam kal se hi shuru hoga, bus ko tow kiya jaega unnke aangan mein aaj hi.

Wahan se nikle to Saeed ne abhi se kaha,

“kamaal karte ho tum abhi? Sala 2 laakh ki baat hui thi aur tumne 3 laakh mang liya?”

Abhi ne zor se hansste hue kaha,

“Yeh ek laakh mera apna kamaayi hai saeed ji. Iss mein se main aap ko kuch nahin dene wala” aur zoron se hanssta gaya. Saeed ji khamosh rahe.

Kuch der baad Abhi ne pucha,

“yeh cheque aap apne account mein debit karoge ya main apne account mein daal dun?”

Saeed ne kaha,

“are beta mera to aaj tak koyi bank account hai hi nahin! To tumhi dalo apne account mein nah!”

Uss din life mein pehli baar Abhi ki bank account mein 1 lakh rupay deposit kiya gaya! Jiss bande ko 10 rupay ke liye tarasna padta tha, ek cigarette pine ke liye doston se maangna padta tha aaj 1 lakh rupay deposit kiya gaya usske account mein ussko khud yakeen nahin ho raha tha!

Shaam ko bus tow kiya gaya aur Mehboob ji ke aangan mein ek bade se peyr ke niche rakha gaya. Saeed aur Abhi wahin maujood the. Bus ko dekh kar log hanss rahe the. Pados ke log aakar bus ko dekhne lage jiss par ghanns phuss uge hue the, itna mayla tha, ganda tha, gande hare rang ke paani kayi jaga jama hua tha bus mein, jo ek do sheeshe bache hue the sab dark green gande iss kadar dikh rahe the ke ghin araha tha… kuch log Mehboob ji ko paagal keh rahe the ke ek sade hue bus ko jangal se uthakar apne aanagn mein laa rakha tha….

Abhi sun raha tha sabhi ke comments ko aur apne dil mein kaha,

“saalo, teen mahine baad tumhi log taarif karne aoge iss bus ki….”

Aur yahan par shuru hoti hai Abhi ki Romantic kahani… Abhi ne achanak kissi mahila ki awaaz ko kuch yun phukaarte hue suna;

“Ari oh Ruhi kia kar rahi hai aa dekh tere Mehboob chacha ne kia laya hai aangan mein!”

To be continued………..

Lajawaab update casi ji.
Lagta hai ab Abhi k kismat badalne laga hai. Jab takdeer karwat badalta hai to bina expect kiye bahut kuch hone lagta hai.
Jiss tarah se aap ne bus constructions k details likhe hein wo taarife kabil hai.
Aur iss update ki end mein samajh mein aya k ab Abhi ki romantic story shuru hone ja rahi hai.
Ruhi ka naam bulaate suna abhil ne aur update khatam..... hum bhi ussi ki tarah heyraan hein.
To agle update tak hum heyraan hi rehte hein....
Fabulous writing Casi ji :applause:
 

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Update 3 A new turn in Abhi’s Life

Ek jaana maana bus owner tha Mehboob Jaan naam ka. Usske 4 buses running already the roads par. Magar usski nazar ek puraane sade hue bus par padi kahin ek jangal mein jo kissi bus owner ne dump kar diya tha. Uss par ghaans phuss, pawde bhi ug uthe the. Mehboob Jaan ne uss bus ka moaena kiya to paaya ke usski chassi bilkool mazbut aut achchah hai, magar engine tha hi nahin bus mein sirf chasis samet sada hua coach tha uss par. Mehboob jaan ne socha ke 50,000 mein ek second hand engine to mil hi jaega, chasis sahi hai to sirf coach building karna padega aur bus wapas road par chalaya jaa sakta hai. Chasis ka number note kiya ussne aur legal matter ke liye road traffic branch walon ke contact se pata kar liya ke sab legally banaya jaa sakta hai agar wo bus ko wapas road par lana chaahe to.

To ussko ab Saeed se milna baaki tha jo ussne kiya. Saeed ko lekar wo bus dikhaane legaya. Uss bus mein kaam wohi karna tha jo bilkool ek naye bus mein kiya jaata hai shuru se ant tak. Matlab chasis se shuru karna hoga aur end tak coach building karni hogi. Eise kaam ke liye garage mein 20 laakh rupay lag jata hai. Aur agar naye bus par coach building karna hota hai tab 40 se 50 laakh lagta hai. Yeh sab Mehboob ko bhi pata tha aur Saeed ko bhi. Mehboob ne Saeed se pucha ke kitne ki material takreeban kharidne padenge? Aur bus ko pura banaane mein kitna time lagega?

