Romance Usski Gali Mein Jaana Chorr Diya (Exclusively For XForum) COMPLETED

[Casinar]

Bahut hi hot aur romantic scene chal rahi thi lunch se pehle aur lunch k baad. Erotic bhi kar diya tha scene ko Abhi ne. Maja dugna hone laga tha magar Ruhi be sara maja kidkida kar diya rona dhona shuru karke. Are baad mein bata sakti thi nah yaar.
Ab Abhi stress mein baaki raat gujarega Ruhi ki vaja se kia yaar, ye ladkiyan sirf stress hi dete hein ladkon ko!!
Badhya update bhai.

bahot shukriya Supar bhai

 

[Casinar]

ha ha ha ha .................... doodh mein makkhi............ aur koi udaharan nahi mila


issko padhkar lagta hai..... ruhi sex se na sirf achchi tarah parichit thi........ balki sex mein anubhavi bhi thi........ jaisa ki apne ishara kiya hai........... ki usne uske erection ko na sirf hath mein feel kiya.... balki use bahut samay tak bhi feel karti rahi... bina kisi abnormal reaction ke


ye lunch ka invitation...........actually ruhi ne nahi....... uski maa ne arrange kiya hai...............
ruhi ki maa ne pahle bhi ruhi se kaha tha.............. ki kya ruhi ne use sachchai batayi hai?
ab andaja wahin aa jata hai............ jahan pahle meine kaha tha................ shweta...... ruhi ki hi beti hai

lekin ab dekhte hain ..............ap kya chhupaye baithe hain

kaamdev bhai aap ki review ka intezaar rehta hai mujhe jaise vikrant bhai aur rowdy bhai aur amity ke reviews ka wait karta hoon, ab doctor sahab ke review ka bhi wait karne laga hoon aaj kal jo ab aane lage hein
bahut dhanyawaad bhai is pyari si review ke liye
dekhte hein kahan tak aapo ka sochna sahi hai

 

[Casinar]

OMG. Ab main kia kahun iss mega update ke baare mein?
Bahut kuch keh diya aap ne iss update mein but most important hui Ruhi ka rona aur apni ghalati ko batana magar nahin batana.
Mujhe to Abhi ke liye afsos ho raha hai. Bechara dil se chahta hai Ruhi ko magar Ruhi jaise khilwad kar rahi hai usske saath.
Dekhte hein kia kehti hai usski maa ab.
Behtaree update hai.

bahot bahot shukriya swathi dear appreciation ke liye my dear

 

[Casinar]

Woooooowww......
Hmmmmmmmmmmm
As always.....very well written and also very well described act.....
Aaj ka ye update puri tarah Ruhi ka hai....song ki baat chhod de to....to aaj jyada ham Ruhi ke baare me baat karenge.....
Aakhir Ruhi ne abhi ka gussa pighla hee diya.....good I mean.....very good.....
Ye pyar sala hota hee aisa hai...HUG or KISS to phir bhi badi baat hai.....
Uska ak pyar ka bol hee.....gusse ko jadd se khatm kar deta hai.....

OR yanha to Ruhi ne khud......saamne se aakar abhi ko gale lagaya.....OR saath hee saath.....kiss bhi khud hee pahale kar kiya......
Ye to aise ho gaya jaise koi aadmi mar raha ho bas ak boond paani ke liye or use pura samandar mil jaaye....
Registan me aadha aa jaaye.....
Aise me gussa to kya......pura ka pura aadmi hee pighal jaaye.....

Ruhi ki maa ko bhi abhi accept hai....is se pata chalta hai ki agar kabhi dono alag bhi hue to family shaayad bich me kaaran na bane.....
OR ak possibility to maine aapko pahle hee bata diya thi.....

Ab baat kare ki bar bar Ruhi ke dwara abhi ko mock karna.....ya chidhana.....ye hee to pyar hai....ak dusre ko ishaare karna....ishaaro me baate samjha dena....
OR waise bhi saamne waalo ki yahi sab chije....apne pyar ko or gahra karti hai.....

Unki adaaye......unka sharmana.....unki chedchad.....nazakat.....
OR yahi pyar karne waale ke dil or dimaag dono ko apne pyar ke jaal me jakar leti hai.....

