Romance Uff! Ye Mohabbat ! (completed)

[Adirshi]

Fantastic update bhai

Bahut bahut shukriya bhai

 

[Adirshi]

इस कहानी का हर अपडेट्स एक ताजगी भरा एहसास दिलाते हैं । एक तृप्ति सी महसूस होती है । यह अपडेट भी बहुत ही उम्दा था । अनिकेत और कोमल की बातें एक बार फिर से चेहरे पर मुस्कान लाने वाला रहा ।
आसान नहीं होता किसी के चेहरे पर मुस्कराहट लाना और वह भी आज के हालात में । पर आपने अपने अद्भुत लेखनी एवं नेचुरल कामेडी से इसे सहज बना दिया ।

अविनाश अब कशमकश कहें या दूविधा कहें , वाली स्थिति में आ गया है । संजना की बातें उसे अच्छी लगती है । उसके करीब रहना भी उसे पसंद आता है । पर कोमल के प्रति उसका एकतरफा प्यार इन सब चीजों पर भारी पड़ जाता है ।

इधर अनिकेत और कोमल दोनों पति-पत्नी को इस बात पता चल गया है कि अविनाश भी कभी , किसी को चाहा करता था । जरूर वो दोनों अविनाश से सच्चाई जानना चाहेंगे । और मुझे विश्वास है अविनाश उन्हें झूठ बोल कर टरकाने का प्रयास करेगा ।
लेकिन सच्चाई कभी न कभी तो सामने आनी ही है । उस वक्त के क्लाइमेक्स का इंतजार रहेगा ।

आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग एंड जगमग जगमग अपडेट Adirshi bhai.

Bahut bahut shukriya bhai

 

[Adirshi]

Update 20​

Aniket- ha canteen me tere baap ne lecture rakha hai na haramjade..

Avi aage kuch bolta isse pehle hi sanjana ne avi ko hatho se ishara karke piche dekhne kaha, avi ne mud ke dekha to aniket uske piche haste huye khada tha…..

Aaj avi bahut dino baad aniket se mil raha tha isiliye saari baate bhul ke avi apni jagah par se utha aur aniket ke gale lag gaya..

Aniket- bsdk teko kabhi yaad nahi aati kya meri ?

Avi- anya teri yaad na aaye aisa ho sakta hai kya

Aniket aage kuch bolta isse pehle hi avi se use baithne kaha, saamne sanjana thi hi, ab kehta hai na agar aapke piche aapko khane ke liye sher laga ho au aap char log usse bachne ke liye bhag rahe ho to is race me ye jaruri nahi hai ki first kaun hai but make sure ki tum second last ho tabhi bach paoge aur yaha is situation me aniket sher tha aur ab sanjana uske samne thi, avi ne aniket se gale mil ke pehla bouncer halke se duck kar diya tha aur aniket ki toph ab sanjana ki or mod di thi.. aur hua bhi aisa hi aniket sanjana ki taraf dekhte huye bola

Aniket- arey waah, patil madam aap bhi ho idhar, badhiya badhiya, to kaisi hai aap ?

Sanjana ne haklate huye jawab diya

Sanjana- m.. mai theek hu..

Aniket- gajab,.. aur aapki dost ke kya haal hai ?

Sanjana ko samajh hi nahi aaya ke aniket kis bare me baat kar raha hai

Sanjana- dost ? meri kaunsi dost ?

Aniket mand mand muskura raha tha

Aniket- arey aapki dost bhul gayi kya ? wo jiska aur avi ka kuch… aap aayi thi na mujhse milne..

Sanjana kuch nahi boli aur usko aisa confusion me dekh ke avi se apni hasi control nahi ho rahi thi aur aniket to full form me tha

Aniket- par manna padega dosti ho to aisi, matlab dost ke liye info nikalne aap waha tak aa gayi, uski taraf se propose bhi kar diya, gajab, ek kaam karo fir, apni dost ko hatao side me aur uski jagah tum hi jhelo is gadhe ko..

Sanjana ko laga tha ke aniket uski madad karega par aniket yaha usiki firki le raha tha, sanjana jaisi taise boli

Sanjana- sorry

Aniket- na, ye aisa sorry biri apne ko manjur nahi, tumhari taraf char beer pending hai apni ab

Avi ekdum se bola

Avi- chaaarrr !

Aniket- kyu, tu nahi lega kya

Dono hasne lage aur ab sanjana boli

Sanjana- ab galti ki hai saja to bhugatni padegi, tum batao tab paanch beer hajir ho jayengi

Aniket- paanch nahi char do mere liye do avya ke liye

Sanjana- aur mai kya tum logo ka muh takungi ek mere liye

Ab aniket ekdum khush

Aniket- arey gajab, ye huyi na baat apni tuning sahi jamegi, sanjana aaj se tum hamare gang me aur kuch chinta nahi karne ka mai hu tumhare sath.

Sanjana bhi has rahi thi, waise dekha jaye to aniket use pehli mulakat me hi bha gaya tha upar se avi ke case me madad kar raha tha to fir to ab aniket uska favourite tha, waise bhi ye aniket ki khas baat thi wo kisi ko bhi apna sa bana leta tha.. fir wo sanjana ko bola

Anikiet- koaml kaisi lagi?

