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Romance Tumhaare Liye- Ek Prem Kahaani (Completed)

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Fir dono bahane kuchh der baat karti rahi. Thodi hi der me ladke wale aa gaye. Apni kshamta ke anusar Aanand ji ne poori vyawastha ki thi. Kuchh hi der mein sagai ki rashm shuru ho gayi, lekin sagai hote hote ladke walon ka munh fool gaya. Ladke ke papa to aise bartav karne lage Jaise unke ghar me kisi ki mrityu ho gayi ho.


Ladke ke papa ne Aanand ji ko alag se Baat karne ke liye bulaya. Aanand ji ke sath unke sale bhi the. Ladke ke papa ne Aanand ji se kaha.


L.Papa- Ye kya hai Aanand ji aapne to kaha tha ki aapki khatirdari me koi kami nahi rahegi aur sagai ki rasham bahut ache se hogi, lekin yahan to na khatirdari thik se hui aur na hi sagai ki rasham hi ache se hui. Jab sagai me ye haal hai to shadi me to aap mujhe loot hi loge.

Aanand ji- Are nahi bhai Sahab. Ye aap kaisi baat kar rahe hain. Main apni kshamta se jyada kar raha hoon. Taki meri beti khush rahe. Shadi me koi kami nahi hogi bhai sahab. Hamne poori koshish ki sagai me koi kami na rahne paye. Fir bhi agar koi kami rah gayi ho to aap hamko bata dijiye. Ham poori koshish karenge ki use door kar sake.

L.Papa- dekho Aanand ek to ladke ko apne sone ki janjeer nahi di. Aur aapne sagai mein paise bhi kam diye hain. Aise kaise chalega. Akhir hamne apne bete ki padhai likhai me kitna paisa kharcha kiya hai. Aur tum apni beti ke liye use phokat me apna damad banana chahte ho. Aur sath me hamare sath aaye huwe mehmano ka aapne swagat dhang se nahi kiya.

Aanand ji- ya aap kaisi baat kar rahe hain bhai sahab. Hamne apni taraf se khatirdari me koi kami nahi rakhi. bhai sahib Sagai ke liye paise aur janjeer ki koi baat hui hi nahi thi. Sagai ki anguthi ke alawa maine apni taraf se ek sone ki anguthi di hai. Waise bhi Baat to shadi ke liye hui hai moter Cycle aur 2 lakh rupye ki. Jo main shadi ke samay doonga aapko.

L.papa- Aise kaise main tumhari baat ka bharosha kar loon. Jo insan Sagai me itni kanjoosi kar sakta hai wo Shadi me kya kharcha karega. Mujhe to loot liya tumne sagai mein aur shadi mein to kangal hi bana doge tum mujhe.

S.Mama- Dekhiye bhai sahab Aap ab kuchh jyada hi bol rahe hain. Hamne apni taraf se koi kasar nahi rakhi khatirdari me. Fir bhi agar kahi kami rah gayi ho to hamko maaf kar dijiye. Aur rahi baat Shadi ke samay kiye gaye wade ki to wo ham poori tarah se nibhayenge. Jo hamne dene ke liye kaha hai wo hamm aapko denge.


Sarita ke Mama ki baat sunkar ladke ke papa gusse mein aa gaye aur unhone tez aawaz mein kaha.


L.papa- Kya jyada bol raha hoon main. Mujhe aap dono par tanik bhi bharosha nahi hain. Ab jab tak aap ladke ke liye janjeer aur 50000 Rupaye aur nahi denge. Tab tak Shadi ke baare me bhool jaiye.

S.mama- ye kya bat hui bhai Shahab. Ham aapse itne prem se baat kar rahe hain to aaap dhamki dene par utar aaye hain. Main bhi dekhta hoon ki kaise nahi karte aap shadi. Hamari bitiya koi sajawat ka saman hai kya ki jab man chaha haa kiya aur jab mann chaha na kar diya. jab ham bol rahe hain ki aapko shadi ke samay jo bhi dene ke liye kaha gaya hai wo ham donge to ab aap ki demand badhati ja rahi hai. Ye bilkul bhi sahi nahi hai.

L.papa- Aise kaise nahi denge aap. Aakhir maine apne bete ko palne aur padhai likhai par jo kharch kiya hai wo kaun dega. Aap free me mere kamaau bete ko apna damad banana chahte hain. Ya to meri baat maniye ya to ye Rishta khatam samajhiye.

Aanand ji- nahi nahi bhai sahab aisa mat kahiye. Abhi itni jaldi ye sab kaise arrange karunga main. aap hame kuchh din ka samay dijiye main janjeer aur 50000 Rupaye aapko de dunga. Lekin aap ye Rishta mat todiye. Bahut badnami ho jayegi meri samaz me.

L. Papa- mujhe ab aur koi baat nahin karni. Mujhe abhi ke abhi 50000 rupaye aur sone ki janjeer ladke ke liye chahiye. Nahi to main chala ladke ko lekar apne ghar.

Ladke ke papa ki baat sunkar aanand ji ki aankhon mein aanshu aa gaye. Unhone apni pagdi utar kar ladke ke papa ke pairon mein rakhne lage to Sarita ke mama ne unko rokte huwe kaha.


S.Mama- ye kya kah rahe hain aap jeeja ji. Ye lalchi log hain inke kadmon mein apni izzat rakhne ka koi matlab nahin hai. Itna to main bhi samajh gaya hoon ki inki najar mein paisa hi sabkuchh hai. Ab aap inki koi bhi baat nahin manenge. inki mango ko poora karke aap Sarita ke liye mushkile paida kar rahe hain.


Abhi ye sab bate ho rahi thi ki kisi ne Sarita ko khabar kar di ki Ladke ke papa aur Aanand ji me kuchh kaha suni ho gayi hai to sarita bhi sagai wale kapdon mein hi waha pahuch gayi. Jab usne poori baat suni aur apne papa ko apni pagdi ladke ke baap me pairon mein rakhte huwe dekha to uska matha bhanna gaya. Usne Ladke ke papa ko do took jawab dete huwe kaha.


Sarita- Aap kya shadi ke liye mana karenge. Main ye shadi khud tod rahi hoon. Nahi karni mujhe aap ke bete se shadi. Nikal jaiye aap abhi aur isi samay yahan se aur apne bete ke liye koi aur ladki dhoondh lijiye.


