Romance Usski Gali Mein Jaana Chorr Diya (Exclusively For XForum) COMPLETED

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Update 14 Did the Quarrel End? How?​

Subha Abhi late utha. Ziada peene ki vajah se sota raha. 8.30 ko bus mein tha kaam ke liye jaane ko. Yeh pehli baar hua tha jiss din se wahan kaam kar raha tha.

Pahunchne se pehle bus mein jaate waqt Abhi of course sirf Ruhi ke baare mein hi soch raha tha aur kal ke hue wakiye ko…. Abhi ab yeh sochne laga tha ke subha ko sabse pehle kaam par reach hone wala aaj 8.30 ko reach nahin hua hai, aur socha ke Ruhi kia soch rahi hogi 6 baje se 8.30 tak jab ussko wahan nahin dekha hoga to? Abhi sochne laga,

“Kia Ruhi mujhko dhund rahi hogi? 6 baje se meri raah dekh rahi hogi nah? kissi se puchne aayi hogi ke main kyun nahin aya hoon? Are yaar kahin wo yeh nah soche ke iss liye ke ussne kaha tha ke main nahin aunga to bala tal gayi usski; iss liye main nahin aya hoon…..”

Ab Abhi ke dil mein phir se wo baat aayi ke Ruhi ne uss se kaha tha ke usske liye bala tal jaegi agar ussne wahan aana band kar diya to…. Yeh sochne ke baad Abhi ko bus se utarne ka mann nahin kiya, socha ke ab kaam par jaaye hi nahin. Wo abhi tak hurt feel kar raha tha uss baat ko soch kar…. Aur ek pal ke liye Abhi ne socha ke hamesha ke liye issi waqt se wahan jaana band karde aur uss kaam ko chorr de! Tab hamesha ke liye saare lafde khatam!!

Aisa soch to liya dil mein Abhi ne magar wahan pahuchne par bus se uss bus stop par hi utra jahan utarna tha, yaane Ruhi ke ghar ke paas wale bus stop par. 9 bajne wala tha aur tab abhi uss aangan mein chalte hue nazar aya. Saeed aur Vinay bus ke uss side par the jiss taraf wo bada darkhat tha, aur Tony bus ke paas tap one ke paas kuch kar raha tha, abhi washroom pahuncha to Tony usske paas gaya aur kaha,

“are yaar main ne socha tu nahin aega, Saeed ghussa kar raha tha aur bura bhala bhi kehne laga tha tujhe!”

Abhi ne kapde badalte hue aur Ruhi ke kitchen ke andar dekhte hue kaha,

“bhai goli maar Saeed ko aur yeh bata Ruhi nazar aayi ke nahin yaar?!”

Tony: “Abhi wo subha se kayi chakkar laga chuki hai, rone wali surat banaayi hui hai, khud mujhse kayi baar puch chuki ke tu kidhar hai aur usski maa aayi Saeed se puchne ke tu kyun nahin aya aaj!”

Abhi ne shirt pehente hue kaha,

“Really? That’s nice yaar, that’s very good news, magar ab kidhar hai wo ladki mujhe paagal banaane wali?!”

Tony: “Tujhko andar se zaroor dekh rahi hogi aur muskura rahi hogi, tere expression ko read kar rahi hogi ke tu abhi tak ghussa to nahin, ussko pata hoga ke kal tere liye wo saamne nahin aayi to tu ghussa hoga, andar muskuraate hue tujhe dekh rahi hogi. Bahot hi khush ho rahi hogi ke tu agaya hai. Dekna abhi zaroor tere saamne aegi.”

Abhi: “Achah? To bala kaise talegi agar main aata hi raha to?! Ho sakta hai ke yeh bhi keh rahi hogi ke yeh bala phir agaya!”

Tony? “Ab chorr yaar, abhi tak tu uss baat ko dil mein liye baitha hai? Wo tujhse bahot pyar karti hai tujhe paagalon ki tarah dhund rahi thi!”

Abhi: "terrace par jhadu laga diya ussne, poncha laga diya kia?”

Tony: “nahin kuch nahin kiya sirf teri raah dekh rahi hai subha se, usski nazrein sirf main road par aur aate hue bus par rehti thi subha se!

Abhi: “yaar tony to ab kyun nahin dikh rahi hai? Mere saamne aa nahin sakti kia? Marr gayi kia wo?!”

Tony: “are yaar itna ghussa kyun karne laga achaanak tu? Wo sun legi yaar. Kamaal hai udhar Saeed ghussa kar raha hai idhar tu kia ho gaya hai? Kissi ki nazar to nahin lagi hein kahin?!”

Abhi: “bhaad mein jaaye saeed kaun si badi toap hai wo, chal karte hein jo kaam karna hai…..”

Jab Abhi aur Tony bus ke taraf jaane lage to Abhi ko Ruhi ki blue dress ki ek choti si jhalak dikhaayi diya lounge mein hawa se parde ke hillne ki vajah se. Matlab Abhi ko pata tha ke Ruhi ussko andar se dekh rahi thi.

Aur 9.15 ko Abhi ne kaam karna start kiya aur Saeed shuru hua;

“kia hai abhi? Aise kaam kiya jaata hai kia? Subha ke 9.15 ko kaam shuru hota hai kia?

Ek to Abhi pehle se ghusse mein tha Ruhi ki kal wale vyohaar ko lekar aur ab Saeed uss par chilla raha tha to Abhi ne bhi ghusse mein aur oonchi awaaz mein Saeed ko jawaab diya.

Donon mei tutu main main hone laga aur tension badhne lage…. Awaaz door tak sunaayi dene lage donon ke aur dhadpdaate hue Mehboob apne ghar se baahar aya aur donon ko shaant karne ki koshish kiye…. Saeed Abhi ko suna raha tha aur Abhi saeed ko…. Saeed ne ek baar kaha,

“yahan herogiri karne nahin aate hein kaam karne aate hein, Mehboob ne humko kaam karne ke liye paise diye hein flirt karne ke liye nahin, kia karta rehta hai tu kaam karne ke waqt, kia karne jata hai wahan uss washing stone ke paas? Kaam wahan hota hai kia?”

Ruhi aur usski maa sab sun rahe the, aur Ruhi ne apni maa ke chehre mein dekha, udaasi aur darr ke saath….. Ruhi ne kabhi nahin socha tha ke kuch aisa hoga….

Abhi ne Saeed ki uss baat ka yeh jawaab diya chilaate hue,

“kyun be tere gaand mein kyun aag lagta hai agar main wahan jata hoon to? Kaam to pura karta hoon tujh se bahut ziada kaam main ne kiya hai iss bus mein dikhaun tujhko, naap lagayega tum ne kitna kaam kiya aur main ne kitna?”

Mehboob ko pata tha ke Abhi ne bahut ziada kaam kiya hua hai to ussne Abhi ke kaandhe par haath rakh kar ussko ek taraf karne ki koshish kiya, magar Saeed ne bhi oonchi awaaz mein kaha ke ussko bataaye ke kaise Abhi ne ziada kaam kiya hai, to ussi tone mein, ghusse mein Abhi ne kaha,

“yeh dekh shuruwaat yahan se kiya tha main ne front side, jo back side se 50 gunah ziada complicated aur mushkil hai phir bhi tujh se pehle main ne right panel ko banana shuru kar diya aur tu back side par hi laga hua tha, jab main ne front side aur right panel pura kar diya tab jahan tujhko left panel pura karna tha wo bhi uss mein aadha se ziada main ne complete kiya, main ne upar ke kaam bhi aadha se ziada kar diya, to tere mukable 100 gunah ziada kaam kiya hai main ne iss bus mein sala mujhko 2 ghante ki lateness ke liye sunata hai? Main tujhko sunaunga to tere adhe paise mere hone chahiye, suna tum ne mujhe ghussa mat dila varna sab chorr chaar ke chala jaunga yahan se ek to bala banke mandra raha hoon kissi ke liye, nikal hi jaun to achchah hai!”

Abhi itna ghusse mein tha ke Mehboob ussko sambhal nahin paa raha tha, Ruhi aur usski maa terrace par nikal gaye the sab dekhte hue, to Mehboob ko laga ke sirf Ruhi Abhi ko shant kar paegi, to Mehboob ne Ruhi ke maa ke taraf dekha aur ishaare se ussko kuch kaha, aur Ruhi ki maa aayi Abhi ke bazu pakra aur apne terrace ke taraf lejaate hue ahiste aur araam se kaha,

“Idhar chalo aao aao ssshhhh ghussa thuk do aao nah dekho Ruhi tumko bula rahi hai aao nah beta, aisa nahin karte, thand rakho beta…” tab tak chalte hue Ruhi ghar ke piche wale hisse mein jaa chuki thi aur apni maa ko Abhi ko apne saat laate hue dekh rahi thi….

Wo hissa ghar ke piche tha washing stone se thoda door, Ruhi ki aankhe bhar aayi thi kyunke ussne sab suna ke Abhi ne kuch der pehle kaha ke kissi ke liye wo bala ban chuka hai to behtar hai ke sab chorr chaar kar chala jaaye… ruhi apni kahi hui baat par bahot pachta rahi thi aur jaise Ruhi ki maa Abhi ko uss kone mein laaya Ruhi Abhi se lipat gayi rote hue aur Abhi ke peeth par apne komal kalaayi ko ferrte hue Ruhi kayi baar rote hue kehti gayi,

“I am sorry, I am very very sorry, please forgive me, will you? Mujhe maaf kardo Abhi mujhse ghalati hui, mujhe kal wo nahin kehna chahiye tha I am so sorry Abhi!”

Abhi ka jism shake kar raha tha ghusse se, aur jitna zor se Ruhi ne ussko apne baahon mein jakra tha Ruhi usske jism ki wo thartharaahat feel kar rahi thi…. Aur Ruhi khud kaampne lagi rote hue aur maafi maangte hue. Ruhi ki maa sab dekh rahi thi aur apni beti ko rote hue dekh kar wo khud apni aankh se aansoo ponch rahi thi.

Abhi jaise hosh mein nahin tha uss waqt. Usske samajh mein nahin araha tha ke kia ho raha hai…. Ussko laga ke sab ek sapna tha… aur ahiste ahiste Abhi ne apne baahon ko uthaya aur Ruhi ke kaandhe par kiya, Ruhi ka badan pura Abhi ke jism se chipki hui thi uss waqt, Aur oonche kad ke hone ke kaaran Ruhi ka sar Abhi ke chaati par tha aur wo Abhi ke dil ki dhadkanon ko saaf sun rahi thi. Ruhi ke donon baahein Abhi ke baazu ke niche se hokar ussko jakre hue the…. Ruhi ke aankhon se ab bhi ashk jaari the, aur jis pal ko Ruhi ne Abhi ke haathon ko apne kaandhe par feel kiya tab usski aankon ke aansoo ruke aur usski maa wahan se wapas terrace par chali gayi aur Mehboob ne uss se kaha ke Abhi ko kuch der udhar hi rehne de taake wo shant ho sake. Ruhi ki maa tab Mehboob aur saeed se baatein karne lage jaanne ke liye ke jhagda kyun aur kaise shuru hua. Dhire se Mehboob ne Ruhi ki maa se kaha ke iss mein Abhi ki ghalati nahin hai ussne sach mein saeed se bahot ziada kaam kiya hai bus mein.

Udhar jab Abhi ke haath Ruhi ke kaandhe par gaye to Ruhi ne apne chehre ko usske chhati par sattaye hue hi kaha,

“Aap mujhe apne baahon mein bharna chahte the nah? Lo bhar liya aapne mujhe apne baahon mein ab khush?!”

Abhi ki saansein tez chal rahe the aur wo thoda hannff raha tha, to Ruhi ne ussi position mein kaha,

“Baap re itna ghussa uff mujhe nahin pata tha aap itne ghusse wale ho, aap to bahot cool aur sweet dikhte the itne dinon se aap ko sambhaalna bada mushkil hai!”

