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(aahhh.. yeh awaj thi uss ladke ki jo abhi thori der pehle chakkar khakar behosh hua tha.. Tushar uski taraf badha lakin Arushi ne uska hath pakad rok liya...)
Arushi- (na mein sar hilati hui) nahi Tushar.. bas kar ab.. vo hume kuch nahi kar sakta.. jane de abhi...
Tushar- nahi didi isne sab dekha hai.. yeh mujhe ander karwayega...
(itna bol Tushar ne jo niche pada apna khanjar tha usse pair se hi sidha kiya aur ek kas ke kick uspe mardi.. khanjar ek speed ke sath uss jameen pe pade ladke ki gardan mein ghuss gaya aur ek choti si cheekh ke sath uski saasen ruk gayi...)
(Tushar ki iss harkat ne kuch der ke liye teeno ki saasen ek baar wapis rok di...)
|AB AAGE|
(Tenno ladkiyan Tushar ko ghur-ghur kar dekh rahi thi.. abhi ek ladka jo thore din pehle 3 aadmiyo se pit kar hospital pahunch gaya tha aaj usne 15, 16 ko aatte ki tarah masal diya.. yahi soch kar sabhi herain thi, halaki Arushi janti thi ki tushar ladhne ki traning le raha hai lakin vo itna jada aur itni jaldi perfect kaise ho gaya.. lakin Tushar apne mein muskura raha tha. Pata nahi kya soch kar...)
Arushi- Tushar..!
Tushar- (Arushi ki taraf dekh) haan Didi...
Arushi- chale ghar..? mujhe bahut sari baate karni hai abhi tumse...
Tushar- Thik hai chalo didi.. aap iss car se ayo main Shivan ki car lekar aata hu...
(Tenno ladkiyan apni car mein beth rahi thi aur Tushar akela Shivan ki car ki aur ja raha tha toh Harleen Tushar ko awaj laga ke boli...)
Harleen- Tushar..!!!
Tushar- (piche mud dekhta hua) Ji..?
Harleen- aap kaha ja rahe ho akele.. (muskurati hui Harshika ko dekh, jo abhi car ka door pakad bethne ko hui thi) assa karo Harshika ko sath le jao.. company milegi.. kaha aap bor hote hue aayoge...
Harshika- (gusse se usse dekh) kyu.. tu. Tu chali ja na.. tere sath company nahi milegi kya...?
Harleen- (mukurati hui) thik hai main chali jati hu.. (Tushar ko dekh) kyu Tushar..?
Tushar- haan a jao...
(Harleen Tushar ke pass jane lagti hai toh Harshika thori udass ho jati hai.. vo Harleen se man hi man gussa ho rahi thi ki thora aur force nahi kar sakti thi jane ke liye.. kahi Tushar isse na patta le. fhir uska kya hoga.. ek car mein dono ladka-ladki akele hai. Yeh Harleen toh pehle hi chalu kisam ki hai kahi Tushar ke sath kuch assa-waisa na karle.. usse bahut fikar ho rahi thi.. vo apne pyar ko kisi dursi ladki ke sath nahi dekhna chahti thi. Chahe fhir vo uski friend hi kyu na ho.. usse abhi khud par hi bahut gussa a raha tha ki tu aur sharmati reh vo dekh chali gayi Tushar ke sath.. Arushi kab se Harshika ke face par aa rahe expressions ko dekh samaj chuki thi ki uske dil mein abhi kya chal raha hai.. vo jana toh chahti thi lakin bas sharm ke karan mana kar diya.. toh Arushi uski halat ko samajti hui Harleen ko awaj lagati hai...)
Arushi- Harleen.!! Ruk...
Harleen- (piche mud dekh) haan kya hua...
Arushi- assa kar tu idher aa mere sath.. Harshika tu ja Tushar ke sath...
(Harshika bahut toh khush ho jati hai uski baat sunke. aur man hi man Arushi ko thankyou kehti hai. lakin Tushar tang a gaya tha. Ki kya kar rahi hai yeh pagal ladkiyan.. uper se baarish ho rahi hai aur inhe car pasand nahi a rahi ki kon kisme jayega...)
Harleen- (sad hoke) par kyu...
Arushi- mujhe kuch baat karni hai tere se.. (aakhen dikhati hui) bas keh diya na.. chal ab aaja jaldi se...
Tushar- dekho jisse aana hai jaldi ayo.. mujhe aur bighna nahi hai.. warna main akela hi chala jayunga...
Arushi- Harshika khadi-khadi muskura kya rahi hai ja jaldi...
(Tushar jo abhi jakar car mein beth chuka tha.. Harshika bhi jakar uski car mein khushi-khushi beth jati hai.. vo bahut muskura rahi thi...)
Tushar- (uska muskurata hua chehra dekh) kya hu Harshika ji.. itna kyu muskura rahi ho aap..?
Harshika- (thora muh bana kar, ekdum se uski aur dekh) yeh ji, ji kya kehte rehte ho mujhe aap.. maine pehle bhi kaha hai ki dosto mein ji-vi kehna nahi hota.. aap mujhe pyar se.....
Tushar- (bich mein, apne jajbaato ko khhota hua bol hi pada) Haru bula sakta hu..?
(Harshika uske aase bolne se muskurane lagi.. uske pyar ka uske liye koi pehli baar nick name rakhna yeh ehsaas hi usse ek lag si khushi de raha tha.. kisi dusre ke liye bhale hi yeh baate maayane na rakhti ho lakin jab koi pyar mein hota hai toh usse uske pyar se judi har chhoti baat bhi badi lagti hai.. Harshika bas car ki window se bahar dekh muskuraye ja rahi thi aur chhaah kar bhi apni muskurahat ko rok nahi paa rahi thi.. Tushar uska koi jawab na sun kar mayus ho jata hai, lakin usse kya pata tha ki uski Haru uske Haru kehne se kitni jada khush hai ki apni khushi chupa nahi paa rahi hai...)
Tushar- (sad face karke) apko bura laga mera apko iss naam se bulana..? agar assa hai toh main aage se apko iss naam se nahi bulaunga.. (uske kande pe hath rakh) please asse udaas mat ho.. I’m Sorry...