Sarita ki baat sunkar aanand ji ne usase gusse se kaha.


Aanand ji- Ye kya kar rahi ho Tum Sarita. Tum andar jao. Main baat kar raha hoon na.

Sarita- main kyon andar jaaun papa. Aur aap kyon inki baat sun rahe hain. Kyaa apne hame isiliye paal posh kar bada kiya tha ki ek din hamari wajah se in bhikhmango ke samne hanth failana pade. Main ye kabhi bardast nahi karungi ki meri wajah se mare papa ko kisi ke samne hanth fialana pade aur kisi ke shamne sharminda hona pade.

Aap hamara gurur hain papa. Abhiman hain aap hamare. Main apne gurur aur abhiman ko kisi ke samne toot-ta huwa nahin dekh sakti. Aap khud sochiye papa ki abhi meri shadi bhi nahi hui hai to inka ye haal hai. Meri shadi ho jane ke baad to ye sher ho jayenge. Aapse kuchh bhi demand kar denge. Aur aap meri Khushi ke liye inki har demand poori karte firenge. Inke pairo me gir kar royenge, gidgidayenge. Jo main kabhi nahi hone doongi.

Aurat koi sajawatt ki wastu nahi hai papa jo uski boli lagayi jaye. Are thokar marti hoon main inki Daulat aur inke bete ki naukari par. Aap meri shadi kisi gareeb majdoor se kar dena papa. Main roj kamakar kha lungi. Lekin in jaise bhikhmango ke ghar meri shadi mat kariye papa. Meri baat man lijiye papa. Apni Sarita ki baat man lijiye.

S.mama- Sarita sahi kah rahi hai jeeja ji. Ye log lalchi hain shadi ke baad agar inki koi demand ham na poori kar paye to. Aapne socha hai ki ye apni sarita ke sath kitna bura bartav kar sakte hain. Maan jaiye jeeja ji. Main Sarita bitiya ke sath hoon. Aur main bhi nahi chahta ki ab ye shadi ho.


Aanand ko bhi Sarita ki baat sahi lagi. Unhone bhi dabe man se apni sahmati de di. Ladke ke papa ko filhal aisi ummeed nahi thi ki ladki khud aakar shadi ke liye mana kar dengi. Unhone ne socha tha ki Darwaze par Sagaai toot jane ke dar se Aanand ji uski mang puri kar denge, lekin Sarita ke do took inkar ne unki ummido par pani Fer diya. Shadi toot jane ke baad ladke wale apna apna munh lekar waha se chale gaye.


Sarita ke inkar karne ke kuchh hi der me jangal me aag ki tarah charo taraf ye khabar fial gayi ki Sarita ne Shadi se inkar kar diya. fir to wahi huwa jo Aksar ladki ki shadi tootne par hota hai. Jitney munh utni baatein. Koi kah raha tha ki Sarita ne bahut Achha kiya jo Aise lalchi logo ke yaha bahu banker jane se inkar kar diya to koi kah raha tha ki ladki walo ko itna ghamand Shobha nahi deta.


Aanand ji ke padosh me ek naye pariwar ne kuchh samay pahle naya ghar banwaya tha aur wo ghar ke sabhi sadashyo ke sath waha sift hue the. Ghar ke mukhiya pulish mahakame me Inspector the. To unka man samman bhi tha. Unki patni housewife thi. Lekin muhfat thi. Kisi ke samne kuchh bhi bol deti thi. Ye bhi nahi samajh aata tha unko ki unki baat kisi ko buri lag sakti hai.


Hamesha apne pati ke inspector hone ka ghamand dikhati rahti thi. Inka beta Central bank me PO ki post par pichhle sal hi laga tha. Aur bitiya ham umar thii Sarita ki. Isliye dono me thodi bahut batchit ho jati thi, lekin wo bhi apni maa ki tarah hi thi. Padosh me rahne ke karan unko ye bhi pata chal gaya tha ki Abhishek ghar chhodkar chala gaya hai. Aur kisliye gaya hai ye bhi pata tha.


Sagai me shamil hone wo log bhi aaye the Inspector ko chhodkar. To jab unko Bhi ye baat pata chali ki Sarita ne shadi se mana kar diya hai to unhe mauka mil gaya apni baat kahne ka, lekin unhone yah nahi dekkha ki Sarita aur Manisha unke pichhe aa rahi hain. Unhone paas baithi aurat se kaha.


I.wife- Janti ho bahan mujhe to shak hai ki Is Sarita ka kahi na kahi chakkar chal raha hai. Jiske karan usne shadi se mana kar diya. nahi to batao bhala. Naukari wale ladke ko aajkal kaun mana karta hai shadi se.

Aurat- Nahi bahan aisa kuchh nahi hai tum galat samajh rahi ho bahut hi nek bachhiya hain.

I.wife- Tumhe nahi pata kuchh bhi. Ye dono upar se masoom dikhti hain, lekin andar se bahut ghagh hain. mujhe to lagta hai jisase Sarita ka chakkar chal raha hain ye wahi ladke honge. Jinko abhishek ne mara hoga. Bina ladki ki haan ke koi ladka uske baare me aise thodi bol sakta hai. Pata nahi kya sanskar diye hain Aanand ji ne apni betiyon ko. Abhishek ko pata chal gaya hoga in chakkaro ke baare me. Wo to pahle se hi gunda tha. Isliye us ladke ko pit diya.

apne bhaai se badla lene ke liye isne Abhishek ko ghar se nikalwa diya hoga. Koi sanskar nahi hain iske andar. Koi izzat nahi hai unki samaz mein. Are jiske bete aur betiyon ke ye lakshan honge uski kya izzat rahegi samaz me. Mere pati ko dekho. Kitna maan samman hai. Mere bete ko dekho bank me PO hain ye sab Achhe sanskar ka natiza hai. Mujhe dukh hota hai ki aanand ne kaise sanskar diya hain apne bachho ko. Beta gunda ban gaya aur dono betiya chritraheen nikal gayi.


Ye baat sunkar Sarita rote huwe apne kamre me bhag gayi, lekin Manisha aag babula ho gayi aur Chillate huwe bolli.


