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Dosto..!! Update Kuch Der Mein Mil Jayega Apko...
Awesome fantastic Mind-blowing update Bhai..
Siya or siya ke mom dono haweli aagye .but aap isse ache se dicribe nhi Kiya short Mai nipta Diya..
Rudra kiska sikar krne gya...
Daya need acha plain bnaya ek bar Mai hi sare gunde ki mar Diya.
Jagala jindai ya mar gya iska clear nhi hua.
Siya or siya ke mom dono haweli aagye .but aap isse ache se dicribe nhi Kiya short Mai nipta Diya..
Rudra kiska sikar krne gya...
Daya need acha plain bnaya ek bar Mai hi sare gunde ki mar Diya.
Jagala jindai ya mar gya iska clear nhi hua.
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Story Apna Rukh Badalne Wali hai...
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Agle Update ka intezarr Rahega...
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Thanks Bhai.. haan bhai maine socha vo dukh bare scenes skip kar du.. usme kaffi rona tha aur pehle hi pichle 3updates emotional nikal chuke the.. agar isko discribe karta toh 2update aur nikl jate... Shukriya bhai.. Keep Supporting...
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UPDATE-37
|Agli Subha|
Siya- (apni Mumma ko apne pass sota dekh, uske face par pyar se hath pherti hui) Mumma...!
Priyal- (jo shayad soo hi nahi rahi thi, apni beti ka hath mehsus kar jaldi se uthti hui) kya hua mera bacha..?.......
|AB AGGE|
(Siya kuch boli nahi bas Priyal ke gale gayi aur apni moti-moti aankhon se chote-chote aansoo bahane lagi.. Priyal ne Siya ke matthe par dhire se chuma aur uske bal sehlati hui usse apne sine mein dabba liya…)
Priyal- kya baat hai bacha.. roo rahi ho aap..? Main hu na apke pass…
Siya- (Priyal ke aankho mein dekhti hui) Mumma aap hamesha mere pass rahoge na…
Priyal- haan Siya.. main kahi nahi jayunga apko chhod ke.. thik hai chinta mat karo…
Siya- Mumma Papa kyu chale gaye chhod kar.. kya vo kabhi wapis nahi ayenge..?
(Priyal ke pass Siya ki masoom bhari baato ka koi jawab nahi tha.. idher Tushar Haweli ke bahar Garden mein lage bench par gum-sum betha tha…)
Safal- (uske pass aata hua) Boss..!!
Tushar- (piche ghum kar usse dekh) Hmm..?
Safal- (uske sath bethta hua) Ek buri khabar hai Boss..!! Apni City mein Ek naye Police Wale ka transfer hua hai.. usne aate hi Jaggu ko uski Haweli se utha liya, Abhi Jaggu jail mein tha ki Lala ne gusse mein 3 Police Station ko jala diya aur 70-80 ke karib Police wale bhi mar dale, aur kadiyon ko bhi ajaad kar diya.. yeh kal raat ki baat thi, lakin vo Jo naya Police Wala hai……
Tushar- (bich mein bolta hua) naam nahi hai kya uska..?
Safal- Daya..! Inspector Daya…
(Uske baad Safal Tushar ko kal raat wali Daya ki sadak ke bich gadiyon ko udaya dene wali baat bata deta hai.. sab sunne ke baad Tushar soch raha tha ki ab vo kya kare, usne jo vachan liya hai ki vo uss ladki ka badla khud lega kya ab vo usse pura kare ya Jo Daya kar raha hai usse vo karne de.. dekha jaye toh jo ho raha sahi hi ho raha hai.. abhi kanoon se ladh kar Jaggu ko saja deni bhi galat hoga…)
Savana- (Haweli se bahar Garden mein aati hui) Boss..!!
Tushar- ab aap bhi koi buri khabar layi ho kya devi..?
Savana- haan Boss.. school, colleges mein kuch log students ko drugs supply karte hai ab unhone vo drugs dene band kar diye hai.. students tadaf rahe hai drugs lene ko.. har school, colleges se karib 20% students the jo drugs lete the.. unki halat bahut kharab hai Boss.. kuch students ke sucide case bhi a chuke hai...