Harshika- (jaht se uski taraf ghum ke, muskurati hui) are nahi nahi.. assa kyu bol rahe ho aap.. mujhe bura nahi laga.. (smile karke) aap mujhe Haru keh ke bula sakte ho.. mujhe acha lagega...
(inki baate kahtam nahi ho rahi thi aur udher Arushi Harleen ke sath car liye Harshika ke window side ki aur akar ruk gayi...)
Arushi- (car ka horn bajati hui, chilla ke) oyyye.. tum dono ko aana hai yaa nahi aana.. (gusse se) kab se dekh rahi hu ki kab Tushar aage car lekar jaye toh main uske piche apni car lagau.. lakin tum dono ho ki hilne ka naam nahi le rahe.. kya kar rahe the ander..?
Harleen- (hasti hui) are karne de jo bhi kar rahe the.. yahi toh umar hai inki aur kya teri umar mein karenge.. hahaha...
Arushi- (apki kamar pe hath rakh gusse se usse dekh) kya matlab hai tera.. main kya buddhi ho gayi hu, meri kya umar nikal gayi hai..? ek lafha marugi tere...
Tushar- Didi yaar aap log shant ho jao.. kyu ladh rahe ho.. chalo abhi jaldi yaha se...
Arushi- wahi bolne ke liye toh main yaha ruki hu.. chal jaldi gadi mod...
(Tushar car start karta hai aur aage chal padta hai.. piche-piche Arushi bhi apni car laga deti hai...)
Tushar- (car drive karta hua, Harshika ko dekh) toh hua Actual mein hua kya tha. (jhijhak ke) aa.. Haru..?
Harshika- (muskurane lagi..)
Tushar- (usse yuu muskurata dekh) kya hua..?
Harshika- kuch nahi...
Tushar- toh fhir batao ki aakhir aap teeno waha jungle mein kaise paunchi.. aur vo ladke kon the.. kaha se aye vo..?
Harshika- (gusse wala face bana ke) vo sab uss Harleen ke karan hua hai...
Tushar- kya matab..? main samjha nahi...
Harshika- aap ek kaam karna yeh sab aap Harleen ke muh se hi sunna.. wahi batagi ki akhir uski wajhe se kitna bada kant ho gaya.. agar aap waqt par nahi aate toh..? (nam aakhon se) pata nahi vo hamara sath kya karte...
Tushar- (uski aankhon mein behte aansoon ko dekh) are aap toh roo rahi ho.. (ek hath se uski gaal par aa rahe aansoon saaf kar) dekho maine aakar aap sabhi ko bacha liya.. toh fhir rone wali kya baat.. jo baat hui hi nahi usse soch kar kyu rona bhala.. haan..? (uski gaal ko pakad khichta hua) aap toh itni pyari ho.. asse rote hue achi nahi lagti...
(Harshika bas halki si has deti hai Tushar ka usse aase bacho jaise treat karne par.. pure raste uske face par se muskan nahi gayi.. vo bethi bas yahi soch rahi thi ki aaj tak jisse kabhi kisine hansaya tak nahi tha, wahi aaj koi usse ek boond aansoon tak nahi bahane deta...)
|Back To Haweli|
Siya- didi, bhaiya chalo na Mumma-Papa se milne jana hai mujhe.. mujhe lekar chalo jaldi...
Safal- haan thik hai beta chalo.. hume bhi bahut kuch puchhna hai unse...
(Siya, Safal aur Savana teeno Haweli se bahar nikalte hai toh dekhte hai ki koi hai hi nahi bahar.. na Tushar, na Shivan, na Guruji...)
Savana- yeh Boss, Guruji aur Shivan kaha gaye..?
Safal- pata nahi.. abhi thori der pehle toh idher hi the sab.. achanak kaha gaye.. Ruko main phone karta hu Boss ko...
(Safal Tushar ko phone karta hai lakin 2,3 baar try karne ke baad bhi Tushar phone nahi pick karta. Karta bhi kaise uska phone toh Haweli mein pada tha.. fhir Safal Shivan ko call karta hai. Shivan ne 5 ladko ko tapka diya tha. aur abhi ek adhmare ladke ki chhati par apna pair rakh usse aur tadhpha raha tha.. Shivan uski gardan katne wala tha ki usse Safal ka call a jata hai.. 2,3 rings mein Shivan phone pick kar leta hai...)
Shivan- hello.. haan bolo Safal...
Safal- bhai kaha ho tum log..? Haweli mein kahi dikh hi nahi rahe ho...
Shivan- vo ek problem ho gayi thi bhai...
Safal- (chinta se) kaisi problem bhai..?
(Shivan usse jo bhi kuch der pehle hua sab sahi-sahi bata deta hau...)
Safal- toh bhai mujhe bhi sath le jate.. vo itne sare ladke the agar.....
Shivan- (muskurta hua) kahi tujhe mujh par shak toh nahi hai...
Safa- (hasta hua) hahah.. are nahi nahi bhai.. aap ho toh koi kisi ka baal bhi baka nahi kar sakta.. bas main yuu hi bola tha.. (muskurata hua) kitni gardan kati...
Shivan- (uss admare ladke ki gardan par talwar pherta hua, muskurake) chhate ki awaj khud sun le...
(aaaahhhhahahhhhh)
Safal- (hasta hua) hahaha, bhai apka koi jawab nahi kyuki aap lajawab ho.. chalo abhi main Savana ke sath Siya ke parents ke pas ja raha hu. Pata lagane ki aakhir unke sath kya hua tha. jo road par yuu behosh pade the...
Shivan- hmm. Thik hai tum log nikal lo main thori der mein Haweli pahunch jayunga...