Baat ke large Ruhi ke dwara....abhi ki taraf jinhe ko hotho par fer kar ishara karna....
Wese to ye ishara kya hai......iss ishaare ka Matlab har koi jaanta hai....
Lekin iska dusra matlab KISS(lip to lip)bhi hota hai.....
OR STORY ke hisaab se iska yanha par matlab....kiss se hee hai.....kyoki bhale hee unka kiss ho gaya ho....lekin abhi ke liye wo unexpected or ultra shock full tha.....isliye wo khul kar use enjoy nahi kar paya.....na hee wo feeling le paya....Jo ki apne pyar ki baahon me hokar or usko pahla kiss kar ke hoti hai.....

Isliye hee usne Ruhi ko dubara kiss karne ya baahon me lene ko ho hee raha tha.......jo ki mahboob ke Aa jaane se pura nahi ho paya tha.....
TO yanha par us ishaare ka Matlab hai ki Ruhi use ye karke chidha rahi thi ki wo subah kuch nahi kar paya.....
Ya use ak or kiss chahiye.....isme jra bhi vaasna nahi hai.....
Ab Abhi ne bhale hee us ishaare ka Matlab wo nikala ho....OR usne ye matlab bhi isliye nikala kyoki usne halki see jhalak Ruhi ke nazuk ango ki li thi....OR uske body us se touch bhi hui thi.....
Bhale hee kuch der ke liye....lekin pahli bar female interaction bhi pahli bar hua tha to.....u can understand......

Ab baat kare abhi ke answer ki.....to kuch log kah rahe hai ki wo funny tha......bhai mujhe to kanhi se bhi funny nahi laga.....

Balki isme mujhe uske pyar ki gahraai dikhaai di.....OR wo aise....ki jo banda sachche dil se or dil ki gahraai se jis se pyar karta ho.....to wo use sabse best or perfect maanta hai....ak tarah se Pooja karta hai uski.....
OR wo ye kabhi nahi chahta ki us par koi daag lage.....bhale hee wo milti ya or kuch ho.....lekin Wo nahi chahta ki wo jiski Pooja karta hai wo.....lesh matra bhi maila ho....OR TAB to khas kar nahi jab wo khud uski wajah ho.....

Saeed bhi shant ho chuka hai....lekin kya sach me.....I don't think so.....

Ha to ab baat karte hai update ke best part ki.....and that's the song.....

To song ke liye pahle ham update ki baat karenge.....phir mujhe casi bhai aapse or baaki logo se bhi ak baat karni hai.....

So first the song.....very good and one of my favourite song.....aapne iska link kyo diya hai.....ye or iske jaise kaafi mere par save hai.....
Ye gana situation par ak dam perfect baithta hai....OR ak gaane hee to wo chij hoti hai jis se ki insaan apni pichli yaade ak bar phir se jee pata hai.....
Ye gaane hee uske dil ka haal bayaan karte hai or us par Marham ka kaam bhi karte hai......
OR aapne jo 15 saal waali line kanhi.....usne mujhe bhi kaafi emotional kar diya.....bhuli hui yaade me bhej diya tha......

Yanha abhi current situation ke hisaab se gana gaa raha hai or Ruhi ko apna pyar wayakt kar raha hai.....jise Ruhi bhi pure dil se sun rahi hai.....OR uski gahraai mehsus kar rahi hai.....yanha par gana.....ak gana na hokar ak dusre ko pyar wayakt karne ka saadhan hai.....
OR jab pure gaane ko Ruhi ne suna mehsus kiya to jab usme bichadne ki baat aayi to Ruhi ko apne dwara chhipai hui baat yaad aayi or use ak pal ke liye laga.....or jaise ki use darr hai.....aayi garima wo bichhde to....
Yanhi soch kar use rona aa gaya.....

At last
Fabulous and fantastic update....
Dekhte hai aage kya Hota hai....
Thanks.....




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Ab baat karte hai...Casinar bhai se......

Bhai gana chahe uss jamaane ka ho ya aaj kal ka......agar wo deep romantic song hai or agar wo aapke dil ko chhota hai....to aap isme apne atit apne bite hue kal ki jhalakiya jarur dekh sakte hai.....
Kai logo ke to jine ka Sahara hee ye yaade hoti hai or ye gaane jo unn yaado ko phir se zinda karte hai.....