Ye sawal aayega ye sanjana ne nahi socha tha fir bhi wo boli

Sanjana- achi hai, aur us din ke liye meri taraf se sorry kehna use wo thodi galat fehm ho gayi thi isiliye maine waisa bartav kiya aur sorry bolne ka chance hi nahi mila

Aniket- hamara pehalwan hai wo baki manna padega tumko jo himmat tumne dikhayi wo to mai bhi nahi nahi karta, never mind ulta usne tumko sorry bola hai

Sanjana avi ki or dekhte huye boli

Sanjana- use meri taraf se sorry ke sath sath thanks bhi kehna

Aniket- wo kyu bhala ?

Sanjana- usne meri ek bahut badi samasya hal kar di hai aur ha use ye bhi bolna ki jo bhi maine us din kaha tha sab sach hai..

Aniket ekdum khush hote huye bola

Aniket- shabass, aise hi date rehne ka hum dono tumhare sath hai..

Idhar avi ko dheere dheere tension aa raha tha, usne badi chalaki se aniket ko sanjana ki taraf divert kiya tha aur ab sanjana ne wapis uska dhyan avi ki or kar diya tha..

Aniket avi ko dekhte huye ekdum se bola

Aniket- bolo Avinash seth tumko kya bolna hai

Avi- kuch nahi

Aniket- kuch nahi matlab

Avi- anya baad me baat karte apan

Aniket kuch samay shant baitha aur fir ekdum se utha aur bola

Aniket- chal..

Avi- kidhar ?

Aniket- samshan me..

Dono sanjana ko bye bol ke college se nikle aur car me baith ke aage badh gaye aur anilket thoda chidhte huye bola

Aniket- kya natak lagaya be.. chya mayla wo ladki sidha teko muh pe I Love You bol rahi ur tera alag hi natak chal raha..

Avi kuch nahi bola tab aniket aage bola

Aniket- kya sahi ladki hai wo uske samne apna thobda dekha hai kya aaine me ? bsdk bhains ka baccha mar gaya tha to usne doodh dena band kar diya tha tab kku ne teko bithaya tha uske samne tab teko apna baccha samajh ke bhains ne doodh dioya tha, aisa tu, kaha tu kaha wo fir bhi wo pyaar karti hai tere se to problem kya hai..

Aniket bole ja raha tha par avi koi jawab nahi de raha tha aur aniket bhi avi ko ache se pehchanta tha usko ache se pata tha ke ab tak avi khud nahi chahega wo ek shabd bhi nahi bolega par aniket bhi9 haar manne ko tayar nahi tha

Aniket- bhadkhau bol kuch, awaj to nikal kya fevicol se muh chipka liya kya bsdk.. ya ab third degree shuru karu

Aur akhir me avi bola

Avi- kya bolu ?
aniket- suna, satyanarayan ki katha suna

Avi jaise taise hasa, aur ab ye aage kuch bolega nahi isiliye aniket chup chap gaadi chalane laga aur fir avi ne pucha

Avi- kidhar ja rahe apan ?

Aniket- gaon ko, bahut din ho gaye aaj tekdi pe jayenge..

Avi upar se bhale hi muskura raha tha par ander se dara hua tha, gaon pahuch ke aniket ne use ghar par chhoda aur sham ko tayar rehne ka keh ke chala gaya

Ab gharwalo se mil kar khushi to kyu avi ko par dimag me ab aage kya karna hai yahi chal raha tha, wo soch raha tha ki agar aniket ko pata chal gaya ki wo komal se pyaar karta hai to wo kya karega aur bas isi khayal se hi avi darr ke kampne laga.. wo pyaar ke bagar reh sakta tha dost ke bagair nahi.. usne soch kiya tha chahe kuch ho jaye wo komal ka naam apni juban par nahi aane dega par aniket ne pucha to kya jawab dega yahi use samajh nahi aa raha tha aur usne man hi man ek kahani tayar ki

Sham ko decidehuye mutabik aniket aaya aur wo aur avi dono apne adde pe yni tekdi par gaye, aniket ne beer open ki aur dono shanti se beer ke ghut lete baithe the, aniket ab serious tha

Aniket- avi bhai tere man me kya chal raha hai batayega kuch ? baki ki sab baato se meko koi fark nahi padta mere liye sab shunya hai tujhe kya lagta hai ye important hai, sanjana achi ladki hai, khandani hai, padhi likhi hai tujhe kya lagta hai ?

Avi- isme koi shak nahi hai ke wo ek achi ladki hai, meri achi dost bhi hai par hum me bahut fark hai bhai..

Aniket- kaisa fark ?