Manisha- ye kya bol rahi ho aap. Meri didiya ke charitra par itna ghatiya ilzam lagate huwe aapko sharam nahi aati. Meri didiya ganga ki tarah Pavitra hai aur aapko Meri Didiya ke charitra ka certificate dene ki jaroorat nahi hain. Aapki samaj me izzat hai. To ham log bhi aapke yahan bheekh mangne nahi jate. Aap apni izzat apne paas rakhiye.

Aap sanskar ki baat kar rahi hain. To aap apne sanskar dekhiye. Aapke yahi sanskar hain ki aap bina sachhai jane meri didiya par itna ghatiya ilzam laga rahi hain. Aap meri didiya ko kuchh bolne se pahle apni bitiya ki sachhai jakar pata kariye ki wo padhai ka bol kar bahar jati hai to padhai karne jati hain ya ladko ke sath gul chharre udane jati hai.


Mahisha ki tez aawaz sunkar bahut si aurate aur aadmi waha par jama ho gaye the. Us aurat ki beti bhi waha aa gayi thi. Jab usne apne bare me suna to wo bhi apni maa ki tarah shuru ho gayi.


Ladki- Kyo re Manisha. Kya boli tu. Tu mere bare me jasusi karti hain. Tujhe main chhodungi nahi. Meri maa sahi kah rahi hain tum dono bahne charitraheen ho. Koi izzat nahi hai samaj me tum logon ki. Bhaai gunda hai aur bahan badchalan. Are tum logo ko to chullu bhar paani me doobkar mar jana chahiye. Chalo maa yahan se aise lichado ke yahan se koi Rishta nahi rakhna hai hamko.

Anya padosi vyakti- ye tum maa beti kya bole ja rahi ho aanap sanaap. Ham log in bachhiyon ko bachpan se jante hain. In dono bachhiyo jaisa sanskari aur vyavhari. Bado ka aadar karne wali bachhiya yaha aas paas dhoodhne se bhi nahi milengi. Aur inke bete ke bare me kya janti ho tum dono. Wo shararati tha, ladai jhagda karta tha, lekin kabhi bhi kisi ladki se galat vyavhar nahi kiya usne kabhi kisi ki bahan betiyon ko gandi najar se nahi dekha.

Usne un ladko ko isliye mara tha kyonki un dono ne in bachhiyo ke bare me gandi baat ki thi. Tumhare aadmi police me hain to iska ye matlab nahi hai ki tumhare jo munh me aaye wo tum bakti jao. Tum dono ko ye nahi dikh raha hai ki us bachhi par musibato ka pahad toota hai. Uski shadi cancel ho gayi hai. Use dilasha dene ke bajay use badnam kar rahi ho tum dono. Sharam aani chahiye tum dono ko.

I.wife- ham kyon sharam kare. Hamne ya hamari beti ne kahi munh kala nahi kiya hai. Sharam to in dono ladkiyon ko aani chahiye. Jo munh kala karti firti hain. Bhalai ka to jamana hi nahi raha.


Abhi wo Aadmi kuchh aur bolta Usase pahle Aanand ji bich me bole pade.


Aanand ji- Bas kijiye aap log. Kyon meri Sarita ke pichhe pade hain aap sab. Bhagwan ke liye use Baksh dijiye Aur apne apne ghar jaiye. Jo bhi dukh aur musibat hamare upar padi hai use ham jhel lenge. Hame aap logo ki sahanubhuti ki jaroorat nahi hai. Meharbani karke aap log jaiye yahan se.
Aanand ji ki baat sunkar wo dono maa beti bhunbhunati hui apne ghar chali gayi. Uske baad dhire dhire sab paas padosh ke log unke ghar se bahar nikal gaye.


Iske Aage ki Kahaani Agle Bhag mein..
 

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कहानी का सातवाँ भाग लिख दिए हैं दोस्तों और पाठकों।।

पढ़िए, आनंद लीजिए और अपने महत्त्वपूर्ण विचार भी व्यक्त कीजिए।।
 

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lovely update ..ladke ke baap bahut lalchi aur harami kism ka aadmi tha jo ye soch raha tha ki bahana banake paise le lega aanand ji se par ain mauke par sarita ne himmat se usko jawab diya .
aur mama ne bhi sarita ka saath dekar achcha kiya .
inspector ki biwi wakai ghatiya aurat hai jo kisika dukh dekhkar maja lena chahti thi par manisha ne uski bhi bolti band kar di .
aur kuch achche padosiyo ne manisha ka saath bhi diya .
 

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UPDATE- 07


Fir dono bahane kuchh der baat karti rahi. Thodi hi der me ladke wale aa gaye. Apni kshamta ke anusar Aanand ji ne poori vyawastha ki thi. Kuchh hi der mein sagai ki rashm shuru ho gayi, lekin sagai hote hote ladke walon ka munh fool gaya. Ladke ke papa to aise bartav karne lage Jaise unke ghar me kisi ki mrityu ho gayi ho.


Ladke ke papa ne Aanand ji ko alag se Baat karne ke liye bulaya. Aanand ji ke sath unke sale bhi the. Ladke ke papa ne Aanand ji se kaha.


L.Papa- Ye kya hai Aanand ji aapne to kaha tha ki aapki khatirdari me koi kami nahi rahegi aur sagai ki rasham bahut ache se hogi, lekin yahan to na khatirdari thik se hui aur na hi sagai ki rasham hi ache se hui. Jab sagai me ye haal hai to shadi me to aap mujhe loot hi loge.

Aanand ji- Are nahi bhai Sahab. Ye aap kaisi baat kar rahe hain. Main apni kshamta se jyada kar raha hoon. Taki meri beti khush rahe. Shadi me koi kami nahi hogi bhai sahab. Hamne poori koshish ki sagai me koi kami na rahne paye. Fir bhi agar koi kami rah gayi ho to aap hamko bata dijiye. Ham poori koshish karenge ki use door kar sake.

L.Papa- dekho Aanand ek to ladke ko apne sone ki janjeer nahi di. Aur aapne sagai mein paise bhi kam diye hain. Aise kaise chalega. Akhir hamne apne bete ki padhai likhai me kitna paisa kharcha kiya hai. Aur tum apni beti ke liye use phokat me apna damad banana chahte ho. Aur sath me hamare sath aaye huwe mehmano ka aapne swagat dhang se nahi kiya.

