Romance Usski Gali Mein Jaana Chorr Diya (Exclusively For XForum) COMPLETED

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Besabri se intejar hai Casi ji

thodi der mein

 

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Is ishq ka taumra mujhe malal rahega....,
Hua kyon tha tumse ye malal rahega.

Thanks Parth bro and welcome

 

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Acha laga. Bahut acha laga bidu.
Jaldi start karo issko

thanks and welcome king bro

 

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Casi bhai iss kahani ko dekh kar behad khushi hui.
Intro dumdaar hai aur title dil ko chhuh dene wala.
First update ka besabri se wait karunga bhai

bahot shukriya Supar bhai & Welcome

 

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Jee bilkul bhai pehle update ka review bhi dungaa kesa laga but aapse request hai ke kahani ko jldi khtm mt kr dijiyegaa..

pehla update to de diya kal bhai; aap to dikhe hi nahin aaj dusra ane wala hai

 

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gazab ki shuruat hai casi bhai....................
pahle pyar se bichhudne ka dard................. ek gareeb kisan ke bete ki lagan aur sapne

lekin sapne dikhte hi tootne ke liye hain..............................
(isiliye hum raton ko jaagte hain............. ki sapne tootne ka dard na mahsoos ho )

ab is company ko kya hua................ abhi ke sapno ne udaan bhi na bhar payi aur andhiyan aa gayin

agle update ka intzar rahega

bahot bahot shyukriya kaamdev bhai, aap ki review dekh kar acha laga
khushi hai ke aap ko passand aya updtae

 

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If you had to choose between money and love, whom would you choose? If Abhi wants Ruhi wholeheartedly, he will surely get her love. Despite Abhi's family's poor financial condition, Abhi is trying his best. Just now Abhi was a little happy that the company shut down.
The first update of the story was very good. You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story. Thank You...

thanks very much for your appreciation aakash bro, glad that you liked the update

 

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Wow kia update diya hai bhai. Lagta hai hero ki puri life aap ne pehle update mein hi bata di. Magar ye to buss shuruwaat hai.
Emotional gharib ladka. Pyar ki talaash mein nikla. Naukri ki talaash mein nikla, zindagi ki talash mein nikla.
Manzil mili thik tabhi majhi ne naiya doobo diya. Kia kismat hai.
Dard bhari zindagi hai apne hero ki magar mujhe full vishwas hai aage kuch sahi zaroor hoga.
Bhai bahut mast likha hai aap ne. Behad passand aya mujhe. Lagne laga ke ye story jabardast hone wali hai.
Bahut shukriya Casi bhai.

bahot bahot shukriya Indian bhai

 

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Bahut hi khubsurat update hai bhai. Ek garib naujawan jiss ne apne pyar ko kho diya aur jo jiwan ki raah mein kadab badha hi raha tha k achanak ek jabardast toofaan aa gaya. Bechara Abhi. Ab kia karega wo? Kaam itni mushkil se 3 saal mein seekha aur jab acha tankhwa milne laga to company bandh ho gayi? Kia musibat hai yaar. Gharib k hi jiwan mein ye sab hona tha kia?
Aap ne bahut dilchasp likha hai Abhi k baare mein bhai. Sab kuch bahut clear hai. Ussko pyar ki talaash hai magar jiss ladki ko chahta hai ussi ki chabi chahiye ussko apni mehbooba mein. Kia wo milegi ussko?
Agle update ka besabri se intejar rahega bhai. Te first update mujhko bahut passand aya.
Bus ki coach building ko aap ne jiss bariki se likha hai kamaal ka hai. Mujhe khud ye sab pata nahin tha. Casi bhai aap jiss vishay mein bhi likhte hi nah buss kamaal ka likhte ho. Mujhe yaad hai ek darinde se pyar wale story mein aap be Samir ki commando ki jo training likha tha wo itna detail mein tha ke hum sab ko laga tha ke aap ne jarur uss training mein bhaag liye honge...... you are an awesome writer bhai. Hats off.

tehe dil se itni pyari review ke liye dhanyawad Shambhu bhai

 

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paise k chakachaundh ke aage sachhe pyar ka mol fika pad gaya...
toh...... ruhi bewafa nikli
par yeh pyaar ka maara abhinav aaj bhi ushi ruhi ko dhundhe hain dushri KHUBSURAT ladkiyon k andar... special demand, english jan ne wali okey...
Ab in janab ko koun samjhaye ki khubsurat hona hi sab kuch nahin hain...


Bechara abhinav .... musibato aur dukho ka pahaad har waqt mandrata rahta hain iske sar ke upor .. pyaar toh chin liya ab naukri bhi... ....are kuch toh raham karte bechare ke upor......
kul milake abhi ke halat bahot hi dayaniya aur naazuk hain.... casi sir kuch toh kijiye plz

Brilliant update with awesome writing skill...... abhi k life ke har ek pehlu ko jish tarike se explain kiye hain woh atulaniya hain . dairy se leke jeevan sangram tak.....

thanks very very much naina ji acha laga aap ki review dekh kar