Safal- Okay bhai...
|Jagala’s Haweli|
(Lala abhi bahut gusse mein tha. vo hall mein idher-udher chakar lagaye ja raha tha. uske pass hi uske 3 admiyo ki lashe bhi padi hui thi jo usne gusse mein akar apne hi 3 admi mar diye the.. uska gussa hona jayaj bhi tha, ek assa don jiske ghar par police jane se darti hai wahi ek police wala akar uske dost ko utha le gaya. Uske liye yeh baat uski ijjat ko daag lagane barabar thi.. akhir yeh Inspector Daya aya kaha se.? kisne beja tha usse. Yeh soch-soch Lala apna dimag kharab kar raha tha...)
Lala- (gusse se) aaye konn thaa yeh Inspector Dayaaa.. iski maa chodni hai.. nikalo iska pura bio data.. sala 300 police wale laya tha.. jao jaha-jaha apne admi hai sabko ikattha karo.. sarre police station jala ke rakh kardo.. aur Jaggu ko kisi bhi kimat par 2din ke ander yaha wapis lao.. (samne khade apne 4,5 admiyo ko dekh) jao madarchodo jao, mera muh kya dekhte ho......
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(aahhh.. yeh awaj thi uss ladke ki jo abhi thori der pehle chakkar khakar behosh hua tha.. Tushar uski taraf badha lakin Arushi ne uska hath pakad rok liya...)
Arushi- (na mein sar hilati hui) nahi Tushar.. bas kar ab.. vo hume kuch nahi kar sakta.. jane de abhi...
Tushar- nahi didi isne sab dekha hai.. yeh mujhe ander karwayega...
(itna bol Tushar ne jo niche pada apna khanjar tha usse pair se hi sidha kiya aur ek kas ke kick uspe mardi.. khanjar ek speed ke sath uss jameen pe pade ladke ki gardan mein ghuss gaya aur ek choti si cheekh ke sath uski saasen ruk gayi...)
(Tushar ki iss harkat ne kuch der ke liye teeno ki saasen ek baar wapis rok di...)
|AB AAGE|
(Tenno ladkiyan Tushar ko ghur-ghur kar dekh rahi thi.. abhi ek ladka jo thore din pehle 3 aadmiyo se pit kar hospital pahunch gaya tha aaj usne 15, 16 ko aatte ki tarah masal diya.. yahi soch kar sabhi herain thi, halaki Arushi janti thi ki tushar ladhne ki traning le raha hai lakin vo itna jada aur itni jaldi perfect kaise ho gaya.. lakin Tushar apne mein muskura raha tha. Pata nahi kya soch kar...)
Arushi- Tushar..!
Tushar- (Arushi ki taraf dekh) haan Didi...
Arushi- chale ghar..? mujhe bahut sari baate karni hai abhi tumse...
Tushar- Thik hai chalo didi.. aap iss car se ayo main Shivan ki car lekar aata hu...
(Tenno ladkiyan apni car mein beth rahi thi aur Tushar akela Shivan ki car ki aur ja raha tha toh Harleen Tushar ko awaj laga ke boli...)
Harleen- Tushar..!!!
Tushar- (piche mud dekhta hua) Ji..?
Harleen- aap kaha ja rahe ho akele.. (muskurati hui Harshika ko dekh, jo abhi car ka door pakad bethne ko hui thi) assa karo Harshika ko sath le jao.. company milegi.. kaha aap bor hote hue aayoge...
Harshika- (gusse se usse dekh) kyu.. tu. Tu chali ja na.. tere sath company nahi milegi kya...?
Harleen- (mukurati hui) thik hai main chali jati hu.. (Tushar ko dekh) kyu Tushar..?
Tushar- haan a jao...
(Harleen Tushar ke pass jane lagti hai toh Harshika thori udass ho jati hai.. vo Harleen se man hi man gussa ho rahi thi ki thora aur force nahi kar sakti thi jane ke liye.. kahi Tushar isse na patta le. fhir uska kya hoga.. ek car mein dono ladka-ladki akele hai. Yeh Harleen toh pehle hi chalu kisam ki hai kahi Tushar ke sath kuch assa-waisa na karle.. usse bahut fikar ho rahi thi.. vo apne pyar ko kisi dursi ladki ke sath nahi dekhna chahti thi. Chahe fhir vo uski friend hi kyu na ho.. usse abhi khud par hi bahut gussa a raha tha ki tu aur sharmati reh vo dekh chali gayi Tushar ke sath.. Arushi kab se Harshika ke face par aa rahe expressions ko dekh samaj chuki thi ki uske dil mein abhi kya chal raha hai.. vo jana toh chahti thi lakin bas sharm ke karan mana kar diya.. toh Arushi uski halat ko samajti hui Harleen ko awaj lagati hai...)
Arushi- Harleen.!! Ruk...
Harleen- (piche mud dekh) haan kya hua...
Arushi- assa kar tu idher aa mere sath.. Harshika tu ja Tushar ke sath...
(Harshika bahut toh khush ho jati hai uski baat sunke. aur man hi man Arushi ko thankyou kehti hai. lakin Tushar tang a gaya tha. Ki kya kar rahi hai yeh pagal ladkiyan.. uper se baarish ho rahi hai aur inhe car pasand nahi a rahi ki kon kisme jayega...)
Harleen- (sad hoke) par kyu...
Arushi- mujhe kuch baat karni hai tere se.. (aakhen dikhati hui) bas keh diya na.. chal ab aaja jaldi se...
Tushar- dekho jisse aana hai jaldi ayo.. mujhe aur bighna nahi hai.. warna main akela hi chala jayunga...
Arushi- Harshika khadi-khadi muskura kya rahi hai ja jaldi...
(Tushar jo abhi jakar car mein beth chuka tha.. Harshika bhi jakar uski car mein khushi-khushi beth jati hai.. vo bahut muskura rahi thi...)
Tushar- (uska muskurata hua chehra dekh) kya hu Harshika ji.. itna kyu muskura rahi ho aap..?
Harshika- (thora muh bana kar, ekdum se uski aur dekh) yeh ji, ji kya kehte rehte ho mujhe aap.. maine pehle bhi kaha hai ki dosto mein ji-vi kehna nahi hota.. aap mujhe pyar se.....
Tushar- (bich mein, apne jajbaato ko khhota hua bol hi pada) Haru bula sakta hu..?
