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Super update .sarita ne apni target chun liya wo UPpcs exam degi do saal tak shaddi nehni karne ki apni pita ji ko batayi Anand ji usko permission de diya he.
धन्यवाद आपका मान्यवर।
आखिर बेटी ने पहली बार आनंद जी से कुछ मंगा था तो वो कैसे इनकार कर पाते ।

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UPDATE- 09


Aanand ji se permission milne ke baad kuchh hi dino me Sarita ne Uttar Pradesh Provincial Civil Service (UPPCS) ke liye Aawedan kar diya. Uske baad Sarita padhai me jhut gayi. Abhi 4-5 mahine pahle hi usne Post graduation ki padhai khatam ki thi to padhai se abhi uska nata toota nahi tha. Wo poore man se padhaai me jhut gayi. Jut kya gayi usne apne aapko kamre me band kar liya aur apne aapko kitabon ko samarpit kar diya.


Isi bich jab inspector apne ghar wapas aaya to use apni patni ki kartoot pata chali to use bahut gussa aaya apni patni par. Chunki inspector bhala manush tha to Usne apni patni ko Aanand ki family ke sath bura bartav karne ke karan bahut dantaa aur Aanand ji ke paas jakar aanand ji, Raani ji, Sarita aur Manisha se apne patni ke Bartav ke liye marji mangi.


Chunki Aanand ji bhale aur suljhe huwe insan the, isliye unhone Inspector ko maffi mangne se manaa kar diya.


Idhar Sarita apni padhaai mein juti hui thi. bahut hi jaroori kam hone par hi wo ghar se bahar jati thi. Dhire dhire aaspas ke logo, jinke sath Aanand ke ache sambandh the ko pata chal gaya ki Sarita Uttar Pradesh Provincial Civil Service (UPPCS) ke exam ki taiyari kar rahi hai. Ye baat udate udate Inspector ki wife ko bhi pata lagi. Uski bhi jisase pat-ti thi usne use bataya to usne kaha.


Lady- Are suna hai ki Aanand ji ki beti ne abhi kuchh saal shadi ke liye mana kar diya hai aur Uttar Pradesh Provincial Civil Service (UPPCS) ki taiyari kar rahi hai. Bahut Achha hai uski naukari lag jaye. Bechare aanand ji ka bojh kam ho jayega.

Ins. Wife- Itna aasan hai kya Uttar Pradesh Provincial Civil Service (UPPCS) ki padhaii karna. Mere pati bhi iski bahut taiyari kiye the lekin huwa nahi. Aur ye kal ki laudiya chali hai iski taiyari karne. Ye Sab chonchle hain uske taki kuchh din aur rangreliya mana sake wo apne Yaar ke sath.

Lady- tum kaisi bat karti ho. Ham log use bachpan se jante hain. Wo aisi bilkul bhi nahi hai, wo bahut sanskari aur Achhi ladki hai.

Ins. Wife- Main inspector ki biwi hoon. Itna to kisi ko bhi dekh kar bata sakti hoon ki kaun kaisa hai. Wo tum logo ke samne apne sanskar dikhati hai aur bahar apne premi ke sath gulchharre udati hogi. Main ache se janti hoon in lower class logo ko. Fans liya hoga kisi ameer jade ko.

Lady- main hi bevkoof hoon jo pattharr per sir patak rahi hoon. Acha main chalti hoon mujhe bahut kam hai.


Wo lady waha se uthkar chali gayi. Inspector ki wife bhunbhunate huwe apne ghar me chali gayi. Sarita to jaise padhai ke chakkar me deen duniya ko bhul gayi thi. Uske dimag me bas 2 hi cheej ghoom rahi thi aur wo tha apne papa se kiya huwa wada. 2 sal ke samay ka wada Aur Inspector ki wife ki khari khoti.


Yahi baat apne dimag me baithakar Sarita padhai kar rahi thi. Uttar Pradesh Provincial Civil Service (UPPCS) form bharne ke kuchh mahino baad hi prelims ka paper ki date aa gayi. Exam ke din Sarita Raani ji ka Ashirwad lekar pariksha dene gayi. Aanand ji khud use auto par baithakar pariksha kendra par le gaye. Auto se utarne ke baad Satita ne Aanand ji ka pair chukar aashirwad liya aur andar chali gayi. Paper dene ke baad Sarita ko andaza ho gaya ki paper uski ummeed ke mutabik achha gaya tha.


Exam se wapas aane ke baad wo mains ki padhai me jut gayi. Kuchh din baad Prelims ka result aaya to wo paas thi. Sabhi gharwale Bahut khush huwe. Aise hi din gujarte rahe zindagi Apne hisab se chalti rahi. Dekhte hi dekhte Mains ki date bhi gayi. Sarita ne poora man lagakar mains ki bhi pariksha di. Mains ki pariksha bhi Achhi hi gai thi. Sarita ko poora bharosha tha ki wo paas ho jayegi.