Tushar- kya.. yeh sab uss Lala ka kaam hai.. Jaggu jail mein hai vo koi na koi tufan khada karta rahega.. yeh toh bahut badi problem hai.. sari City ko kabda bana ke rakha hai iss Lala ne.. iss jad ko jadli ukhadna hogi.. assa karo ek news chappo family walo ke liye ki jiske bhi bache kuch alag tarike ka behave karte ya drugs mangte hue najar aaye unhe (soch kar) unhe jald se jald …………… Hospital lekar aye.. unki jaan ka khatra badh sakta hai.. free hai koi paisa nahi lagega.. unhe bachana chahte ho toh jald karo.. main Papa se baat kar lunga ki Hospital walo se baat karle.. Abhi Jao…!!
Savana- Okay Boss..!! Chal Safal…
|Back To Rudra|
Rudra- iski maa ki chut. maza a gaya.. chal abhi dekhta hu kaha hogi yeh maa ki laudi…
(Rudra ne dekha ki Bangle ke piche wale door par bhi 3 Guards khade hai, toh usne ek badi hi nayi aur kamyab tarkeb ka istmal kiya.. Rudra ne ek pass pada chota sa pather uthaya aur kas kar window ke kanch par mara...)
Gurads.1- (chonkta hua) aabe.. kon tha yeh...
Gurads.2- koi udher se kanch tutne ki awaj ayi hai.. chal a dekhte hai...
(2 guards jaise hi uss taraf gaye Rudra teji se ek bache hue guard ke samne a gaya...)
Guard.3- (herani se) oye konnn......
(bas itni hi bola tha ki Rudra ne uske sar pe lohe ki ulti kulhadi mar di.. guard ka sir bich mein se fat gaya.. jaldi se Rudra guard ko piche ek khone mein khich ke le gaya.. waha kafi jagha thi ki guard ko chupya ja sake.. Rudra ne uski t-shirt utar ke pehan li aur wapis uss guard ki jagha khada ho gaya.. 1 mint baad achi tarah janch-partal karne ke baad jo guards gaye the wapis a gaye...)
Rudra- (unhe aata hua dekh) haan kon tha.. mila kuch..?
Guard.2- yeh kya pehan liya muh pe tune...
Guard.1- haan yeh mask kyu pehan rakha hai tune..?
Rudra- are pata nahi hai kya virus chal raha hai ek.. ussi ke dar se pehna hai.. batao kya hua tha udher.. kanch kisne toda tha...
Guard.2- (uske pass akar uska mask utarta hua) yeh utar pehle... (aur Rudra ka mask utar diya...)
Guard.2- (usse dekh dar kar kampta hua) luu.. Luuuuucccciii.....
Rudra- (bich mein) abe Lucifer yaar.. (uske kandhe par hath rakh) itna kampta kya hai.. aram se aram se.. (dusre guard ko dekh) tereko kya hua, tere kyu pasine chhut gaye...
Guard.1- (hath jodta hua) hume chhod do.. hume marna mat...
Rudra- ( left-right se dono ke gale mein hath dalta hua) are dar kyu rahe ho.. aur kisne kaha ki main tum logo ko marne wala hu...
Guard.2- hum jante hai.. jisne bhi aaj tak Lucifer ko dekha hai vo bach nahi paya hai...
Rudra- (dono ki gardan ko kasta hua) hosiyar ho.. waise maine socha tha ki chup-chap Guard bankar ander chala jayunga lakin tumhe apni atma narak mein paunchani thi.. kheer jaisi tum log ki marji...
(itna bola Rudra ne kas ki dono ki mundi left-right ko ghuma ke piche ki aur kardi, aur ek kaaatkkkkk ki awaj ke sath unki gardane toot gayi.. yeh tha Rudra ki takat ka kamal.. unki lasho ko usne wahi pade rehne diya aur door khol kar ander chala gaya...)
|Back To City Natir, Harshika’s Home|
(Arushi abhi Harshika ke room mein bethi thi.. uske man mein kuch chal raha tha...)