(Harshika uske aase bolne se muskurane lagi.. uske pyar ka uske liye koi pehli baar nick name rakhna yeh ehsaas hi usse ek lag si khushi de raha tha.. kisi dusre ke liye bhale hi yeh baate maayane na rakhti ho lakin jab koi pyar mein hota hai toh usse uske pyar se judi har chhoti baat bhi badi lagti hai.. Harshika bas car ki window se bahar dekh muskuraye ja rahi thi aur chhaah kar bhi apni muskurahat ko rok nahi paa rahi thi.. Tushar uska koi jawab na sun kar mayus ho jata hai, lakin usse kya pata tha ki uski Haru uske Haru kehne se kitni jada khush hai ki apni khushi chupa nahi paa rahi hai...)
Tushar- (sad face karke) apko bura laga mera apko iss naam se bulana..? agar assa hai toh main aage se apko iss naam se nahi bulaunga.. (uske kande pe hath rakh) please asse udaas mat ho.. I’m Sorry...
Harshika- (jaht se uski taraf ghum ke, muskurati hui) are nahi nahi.. assa kyu bol rahe ho aap.. mujhe bura nahi laga.. (smile karke) aap mujhe Haru keh ke bula sakte ho.. mujhe acha lagega...
(inki baate kahtam nahi ho rahi thi aur udher Arushi Harleen ke sath car liye Harshika ke window side ki aur akar ruk gayi...)
Arushi- (car ka horn bajati hui, chilla ke) oyyye.. tum dono ko aana hai yaa nahi aana.. (gusse se) kab se dekh rahi hu ki kab Tushar aage car lekar jaye toh main uske piche apni car lagau.. lakin tum dono ho ki hilne ka naam nahi le rahe.. kya kar rahe the ander..?
Harleen- (hasti hui) are karne de jo bhi kar rahe the.. yahi toh umar hai inki aur kya teri umar mein karenge.. hahaha...
Arushi- (apki kamar pe hath rakh gusse se usse dekh) kya matlab hai tera.. main kya buddhi ho gayi hu, meri kya umar nikal gayi hai..? ek lafha marugi tere...
Tushar- Didi yaar aap log shant ho jao.. kyu ladh rahe ho.. chalo abhi jaldi yaha se...
Arushi- wahi bolne ke liye toh main yaha ruki hu.. chal jaldi gadi mod...
(Tushar car start karta hai aur aage chal padta hai.. piche-piche Arushi bhi apni car laga deti hai...)
Tushar- (car drive karta hua, Harshika ko dekh) toh hua Actual mein hua kya tha. (jhijhak ke) aa.. Haru..?
Harshika- (muskurane lagi..)
Tushar- (usse yuu muskurata dekh) kya hua..?
Harshika- kuch nahi...
Tushar- toh fhir batao ki aakhir aap teeno waha jungle mein kaise paunchi.. aur vo ladke kon the.. kaha se aye vo..?
Harshika- (gusse wala face bana ke) vo sab uss Harleen ke karan hua hai...
Tushar- kya matab..? main samjha nahi...
Harshika- aap ek kaam karna yeh sab aap Harleen ke muh se hi sunna.. wahi batagi ki akhir uski wajhe se kitna bada kant ho gaya.. agar aap waqt par nahi aate toh..? (nam aakhon se) pata nahi vo hamara sath kya karte...
Tushar- (uski aankhon mein behte aansoon ko dekh) are aap toh roo rahi ho.. (ek hath se uski gaal par aa rahe aansoon saaf kar) dekho maine aakar aap sabhi ko bacha liya.. toh fhir rone wali kya baat.. jo baat hui hi nahi usse soch kar kyu rona bhala.. haan..? (uski gaal ko pakad khichta hua) aap toh itni pyari ho.. asse rote hue achi nahi lagti...
(Harshika bas halki si has deti hai Tushar ka usse aase bacho jaise treat karne par.. pure raste uske face par se muskan nahi gayi.. vo bethi bas yahi soch rahi thi ki aaj tak jisse kabhi kisine hansaya tak nahi tha, wahi aaj koi usse ek boond aansoon tak nahi bahane deta...)
|Back To Haweli|
Siya- didi, bhaiya chalo na Mumma-Papa se milne jana hai mujhe.. mujhe lekar chalo jaldi...
Safal- haan thik hai beta chalo.. hume bhi bahut kuch puchhna hai unse...
(Siya, Safal aur Savana teeno Haweli se bahar nikalte hai toh dekhte hai ki koi hai hi nahi bahar.. na Tushar, na Shivan, na Guruji...)
Savana- yeh Boss, Guruji aur Shivan kaha gaye..?
Safal- pata nahi.. abhi thori der pehle toh idher hi the sab.. achanak kaha gaye.. Ruko main phone karta hu Boss ko...
(Safal Tushar ko phone karta hai lakin 2,3 baar try karne ke baad bhi Tushar phone nahi pick karta. Karta bhi kaise uska phone toh Haweli mein pada tha.. fhir Safal Shivan ko call karta hai. Shivan ne 5 ladko ko tapka diya tha. aur abhi ek adhmare ladke ki chhati par apna pair rakh usse aur tadhpha raha tha.. Shivan uski gardan katne wala tha ki usse Safal ka call a jata hai.. 2,3 rings mein Shivan phone pick kar leta hai...)
Shivan- hello.. haan bolo Safal...
Safal- bhai kaha ho tum log..? Haweli mein kahi dikh hi nahi rahe ho...
Shivan- vo ek problem ho gayi thi bhai...
Safal- (chinta se) kaisi problem bhai..?
(Shivan usse jo bhi kuch der pehle hua sab sahi-sahi bata deta hau...)
Safal- toh bhai mujhe bhi sath le jate.. vo itne sare ladke the agar.....
Shivan- (muskurta hua) kahi tujhe mujh par shak toh nahi hai...
Safa- (hasta hua) hahah.. are nahi nahi bhai.. aap ho toh koi kisi ka baal bhi baka nahi kar sakta.. bas main yuu hi bola tha.. (muskurata hua) kitni gardan kati...
