• If you are trying to reset your account password then don't forget to check spam folder in your mailbox. Also Mark it as "not spam" or you won't be able to click on the link.

Romance Usski Gali Mein Jaana Chorr Diya (Exclusively For XForum) COMPLETED

Casinar

Dimaagh ka garam, Dil ka naram
Divine
18,429
125,253
259
Whatever Abhi is thinking about Ruhi is fine, but I think everything is not what he is thinking. Abhi keeps a good mind. Roohi always starts crying, it means either Roohi is very innocent or she had a very bad past or Roohi is doing wrong with Abhi. The scene taking Roohi out the window like a child was very funny and lovely. The answer to that love letter will be received tonight. Ruhi's father is coming soon and is of a very soft nature, except brother, almost all will accept Ruhi and Abhi's relationship. What Ruhi wants to say but is unable to say.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story. Thank You...:heart::heart::heart:

thanks so very much for the appreciative review Aakash bro :happy:
 

Casinar

Dimaagh ka garam, Dil ka naram
Divine
18,429
125,253
259
Ye hui ba baat. Main bhi Abhi ko salute karta hoon uss jawab k liye jo ussne Naina ko diya. Iss se saabit hota hai k Abhi ka pyar Ruhi k liye kitna sacha hai. Wo Ruhi ko taklif nahim dena chahta uss se wo baat ki gehraayi mein jaa kar. Abhi ne kaha k agar Ruhi kabhi khud bataaye to thik varna wo uss baat ko kabhi nahin puchega. Hats off. Wo Ruhi ko respect karta hai.
Aaj Abhi aur Ruhi donon khub hansse aur mujhe bhi bahut hansaaya jab khidki se Abhi ne ussko ghar ke baahar nikal diya. Very funny still lovely.
Aur aaj Ruhi ka likha hua kuch mila Abhi ko. Ruhi ne Abhi ko tease karte hue pucha k ussko kyun kitchen k paas jana chahiye jabke ussko maloom tha. Very happy moments donon ke bich.
Very nice update bhai.

bahot bahot shukriya Nayan bhai iss appreciation ke liye
 

Casinar

Dimaagh ka garam, Dil ka naram
Divine
18,429
125,253
259
bahut badhiya update..........
yahan sirf ek josh mein kahi hui bat nahi rahi abhi ki..........
balki ek mature soch......... ki ruhi se uski virginity ke bare mein sawal karna galat hai........ wo chahe to kabhi apni marji se bata sakti hai
ab ye teenager romance se maturity ki or badh rahe hain

abhi ruhi ke father ke ane par dekhte hain ki kya response rahega unka

keep it up
bahot shukriya Kamdev bhai, dhire dhire teenager wala ishk mein dooba abhi ko dunyadaari aa hi jaegi bhai :D
ishk kabi nikamma bana deta hai to kabhi aisa sabak deta hai ke insaan ko MATURE BANA DETA HAI :D
 

Casinar

Dimaagh ka garam, Dil ka naram
Divine
18,429
125,253
259
Very beautiful update loved it.
Appreciated Abhi's reply to his sister. This was a responsible guy's reply. Abhi till now was shown only as a lover, like a college going boy, who is emotional and only listen to his heart. But by the answer Abhi gives to his sister we can see another Abhi, a responsible person indeed. How nice of him to say thay he loves Ruhi and not her Virginity. Such a good and nice person this Abhi. Muuuuuaaaaah.
Will his dream be realised? All that he wrote in his diary thay Ruhi is by his side on his bed? DREAMS!!
The part Abhi pulled Ruhi out of her room through the window was really funny and it was so good to see both laughing like thay. Made me laugh too. The other day they held each other and wept at least today we read they held each other and laughed thay much. I could feel and SEE the part where Ruhi was laughing and pointing her finger at Abhi while answering her mother how she came outside :laugh: too funny.
Today its the first time in the story we found Ruhi saying she talked to her dad.
The description Ruhi gave about her dad shows he is a very nice person so Abhi was encouraged by Ruhi to move on to talk to her dad about them.
And it was the first time Ruhi wrote something in her handwriting to Abhi.
Very nice, Abhi got souvenirs from her which he would keep all his life for sure.
Lovely update Casinar ji. Hats off and thank you for writing such a lovely tale for us. :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause:

Aooo thanks so very much for the beautiful review and appreciation amity dear :love:
 

Casinar

Dimaagh ka garam, Dil ka naram
Divine
18,429
125,253
259
"abhi ka naina ko samjhana"
"Aur naina ka maa se bat chipana"
"Abhi aur ruhi ka romance keliye ghr ke piche jana"
"Aur ruhi&mother ka achanak jana"
"Ruhi father ka phone ana"
"Aur us ke wapas ane ki khabar mil jana"
"Abhi ko apne khat ka jawab mil jana"
"Aur jate waqt abhi ka ruhi keliye pyar se hath hilana"
"is sab keliye hamne ap ko 'FORUM'S BEST WRITER' jana"


bahot khubsurat, are bhai aap ne shairi kar diya yaar
beautiful.
thanks very very much dost :love: :hug:
 

Casinar

Dimaagh ka garam, Dil ka naram
Divine
18,429
125,253
259
Bahut khubsurat update casi ji.
Abhi ab samajhdar hone laga. Ye usska uss jawab se pata chal jo ussne Ruhi ke liye apni behen ko diya. Kitna badhya socha Abhi ne ke Ruhi ko takliff nahin dena hai uss baare mein sawaal karke.
Khidki par ab Abhi k aane se pehle hi Ruhi usski raah dekhne lagi hai. Aur han donon mile khidki k paas to bahut funny chij hu k Abhi ne Ruhi ko khidki se ghar ke baahar nikaal diya. Main khub hassi. Laga k sab dekh rahi hoon itna behtareen likha hai aap ne uss scene ko. Koyi bhi hota to weise hi hasste.
Pehli baar Ruhi ne apne pita k bare mein baat kiya Abhi se k wo kaisa aadmi hai aur kitna sweet hai. Aur ab do hafte baad wo aane wala hai.
Ek scene aur mujhe bahut acha aur full original laga, wo Abhi ka kalam Ruhi k baalon mein fanssna. Beautiful and original.
Ruhi ne kuch to aakhir likh kar diya Abhi ko.
Great and lovely update casi ji. :love:

bahot bahot shukriya Savi dear :love:
 
Top