Ab Use tension thi to Interview ki. Usne Youtube se Interview ke video dekhe. Manisha ke samne interview ki training karti. Jitna sambhav hota wo apni taraf se poora seekhne ki koshish karti thi.


Kuch mahine baad mains ka bhi result aa gaya tha aur Sarita Mains me bhi Achhe number se paas hui thi. Poora pariwar Khushi se jhoom utha. Paas padosh ke logo ko bhi jab pata chala to jo shubhchintak the unko Khushi hui aur jo Shubhchintak nahi the unko koi fark nahi pada.


Sarita ka Interview aaj se 1 Hafte baad ka tha. Wo bahut hi nervous the. Use samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki wo Interviewer ka samna kaise karegi. Inhi sari bato ko sochkar vo bechain thi. Aanand ji ne jab Sarita ki ye halat dekhi to wo Sarita ke paas baithate huwe bole.


Aanand ji - Kya baat hai beta. Tum kuchh pareshan si dikh rahi ho.

Sarita- papa mujhe interview ko lekar bahut ghabrahat ho rahi hai. Mujhe bahut dar lag raha hai papa.

Aanand ji- Isme ghabrane wali koi baat nahi hai. Aur tu kab se darne lagi. Tu to meri bahadur beti hai na. fir kyon dar rahi hai jo bhi hoga Sab Achha hi hoga.

Sarita- wo to thik hai papa lekin main interviewer ka samna kaise karungi. Maine kabhi interview face nahi kiya hai papa. Kaisa hota hai. Kya sawal pochote hain. Kuchh bhi nahi maloom mujhe.

Aanand ji- dekho beti main jyada padha likh to hoon nahin ki main isme tumhari koi madad kar paaun, lekin fir bhi Zindagi mein milne wali Thokron ne itna gyan jaroor diya hai ki main tera hausla badha sakun. Achha ek baat batao Sarita. Kya tumne kabhi Isase pahle Uttar Pradesh Provincial Civil Service (UPPCS) ka exam diya tha kya.

Nahi na, lekin tumne than liya tha ki 2 sal ka tumhare paas jo samay hai usi samay me tumhe iski pariksha paas karni hai. Iske liye tumne kitabe jaroor padhi lekin tumhe ye nahi pata tha ki Question kaun se aayenge. Kiss type ke honge. Kitab padhkar bas hamko andaza hota hai ki isi tarah ke Question exam me ate hain, lekin kaun sa Question exam me aayega ye pata nahi rahta. Thik usi tarah tum interview ke liye Youtube par jo Interview dekhthi ho wo bas ek dhancha hai ki interview aise hota hai, lekin Question kya hoga ye usi samay pata chalega.

To jis tarah tumne Prelims Aur mains Cleare kiya hai usi tarah tum Interview bhi clear karogi. Ye mujhe maloom hai beti. Isliye tum apne man se dar nikal do.

Sarita- wo sab thik hai papa. Main poori koshish karungi apna best se best dene ki. Lekin interviewer kaise honge. Unka swabhav kaisa hoga. Wo 3-4 log bhi rahte hain waha par. To mere answer se sabko satisfaction milega ya nahi milega.

Aanand- Tumhe yaad hai beti ki jab maine tumhari mummy se tumhari shadi ke Vishay me baat kar raha tha tab tumne kya kaha tha. Ki main Abhi shadi nahi karungi. Aur mere poochne par tumne bataya tha ki tumhe do sal ka samay chahiye uske baad main tumhari shadi jisase bhi karunga tum man logi.

Us samay tumne bina dare tumko jo sahi laga tumne kaha. Thik waise hi. Interview ke samay tum bas ye samajh lena ki samne tumhara baap yani ki main baitha hoon. Kai roop me. Koi hansi wala roop, koi sanjida roop, koi majak wala roop. To ye samajh lena ki samne jo 4-5 log baithe hain wo main hoon.

To jo bhi sawal tumse poochha jaye. Bina dare aur bina hichak ke jaise us din tumne mere sawal ka uttar diya tha. Jo tumhe us samay sahi laga tha. Thik usi tarah jo bhi sawal poocha jaye.uska jo bhi uttar tumhe sahi lage. Bina dare aur bina jhijhak ke apna uttar dena. mujhe poora bharosha hai ki tum jaroor safal hogi.


Aanand ki baat sunkar Sarita ko thoda bahut hausla mila. Apne papa ki baat sunkar uske andar ek nai urja ka sanchar huwa aur wo interview ki taiyaari me jut gayi. 15 din baad interview ki date fix ho gayi. Jaise jaise interview ka din nazdeek aata ja raha tha waise waise Sarita ka confidence badhata ja raha tha.Aakhirkar wo din aa gaya jab Sarita ko interview ke liye jana tha.


Sarita subah Achhe se taiyaar hokar raani ji ka Ashirwad lene gai. Raani jii ne use Aashirwad ke sath Dahi chini khilakar bheja. Manisha ne bhi apni didiya ki safalta ke liye bhagwan se prarthana ki. Aanand ji khud Sarita ko lekar interview ki jagah gaye. Andar jane se pahle Sarita na Aanand ka pair chukar aashirwad liya to aanand ji bole.