Abhi kuch nahin bol raha tha, jaise ab bhi kisi shock mein dooba hua tha, to Ruhi ko sar upar utha kar Abhi ke chehre mein dekhna pada, aur dekha ke abhi khoya hua hai to kaha,

“Aap ka ghussa mujh par tha nah? Mere wale ghussa aap nikaal rahe the nah? kal se ghussa paal rahe the aap mere khilaaf Abhi? Main nahin dikhi thi iss liye? Main ne saare parde khinch liye the iss liye? Main ne bala tal jaegi kaha tha iss liye? Main ne to buss mazaak kiya tha Abhi, I did not mean it at all! I am so sorry ke mere munh se wo shabd nikal gaye the Abhi. Main kal hi aap ko sorry kehne ke liye wait kar rahi thi lunch time ke waqt magar aap aaye hi nahin main wait karti rahi, to mera bhi mood off hua issi liye main shaam ko nahin nikli thi magar main aap ko andar se jaate hue dekh rahi thi Abhi. Pleaae forgive me nah!”

Abhi ne ek bahot lambi sanns liye jiss se Ruhi ki chaati aage badhi phir piche hue Abhi se chipki hui jo thi. Do jism ek jaan lag rahe the donon uss waqt.

Ruhi ne phir usske seene par apne gaal ko satta diya aur kaha,

“Aap mere liye bala kaise ho sakte ho bhala? Main to chahungi ke aap umar bhar har roz yahan aao aur main aap ko issi aangan mein dekhun zindagi bhar Abhi! …. Abhi aaj aap meri vajah se late aaye? Bataiye nah, kia aap nahin aane wale the aaj? Meri kal ki kahi hui baat ki vajah se? Pata hai, main aaj subha 4 baje se uth chuki hoon aur aap ki raah dekhti rahi dekhti rahi, socha 6 bajne se pehle ajaoge aaj kyunke kal shaam ko aap ne mujhe nahin dekha tha nah, iss liye main barpaayi karna chahti thi Abhi magar aap aaye hi nahin…. Aap ko pata hai mujh par kia beet rahi thi jab sab log aagaye aur aap nain aaye? Pata hai main ne kitna dhunda aap ko? Main ro pari thi Abhi, main apni maa se saari baatein kehte hue fut fut kar ro rahi thi, maa ko bheja tha saeed ji se puchne ke aap kyun nahin aaye ho, mujhe darr tha ke kahin meri kahi hui baat ki vajah se aap ab kabhi bhi nahin awo…. Main kia karti tab? Aap kyun late aaye aaj abhi? Boliye nah, mujhe sazaa dene ke liye hmm? You were punishing me?!”

Ruhi ki meethi awaaz mein tadap thi, aaj pehli baar jiss awaaz ko sunne ke liye Abhi tarasta tha uss awaaz mein itna tadap mehsoos kar raha tha.

Tab Abhi ne apna sar niche jhukaya, Ruhi ki thudi ko apne ungliyon se apne chehre ke taraf uthaya, Ruhi ke aankhon ne Abhi ke ankhon mein dekha, Abhi ne jhuk kar apne honton ko Ruhi ke honton par rakh diya…. Ruhi apne toes par khadi hui aur Abhi ko kiss karne lagi ziada zoron se Abhi ko jakarte hue….

Abhi ne life mein kabhi kissi ladki ko kiss nahin kiya tha, usske samajh mein nahin araha tha ke kaise kia karein, sirf apne honth ko Ruhi ke honton se takraya tha ussne, magar Ruhi ussko kiss kar rahi thi, Abhi ko ussi pal laga ke ussko kiss karna to ata hi nahin magar Ruhi ko kiss karna ata tha!!

To be continued…. (2450 Words)

Ah Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha
buri nazar tera muh Kala......joh Saeed, abhi & ruhi ke bich ke relationship ko leke jal bhun rahan tha. wahin Saeed jaane anjane mein hi ruhi ko abhi ke jhole mein I mean to say baanho mein daal diya.... Urri baba yeh dono toh kiss karne..... nahin nahin sirf ruhi hi kiss kar rahin hain... abhinav toh thehra in mamlo mein anadi ..... Saeed ko bhi bhi yeh live show dekhna chahiye tha..... Bichara

Hmm.... Casi sir.. Main kah rahin thi naa bhari gadbari hain ... dekh lijiye...
RUHI KO PEHLE SE HI KISS KARNI AATI HAI.....
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update casi sir.... Great going

 

[Naina]

Update 15 The Calm Is Back​

Abhi ne life mein kabhi kissi ladki ko kiss nahin kiya tha, usske samajh mein nahin araha tha ke kaise kia karein, sirf apne honth ko Ruhi ke honton se takraya tha ussne, magar Ruhi ussko kiss kar rahi thi, Abhi ko ussi pal laga ke ussko kiss karna to ata hi nahin magar Ruhi ko kiss karna ata tha!!

Ab aaguey….

Ruhi ki chaati Abhi ke seene par dabbe hue the, usski boobs chipke hue the Abhi ke chest par, aur Ruhi ne Abhi ko bade zor se jakra hua tha. Abhi ke saans lene se usski boobs jaise push ho rahe the, Abhi ne sar jhukaate hue usski thodi se Mulayam cleavage dekha, kitni mulaayam tha wo hissa jo Abhi ko nazar arahe the aaj pehli baar wo bhi apni khud ki baahon mein…. Ruhi ko jaise feel hua ke Abhi usski cleavage dekh raha tha, to halke se nazar ko upar kiya Abhi ke chehre mein dekhne ke liye to paaya ke haan Abhi ke aankeh usski seene ke andar hi dekh rahe the to Ruhi ne ek saans lete hue kaha,

“Aap ne nahin bataya ke aaj aap kyun late aaye abhi? Kia wo mujhko punish karne ke liye tha?”

Abhi ne dhire se gehri awaaz mein kaha,

“Tumhara dress maila ho jaega, mere kapde maile hein tum maile kapde par chiipki hui ho Ruhi!”

Abhi to apne working clothes mein tha, maile to the hi, par Ruhi ko koyi parwah nahin tha uss waqt, aur ussne kaha,

“Mere sawaal ko avoid kar rahe ho reply karne ko nah? issi liye dusri baat bana rahe ho Abhi?!”

Abhi ne usski gaal sehlaate hue kaha,

“yeh baat nahin hai Ruhi, mujhe acha nahin lag raha ke iss maile kapde mein tumhare saath iss position mein rahun main apne dusre kapde mein hota to baat aur thi nah.”

Ruhi ne ek Muskaan mein kaha,

“mujhe to koyi farak nahin padta, acha batao ab khush hue aap mujhe baahon mein bhar liya nah?!”

Abhi ne halke se hansste hue kaha,

“baahon mein tumne mujhe bhara hua hai main ne to sirf tumhare kaandhe par haath rakha hai!”

Ruhi ne ussko aur zor se jakarte hue ek bachche ki adaa mein kaha,

“To bharro nah mujhko apne baahon mein jaise main ne aap ko liya hua hai”

Abhi: “iss libaas mein main tumko nahin lena chahta apni baahon mein mujhe odd feel ho raha hai, tumhare kapde gande ho jayenge Ruhi!”

Itna kaha ke Mehboob ki awaaz aur usske kadam unn donon ke taraf badhte hue sunaayi diye, Mehboob yeh kehte hue araha tha,

“Abhi, ghussa thanda hua ke nahin ajao chalo kaam jaari rakho nah bhai!”

Usski awaaz sunkar Ruhi ne jhat se Abhi ko chorrte hue alag hua do kadam, tab tak Mehboob wahan pahunch gaya aur Ruhi se hi pucha,

“issko cool kiya tumne apni baton se nah?!” Aur Abhi ka haath thaam kar Mehboob ne usse chalne ko kaha.

Tab tak Ruhi ki maa bhi agayi Ruhi ke paas aur pucha,

“kia kaha ussne kyun itna late aya aaj?”

Ruhi: “pata nahin maa, mujhe yakeen hai ke meri hi vajah se late aya, ab bhi thoda ukhda ukhda sa hai, hope normal ho jaega kuch der baad, main jaati hoon terrace saaf karne usske aankhon ke saamne to rahungi, kuch der pehle main taras rahi thi ussko wahan dekhne ke liye…”

Ruhi ki maa ne pucha;

“Tumne ussko jakra hua tha, wo bhi mere saamne ussko jakar liya besharaam kahin ki, Mehboob jab aya to tujhko uss position mein nahin dekha nah?!”

Ruhi ne bata diya ke usske aane ke awaaz sunte hi Ruhi Abhi se do kadam door khadi ho gayi thi.

Ruhi chali gayi terrace par jhadu lagaane aur Abhi ko nazron se chorr hi nahin rahi thi. Abhi bhi ussko dekhte hue hi kaam kiye jaa raha tha. Aur Ruhi ussko dekhte hue khud se keh rahi thi;

“Iss aangan mein pehli baar ek naam itna goonji hai ABHI. Iss naam ko main to har roz weise hi sunna chahti hoon. Iss se pehle kabhi bhi yeh naam mere aangan mein nahin suna tha main ne, jab suna to itna suna ke iss naam ko sune bina raha nahin jata, agar yeh naam iss aangan mein goonjna band ho jayega to mujh par kia guzregi wo main soch rahi hoon aaj!!”

Aur achanak Ruhi ka dil dhadka aur khud se kaha;

“Abhi ne to mujhe ishare se sab kuch keh diya hai halaan ke saaf nahin kaha main usske mann ki baat ko padh chuki hoon, magar main apni baat ussko kaise bataun? Mere baare mein ussko pata chala tab kia hoga? Kaise react karega wo? Chala gaya to main kia karungi? Kyun main ussko dil de baithi? Itne dinon tak to kissi ke saath aisa feel nahin hua tha kyun Abhi se main ne shuru mein hi sab kuch nahin keh diya? Agar ussne socha ke main ne dhoke mein rakah usse tab kia hoga? Maa ne kehne se mana kiya hai, magar mujhe lagta hai ke ussko sab sach sach bata dena chahiye. Aur agar mere baare mein usske gharwalon ko pata chal gaya to koyi bhi accept nahin karega mujhe yakeen hai…. Main maa ko sunun ya apne dil ki? Kia karun main? Hey bhagwaan help me!”

Ruhi ke chehre par udaasi dekh kar Abhi ne ishaare se pucha kia hua, magar Ruhi ne kuch nahin mein sar hillaya.

Unn dinon ek geet mashoor tha jo Abhi aksar gungunaya karta tha aur usske situation par fit lagta tha, Abhi ne uss geet ko seeti bajaate hue gaya, wo Ruhi ke liye hi tha, aur Ruhi ussko pyar bhade nazron se dekhne lagi aur jab Abhi ne gaane ke mukde ko whistle kiya bilkkol sur mein to Ruhi ki Aankhen bhar aaye, gana yeh tha;

“Pyar karte hein hum tumhein itna

Pyar karte hein hum tumhein itna

Do aankeh to kia do jahan mein samaaye nah jitna

Pyar karte hein hum tumhein itna…..

Dil mein kab tak karoge basera

Saath kab tak nah chorroge mera

Dharti chorre nah suraj ka phera

Saath chorrenge yun hum nah tera

Pyar karte hein hum tumhein itna

Do aankhen to kia do jahan mein samaaye nah jitna

Zindagi ka tumhi ho irada,

Yaad rakhoge kia tum yeh wada

Nahin bhulenge hum tumhein aise

Dil nah bhule dharakna jaise

Pyar karte hein hum tumhein itna

Do aankehn to kia do jahan mein samaaye nah jitna

Jeete hai hum tumhare sahare

Din guzarte hein kaise tumhare

Ab judaayi nah seh payenge hum

Tumse bichde to mar jayenge hum

Pyar karte hein hum tumhein itna

Do aankeh to kia do jahan mein samaaye nah jitna

Pyar karte hein hum tumhein itna…..”



Iss gaane ko agar aap log issi waqt sunna chaahe to you tube ka yeh link par hai:

Manhar aur Asha bhonsle ke gaaye hue bahot hi mashoor gana tha yeh unn dinon aur har roz subha shaam radio par sunaayi deta tha… har kissi ke zuban par yeh geet hua karta tha unn dinon.

Ab Abhi itna zor se iss gaane ko seeti bajaate hue chala jaa raha tha Ruhi ko dekhte hue ke usski aankhen bhar aayi, wo ro padi aur chali gayi wahan se apna chehra dhone ko.

