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Update 1 Abhinav Also Known As Abhi

Abhi aur Ruhi ek dusre se sach mein behad pyar karte the, magar kuch eisa hua ke donon ek dusre se hamesha ke liye alag ho gaye, aur aaj Abhi har ek ladki mein Ruhi ko hi dhundta hai, usski adaaein, usski bholapan, usski cuteness, usski wo kamsin dikhna, nazuk, aur komalta yehi sab dhundta rehta tha Abhi kissi bhi ladki mein. Aur haan Ruhi bahot hi khubsurat thi to Abhi koyi bahot khubsurat hi ladki ki talaash mein tha.

Alag kyun hue donon? Mamooli si baat thi. Sab gharib log the, Abhi ke pita kisaan tha, Ruhi ka pita watchman tha. Ek hi muhalle mein rehte the sab…. Magar Ruhi ke pita ki ek din lottery lag gayi. Amir ho gaya, aur khud ko bahut bada aadmi samajhne laga, Abhi ke pita usske liye bahot nicha aur chhota ho gaya tha, Ruhi ke pita ka uthna baithna ab bade amir logon mein hone laga…. Aur wo sab chorr chaar kar Canada chala gaya. Address bhi nahin diya apna aur Ruhi ko sakht mana kiya Abhi se koyi bhi contact karne ke liye…. Phir dhire dhire saalon baad Ruhi Abhi ko bilkool bhool gayi aur Canada ki lifestyle, wahan ke dost, wahan ke log, wahan ke boyfriends sab ho gaye usski…to Abhi ko delete kar diya bilkool ussne to Abhi kia karta? Ussne bhi bhula diya Ruhi ko, magar ladki ussko Ruhi jaisi hi chahiye the apne life mein.

Abhi 20 saal ka hua. Koyi dhang ki Naukri bhi nahin mil raha tha, kabhi yahan to kabhi wahan, kabhi iss company mein to kabhi temporary kaam milta kissi aur company mein…..

Gharibi ke kaaran studies complete nahin kar paaya, baap ke paas utna paisa nahin tha ussko aage padhaane ke liye…. 12th ke baad ek saal bekaar tha phir baap ke saath kheton mein jata aur phir apne dhang ki Naukri dhunta gaya…. Ussko English likhne aur bolne ka bada shaukh tha….. Ek aadat nahin chorra tha ussne wo tha padhna, reading. Bookworm tha. Englsih kitaabein bahot padhta tha, borrow karta tha padhne ke liye… class mein English mein awwal tha, hamesha sabse ziada marks paata tha class mein. To wo reading ki aadat bana raha usska. Aur haan Abhi likhta bhi tha, English mein hi. Kia likhta tha? Apna daily events likhta tha, har saal ek diary kharidta tha aur har raat ko sone se pehle usska din keise guzra wo likhta tha bina kissi din ko miss kiye. Aur ek special copybook mein usske aur Ruhi ke baare mein likh chuka tha jo apne drawer mein sambhaal kar rakha tha Abhi ne. Uss mein apne bachpan se 12th tak ke sab kuch likha tha, jiss din Ruhi ussko chorr kar Canada gayi aur usske baad ke ek saal ussne kitne dukh mein guzaare wo sab kuch likha tha ussne uss mein. Aaj bhi wo sab padh ke usske aankhon mein ensso aajata hai. Aaj bhi yaad karta hai ruhi ko kabhi kabhi, Magar Ruhi ka chehra ab kaisa hoga usski imagination mein nahin araha tha. Ek tadap, ek tees sa uthta tha usske dil mein Ruhi ke saath unn bitaaye hue dinon ko yaad karte waqt… Ussko itna to pata tha ke ab ussko Ruhi kabhi wapas nahin milega, ussko maloom tha ke Ruhi ki status ab usske saamne bahot hi ooncha ho gaya hai aur wo khud ko Ruhi ke naukar ke bhi kaabil nahin samajhta tha; iss liye Ruhi ko hamesha ke liye bhula dena hi behtar samjha Abhi ne, magar kissi aur ladki ka pyar chahiye to tha ussko, iss liye har ladki mein Ruhi ko hi dhunta phirta tha. Miley kayi ladkiyan, dosti hui, karib gaya Abhi magar ussko unn ladkiyon mein Ruhi jaisi kuch nahin dikha to kadam piche hatta liya Abhi ne….. usska talaash jaari raha phir bhi….

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Ek din ussko ek Coach-Building ki company mein as apprentice/helper Naukri mili. Wahan ziada tar bus banaate the. Bus ki chasis nange aate the engine ke saath, usski body, cover, andar ke seat vaghaira sab bana kar bus ko complete karna hota tha. Ussi ko coach building kaha jata hai. Abhi ko wo kaam dilchasp laga. Jiss din ussne join kiya kayi buss aaye the chasis aur engine ke saath uss par body banana tha. Takriban do mahine mein ek bus complete ban jata tha. Koyi 300 log mulazim the uss company mein. Jab Abhi ne ek completed bus ko dekha to wo heyraan hua ke kaise sirf ek lohe ki chasis par ek pura bus bana diya gaya hai, wo bahot prabhaavit hua aur uss kaam ko hamesha ke liye karne ko socha…. Aur Abhi wahan kaam seekhne laga… metal kaatna, frame banana, welding karna, phir bus ki pure body ke liye aluminium sheets ko hisaab se kaat kar rivet se sab fir metals par chipkana, windows ke glasses lagaana, seat banana aur bus ke andar fit karna, buss ki floorings par thick wala aluminium chipkana special rivets se, jissko hatode se kayi baar thok thok kar chipkaya jaata tha; kuch luxurious chizon ko bhi lagana bus ki kharidne wale ki demand par, yeh sab kuch seekha Abhi ne 3 saal tak, aur ussko sab pakka karna agaya. Paisa kum mil raha tha shuru mein, mahine mein sirf 100 rupay kama raha tha. Ek to gharibi ne chaaron taraf se haath feylaya hi hua tha, kuch bhi luxurious kharidne ki aukaat nahin thi… kyunke Abhi ko laga ke uss kaam ko seekh kar wo zaroor aaguey chal kar khud sab kar paega iss liye ussne himmat ki aur 100 rupay maahwaar ki tankhwa mein kaam karta gaya, apprentice tha pehle 3 saal tak phir bhi karta gaya magar 3 saal tak hote hote ussko ek full employee ki salary milne lagi.