Avi- anya mai kaun hu kya hu tu ache se jaanta hai, abe wo rahisi me pali huyi ladki hai ur mere to padhai ka kharcha bhi tu utha raha hai

Avi ko ache se pata tha ki ye baat chhedte hi aniket gussa hoga aur uska dhyan sanjana ke mudde par se bhatkega aur aisa hua bhi aniket bhadak gaya

Aniket- bsdk hajar baar bola hai teko ki avya paiso ki baat mat nikala kar wo mai upar jae tere baap se wasul lunga fir bhi wahi baat kyu karta hai to BC

Avi- mere na bolne se sach thodi badal jayega aur tu chahta hai na ke mai sanjana ko ha bol du, ek baat bata tu kitna jaanta hai usko ? bhul gaya kya ye wahi ladki hai jo pehle din se mere piche padi hai,mujhe satane ke liye bahut koshish kar chuki hai, chanchal swabhav hai bhai uska aur ab ye pyaar ka bukhar pata nahi kitne din tikega..

Aniket thoda shant hua

Aniket- nahi yaar tu kuch bhi bol mujhe dil ke lagta hai ke wo sach me pyaar karti hai tere se……

 

[Adirshi]

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[Naik]

Update 19​

Idhar komal college se nikli aur sodha aniket ke paas dukan me pahuchi aur aniket use dekhte hi bola

Aniket- aao aao malkin sahiba, aaj aap direct dukan me ?

Dukan me thodi gardi thi, log the, tab komal boli

Komal- suniye, jara bahar aaiye na, mujhe baat karni hai kuch

Aniket- Suniye..! direct suniye..! aay haay aise bulaogi to mai paatal me bhi aa jau, don’t worry sabko pata hai kitna darta hu mai tumse, itni ijjat mat do ab warna sabko lagega mai jhuth bolta hu unke samne..

Tab komal apni aankhe badi karte huye boli

Komal- ho gaya, ab baahar aaoge

Aniket- bas abhi aaya rani sarkar..

Itna bol ke aniket baahar aaya aur dono gaadi me jakar baithe… komal bahut exited thi

Komal- mai na aaj avi ke college me gayi thi

Ye sun ke anikiet bhi excited ho gaya aur bola

Aniket- kya bola avya…

Uske baad komal ne aniket ko sara kissa bataya jike sun ke aniket ekdum khush ho gaya

Aniket- ek number kaam kiya hai kammo.. kya baat hai..! aaj mai itna khush hu ke direct tajmahal tumhare naam karta hu..

Komal- ha, aur tajmahal kya narayanrao rane ka hai ?

Aniket- wo jane do abhi, maine kaha thga na maine sanjana ki aankho me dekha tha, aur wo mujhe bana rahi thi, boli dost ke bare me baat kar rahi hai..

Aniket ki badbad shuru hi thi par komal kuch soch rahi thi, fir komal boli

Komal-sanjana ne maan liya ki wo avi ke pyaar karti hai par avi, avi kuch bhi nahi bola

Aniket- kyu?

Komal- shayad sanjana jo bol rahi thi wo sach ho avi kisi se pyaar karta ho, kyuki agar aisa na hota to avi bhi kuch na kuch react jarur karta..

Aniket- mera na is mamle me dimag chalna hi band ho gaya hai, ek kaam karta hu kal hi subah harami ko leke aata hu aur do kaan ke niche baja ke puchta hu ki ye kya natak hai…

Komal- maine to mera kaam kar diya aur wqo successful bhi ho gaya, Mr. Aniket Rane ab tumhari bari hai dekhte hai jya jhande gaadte ho tum

Aniket- O rani sarkar, challenge nahi karne ka, maine man bana liya to kal ke kal un dono ki shadi bhi karwa sakta hu

Komal- aisa kya ? shakal dekhi hai apni, bade aaye shadi karane wale.. aajtak wo kisse pyaar karta ha ye to pata nahi chala tumhe aur khas dost ho na tum uske..

Aniket- wo aajtak mai tumhar pyaar me khoya hua tha isiliye dhyan hi nahi diya..

Komal- theek hai theek hai, par ab to lag jao kaam pe

Aniket- wo to mai karunga hu par uske pehle, Shabass kammo, aaj tum sahi hisab se Rane khandan ki bahu lag rahi ho..

Komal- par jo bhi karoge dhyan se karna, wo sanjana ke pitaji police hai aur love story me maar khane ka itihas hai tumhara..

Aniket- kammo tu darr rahi hai ya dara rahi hai..

Komal- dono..

Aniket- Don’t Worry hamare bapu hai na sa,bhalne ke liye.. pichli baar bhi to sambhal liya tha unhone aur Avya ke liye kuch bhi

Uske baad komal ghar aur aniket dukan me chale gaye

Wahi dusri taraf Avi tension me aa gaya tha.. sanjana ka use tension nahi tha asal tension ye tha ke komal ko ye sab pata chal gaya tha matlab aniket ko bhi pata chal hi chukka tha aura b use bas ek hi darr tha ke kuch bhi ho jaye komal ka naam bahar nahi aa chahiye, sanjana ne use dharmsankat me daal diya tha aur ab isse bachne ke liye use bas ek hi rasta najar aa raha tha wo tha sanjana ke pyaar ko accept karna jisse koi bhi uske past ke bare ne nahi puchega par wo ye karne ke liye ready nahi tha

