Romance Usski Gali Mein Jaana Chorr Diya (Exclusively For XForum) COMPLETED

[Casinar]

Super start bro very well scripted.
Loved the whole update. Too good mate. And thanks again for this story.
Waiting for the next and the romance.

thnks for the apprecition Vikram bro

 

[Casinar]

Bahut hi achi shuruwaat kiya hai Shah bhai . Shaandaar,lajawaab, behtareen likha hai aap ne. Zindagi ki talaash mein nikla apna hero magar ab tak ziada tar thokrein hi mile hein usse.
Chalo dekhte hein kab aur kaise usski taqdeer nein sudhaar aata hai. Best start hai bhai. Top narration. Bahut passand aaya bhai.

bahot shukriya husein bhai

 

[Casinar]

Very beautifully written update. Great narration. Vivid descriptions.
Very good abd awesome start. Very well scripted.
So lets see what comes up more in Abhi's life. Excellent job Casinar ji.

thanks very much for appreciating Amity dear

 

[Casinar]

mast start kiya hai bidu, bole to ekdum awwal.
bahut pasand aya apun ko.
yeh footi kismat lekar kidhar chala aopna hero?
firbhi lagta hai ke yeh hero jarur banega life mein. apni khud ki life ka hero.
dumdaar shuruwaat kiyela hai bidu, bole to jhakaasssssss.

bahot shukriya king bhai aur swagat hai dost

 

[Casinar]

Waiting for the next update bro

in a while

 

[Casinar]

Aaj 11 tarikh hain casi sir..... update dijiye.....

de diya nah

 

[Casinar]

BHAI BOHAT ACHA UPDATE THA BRO AND SORRY KAL GHAR PAR KUCH GUEST A GAI THE TO UN KE SATH GAPEY MARTEY HUWE 2 BAJ GAI THE IS LIYE ME SO GYA SORRY AGAIN!

koyi baat nahin bhai, shukriya wapas aane ke liye

 

[Casinar]

Nice update sir

thank very much Sona dear

 

[Casinar]

Bahut hi achcha update kul milakr abhi ek sadharan privar ka aam sa ladka tha

bahut shukriya James yara

 

[Casinar]

jindgi ki har ghatna ke achchhe aur bure dono pahlu hote hain.........
ab ye hamare oopar hai ki ham kise chunte aur apnate hain........

abhi ki jindgi mein bhi company ke band hone se shayad ek aur behtar rasta khul gaya hai

lekin uske dil ke khalipan ko ruhi ki yadein bechain kar rahi hain abhi bhi

dekhte hain ye khalish kya mod lati hai uski jindgi mein

bahot bahot shukriya Kaamdev bhai, aap ka review bahut passand aya mujhe