Aanand ji- ya aap kaisi baat kar rahe hain bhai sahab. Hamne apni taraf se khatirdari me koi kami nahi rakhi. bhai sahib Sagai ke liye paise aur janjeer ki koi baat hui hi nahi thi. Sagai ki anguthi ke alawa maine apni taraf se ek sone ki anguthi di hai. Waise bhi Baat to shadi ke liye hui hai moter Cycle aur 2 lakh rupye ki. Jo main shadi ke samay doonga aapko.

L.papa- Aise kaise main tumhari baat ka bharosha kar loon. Jo insan Sagai me itni kanjoosi kar sakta hai wo Shadi me kya kharcha karega. Mujhe to loot liya tumne sagai mein aur shadi mein to kangal hi bana doge tum mujhe.

S.Mama- Dekhiye bhai sahab Aap ab kuchh jyada hi bol rahe hain. Hamne apni taraf se koi kasar nahi rakhi khatirdari me. Fir bhi agar kahi kami rah gayi ho to hamko maaf kar dijiye. Aur rahi baat Shadi ke samay kiye gaye wade ki to wo ham poori tarah se nibhayenge. Jo hamne dene ke liye kaha hai wo hamm aapko denge.


Sarita ke Mama ki baat sunkar ladke ke papa gusse mein aa gaye aur unhone tez aawaz mein kaha.


L.papa- Kya jyada bol raha hoon main. Mujhe aap dono par tanik bhi bharosha nahi hain. Ab jab tak aap ladke ke liye janjeer aur 50000 Rupaye aur nahi denge. Tab tak Shadi ke baare me bhool jaiye.

S.mama- ye kya bat hui bhai Shahab. Ham aapse itne prem se baat kar rahe hain to aaap dhamki dene par utar aaye hain. Main bhi dekhta hoon ki kaise nahi karte aap shadi. Hamari bitiya koi sajawat ka saman hai kya ki jab man chaha haa kiya aur jab mann chaha na kar diya. jab ham bol rahe hain ki aapko shadi ke samay jo bhi dene ke liye kaha gaya hai wo ham donge to ab aap ki demand badhati ja rahi hai. Ye bilkul bhi sahi nahi hai.

L.papa- Aise kaise nahi denge aap. Aakhir maine apne bete ko palne aur padhai likhai par jo kharch kiya hai wo kaun dega. Aap free me mere kamaau bete ko apna damad banana chahte hain. Ya to meri baat maniye ya to ye Rishta khatam samajhiye.

Aanand ji- nahi nahi bhai sahab aisa mat kahiye. Abhi itni jaldi ye sab kaise arrange karunga main. aap hame kuchh din ka samay dijiye main janjeer aur 50000 Rupaye aapko de dunga. Lekin aap ye Rishta mat todiye. Bahut badnami ho jayegi meri samaz me.

L. Papa- mujhe ab aur koi baat nahin karni. Mujhe abhi ke abhi 50000 rupaye aur sone ki janjeer ladke ke liye chahiye. Nahi to main chala ladke ko lekar apne ghar.

Ladke ke papa ki baat sunkar aanand ji ki aankhon mein aanshu aa gaye. Unhone apni pagdi utar kar ladke ke papa ke pairon mein rakhne lage to Sarita ke mama ne unko rokte huwe kaha.


S.Mama- ye kya kah rahe hain aap jeeja ji. Ye lalchi log hain inke kadmon mein apni izzat rakhne ka koi matlab nahin hai. Itna to main bhi samajh gaya hoon ki inki najar mein paisa hi sabkuchh hai. Ab aap inki koi bhi baat nahin manenge. inki mango ko poora karke aap Sarita ke liye mushkile paida kar rahe hain.


Abhi ye sab bate ho rahi thi ki kisi ne Sarita ko khabar kar di ki Ladke ke papa aur Aanand ji me kuchh kaha suni ho gayi hai to sarita bhi sagai wale kapdon mein hi waha pahuch gayi. Jab usne poori baat suni aur apne papa ko apni pagdi ladke ke baap me pairon mein rakhte huwe dekha to uska matha bhanna gaya. Usne Ladke ke papa ko do took jawab dete huwe kaha.


Sarita- Aap kya shadi ke liye mana karenge. Main ye shadi khud tod rahi hoon. Nahi karni mujhe aap ke bete se shadi. Nikal jaiye aap abhi aur isi samay yahan se aur apne bete ke liye koi aur ladki dhoondh lijiye.


Sarita ki baat sunkar aanand ji ne usase gusse se kaha.


Aanand ji- Ye kya kar rahi ho Tum Sarita. Tum andar jao. Main baat kar raha hoon na.

Sarita- main kyon andar jaaun papa. Aur aap kyon inki baat sun rahe hain. Kyaa apne hame isiliye paal posh kar bada kiya tha ki ek din hamari wajah se in bhikhmango ke samne hanth failana pade. Main ye kabhi bardast nahi karungi ki meri wajah se mare papa ko kisi ke samne hanth fialana pade aur kisi ke shamne sharminda hona pade.

Aap hamara gurur hain papa. Abhiman hain aap hamare. Main apne gurur aur abhiman ko kisi ke samne toot-ta huwa nahin dekh sakti. Aap khud sochiye papa ki abhi meri shadi bhi nahi hui hai to inka ye haal hai. Meri shadi ho jane ke baad to ye sher ho jayenge. Aapse kuchh bhi demand kar denge. Aur aap meri Khushi ke liye inki har demand poori karte firenge. Inke pairo me gir kar royenge, gidgidayenge. Jo main kabhi nahi hone doongi.

Aurat koi sajawatt ki wastu nahi hai papa jo uski boli lagayi jaye. Are thokar marti hoon main inki Daulat aur inke bete ki naukari par. Aap meri shadi kisi gareeb majdoor se kar dena papa. Main roj kamakar kha lungi. Lekin in jaise bhikhmango ke ghar meri shadi mat kariye papa. Meri baat man lijiye papa. Apni Sarita ki baat man lijiye.

S.mama- Sarita sahi kah rahi hai jeeja ji. Ye log lalchi hain shadi ke baad agar inki koi demand ham na poori kar paye to. Aapne socha hai ki ye apni sarita ke sath kitna bura bartav kar sakte hain. Maan jaiye jeeja ji. Main Sarita bitiya ke sath hoon. Aur main bhi nahi chahta ki ab ye shadi ho.