Wo ab bhi komal ko dilo jaan se chahta tha par ab komal aur uska sath aana mumkin nahi tha.. halanki wo bhi nahi chahta tha ke komal aur aniket kabhi bhi alag ho wo un dono ke liye khus tha par jhuth muth hi sahi wo komal ki jagah kisi ko nahi de sakta tha aur isiliye wo sanjana ke propose ka jawab nahi dena chahta tha..kya kare kya na kare samajh hi nahi aa raha tha aur ab wo aniket ko kaise face karega ye use sochta tha.. use aniket ka swabhav ache se pata tha uske dimag me koi baat aa gayi to wo hath dho ke nahi balki naha dho ke uske piche lag jata tha

Aise me ek pal wo bhi aaya jab avi ko sanjana ka I Love you bolna yaad aaya aur uske dil ke chote me kone me ek khusi ki lehar daud gayi aur aankho samne sanjana ke wo shabd

“tumhe tumhara pyaar nahi mila to mujhse mera pyaar to pane do”

Ye shabh mano kisi hatode ki tarah uske dimag par prahar kar rahe the aur agle hi pal usne apne dimag se sare khayal nikal diye

Avi- nahi nahi.. mai komal ki jagah kisi ko bhi nahi de sakta

Aur avi ne sakht bane rehne ka faisla kar liya par kahi na kahi wo bhi ye baat jaanta the ke uske is decision ko surang lagne wali hai

Agle din avi hamesha ki tarah college pahucha aur canteen me jake baitha tab sanjana bhi waha aayi aur halke se boli

Sanjana- good morning may love..

Sanjana ki baat sun ke avi thoda chauka…

Avi- oye, sanju kya boli tu ?

Sanjana bhi kandhe jhatakte huye boli

Sanjana- kaha, kuch bhi to nahi

Avi- abhi abhi kuch bola tune..

Sanjana- don’t worry kisi ne nahi suna aur waise bhi tum jo mere liye ho wahi bola hai..

Waise dekha jaye to sanjana ke muh se may love sun ke kahi na kahi avi ko bhi acha laga tha par usne ye baat jahir nahi hone di aur thoda chidhte huye bola

Avi- stop it..! tumko nahi lagta tum jabardasti kar rahi ho ?

Sanjana- jabardasti aur mai ? bilkul nahi.. maine tumse kaha ki tum bhi mujhe I love you bolo, aur don’t worry mai aisa bolungi bhi nahi, kyuki mujhe yakin hai ek na ek din tum khud mujhe ye baat bologe, khudse..

Avi- aur agar mai tab bhi nahi bola to

Sanjana- to mai raah dekhungi

Avi- tum paagal ho.

Sanjana- yours only..

Avi ko kya kare samajhg nahi aa raha tha aur itni baat bhi sach thi ke sanjana ke bagair use bhi chain nahi milta tha isiliye wo use taal bhi nahi raha tha aur akhir me wo pareshan hote huye bola

Avi- tu idhar meri jaan kha rahi hai aur udhar komal ne anya ko sab bata bhi diya hoga aur anya matlab rakshas hai tum nahi janti use..

Sanjana bhi jaldi se bol gayi

Sanjana- kuch bhi mat bolo bahut acha ladka hai wo..

Ye sunte hi avi ko ek jordar dhakka laga

Avi- matlab ? aur tere ko ye kaise pata

Sanjana- kaise matlab ? mai mili hu usse ek baar

Avi ne ye sun ke apna matha peet liya

Avi- khatam..tata..bye bye.. agaya mai ab.. ab kuch nahi ho sakta..

Sanjana- aise kyu bol rahe ho.. kya hua

Avi- tumko pata nahi hai anya kya chiz hai.. wo bhoot hai bhoot auyr ab ye bhoot mere piche lagne wala hai

Sanjana ekdum khud hote huye boli

Sanjana- sach me..!

Avi- hao, sahi me, pata nahi tumko kaunse muhurat me usse milne ki baat sujhi thi..

Sanjana- fir kya karti mai.. tumse kuch bhi pucho to tum koi jawab side tarah se nahi dete the to usse mil li

Avi- kya kya bola usko tumne?

Sanjana- kuch khas nahi bas usse itna pucha tha ke kya tum kisi se pyaar karte ho bas, sorry

Sanjana ne apne kaan pakad liye aur avi ko hase ya roye ye hi samajh nahi aa raha tha

Avi- vaat lag gayi matlab puri

Sanjana- use bhi pata nahi tha ki tum kisi se pyaar karte ho, avi sach sach batana tumne bas mujhe taalne ke liye hi to kisi ladki be bare me kahani nahi banayi na ? kyuki aisa kuch hota to aniket ko pata hota aur don’t worry maine use nahi bataya ki mai tumse pyaar karti hu bol diya ke meri dost chahti hai tumhe

Avi- waah !! shabass!! Tumne bola aur anya ne mana, wo bahut pahuchi huyi chiz hai, sirf T bhi bola to wo pehchan leta hai ke T table ka hai ya Talwar ka aur usne bhi tumne ye sab komal ke samne bola hai aur komal ko malum matlab anya ko malum.. ho gaya kalyan

Itne ne avi ka phone bajne laga

Avi- shaitan ka naam liya shaitan hajir, anya ka hi phone hai

Avi ko samajh nahi aa raha tha ke phone par kya bole.. usne jaise taise phone uthaya aur awaj normal karte huye bola

Avi- hi anya kaisa hai bhai..