Khud Abhi ke bhi aankh bhar aaye kyunke wo iss part ko dil mein gaa raha tha seeti bajaate hue

Jeete hai hum tumhare sahare

Dun guzarte hein kaise tumhare

Ab judaayi nah she payenge hum

Tumse bichde to mar jayenge hum

Aur tahjub ki baat yeh thi ke jab Abhi seeti bajaate hue iss part ko dil mein gaa raha tha ussi pal ko Ruhi issi part ko hi dil mein gaa rahi thi, yaane ke yeh part jo female voice mein thi wohi Ruhi gaa rahi thi issi liye ro padi thi

Ab judaayi nah seh payenge hum

Tumse bichde to mar jayenge hum

Yeh kudrat ka Karishma tha ya kia magar hua aisa hi tha….. aur uss din ke baad wahan aakhri din tak kaam karte hue har roz, din bhar Abhi iss gaane ko seeti se oonche sur mein bajata tha… jab kabhi Ruhi nazar nahin aati thi to Abhi ko buss iss gaane ko seeti mein bajana hota tha aur Ruhi daudi chali aati thi usske saamne…. Donon iss gaane se jaise bandhe hue the unn dinon. Ab sochna agar bichde honge to kia haal hota hoga donon ka jab iss geet ko kabhi sunte honge to!! Yun sochiye ke 15 saal baad donon ek dusre se door hai aur iss gaane ko sun rahe hein ussi waqt par alag alag jagah par aur ek dusre ko yaad kar rahe hein to manzar kia hota hoga!! (yeh likhte hue main bahot bhaavuk ho gaya)

Uss din Abhi ka din bahot acha guzra. Saaed bhai aur wo phir se mamooli tarah se baat karne lage jaise ke kuch hua hi nahin tha. Shayad Saeed bhai ne apna kusoor maan liya tha aur ussko pata tha ke Abhi ne bus mein uss se bahot ziada kaam kiya hai.

Ruhi baar baar Abhi ke saamne aati rahi ussko apne jeeb se chidhaati jo Abhi ko behad passand tha…. ab jeeb nikaal kar honton ke beech kuch pointed jaise karke ek ladke ko dikhana isska sexual matlab bhi hota hai aisa Abhi ne socha kia Ruhi ko pata bhi hai ke wo kia ishara karti hai uss tarah se jeeb se usse mock karke? Magar kyunke usski uss adaa se, jiss adaa se Ruhi Weise karti thi wo bahot pyara hota tha iss liye Abhi ko bahot passand tha usska weise karna. Ek baar to Ruhi ne apni maa ke saamne weise jeeb se abhi ko mock kiya. Abhi heyraan reh gaya ke usski maa ne kyun kuch nahin kaha Ruhi ko aur weisa karne diya…. Maa hanss rahi thi jab Ruhi Abhi ko uss tarah se jeeb se mock kar rahi thi… aur weisa mock karna har roz hota raha. Chalta raha ruhi ke taraf se. ruhi khud darrta tha ke kahin kabhi Mehboob, ya saeed nah dekhle Ruhi weisa karte hue….

Ab aate hein kiss wale baat par.

Abhi kaam karte waqt uss kiss ko bhi gehraayi se sochta raha. Kyunke usska pehla kiss tha ussko pata tha ke wo anari tha aut kiss ahi se nahin kar paaya, ussko wo mehsoos hua tha uss waqt ke Ruhi ussko kiss kar rahi thi wo Ruhi ko nahin.

Ab kia Abhi ko pata chala ke Ruhi ne pehle life mein kiss kiya hua hai? Bilkool nahin. Abhi ko kaise pata chalta kyunke ussne life mein aaj pehli baar ek ladki ko kiss kiya, to ussko kia pata ke sahi kiss kaisa hota hai… haan tassavur mein Ruhi ko hi kiss karta hai khayaalon mein to sochta hai honthon ko honton par rakh kar chumte hein jaise gaal ko chumte hein. Magar usske honthon ko Ruhi chuss rahi thi kiss ke dauraan, balke Abhi ke jeeb ko takriban le liya tha apni munh mein kiss karte waqt….. yeh part Abhi ko bahot accha laga tha magar ussne expect nahin kiya tha ke weisa bhi kiss kiya jaata hoga.

Magar ab, tanhaayi mein jab Abhi soch raha tha to mehsoos kiya ke agar kiss weisa kiya jaaye aur agar usske munh mein Ruhi ka jeeb ajaaye to wo zaroor usske rass ko chuss lega, pee lega…. Aur ab akele mein Abhi soch raha tha ke uss waqt ussko wohi karna chahiye tha magar khud ko hi anari kaha ussne…. Aur Ruhi ki cleavage ko bhi socha Abhi ne aur ussne apne erection feel kiya aur utejina ne ghar kiya usske andar, phir Abhi ne Ruhi ko dekhna chaha ussi pal, to dekha ke Ruhi apni khidki se teke hue Abhi ko bade pyar se dekh rahi thi. Abhi ko ussi waqt Ruhi ko apne baahon mein bharne ka man kiya aur ab Abhi Ruhi ki jism ko dekhna chahta tha ussko mehsoos karna chahta tha apne haath se usski jism ko chhuhna chahta tha. lunch time karib araha tha to Abhi ne Tony se kaha ke wo pani lene jaa raha hai, aur Abhi terrace par gaya, Ruhi ne jab ussko waha dekha to jaldi se baahar aayi, aur Abhi ke saamne apni nili dress mein muskurati hui dekhne lagi. Abhi ab upar se niche Ruhi ko nihaar raha tha aur usski boobs ka form dekh raha tha usski dress ke upar, uss ubhaar ko admire kar raha tha, to Ruhi usske chehre mein dekhte hue pucha,

“kia hua? Kia dekh rahe ho Abhi?”

Abhi ne kaha,

“tumko phir se weise apne seene se lagaane ka mann kar raha hai, piche aao nah!”

Ruhi ne hansste hue kaha

“paagal ho kia? Dekho Saeed ji aur Mehboob donon bus mein hein weh dekh to nahin rahe magar unn ko pata hai ke tum yahan ho!”

Abhi ne kaha,

“tum behad khubsurat ho aur aaj main ne pehli baar tumko feel kiya, mera mann nahin bhara hai…”

Ruhi ne ussi Muskaan aur apni rijhati adaaon mein kaha,

“Okay milungi piche, tum lunch karne ke baad ana; hamare paas 30 mins tak to honge nah, aur haan cigarrete mat peena varna mujhe kiss nahin karne dungi, samjhe aap Abhi?”

Abhi bahot khush hua aur kaam par wapas gaya... Ruhi ko kiss karne ka, apne baahon mein bharne ko, usski jism ko chaaron taraf feel karne ko sochte hue…..

To be continued….

Pyar mein achhe khase insaan nikamma hon jata hai... yeh abhi kis khet ki muli hain... koi naa der aaye durusht aaye... ab jaake ushe iss baat ka khayal aaya hain ki moti koi react kyun nahin ki jab ruhi, abhi ke baanho mein thi ya ruhi ko kiss kaise karni hain,woh pehle se hi malum hain..
awww man mein laddu futa... ab lounc ke baad mitha khane ko milega abhinav ko.... ab woh bhi kiss karega..
Hmm sayad ruhi k past uska koi boyfriend rahan hoga... joh ushe dhokha diya hoga...
Khair
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update casi sir.. Great going

 

[Naina]

Update 16 Both Are Getting Closer​

Lunch karne ke baad Abhi ko kuch meetha peena ka, jaise coke ya Pepsi, usske baad cigarrte pine ki aadat thi. Cigarette pina jaise usske liye khaane se ziada zaroori hota tha. Aur Ruhi ne keh diya tha cigarette pee kar mat ana varna wo kiss nahin karne degi. Abhi to kiss karne ke liye nahin ussko baahon mein buss bharne ke liye milna chahta tha magar bina puche Ruhi ne khud kiss wali baat kahi thi to iss baat ko soch kar Abhi ke andar kuch ho raha tha aur Ruhi ki jism ko apne jism se chipkaane ko soch kar utejit hote jaa raha tha khana khaate waqt.

Iss se pehle ke wo lunch end karta Ruhi apni kamre ki khidki ke paas wait karne lagi thi, aur ek mithi strawberry flavour wala sweet munh mein chabah rahi thi wo iss liye ke Abhi ko kiss karne ke liye wo tayyaar thi.

Udhar khana khaate waqt Abhi ne socha ke jaldi se cigarette ka ekaat kasht laga lega phir munh dhokar jaega Ruhi ke paas. To Khana ho gaya Abhi ka to ussne jaldi se thoda juice piya jo ghar se laata tha aur ek cigarette jalaya. Jaldi jaldi kasht laga raha tha to Tony aur saeed ne bhi pucha, ke kyun weise pee raha hai. Abhi ne aadha cigarette peekar baaki ke aadha Tony ko de diya, Tony hamesha Abhi se hi Cigarette leta tha pine ko kyunke usske paas kabhi paisa hota hi nahin tha cigarette kharidne ke liye aur Abhi har roz ek packet jeb mein rakhta tha. aur Abhi ne aaj jo cigarette jalaya tha packet ka last tha, ussko lunch mein jana tha kharidne ke liye magar kyunke abhi Ruhi se milna tha to socha baad mein kharidega.

Tony ne Abhi ka aadha chorra hua cigarette lete hue kaha,

“kyun bhai aaj aadha hi hai mere hisse mein? Har roz to ek full dete ho?”

To vinay ne kaha, “mujhe bhi ek de dete bhai!!”

Phir Abhi munh dhone gaya, soap se munh dhoya, sab ne dekha aur hansste hue Saeed ne kaha,

“are, saboon hai bhai toothpaste nahin, aisa kyun kar raha hai?”

Abhi ne muskuraate hue kaha,

“cigarette ki bhuh ussko nahin passand bhai samjha karo nah!”

Saeed ne hansste hue kaha,

“Oh ye baat hai to phir sahi kiya jo dho liya munh ko andar se, magar meri baat maan kyunke wo cigarette nahin peeti ussko turant pata chal jaega ke tumne abhi abhi cigarette piya hai!”

Abhi saeed ko dekhte hue pucha,

“are bhai saboon se dho diya ab to saboon ke aroma aega nah munh se, ab bhi cigarette ki mehek aegi kia?”

Saeed ne kaha,

“yakeen nahin to jaa baat karke dekh ke ussko pata chalta hai ke nahin!”

Abhi ne tab Tony ko 50 rupay diya aur cigarette kharidne ko kaha aur uss mein se ek Vinay aur ek saeed bhai ko dene ko kaha aur ek apne liye le lene ko kaha.

Aur Abhi ne apne kaam karne wala shirt nikala aur uss shirt ko pehna jiss se subha ghar se bus mein aya tha.

Wo dekh kar saeed ne hansste hue kaha,

“hahahaha launda apni mehbooba se milne jaa raha hai, jaise apni mangitar ke ghar jaa raha hai, abe pant bhi change karle! Aur sun Abhi sirf 30 mins hai tere paas khabardaar agar 1 min bhi ziada udhar spend kiya to haan”

Abhi ne saeed se kaha,

“fikar mat karo 5 mins pehle hi ajaunga bhai”

To saeed ne kaha:

“are nahin mazaak kar raha hoon, pata hai tu late bhi aya to compensate kar dega kaam ko, don’t worry take your time my dear”

Abhi ne tab pucha,

“Really Saeed bhai 10 mins late kiya to chalega?!”

Tony ne saeed ki jagah kaha,

“chaelga bhai tum aaoge to uss 10 mins ke badle 30 mins ka kaam kar doge nah!”

To saeed ne kaha,

“Ek problem hai Abhi, Mehboob dhundega aur puchega to kia kehna hai hamein wo bhi batate jao!”

To Abhi ne kaha,

“are haan phir to 5 mins pehle hi ana padega, Mehboob abhi apne ghar ke andar hai wo zaroor aega thik time par.”

Tab Abhi washroom se nikla aur Ruhi ke kamre ke taraf badha.

Ruhi ne jaise Abhi ko khidki ke paas se guzarte hue dekha to uth kar jaldi se piche wala darwaza khola jo washing stone ki left mein thi aur jo ghar ke piche wale hisse par khulta tha jo bus ke taraf se bilkool nazar nahin ata tha, aur ussi jagah kuch der pehle kiss kiye the donon ne.

