Romance Usski Gali Mein Jaana Chorr Diya (Exclusively For XForum) COMPLETED

[Casinar]

Woooooo
Very good update.....
Mostly abhi's latter......and his feelings in latter.....

Sara khel feeling ka hai....Sach hai ki Ruhi ko Abhi ka nam sun na pasand hai....us jagah mai....wo chahti hai ki wo naam wanha hamesha gunjta rahe....
Lekin ye bhi sach hai ki.....ki abhi ne jo bhi baate kahi.....phir chahe wo washing stone waali ho ya tree ki.....aangan ki ho ya rasping ki....
Inn baato ko bas wahi samajh sakta hai jisne kabhi kisi ka intezar kiya ho....

OR JIS jagah par ham kisi ka intezar karte hai..... kisi apne ka....us jagah se hame ak laga available sa ho jata hai.....
OR agar wo hame wanha milne lage.....wo jagah 1 ya bahut sari ho sakti hai ...jaisa ki abhi ke saath hua....
Lekin unn sabhi places se feeling to judge hee jaati hai....OR jab unse feelings jud jati hai to ham unse baate bhi karne lagte hai....

Jaise ki abhi ne kaha ki wo tree se baate kiya karta tha....OR abhi bhi karta hai....

Ab wo Ruhi ke upar depend karta hai ki wo kaise abhi ki iss feeling ko khud se Jod paati hai.....
Kyoki aaj tak bas ak baar hua hai....jab Abhi naraaz tha....ki Ruhi ne Abhi ka wait kiya ho.....
OR waiting waali feeling ha4 koi nahi samjha sakta......

Jis se hamara iss tarah ka relationship hota hai uska rona to waise bhi bahut bura lagta hai.....

Ye baat sahi kahi abhi ne ki.....wo Ruhi ko accept kar chuka hai....wo kya thi.....uska past kya tha...ya phir usne kya kiya ya kya nahi kiya....
Wo use waise hee accept kar chuka hai jaisi ki wo hai.....OR ye baat abhi ke deep love lo dikhata hai....

Ruhi jis baat ko chhupa rahi hai.....use agar wahi kahegi to jyada achcha rahega....kyoki koi bhi relationship ho....agar uski shuruaat sach se ho to wo toot ta nahi hai.....mostly.....
Jab ham ak dusre ke baare mai sab jaanenge tab kitne hee bahari log kuch kare.....lekin unn dono ka relationship waise hee chalta rahega....bina kisi dukh ya pareshaani ke.....
Jaisa ki Saeed ne ak 2 baar Abhi ko bhadkaane ki koshish ki bhi thi.....

Ruhi ki maa ka Abhi ki taang khichna achcha tha.....lekin kya abhi us mazaak ko samajh gaya.....ya phir se pahle ki tarah karega.....
Kyoki jaise Ruhi ki maa ne mazaak kiya.....waisa hee mazaak Ruhi ne bhi kiya tha....tab to kaafi hyper ho gaya tha.....

Ab dekhte hai aage kya Hota hai....
Anyways
Good update....
Thanks

bahot shukriya appreciate kakrne ke liye vikram bhai, sahi pehchana sab feeling ki baatein hein

 

[Casinar]

Very interestinh and beautiful update Casinar ji.
I respect Abhi for he had not been an opportunist. Being now aware that Ruhi is not a virgin and getting the freedom to stay in her bed in the lonely night Abhi could hv very easily had sex with her as Ruhi was willing. Respect Abhi for his control and he did noy move ahead. Thats a true lover.
Apart from that you have written so many things in this only update that ai dont know where to start with.
Shweta. Whenever you write of her I feel like you are writing for your own daughter or may be you hv know a cute girly like her in your life. I am saying this because you put so much life each time you write and describe Shweta that I feel I can see and feel that little girl's feelings and her love and attachment for Abhi.
It was so lovely all the part you have mentioned Shweta, specially Abhi sitting in front of her and she drying his hair with the towel. And how at first she stood still in seeing Abhi there then run into his arms shouting his name. That was very beautiful and heart touching.
Then the parts of Ruhi's elder brother makes me feel he is going to be the one cause of whom Abhi and Ruhi will be separated. But could be I am wrong.
I did not like the way the old grandfather is treated in the house you said little about him but much is understood.
And Ruhi's mother is not clear till now. She seems to be supporting both but I still hv a doubt on her. She is strange.
The romance between Abhi and Ruhi is very well described, narrated and portyayed.
Hats off Casinar ji for this beautiful update.

thanks from the bottom of the heart for the lovely review Amity dear

 

[Casinar]

Woooooowww
Hmmmm very good update.....

Dono hee raat bhar soye nahi.....abhi isliye ki Ruhi ro rahi thi or usko koi takleef hai.....