Udhar se awaj aaya

Aniket- mai ekdum handsome, hamesha ke jaisa tu bol kidhar hai ?

Avi- mai to class me hu lecture ke liye aaya hu

Aniket- ha canteen me tere baap ne lecture rakha hai na haramjade..

Avi aage kuch bolta isse pehle hi sanjana ne avi ko hatho se ishara karke piche dekhne kaha, avi ne mud ke dekha to aniket uske piche haste huye khada tha…..

Bahot behtareen shaandaar update bhai
Ab aniket achche se khaber lega avi ki

 

[Chinturocky]

Badhiya update per anya ki baat bhi sahi hai. Jab jimmedari ki thokar lagti hai tab sabse pahle pyaar ka bhoot utarta hai.

 

[Naik]

Update 20​

Aniket- ha canteen me tere baap ne lecture rakha hai na haramjade..

Avi aage kuch bolta isse pehle hi sanjana ne avi ko hatho se ishara karke piche dekhne kaha, avi ne mud ke dekha to aniket uske piche haste huye khada tha…..

Aaj avi bahut dino baad aniket se mil raha tha isiliye saari baate bhul ke avi apni jagah par se utha aur aniket ke gale lag gaya..

Aniket- bsdk teko kabhi yaad nahi aati kya meri ?

Avi- anya teri yaad na aaye aisa ho sakta hai kya

Aniket aage kuch bolta isse pehle hi avi se use baithne kaha, saamne sanjana thi hi, ab kehta hai na agar aapke piche aapko khane ke liye sher laga ho au aap char log usse bachne ke liye bhag rahe ho to is race me ye jaruri nahi hai ki first kaun hai but make sure ki tum second last ho tabhi bach paoge aur yaha is situation me aniket sher tha aur ab sanjana uske samne thi, avi ne aniket se gale mil ke pehla bouncer halke se duck kar diya tha aur aniket ki toph ab sanjana ki or mod di thi.. aur hua bhi aisa hi aniket sanjana ki taraf dekhte huye bola

Aniket- arey waah, patil madam aap bhi ho idhar, badhiya badhiya, to kaisi hai aap ?

Sanjana ne haklate huye jawab diya

Sanjana- m.. mai theek hu..

Aniket- gajab,.. aur aapki dost ke kya haal hai ?

Sanjana ko samajh hi nahi aaya ke aniket kis bare me baat kar raha hai

Sanjana- dost ? meri kaunsi dost ?

Aniket mand mand muskura raha tha

Aniket- arey aapki dost bhul gayi kya ? wo jiska aur avi ka kuch… aap aayi thi na mujhse milne..

Sanjana kuch nahi boli aur usko aisa confusion me dekh ke avi se apni hasi control nahi ho rahi thi aur aniket to full form me tha

Aniket- par manna padega dosti ho to aisi, matlab dost ke liye info nikalne aap waha tak aa gayi, uski taraf se propose bhi kar diya, gajab, ek kaam karo fir, apni dost ko hatao side me aur uski jagah tum hi jhelo is gadhe ko..

Sanjana ko laga tha ke aniket uski madad karega par aniket yaha usiki firki le raha tha, sanjana jaisi taise boli

Sanjana- sorry

Aniket- na, ye aisa sorry biri apne ko manjur nahi, tumhari taraf char beer pending hai apni ab

Avi ekdum se bola

Avi- chaaarrr !

Aniket- kyu, tu nahi lega kya

Dono hasne lage aur ab sanjana boli

Sanjana- ab galti ki hai saja to bhugatni padegi, tum batao tab paanch beer hajir ho jayengi

Aniket- paanch nahi char do mere liye do avya ke liye

Sanjana- aur mai kya tum logo ka muh takungi ek mere liye

Ab aniket ekdum khush

Aniket- arey gajab, ye huyi na baat apni tuning sahi jamegi, sanjana aaj se tum hamare gang me aur kuch chinta nahi karne ka mai hu tumhare sath.

Sanjana bhi has rahi thi, waise dekha jaye to aniket use pehli mulakat me hi bha gaya tha upar se avi ke case me madad kar raha tha to fir to ab aniket uska favourite tha, waise bhi ye aniket ki khas baat thi wo kisi ko bhi apna sa bana leta tha.. fir wo sanjana ko bola

Anikiet- koaml kaisi lagi?

Ye sawal aayega ye sanjana ne nahi socha tha fir bhi wo boli

Sanjana- achi hai, aur us din ke liye meri taraf se sorry kehna use wo thodi galat fehm ho gayi thi isiliye maine waisa bartav kiya aur sorry bolne ka chance hi nahi mila

Aniket- hamara pehalwan hai wo baki manna padega tumko jo himmat tumne dikhayi wo to mai bhi nahi nahi karta, never mind ulta usne tumko sorry bola hai

Sanjana avi ki or dekhte huye boli

Sanjana- use meri taraf se sorry ke sath sath thanks bhi kehna

Aniket- wo kyu bhala ?

