Update agaya
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Update agaya
Alfaaz nahin mere paas bhai ke iss update k baare mein kuch kahun.
Samajh mein nahin araha ke main kia kahun aap ki iss behtareen update ko.
Bahut jabardast, majedaar, lajawaab likha hai aap ne.
Iss update ki khaasiyat ye hai k aap ne jiss bariki se donon k bich ka romance ka varnaan kiya hai wo adbudh hai. Tareefe kaabil hai. Itna majedar hai k padhte hi rehne ka mann karta hai. Iodate kabhi khatm nah ho aisa dil chahta hai.
Jitna pyar lutf muhabat donon k bich dikh raha hai aisa pyar agar naakaam hua to laanat hai yaar. Donon ko mila dena chahiye chaahe kuch bhi ho.
Aisi jodi to rab ne hi banaya hoga bhai.
Shabaash casi bhai aur aap ka bahut shukriya hanare liye itni behtareen kahani likhne ke liye. Hats off.
bahot shukriya dostKia update hai bhai wah wah wah. Super fantastic, MINDBLOWING, breathtaking, jhakaas, faaaduuu, dhansuu, shaandaar, lajawaab.
Itna romamyic ke aur jitna bhi pages hote padhte hi jaate padhte hi jaate aur kabhi nah end hote aisa tha ye update. Bahut bahut pyar hein donon mein bhai aisa pyar kismat se milte hein. Mat juda karo donon ko hai. Itna hi keh sakta hoon.
An padhne ha raha hun casi bhai
Congratulation for 100 pages
100 pages ke liye bhai
for 100 pages bhai
thanks very much dear friendsfor the 100th page Casinar ji.
Will read the update a bit later
casinar bhai............
100 pages complete hone par
apke views bhi 3,71,000+ ho chuke hain.........
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is update mein abhi aur roohi ka poyar ek paydaan aage badha
ek dusre ke man hi nahi tan ko bhi feel karna shuru kar diya dono ne......
lekin ek baat achchhi hai......... ki
rojana har waqt ki luka-chhipi ki bajay.... doosron ki nazron me aane ki bajay waqt nikalkar akele mein mulakat kar li
lekin abhi ruhi ke man me kya chhupa hai............samne nahi laa rahi
jabki abhi ki har baat open hai
ab dekhte hai...........ruhi umr bhar ke liye abhi ki cigarette chhudane ki pahal kaise aur kab karegi
keep it up
Bhai pehle to 100 pages reach hone ki.
Bhai bahut hi behtareen romantic update hai. Superb. Fantastic. Bahut acha laga padhe.
Bahut hi badhya likha hai aap ne. Har ek pal ko aisa varnaan kiya hai ke dil mein utar gaya ye update.
Inn donon ka pyar salaamat rahe bhai.
Aur aise aur bahut updates dena bhai please. Bahut hi khubsurat update hai bhai kayi baar padha mai ne.
Very beautiful and romantic update Casinar ji.
You have written this with the heart it seems. So lovely, tender, sweet.
Loved every moment you made happy for Abhi and Ruhi.
Each and every of their spoken lines or way of talking or behaving were very beautifully portrayed.
The lovely cute manners and way of talking of Ruhi was so full of love and too sweet.
The smoking condition was awww so cute from the part of Abhi. Loved that.
Splendid, very very well narrated and beautifullt excuted update casinar ji.
Hats off.
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