Arushi- Haru..!!
Harshika- (chonkti hui usko dekh) k.. kya.. Haru..?
Arushi- (muskurati hui) kyu kya hua.. kya bhi tak apne Mr. ne apko yeh naam nahi diya...
Harshika- yeh kya bol rahi hai.. Haru kon.. aur Mr..?
Arushi- eeh jada natak nahi karna mere samne.. Haru tu aur Mr. tera vo Tushar...
Harshika- Lakin tu Haru kyu bula rahi hai Mujhe...
Arushi- usne galti se ek din tumhra naam Haru liya tha mere samne.. isliye main bas puch rahi thi ki kya apka namkaran ho gaya hai apke Mr. ke liye..?
Harshika- (mukurati hui) dekho mujhe nahi pata yeh sab...
Arushi- acha thik hai chhod mat bata.. chal yeh bata ki tu usse purpose kab karne wali hai.. aur kaise karegi.. (exited hokar) bata na please...
Harshika- (sharmati hui) mujhe khud nahi pata.. yaar Arushi mujhe badi sharam aati hai.. pata nahi main kab aur kaise usse bol payungi...
Arushi- (apna matha peet ke) are sharmili bhabhi.. kaise chalega asse.. baat toh karni padegi na.. dekh maine uss din bhi samjaya tha tujhe.. tujhe usse shadi ke liye haan thodi bulwani hai, tu usse pyar karti hai itna usse batana hai.. tune itna usse keh diya na bas fhir vo tujhe hamesha ke liye apni guad mein utha lega aur kabhi vo tera pau bhi jameen nahi padne dega...
Harshika- (apne uss khaab ko socho mein bunti hui) hmm.. toh bata (sharmati hui) kab karu purpose..?
Arushi- meri taraf se toh aaj hi karde...
Harshika- sachme aaj hi kardu..?
Arushi- haan call kar usse aur bula yaha...
Harshika- (khushi se) Okay...
(Harshika apne mobile nikalti hai aur Arushi usse Tushar ka number laga ke deti hai.. udher Tushar abhi bhi bahar waise hi betha tha.. kuch hi seconds mein usse Harshika ka call a jata hai, Arushi ne Harshika ko Tushar ka number diya tha.. aaj pehli baar call karne ke karan Tushar ki taraf usse ek unknown number se call aya..)
Tushar- (call pick kar) Hello..!!
Harshika- Hello..!!
Tushar- (pehchan ke, maze leta hua) hanji kon..?
Harshika- ji main Har...
Tushar- acha Harilaal ho.. suno meri baat tindey ache dekh kar lana.. aur haan pichli baar tu bajar gaya tha aur tune udher bahut tamasha kiya tha.. ab teri assi koi shikaayat nahi anni chahiye samaja...
Harshika- (confused hokar) kya..!!
Arushi- (jo tab se speaker par ho rahi baat sun rahi thi, gusse daba kar buddhi ki awaj mein) tere kaan ke niche bajaungi ek.. main Harigadh se bol rahi hu.. tere pardade ki nanni hu main...
Tushar- (choonk ke sidhi tarah bethta hua) kk.. kon..? (rishtedari sochta hua) pardade ki nanni...
Arushi- chal abhi phone rakh.. badmash chhora... (aur phone cut kar diya)
Tushar- (sochta hua) pardade ki nanni..? (herani se) aur vo jinda hai abhi.. pata nahi kon thi.. wrong number lag gaya hoga shayad...
|Back To Harshika' Home|
Arushi- (hasti hui) bada smart ban raha tha.. ab kaisa maza chakaya hahahaha...
Harshika- (sad hokar) lakin baat toh hui nahi...
Arushi- badi jaldi ho rakhi hai tujhe ab.. koi baat nahi main bhi soch rahi hu kuch acha sa surprise dekar purpose karna.. asse sukhe-sukhe kuch karne mein maza nahi ayega.. (naughty smile se) samaj rahi hai na..? ispar agge bhi amal karna ki sukhe-sukhe maza nahi aata...