Sanjana- usne meri ek bahut badi samasya hal kar di hai aur ha use ye bhi bolna ki jo bhi maine us din kaha tha sab sach hai..

Aniket ekdum khush hote huye bola

Aniket- shabass, aise hi date rehne ka hum dono tumhare sath hai..

Idhar avi ko dheere dheere tension aa raha tha, usne badi chalaki se aniket ko sanjana ki taraf divert kiya tha aur ab sanjana ne wapis uska dhyan avi ki or kar diya tha..

Aniket avi ko dekhte huye ekdum se bola

Aniket- bolo Avinash seth tumko kya bolna hai

Avi- kuch nahi

Aniket- kuch nahi matlab

Avi- anya baad me baat karte apan

Aniket kuch samay shant baitha aur fir ekdum se utha aur bola

Aniket- chal..

Avi- kidhar ?

Aniket- samshan me..

Dono sanjana ko bye bol ke college se nikle aur car me baith ke aage badh gaye aur anilket thoda chidhte huye bola

Aniket- kya natak lagaya be.. chya mayla wo ladki sidha teko muh pe I Love You bol rahi ur tera alag hi natak chal raha..

Avi kuch nahi bola tab aniket aage bola

Aniket- kya sahi ladki hai wo uske samne apna thobda dekha hai kya aaine me ? bsdk bhains ka baccha mar gaya tha to usne doodh dena band kar diya tha tab kku ne teko bithaya tha uske samne tab teko apna baccha samajh ke bhains ne doodh dioya tha, aisa tu, kaha tu kaha wo fir bhi wo pyaar karti hai tere se to problem kya hai..

Aniket bole ja raha tha par avi koi jawab nahi de raha tha aur aniket bhi avi ko ache se pehchanta tha usko ache se pata tha ke ab tak avi khud nahi chahega wo ek shabd bhi nahi bolega par aniket bhi9 haar manne ko tayar nahi tha

Aniket- bhadkhau bol kuch, awaj to nikal kya fevicol se muh chipka liya kya bsdk.. ya ab third degree shuru karu

Aur akhir me avi bola

Avi- kya bolu ?
aniket- suna, satyanarayan ki katha suna

Avi jaise taise hasa, aur ab ye aage kuch bolega nahi isiliye aniket chup chap gaadi chalane laga aur fir avi ne pucha

Avi- kidhar ja rahe apan ?

Aniket- gaon ko, bahut din ho gaye aaj tekdi pe jayenge..

Avi upar se bhale hi muskura raha tha par ander se dara hua tha, gaon pahuch ke aniket ne use ghar par chhoda aur sham ko tayar rehne ka keh ke chala gaya

Ab gharwalo se mil kar khushi to kyu avi ko par dimag me ab aage kya karna hai yahi chal raha tha, wo soch raha tha ki agar aniket ko pata chal gaya ki wo komal se pyaar karta hai to wo kya karega aur bas isi khayal se hi avi darr ke kampne laga.. wo pyaar ke bagar reh sakta tha dost ke bagair nahi.. usne soch kiya tha chahe kuch ho jaye wo komal ka naam apni juban par nahi aane dega par aniket ne pucha to kya jawab dega yahi use samajh nahi aa raha tha aur usne man hi man ek kahani tayar ki

Sham ko decidehuye mutabik aniket aaya aur wo aur avi dono apne adde pe yni tekdi par gaye, aniket ne beer open ki aur dono shanti se beer ke ghut lete baithe the, aniket ab serious tha

Aniket- avi bhai tere man me kya chal raha hai batayega kuch ? baki ki sab baato se meko koi fark nahi padta mere liye sab shunya hai tujhe kya lagta hai ye important hai, sanjana achi ladki hai, khandani hai, padhi likhi hai tujhe kya lagta hai ?

Avi- isme koi shak nahi hai ke wo ek achi ladki hai, meri achi dost bhi hai par hum me bahut fark hai bhai..

Aniket- kaisa fark ?

Avi- anya mai kaun hu kya hu tu ache se jaanta hai, abe wo rahisi me pali huyi ladki hai ur mere to padhai ka kharcha bhi tu utha raha hai

Avi ko ache se pata tha ki ye baat chhedte hi aniket gussa hoga aur uska dhyan sanjana ke mudde par se bhatkega aur aisa hua bhi aniket bhadak gaya

Aniket- bsdk hajar baar bola hai teko ki avya paiso ki baat mat nikala kar wo mai upar jae tere baap se wasul lunga fir bhi wahi baat kyu karta hai to BC

Avi- mere na bolne se sach thodi badal jayega aur tu chahta hai na ke mai sanjana ko ha bol du, ek baat bata tu kitna jaanta hai usko ? bhul gaya kya ye wahi ladki hai jo pehle din se mere piche padi hai,mujhe satane ke liye bahut koshish kar chuki hai, chanchal swabhav hai bhai uska aur ab ye pyaar ka bukhar pata nahi kitne din tikega..