Unn dinon mobile ka vikaas nahin hua tha. Shukar hai varna unn dinon ek jawaan bina mobile ke kaise jeeta. Cigarette pine laga tha, doston se mil jata tha pine ke liye, tankhwa milta to kuch ghar mein deta, kuch apne liye rakhta phir bhi 100 rupay mein kia rakhta ek mahine ke liye, paise to do din mein hi khatam ho jaate the kyun ke 75 rupees ghar mein diya to 25 bachta tha usske paas aur 25 rupay ko kitne din chala paata halaan ke unn dinon sab kuch itna mehnga nahin tha jitna aaj kal hai….. unn dinon ko araam se ek mahine guzaarne ke liye at least 300 rupay hona chahiye tha….. paidal factory ata jaata tha, ek naya pair of shoes bhi nahin kharid paata tha, baap ki kamaayi ke paise se ghar ka ration chalta tha, electricity bill, water bill vaghaira sab baap pay karta tha upar se aur bhi bhai behnein the…. Bahot tang haalaat the jinn dinon abhi jawaan tha. filmein dekhna bahot passand karta tha, har nayi movie ko first day first show dekhta tha. Unn dinon ticket itna menhga bhi nahin tha to koyi nah koyi jugaad kar leta tha apna ticket paane ke liye, kabhi dost log usski ticket kharid dete the….

Beer peene ki aadat bhi lag gayi doston ke saath, to beer bhi pine laga aur ahiste ahiste daru ki latt bhi lag gayi….magar paise ki kami ki vajah se har roz to nahin peeta tha, mahine mein ek ya do baar enjoy kar leta tha… aur kabhi kissi dost ke paas ziada paisa hota aur wo offer karta to Abhi ko bhi gale mein utaarne ka mauka mil jata tha.

Abhi ke bhi sapne the, har gharib ki tarah wo bhi sochta ke ek din mere paas bhi car hogi, bada ghar hoga, life mein aaguey badhunga, kuch kar dikhaunga, ek din mere saare sapne pure honge…. Aur sabse khaas sapna usska yeh tha ke ussko ek Ruhi jaisi mehbooba mile…. Emotional tha, dil se ziada sochta tha pyar ke baare mein, apne diary mein aksar likhta ke usske liye kahin to bani hogi ek ladki, dharti ke kissi kone mein to hogi wo dilnasheen jisska intezaar Abhi kar raha tha, magar abhi ko jaldi tha, kahan milegi wo agar wo kahin hai bhi to, kab milegi ussko wo? Kia naam hoga usska? Kaisi dikhti hogi? Kia padhi likhi hogi? Kyunke Abhi ko English bolna perfectly ata tha iss liye ussko yeh umeed thi ke uss ladki ko bhi English mein likhna aur bola ana chaahiye…. Kyunke abhi dil ki baton ko English mein bade asaani se izhaar karta tha iss liye wo hamesha sochta tha ke apne dil ki baton ko apne mehbooba tak English mein likh kar bayaan karega.

Kyunke unn dinon mobile nahin hua karta tha to, aam taur par sabhi chittiyon dwara communicate karte the. Internet ka naam o nishaan bhi nahin tha. Haan telephone tha. Television tha, aur TV serials bhi chalta tha. Magar Abhi ke ghar mein TV tha hi nahin. Padosi ke ghar TV dekhne jaate the Abhi ke ghar waale, Abhi bhi chala jaata tha jiss din usske passanjida movie ata tha TV par.

Thik jab Abhi ek employer ban gaya uss company mein aur ab usske saath helpers aur apprectice kaam karne lage, Abhi ki salary tab 2,500 rupay maahwaar ho gaya, tabhi company ko bandh hona tha!!

3 salary mil paaya Abhi ko jabse wo employer bana. Bahot khush hua, ghar mein party diya, doston ko bulaya, maa baap, bhai behnon ke liye naye kapde kharide, khud ke liye ache kapde aur joote kharide, Walkman ka zamana tha, jissmein cassete lagaa kar gaane sunte the to Abhi ne ek Walkman bhi kharida aur apne passand ki cassetes kharidta aur sunta rehta…. Pehla tankhwa mila to kariban 2,000 to spend kar diya weise hi. Dusre mahine ki salary mili to apne pita ko 2,000 rupay thama diya usske chote chote karzon ko adaa karne ke liye aur ghar chalaane ki madad ke liye. Jo bhai behen college jaate the unn sabko tagda pocket money de diya Abhi ne.

Aur teesri salary milne ke baad company ka diwala nikal gaya aur band hogaya…… yeh sab kyun aur kaise hua agle update mein dekhte hein…..

To be continued…..
 
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gazab ki shuruat hai casi bhai....................
pahle pyar se bichhudne ka dard................. ek gareeb kisan ke bete ki lagan aur sapne

lekin sapne dikhte hi tootne ke liye hain..............................
(isiliye hum raton ko jaagte hain............. ki sapne tootne ka dard na mahsoos ho :))

ab is company ko kya hua................ abhi ke sapno ne udaan bhi na bhar payi aur andhiyan aa gayin

agle update ka intzar rahega
 

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If you had to choose between money and love, whom would you choose? If Abhi wants Ruhi wholeheartedly, he will surely get her love. Despite Abhi's family's poor financial condition, Abhi is trying his best. Just now Abhi was a little happy that the company shut down.
The first update of the story was very good. You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story. Thank You...:heart::heart::heart:
 

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Update 1 Abhinav Also Known As Abhi

Abhi aur Ruhi ek dusre se sach mein behad pyar karte the, magar kuch eisa hua ke donon ek dusre se hamesha ke liye alag ho gaye, aur aaj Abhi har ek ladki mein Ruhi ko hi dhundta hai, usski adaaein, usski bholapan, usski cuteness, usski wo kamsin dikhna, nazuk, aur komalta yehi sab dhundta rehta tha Abhi kissi bhi ladki mein. Aur haan Ruhi bahot hi khubsurat thi to Abhi koyi bahot khubsurat hi ladki ki talaash mein tha.