Saeed ke dimaagh mein kayi batein chal rahe thee uss waqt. Wo soch raha tha garage ke hisaab se kitna paisa lagta mehbob ko aur ab saeed garage wala kaam pura karne wala tha to kitna paisa lena chahiye ussko Mehboob se ek pura bus ki coach banaane ke liye. Saeed ne socha ke Abhi se milkar decision lena padega ussko, to ussne Mehboob se kaha,

“Mujhe apne workers se baat karna hoga pehle, yeh unn ke haath mein hein ke kitne dinon mein kaam pura ho sakta hai aur materials ke liye ek quotation banwa kar dunga aap ko, bahot saare sheets of alluminium kharidne honge, bahot metals kharidne honge pura frame ke liye aur bus ke tamaam seats ke liye alag se metals lene honge aur saare seats bhi banana hein, tamaam shishe bus ke kharidne hein….sab kuch from zero start karna hai….. upar se saare rivets, floorings, ceilings ke pannels, sides ke frames, sab kuch shuru se start karna hai bilkool jaise ek naya bus banta hai weise karna hai….”

Mehboob ne kaha ke wo sab karne ko tayyaar hai ussko wo bus wapas road par chahiye hi chahiye!

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Saeed jaakar Abhi se mila aur ussko lekar uss jangal mein bus dikhaane legaya aur donon milkar discuss karne lage ke kitna cost hoga saare meterials ka aur kitna paisa lena padega Mehboob se bus ko road par laane ke liye aur kitne dinon mein kaamm pura ho sakta hai.

Saeed aur Abhi phir usske ghar par mile aur kagaz kalam lekar baithe donon sab kuch likhne ke liye.

Saare materials ko soch soch kar likha gaya ek ek karke, sab yaad karte hue ke bus ki coach banaane ke liye kia kia istemaal hota hai, ek kil se lekar alliminium sheets tak sab kuch likha gaya aur daam ek kone mein note kiya gaya.

Ek pura quotation tayaar kiya abhi ne. kyunke wo padha likha tha to iss liye Saeed ne Abhi par count kiya wo sab tayyaar karne ke liye. Sab kuch kalam aur kaagaz par kiya gaya computer to tha nahin tab.

Usske baad ab donon ne discuss kiye ke kitna paisa lena hoga Mehboob se uss kaam ke liye. Saeed aur Abhi ne milkar discuss kiya ke company ki garage mein to uss kaam ke liye kum se kum do ya teen laakh liye jaate aur 3 mahinon mein kaam pura kiya jaata…. To baat yeh hui ke garage mein aur bhi kayi mulaazim kaam karte tab 3 mahinon mein kaam pura hota, yahan to 4 mulazim hein to ziada din to lagenge hi…… 6 mahine socha donon ne… phir socha ke Mehboob ko 6 mahine bahot ziada lagenge, to 4 se 5 mahine kehne ko socha donon ne. Tab baat aayi paise ki, labour ki, matlan mazdoori ki….. Saeed ne kaha ke 75,000 mangega. Aur kaha ke wo 50,000 lega aur Abhi ko 25,000 dega.

Abhi ne kaha,

“75,000? Aap paagal ho kia saeed ji? 3 laakh ka kaam aap 75 hazaar rupay mein karoge? Aur do workers ke bhi payment karne honge to keise mujhko 25 aur aap 50 loge unn mein se? Main kehta hoon do laakh mangna hai Mehboob ji se iss kaam ke liye.”

Abhi door ka sochta tha. Saeed ji ke liye 75 hazaar bahot bada rakam tha iss liye ussko ziada maangna ajeeb lag raha tha, magar Abhi ko pata tha ke Mehboob ji agar garage ko 3 laakh ki payment kar sakte hein to 2 laakh to de paega iss kaam ke liye. To Saeed ji ne kaha,

“Dekho Abhi, mujh mein himmat nahin hai Mehboob ji se itna bada rakam maangne ki, ek kaam karte hein, tum mere saath chalo, main tumko apne assistant kehkar milwaunga uss se aur tum price discuss karna unnke saath dekhte hein kia hota hai.”

Abhi maan gaya. Aur donon mile Mehboob ji ke ghar par. Abhi ne quotation de diya Mehboob ji ko. Derr laakh ki materials kharidne the Mehboob ji ko. Tab ussne Saeed ji se pucha ke kitna lenge iss kaam ke liye aur kitne dinon mein kaam pura hoga. To Saeed ne Mehboob se kaha,

“Ussi se puchiye nah janaab, yeh Abhi hai nah wohi sab accounting karta hai. Wo sahi figures dega aap ko.”

Mehboob ke yahan aane se pehle to baat 2 laakh ki hui thi magar yahan Abhi ne Mehboob se 3 laakh ki farmaayish kiye! Saeed ji ko jhatka laga 3 laakh sunkar! Magar Mehboob ji ne abhi se pucha,

“3 laakh kuch ziada nahin hai barkhurdaar? Garage mein bhi to utna hi lagta nah?”

Abhi ne kaha,

“Kia aap ke yahan garage hai janaab? Ya aap ke yahan hum khule hawa mein kaam karenge, dhoop mein tapte hue saare kaam karne honge, inn sab ko khayal mein rakhte hue hi nah humne sab kuch socha hai? Aur phir do aur mulaazim honge hamaare saath, unnke bhi to payments karne honge, travellings ka bhi socha hai humne saare mulazim ke travelling ka khayal bhi to karna padta hai nah?”