Shivan- (uss admare ladke ki gardan par talwar pherta hua, muskurake) chhate ki awaj khud sun le...
(aaaahhhhahahhhhh)
Safal- (hasta hua) hahaha, bhai apka koi jawab nahi kyuki aap lajawab ho.. chalo abhi main Savana ke sath Siya ke parents ke pas ja raha hu. Pata lagane ki aakhir unke sath kya hua tha. jo road par yuu behosh pade the...
Shivan- hmm. Thik hai tum log nikal lo main thori der mein Haweli pahunch jayunga...
Safal- Okay bhai...
|Jagala’s Haweli|
(Lala abhi bahut gusse mein tha. vo hall mein idher-udher chakar lagaye ja raha tha. uske pass hi uske 3 admiyo ki lashe bhi padi hui thi jo usne gusse mein akar apne hi 3 admi mar diye the.. uska gussa hona jayaj bhi tha, ek assa don jiske ghar par police jane se darti hai wahi ek police wala akar uske dost ko utha le gaya. Uske liye yeh baat uski ijjat ko daag lagane barabar thi.. akhir yeh Inspector Daya aya kaha se.? kisne beja tha usse. Yeh soch-soch Lala apna dimag kharab kar raha tha...)
Lala- (gusse se) aaye konn thaa yeh Inspector Dayaaa.. iski maa chodni hai.. nikalo iska pura bio data.. sala 300 police wale laya tha.. jao jaha-jaha apne admi hai sabko ikattha karo.. sarre police station jala ke rakh kardo.. aur Jaggu ko kisi bhi kimat par 2din ke ander yaha wapis lao.. (samne khade apne 4,5 admiyo ko dekh) jao madarchodo jao, mera muh kya dekhte ho......
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Update Posted.. sorry bro darjano mistakes nikalni hoti hai. isliye time jada laga...
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Are gazab behtreen update akhir ARUSHI me madad krdi humari heroine ki
I think ISS DAYA ko America walle shaqs me bheja hai uska naam bhul gya hu pls adjust
Ye comedy Achi thi shivan or safal ki Acha hai update .mgr chotta tha last update se
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Very nice, fantastic update ...............
Keep it up bro .............
Quasar bhai update ka size to thora bada kr do ......... 1 hi scene mai update end ho gaya ..........
Waiting for next ................
Keep it up bro .............
Quasar bhai update ka size to thora bada kr do ......... 1 hi scene mai update end ho gaya ..........
Waiting for next ................
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Awesome excellent update brother
Keep posting
Thanks for lovely update
Keep posting
Thanks for lovely update
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Awesome update Bhai kya gjb ki fight dikhaya h pahle mujhe yesa lagta tha ki kahin sabko mar ke kuch jyada hi saza to nahin de rahen hain lekin phir dusre nazriye se dekha to bilkul sahi hi laga is desh nari ka jitna samman hai wo yese hi kuch logo ki wajah se khota ja raha h wakai main log yese kiye gaye kritya ke liye mrityu dand ke layak hi hainUpdate-30
|Arushi’s College|
(Abhi Arushi, Harshika Aur Harleen teeno parking se bahar aa rahi thi aur aaj wapis vohi 3,4 ladke unhe ghur-ghur kar dekh rahe the.. Arushi ne yeah baat notice karli…)
Ladka.1- yaar aaj toh nahi chhodunga.. kisi ek ko mujhe apne niche letana hi hai…
Ladka.2- haan aaj koi judgar banate hai.. aur lete hai maje.. dekh toh Sali kaise matak-matak ke chal rahi hai…….
|Ab AGGE|
(Charo ladke tab tak teeno ladkiyo ko tadte rahe aur pata nahi kya-kya bolte gaye unke bare jab tak ki vo teeno college ke ander nahi chali gayi…)
Harshika- dekha!.. aaj bhi vo kamine ladke kaise hume dekh rahe the…
Harleen- haan.. dekha maine.. mujhe kuch thik nahi lagta.. kahi yeh hamare sath kuch galat na kar de…
Arushi- kuch nahi hoga.. daro mat…
Harshika- main dar nahi rahi hu.. par hume asse gandi najar se dekhna ka haq nahi hai unhe.. (hath ka ghussa bana ke, gusse mein) asse logo ke toh muh todne ka man karta hai…
Harleen- kyu na hum principal se shikaayat kare..?
Arushi- vo log dhamkiyo yaa kuch thapper se darne wale nahi hai.. principal se pehle bhi bahut ladkiyo ne complaint ki par unpar koi asar nahi hota…
Harshika- toh fhir kya hum unhe asse hi ghurne de khud ko..?
Arushi- chalo pehle class mein.. baad mein iska hal nikalte hai…
(Teeno sad si hokar class mein chali jati hai…)
|Back To Tushar|
Tushar- (Guruji ko dekh) Guruji apse baat karni thi.. (aur Savana ko dekhta hai toh vo samaj jati hai usse kya karna hai..)
Savana- (Siya ko uthake) Chalo Siya beta.. aap bhukhi hogi apko kuch bana ke khilati hu…
Siya- mujhe bukh nahi lagi.. main khana nahi khaungi jab tak mujhe mere Mumma-Papa se nahi mila dete.. mujhe Mumma se milna hai…
Safal- Siya hum thori der mein unse milne jayenge.. aap khana kha lo agar aap nahi khaogi toh apki Mumma hume Dantegi ki tum log ne meri Siya ko khana kyu nahi khilaya.. thik hai aap jake khana kha lo…
Siya- nahi Mumma apko nahi dantegi.. aap log bahut ache ho.. mera khayal rakhte ho.. Chalo didi mujhe khana khila do fhir.. (muskurati hui) waise mujhe bhuk bhi lagi thi…
Savana- pagal ladki agar bhukh lagi thi toh bola kyu nahi..?