Alag kyun hue donon? Mamooli si baat thi. Sab gharib log the, Abhi ke pita kisaan tha, Ruhi ka pita watchman tha. Ek hi muhalle mein rehte the sab…. Magar Ruhi ke pita ki ek din lottery lag gayi. Amir ho gaya, aur khud ko bahut bada aadmi samajhne laga, Abhi ke pita usske liye bahot nicha aur chhota ho gaya tha, Ruhi ke pita ka uthna baithna ab bade amir logon mein hone laga…. Aur wo sab chorr chaar kar Canada chala gaya. Address bhi nahin diya apna aur Ruhi ko sakht mana kiya Abhi se koyi bhi contact karne ke liye…. Phir dhire dhire saalon baad Ruhi Abhi ko bilkool bhool gayi aur Canada ki lifestyle, wahan ke dost, wahan ke log, wahan ke boyfriends sab ho gaye usski…to Abhi ko delete kar diya bilkool ussne to Abhi kia karta? Ussne bhi bhula diya Ruhi ko, magar ladki ussko Ruhi jaisi hi chahiye the apne life.

Abhi 20 saal ka hua. Koyi dhang ki Naukri bhi nahin mil raha tha, kabhi yahan to kabhi wahan, kabhi iss company mein to kabhi temporary kaam milta kissi aur company mein…..

Gharibi ke kaaran studies complete nahin kar paaya, baap ke paas utna paisa nahin tha ussko aage padhaane ke liye…. 12th ke baad ek saal bekaar tha phir baap ke saath kheton mein jata aur phir apne dhang ki Naukri dhunta gaya…. Ussko English likhne aur bolne ka bada shaukh tha….. Ek aadat nahin chorra tha ussne wo tha padhna, reading. Bookworm tha. Englsih kitaabein bahot padhta tha, borrow karta tha padhne ke liye… class mein English mein awwal tha, hamesha sabse ziada marks paata tha class mein. To wo reading ki aadat bana raha usska. Aur haan Abhi likhta bhi tha, English mein hi. Kia likhta tha? Apna daily events likhta tha, har saal ek diary kharidta tha aur har raat ko sone se pehle usska din keise guzra wo likhta tha bina kissi din ko miss kiye. Aur ek special copybook mein usske aur Ruhi ke baare mein likh chuka tha jo apne drawer mein sambhaal kar rakha tha Abhi ne. Uss mein apne bachpan se 12th tak ke sab kuch likha tha, jiss din Ruhi ussko chorr kar Canada gayi aur usske baad ke ek saal ussne kitne dukh mein guzaare wo sab kuch likha tha ussne uss mein. Aaj khud who sab padh ke usske aankhon mein ensso aajata hai. Aaj bhi yaad karta hai ruhi ko kabhi kabhi, Magar ruhi ka chehra ab kaisa hoga usski imagination mein nahin araha tha. Ek tadap, ek tees sa uthta tha usske dil mein Ruhi ke saath unn bitaaye hue dinon ko yaad karte waqt… Ussko itna to pata tha ke ab ussko Ruhi kabhi wapas nahin milega, ussko maloom tha ke Ruhi ki status ab usske saamne bahot hi ooncha ho gaya hai aur wo khud ko Ruhi ke naukar ke bhi kaabil nahin samajhta tha; iss liye Ruhi ko hamesha ke liye bhula dena hi behtar samjha Abhi ne, magar kissi aur ladki ka pyar chahiye to tha ussko, iss liye har ladki mein Ruhi ko hi dhunta phirta tha. Miley kayi ladkiyan, dosti hui, karib gaya Abhi magar ussko unn ladkiyon mein Ruhi jaisi kuch nahin dikha to kadam piche hatta liya Abhi ne….. usska talaash jaari raha phir bhi….

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Ek din ussko ek Coach-Building ki company mein as apprentice/helper Naukri mili. Wahan ziada tar bus banaate the. Bus ki chasis nange aate the engine ke saath, usski body, cover, andar ke seat vaghaira sab bana kar bus ko complete karna hota tha. Ussi ko coach building kaha jata hai. Abhi ko wo kaam dilchasp laga. Jiss din ussne join kiya kayi buss aaye the chasis aur engine ke saath uss par body banana tha. Takriban do mahine mein ek bus complete ban jata tha. Koyi 300 log mulazim the uss company mein. Jab Abhi ne ek completed bus ko dekha to wo heyraan hua ke kaise sirf ek lohe ki chasis par ek pura bus bana diya gaya hai, wo bahot prabhaavit hua aur uss kaam ko hamesha ke liye karne ko socha…. Aur Abhi wahan kaam seekhne laga… metal kaatna, frame banana, welding karna, phir bus ki pure body ke liye aluminium sheets ko hisaab se kaat kar rivet se sab fir metals par chipkana, windows ke glasses lagaana, seat banana aur bus ke andar fit karna, buss ki flooeings par thick wala aluminium chipkana special rivets se, jissko hatode se kayi baar thok thok kar chipkaya jaata tha; kuch luxurious chizon ko bi lagana bus ki kharidne wale ki demand par, yeh sab kuch seekha Abhi ne 3 saal tak, aur ussko sab pakka karna agaya. Paisa kum mil raha tha shuru mein, mahine mein sirf 100 rupay kama raha tha. ek to gharibi ne chaaron taraf se haath feylaya hi hua tha, kuch bhi luxurious kharidne ki aukaat nahin thi… kyunke Abhi ko laga ke uss kaam ko seekh kar wo zaroor aaguey chal kar khud sab kar paega iss liye ussne himmat ki aur 100 rupay maahwaar ki tankhwa mein kaam karta gaya, apprentice tha pehle 3 saal tak phir bhi karta gaya magar 3 saal tak hote hote ussko ek full employee ki salary milne laga.