Abhi ne aaj tak notice hi nahin kiya tha ke wahan bhi ek darwaza tha, jab Ruhi wahan se nikli tab Abhi ko pata chala uss darwaze ki. Ruhi ne Abhi ke chehre mein dekha, apni jeeb nikaal kar ussko mock kiya aur bina kuch kahe uss se lipat gayi. Iss baar Abhi ne bhi khub kaske Ruhi ko jakra ke Ruhi ki aah nikal gayi.

Donon ek dusre ke baahon mein jakre hue the, Ruhi ka sar Abhi ke chest par tha, aur phir se wo Abhi ki dhadkanon ko sun rahi thi, aur Abhi, Ruhi ke sar ki baalon ki khushbhoo sung raha tha apne chehre ko usski sar par kiye hue. Ruhi ki baahein Abhi ke kamar se hokar usske peeth par hue the aur abhi ke baahein Ruhi ke kaandhon ko apne baahon mein lapeta hua tha. ussi position mein dhire se aur araam se Abhi ne pucha,

“Jiss darwaze se tum nikli wo andar se koyi bhi kholke baahar aa sakta hai nah? Tumhari mummy kidhar hai, Mahesh aur dada ji kidhar hein, wo aagaye to?!”

Ruhi ne usske seene se lage hue hi jawaab diya,

“Aap usski fikar mat karo koyi nahin kholega yeh door. Yeh sirf main aur mummy kholte hein jab hum kapde dhone jaate hein tab.”

Abhi ne Ruhi ke sar ko chum kar kaha,

“Aur mummy ne khola aur hummo iss tarah dekha to?!”

Ruhi, ne abhi ke seene ko shirt ke upar hi chumte hue kaha,

“Wo kuch nahin kahegi. Okay?!”

Abhi ne ek lamba saans liya aur Ruhi ke chehre ko apne haath se sehlaya.

Aur ruhi ne pucha,

“Shirt change kiya hai aap ne? Mere liye? kaun sa perfume use karte ho, kitna acha smell araha hai iss shirt par hmm? You love perfumes Abhi?!”

Abhi: “Soir De Paris” hai Bourgeois wala.”

Unn dinon Bourgeois French make perfumes dunya bhar mein behad mashoor the, dunya ke best perfumes maane jaate the, magar fake bhi hote the imitation wale jo sungh kar hi pata chal jata tha ke wo fake hai magar Abhi ne asli wala Bourgeois lagaya tha. sach mein Abhi ko perfumes ka bada shaukh tha. Wo best hi kharidta tha, toilet soap bhi best chunn kar kharidta halaan ke kum kamaata tha, gharib tha magar usska choise hamesha best hua karta tha, apne pita se zid karta tha paison ke liye unn chizon ko kharidne ke liye kabhi. Ab jab se private kaam karne laga aur thoda paisa aya to of course sabse best hi istemaal karega nah.

Ruhi ne usske shirt ko tatola aur uss jagah naak lagaayi jahan se perfume ki khushbhoo arahi thi, uss waqt Abhi pyar se Ruhi ke chehre mein dekh raha tha aur kaha,

“Tumko passand hai? To main tumko ek exactly yehi perfume dunga ladies wali okay?!”

Ruhi ne munh banaate hue, kuch nakhre wali adaa se ek bachon wali awaaz mein kaha,

“Hmmm nah baba, yeh make jo aap ne kaha mujhe pata hai sab se mehnga perfume hai mujhe itni keemti chizein nahin chahiye!”

Abi ne phir ussi andaz mein pyar se pucha,

“to kia chahiye tumhein?!”

Ruhi: “kuch bhi nahin, buss mujhe aap chahiye!”

Abhi: “Aur mujhe tum chahiye…. Mar jaunga tumhare baghair main!”

Ruhi ne apne ungliyon ko Abhi ke shirt ke button wale hisse ke beech se usske chaati par ferra aur wahan se ek baal ko khincha halke se yeh kehte hue,

“mujhe yahan apna sar rakhna hai abhi!”

To Abhi ne kaha,

“To rakho kiss ne mana kiya hai?!”

Ruhi ne bachkani awaz mein kaha,

“yahan shirt ke buttons lage hue hein issko kholna hai nah!”

Abhi nahin samjha ke wo usske shirt ke buttons ko kholne ke liye keh rahi thi… to kaha,

“tumhi khol ke apna sar wahan rakh lo!”

Aur jiss waqt Ruhi ki patli patli ungliyan Abhi ke shirt ke buttons ko kholne lage, Abhi ne unnki ungliyon ko apne chaati ke baalon par feel kiya aur Ruhi ne apni hatheli ko halke se usske chaati par ferrte hue wahan ek chumban kiya jiss se Abhi ziada hi utejit hua aur usska samaan khada hua jissko Ruhi ne apne peth par mota hote hue feel kiya magar Abhi se satti rahi, wahan se hatti bilkool bhi nahin balke apne peth ko aur dabaya Abhi ke jism se…..

Abhi ki saansein ne raftaar pakre aur dil ki dhadkanein tez hui, phir Abhi ne sar jhuka kar turant Ruhi ke honthon ko chumne laga. Ruhi ne gardan upar kiye hue kiss ko respond kiya magar turant ruki aur kaha,

“Aap ne cigarette piye mere mana karne ke bawajud hai nah?!”

Abhi ka chehre laal hua aur Saeed ki baat ko socha phir Ruhi ko sorry kaha.

Ruhi ne kaha,

“Aap ko chorrna padega cigarette peena Abhi, mujhe nahin passand bilkool, mere family mein koyi nahin peeta, papa, bhai, dada koyi bhi….”

Abhi ne wo kaha jo Ruhi ne bilkool expect nahin kiya tha. Abhi ne usske chehre ko apne donon haathon mein liya aur Ruhi ki Aankhon ki gehraaiyon mein dekhte hue kaha;

“Buss meri ban jao hamesha ke liye chorr dunga peena, umar bar nahin piyunga yeh wada hai mera, aur main wada nibhaane mein awwal hoon!”

Itna hi kaha Abhi ne ke Ruhi rone lagi, usska jism thartharane lagi Abhi ke jism ko jakre hue. Abhi ussko roti dekh kar heyraan hua yeh sochte hue ke kia ussne kahin kuch ghalat to nahin keh diya…. To Ruhi ko hanssaane ke liye Abhi ne kaha ;

“okay okay ro mat thik hai cigarette pina nahin chodunga, aur bhi ziada piyunga ab khush!!”

To Ruhi usska mazaak samajh gayi aur rote rote hanssne lagi Abhi ke chhati par mukka maarte hue…

Phir Ruhi ne kaha,

“Achah agar main kahun ke abhi kaam par wapas jaane ke baad bilkool cigarette nahin pina shaam tak to nahin piyoge?”

Abhi ne ussko aur zor se jakarte hue aur usski donon gaalon ko chumte hue kaha,

“are baba abhi nahin, main ne kaha nah ke pehle tum meri ho jao usske baad chorrunga pina!”

Ruhi ne Abhi ke seene ke baalon mein apne ungliyan ferrte hue kaha;

“Aur main aap ki banungi kaise?”

Abhi ne ussko dobara chumte hue kaha,

“jab officially tum meri ho jaogi tab”

Ruhi: “aur wo kaise hota hai?!”

Abhi: “Jab donon taraf ke pariwaar milkar hum donon ko green light denge ke haan hum donon ek ho sakte hein, jiss din main ne tumko ek anguthi pehnaayi ussi din ussi pal se ek bhi cigarette nahin piyunga. Yeh mera wada hai tumse, mard ka wada issko zindagi bhar nibhunga!”

Ruhi ke aankehn phir bhar aayi Abhi ke baton ko sunne se aur kaampte honton se pucha,

“Aur agar tumhare pariwaar wale ne green light nahin diye to?!”

Abhi: “Impossible. Main ne ghar par sabko bata diya hai ke yahan meri Ruhi mili hai mujhe, khaas kar meri chhoti behen ko, Naina, wo wait kar rahi hai ke kab wo din aaye ke wo tumko dekhe aur ussne bhi mujhe tumse ek photo lene ke liye boli hai, yaar ek tasveer to do nah apna!”

Ruhi: “naah, to thik hai aap ko bhi meri photo tabhi milegi jiss din aap smoking hamesha ke liye chorr doge, it’s a deal okay?!”

Abhi ne kuch socha phir kaha,

“okay deal accepted then, magar yaar abhi tum ek ya do photo de deti to official din ke aane tak to main tumhare tasveer ko takiye ke niche rakh kar sota nah!”

Ruhi phir hanssi aur kaha,

“Mujh mein aisa kia hai Abhi ke aap meri tasveer chahte ho, mujhe baar baar dekhna chahte ho, ghar jaane se pehle muhko dekhte hue jaana chahte ho? kia khaas hai mujh mein Abhi?!”

Abhi ne Ruhi ko iss baar seedhe usske honth ko chumte hue kaha (jab lips ko chuma to Ruhi ne kiss ke form mein apne lips ko kar diya),

“Main bayaan nahin kar sakta kia hai tujh mein Ruhi, magar likh kar de sakta hoon… tumko padhna passand hai nah wo bhi English, to likh kar iss sawaal ka jawaab dunga tumko okay?”

Ruhi muskuraayi aur kaha,

“Aap English mein likhoge?

Abhi: “yeah of course, and you will love to read what I have written!”

Ruhi ne sar upar utha kar abhi ko thoda gaur se dekha aur kaha,

“Aap bahot padhe likhe ho nah Abhi?! Aap bahot intelligent bhi ho, dikhta hai, aap intelligently jawaab dete ho, aap itna padhe likhe hote hue bhi aisa kaam kyun karte ho abhi?!”

Abhi: “lo! Tumne phir iss kaam ko underestimate kiya, tumko nahin pata yeh kaam karne ke liye kitna brain use karna padta hai, it is almost an engineering level of mindset to deal with this job, tum kyun iss kaam ko itna nicha samajhti ho Ruhi?!”

Ruhi: “main nahin samajhti, mummy kehti hai ke yeh kaam thik nahin hai, mujhe to kuch samajh mein nahin ata!”

Abhi “Then don’t talk about my work okay?! Let’s talk about ourselves.”

Ruhi: “You speak English better than me, how far have you studies Abhi?”

Abhi: “not much 12th only.”

Ruhi ki Aankhen chamki aur kaha,

“Really? Me too, but you seem to be much more qualified then me, surely you have had much better marks than I did, main to kayi subjects mein fail bhi hui hihihihi, buss English mein good marks paayi hoon”

Abhi: “mere liye yehi kaafi hai ke tum English samajhti aur bolti ho.”

Ruhi kuch aur bolne jaa rahi thi magar Abhi ne ussko bolne ka mauka nahin diya aur Ruhi ke honth abhi ke honthon se locks ho gaye….. abhi ka haath Ruhi ke peeth par ferrta gaya jiss dauraan wo ruhi ko kiss kiye jaa raha tha woni Ruhi bhi kar rahi thi but ruhi ne muhn open kiya aur iss baar Abhi ne ruhi ki jeeb ko apne jeeb se chhua…. Ussne phir wait kiya ke Ruhi kia karti hai, to ruhi ne abhi se ziada chipakte hue, apne boobs ko Abhi ke chaati par crush karte hue abhi ke jeeb ko apne munh mein lekar almost chussne lagi, Abhi issi ka wait kar raha tha, to iss baar Abhi ne bhi wohi kia, apne jeeb ko Ruhi ke munh se baahar kiya, usski honton par apne jeeb ko ferra… uss time usska bilkool erection Ruhi feel kar rahi thi apne peth par dabba hua, aur Abhi ko awkward feel hua, sharam laga Abhi ko ke usska sex Ruhi ke peth par uss tarah se daba hua hai, phir bhi Abhi ne iss baar Ruhi ka jeeb apne munh mein liya aur usski juice nichorra chusste hue, aur apne sex ko usski peth par thoda ragadhte hue Abhi ne apne tangon ko thoda curb kiya to usska sex Ruhi ke peth ke niche wale hisse par,alomos Ruhi ki yoni ke upar dabba to jhat se Ruhi ne kiss break karte hue kaha,

“sunon they have already started working in the bus…..”

Kitni jaldi 30 mins khatam ho gaye donon ko pata hi nahin chala…. Ruhi ne apne baal ko chehre se ek taraf karte hue abhi ke pant ke upar uss jagah dekha jahan usska erection nazar araha tha, Ruhi ne nazrein churrate hue dekha, magar Abhi ne achchi tarah se dekha ke Ruhi ki nazrein kahan gaye the.