Siya- (niche dekhti hui) Vo aase aap logo se mangna achi baat nahi hai na…
Savana- (thora naraj hoke) toh agar main tume khana ka nahi puchti toh kya tum bhukhi rehti…
Tushar- dekho Siya maine tumse pehle hi kaha tha ki hume paraya mat samjo.. Apni family samjo hume.. tum mujhe bhaiya kehti ho na. Toh bhaiya ka ghar bhi tumhara hi hua na.. aage se assa kabhi mat karna.. waise aap bahut samajdari wali baate karti ho lakin aage se aasa nahi bolna... (Savana ne Siya ko gaud mein uthiya hua tha, Tushar Siya ke gaal par kiss karta hua) Thik hai bacha…
Siya- Okay bhaiya…
(Fhir Savana Siya ko Haweli ke ander le jati hai.. Tushar Guruji ko dekh bola..)
Tushar- Guruji kal main sadhna mein tha.. aur meri aakhon se khun behne laga aakhen chamakne lagi, body safed pad gayi.. yeh kya hua tha mere sath.. aur mujhe iska ehsaas kyu nahi hua.. mere sath kuch galat ho raha hai kya..? Mere uper koi jantar,mantar jaddu-tona toh nahi kar raha…
Safal- (chonkta hua) kya..? Kya… kya bol rahe ho Boss.. aakhon se khon kaise nikla apke.. koi bimari-vimari toh nahi lag gayi apko…
Guruji- (Safal ko ajeeb se dekh) tu assa kar jake naha aur kapde badal ke aa kitni behanaak badbu a rahi tere se.. chal ja jaldi se warna gadhe mein gira dunga.. Chal..!
(Safal jaldi waha se rafu-chakar ho jata hai yeh soch kar ki kahi gadhe mein gira kar aur khodne ko na bol de... Tabhi Shivan ke phone par ek message aya.. usne khol kar dekha aur padhne ke baad Guruji ko kuch ishara kiya…)
Tushar- toh Guruji….
Guruji- (bich mein hath ka ishara kar usse rokhte hue) abhi tumhe kahi jana hai...
Tushar- kaha jana hai Guruji..? Par pehle mere sawal ka jawab toh….
Guruji- (bich mein tokte hue) jo keh raha hu pehle vo karo.. yeh sab baate jaruri nahi hai…
Tushar- thik hai.. bataia kaha jana hai mujhe..?
Guruji- Shivan ke sath jao…
(Fhir Tushar Shivan ke sath car mein beth kar chala jata hai.. car road par teji se daud rahi thi...)
Tushar- Shivan bataoge tum mujhe kaha le ja rahe ho..?
Shivan- Haan Boss batata hu.. vo ……….
Tushar- (chonkta hua) kya..! Chal Chal jaldi bagha.. lakin unhone mujhe kyu nahi bataya…
Shivan- apke pass apka phone nahi hai Boss…
Tushar- haan yaad aya vo toh Haweli mein tha.. kitni der lagegi aur.. dauda-dauda (gusse mein) car ko hawai-jahaj bana de salo ke tango ke bich mein thokna.. madarjaattt!!!!!!!!.....
(10 mint aur chalane ke baad Shivan ne car ko ek sunsan kachhe raste ki aur mod diya…)
Tushar- idher hai kya vo..?
Shivan- haan Boss…
(Yeh ek jungle type jagha thi charo taraf ghane ped-podhe the.. abhi aasmaan gehra kale rang mein badal raha tha.. lagta hai baarish hone wali hai.. hawaye bhi chal rahi thi jo dhire-dhire tej ho rahi thi.. Shivan ne ek jagha akar car rok di…)
Tushar- (samne dekh apna gussa dabata hua) Hatiyar kya-kya laye ho..?
Shivan- apko kya chahiye…
Tushar- (aakhon se behte pani ko rokta hua) mujhe bas ek khanjar de do…
(Shivan car mein bane ek chote se box se ek tej-dhar Khanjar nikal ke Tushar ko deta hai...)
(Tushar car se bahar nikalta hai aur samne ki aur chalne lagta hai.. Tushar jaise-jaise aage badh raha tha asman mein bijliyan chamakne lagi.. Tushar Khanjar ko ek hath se apne piche kar ke samne chala ja raha tha.. uski aakhen mein gussa aur dil mein tadaph utth rahi thi.. jab vo samne dekhta hai ki uski behan Arushi ko 6 ladke car ke sath tika ke uske sath jabardasti karne ki koshish kar rahe hai.. side mein 4 log uske pyar Harshika ko gher ke khade hai.. aur 5 log Harleen ko ek side mein kiss kar karne, jagha-jagha touch ki koshish kar rahe hai...)
Harleen- please aasa mat karo.. (jaise hi uss ek ladke ne usse hath lagaya, gusse se) chhodo mujhe.. gandi naali ke kede ho tum log.. hath bhi mat lagna mujhe...
Arushi- (hasti hui) acha..? rape karga mera..? Vo tere hath-pau kat ke tujhe aasi jagah dafan karega ki pachtayega..! pachtayega tu ki kyu tune iss dharti pe janam liya...
Ladka.1- kon..? kon katega hath-pair.. hahahaha.. kon..? haha yaha jungle mein tujhe Mowgli bachega aakar...
Ladka.2- (hasta hua) haha.. haan kon bachega tujhe.. haan kon..?
(Tushar jo kab se inke piche khada niche muh kar ke unki baate sun raha tha.. waise hi gusse mein jameen ko ghurta shant swar mein bola..)
Tushar- Main...
(Tushar jaise hi bola.. sabne piche mud kar dekha.. ki ek ladka apna ek hath piche kiye niche dekh raha hai.. jisne ek black colour ki jacket aur jacket ki cap pehni hui hai jo jameen ko ghure ja raha hai.. Arushi samaj gayi thi ki hai yeh Tushar hai lakin Harshika, Harleen aur baki ladke usse ghur-ghur kar dekh rahe the...)
Tushar- (waise hi niche dekhta hua) kuch hua toh nahi..?
Arushi- (ek ladke ne uske top ke uper se pakad rakha tha uska hath jhatkti hui) Nahi..! sab thik hai...
Tushar- hmm!.. chalo car mein beth jao teeno...