Mehboob ji ne muskuraate hue wapas Saeed ji ko dekha aur kaha,

“Are saeed bhai aap to apne finance manager ko lekar saath aaye ho ya yeh aap ka HR hai?!” aur wo hanss pade.

Mehboob ji ne 3 laakh ko Manzoor kiya jiss se Saeed ji ko zabardast jhatka laga, ussne to sapne mein bhi nahin socha tha ke life mein kabhi kissi se 3 laakh maangega kaam karne ke liye.

Saeed chup chaap baitha raha aur Abhi ko sab deal pura karne diya.

Mehboob ji ne pucha ke kitne dinon mein kaam pura hoga. Abhi ne kaha 5 se 6 mahine to lag jaega, aur Mehboob ji ko mechanics wale kaam alag se karwane honge engine ko lekar aur paintings bhi alag se wo karwaega apne taraf se. Mehboob ji raazi hue aur pucha ke payment kaise karega sab ek saath kaam pura hone ke baad ya advance payment chahiye?

Bina Saeed ko dekhe ya puche Abhi ne kaha,

“Agar aap 1 laakh de dete hamein kaam shuru hone se pehle to hamaare liye asaan hota baaki ke mulazimon ki payment karne ke liye kyunke unn logon ko weekly payment karte hein hum.”

Saeed ji ko ek aur jhatka laga abhi ki baat ko sunkar. Ussne to life mein kabhi 1 lakh rupay nah liya tha nah dekha tha. Aur 22 saal ki umar ka Abhi 1 lakh rupay maang raha tha ek bus owner se, wo bhi advance aur 2 lakh kaam pura hone ke baad milne wala tha….. Saeed soch raha tha ke sala ussne to 75 hazaar pura kaam ke liye maangne wala tha! aur yahan abhi advance 1 lakh mang raha hai aur Mehboob dene ko tayyaar tha!

Mehboob ji ne ek cheque kata 1 laakh rupay ki aur Abhi ko thama diya Saeed ko dekhte hue. Phir pucha ke kaam shuru kab hoga. To Abhi ne kaha kaam kal se hi shuru hoga, bus ko tow kiya jaega unnke aangan mein aaj hi.

Wahan se nikle to Saeed ne abhi se kaha,

“kamaal karte ho tum abhi? Sala 2 laakh ki baat hui thi aur tumne 3 laakh mang liya?”

Abhi ne zor se hansste hue kaha,

“Yeh ek laakh mera apna kamaayi hai saeed ji. Iss mein se main aap ko kuch nahin dene wala” aur zoron se hanssta gaya. Saeed ji khamosh rahe.

Kuch der baad Abhi ne pucha,

“yeh cheque aap apne account mein debit karoge ya main apne account mein daal dun?”

Saeed ne kaha,

“are beta mera to aaj tak koyi bank account hai hi nahin! To tumhi dalo apne account mein nah!”

Uss din life mein pehli baar Abhi ki bank account mein 1 lakh rupay deposit kiya gaya! Jiss bande ko 10 rupay ke liye tarasna padta tha, ek cigarette pine ke liye doston se maangna padta tha aaj 1 lakh rupay deposit kiya gaya usske account mein ussko khud yakeen nahin ho raha tha!

Shaam ko bus tow kiya gaya aur Mehboob ji ke aangan mein ek bade se peyr ke niche rakha gaya. Saeed aur Abhi wahin maujood the. Bus ko dekh kar log hanss rahe the. Pados ke log aakar bus ko dekhne lage jiss par ghanns phuss uge hue the, itna mayla tha, ganda tha, gande hare rang ke paani kayi jaga jama hua tha bus mein, jo ek do sheeshe bache hue the sab dark green gande iss kadar dikh rahe the ke ghin araha tha… kuch log Mehboob ji ko paagal keh rahe the ke ek sade hue bus ko jangal se uthakar apne aanagn mein laa rakha tha….

Abhi sun raha tha sabhi ke comments ko aur apne dil mein kaha,

“saalo, teen mahine baad tumhi log taarif karne aoge iss bus ki….”

Aur yahan par shuru hoti hai Abhi ki Romantic kahani… Abhi ne achanak kissi mahila ki awaaz ko kuch yun phukaarte hue suna;

“Ari oh Ruhi kia kar rahi hai aa dekh tere Mehboob chacha ne kia laya hai aangan mein!”

To be continued………..

Badhya update bhai.
Iss update ko padhke dil ko ek sukoon mili.
Chalo Abhi ne kuch to aisa kiya k lakh rupay agaya usske account mein.
Aap ki varnaan uss coach building k baare mein buss kamaal ke hein. Sab kuch saaf samajh mein agaya bhai
Update ki end tak yeh bhi samajh mein a to gaya k ab Abhi ki life ki muhabat wala epidode start hone ja raha hai.
Kaun hai wo jissko Ruhi k naam se phukara gaya. Suspense hai, so agle update ka besabri se intejar rahega bhai.
Shasndaar aur lajawaab update hai bhai.
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