Ruhi ne turant Abhi ke chehre mein dekha aur apni pyari dhime awaaz mein pucha,

“Saeed ji naraz nahin honge aap se nah?”

“Bilkool nahin, kyunke ussko pata hai main tumse milne aya hoon!” Abhi ne jawaab diya, phir ab ussne Ruhi se kaha,

“Ek baar aur baahon mein aao nah jaane se pehle, mera mann nahin bhara!”

Ruhi do kadam aur piche hote hue kaha,

“Aaj ke liye kaafi hai thoda kal ke liye bacha kar rakhna chahiye Abhi ji!” aur hanss di Ruhi ne jaise abhi ko tease karte hue phir apni jeeb se mock kiya abhi ko piche ka darwaza open karte hue.

To abhi ne pucha,

“dekho to zara time kia hua hai?!”

Ruhi ne kamre ke andar time dekh kara ghabraayi hui awaaz mein kaha,

“Abhi 1:10 ho gaya 12:45 ko work resume karte ho nah jao jao ab jaldi jao!”

Abhi bhi ghabra gaya aur jaldi se Ruhi ko ek flying kiss dete hue wahan se wapas gaya bus ke taraf, jahan Tony ne usska working wala shirt aur cigarette ka packet lekar usska wait kar raha tha.

To be continued…. (2921 words)

Chalo illu illu bhi kar liya aur man ki baatein bhi.....
ruhi ki rone ki wajah woh apni past ko abhi samne jahir nahin kar pa rahin hain..
ushe dar hain kahin woh abhi ko kho naa de...
Oh toh Saeed bhi support karta hain abhinav ko..... Great


The great Naina abhi ki bahan
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update casi sir... Great going

 

[Naina]

Update 17 A Rival Or What ?​

Unn dinon ko mobile, whatsasp, messenger, twitter, snapchat kuch bhai tha to nahin magar unn dinon ke youngsters kaise communicate karte the? Kia weh log bhi communicate karte ya chat karte the? Ziada door ki baat nahin 1986/87 mein filhaal chal rahi hai yeh kahani. To kia jaise aaj sab communicate karte hein tab hota tha kia?

Haan hota tha, bilkool hota tha. Wo kaise main samjhata hoon. Lagbhag har teenager ka boyfriend hua karta tha tab bhi. Jo college jaate the unnke to hote hi the, baahar ghumne, café mein, library vaghaira mein milte the date par tab bhi. Aur Abhi yehi chahta tha, aisa hi chahta tha ke usski love story chale. Wo chahta tha ek ladki ko passand kare aur iss se pehle ke family walon ko pata chale wo aur ladki mile koyi ek saal tak akele, ek dusre se behad pyar kare, tab apne parents ko bataaye phir engagement kare, tab shaadi. Abhi aisa love story chahta tha apni life mein.

Ab kaise communicate karte the baaki ke youngsters?

Wo hota aisa tha ke unn dinon har newpapers mein ek corner hota tha “PENFRIENDS CORNER” ke naam se. Uss corner mein koyi bhi apna naam aur address likh kar newspaper ko send karta aur usska naam aur address publish hota tha paper mein, aur koyi bhi ussko khat likh sakta tha kyunke usska naam penfriend corner mein aya tha. Teenagers, ladke, ladkiyan, adult, aged log sab uss penfriend corner mein apna naam send karte the, jissko ek saathi ko khat likhna passand tha, new friends banana, desh se bhi aur videsh se bhi.

Uss zarye se bahot saare jodi bane jo aaj shaadi shuda successful couples bhi hein. Ab hota aisa bhi tha ke jiss ladki ka naam uss corner mein aya to ussko 200 se 500 ladke khat likhna shuru kar dete the. Ab ladki ko sab ko reply karna to mumkin hota nahin tha to kuch gine chunon ko reply karti, aur dhire dhire unn mein ek to zaroor passand ata tha…. apne baare mein likha kia karte the, kidhar rehte ho, family members kitne hein etc etc…. sab kuch bolte the apne baare mein. Iss tarah se har kissi ko koyi ek to passand ata hi tha phir apne photos bhi bhejte the chithi ke lifaafe mein. Aaj to whatsap par ek selfie lekar send kar diya jata hai, magar unn dinon postman ka wait karna padta tha chithi aane ka. Ek alag khusi aur mahaul bana rehta jinn logon ke penfriends hote the aur har roz postman ka intezaar kiya jaata tha. Postman ghussa hota aur kehta, “are shaadi karlo tum log ek baar yaar lafda khatam ho har roz aise chitthiyan lane ko mujhe!”

Ab desh bhar mein naujawanon ke beech yeh Silsila chalta tha. well padhe likhe logon ke bich of course.

To Abhi ke bhi penfriends the Ruhi ko jaanne se bahot pehle. Do saal pehle Abhi ne unn sab mein se 3 penfriends se mile bhi the, magar teenon mein se ek bhi Abhi ko personally passand nahin aaye the, to sirf dosti aur writing tak ka naata rakha unn sab se aur dhire dhire ladkiyon ne Abhi ke letters ko reply karna band kar diye kyunke unn ladkiyon ko dusre penfriends mil gaye.

Abhi ke do foreigners penfriends bhi the, ek France se Pascale naam se aur ek Jennifer naam se jo Scotland se thi. Donon ne apni apni tasveerein send kiye the Abhi ko, aur Abhi ne bhi apne pics send kiye the unn donon ko, aur iss saal jinn dinon Abhi Ruhi ke yahan kaam karta tha yeh donon foreigners aur 2 local girls Abhi ke penfriends the. Abhi itna handsome tha ke laldkiyan to ussko passand kar lete the magar Abhi ko koyi passand ata tab nah baat banti? Phir jabse Abhi ne Mehboob ke yahan kaam karna shuru kiya tab se ek bhi penfriend ke khaton ko reply kiya hi nahin tha.

To lifaafe mein chithi ke saath photo share karna aam baat hoti thi unn dinon. Sabhi karte the. Aur aise hi ek din Abhi ne Ruhi se kaha jaise penfriends photo share karte hein kyun wo share nahin karti Abhi ke saath aur kyun ek dusre ko likh nahin sakte? Abhi ne Ruhi ko bataya ke usske bhi penfriends hein foreign mein bhi hai, buss dost hein iss liye Ruhi se apne photo manga magar Ruhi phir bhi nahin maani photos dene ko.

Abhi apne diary mein likhta to kehta ke sala jiss se koyi naata nahin, ziada interest nahin unn ladkiyon ke photos hein usske paas aur jiss se beinteha pyar karta tha usski ek tasveer bhi nahin usske paas.

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Uss shaam ko ghar wapas jaate waqt Abhi aur Saeed ek hi seat par baithe the bus mein. Abhi ne Saeed se kaha,

“Bhai main beinteha pyar karta hoon Ruhi se bhai. Main uss se shadi karna chahta hoon. I am serious bhai.”

Saeed: “Mujhe pata hai Abhi. Sabko pata hai wahan. Magar kia ladki bhi tumko pyar karti hai ya aise hi tere saath dillagi kar rahi hai?!”

Abhi: “Karti hai nah bhai bahot pyar karti hai mujhse, wo kaise nahin dikha aap ko bhai?! Aap dekhte nahin har baar mere saamne aa jaati hai, kabhi bhi baat karti hai, har tarah se prove karti hai ke mujhse pyar karti hai, dekha nah lunch time ke baad kitne der tak usske saath tha main?!”

Saeed: “ghar ke piche the tum donon nah? kia kar rahe the utne der tak? Kuch ghalat to nahin kiya nah Abhi?!”

Abhi: ”are nahin bhai, buss kiss kiya ziada kuch nahin!”

Saeed ne ek ajeeb si muskurahat mein kaha,

“kiss karne diya ussne tujhe? Buss itne dinon ke mulakaat mein kiss tak aa gaye tum donon, tab to ladki pahunchi hui hai Abhi, aisa nahin lagta tumko kia?!”

Abhi saeed ka matlab nahin samjha to buss kaha,

“behad chahti hai mujhe wo bhi bhai issi liye nah!”

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Usske baad kaam par takriban har roz lunch time mein Abhi Ruhi se milta, donon pyar bhare kuch pal guzaarte. Kiss karte. Pyar ki baatein karte…. Yeh ek hafte tak guzra.

Donon ke bare mein din ba din sabko pata chalta gaya, jitney bhi log chaahe ussi angan ke ya baahar ke bhi jo aate the bus dekhne aur ghanton guzaarte the uss aangan mein sabko pata chal gaya tha ke Ruhi aur Abhi ke beech love hai. Sab khule aam ek dusre ko dikhte, aur ab jiada pyar dikhaate to baaki ke saare logon ko dikhta tha, aur danke ke choat par Abhi kehta tha ke wo Ruhi se bahot pyar karta hai aur jald hi uss se mangni karega, phir shaadi.

Aur ek tha wahan Reza, wo Mehboob ke bus mein conductor ka kaam karta tha, Mehboob ke aur 4 buses chal rahe the nah. To jab bhi wo aata aangan mein jaise ussko jalan hota Abhi aur Ruhi ko close dekh kar, yeh Abhi ne notice kiya tha. Reza koyi 23 se 25 ka naujawaan tha. Aur wo uss mohalle ka rehne wala tha aur Ruhi se usski jaan pehchaan thi pehle se kyun ke wahin ka rehne wala tha aur uss aangan mein usska ana jana tha pehle se.

To kayi baar aise ghatnaayein hue jahan kabhi Abhi Ruhi se kuch kehna chahta to Reza bich mein khada rehta, unn donon ko baat nahin karne deta, ya kabhi Ruhi kuch Abhi ko dene arahi ho to wo chiz Reza le leta tab Abi ko deta, ya jab Abhi aur Ruhi terrace ke paas baat kar rahe hote to Reza wahan aakar khada ho jaata aur ek saath baat karta Abhi aur Ruhi se. Abhi ko bahot ghusa ata tha magar kuch kehta nahin tha Reza se. Par Ruhi se kehta tha ke Reza weisa kyun karta hai, to Ruhi kehti ke ussko ignore karne ko kyun ke wo short minded hai, aur sahi mein wo Reza short minded hi tha.

Iss Reza ke baare mein baad mein kuch aur aega issi liye issko yahan introduce karna pada.

Baaki sab mamool par chal rahe the uss aangan mein. Ruhi ab bekaraar rehne lagi thi Abhi ke bina aisa anumaan hota tha kyunke wo had se ziada baahar aati thi, bus ke paas aati, Abhi ko dekhti, uss se muskuraati, jeeb se mock karti, etc. Abhi har roz zoron se seeti bajaate hue wo geet gata “pyar karte hein hum tumhein itna”

Abhi ki seeti mashoor ho gayi thi uss aangan mein uss gaane ke sur mein bajte hue. Aur itna zor se whistle karta ke door tak sunaayi deta aur jitney bhi ghar aas paas the sab sunte the aur sabko pata chal jaata tha ke Abhi Ruhi ke liye wo tune ka seeti bajaata hai.

Ek shaam ko Shweta, Farzina aur Ruhi aangan mein ek copy book hath mein liye kuch game khel rahe the, aur Farzina bus mein aayi Abhi ke paas aur ek puzzle likh kar pucha. Abhi ne fatafat jawaab likh kar de diya. Phir baad mein pata chala ke wo puzzle Ruhi ne likh kar diya tha Farzinah ko guess karne ke liye aur Farzina ne Abhi ki help se jawaab paa liya aur jaakar Ruhi ko dikhaya.

Usske baad, Abhi ke kuch puzzles jaise sawaal likhe aur Farzinah ko jaa kar Ruhi se usska jawaab likhne ko kaha. Ruhi ko samajh mein nahin aya. Dada ji wahin aangan mein ek chothe se chair par baithe bachon ko aate jaate dekh rahe the to ek baar ussne copy book manga dekhne ke liye ke kia ussko puzzle ka jawaab aega… ussne bhi try kiya magar nahin mila jawaab. To Abhi ne jawaab likh kar diya farzinah ko jissne Ruhi ko dikhaya…. Kitchen ke stairs se Ruhi Abhi ko haath ke ishaare se keh rahi thi ke wo bahot ziada intelligent hai usske mukable kyunke Abhi ne usske likhe saare puzzle solve kar diye the aur Ruhi ne usske ek bhi sawaal ka jawaab nahin de saka.