(Arushi ne ek ladke ke aandon pe kas ke laat mar usse niche bitha diya.. aur jor se car ka door khola lakin jaise hi vo ander bethne lagi ek ladke ne uska hath pakad liya.. lakin yeh usne galti kardi thi.. usne jaise hi Arushi ka hath pakda Tushar ka gussa aasman phaad gaya.. aur aasa phaada ki aasman mein jo badal the unhone bhi garajate hue pani barsana shuru kar diya.. tej dar baarish suru ho gayi.. Tushar ne cheekhe hue apne sar se cap hatai aur dusre hath se chhupa rakha Khanjar nikal uss ladke ke hath ki kalai pe jor se maar 3inch ander ghussa diya aur Shirt ko fadta hua Khanjar uper shoulder tak le gaya.. ladke ki baju asse ho gayi thi jaise kisi ne karele ko bich mein se kaat diya ho...)
Ladka.3- (cheekhta-chhilata hua) aaahhhhhh aaaaahhhhhh aahahahh ahhhhh.. (karta apni baju pakad piche gir gaya..)
Harleen- (chhonkti hui) Tushar.. tum..?
Harshika- (dhire se, muskurati hui) mera Tushar...
Ladka.4- (herani se dekh) aabe oyee yeh kya kiya tu.. kaha se aya hai tu.. hai konnnnaaaaaaaaaaa.....
(yeh cheekh tab nikli uss ladke ki jab Tushar ne vo Khanjar uske muh mein jadh tak ghusa ke ghuma diya.. muh se toh ek sec mein khoon ki dhaare bahar aane lagi.. ladke ki aakhen bahar ko nikal gayi thi.. Tushar ne jab khanjar ghumaya toh uske daant tak toot gaye.. vo ladka bhi cheekhta hua ek side hoke niche beth gaya aur tadphne laga...)
Ladka.-5 (darta hua piche hat ke) bhaiyo yeh sala apne ko maar na de.. sab ek sath maaro isse.. hum toh itne sare hai kya hi kar lega akela...
(Tushar waise hi khada raha.. jo lakde car ki dusri side Harshika aur Harleen ko chhed rahe the vo bhi inke sath aane lage.. sab dhire-dhire aage badh rahe the.. vo dar bhi rahe the kyuki Tushar ke hath mein Khanjar tha lakin unhe khali hath hi ladna tha.. baarish abhi bahut tej ho gayi.. sabke kapde full bhegh chhuke the...)
Tushar- (najar uttha ke Arushi, Harshika, Harleen ko dekh) ghadi mein betho...
(Tushar ne itna bol apna jacket utar side mein phenk diya aur ek dum se aage daud kar ek ladke ko pakad liya aur palak jhapkte hi usne uss ladke ke balo ko pakad niche kiya aur kas ke ek ghutna uske chehre pe mara aur ussi khun behte chehre par usne niche se uper ko khanjar maar diya. Jo uski naak ko tehas-nehas kar gaya... sab ladke toh kanp hi gaye.. lakin sabne Tushar ko gher kar pakad hi liya.. aur fhir shuru hui hatha-pai.. koi Tushar ko ghussa toh koi laate maar raha tha.. 4,5 ne Tushar ko pakad ke rakha tha toh baki sare uski tango pe, seene par, pet par, muh par. ghuse, laate jadh rahe the...)
Harshika- (jo bahut der se roo rahi thi) Tushar.. (apna hath chudwati hui) chhod mujhe Arushi. Kya kar rahi hai.. vo Tushar ko maar denge.. Chhod...
Arushi- (apni aakhen saaf kar apne bhai ki halat dekhti hui) nahi.. kuch nahi hoga Tushar ko.. usse maine yaha marne ke liye thori bulaya tha.. kaha hai vo aata hi hoga...
Harleen- (nam aakhon se) kon..?
Arushi- (bahar ki aur ishara kar) vo dekh...
(Harleen aur Harshika bahar dekhti hai toh pati hai ek lambi Talwar liye ek ladka khada hai.. yeh Shivan tha...)
Shivan- (Talwar ko jameen mein gol gol ghumata hua) oye londo..!
(sabhi ladke uski taraf dekne lage.. uske hath mein Talwar dekh sabhi sochne lage ki aakhir ab yeah kon a gaya...)
Ladka.7- ab tu k.....
(bas itna hi bola tha ki Shivan ki Talwar hawa mein utth gayi jo jhatke ke sath uske seene ko cheerti hui piche se pith ke par ho gayi.. jitne log khade the sabka yeh drashiya dekh dil dehal gaya.. car mein bethi teeno ladkiya thar-thar kamp gayi. aur unhone apna chehra dusri aur kar liya.. Shivan ne baki kahde ladko ko gusse se dekh Talwar ko uss ladke ke seene mein ghumate hue dhire-dhire bahar nikal liya.. sabhi ladko ki faat chuki thi.. unke pas bolne ko aur karne ko kuch nahi tha.. lakin fhir bhi sabhi ne himmat na harte hue ek dusre ki aur dekh hosla bhadiya aur Shivan ki aur aane lage..)
(Tushar jo abhi Car ke Tyre ke sahare pith tika ke betha tha. Jaise hi ek ladka uske pas se nikla usne apne pair ka jhatka uske pair par diya jisse vo uski aur girne laga lakin jaise hi uska sar niche jameen se takrane laga toh Tushar ne uske sar ke aage apna Khanjar kar diya.. Khanjar uski ek aakh se nikal kar khopdi mein ja fit ho gaya.. ek cheekh ke sath yeh ladka bhi khamosh ho gaya.. Tushar ne ladke ko sidha kiya aur apne Khanjar ko dhire-dhire uss ladke ki phutti hui aakh se bahar nikal liya.. ladke yeh dekh wapis apni ruh chhod gaye.. unki tange kamp rahi thi.. jaise ab sharir mein jaan nahi bachi..)