Harshika- (na samajti hui) matlab..?
Arushi- (apne sar pitti hui) hhaasshh chhod tu.. tujhe bhi kya samjana...
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|Agli Subha|
Siya- (apni Mumma ko apne pass sota dekh, uske face par pyar se hath pherti hui) Mumma...!
Priyal- (jo shayad soo hi nahi rahi thi, apni beti ka hath mehsus kar jaldi se uthti hui) kya hua mera bacha..?.......
|AB AGGE|
(Siya kuch boli nahi bas Priyal ke gale gayi aur apni moti-moti aankhon se chote-chote aansoo bahane lagi.. Priyal ne Siya ke matthe par dhire se chuma aur uske bal sehlati hui usse apne sine mein dabba liya…)
Priyal- kya baat hai bacha.. roo rahi ho aap..? Main hu na apke pass…
Siya- (Priyal ke aankho mein dekhti hui) Mumma aap hamesha mere pass rahoge na…
Priyal- haan Siya.. main kahi nahi jayunga apko chhod ke.. thik hai chinta mat karo…
Siya- Mumma Papa kyu chale gaye chhod kar.. kya vo kabhi wapis nahi ayenge..?
(Priyal ke pass Siya ki masoom bhari baato ka koi jawab nahi tha.. idher Tushar Haweli ke bahar Garden mein lage bench par gum-sum betha tha…)
Safal- (uske pass aata hua) Boss..!!
Tushar- (piche ghum kar usse dekh) Hmm..?
Safal- (uske sath bethta hua) Ek buri khabar hai Boss..!! Apni City mein Ek naye Police Wale ka transfer hua hai.. usne aate hi Jaggu ko uski Haweli se utha liya, Abhi Jaggu jail mein tha ki Lala ne gusse mein 3 Police Station ko jala diya aur 70-80 ke karib Police wale bhi mar dale, aur kadiyon ko bhi ajaad kar diya.. yeh kal raat ki baat thi, lakin vo Jo naya Police Wala hai……
Tushar- (bich mein bolta hua) naam nahi hai kya uska..?
Safal- Daya..! Inspector Daya…
(Uske baad Safal Tushar ko kal raat wali Daya ki sadak ke bich gadiyon ko udaya dene wali baat bata deta hai.. sab sunne ke baad Tushar soch raha tha ki ab vo kya kare, usne jo vachan liya hai ki vo uss ladki ka badla khud lega kya ab vo usse pura kare ya Jo Daya kar raha hai usse vo karne de.. dekha jaye toh jo ho raha sahi hi ho raha hai.. abhi kanoon se ladh kar Jaggu ko saja deni bhi galat hoga…)
Savana- (Haweli se bahar Garden mein aati hui) Boss..!!
Tushar- ab aap bhi koi buri khabar layi ho kya devi..?
Savana- haan Boss.. school, colleges mein kuch log students ko drugs supply karte hai ab unhone vo drugs dene band kar diye hai.. students tadaf rahe hai drugs lene ko.. har school, colleges se karib 20% students the jo drugs lete the.. unki halat bahut kharab hai Boss.. kuch students ke sucide case bhi a chuke hai...
Tushar- kya.. yeh sab uss Lala ka kaam hai.. Jaggu jail mein hai vo koi na koi tufan khada karta rahega.. yeh toh bahut badi problem hai.. sari City ko kabda bana ke rakha hai iss Lala ne.. iss jad ko jadli ukhadna hogi.. assa karo ek news chappo family walo ke liye ki jiske bhi bache kuch alag tarike ka behave karte ya drugs mangte hue najar aaye unhe (soch kar) unhe jald se jald …………… Hospital lekar aye.. unki jaan ka khatra badh sakta hai.. free hai koi paisa nahi lagega.. unhe bachana chahte ho toh jald karo.. main Papa se baat kar lunga ki Hospital walo se baat karle.. Abhi Jao…!!