Ye song mere bhi favourite hai.....ye hai or...
Tu iss tarah se meri zindagi me-manhar
Wafa ki raah me dil-manhar.....
Or bhi Bahut saare....

To mai ye kah raha tha....ki

Kaafi samay pahle xossip par ak writer tha....naam tha uska shaayad......MAK....MAKE 42.....pakka pata nahi.....
Wese stoey ke ya writing ke aamne me to wo koi khas nahi tha.....lekin uski ak chij mujhe behad pasand aayi thi.....
OR wo tha uske dwara start kiya hua ak thread.....Jo ki koi story thread nahi tha.....

Lekin us par sab log apni pasand ke gaane post kiya karte the.....jis se ki achche or dil ko chhu lene waale jin gaano se ham be khabar hai.....hame unka bhi pata chal jata tha.....
Such a nice thread MAK....

To mera kahne ka Matlab ye tha ki aap ya or koi bhi bhai ak aisa hee thread start kare....dubara.....
Iss se am sabhi ko achche gaane.....jinke baare me ki ham nahi jaante.....
Ham sabhi ko pata chale.....
Usme achchi movies ka jikar ho to or bhi achchi baat hai.....

Ye meri dil se request hai aapse or baaki sabhi dosto se bhi ki aisa koi thread start kijiye......

Thanks

hmmmmmmmm
der aaye durust aaye ho bhai
mujhe intezaar tha main aap kopm karne hi wala tha ke aap kidhar kho gaye ho bhai.
bahot bahot shukriya Vikram bhai, behad khush hua main aap ki iss bahot bade aur detailed review se.
bahot hi acha lagta hai jab koyi uipdate padhke iss tarah ke review deta hai to, likhne ke liya taaqat bante hein aise reviews bhai thanks very veryr much dost

 

[Casinar]

Bahute hi badhya, shandaar, lajawab update hai ye. Kia likha hai bhai maja agaya, are kitna bada wala update diya hai upar se baap re baap.
Bahut hi kuch likha hai updatewa me magar hum siraf jo khaas baat hue uhi par bolunga.
Bahut majedar romance chala Ruhiwa k kamrawa me. Romancewa aage bhadke eroticwa ban gawa. Sala rah gaya tha siraf andar thussne ko samaam ko magar Ruhiwa nahin nah karne diya. Bechara Abhiwa khada samaan baith gay, phuss ho gawa. Dhat teri ki. Aisa bhi hota hai kia? Karne ko bulaya to karne da ho chhokri. Ye uhi baat bhayl na k bhikari ko paisa dikha ke sala roti thama diya. Bechar Abhi. Mayus nikla ukar ghar se.
Ruhiwa nah ro ro ke Abhiwa ko thugle ba. Chhokri nai ba u aurat ba phir bhi nai kare delak. Chalu chij ba Ruhiwa.
Ab Abhiwa ka neendh udh gail ba. Pagla rahal ba chhokra.
Dekhat ba ab aage ka bhail.

appreciation ke liye tyehe dil se shukriya Shambhu bhai
aaj aap ne thoda bhojpuri style mein likha hai

 

[Casinar]

Casi sir ji kya likhte hain Aap... har sabd mein ek jaadu hain..... Kahani aisi ki lage aankhon ke samne hi woh bus woh rahan abhi woh Saeed ji udhar ruhi khadi....
Khair
Aaj rebu nahin
Bas itni si baat kahungi ki abhinav ke liye yahin achha hoga ki woh is ruhi ki prem moh maya se bahar aa jaaye...... Agar waqt rahte is moh se nikal naa paya na baad mein bahot pachtaega...
Ruhi agar tum pyar hi karti ho abhinav se toh jhuthi mukhota pehchaan dikhake nahin..... Sachhai ke niv se rakh ke nayi suruwaat karo pyar ki aagaz ... yun chuppan chupayi ka khel mat khelo abhinav se plz...... kyunki woh ek sachha aashiq hain....
Khair..
Brilliant update casi sir...... Great going
Dil tak chu lene wali writing skill..... East ho ya West casi sir ki writing style is best

bahut bahit shukriya Naina dear, khushi hui aap ki review padhke
dekha nah aap ne kal hi kaha tha nah ke sex ke taraf nadh raha haio, pyar rooh se hoti hai etc aur aaj Ruhi se chhutkara paane ko keh rahi ho
chalo dekhte hein .... weise aap bilkool SAHI HI KEH RAHI HO
thanks very very much for reading attentively