Unn dinon mobile ka vikaas nahin hua tha. Shukar hai varna unn dinon ek jawaan bina mobile ke kaise jeeta. Cigarette pine laga tha, doston se mil jata tha pine ke liye, tankhwa milta to kuch ghar mein deta, kuch apne liye rakhta phir bhi 100 rupay mein kia rakhta ek mahine ke liye, paise to do din mein hi khatam ho jaate the kyun ke 75 rupees ghar mein diya to 25 bachta tha usske paas aur 25 rupay ko kitne din chala paata halaan ke unn dinon sab kuch itna mehnga nahin tha jitna aaj kal hai….. unn dinon ko araam se ek mahine guzaarne ke liye at least 300 rupay hona chahiye tha….. paidal factory ata jaata tha, ek naya pair of shoes bhi nahin kharid paata tha, baap ki kamaayi ke paise se ghar ka ration chalta tha, electricity bill, water bill vaghaira sab baap pay karta tha upar se aur bhi bhai behnein the…. Bahot tang haalaat the jinn dinon abhi jawaan tha. filmein dekhna bahot passand karta tha, har nayi movie ko first day first show dekhta tha. Unn dinon ticket itna menhga bhi nahin tha to koyi nah koyi jugaad kar leta tha apna ticket paane ke liye, kabhi dost log usski ticket kharid dete the….

Beer peene ki aadat bhi lag gayi doston ke saath, to beer bhi pine laga aur ahiste ahiste daru ki latt bhi lag gayi….magar paise ki kami ki vajah se har roz to nahin peeta tha, mahine mein ek ya do baar enjoy kar leta tha… aur kabhi kissi dost ke paas ziada paisa hota aur wo offer karta to Abhi ko bhi gale mein utaarne ka mauka mil jata tha.

Abhi ke bhi sapne the, har gharib ki tarah wo bhi sochta ke ek din mere paas bhi car hoga, bada ghar hoga, life mein aaguey badhunga, kuch kar dikhaunga, ek din mere saare sapne pure honge…. Aur sabse khaas sapna usska yeh tha ke ussko ek Ruhi jaisi mehbooba mile…. Emotional tha, dil se ziada sochta tha pyar ke baare mein, apne diary mein aksar likhta ke usske liye kahin to bani hogi ek ladki, dharti ke kissi kone mein to hogi wo dilnasheen jisska intezaar Abhi kar raha tha, magar abhi ko jaldi tha, kahan milegi wo agar wo kahin hai bhi to, kab milegi ussko wo? Kia naam hoga usska? Kaisi dikhti hogi? Kia padhi likhi hogi? Kyunke Abhi ko English bolna perfectly ata tha iss liye ussko yeh umeed thi ke uss ladki ko bi English mein likhna aur bola ana chaahiye…. Kyunke abhi dil ki baton ko English mein bade asaani se izhaar karta tha iss liye wo hamesha sochta tha ke apne dil ki baton ko apne mehbooba tak English mein likh kar bayan karega.

Kyunke unn dinon mobile nahin hua karta tha to, aam taur par sabhi chittiyon dwara communicate karte the. Internet ka naam o nishaan bhi nah tha. Haan telephone tha. Television tha, aur TV serials bhi chalta tha. Magar Abhi ke ghar mein TV tha hi nahin. Padosi ke ghar TV dekhne jaate the Abhi ke ghar waale, Abhi bhi chala jaata tha jiss din usske passajida movie ata tha TV par.

Thik jab Abhi ek employer ban gaya uss company mein aur ab usske saath helpers aur apprectice kaam karne lage, Abhi ki salary tab 2,500 rupay maahwaar ho gaya, tabhi company ko bandh hona tha!!

3 salary mil paaya Abhi ko jabse wo employer bana. Bahot khush hua, ghar mein party diya, doston ko bulaya, maa baap, bhai behnon ke liye naye kapde kharide, khud ke liye ache kapde aur joote kharide, Walkman ka zamana tha, jissmein cassete lagaa kar gaane sunte the to Abhi ne ek Walkman bhi kharida aur apne passand ki cassetes kharidta aur suntan rehta…. Pehla tankhwa mila to kariban 2,000 to spend kar diya weise hi. Dusre mahine ki salary mili to apne pita ko 2,000 rupay thama diya usske chote chote karzon ko adaa karne ke liye aur ghar chalaane ki mada ke liye. Jba bhai behen college jaate the unn sabko tagda pocket money de diya Abhi ne.

Aur teesri salary milne ke baad company ka dilwala nikla gaya aur band hogaya…… yeh sab kyun aur kaise hua agle update mein dekhte hein…..

To be continued…..

Wow kia update diya hai bhai. Lagta hai hero ki puri life aap ne pehle update mein hi bata di. Magar ye to buss shuruwaat hai.
Emotional gharib ladka. Pyar ki talaash mein nikla. Naukri ki talaash mein nikla, zindagi ki talash mein nikla.
Manzil mili thik tabhi majhi ne naiya doobo diya. Kia kismat hai.
Dard bhari zindagi hai apne hero ki magar mujhe full vishwas hai aage kuch sahi zaroor hoga.
Bhai bahut mast likha hai aap ne. Behad passand aya mujhe. Lagne laga ke ye story jabardast hone wali hai.
Bahut shukriya Casi bhai.
 

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Update 1 Abhinav Also Known As Abhi

Abhi aur Ruhi ek dusre se sach mein behad pyar karte the, magar kuch eisa hua ke donon ek dusre se hamesha ke liye alag ho gaye, aur aaj Abhi har ek ladki mein Ruhi ko hi dhundta hai, usski adaaein, usski bholapan, usski cuteness, usski wo kamsin dikhna, nazuk, aur komalta yehi sab dhundta rehta tha Abhi kissi bhi ladki mein. Aur haan Ruhi bahot hi khubsurat thi to Abhi koyi bahot khubsurat hi ladki ki talaash mein tha.