Savana- Okay Boss..!! Chal Safal…
|Back To Rudra|
Rudra- iski maa ki chut. maza a gaya.. chal abhi dekhta hu kaha hogi yeh maa ki laudi…
(Rudra ne dekha ki Bangle ke piche wale door par bhi 3 Guards khade hai, toh usne ek badi hi nayi aur kamyab tarkeb ka istmal kiya.. Rudra ne ek pass pada chota sa pather uthaya aur kas kar window ke kanch par mara...)
Gurads.1- (chonkta hua) aabe.. kon tha yeh...
Gurads.2- koi udher se kanch tutne ki awaj ayi hai.. chal a dekhte hai...
(2 guards jaise hi uss taraf gaye Rudra teji se ek bache hue guard ke samne a gaya...)
Guard.3- (herani se) oye konnn......
(bas itni hi bola tha ki Rudra ne uske sar pe lohe ki ulti kulhadi mar di.. guard ka sir bich mein se fat gaya.. jaldi se Rudra guard ko piche ek khone mein khich ke le gaya.. waha kafi jagha thi ki guard ko chupya ja sake.. Rudra ne uski t-shirt utar ke pehan li aur wapis uss guard ki jagha khada ho gaya.. 1 mint baad achi tarah janch-partal karne ke baad jo guards gaye the wapis a gaye...)
Rudra- (unhe aata hua dekh) haan kon tha.. mila kuch..?
Guard.2- yeh kya pehan liya muh pe tune...
Guard.1- haan yeh mask kyu pehan rakha hai tune..?
Rudra- are pata nahi hai kya virus chal raha hai ek.. ussi ke dar se pehna hai.. batao kya hua tha udher.. kanch kisne toda tha...
Guard.2- (uske pass akar uska mask utarta hua) yeh utar pehle... (aur Rudra ka mask utar diya...)
Guard.2- (usse dekh dar kar kampta hua) luu.. Luuuuucccciii.....
Rudra- (bich mein) abe Lucifer yaar.. (uske kandhe par hath rakh) itna kampta kya hai.. aram se aram se.. (dusre guard ko dekh) tereko kya hua, tere kyu pasine chhut gaye...
Guard.1- (hath jodta hua) hume chhod do.. hume marna mat...
Rudra- ( left-right se dono ke gale mein hath dalta hua) are dar kyu rahe ho.. aur kisne kaha ki main tum logo ko marne wala hu...
Guard.2- hum jante hai.. jisne bhi aaj tak Lucifer ko dekha hai vo bach nahi paya hai...
Rudra- (dono ki gardan ko kasta hua) hosiyar ho.. waise maine socha tha ki chup-chap Guard bankar ander chala jayunga lakin tumhe apni atma narak mein paunchani thi.. kheer jaisi tum log ki marji...
(itna bola Rudra ne kas ki dono ki mundi left-right ko ghuma ke piche ki aur kardi, aur ek kaaatkkkkk ki awaj ke sath unki gardane toot gayi.. yeh tha Rudra ki takat ka kamal.. unki lasho ko usne wahi pade rehne diya aur door khol kar ander chala gaya...)
|Back To City Natir, Harshika’s Home|
(Arushi abhi Harshika ke room mein bethi thi.. uske man mein kuch chal raha tha...)
Arushi- Haru..!!
Harshika- (chonkti hui usko dekh) k.. kya.. Haru..?
Arushi- (muskurati hui) kyu kya hua.. kya bhi tak apne Mr. ne apko yeh naam nahi diya...
Harshika- yeh kya bol rahi hai.. Haru kon.. aur Mr..?
Arushi- eeh jada natak nahi karna mere samne.. Haru tu aur Mr. tera vo Tushar...
Harshika- Lakin tu Haru kyu bula rahi hai Mujhe...
Arushi- usne galti se ek din tumhra naam Haru liya tha mere samne.. isliye main bas puch rahi thi ki kya apka namkaran ho gaya hai apke Mr. ke liye..?
Harshika- (mukurati hui) dekho mujhe nahi pata yeh sab...
Arushi- acha thik hai chhod mat bata.. chal yeh bata ki tu usse purpose kab karne wali hai.. aur kaise karegi.. (exited hokar) bata na please...
