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Romance Usski Gali Mein Jaana Chorr Diya (Exclusively For XForum) COMPLETED

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Dimaagh ka garam, Dil ka naram
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Lo!!
Ab firse donon ek hue.
Sala future mother in law ne Abhi ko rehne k liye keh diya raat bhar usske ghar bina mangni sagaayi ke hi? Arrrrrreeeee ye kaise ho gaya? Khud to darwaja kholne se inkaar kar rahi thi, aur ab rehne ko bol diya raat bhar usske ghar mein? Wah kia baat hai? Ussne donon ko rote dekha bachon ki tarah to mamta ubhar aayi hogi lagta hai.
Aur Ruhi ko baahar bhu jaane diya jab raat ho gayi tab? Kia karna chahti hai ye maa? Khud badhawa de rahi hai donon ko ya ye sab pehle se maa beti ne milkar llan kiya hua tha?
Samajh me to nahin araha magar Abhi k liye bahut acha feel ho raha. Yssko kitni khushi ho rahi hai Ruhi k saath romance karte hue.
Romantic scenes bahut badhya likhte ho bidu sab bahut mast gaya iss update mein.
Ab raat mein kia hota hai ye dekhna baaki hai.
Superb update :yourock:
tehe dil se shulriya bhai appreciate karne ke liye
 

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Yaar casi bhai bahut pyara update hai.
Aakhir Ruhi nazar to aayi Abhi ko. Lunch time mein almost rulaya Abhi ko ghar ke andar hi rehkar par ab kitchen mein to ana hi tha aur Abhi ne honshiari se kaam ko hold kiya taake jiss time ko Ruhi kitchen me aaye tab wo wahan tin kaatne jaate kyunke wo usske kitchen ke paas tha. Very well planned.
Aur iss update ki sabse behtareen part hai Shweta.
Kia describe kiya hai aap ne uss bachi ko aur kia narrate kiya hai aap ne. Wah. Kitni pyari aur cute hai
Abhi ne bhi mauke ka faeda uthate hue Shweta se kuch sawaal kiye magar shak ab bhi barkaraar hai.
Jiss tarah se Shweta ne Ruhi ko jealous kaha, jiss tarah se Ruhi Shweta se keh rahi thi ke ussko puppy bhi nahin diya mili bhi nahin aur jaa rahi hai aur Shweta jaate hue hansskar jiss tarah se Ruhi ko wave kar rahi hai sab bahut hu badhya tha. Hats off bhai.
bahot bahot shukriya shambhu bhai
 

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Wo part jab Rahima k yahan gayi Abhi k paas se gujar ke wo geet gaate hue aur wapas aayi ussi geet ko gaate fir Abhi ne ussi geet ko gaya aur Ruhi ne ussko mudhkar dekha aur muskuraayi wo bahut romantic aur majedar likha hai aap ne bhai wo mujhe bahut acha laga.
Magar usske baad jo kuch Ruhi ne kiya aur kaha wo bilkool nahin acha laga. Ruhi aur usski maa mili hui hai Abhi ko tarpaane k liye. Shaayad usska imtehaan le rahe hein donon maa beti ye dekhna chahte hein k Abhi kia karega agar usska koyi aur hua to. Mujhe to kuch aisa hi lag raha hai
shukriya mere dost
 

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Donon ka gale milkar rona ne mujhe bahut bhavuk kar diya bhai. Aankh bhar aayi mere.
Kia scene tha wo bhai wah. Kia situation create kiya hai aap ne shabash.
Jiss tarah Abhi ne emotional hokar kaha k wo ek kone mein jaakar baad mein roega, ya bus mein jaate hue munh chhupa kar roega to Ruhi se raha na gaya aur khud rone lagi. Takiye me mu chupa kar roti rahi aur abhi ne kaha ai sath milkar rote hein, rona share karte hein, Abhi k inn baaton aur rulaya.
Jab abhi ne rote hue usski maa se kaha ke wo darwaja khole kyunke wo Ruhi ko gale lagana chahta hai maa ne inkar kiya to Ruhi ne khud darwaja khola Abhi k liye fir donon ka lipat k rona haaye.... kia scene hai bhai. Dil jeet liya aap ne.
Tab donon ke bed par baith kar hathon mein haath dalkar baat karna. Wah kia majedar likha hai casi bhai. Hats off yaar. Bahut bahut emotional likha hai aap ne iss update ko. Dil jeet liya aap ne bhai.
Baaki virgin hona na hona maena nahin rakhta iss update me.
bahot bahot shukriya shambhu bhai
 