Aniket thoda shant hua

Aniket- nahi yaar tu kuch bhi bol mujhe dil ke lagta hai ke wo sach me pyaar karti hai tere se……

Bahot behtareen shaandaar update bhai
Lajawab
Aniket mana lega kaisa na kaise kerke lekin avi ko bhi aage badhna padega kyonki use bhi pata komal ab use nahi mil sakti chahe jo woh kare
Dekhte h kab tak
Superb

 

[Jaguaar]

Update 20​

Aniket- ha canteen me tere baap ne lecture rakha hai na haramjade..

Avi aage kuch bolta isse pehle hi sanjana ne avi ko hatho se ishara karke piche dekhne kaha, avi ne mud ke dekha to aniket uske piche haste huye khada tha…..

Aaj avi bahut dino baad aniket se mil raha tha isiliye saari baate bhul ke avi apni jagah par se utha aur aniket ke gale lag gaya..

Aniket- bsdk teko kabhi yaad nahi aati kya meri ?

Avi- anya teri yaad na aaye aisa ho sakta hai kya

Aniket aage kuch bolta isse pehle hi avi se use baithne kaha, saamne sanjana thi hi, ab kehta hai na agar aapke piche aapko khane ke liye sher laga ho au aap char log usse bachne ke liye bhag rahe ho to is race me ye jaruri nahi hai ki first kaun hai but make sure ki tum second last ho tabhi bach paoge aur yaha is situation me aniket sher tha aur ab sanjana uske samne thi, avi ne aniket se gale mil ke pehla bouncer halke se duck kar diya tha aur aniket ki toph ab sanjana ki or mod di thi.. aur hua bhi aisa hi aniket sanjana ki taraf dekhte huye bola

Aniket- arey waah, patil madam aap bhi ho idhar, badhiya badhiya, to kaisi hai aap ?

Sanjana ne haklate huye jawab diya

Sanjana- m.. mai theek hu..

Aniket- gajab,.. aur aapki dost ke kya haal hai ?

Sanjana ko samajh hi nahi aaya ke aniket kis bare me baat kar raha hai

Sanjana- dost ? meri kaunsi dost ?

Aniket mand mand muskura raha tha

Aniket- arey aapki dost bhul gayi kya ? wo jiska aur avi ka kuch… aap aayi thi na mujhse milne..

Sanjana kuch nahi boli aur usko aisa confusion me dekh ke avi se apni hasi control nahi ho rahi thi aur aniket to full form me tha

Aniket- par manna padega dosti ho to aisi, matlab dost ke liye info nikalne aap waha tak aa gayi, uski taraf se propose bhi kar diya, gajab, ek kaam karo fir, apni dost ko hatao side me aur uski jagah tum hi jhelo is gadhe ko..

Sanjana ko laga tha ke aniket uski madad karega par aniket yaha usiki firki le raha tha, sanjana jaisi taise boli

Sanjana- sorry

Aniket- na, ye aisa sorry biri apne ko manjur nahi, tumhari taraf char beer pending hai apni ab

Avi ekdum se bola

Avi- chaaarrr !

Aniket- kyu, tu nahi lega kya

Dono hasne lage aur ab sanjana boli

Sanjana- ab galti ki hai saja to bhugatni padegi, tum batao tab paanch beer hajir ho jayengi

Aniket- paanch nahi char do mere liye do avya ke liye

Sanjana- aur mai kya tum logo ka muh takungi ek mere liye

Ab aniket ekdum khush

Aniket- arey gajab, ye huyi na baat apni tuning sahi jamegi, sanjana aaj se tum hamare gang me aur kuch chinta nahi karne ka mai hu tumhare sath.

Sanjana bhi has rahi thi, waise dekha jaye to aniket use pehli mulakat me hi bha gaya tha upar se avi ke case me madad kar raha tha to fir to ab aniket uska favourite tha, waise bhi ye aniket ki khas baat thi wo kisi ko bhi apna sa bana leta tha.. fir wo sanjana ko bola

Anikiet- koaml kaisi lagi?

Ye sawal aayega ye sanjana ne nahi socha tha fir bhi wo boli

Sanjana- achi hai, aur us din ke liye meri taraf se sorry kehna use wo thodi galat fehm ho gayi thi isiliye maine waisa bartav kiya aur sorry bolne ka chance hi nahi mila

Aniket- hamara pehalwan hai wo baki manna padega tumko jo himmat tumne dikhayi wo to mai bhi nahi nahi karta, never mind ulta usne tumko sorry bola hai

Sanjana avi ki or dekhte huye boli

Sanjana- use meri taraf se sorry ke sath sath thanks bhi kehna

Aniket- wo kyu bhala ?

Sanjana- usne meri ek bahut badi samasya hal kar di hai aur ha use ye bhi bolna ki jo bhi maine us din kaha tha sab sach hai..

Aniket ekdum khush hote huye bola

Aniket- shabass, aise hi date rehne ka hum dono tumhare sath hai..

Idhar avi ko dheere dheere tension aa raha tha, usne badi chalaki se aniket ko sanjana ki taraf divert kiya tha aur ab sanjana ne wapis uska dhyan avi ki or kar diya tha..

Aniket avi ko dekhte huye ekdum se bola

Aniket- bolo Avinash seth tumko kya bolna hai

Avi- kuch nahi

Aniket- kuch nahi matlab

Avi- anya baad me baat karte apan

Aniket kuch samay shant baitha aur fir ekdum se utha aur bola

Aniket- chal..