Harshika- (sharmati hui) mujhe khud nahi pata.. yaar Arushi mujhe badi sharam aati hai.. pata nahi main kab aur kaise usse bol payungi...
Arushi- (apna matha peet ke) are sharmili bhabhi.. kaise chalega asse.. baat toh karni padegi na.. dekh maine uss din bhi samjaya tha tujhe.. tujhe usse shadi ke liye haan thodi bulwani hai, tu usse pyar karti hai itna usse batana hai.. tune itna usse keh diya na bas fhir vo tujhe hamesha ke liye apni guad mein utha lega aur kabhi vo tera pau bhi jameen nahi padne dega...
Harshika- (apne uss khaab ko socho mein bunti hui) hmm.. toh bata (sharmati hui) kab karu purpose..?
Arushi- meri taraf se toh aaj hi karde...
Harshika- sachme aaj hi kardu..?
Arushi- haan call kar usse aur bula yaha...
Harshika- (khushi se) Okay...
(Harshika apne mobile nikalti hai aur Arushi usse Tushar ka number laga ke deti hai.. udher Tushar abhi bhi bahar waise hi betha tha.. kuch hi seconds mein usse Harshika ka call a jata hai, Arushi ne Harshika ko Tushar ka number diya tha.. aaj pehli baar call karne ke karan Tushar ki taraf usse ek unknown number se call aya..)
Tushar- (call pick kar) Hello..!!
Harshika- Hello..!!
Tushar- (pehchan ke, maze leta hua) hanji kon..?
Harshika- ji main Har...
Tushar- acha Harilaal ho.. suno meri baat tindey ache dekh kar lana.. aur haan pichli baar tu bajar gaya tha aur tune udher bahut tamasha kiya tha.. ab teri assi koi shikaayat nahi anni chahiye samaja...
Harshika- (confused hokar) kya..!!
Arushi- (jo tab se speaker par ho rahi baat sun rahi thi, gusse daba kar buddhi ki awaj mein) tere kaan ke niche bajaungi ek.. main Harigadh se bol rahi hu.. tere pardade ki nanni hu main...
Tushar- (choonk ke sidhi tarah bethta hua) kk.. kon..? (rishtedari sochta hua) pardade ki nanni...
Arushi- chal abhi phone rakh.. badmash chhora... (aur phone cut kar diya)
Tushar- (sochta hua) pardade ki nanni..? (herani se) aur vo jinda hai abhi.. pata nahi kon thi.. wrong number lag gaya hoga shayad...
|Back To Harshika' Home|
Arushi- (hasti hui) bada smart ban raha tha.. ab kaisa maza chakaya hahahaha...
Harshika- (sad hokar) lakin baat toh hui nahi...
Arushi- badi jaldi ho rakhi hai tujhe ab.. koi baat nahi main bhi soch rahi hu kuch acha sa surprise dekar purpose karna.. asse sukhe-sukhe kuch karne mein maza nahi ayega.. (naughty smile se) samaj rahi hai na..? ispar agge bhi amal karna ki sukhe-sukhe maza nahi aata...
Harshika- (na samajti hui) matlab..?
Arushi- (apne sar pitti hui) hhaasshh chhod tu.. tujhe bhi kya samjana...
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Siya is very innocent and sweet, it is very difficult to answer her question but as she gets older she will understand everything.
Hmm, Tushar also came to know the truth. I too feel that Tushar should not do anything right now and a new hearing about drugs. Drugs are very bad and it is very difficult to get out of addiction.
People fear Rudra and Lucifer is another name for Rudra. Now let's see what Lucifer does next. And why is he doing all this.
Hershika is very shy and I like her style. Currently, everything is fine at home. Call my sweet Anika, I miss her.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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Hmm, Tushar also came to know the truth. I too feel that Tushar should not do anything right now and a new hearing about drugs. Drugs are very bad and it is very difficult to get out of addiction.
People fear Rudra and Lucifer is another name for Rudra. Now let's see what Lucifer does next. And why is he doing all this.
Hershika is very shy and I like her style. Currently, everything is fine at home. Call my sweet Anika, I miss her.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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