(Shivan ne der na karte hue choti si daud lagai aur ek jump ek ladka ek uper mari issi ke sath usne apni Talwar ulti kar li aur Talwar ki muthi uss ladke ki khopdi pe de mari.. muthi ka kuch hissa uss ladke ke sar mein ghus gaya.. aur vo ladka bina koi awaj kiye uper ko nikal liya.. sab ladke toh dang reh gaye the.. vo assi ek kabhi na dekhi maut marenge unhone socha nahi tha.. lakin sabko yakeen ho chuka tha ki vo ab bachenge nahi.. tej baarish ka pani aur jameen par pade ladko ka behta khoon abhi mix hokar jameen ko lal rang mein badal raha tha. jo abhi sabhi ke pau ke niche tha...)
Ladka.5- (niche ghutno par beth hath jod, rota hua) bhai hume chhod do hum aage se kisi ladki ko pareshan nahi karenge...
(Tushar utha uske man mein wahi baate daud rahi thi jo inn logo ne abhi uski didi aur uske pyar ke sath ki thi.. yeh soch kar hi ek baar wapis usme aseem gussa bhar aya.. vo utth ke jo ladka Shivan ke samne apna sar niche kiya betha tha uske pass gaya aur Shivan ke hath mein latki uski lambi Talwar ko usse ke hatho pakada uper ko uttha liya. Ladko ke muh wapis dar se khul gaye vo jaan gaye ki kya hone wala hai.. Tushar ne Shivan ka hath uski Talwar ke sath hawa mein uthaya aur ek tej-dhar asman mein garaj rahi bijloyon se chamakti Talwar ko uss bethe hue ladke ki gardan pe de mara. Uska sar dhad se alag hoke niche ja gira. aur ghumta hua unn ladko ke samne ja ruka.. bas yeh dekhna tha ki ek ladka behosh hi ho gaya.. baki ke ladke dar ke mare waha se baghne lage...)
Tushar- (Shivan aur uski khoon tapkati Talwar ko dekh) ek bhi na bache...!
Shivan- (haan mein sar hila) ek bhi nahi bachega...
(aur Shivan ne daud laga di unn ladko ki taraf...)
(Tushar ne apni behan ki aur dekha.. teeno ladkiyo se bahar ka najara dekha nahi ja raha tha.. vo teeno muh niche kar dhire-dhire subak rahi thi...)
Tushar- (apna Khanjar niche phenk) Didi..!
(teeno ladkiya uski awaj sun car se bahar a gayi...)
Arushi- (roti hui, Tushar ko bhag ke uske sine se lagti hui) Tusharr..!!
Tushar- (uske sar ko pyar se sehlata hua) nahi Didi rona nahi.. dekho maine mar diya sabko.. (jameen pe padi lashon ko dekh) dekho ek ko bhi nahi chhoda aur jo bagh gaye hai usse Shivan jaan se mar kar hi wapis ayega...
(Arushi kuch der Tushar ke gale lag apne dil ko thandak deti rahi.. aur fhir usne Harshika ke taraf dekha jo shayad keh rahi thi ki Tushar mujhe bhi gale laga lo.. Arushi Tushar se alag hui aur Harshika ki taraf jane lagi aur uske pass jake ek dhaka usse mar diya.. dhakka lagte he Harshika Tushar ki baho mein ja giri.. aur usne kas kar Tushar ko jakad liya.. Harshika bhi halke-halke aason baha rahi thi..)
Tushar- (apni baho ko uski pith par kas kar jakadta hua) rona band karo.. thik ho na aap..?
Harshika- (Tushar ke kandhe se sar hata ke, uski aakhon me dekhti hui) Hmm.. bilkul thik.. aap kuch hone de sakte mujhe.. aapko kahi pe chhot toh nahi lagi na..?
Tushar- nahi mujhe kahi nahi lagi.. thik hu main...
Harshika- acha aur yeh kya hai.. (uski chhili hui baju, hath ko dekh aur uske fate hue hotho ko apni dono ungliyo mein pakad dikhati hui) kaise dekho baju puri chill chuki hai.. aur yeh honth dekho apne...
Harleen- (hasti hui) oye premiyo.. chale kya ab.. idher baarish mein khade-khade bimar ho jayoge.. apne prem ka sagar ghar mein jakar continue kar lena...
(Harshika ko toh ehsaas hi nahi thi ki abhi vo kya kar rahi hai, aur kiske hatho mein itni majburti se kaid hai.. jab usse feel hua toh usne Tushar ko chhod diya aur niche dekh sharmane lagi. Lakin Tushar ne usse nahi chhoda tha.. vo toh bas uske haseen chehre mein kab se khoiya hua tha...)
Harshika- (sharmati hui) ab chhod bhi mujhe...
Tushar- (usme khoiya hua) hmm..?
Harshika- maine kaha mujhe chhodo.. mujhe kyu pakad rakha hai..?
Tushar- (hosh mein aata hua) aah.. haan.. kyu kyu maine pakad rakha hai.. haan asse hi...
Harshika- (muskurati hui) toh fhir chhodo mujhe...
(Tushar usse chhod deta hai.. abhi baarish dhire-dhire kam ho rahi thi lakin abhi bhi jari thi...)
Arushi- Tushar chal ab.. ghar chale...
Tushar- haan chalo.. abhi yeh sab kaise suru hua mujhe baat bhi karni hai.. main Shivan ki car le aata hu aap log apni car le ayo..
(aahhh.. yeh awaj thi uss ladke ki jo abhi thori der pehle chakkar khakar behosh hua tha.. Tushar uski taraf badha lakin Arushi ne uska hath pakad rok liya...)
Arushi- (na mein sar hilati hui) nahi Tushar.. bas kar ab.. vo hume kuch nahi kar sakta.. jane de abhi...
Tushar- nahi didi isne sab dekha hai.. yeh mujhe ander karwayega...
(itna bol Tushar ne jo niche pada apna khanjar tha usse pair se hi sidha kiya aur ek kas ke kick uspe mardi.. khanjar ek speed ke sath uss jameen pe pade ladke ki gardan mein ghuss gaya aur ek choti si cheekh ke sath uski saasen ruk gayi...)
(Tushar ki iss harkat ne kuch der ke liye teeno ki saasen ek baar wapis rok di...)
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