Aanand ko bhi Sarita ki baat sahi lagi. Unhone bhi dabe man se apni sahmati de di. Ladke ke papa ko filhal aisi ummeed nahi thi ki ladki khud aakar shadi ke liye mana kar dengi. Unhone ne socha tha ki Darwaze par Sagaai toot jane ke dar se Aanand ji uski mang puri kar denge, lekin Sarita ke do took inkar ne unki ummido par pani Fer diya. Shadi toot jane ke baad ladke wale apna apna munh lekar waha se chale gaye.


Sarita ke inkar karne ke kuchh hi der me jangal me aag ki tarah charo taraf ye khabar fial gayi ki Sarita ne Shadi se inkar kar diya. fir to wahi huwa jo Aksar ladki ki shadi tootne par hota hai. Jitney munh utni baatein. Koi kah raha tha ki Sarita ne bahut Achha kiya jo Aise lalchi logo ke yaha bahu banker jane se inkar kar diya to koi kah raha tha ki ladki walo ko itna ghamand Shobha nahi deta.


Aanand ji ke padosh me ek naye pariwar ne kuchh samay pahle naya ghar banwaya tha aur wo ghar ke sabhi sadashyo ke sath waha sift hue the. Ghar ke mukhiya pulish mahakame me Inspector the. To unka man samman bhi tha. Unki patni housewife thi. Lekin muhfat thi. Kisi ke samne kuchh bhi bol deti thi. Ye bhi nahi samajh aata tha unko ki unki baat kisi ko buri lag sakti hai.


Hamesha apne pati ke inspector hone ka ghamand dikhati rahti thi. Inka beta Central bank me PO ki post par pichhle sal hi laga tha. Aur bitiya ham umar thii Sarita ki. Isliye dono me thodi bahut batchit ho jati thi, lekin wo bhi apni maa ki tarah hi thi. Padosh me rahne ke karan unko ye bhi pata chal gaya tha ki Abhishek ghar chhodkar chala gaya hai. Aur kisliye gaya hai ye bhi pata tha.


Sagai me shamil hone wo log bhi aaye the Inspector ko chhodkar. To jab unko Bhi ye baat pata chali ki Sarita ne shadi se mana kar diya hai to unhe mauka mil gaya apni baat kahne ka, lekin unhone yah nahi dekkha ki Sarita aur Manisha unke pichhe aa rahi hain. Unhone paas baithi aurat se kaha.


I.wife- Janti ho bahan mujhe to shak hai ki Is Sarita ka kahi na kahi chakkar chal raha hai. Jiske karan usne shadi se mana kar diya. nahi to batao bhala. Naukari wale ladke ko aajkal kaun mana karta hai shadi se.

Aurat- Nahi bahan aisa kuchh nahi hai tum galat samajh rahi ho bahut hi nek bachhiya hain.

I.wife- Tumhe nahi pata kuchh bhi. Ye dono upar se masoom dikhti hain, lekin andar se bahut ghagh hain. mujhe to lagta hai jisase Sarita ka chakkar chal raha hain ye wahi ladke honge. Jinko abhishek ne mara hoga. Bina ladki ki haan ke koi ladka uske baare me aise thodi bol sakta hai. Pata nahi kya sanskar diye hain Aanand ji ne apni betiyon ko. Abhishek ko pata chal gaya hoga in chakkaro ke baare me. Wo to pahle se hi gunda tha. Isliye us ladke ko pit diya.

apne bhaai se badla lene ke liye isne Abhishek ko ghar se nikalwa diya hoga. Koi sanskar nahi hain iske andar. Koi izzat nahi hai unki samaz mein. Are jiske bete aur betiyon ke ye lakshan honge uski kya izzat rahegi samaz me. Mere pati ko dekho. Kitna maan samman hai. Mere bete ko dekho bank me PO hain ye sab Achhe sanskar ka natiza hai. Mujhe dukh hota hai ki aanand ne kaise sanskar diya hain apne bachho ko. Beta gunda ban gaya aur dono betiya chritraheen nikal gayi.


Ye baat sunkar Sarita rote huwe apne kamre me bhag gayi, lekin Manisha aag babula ho gayi aur Chillate huwe bolli.


Manisha- ye kya bol rahi ho aap. Meri didiya ke charitra par itna ghatiya ilzam lagate huwe aapko sharam nahi aati. Meri didiya ganga ki tarah Pavitra hai aur aapko Meri Didiya ke charitra ka certificate dene ki jaroorat nahi hain. Aapki samaj me izzat hai. To ham log bhi aapke yahan bheekh mangne nahi jate. Aap apni izzat apne paas rakhiye.

Aap sanskar ki baat kar rahi hain. To aap apne sanskar dekhiye. Aapke yahi sanskar hain ki aap bina sachhai jane meri didiya par itna ghatiya ilzam laga rahi hain. Aap meri didiya ko kuchh bolne se pahle apni bitiya ki sachhai jakar pata kariye ki wo padhai ka bol kar bahar jati hai to padhai karne jati hain ya ladko ke sath gul chharre udane jati hai.


Mahisha ki tez aawaz sunkar bahut si aurate aur aadmi waha par jama ho gaye the. Us aurat ki beti bhi waha aa gayi thi. Jab usne apne bare me suna to wo bhi apni maa ki tarah shuru ho gayi.


Ladki- Kyo re Manisha. Kya boli tu. Tu mere bare me jasusi karti hain. Tujhe main chhodungi nahi. Meri maa sahi kah rahi hain tum dono bahne charitraheen ho. Koi izzat nahi hai samaj me tum logon ki. Bhaai gunda hai aur bahan badchalan. Are tum logo ko to chullu bhar paani me doobkar mar jana chahiye. Chalo maa yahan se aise lichado ke yahan se koi Rishta nahi rakhna hai hamko.