Alag kyun hue donon? Mamooli si baat thi. Sab gharib log the, Abhi ke pita kisaan tha, Ruhi ka pita watchman tha. Ek hi muhalle mein rehte the sab…. Magar Ruhi ke pita ki ek din lottery lag gayi. Amir ho gaya, aur khud ko bahut bada aadmi samajhne laga, Abhi ke pita usske liye bahot nicha aur chhota ho gaya tha, Ruhi ke pita ka uthna baithna ab bade amir logon mein hone laga…. Aur wo sab chorr chaar kar Canada chala gaya. Address bhi nahin diya apna aur Ruhi ko sakht mana kiya Abhi se koyi bhi contact karne ke liye…. Phir dhire dhire saalon baad Ruhi Abhi ko bilkool bhool gayi aur Canada ki lifestyle, wahan ke dost, wahan ke log, wahan ke boyfriends sab ho gaye usski…to Abhi ko delete kar diya bilkool ussne to Abhi kia karta? Ussne bhi bhula diya Ruhi ko, magar ladki ussko Ruhi jaisi hi chahiye the apne life mein.

Abhi 20 saal ka hua. Koyi dhang ki Naukri bhi nahin mil raha tha, kabhi yahan to kabhi wahan, kabhi iss company mein to kabhi temporary kaam milta kissi aur company mein…..

Gharibi ke kaaran studies complete nahin kar paaya, baap ke paas utna paisa nahin tha ussko aage padhaane ke liye…. 12th ke baad ek saal bekaar tha phir baap ke saath kheton mein jata aur phir apne dhang ki Naukri dhunta gaya…. Ussko English likhne aur bolne ka bada shaukh tha….. Ek aadat nahin chorra tha ussne wo tha padhna, reading. Bookworm tha. Englsih kitaabein bahot padhta tha, borrow karta tha padhne ke liye… class mein English mein awwal tha, hamesha sabse ziada marks paata tha class mein. To wo reading ki aadat bana raha usska. Aur haan Abhi likhta bhi tha, English mein hi. Kia likhta tha? Apna daily events likhta tha, har saal ek diary kharidta tha aur har raat ko sone se pehle usska din keise guzra wo likhta tha bina kissi din ko miss kiye. Aur ek special copybook mein usske aur Ruhi ke baare mein likh chuka tha jo apne drawer mein sambhaal kar rakha tha Abhi ne. Uss mein apne bachpan se 12th tak ke sab kuch likha tha, jiss din Ruhi ussko chorr kar Canada gayi aur usske baad ke ek saal ussne kitne dukh mein guzaare wo sab kuch likha tha ussne uss mein. Aaj bhi wo sab padh ke usske aankhon mein ensso aajata hai. Aaj bhi yaad karta hai ruhi ko kabhi kabhi, Magar Ruhi ka chehra ab kaisa hoga usski imagination mein nahin araha tha. Ek tadap, ek tees sa uthta tha usske dil mein Ruhi ke saath unn bitaaye hue dinon ko yaad karte waqt… Ussko itna to pata tha ke ab ussko Ruhi kabhi wapas nahin milega, ussko maloom tha ke Ruhi ki status ab usske saamne bahot hi ooncha ho gaya hai aur wo khud ko Ruhi ke naukar ke bhi kaabil nahin samajhta tha; iss liye Ruhi ko hamesha ke liye bhula dena hi behtar samjha Abhi ne, magar kissi aur ladki ka pyar chahiye to tha ussko, iss liye har ladki mein Ruhi ko hi dhunta phirta tha. Miley kayi ladkiyan, dosti hui, karib gaya Abhi magar ussko unn ladkiyon mein Ruhi jaisi kuch nahin dikha to kadam piche hatta liya Abhi ne….. usska talaash jaari raha phir bhi….

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Ek din ussko ek Coach-Building ki company mein as apprentice/helper Naukri mili. Wahan ziada tar bus banaate the. Bus ki chasis nange aate the engine ke saath, usski body, cover, andar ke seat vaghaira sab bana kar bus ko complete karna hota tha. Ussi ko coach building kaha jata hai. Abhi ko wo kaam dilchasp laga. Jiss din ussne join kiya kayi buss aaye the chasis aur engine ke saath uss par body banana tha. Takriban do mahine mein ek bus complete ban jata tha. Koyi 300 log mulazim the uss company mein. Jab Abhi ne ek completed bus ko dekha to wo heyraan hua ke kaise sirf ek lohe ki chasis par ek pura bus bana diya gaya hai, wo bahot prabhaavit hua aur uss kaam ko hamesha ke liye karne ko socha…. Aur Abhi wahan kaam seekhne laga… metal kaatna, frame banana, welding karna, phir bus ki pure body ke liye aluminium sheets ko hisaab se kaat kar rivet se sab fir metals par chipkana, windows ke glasses lagaana, seat banana aur bus ke andar fit karna, buss ki floorings par thick wala aluminium chipkana special rivets se, jissko hatode se kayi baar thok thok kar chipkaya jaata tha; kuch luxurious chizon ko bi lagana bus ki kharidne wale ki demand par, yeh sab kuch seekha Abhi ne 3 saal tak, aur ussko sab pakka karna agaya. Paisa kum mil raha tha shuru mein, mahine mein sirf 100 rupay kama raha tha. Ek to gharibi ne chaaron taraf se haath feylaya hi hua tha, kuch bhi luxurious kharidne ki aukaat nahin thi… kyunke Abhi ko laga ke uss kaam ko seekh kar wo zaroor aaguey chal kar khud sab kar paega iss liye ussne himmat ki aur 100 rupay maahwaar ki tankhwa mein kaam karta gaya, apprentice tha pehle 3 saal tak phir bhi karta gaya magar 3 saal tak hote hote ussko ek full employee ki salary milne laga.