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Wah :toohappy:
Ab aya asli maja. Bahut khush hua bhai. Khush kar diya aap ne aaj.
Bahut maja aya iss update se.
Abhi reh raha hai ek raat Ruhi ke ghar. Kia baat hai. Maa ko donon ko rote dekh kar taras agaya aur mila diya donon ko kia baat hai.
Abhi kitna khush hai. Ruhi bhi kitna khush. Abhi to jane wala tha, Ruhi ne hi kaha ussko rukne ke liye aur maa ne haami bhadi :vhappy:
Donon romance karte hue dukaan gaye, Abhi ne kitna kuch kharida sabke liye. Shweta ko nahin bhula wo.
Aur aaj Ruhi ne bataya ke bus ke kone mein har shaam ko Abhi ke jaane ke baad wo ussko yaad karti hai. Kia baat hai. Abhi ki to aaj jaise lottery lag gayi bhai.
Kitna khush hein donon. Inki jodi bani rahe yaar.
Abhi Manoj ka wapas ana baaki hai shweta k saath.
Raat bhar kia Ruhi aur Abhi ko paas rehne ka jiada mauka milega?
Agla update kal jaldi dena bhai, intejar nahin ho raha ab :yay: :ecs:

thanks very much bhai chalo khushi to hui nah :D
 

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Very nice update buddy.
Loved the Shweta part very much. You portrayed her perfectly well as a little angel.
Abhi used her by asking few questions and succeeded to get few information but the doubt still remain in Abhi's head that Shweta is her daughter.
The little cutie pie talks a lot and makes Ruhi jealous. Very cute scenes full of love. Thanks for this beautiful uodare3 mate.

thanks very much vikram bro
 

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Now whats going wrong with Ruhi? Is she teasing Abhi or what? Now where from suddenly comes this Amit? Why h was not spoken about earlier?
I personally feel that all this is just a drama to test Abhi's love for Ruhi. Could be her mother asked her to tell all that to Abhi to know his reaction.
Good update but I feel they are sort of torturing Abhi.

glad that you liked the update bro
 

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Oh Finally Ruhi speaks up
But bro what an emotional update mate. Superb my dear. You succeeded to moisten my eyes mate. Hey yeah!!
Such an emotional scene when Abhi wept and asked her mother to open the door but she refused while Ruhi herself opened to let Abhi in and wow both held each other in their arms and cried like kids. That broke the heart bro, could not stop my tears gushing out. Phewwwww.
Just anazing and heartbreaking my dear
Well yet very happy to see both together again
The conversation went in well and her virginity had no place as Abhi beforehand said more important stuffs..... their love is pure specially from Abhi.... he is so innocent and looks a bit naive. Hope he succeeds.
Great update my dear. You really excel in writing romance. Keep it up bro.
:bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow:

thanks very very much for the appreciation Vikram bro
happy that u liked the updates my friend
 

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Now this is an update:yay:
Very happy reading this one mate. Too good. Fantastic awesome. Very beautifully written and narrated with exceptional romantic scenes which reaches the heart really.
Finally Abhi finds one of his dreams being realised as he gets to stay the night at Ruhi's place. Thats marvellous indeed.
Lovely scenes bro. Their walking side by side in the dark lane reaching the shop and Abhi buying so many cakes and snack for her without forgetting Shweta's share.
Then while returning Ruhi stopping near the bus and telling Abhi how each evening she comes to feel Abhi's presence in and nearby the bus... and to end all by a passionate kiss under the huge tree.
That was breathtaking man.
Mindblowing update Casi bro. Hats off
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a nd here you go , it pleases me a lot to see you happy with the updates bro
 

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Wooooowww aakhir ek majedar aur pyar bhara, dil ko khush karne wala update to aaya.
Wah casi bhai kia planning hai yaar. Shock par shock dene ke baad ab ek marham wala bhi update de diya. Kia baat hai. Uttam update bhai. Ati uttam. Behtareen, shaandaar, lajawaab update hai bhai, bahut bahut acha laga ye pyar bhara update padhke. Abhi ke liye bahut hi acha laga bhai. Bechara pyar ka mara kitna marr raha hai Ruhi k liye aur aaj aap ne Abhi ko itni suhani raat de diye Ruhi ke saath bitaane ke liye ye bahut hi acha kiya aap be casi bhai.
Donon kitne khush hein aur kitne romantic moment hue donon ke bich baahar jab gaye aur wapas aate hue bus ke piche wo kiss. Wah casi bhai dil khush kar diya aap ne. :adore: :adore:
bahot bahot shukriya indian bhai
 
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