Anya padosi vyakti- ye tum maa beti kya bole ja rahi ho aanap sanaap. Ham log in bachhiyon ko bachpan se jante hain. In dono bachhiyo jaisa sanskari aur vyavhari. Bado ka aadar karne wali bachhiya yaha aas paas dhoodhne se bhi nahi milengi. Aur inke bete ke bare me kya janti ho tum dono. Wo shararati tha, ladai jhagda karta tha, lekin kabhi bhi kisi ladki se galat vyavhar nahi kiya usne kabhi kisi ki bahan betiyon ko gandi najar se nahi dekha.

Usne un ladko ko isliye mara tha kyonki un dono ne in bachhiyo ke bare me gandi baat ki thi. Tumhare aadmi police me hain to iska ye matlab nahi hai ki tumhare jo munh me aaye wo tum bakti jao. Tum dono ko ye nahi dikh raha hai ki us bachhi par musibato ka pahad toota hai. Uski shadi cancel ho gayi hai. Use dilasha dene ke bajay use badnam kar rahi ho tum dono. Sharam aani chahiye tum dono ko.

I.wife- ham kyon sharam kare. Hamne ya hamari beti ne kahi munh kala nahi kiya hai. Sharam to in dono ladkiyon ko aani chahiye. Jo munh kala karti firti hain. Bhalai ka to jamana hi nahi raha.


Abhi wo Aadmi kuchh aur bolta Usase pahle Aanand ji bich me bole pade.


Aanand ji- Bas kijiye aap log. Kyon meri Sarita ke pichhe pade hain aap sab. Bhagwan ke liye use Baksh dijiye Aur apne apne ghar jaiye. Jo bhi dukh aur musibat hamare upar padi hai use ham jhel lenge. Hame aap logo ki sahanubhuti ki jaroorat nahi hai. Meharbani karke aap log jaiye yahan se.
Aanand ji ki baat sunkar wo dono maa beti bhunbhunati hui apne ghar chali gayi. Uske baad dhire dhire sab paas padosh ke log unke ghar se bahar nikal gaye.



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Sarita ne ekdum sahi kiyaa. Aise lalchi logo ke ghar rishtaa karna hi nhi chahiyeee.

Sarita ne unlogo ka muh pe mana karna ekdum jabardast laga mujhe.

Aur yeh kuch padoshi kisi ke sage nhi hotee. Khushi mein jalte hai toh dukh mein khush hote hai.

Aur aise hi hai Sarita ke padoshi. Ladki ki shaadi tooti hai kaha uske aur uske parivaar ko support karenge lekin uske jagah ladki ke character pe hi ungli utha rahe hai.

Jab unki ladki ke saath aisa hogaa tab unko samaj aayega.

Aur yeh inspector ki biwi aur beti. Yeh toh bahot bade kamine hai. Pati aur beta sarkari naukri karte hai matlab inki bahot izzat hai aur baaki sab ki koi izzat nhi.

Jab unki beti ki aisi hi halat hogi naa tab samaj aayega unko.
 
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Fir dono bahane kuchh der baat karti rahi. Thodi hi der me ladke wale aa gaye. Apni kshamta ke anusar Aanand ji ne poori vyawastha ki thi. Kuchh hi der mein sagai ki rashm shuru ho gayi, lekin sagai hote hote ladke walon ka munh fool gaya. Ladke ke papa to aise bartav karne lage Jaise unke ghar me kisi ki mrityu ho gayi ho.


Ladke ke papa ne Aanand ji ko alag se Baat karne ke liye bulaya. Aanand ji ke sath unke sale bhi the. Ladke ke papa ne Aanand ji se kaha.


L.Papa- Ye kya hai Aanand ji aapne to kaha tha ki aapki khatirdari me koi kami nahi rahegi aur sagai ki rasham bahut ache se hogi, lekin yahan to na khatirdari thik se hui aur na hi sagai ki rasham hi ache se hui. Jab sagai me ye haal hai to shadi me to aap mujhe loot hi loge.

Aanand ji- Are nahi bhai Sahab. Ye aap kaisi baat kar rahe hain. Main apni kshamta se jyada kar raha hoon. Taki meri beti khush rahe. Shadi me koi kami nahi hogi bhai sahab. Hamne poori koshish ki sagai me koi kami na rahne paye. Fir bhi agar koi kami rah gayi ho to aap hamko bata dijiye. Ham poori koshish karenge ki use door kar sake.

L.Papa- dekho Aanand ek to ladke ko apne sone ki janjeer nahi di. Aur aapne sagai mein paise bhi kam diye hain. Aise kaise chalega. Akhir hamne apne bete ki padhai likhai me kitna paisa kharcha kiya hai. Aur tum apni beti ke liye use phokat me apna damad banana chahte ho. Aur sath me hamare sath aaye huwe mehmano ka aapne swagat dhang se nahi kiya.

Aanand ji- ya aap kaisi baat kar rahe hain bhai sahab. Hamne apni taraf se khatirdari me koi kami nahi rakhi. bhai sahib Sagai ke liye paise aur janjeer ki koi baat hui hi nahi thi. Sagai ki anguthi ke alawa maine apni taraf se ek sone ki anguthi di hai. Waise bhi Baat to shadi ke liye hui hai moter Cycle aur 2 lakh rupye ki. Jo main shadi ke samay doonga aapko.

L.papa- Aise kaise main tumhari baat ka bharosha kar loon. Jo insan Sagai me itni kanjoosi kar sakta hai wo Shadi me kya kharcha karega. Mujhe to loot liya tumne sagai mein aur shadi mein to kangal hi bana doge tum mujhe.

S.Mama- Dekhiye bhai sahab Aap ab kuchh jyada hi bol rahe hain. Hamne apni taraf se koi kasar nahi rakhi khatirdari me. Fir bhi agar kahi kami rah gayi ho to hamko maaf kar dijiye. Aur rahi baat Shadi ke samay kiye gaye wade ki to wo ham poori tarah se nibhayenge. Jo hamne dene ke liye kaha hai wo hamm aapko denge.


Sarita ke Mama ki baat sunkar ladke ke papa gusse mein aa gaye aur unhone tez aawaz mein kaha.


L.papa- Kya jyada bol raha hoon main. Mujhe aap dono par tanik bhi bharosha nahi hain. Ab jab tak aap ladke ke liye janjeer aur 50000 Rupaye aur nahi denge. Tab tak Shadi ke baare me bhool jaiye.