Aur ussi waqt aangan mein Reza bhi hta, usske haath mein copy book jata tha, dada ji ke haath, Mahesh kek haath aur mehbob kek haath mein se copy hote hue Ruhi ke paas jaata magar koyi jawaab nahin de paata Abhi ke sawaalon ka.

Iss se yeh saabit hota hai ke uss aangan mein sabhi ko Abhi aur Ruhi ke pyar ke baare mein pata chal chuka tha aur sabhi normal the inn donon ke rishte ko lekar. Kissi ko koyi problem nahin dikh raha tha uss waqt.

November ka mahina start hua aur Mehboob ne Saeed se baat kiya ke kia Christmas tak kaam pura nahin ho sakta aur bus road par nahin chal sakta uss din ko? To Saeed ne Abhi se salaah maanga. Abhi to chahta tha jitney ziada din ho sake wahin kaam kare, magar jiss raftaar se kaam badh raha tha full mumkin tha 25th December tak kaam ko khatam karne ki. To Abhi ko kehna pada ke haan ho paayega. To decide kiya gaya ke Sundays ko bhi ab kaam karne aayenge last day tak.

Wohi kiya gaya November ke start se har Sundays ko bhi kaam par aane lage pura team. Magar Sundays ko bhi Saturdays ki taraf 2 baje end karte the.

Engine laa diya gaya tha, to engine ka mechanic jisska naam tha George, aur usske saath 2 apprentice the, weh log engine par kaam karne lage, aur electrician ko bhi laya gaya tamaan wire works karne ke liye bus mein. Ab coach building ki andar ka kaam open chorrna tha taake tamaam wiring bus ke panel ke andar se bichaaya jaaye aur har bulb ki entry karna tha ceilings mein jo plywoods ke the…

Usske liye Mehboob ko plywoods kharidna pada, bade bade sheets the jissko usske ghar mein rakhne ke liye jagah nahin thi to ussko Ruhi ke ghar ki lounge mein rakha gaya tha….. Uss din pehli baar Abhi Ruhi ke lounge mein daakhil hua tha unn sheets ko Tony Mehboob aur Reza ke saath milkar carry karte hue sambhaal kar rakhne ke liye.

Jiss waqt Abhi andar gaya Ruhi so rahi thi, do peher ki neendh mein thi aur jiss kamre mein wo thi, lounge se nazar arahi thi. Bed par Ruhi ko uss tarah se sote hue dekh kar Abhi ko kuch hua. Ruhi sote hue itni khubsurat lag rahi thi, wo saans le rahi thi to usski chaati upar niche ho raha tha aur Abhi kuch der khada ussko nihaarta raha… ussko Dekhte hue Abhi Ruhi mein apni patni ko dekh raha tha aur socha ke ek din khud apne kamre mein ussko uss tarah se sote hue dekhega. Abhi ka mann kiya ke ussi waqt jaakar Ruhi ko apni baahon mein bhar le. Bahot pyar araha tha ussko Ruhi par uss waqt, ek masoom pari jaise soyi hui thi bekhabar, apni ussi nili dress mein, usske gaal par halki si hawa ki chalne se usski ek latt gaal ko sehla rahe the, Abhi uss nazaare ko dekh kar emotional hua….. Ruhi ke karib hone ka usska mann kiya, aur jaie ussne aage badhne ko socha to dekha ke Reza bhi usske bagal mein khada Ruhi ko wo bhi dekh raha tha…..

Abhi ko ghussa aya aur kaha,

“Tu kia dekh raha hai?”

Reza: “Wohi jo tu dekh raha hai!”

Mehboob aur tony nikal chuke the tab tak.

Abhi ko, Reza ko ek thapad maarne ka mann kiya magar ghusse par kaabu rakhte hue Abhi ne uss se kaha,

“Abe saale wo meri hai, iss liye main ussko dekh raha hoon, tujhe ussko weise dekhne ka koyi haq nahin hai samjha ?!”

Tab tak Reza baahar nikalte hue Abhi ko jawaab diya,

“Wo kaise teri ho sakti hai be? Sirf tujhse baat karti hai isska matlab yeh nahin ke wo teri ho gayi baat to mujhse bhi karti hai ti uss hisaab se wo meri bhi hai!”

Abhi ko bahot ghussa aya Reza ke jawaab se aur kaha,

“Abe bakwas karna bandh kar, tujhe pata bhi hai ke mere aur usske bich kia Rishta hai?”

Reza: “kia Rishta hai bata? Teri wife hai wo? Teri fiancée hai wo? Tumne usske saath engagement kiya hai? Nahin nah to tu bakwaas karna bandh kar saale ladki ko badnaam karne ata hai yahan?!”

To be continued….. (2450 words)

Sabhi ko koi problem nahin hain abhi aur ruhi ke pyar se sivaye ek ke
rukaavat ke liye khed hain.... he he he
abhi abhinav aur ruhi ke pyar suru hi hua tha ki bich mein manhoos reza aa tapka..
hmm bahot adchan paida kar rahan hain yeh Kala kaluta Reza indono ke pyar ke mamle mein .. Isko raste se hatana hoga by hook or by crook..
Khair..
Let's see what see what happens next
Brilliant update casi sir.... Great going...

 

[Husein Ali]

 

[Husein Ali]

Update 17 A Rival Or What ?​

Unn dinon ko mobile, whatsasp, messenger, twitter, snapchat kuch bhai tha to nahin magar unn dinon ke youngsters kaise communicate karte the? Kia weh log bhi communicate karte ya chat karte the? Ziada door ki baat nahin 1986/87 mein filhaal chal rahi hai yeh kahani. To kia jaise aaj sab communicate karte hein tab hota tha kia?

Haan hota tha, bilkool hota tha. Wo kaise main samjhata hoon. Lagbhag har teenager ka boyfriend hua karta tha tab bhi. Jo college jaate the unnke to hote hi the, baahar ghumne, café mein, library vaghaira mein milte the date par tab bhi. Aur Abhi yehi chahta tha, aisa hi chahta tha ke usski love story chale. Wo chahta tha ek ladki ko passand kare aur iss se pehle ke family walon ko pata chale wo aur ladki mile koyi ek saal tak akele, ek dusre se behad pyar kare, tab apne parents ko bataaye phir engagement kare, tab shaadi. Abhi aisa love story chahta tha apni life mein.

Ab kaise communicate karte the baaki ke youngsters?

Wo hota aisa tha ke unn dinon har newpapers mein ek corner hota tha “PENFRIENDS CORNER” ke naam se. Uss corner mein koyi bhi apna naam aur address likh kar newspaper ko send karta aur usska naam aur address publish hota tha paper mein, aur koyi bhi ussko khat likh sakta tha kyunke usska naam penfriend corner mein aya tha. Teenagers, ladke, ladkiyan, adult, aged log sab uss penfriend corner mein apna naam send karte the, jissko ek saathi ko khat likhna passand tha, new friends banana, desh se bhi aur videsh se bhi.

Uss zarye se bahot saare jodi bane jo aaj shaadi shuda successful couples bhi hein. Ab hota aisa bhi tha ke jiss ladki ka naam uss corner mein aya to ussko 200 se 500 ladke khat likhna shuru kar dete the. Ab ladki ko sab ko reply karna to mumkin hota nahin tha to kuch gine chunon ko reply karti, aur dhire dhire unn mein ek to zaroor passand ata tha…. apne baare mein likha kia karte the, kidhar rehte ho, family members kitne hein etc etc…. sab kuch bolte the apne baare mein. Iss tarah se har kissi ko koyi ek to passand ata hi tha phir apne photos bhi bhejte the chithi ke lifaafe mein. Aaj to whatsap par ek selfie lekar send kar diya jata hai, magar unn dinon postman ka wait karna padta tha chithi aane ka. Ek alag khusi aur mahaul bana rehta jinn logon ke penfriends hote the aur har roz postman ka intezaar kiya jaata tha. Postman ghussa hota aur kehta, “are shaadi karlo tum log ek baar yaar lafda khatam ho har roz aise chitthiyan lane ko mujhe!”

Ab desh bhar mein naujawanon ke beech yeh Silsila chalta tha. well padhe likhe logon ke bich of course.

To Abhi ke bhi penfriends the Ruhi ko jaanne se bahot pehle. Do saal pehle Abhi ne unn sab mein se 3 penfriends se mile bhi the, magar teenon mein se ek bhi Abhi ko personally passand nahin aaye the, to sirf dosti aur writing tak ka naata rakha unn sab se aur dhire dhire ladkiyon ne Abhi ke letters ko reply karna band kar diye kyunke unn ladkiyon ko dusre penfriends mil gaye.

Abhi ke do foreigners penfriends bhi the, ek France se Pascale naam se aur ek Jennifer naam se jo Scotland se thi. Donon ne apni apni tasveerein send kiye the Abhi ko, aur Abhi ne bhi apne pics send kiye the unn donon ko, aur iss saal jinn dinon Abhi Ruhi ke yahan kaam karta tha yeh donon foreigners aur 2 local girls Abhi ke penfriends the. Abhi itna handsome tha ke laldkiyan to ussko passand kar lete the magar Abhi ko koyi passand ata tab nah baat banti? Phir jabse Abhi ne Mehboob ke yahan kaam karna shuru kiya tab se ek bhi penfriend ke khaton ko reply kiya hi nahin tha.

To lifaafe mein chithi ke saath photo share karna aam baat hoti thi unn dinon. Sabhi karte the. Aur aise hi ek din Abhi ne Ruhi se kaha jaise penfriends photo share karte hein kyun wo share nahin karti Abhi ke saath aur kyun ek dusre ko likh nahin sakte? Abhi ne Ruhi ko bataya ke usske bhi penfriends hein foreign mein bhi hai, buss dost hein iss liye Ruhi se apne photo manga magar Ruhi phir bhi nahin maani photos dene ko.

Abhi apne diary mein likhta to kehta ke sala jiss se koyi naata nahin, ziada interest nahin unn ladkiyon ke photos hein usske paas aur jiss se beinteha pyar karta tha usski ek tasveer bhi nahin usske paas.

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Uss shaam ko ghar wapas jaate waqt Abhi aur Saeed ek hi seat par baithe the bus mein. Abhi ne Saeed se kaha,

“Bhai main beinteha pyar karta hoon Ruhi se bhai. Main uss se shadi karna chahta hoon. I am serious bhai.”

Saeed: “Mujhe pata hai Abhi. Sabko pata hai wahan. Magar kia ladki bhi tumko pyar karti hai ya aise hi tere saath dillagi kar rahi hai?!”

Abhi: “Karti hai nah bhai bahot pyar karti hai mujhse, wo kaise nahin dikha aap ko bhai?! Aap dekhte nahin har baar mere saamne aa jaati hai, kabhi bhi baat karti hai, har tarah se prove karti hai ke mujhse pyar karti hai, dekha nah lunch time ke baad kitne der tak usske saath tha main?!”

Saeed: “ghar ke piche the tum donon nah? kia kar rahe the utne der tak? Kuch ghalat to nahin kiya nah Abhi?!”

Abhi: ”are nahin bhai, buss kiss kiya ziada kuch nahin!”

Saeed ne ek ajeeb si muskurahat mein kaha,

“kiss karne diya ussne tujhe? Buss itne dinon ke mulakaat mein kiss tak aa gaye tum donon, tab to ladki pahunchi hui hai Abhi, aisa nahin lagta tumko kia?!”

Abhi saeed ka matlab nahin samjha to buss kaha,

“behad chahti hai mujhe wo bhi bhai issi liye nah!”

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Usske baad kaam par takriban har roz lunch time mein Abhi Ruhi se milta, donon pyar bhare kuch pal guzaarte. Kiss karte. Pyar ki baatein karte…. Yeh ek hafte tak guzra.

Donon ke bare mein din ba din sabko pata chalta gaya, jitney bhi log chaahe ussi angan ke ya baahar ke bhi jo aate the bus dekhne aur ghanton guzaarte the uss aangan mein sabko pata chal gaya tha ke Ruhi aur Abhi ke beech love hai. Sab khule aam ek dusre ko dikhte, aur ab jiada pyar dikhaate to baaki ke saare logon ko dikhta tha, aur danke ke choat par Abhi kehta tha ke wo Ruhi se bahot pyar karta hai aur jald hi uss se mangni karega, phir shaadi.