 

[Casinar]

Behtareen mega update Shah bhai.
Kitna kuch likh diya hai aap ne.
Ghar jo lakdi ka bana uss se insaan ki heysiyat ki ek pehchaan. Sahi hai. Aisa aaj bhi to hota hai nah?
Jitna bada ghar utna bada naam. Kyun?
Bhai direct mudde par baat karta hoon.
Ruhi mujhe ab chalu nazar ane lagi hai. Kia wo Abhi ko sach mein chahti hai ya ussko fanssna chahti hai ? Main iss se confused hoon.
Dhire dhire aisa lagne laga hai ke Ruhi aur usski maa milkar Abhi ko fanss rahe hein.
May be I am wrong but aisa feel hua mujhe.
Romantic scene aap ne bahut hi badhya likha aur darshaya hai. Very hot and arousing.
Erotic ke bahut karib aa gaya ths update, erotic hote hote ruka.
Iss scene se hi main ne Ruhi ke khilaaf kaha. Ek ladki jissko kiss karna ata hai, jo ek mard ki erection par haath rakh kar wahan se haath hataaye nahin, uss erection ko feel kare aur wo ussko normal lage wo ladki chalu nahin to kia hai?
Ab ye keh kar ke usski life ki ghalati ko maaf karna etc.... means ro kar phit Abhi ko wo baat nahin bataane ka kia matlab?
Rona Abhi k saamne ek trick bhi ho sakta hai. Ruhi ko pata chal chuka k Abhi emotional fool hai to ussko apne husn ke jaal mein fanssna asaan hai aansoo baha kar....
Mujhko aisa lag raha still main galat bhi ho sakta hoon.
Ab Abhi ki raton ki neend to udega hi. Iss mein mujhe lag raha hai k sirf Abhi pees raha hai Ruhi nahin.
Anyway jabardast update hai bhai bahut badhya.

bahot bahot shukriya Husein bhai iss pyari review ke liye yaar bahut acha laga mujhe

 

[Casinar]

Eagerly waiting

thodi hi der mein karta hoon bhai

 

[Casinar]

Thanks for the mega update casinar ji.
brilliantly written, narrated and described as always.
very very interesting situations and creations.
your very detailed descriptions are just a pleasure to read.
coming to the update I will go straight to the main point, that is about the relationship
between Abhi and Ruhi.
the meeting and lunch were very nice. Ruhi is a good cook no doubt in that.
the feelings of Abhi regarding Ruhi no doubt on that either.
But the feelings of Ruhi regarding Abhi a doubt on that YES.
Abhi has feelings even for the things,
that room which he used to see from outside the window when he talked to her,
he feels and keeps moments of the places. he is emotional, yes but sincere.
But at no point, Ruhi's sincerity has been shown except that she proved to be loving Abhi by her actions only.
the romantic moment was described too well and was even
exciting and really arousing at some places which really was going to be erotic.
Ruhi ends all by telling her story which she, in fact, did not tell and started crying.
She cries easily, now, could be she is like that and easily brings tears to her eyes,
or could really be that she gets very affected by thinking of her past where she had committed a blunder.
but where is Abhi in all that? He is for nothing and he gets to bear all that Ruhi goes through.
because of Ruhi Abhi gets to suffer and this is from day 1. this looks unfair. still, if this is how it had been I really feel for Abhi, not for Ruhi. maybe later on with further updates after knowing Ruhi's past I will feel for her,
but till now Abhi is the priority of the story and all evolves around him only.
wonderful update Casinar ji. loved it and the next is eagerly awaited.

thanks for the bottom of my heart for the very beautiful appreciative review Amity dear

 

[Casinar]

Waiting bhai

5 mins mein karta hoon bhai