Unn dinon mobile ka vikaas nahin hua tha. Shukar hai varna unn dinon ek jawaan bina mobile ke kaise jeeta. Cigarette pine laga tha, doston se mil jata tha pine ke liye, tankhwa milta to kuch ghar mein deta, kuch apne liye rakhta phir bhi 100 rupay mein kia rakhta ek mahine ke liye, paise to do din mein hi khatam ho jaate the kyun ke 75 rupees ghar mein diya to 25 bachta tha usske paas aur 25 rupay ko kitne din chala paata halaan ke unn dinon sab kuch itna mehnga nahin tha jitna aaj kal hai….. unn dinon ko araam se ek mahine guzaarne ke liye at least 300 rupay hona chahiye tha….. paidal factory ata jaata tha, ek naya pair of shoes bhi nahin kharid paata tha, baap ki kamaayi ke paise se ghar ka ration chalta tha, electricity bill, water bill vaghaira sab baap pay karta tha upar se aur bhi bhai behnein the…. Bahot tang haalaat the jinn dinon abhi jawaan tha. filmein dekhna bahot passand karta tha, har nayi movie ko first day first show dekhta tha. Unn dinon ticket itna menhga bhi nahin tha to koyi nah koyi jugaad kar leta tha apna ticket paane ke liye, kabhi dost log usski ticket kharid dete the….

Beer peene ki aadat bhi lag gayi doston ke saath, to beer bhi pine laga aur ahiste ahiste daru ki latt bhi lag gayi….magar paise ki kami ki vajah se har roz to nahin peeta tha, mahine mein ek ya do baar enjoy kar leta tha… aur kabhi kissi dost ke paas ziada paisa hota aur wo offer karta to Abhi ko bhi gale mein utaarne ka mauka mil jata tha.

Abhi ke bhi sapne the, har gharib ki tarah wo bhi sochta ke ek din mere paas bhi car hogi, bada ghar hoga, life mein aaguey badhunga, kuch kar dikhaunga, ek din mere saare sapne pure honge…. Aur sabse khaas sapna usska yeh tha ke ussko ek Ruhi jaisi mehbooba mile…. Emotional tha, dil se ziada sochta tha pyar ke baare mein, apne diary mein aksar likhta ke usske liye kahin to bani hogi ek ladki, dharti ke kissi kone mein to hogi wo dilnasheen jisska intezaar Abhi kar raha tha, magar abhi ko jaldi tha, kahan milegi wo agar wo kahin hai bhi to, kab milegi ussko wo? Kia naam hoga usska? Kaisi dikhti hogi? Kia padhi likhi hogi? Kyunke Abhi ko English bolna perfectly ata tha iss liye ussko yeh umeed thi ke uss ladki ko bi English mein likhna aur bola ana chaahiye…. Kyunke abhi dil ki baton ko English mein bade asaani se izhaar karta tha iss liye wo hamesha sochta tha ke apne dil ki baton ko apne mehbooba tak English mein likh kar bayaan karega.

Kyunke unn dinon mobile nahin hua karta tha to, aam taur par sabhi chittiyon dwara communicate karte the. Internet ka naam o nishaan bhi nahin tha. Haan telephone tha. Television tha, aur TV serials bhi chalta tha. Magar Abhi ke ghar mein TV tha hi nahin. Padosi ke ghar TV dekhne jaate the Abhi ke ghar waale, Abhi bhi chala jaata tha jiss din usske passanjida movie ata tha TV par.

Thik jab Abhi ek employer ban gaya uss company mein aur ab usske saath helpers aur apprectice kaam karne lage, Abhi ki salary tab 2,500 rupay maahwaar ho gaya, tabhi company ko bandh hona tha!!

3 salary mil paaya Abhi ko jabse wo employer bana. Bahot khush hua, ghar mein party diya, doston ko bulaya, maa baap, bhai behnon ke liye naye kapde kharide, khud ke liye ache kapde aur joote kharide, Walkman ka zamana tha, jissmein cassete lagaa kar gaane sunte the to Abhi ne ek Walkman bhi kharida aur apne passand ki cassetes kharidta aur sunta rehta…. Pehla tankhwa mila to kariban 2,000 to spend kar diya weise hi. Dusre mahine ki salary mili to apne pita ko 2,000 rupay thama diya usske chote chote karzon ko adaa karne ke liye aur ghar chalaane ki madad ke liye. Jo bhai behen college jaate the unn sabko tagda pocket money de diya Abhi ne.

Aur teesri salary milne ke baad company ka diwala nikal gaya aur band hogaya…… yeh sab kyun aur kaise hua agle update mein dekhte hein…..

To be continued…..

Bahut hi khubsurat update hai bhai. Ek garib naujawan jiss ne apne pyar ko kho diya aur jo jiwan ki raah mein kadab badha hi raha tha k achanak ek jabardast toofaan aa gaya. Bechara Abhi. Ab kia karega wo? Kaam itni mushkil se 3 saal mein seekha aur jab acha tankhwa milne laga to company bandh ho gayi? Kia musibat hai yaar. Gharib k hi jiwan mein ye sab hona tha kia?
Aap ne bahut dilchasp likha hai Abhi k baare mein bhai. Sab kuch bahut clear hai. Ussko pyar ki talaash hai magar jiss ladki ko chahta hai ussi ki chabi chahiye ussko apni mehbooba mein. Kia wo milegi ussko?
Agle update ka besabri se intejar rahega bhai. Te first update mujhko bahut passand aya.
Bus ki coach building ko aap ne jiss bariki se likha hai kamaal ka hai. Mujhe khud ye sab pata nahin tha. Casi bhai aap jiss vishay mein bhi likhte hi nah buss kamaal ka likhte ho. Mujhe yaad hai ek darinde se pyar wale story mein aap be Samir ki commando ki jo training likha tha wo itna detail mein tha ke hum sab ko laga tha ke aap ne jarur uss training mein bhaag liye honge...... you are an awesome writer bhai. Hats off.
 

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paise k chakachaundh ke aage sachhe pyar ka mol fika pad gaya...
toh...... ruhi bewafa nikli :D
par yeh pyaar ka maara abhinav aaj bhi ushi ruhi ko dhundhe hain dushri KHUBSURAT ladkiyon k andar... :D special demand, english jan ne wali okey...
Ab in janab ko koun samjhaye ki khubsurat hona hi sab kuch nahin hain...