S.mama- ye kya bat hui bhai Shahab. Ham aapse itne prem se baat kar rahe hain to aaap dhamki dene par utar aaye hain. Main bhi dekhta hoon ki kaise nahi karte aap shadi. Hamari bitiya koi sajawat ka saman hai kya ki jab man chaha haa kiya aur jab mann chaha na kar diya. jab ham bol rahe hain ki aapko shadi ke samay jo bhi dene ke liye kaha gaya hai wo ham donge to ab aap ki demand badhati ja rahi hai. Ye bilkul bhi sahi nahi hai.

L.papa- Aise kaise nahi denge aap. Aakhir maine apne bete ko palne aur padhai likhai par jo kharch kiya hai wo kaun dega. Aap free me mere kamaau bete ko apna damad banana chahte hain. Ya to meri baat maniye ya to ye Rishta khatam samajhiye.

Aanand ji- nahi nahi bhai sahab aisa mat kahiye. Abhi itni jaldi ye sab kaise arrange karunga main. aap hame kuchh din ka samay dijiye main janjeer aur 50000 Rupaye aapko de dunga. Lekin aap ye Rishta mat todiye. Bahut badnami ho jayegi meri samaz me.

L. Papa- mujhe ab aur koi baat nahin karni. Mujhe abhi ke abhi 50000 rupaye aur sone ki janjeer ladke ke liye chahiye. Nahi to main chala ladke ko lekar apne ghar.

Ladke ke papa ki baat sunkar aanand ji ki aankhon mein aanshu aa gaye. Unhone apni pagdi utar kar ladke ke papa ke pairon mein rakhne lage to Sarita ke mama ne unko rokte huwe kaha.


S.Mama- ye kya kah rahe hain aap jeeja ji. Ye lalchi log hain inke kadmon mein apni izzat rakhne ka koi matlab nahin hai. Itna to main bhi samajh gaya hoon ki inki najar mein paisa hi sabkuchh hai. Ab aap inki koi bhi baat nahin manenge. inki mango ko poora karke aap Sarita ke liye mushkile paida kar rahe hain.


Abhi ye sab bate ho rahi thi ki kisi ne Sarita ko khabar kar di ki Ladke ke papa aur Aanand ji me kuchh kaha suni ho gayi hai to sarita bhi sagai wale kapdon mein hi waha pahuch gayi. Jab usne poori baat suni aur apne papa ko apni pagdi ladke ke baap me pairon mein rakhte huwe dekha to uska matha bhanna gaya. Usne Ladke ke papa ko do took jawab dete huwe kaha.


Sarita- Aap kya shadi ke liye mana karenge. Main ye shadi khud tod rahi hoon. Nahi karni mujhe aap ke bete se shadi. Nikal jaiye aap abhi aur isi samay yahan se aur apne bete ke liye koi aur ladki dhoondh lijiye.


Sarita ki baat sunkar aanand ji ne usase gusse se kaha.


Aanand ji- Ye kya kar rahi ho Tum Sarita. Tum andar jao. Main baat kar raha hoon na.

Sarita- main kyon andar jaaun papa. Aur aap kyon inki baat sun rahe hain. Kyaa apne hame isiliye paal posh kar bada kiya tha ki ek din hamari wajah se in bhikhmango ke samne hanth failana pade. Main ye kabhi bardast nahi karungi ki meri wajah se mare papa ko kisi ke samne hanth fialana pade aur kisi ke shamne sharminda hona pade.

Aap hamara gurur hain papa. Abhiman hain aap hamare. Main apne gurur aur abhiman ko kisi ke samne toot-ta huwa nahin dekh sakti. Aap khud sochiye papa ki abhi meri shadi bhi nahi hui hai to inka ye haal hai. Meri shadi ho jane ke baad to ye sher ho jayenge. Aapse kuchh bhi demand kar denge. Aur aap meri Khushi ke liye inki har demand poori karte firenge. Inke pairo me gir kar royenge, gidgidayenge. Jo main kabhi nahi hone doongi.

Aurat koi sajawatt ki wastu nahi hai papa jo uski boli lagayi jaye. Are thokar marti hoon main inki Daulat aur inke bete ki naukari par. Aap meri shadi kisi gareeb majdoor se kar dena papa. Main roj kamakar kha lungi. Lekin in jaise bhikhmango ke ghar meri shadi mat kariye papa. Meri baat man lijiye papa. Apni Sarita ki baat man lijiye.

S.mama- Sarita sahi kah rahi hai jeeja ji. Ye log lalchi hain shadi ke baad agar inki koi demand ham na poori kar paye to. Aapne socha hai ki ye apni sarita ke sath kitna bura bartav kar sakte hain. Maan jaiye jeeja ji. Main Sarita bitiya ke sath hoon. Aur main bhi nahi chahta ki ab ye shadi ho.


Aanand ko bhi Sarita ki baat sahi lagi. Unhone bhi dabe man se apni sahmati de di. Ladke ke papa ko filhal aisi ummeed nahi thi ki ladki khud aakar shadi ke liye mana kar dengi. Unhone ne socha tha ki Darwaze par Sagaai toot jane ke dar se Aanand ji uski mang puri kar denge, lekin Sarita ke do took inkar ne unki ummido par pani Fer diya. Shadi toot jane ke baad ladke wale apna apna munh lekar waha se chale gaye.


Sarita ke inkar karne ke kuchh hi der me jangal me aag ki tarah charo taraf ye khabar fial gayi ki Sarita ne Shadi se inkar kar diya. fir to wahi huwa jo Aksar ladki ki shadi tootne par hota hai. Jitney munh utni baatein. Koi kah raha tha ki Sarita ne bahut Achha kiya jo Aise lalchi logo ke yaha bahu banker jane se inkar kar diya to koi kah raha tha ki ladki walo ko itna ghamand Shobha nahi deta.


Aanand ji ke padosh me ek naye pariwar ne kuchh samay pahle naya ghar banwaya tha aur wo ghar ke sabhi sadashyo ke sath waha sift hue the. Ghar ke mukhiya pulish mahakame me Inspector the. To unka man samman bhi tha. Unki patni housewife thi. Lekin muhfat thi. Kisi ke samne kuchh bhi bol deti thi. Ye bhi nahi samajh aata tha unko ki unki baat kisi ko buri lag sakti hai.