Aur ek tha wahan Reza, wo Mehboob ke bus mein conductor ka kaam karta tha, Mehboob ke aur 4 buses chal rahe the nah. To jab bhi wo aata aangan mein jaise ussko jalan hota Abhi aur Ruhi ko close dekh kar, yeh Abhi ne notice kiya tha. Reza koyi 23 se 25 ka naujawaan tha. Aur wo uss mohalle ka rehne wala tha aur Ruhi se usski jaan pehchaan thi pehle se kyun ke wahin ka rehne wala tha aur uss aangan mein usska ana jana tha pehle se.

To kayi baar aise ghatnaayein hue jahan kabhi Abhi Ruhi se kuch kehna chahta to Reza bich mein khada rehta, unn donon ko baat nahin karne deta, ya kabhi Ruhi kuch Abhi ko dene arahi ho to wo chiz Reza le leta tab Abi ko deta, ya jab Abhi aur Ruhi terrace ke paas baat kar rahe hote to Reza wahan aakar khada ho jaata aur ek saath baat karta Abhi aur Ruhi se. Abhi ko bahot ghusa ata tha magar kuch kehta nahin tha Reza se. Par Ruhi se kehta tha ke Reza weisa kyun karta hai, to Ruhi kehti ke ussko ignore karne ko kyun ke wo short minded hai, aur sahi mein wo Reza short minded hi tha.

Iss Reza ke baare mein baad mein kuch aur aega issi liye issko yahan introduce karna pada.

Baaki sab mamool par chal rahe the uss aangan mein. Ruhi ab bekaraar rehne lagi thi Abhi ke bina aisa anumaan hota tha kyunke wo had se ziada baahar aati thi, bus ke paas aati, Abhi ko dekhti, uss se muskuraati, jeeb se mock karti, etc. Abhi har roz zoron se seeti bajaate hue wo geet gata “pyar karte hein hum tumhein itna”

Abhi ki seeti mashoor ho gayi thi uss aangan mein uss gaane ke sur mein bajte hue. Aur itna zor se whistle karta ke door tak sunaayi deta aur jitney bhi ghar aas paas the sab sunte the aur sabko pata chal jaata tha ke Abhi Ruhi ke liye wo tune ka seeti bajaata hai.

Ek shaam ko Shweta, Farzina aur Ruhi aangan mein ek copy book hath mein liye kuch game khel rahe the, aur Farzina bus mein aayi Abhi ke paas aur ek puzzle likh kar pucha. Abhi ne fatafat jawaab likh kar de diya. Phir baad mein pata chala ke wo puzzle Ruhi ne likh kar diya tha Farzinah ko guess karne ke liye aur Farzina ne Abhi ki help se jawaab paa liya aur jaakar Ruhi ko dikhaya.

Usske baad, Abhi ke kuch puzzles jaise sawaal likhe aur Farzinah ko jaa kar Ruhi se usska jawaab likhne ko kaha. Ruhi ko samajh mein nahin aya. Dada ji wahin aangan mein ek chothe se chair par baithe bachon ko aate jaate dekh rahe the to ek baar ussne copy book manga dekhne ke liye ke kia ussko puzzle ka jawaab aega… ussne bhi try kiya magar nahin mila jawaab. To Abhi ne jawaab likh kar diya farzinah ko jissne Ruhi ko dikhaya…. Kitchen ke stairs se Ruhi Abhi ko haath ke ishaare se keh rahi thi ke wo bahot ziada intelligent hai usske mukable kyunke Abhi ne usske likhe saare puzzle solve kar diye the aur Ruhi ne usske ek bhi sawaal ka jawaab nahin de saka.

Aur ussi waqt aangan mein Reza bhi hta, usske haath mein copy book jata tha, dada ji ke haath, Mahesh kek haath aur mehbob kek haath mein se copy hote hue Ruhi ke paas jaata magar koyi jawaab nahin de paata Abhi ke sawaalon ka.

Iss se yeh saabit hota hai ke uss aangan mein sabhi ko Abhi aur Ruhi ke pyar ke baare mein pata chal chuka tha aur sabhi normal the inn donon ke rishte ko lekar. Kissi ko koyi problem nahin dikh raha tha uss waqt.

November ka mahina start hua aur Mehboob ne Saeed se baat kiya ke kia Christmas tak kaam pura nahin ho sakta aur bus road par nahin chal sakta uss din ko? To Saeed ne Abhi se salaah maanga. Abhi to chahta tha jitney ziada din ho sake wahin kaam kare, magar jiss raftaar se kaam badh raha tha full mumkin tha 25th December tak kaam ko khatam karne ki. To Abhi ko kehna pada ke haan ho paayega. To decide kiya gaya ke Sundays ko bhi ab kaam karne aayenge last day tak.

Wohi kiya gaya November ke start se har Sundays ko bhi kaam par aane lage pura team. Magar Sundays ko bhi Saturdays ki taraf 2 baje end karte the.

Engine laa diya gaya tha, to engine ka mechanic jisska naam tha George, aur usske saath 2 apprentice the, weh log engine par kaam karne lage, aur electrician ko bhi laya gaya tamaan wire works karne ke liye bus mein. Ab coach building ki andar ka kaam open chorrna tha taake tamaam wiring bus ke panel ke andar se bichaaya jaaye aur har bulb ki entry karna tha ceilings mein jo plywoods ke the…

Usske liye Mehboob ko plywoods kharidna pada, bade bade sheets the jissko usske ghar mein rakhne ke liye jagah nahin thi to ussko Ruhi ke ghar ki lounge mein rakha gaya tha….. Uss din pehli baar Abhi Ruhi ke lounge mein daakhil hua tha unn sheets ko Tony Mehboob aur Reza ke saath milkar carry karte hue sambhaal kar rakhne ke liye.

Jiss waqt Abhi andar gaya Ruhi so rahi thi, do peher ki neendh mein thi aur jiss kamre mein wo thi, lounge se nazar arahi thi. Bed par Ruhi ko uss tarah se sote hue dekh kar Abhi ko kuch hua. Ruhi sote hue itni khubsurat lag rahi thi, wo saans le rahi thi to usski chaati upar niche ho raha tha aur Abhi kuch der khada ussko nihaarta raha… ussko Dekhte hue Abhi Ruhi mein apni patni ko dekh raha tha aur socha ke ek din khud apne kamre mein ussko uss tarah se sote hue dekhega. Abhi ka mann kiya ke ussi waqt jaakar Ruhi ko apni baahon mein bhar le. Bahot pyar araha tha ussko Ruhi par uss waqt, ek masoom pari jaise soyi hui thi bekhabar, apni ussi nili dress mein, usske gaal par halki si hawa ki chalne se usski ek latt gaal ko sehla rahe the, Abhi uss nazaare ko dekh kar emotional hua….. Ruhi ke karib hone ka usska mann kiya, aur jaie ussne aage badhne ko socha to dekha ke Reza bhi usske bagal mein khada Ruhi ko wo bhi dekh raha tha…..

Abhi ko ghussa aya aur kaha,

“Tu kia dekh raha hai?”

Reza: “Wohi jo tu dekh raha hai!”

Mehboob aur tony nikal chuke the tab tak.

Abhi ko, Reza ko ek thapad maarne ka mann kiya magar ghusse par kaabu rakhte hue Abhi ne uss se kaha,

“Abe saale wo meri hai, iss liye main ussko dekh raha hoon, tujhe ussko weise dekhne ka koyi haq nahin hai samjha ?!”

Tab tak Reza baahar nikalte hue Abhi ko jawaab diya,

“Wo kaise teri ho sakti hai be? Sirf tujhse baat karti hai isska matlab yeh nahin ke wo teri ho gayi baat to mujhse bhi karti hai ti uss hisaab se wo meri bhi hai!”

Abhi ko bahot ghussa aya Reza ke jawaab se aur kaha,

“Abe bakwas karna bandh kar, tujhe pata bhi hai ke mere aur usske bich kia Rishta hai?”

Reza: “kia Rishta hai bata? Teri wife hai wo? Teri fiancée hai wo? Tumne usske saath engagement kiya hai? Nahin nah to tu bakwaas karna bandh kar saale ladki ko badnaam karne ata hai yahan?!”

To be continued….. (2450 words)

Bahit khub likga hai bhai.
Penfrienship ka jamana para,hi mujhe.
Ab ye kaun agaya Abhi aur Ruhi k bich pyar ka dushman , akal ka andha?
Jab saare logon ko pata hai unn donon k bare mein to issko kia problem ho raha hai?
Bhagao salle ko bhai.
Superb update.

 

[Nayan Radhee]

 

[Nayan Radhee]

Update 17 A Rival Or What ?​

Unn dinon ko mobile, whatsasp, messenger, twitter, snapchat kuch bhai tha to nahin magar unn dinon ke youngsters kaise communicate karte the? Kia weh log bhi communicate karte ya chat karte the? Ziada door ki baat nahin 1986/87 mein filhaal chal rahi hai yeh kahani. To kia jaise aaj sab communicate karte hein tab hota tha kia?

Haan hota tha, bilkool hota tha. Wo kaise main samjhata hoon. Lagbhag har teenager ka boyfriend hua karta tha tab bhi. Jo college jaate the unnke to hote hi the, baahar ghumne, café mein, library vaghaira mein milte the date par tab bhi. Aur Abhi yehi chahta tha, aisa hi chahta tha ke usski love story chale. Wo chahta tha ek ladki ko passand kare aur iss se pehle ke family walon ko pata chale wo aur ladki mile koyi ek saal tak akele, ek dusre se behad pyar kare, tab apne parents ko bataaye phir engagement kare, tab shaadi. Abhi aisa love story chahta tha apni life mein.

Ab kaise communicate karte the baaki ke youngsters?

Wo hota aisa tha ke unn dinon har newpapers mein ek corner hota tha “PENFRIENDS CORNER” ke naam se. Uss corner mein koyi bhi apna naam aur address likh kar newspaper ko send karta aur usska naam aur address publish hota tha paper mein, aur koyi bhi ussko khat likh sakta tha kyunke usska naam penfriend corner mein aya tha. Teenagers, ladke, ladkiyan, adult, aged log sab uss penfriend corner mein apna naam send karte the, jissko ek saathi ko khat likhna passand tha, new friends banana, desh se bhi aur videsh se bhi.

Uss zarye se bahot saare jodi bane jo aaj shaadi shuda successful couples bhi hein. Ab hota aisa bhi tha ke jiss ladki ka naam uss corner mein aya to ussko 200 se 500 ladke khat likhna shuru kar dete the. Ab ladki ko sab ko reply karna to mumkin hota nahin tha to kuch gine chunon ko reply karti, aur dhire dhire unn mein ek to zaroor passand ata tha…. apne baare mein likha kia karte the, kidhar rehte ho, family members kitne hein etc etc…. sab kuch bolte the apne baare mein. Iss tarah se har kissi ko koyi ek to passand ata hi tha phir apne photos bhi bhejte the chithi ke lifaafe mein. Aaj to whatsap par ek selfie lekar send kar diya jata hai, magar unn dinon postman ka wait karna padta tha chithi aane ka. Ek alag khusi aur mahaul bana rehta jinn logon ke penfriends hote the aur har roz postman ka intezaar kiya jaata tha. Postman ghussa hota aur kehta, “are shaadi karlo tum log ek baar yaar lafda khatam ho har roz aise chitthiyan lane ko mujhe!”

Ab desh bhar mein naujawanon ke beech yeh Silsila chalta tha. well padhe likhe logon ke bich of course.

To Abhi ke bhi penfriends the Ruhi ko jaanne se bahot pehle. Do saal pehle Abhi ne unn sab mein se 3 penfriends se mile bhi the, magar teenon mein se ek bhi Abhi ko personally passand nahin aaye the, to sirf dosti aur writing tak ka naata rakha unn sab se aur dhire dhire ladkiyon ne Abhi ke letters ko reply karna band kar diye kyunke unn ladkiyon ko dusre penfriends mil gaye.