Bechara abhinav .... musibato aur dukho ka pahaad har waqt mandrata rahta hain iske sar ke upor .. pyaar toh chin liya ab naukri bhi... ....are kuch toh raham karte bechare ke upor......
kul milake abhi ke halat bahot hi dayaniya aur naazuk hain.... casi sir kuch toh kijiye plz :pray:

Brilliant update with awesome writing skill...... abhi k life ke har ek pehlu ko jish tarike se explain kiye hain woh atulaniya hain . dairy se leke jeevan sangram tak..... :bow::bow::bow::bow::bow:
 

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Update 1 Abhinav Also Known As Abhi

Abhi aur Ruhi ek dusre se sach mein behad pyar karte the, magar kuch eisa hua ke donon ek dusre se hamesha ke liye alag ho gaye, aur aaj Abhi har ek ladki mein Ruhi ko hi dhundta hai, usski adaaein, usski bholapan, usski cuteness, usski wo kamsin dikhna, nazuk, aur komalta yehi sab dhundta rehta tha Abhi kissi bhi ladki mein. Aur haan Ruhi bahot hi khubsurat thi to Abhi koyi bahot khubsurat hi ladki ki talaash mein tha.

Alag kyun hue donon? Mamooli si baat thi. Sab gharib log the, Abhi ke pita kisaan tha, Ruhi ka pita watchman tha. Ek hi muhalle mein rehte the sab…. Magar Ruhi ke pita ki ek din lottery lag gayi. Amir ho gaya, aur khud ko bahut bada aadmi samajhne laga, Abhi ke pita usske liye bahot nicha aur chhota ho gaya tha, Ruhi ke pita ka uthna baithna ab bade amir logon mein hone laga…. Aur wo sab chorr chaar kar Canada chala gaya. Address bhi nahin diya apna aur Ruhi ko sakht mana kiya Abhi se koyi bhi contact karne ke liye…. Phir dhire dhire saalon baad Ruhi Abhi ko bilkool bhool gayi aur Canada ki lifestyle, wahan ke dost, wahan ke log, wahan ke boyfriends sab ho gaye usski…to Abhi ko delete kar diya bilkool ussne to Abhi kia karta? Ussne bhi bhula diya Ruhi ko, magar ladki ussko Ruhi jaisi hi chahiye the apne life mein.

Abhi 20 saal ka hua. Koyi dhang ki Naukri bhi nahin mil raha tha, kabhi yahan to kabhi wahan, kabhi iss company mein to kabhi temporary kaam milta kissi aur company mein…..

Gharibi ke kaaran studies complete nahin kar paaya, baap ke paas utna paisa nahin tha ussko aage padhaane ke liye…. 12th ke baad ek saal bekaar tha phir baap ke saath kheton mein jata aur phir apne dhang ki Naukri dhunta gaya…. Ussko English likhne aur bolne ka bada shaukh tha….. Ek aadat nahin chorra tha ussne wo tha padhna, reading. Bookworm tha. Englsih kitaabein bahot padhta tha, borrow karta tha padhne ke liye… class mein English mein awwal tha, hamesha sabse ziada marks paata tha class mein. To wo reading ki aadat bana raha usska. Aur haan Abhi likhta bhi tha, English mein hi. Kia likhta tha? Apna daily events likhta tha, har saal ek diary kharidta tha aur har raat ko sone se pehle usska din keise guzra wo likhta tha bina kissi din ko miss kiye. Aur ek special copybook mein usske aur Ruhi ke baare mein likh chuka tha jo apne drawer mein sambhaal kar rakha tha Abhi ne. Uss mein apne bachpan se 12th tak ke sab kuch likha tha, jiss din Ruhi ussko chorr kar Canada gayi aur usske baad ke ek saal ussne kitne dukh mein guzaare wo sab kuch likha tha ussne uss mein. Aaj bhi wo sab padh ke usske aankhon mein ensso aajata hai. Aaj bhi yaad karta hai ruhi ko kabhi kabhi, Magar Ruhi ka chehra ab kaisa hoga usski imagination mein nahin araha tha. Ek tadap, ek tees sa uthta tha usske dil mein Ruhi ke saath unn bitaaye hue dinon ko yaad karte waqt… Ussko itna to pata tha ke ab ussko Ruhi kabhi wapas nahin milega, ussko maloom tha ke Ruhi ki status ab usske saamne bahot hi ooncha ho gaya hai aur wo khud ko Ruhi ke naukar ke bhi kaabil nahin samajhta tha; iss liye Ruhi ko hamesha ke liye bhula dena hi behtar samjha Abhi ne, magar kissi aur ladki ka pyar chahiye to tha ussko, iss liye har ladki mein Ruhi ko hi dhunta phirta tha. Miley kayi ladkiyan, dosti hui, karib gaya Abhi magar ussko unn ladkiyon mein Ruhi jaisi kuch nahin dikha to kadam piche hatta liya Abhi ne….. usska talaash jaari raha phir bhi….

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Ek din ussko ek Coach-Building ki company mein as apprentice/helper Naukri mili. Wahan ziada tar bus banaate the. Bus ki chasis nange aate the engine ke saath, usski body, cover, andar ke seat vaghaira sab bana kar bus ko complete karna hota tha. Ussi ko coach building kaha jata hai. Abhi ko wo kaam dilchasp laga. Jiss din ussne join kiya kayi buss aaye the chasis aur engine ke saath uss par body banana tha. Takriban do mahine mein ek bus complete ban jata tha. Koyi 300 log mulazim the uss company mein. Jab Abhi ne ek completed bus ko dekha to wo heyraan hua ke kaise sirf ek lohe ki chasis par ek pura bus bana diya gaya hai, wo bahot prabhaavit hua aur uss kaam ko hamesha ke liye karne ko socha…. Aur Abhi wahan kaam seekhne laga… metal kaatna, frame banana, welding karna, phir bus ki pure body ke liye aluminium sheets ko hisaab se kaat kar rivet se sab fir metals par chipkana, windows ke glasses lagaana, seat banana aur bus ke andar fit karna, buss ki floorings par thick wala aluminium chipkana special rivets se, jissko hatode se kayi baar thok thok kar chipkaya jaata tha; kuch luxurious chizon ko bi lagana bus ki kharidne wale ki demand par, yeh sab kuch seekha Abhi ne 3 saal tak, aur ussko sab pakka karna agaya. Paisa kum mil raha tha shuru mein, mahine mein sirf 100 rupay kama raha tha. Ek to gharibi ne chaaron taraf se haath feylaya hi hua tha, kuch bhi luxurious kharidne ki aukaat nahin thi… kyunke Abhi ko laga ke uss kaam ko seekh kar wo zaroor aaguey chal kar khud sab kar paega iss liye ussne himmat ki aur 100 rupay maahwaar ki tankhwa mein kaam karta gaya, apprentice tha pehle 3 saal tak phir bhi karta gaya magar 3 saal tak hote hote ussko ek full employee ki salary milne laga.