OR Ruhi iss liye ki.....uski maa ne jiss kaaran itna sab kiya....yanha tak ki apni beti ko bhi akele ghar me chhod diya.....
Sirf akele Abhi ke bharosa par.....wo kaam bhi Ruhi pura ma kar paayi....Abhi ko kuch bata nahi paayi.....OR isi liye uski maa ne saath diya.....
Maa ka daantna itna bada reason nahi hai....ho sakta hai ki wo apne past ko yaad kar.....OR uske abhi ke saamne reveal ho jaane par abhi ke chhod jaane ke darr se ....ro rahi ho.....

Ha ye baat sahi hai.....us zamane me am it amitabh ka matlab bas amitabh nahi tha.....us time amitabh bachchan ko
THE AMITABH
Mana jata tha....OR mana kya jata tha...abhi bhi hai.....
Lekin uss zamaane me unki fan following itni thi jitni ki aaj salman shahrukh or aamir ko mila kar bhi nahi hogi.....
Bachche....yuva.....teen....girls sab uske deewane the.....
MAI KHUD BHI AMITABH KA FAN HU....

Abhi unse mila hai.....OR unse apni height bhi compare ki hai.....good....
WAISE JYADATAR LADKO ME YE JARUR HOTA HAI KI WO APNE SAATHIYO SE YA....APNE SAATH KHADE LOGO SE APNI HEIGHT JARUR COMPARE KARTE HAI.....MUJHE MERI BHI HAI....
WAISE HEE GIRLS ME APNI KHUBSURATI COMPARE KARNE KA HOTA HAI....

Abhi or Ruhi ki sweet conversation mai Reza ka interference kaafi funny tha....

Aisa lage jaisa koi bade man se or maze se sweet dish kha raha ho....OR achanak se use koi kadhi dawa de diya jaaye....

Mann ka ak second me arsh se farsh par aa jana.....aise me abhi ka gussa hona sahi hai.....lekin us par Ruhi ka reply bhi achcha tha.....

Mahesh apne kaam me laga hua hai....yska kaam abhi ke kaam ko pura hone ke baad khatam hoga....

Jis jagah par Ruhi hamesha rahi hai....wo khidki uska bnd hona thoda shocking tha.....
Abhi ka aawaz dene par bhi Ruhi ka na aana....azib tha.....lekin ho sakta hai ki uski maa ne kaha ho....ya kisi kaam me fas gayi ho.....
OR may be used letter ko padh kar usme himmat na ho Abhi ka saamne karne ki....

Dekhte hai aage kya Hota hai....
Anyways
Very good update....
Thanks

bahot shukriya Vikram bhai appreciate karne aur itni detail meinreview dene ke liye
aap ne Manoj ko shayad Mahesh likha hai

 

[Casinar]

Fantastic update sir

thanks very much sona dear

 

[Casinar]

Do baatein ek mauka mila ki nahin lag jaate dono kissi bissi karne
Dusri kaisi maa hain khud ki beti ko ek gair mard ke baahon mein dekh khush hoti hai...

Monaj ki narazgi thik hi toh hain..... Akhir bhai hai ruhi ke..... Uska gussa hona laazmi hain....... Agar kal ko uch nich ho gayi toh
Aur woh joh bhi bol rahan hain thik hi toh hain ki ek anjan mechanic unke ghar hi kyun thehre... Mehboob ke ghar kyun nahi... Aur iss story ki heroine yeh kirdaar ruhi khood mein hi ek raaz hain.......
Yahan ek hi kirdaar pak aur saaf dil ki woh bachchi.....Shweta
Khair......
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update casi sir.. Great going

bhot shukriya Naina ji, ma khush ho rahi hai beti ko ghair mard ke baahon mein dekh kar?
abhi ghair ho gaya?
itne dinon se maa ko pata to hai ke Abhi usski beti se payr karta hai sab kuch to usske saamne hi hua hai nah?

 

[Casinar]

Woooooowww
Very good update....
Both updates.....

OR dono hee updates mai jo chij sabse sahi or achchi thi....OR mujhe kaafi jyada pasand aayi....wo hai....ki....

Abhi itne time se apne dil se kaam le raha tha....aaj usne apna dimaag bhi lagaya hai.....
Ha ye hota hai...OR bahut se log kahte hai ki dil ki baato me dimaag nahi lagaya jata....
Lekin ye bhi sach hai....ki jyada meethi nuksaan karta hai....khubsurti kabhi kabhi dhoka hi deti hai....
OR ati har chij ki kharaab hoti hai....bhale hee wo pyar ya khushi hee kyo na ho...