Abhi ke do foreigners penfriends bhi the, ek France se Pascale naam se aur ek Jennifer naam se jo Scotland se thi. Donon ne apni apni tasveerein send kiye the Abhi ko, aur Abhi ne bhi apne pics send kiye the unn donon ko, aur iss saal jinn dinon Abhi Ruhi ke yahan kaam karta tha yeh donon foreigners aur 2 local girls Abhi ke penfriends the. Abhi itna handsome tha ke laldkiyan to ussko passand kar lete the magar Abhi ko koyi passand ata tab nah baat banti? Phir jabse Abhi ne Mehboob ke yahan kaam karna shuru kiya tab se ek bhi penfriend ke khaton ko reply kiya hi nahin tha.

To lifaafe mein chithi ke saath photo share karna aam baat hoti thi unn dinon. Sabhi karte the. Aur aise hi ek din Abhi ne Ruhi se kaha jaise penfriends photo share karte hein kyun wo share nahin karti Abhi ke saath aur kyun ek dusre ko likh nahin sakte? Abhi ne Ruhi ko bataya ke usske bhi penfriends hein foreign mein bhi hai, buss dost hein iss liye Ruhi se apne photo manga magar Ruhi phir bhi nahin maani photos dene ko.

Abhi apne diary mein likhta to kehta ke sala jiss se koyi naata nahin, ziada interest nahin unn ladkiyon ke photos hein usske paas aur jiss se beinteha pyar karta tha usski ek tasveer bhi nahin usske paas.

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Uss shaam ko ghar wapas jaate waqt Abhi aur Saeed ek hi seat par baithe the bus mein. Abhi ne Saeed se kaha,

“Bhai main beinteha pyar karta hoon Ruhi se bhai. Main uss se shadi karna chahta hoon. I am serious bhai.”

Saeed: “Mujhe pata hai Abhi. Sabko pata hai wahan. Magar kia ladki bhi tumko pyar karti hai ya aise hi tere saath dillagi kar rahi hai?!”

Abhi: “Karti hai nah bhai bahot pyar karti hai mujhse, wo kaise nahin dikha aap ko bhai?! Aap dekhte nahin har baar mere saamne aa jaati hai, kabhi bhi baat karti hai, har tarah se prove karti hai ke mujhse pyar karti hai, dekha nah lunch time ke baad kitne der tak usske saath tha main?!”

Saeed: “ghar ke piche the tum donon nah? kia kar rahe the utne der tak? Kuch ghalat to nahin kiya nah Abhi?!”

Abhi: ”are nahin bhai, buss kiss kiya ziada kuch nahin!”

Saeed ne ek ajeeb si muskurahat mein kaha,

“kiss karne diya ussne tujhe? Buss itne dinon ke mulakaat mein kiss tak aa gaye tum donon, tab to ladki pahunchi hui hai Abhi, aisa nahin lagta tumko kia?!”

Abhi saeed ka matlab nahin samjha to buss kaha,

“behad chahti hai mujhe wo bhi bhai issi liye nah!”

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Usske baad kaam par takriban har roz lunch time mein Abhi Ruhi se milta, donon pyar bhare kuch pal guzaarte. Kiss karte. Pyar ki baatein karte…. Yeh ek hafte tak guzra.

Donon ke bare mein din ba din sabko pata chalta gaya, jitney bhi log chaahe ussi angan ke ya baahar ke bhi jo aate the bus dekhne aur ghanton guzaarte the uss aangan mein sabko pata chal gaya tha ke Ruhi aur Abhi ke beech love hai. Sab khule aam ek dusre ko dikhte, aur ab jiada pyar dikhaate to baaki ke saare logon ko dikhta tha, aur danke ke choat par Abhi kehta tha ke wo Ruhi se bahot pyar karta hai aur jald hi uss se mangni karega, phir shaadi.

Aur ek tha wahan Reza, wo Mehboob ke bus mein conductor ka kaam karta tha, Mehboob ke aur 4 buses chal rahe the nah. To jab bhi wo aata aangan mein jaise ussko jalan hota Abhi aur Ruhi ko close dekh kar, yeh Abhi ne notice kiya tha. Reza koyi 23 se 25 ka naujawaan tha. Aur wo uss mohalle ka rehne wala tha aur Ruhi se usski jaan pehchaan thi pehle se kyun ke wahin ka rehne wala tha aur uss aangan mein usska ana jana tha pehle se.

To kayi baar aise ghatnaayein hue jahan kabhi Abhi Ruhi se kuch kehna chahta to Reza bich mein khada rehta, unn donon ko baat nahin karne deta, ya kabhi Ruhi kuch Abhi ko dene arahi ho to wo chiz Reza le leta tab Abi ko deta, ya jab Abhi aur Ruhi terrace ke paas baat kar rahe hote to Reza wahan aakar khada ho jaata aur ek saath baat karta Abhi aur Ruhi se. Abhi ko bahot ghusa ata tha magar kuch kehta nahin tha Reza se. Par Ruhi se kehta tha ke Reza weisa kyun karta hai, to Ruhi kehti ke ussko ignore karne ko kyun ke wo short minded hai, aur sahi mein wo Reza short minded hi tha.

Iss Reza ke baare mein baad mein kuch aur aega issi liye issko yahan introduce karna pada.

Baaki sab mamool par chal rahe the uss aangan mein. Ruhi ab bekaraar rehne lagi thi Abhi ke bina aisa anumaan hota tha kyunke wo had se ziada baahar aati thi, bus ke paas aati, Abhi ko dekhti, uss se muskuraati, jeeb se mock karti, etc. Abhi har roz zoron se seeti bajaate hue wo geet gata “pyar karte hein hum tumhein itna”

Abhi ki seeti mashoor ho gayi thi uss aangan mein uss gaane ke sur mein bajte hue. Aur itna zor se whistle karta ke door tak sunaayi deta aur jitney bhi ghar aas paas the sab sunte the aur sabko pata chal jaata tha ke Abhi Ruhi ke liye wo tune ka seeti bajaata hai.

Ek shaam ko Shweta, Farzina aur Ruhi aangan mein ek copy book hath mein liye kuch game khel rahe the, aur Farzina bus mein aayi Abhi ke paas aur ek puzzle likh kar pucha. Abhi ne fatafat jawaab likh kar de diya. Phir baad mein pata chala ke wo puzzle Ruhi ne likh kar diya tha Farzinah ko guess karne ke liye aur Farzina ne Abhi ki help se jawaab paa liya aur jaakar Ruhi ko dikhaya.

Usske baad, Abhi ke kuch puzzles jaise sawaal likhe aur Farzinah ko jaa kar Ruhi se usska jawaab likhne ko kaha. Ruhi ko samajh mein nahin aya. Dada ji wahin aangan mein ek chothe se chair par baithe bachon ko aate jaate dekh rahe the to ek baar ussne copy book manga dekhne ke liye ke kia ussko puzzle ka jawaab aega… ussne bhi try kiya magar nahin mila jawaab. To Abhi ne jawaab likh kar diya farzinah ko jissne Ruhi ko dikhaya…. Kitchen ke stairs se Ruhi Abhi ko haath ke ishaare se keh rahi thi ke wo bahot ziada intelligent hai usske mukable kyunke Abhi ne usske likhe saare puzzle solve kar diye the aur Ruhi ne usske ek bhi sawaal ka jawaab nahin de saka.

Aur ussi waqt aangan mein Reza bhi hta, usske haath mein copy book jata tha, dada ji ke haath, Mahesh kek haath aur mehbob kek haath mein se copy hote hue Ruhi ke paas jaata magar koyi jawaab nahin de paata Abhi ke sawaalon ka.

Iss se yeh saabit hota hai ke uss aangan mein sabhi ko Abhi aur Ruhi ke pyar ke baare mein pata chal chuka tha aur sabhi normal the inn donon ke rishte ko lekar. Kissi ko koyi problem nahin dikh raha tha uss waqt.

November ka mahina start hua aur Mehboob ne Saeed se baat kiya ke kia Christmas tak kaam pura nahin ho sakta aur bus road par nahin chal sakta uss din ko? To Saeed ne Abhi se salaah maanga. Abhi to chahta tha jitney ziada din ho sake wahin kaam kare, magar jiss raftaar se kaam badh raha tha full mumkin tha 25th December tak kaam ko khatam karne ki. To Abhi ko kehna pada ke haan ho paayega. To decide kiya gaya ke Sundays ko bhi ab kaam karne aayenge last day tak.

Wohi kiya gaya November ke start se har Sundays ko bhi kaam par aane lage pura team. Magar Sundays ko bhi Saturdays ki taraf 2 baje end karte the.

Engine laa diya gaya tha, to engine ka mechanic jisska naam tha George, aur usske saath 2 apprentice the, weh log engine par kaam karne lage, aur electrician ko bhi laya gaya tamaan wire works karne ke liye bus mein. Ab coach building ki andar ka kaam open chorrna tha taake tamaam wiring bus ke panel ke andar se bichaaya jaaye aur har bulb ki entry karna tha ceilings mein jo plywoods ke the…

Usske liye Mehboob ko plywoods kharidna pada, bade bade sheets the jissko usske ghar mein rakhne ke liye jagah nahin thi to ussko Ruhi ke ghar ki lounge mein rakha gaya tha….. Uss din pehli baar Abhi Ruhi ke lounge mein daakhil hua tha unn sheets ko Tony Mehboob aur Reza ke saath milkar carry karte hue sambhaal kar rakhne ke liye.

Jiss waqt Abhi andar gaya Ruhi so rahi thi, do peher ki neendh mein thi aur jiss kamre mein wo thi, lounge se nazar arahi thi. Bed par Ruhi ko uss tarah se sote hue dekh kar Abhi ko kuch hua. Ruhi sote hue itni khubsurat lag rahi thi, wo saans le rahi thi to usski chaati upar niche ho raha tha aur Abhi kuch der khada ussko nihaarta raha… ussko Dekhte hue Abhi Ruhi mein apni patni ko dekh raha tha aur socha ke ek din khud apne kamre mein ussko uss tarah se sote hue dekhega. Abhi ka mann kiya ke ussi waqt jaakar Ruhi ko apni baahon mein bhar le. Bahot pyar araha tha ussko Ruhi par uss waqt, ek masoom pari jaise soyi hui thi bekhabar, apni ussi nili dress mein, usske gaal par halki si hawa ki chalne se usski ek latt gaal ko sehla rahe the, Abhi uss nazaare ko dekh kar emotional hua….. Ruhi ke karib hone ka usska mann kiya, aur jaie ussne aage badhne ko socha to dekha ke Reza bhi usske bagal mein khada Ruhi ko wo bhi dekh raha tha…..

Abhi ko ghussa aya aur kaha,

“Tu kia dekh raha hai?”

Reza: “Wohi jo tu dekh raha hai!”

Mehboob aur tony nikal chuke the tab tak.

Abhi ko, Reza ko ek thapad maarne ka mann kiya magar ghusse par kaabu rakhte hue Abhi ne uss se kaha,

“Abe saale wo meri hai, iss liye main ussko dekh raha hoon, tujhe ussko weise dekhne ka koyi haq nahin hai samjha ?!”

Tab tak Reza baahar nikalte hue Abhi ko jawaab diya,

“Wo kaise teri ho sakti hai be? Sirf tujhse baat karti hai isska matlab yeh nahin ke wo teri ho gayi baat to mujhse bhi karti hai ti uss hisaab se wo meri bhi hai!”

Abhi ko bahot ghussa aya Reza ke jawaab se aur kaha,

“Abe bakwas karna bandh kar, tujhe pata bhi hai ke mere aur usske bich kia Rishta hai?”

Reza: “kia Rishta hai bata? Teri wife hai wo? Teri fiancée hai wo? Tumne usske saath engagement kiya hai? Nahin nah to tu bakwaas karna bandh kar saale ladki ko badnaam karne ata hai yahan?!”

To be continued….. (2450 words)

Cool update bhai.
Yeh Reza ab kahan se agaya Abhi aur Ruhi k bich danga karne?
Kia wo jalan se weisa kar raha hai?
Kia usska Ruhi k saath kuch tha to nahin pehle?
Kyun ussko itna taklif ho raha hai jan baki sabko Ruhi aur Abhi k baare mein pata hai to?
Bhai sach bataun ye character bilkool acha nahin laga mujhe.
Anyway update to thik tha magar iss Reza se inn pyar karne walon k bich koyi aafat nah aaye.
Keep up the good work bhai.