Hamesha apne pati ke inspector hone ka ghamand dikhati rahti thi. Inka beta Central bank me PO ki post par pichhle sal hi laga tha. Aur bitiya ham umar thii Sarita ki. Isliye dono me thodi bahut batchit ho jati thi, lekin wo bhi apni maa ki tarah hi thi. Padosh me rahne ke karan unko ye bhi pata chal gaya tha ki Abhishek ghar chhodkar chala gaya hai. Aur kisliye gaya hai ye bhi pata tha.


Sagai me shamil hone wo log bhi aaye the Inspector ko chhodkar. To jab unko Bhi ye baat pata chali ki Sarita ne shadi se mana kar diya hai to unhe mauka mil gaya apni baat kahne ka, lekin unhone yah nahi dekkha ki Sarita aur Manisha unke pichhe aa rahi hain. Unhone paas baithi aurat se kaha.


I.wife- Janti ho bahan mujhe to shak hai ki Is Sarita ka kahi na kahi chakkar chal raha hai. Jiske karan usne shadi se mana kar diya. nahi to batao bhala. Naukari wale ladke ko aajkal kaun mana karta hai shadi se.

Aurat- Nahi bahan aisa kuchh nahi hai tum galat samajh rahi ho bahut hi nek bachhiya hain.

I.wife- Tumhe nahi pata kuchh bhi. Ye dono upar se masoom dikhti hain, lekin andar se bahut ghagh hain. mujhe to lagta hai jisase Sarita ka chakkar chal raha hain ye wahi ladke honge. Jinko abhishek ne mara hoga. Bina ladki ki haan ke koi ladka uske baare me aise thodi bol sakta hai. Pata nahi kya sanskar diye hain Aanand ji ne apni betiyon ko. Abhishek ko pata chal gaya hoga in chakkaro ke baare me. Wo to pahle se hi gunda tha. Isliye us ladke ko pit diya.

apne bhaai se badla lene ke liye isne Abhishek ko ghar se nikalwa diya hoga. Koi sanskar nahi hain iske andar. Koi izzat nahi hai unki samaz mein. Are jiske bete aur betiyon ke ye lakshan honge uski kya izzat rahegi samaz me. Mere pati ko dekho. Kitna maan samman hai. Mere bete ko dekho bank me PO hain ye sab Achhe sanskar ka natiza hai. Mujhe dukh hota hai ki aanand ne kaise sanskar diya hain apne bachho ko. Beta gunda ban gaya aur dono betiya chritraheen nikal gayi.


Ye baat sunkar Sarita rote huwe apne kamre me bhag gayi, lekin Manisha aag babula ho gayi aur Chillate huwe bolli.


Manisha- ye kya bol rahi ho aap. Meri didiya ke charitra par itna ghatiya ilzam lagate huwe aapko sharam nahi aati. Meri didiya ganga ki tarah Pavitra hai aur aapko Meri Didiya ke charitra ka certificate dene ki jaroorat nahi hain. Aapki samaj me izzat hai. To ham log bhi aapke yahan bheekh mangne nahi jate. Aap apni izzat apne paas rakhiye.

Aap sanskar ki baat kar rahi hain. To aap apne sanskar dekhiye. Aapke yahi sanskar hain ki aap bina sachhai jane meri didiya par itna ghatiya ilzam laga rahi hain. Aap meri didiya ko kuchh bolne se pahle apni bitiya ki sachhai jakar pata kariye ki wo padhai ka bol kar bahar jati hai to padhai karne jati hain ya ladko ke sath gul chharre udane jati hai.


Mahisha ki tez aawaz sunkar bahut si aurate aur aadmi waha par jama ho gaye the. Us aurat ki beti bhi waha aa gayi thi. Jab usne apne bare me suna to wo bhi apni maa ki tarah shuru ho gayi.


Ladki- Kyo re Manisha. Kya boli tu. Tu mere bare me jasusi karti hain. Tujhe main chhodungi nahi. Meri maa sahi kah rahi hain tum dono bahne charitraheen ho. Koi izzat nahi hai samaj me tum logon ki. Bhaai gunda hai aur bahan badchalan. Are tum logo ko to chullu bhar paani me doobkar mar jana chahiye. Chalo maa yahan se aise lichado ke yahan se koi Rishta nahi rakhna hai hamko.

Anya padosi vyakti- ye tum maa beti kya bole ja rahi ho aanap sanaap. Ham log in bachhiyon ko bachpan se jante hain. In dono bachhiyo jaisa sanskari aur vyavhari. Bado ka aadar karne wali bachhiya yaha aas paas dhoodhne se bhi nahi milengi. Aur inke bete ke bare me kya janti ho tum dono. Wo shararati tha, ladai jhagda karta tha, lekin kabhi bhi kisi ladki se galat vyavhar nahi kiya usne kabhi kisi ki bahan betiyon ko gandi najar se nahi dekha.

Usne un ladko ko isliye mara tha kyonki un dono ne in bachhiyo ke bare me gandi baat ki thi. Tumhare aadmi police me hain to iska ye matlab nahi hai ki tumhare jo munh me aaye wo tum bakti jao. Tum dono ko ye nahi dikh raha hai ki us bachhi par musibato ka pahad toota hai. Uski shadi cancel ho gayi hai. Use dilasha dene ke bajay use badnam kar rahi ho tum dono. Sharam aani chahiye tum dono ko.

I.wife- ham kyon sharam kare. Hamne ya hamari beti ne kahi munh kala nahi kiya hai. Sharam to in dono ladkiyon ko aani chahiye. Jo munh kala karti firti hain. Bhalai ka to jamana hi nahi raha.


Abhi wo Aadmi kuchh aur bolta Usase pahle Aanand ji bich me bole pade.


Aanand ji- Bas kijiye aap log. Kyon meri Sarita ke pichhe pade hain aap sab. Bhagwan ke liye use Baksh dijiye Aur apne apne ghar jaiye. Jo bhi dukh aur musibat hamare upar padi hai use ham jhel lenge. Hame aap logo ki sahanubhuti ki jaroorat nahi hai. Meharbani karke aap log jaiye yahan se.
Aanand ji ki baat sunkar wo dono maa beti bhunbhunati hui apne ghar chali gayi. Uske baad dhire dhire sab paas padosh ke log unke ghar se bahar nikal gaye.


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