Bhale hee Shweta ne apne maa baap ke baare me clear kar diya ho....lekin doubt to Abhi bhi hai....OR reasonable hai...

Wo sheets ko kaatna ke baare mai aapne jo bataya....wo mujhe nahi lagta ki koi mention karne waali ya update me shamil karne waali baat thi....
Lagbhag sabhi log jaante hai ki chahe stone ho.....iron ya iron sheets ya phir koi tiles ...unhe kaise kata jata hai....
I mean iss baare me itna detailing ki jarurat nahi thi......

Abhi jab bhi Ruhi se uss baare me puchta hai to Ya to Ruhi taal jaati hai...ya nazarandaz kar deti hai....OR ya phir rone lagti......
Ab isme ak chij ho sakti hai....ya to wo baat jo Ruhi ne chhupa rakhi hai kaafi badi hai.....ya phir Ruhi na use chhupana chahti hai or na bata paa rahi hai....isi kashmkash me hai....

Anyways
Dekhte hai aage kya Hota hai...
Thanks....

bahot bahot shukriya Vikram bhai iss khubsurat review ke liye.
aap ne iss update mein sab kuch bilkol sahi dekha hai

 

[Casinar]

Badhya update bhai. Bahut khubsurati se likha gaya update hai.
Abhi ne iss baar sayyam rakha apne aap par aur hadd paar nahin kiya jabke lagta tha Ruhi chahti thi ke weisa ho. 3 baar aur raat mein gayi thi Abhi k paas.
Manoj shayad ab kahani ka vilain ho aur na bhi ho sakta hai.
Maa par ab bhi shak hai mujhe.
Shweta sabse pyari aur masoom hai usske bare me padhna bahut acha lagta hai.
Raat kat gayi, subha bhi ho gayi achi romance ho nahin paayi magar pyar jinda raha yehi kahunga iss update k bare mein.

bahot shukriya Shambhi bhai appreciation ke liye

 

[Casinar]

Bahut badhya update bhai
Sach kahun to jab last update mein pata chala ke Abhi ek raat gujarega Ruhi k saath, to main ne socha aaj ka update sex se bharpur hoga, erotic aur hot hoga. Magar main bhool gaya ke ye sex story nahin love story hai. Aap ke itne sex stories padhe hein ko wohi dimag mein pehle aya
Magar kia update diya hai aap ne bhai maja agaya. Behtareen update.
Jab raat ko Ruhi apni nighty pehen rahi thi Abhi k presence mein tab bhi laga k ab kuch to hoga magar hua to Abhi ke woh baat jo dil ko chhuh gaya. Wah casi bhai jabardast. Shaandaar.
Aur ek tataf pyari Shweta jiss k baare mein padhte rehne ko mann karta hai. Badi khubsurti se aap ne ussko parts ko likha hai. Bahut hi cute hai ye bachi aur aap ko pata hai ek cute si bach k bare mein kia aur kaise likhna chahiye. Superb.
Maa ki role kia hai ussko samajhna mushkil hai. Pata nahin k wo kuch paka rahi hai ya kia hai usske mann mein.
Manoj sahi bhi keh raha aur shayad ussko to pata hai ke Ruhi aur Abhi ek dusre ko chahte hein magar kehna kia chahta hai pata nahin.... kia jealous hai ya saavdhaani barak raha hai?
Ruhi pyasi reh gayi, aaj usske angon ko Abhi ki zaroorat thi magar kuch ho nah saka.
Chalo dekhte hein ab kia hota hai.
Bahut badhya update bhai. Bahut shukriya

khubsurat appreciative review ke liye bahot dhanyawad Nayan bhai

 

[Casinar]

Manoj ne abhi aur ruhi ko baate karte dekha h kayi baar par abhi ke uske ghar me rukne se wo khus nhi tha jarur kuch baat hai jo abhi pta nhi abhi aur ruhi ne thoda romance kiya aur abhi sahi wakt pr ruk gya fabulous

bahot ahot shukriya James yara

 

[Casinar]

Everything is happening as Abhi wanted and Abhi is very happy, I am afraid that no one can take a bad look at Abhi's happiness.
Roohi's mother has no problem with Roohi and Abhi's relationship, meaning a permit is obtained, so what does brother need to fear. Manoj is angry, but why, he does not like Abhi or any other reason. Manoj does not know how to talk to the elders of the house, he does not even know.
Abhi and Shweta have become deeply attached due to being together for so many days. I love Shweta's cute words, her childishness, her way of speaking, everything. Abhi is seeing his dream come true, I am very happy because everything is going well.
The bed and the dress changing scene was beautiful. Erotic things and scenes make me very excited. Abhi will stop himself till gets the license.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story. Thank You...

thanks so very very much Aakash bro for the lovely appreciation