Avi- kidhar ?

Aniket- samshan me..

Dono sanjana ko bye bol ke college se nikle aur car me baith ke aage badh gaye aur anilket thoda chidhte huye bola

Aniket- kya natak lagaya be.. chya mayla wo ladki sidha teko muh pe I Love You bol rahi ur tera alag hi natak chal raha..

Avi kuch nahi bola tab aniket aage bola

Aniket- kya sahi ladki hai wo uske samne apna thobda dekha hai kya aaine me ? bsdk bhains ka baccha mar gaya tha to usne doodh dena band kar diya tha tab kku ne teko bithaya tha uske samne tab teko apna baccha samajh ke bhains ne doodh dioya tha, aisa tu, kaha tu kaha wo fir bhi wo pyaar karti hai tere se to problem kya hai..

Aniket bole ja raha tha par avi koi jawab nahi de raha tha aur aniket bhi avi ko ache se pehchanta tha usko ache se pata tha ke ab tak avi khud nahi chahega wo ek shabd bhi nahi bolega par aniket bhi9 haar manne ko tayar nahi tha

Aniket- bhadkhau bol kuch, awaj to nikal kya fevicol se muh chipka liya kya bsdk.. ya ab third degree shuru karu

Aur akhir me avi bola

Avi- kya bolu ?
aniket- suna, satyanarayan ki katha suna

Avi jaise taise hasa, aur ab ye aage kuch bolega nahi isiliye aniket chup chap gaadi chalane laga aur fir avi ne pucha

Avi- kidhar ja rahe apan ?

Aniket- gaon ko, bahut din ho gaye aaj tekdi pe jayenge..

Avi upar se bhale hi muskura raha tha par ander se dara hua tha, gaon pahuch ke aniket ne use ghar par chhoda aur sham ko tayar rehne ka keh ke chala gaya

Ab gharwalo se mil kar khushi to kyu avi ko par dimag me ab aage kya karna hai yahi chal raha tha, wo soch raha tha ki agar aniket ko pata chal gaya ki wo komal se pyaar karta hai to wo kya karega aur bas isi khayal se hi avi darr ke kampne laga.. wo pyaar ke bagar reh sakta tha dost ke bagair nahi.. usne soch kiya tha chahe kuch ho jaye wo komal ka naam apni juban par nahi aane dega par aniket ne pucha to kya jawab dega yahi use samajh nahi aa raha tha aur usne man hi man ek kahani tayar ki

Sham ko decidehuye mutabik aniket aaya aur wo aur avi dono apne adde pe yni tekdi par gaye, aniket ne beer open ki aur dono shanti se beer ke ghut lete baithe the, aniket ab serious tha

Aniket- avi bhai tere man me kya chal raha hai batayega kuch ? baki ki sab baato se meko koi fark nahi padta mere liye sab shunya hai tujhe kya lagta hai ye important hai, sanjana achi ladki hai, khandani hai, padhi likhi hai tujhe kya lagta hai ?

Avi- isme koi shak nahi hai ke wo ek achi ladki hai, meri achi dost bhi hai par hum me bahut fark hai bhai..

Aniket- kaisa fark ?

Avi- anya mai kaun hu kya hu tu ache se jaanta hai, abe wo rahisi me pali huyi ladki hai ur mere to padhai ka kharcha bhi tu utha raha hai

Avi ko ache se pata tha ki ye baat chhedte hi aniket gussa hoga aur uska dhyan sanjana ke mudde par se bhatkega aur aisa hua bhi aniket bhadak gaya

Aniket- bsdk hajar baar bola hai teko ki avya paiso ki baat mat nikala kar wo mai upar jae tere baap se wasul lunga fir bhi wahi baat kyu karta hai to BC

Avi- mere na bolne se sach thodi badal jayega aur tu chahta hai na ke mai sanjana ko ha bol du, ek baat bata tu kitna jaanta hai usko ? bhul gaya kya ye wahi ladki hai jo pehle din se mere piche padi hai,mujhe satane ke liye bahut koshish kar chuki hai, chanchal swabhav hai bhai uska aur ab ye pyaar ka bukhar pata nahi kitne din tikega..

Aniket thoda shant hua

Aniket- nahi yaar tu kuch bhi bol mujhe dil ke lagta hai ke wo sach me pyaar karti hai tere se……

Awesome Updateee

Yaar aisi beizaati kaun karta hai. Bhains ke bachhe ke saath compare. Matlab Gazab.

Idher Avi darr raha hai kahi Komal ka naam naa nikal jaaye. Par Avi ne paiso ki baat karke mudda divert kardiya.

Dekhte hai Avi kitne waqt tak yeh baat chipaa paata hai.

 

[kingkhankar]

wo pyaar ke bagar reh sakta tha dost ke bagair nahi..

Superb Dialogue......
Pura story ek taraf aur yeh dialogue ek taraf.......

 

[Sauravb]

Super update bhai.avi aniket ki mind me sanjana ko leke doubt create kar raha hai taki usko avi ki purani love story ka pata naa chale.