Unn dinon mobile ka vikaas nahin hua tha. Shukar hai varna unn dinon ek jawaan bina mobile ke kaise jeeta. Cigarette pine laga tha, doston se mil jata tha pine ke liye, tankhwa milta to kuch ghar mein deta, kuch apne liye rakhta phir bhi 100 rupay mein kia rakhta ek mahine ke liye, paise to do din mein hi khatam ho jaate the kyun ke 75 rupees ghar mein diya to 25 bachta tha usske paas aur 25 rupay ko kitne din chala paata halaan ke unn dinon sab kuch itna mehnga nahin tha jitna aaj kal hai….. unn dinon ko araam se ek mahine guzaarne ke liye at least 300 rupay hona chahiye tha….. paidal factory ata jaata tha, ek naya pair of shoes bhi nahin kharid paata tha, baap ki kamaayi ke paise se ghar ka ration chalta tha, electricity bill, water bill vaghaira sab baap pay karta tha upar se aur bhi bhai behnein the…. Bahot tang haalaat the jinn dinon abhi jawaan tha. filmein dekhna bahot passand karta tha, har nayi movie ko first day first show dekhta tha. Unn dinon ticket itna menhga bhi nahin tha to koyi nah koyi jugaad kar leta tha apna ticket paane ke liye, kabhi dost log usski ticket kharid dete the….

Beer peene ki aadat bhi lag gayi doston ke saath, to beer bhi pine laga aur ahiste ahiste daru ki latt bhi lag gayi….magar paise ki kami ki vajah se har roz to nahin peeta tha, mahine mein ek ya do baar enjoy kar leta tha… aur kabhi kissi dost ke paas ziada paisa hota aur wo offer karta to Abhi ko bhi gale mein utaarne ka mauka mil jata tha.

Abhi ke bhi sapne the, har gharib ki tarah wo bhi sochta ke ek din mere paas bhi car hogi, bada ghar hoga, life mein aaguey badhunga, kuch kar dikhaunga, ek din mere saare sapne pure honge…. Aur sabse khaas sapna usska yeh tha ke ussko ek Ruhi jaisi mehbooba mile…. Emotional tha, dil se ziada sochta tha pyar ke baare mein, apne diary mein aksar likhta ke usske liye kahin to bani hogi ek ladki, dharti ke kissi kone mein to hogi wo dilnasheen jisska intezaar Abhi kar raha tha, magar abhi ko jaldi tha, kahan milegi wo agar wo kahin hai bhi to, kab milegi ussko wo? Kia naam hoga usska? Kaisi dikhti hogi? Kia padhi likhi hogi? Kyunke Abhi ko English bolna perfectly ata tha iss liye ussko yeh umeed thi ke uss ladki ko bi English mein likhna aur bola ana chaahiye…. Kyunke abhi dil ki baton ko English mein bade asaani se izhaar karta tha iss liye wo hamesha sochta tha ke apne dil ki baton ko apne mehbooba tak English mein likh kar bayaan karega.

Kyunke unn dinon mobile nahin hua karta tha to, aam taur par sabhi chittiyon dwara communicate karte the. Internet ka naam o nishaan bhi nahin tha. Haan telephone tha. Television tha, aur TV serials bhi chalta tha. Magar Abhi ke ghar mein TV tha hi nahin. Padosi ke ghar TV dekhne jaate the Abhi ke ghar waale, Abhi bhi chala jaata tha jiss din usske passanjida movie ata tha TV par.

Thik jab Abhi ek employer ban gaya uss company mein aur ab usske saath helpers aur apprectice kaam karne lage, Abhi ki salary tab 2,500 rupay maahwaar ho gaya, tabhi company ko bandh hona tha!!

3 salary mil paaya Abhi ko jabse wo employer bana. Bahot khush hua, ghar mein party diya, doston ko bulaya, maa baap, bhai behnon ke liye naye kapde kharide, khud ke liye ache kapde aur joote kharide, Walkman ka zamana tha, jissmein cassete lagaa kar gaane sunte the to Abhi ne ek Walkman bhi kharida aur apne passand ki cassetes kharidta aur sunta rehta…. Pehla tankhwa mila to kariban 2,000 to spend kar diya weise hi. Dusre mahine ki salary mili to apne pita ko 2,000 rupay thama diya usske chote chote karzon ko adaa karne ke liye aur ghar chalaane ki madad ke liye. Jo bhai behen college jaate the unn sabko tagda pocket money de diya Abhi ne.

Aur teesri salary milne ke baad company ka diwala nikal gaya aur band hogaya…… yeh sab kyun aur kaise hua agle update mein dekhte hein…..

To be continued…..

Behtareen first update casi ji. Abhi ki life mein shuru se hi khathinaiyan hue hein jisski sindagi aise mushkilon se start hote hein weh log life mein aage badhkar kaamyaab hote hein.... kuch life mein aisa dekhi hai main ne. To umeed hai ke Abhi ki life mein bhi tabdiliyan aaye.
Apna pehla pyar to kho diya ussne, to kia wo pyar wapas milega ya kissi aur mein ussko usski Ruhi milegi?
Aap ne behtareen likha hai.
Jiss tarah se aap ne bus banaane ki process dikhaayi hai taarife kabil hai. Update bahut acha laga mujhe.
Abhi to shiruwaat hai. Dekhte hai aage kia hota hai. Thanks Casi for sticking to your words. :adore:
 
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