Aanand ji- Beti ekdam bindas hokar, bina kisi dar aur jhijhak ke har sawal ka jawab dena. Mera aashirwad sada tumhare sath hai beti. Tum jaroor safal hogi.

Sarita- ji papa main poori koshishi karungi.


Itna kahkar Sarita Andar chali gayi. Aanand ji bahar Sarita ke intezar me baithe rahe. Sarita se unhone kah to diya tha jo unke man me tha, lekin wo khud nahi jante the ki interview hota kaise hain, is liye vo bhi bahar baithe nervous ho rahe the. Lagbhag chaar ghanta ke baad Sarita bahar aate huwe dikhai padi.


Sarita ka chehra kuchh utra huwa dikh raha tha. Uske aane ke baad aanand ji ne usase poocha.


Aanand- Kya huwa beti. Tumhara chehra kyon utra huwa hai.

Sarita- Papa. Main unke do sawalo ka thik se jawab nahi de pai. Mujhe lagta hai ki main fail ho jaungi

Aanand- Aise nirash nahi hote beta, jab tak Result nahi aa jata. Tab tak Safalta aur Asafalta ka Aanklan karna galat hai. Mera dil kahta hai ki tum jaroor paas ho jaoti. Chalo ab iski chinta chhodo aur ghar chale. Tumne is pariksha ke karan apne aapko ekdam samet kar rakha hai. Ab jab tak result nahi aa jata tab tak ekdam bindas hokar raho.


Fir aanand ji Aur Sarita wapas ghar ko aa gaye. Sarita ne Raani ji aur Manisha ko bhi ye bata diya ki uske paas hone ki ummeed kam hai.


Iske Aage ki Kahaani Agle Bhag mein..
 

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कहानी का नौवाँ भाग लिख दिए हैं दोस्तों और पाठकों।।

पढिये, आनंद लीजिए और अपने महत्त्वपूर्ण विचार भी व्यक्त कीजिए।।
 

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Kahani ke kuchh ansh (Saar Sankshipt)


Sarita JEEWAJ JYOTI HOSPITAL ke Operation Teater Ke parisar me pareshani ki halat mein yahan se waha chakkar kaat rahi thi. Uske Sharir par khaki rang ki Vardi thi aur chehare par Pasina Tha. Uski aankhhe Aanshuo se bhari hui thi. Pasine se uski khaki Vardi Bheegkar Uske jism se chipak gayi thi. Vardi par jagah jagah khoon laga huwa tha, Lekin use is baat ka hosh nahi tha. Wahi paas ki bench par 2 police wale aur bhi baithe huwe the. Jo Sarita ko Idhar Udhar Chakkar lagate huwe dekh rahe the. Wo kabhi kabhi Apni Hatheli Maslne lagti to kabhi kabhi Apni Mutthiyan bheej leti. Uske chehre ke bhav Har second badal raha tha. Paas baitha police wale se jab ye na dekha gaya to unme se ek ne Sarita se kaha.


Police 1- Madam Aap pareshan mat hoiye. Aapke bhaiya ko kuchh nahi hoga. Wo bilkul thik ho jayenge. Aap himmat se kaam lijie madam.

Sarita- Kaise Himmat se Kaam loon main haan kaise himmat se kaam loon. Main kaisi bahan hoon. Maine apne inhi hantho se apne bhaiya ko goli mari. Jis bhaai ke hantho me har saal rakhi bandhti thi, jiski salamti ki bhagwaan se duwa mangti thi. Usi bhaai ko maine apne inhi hanto se shoot kiya hai. Jis bhaai ko dhoondhne ke liye maine kya nahin kiya. jis bhaai se milne ke liye din-raat main thik se soyi nahin. usi bhaai ko maine apne inhin hanthon se goli mari hai. Main bahan kahlane layak nahi hoon. Bahan ke naam par kalank hoon main.


Itna kahkar Sarita ghutanon ke bal jameen mein baith gayi aur jor jor se rone lagi. Ye dekhkar ek police wala uske paas aaya aur uske kandhe par apna hath rakhkar kaha.


Police 2- Nahi madam. Aap aise mat roiye. Aap chup ho jaiye. Aapne kuchh galat nahi kiya. Aapne apna Farj nibhaya hai.

Sarita- Are aisa farj kis kaam ka Jisko nibhane ke liye mujhe apne haantho se apne jaan se pyaare bhaiya ko goli maarni padi. Dhikkaar hai mujhe apne aap par. Agar mere bhaiya ko kuchh ho gaya to main khud ko kabhi maaf nahin kar paungi. Mar jaungi main.


Tabhi hospital ke bahar ek auto aakar rukta hai us auto se Auto driver, ek mahila aur ek ladki utarkar bhaagti hui Hospilat me aati hai, Mahila ne aate hi Sarita ke gal par ek jhannatedar thappad mara aur rote huwe bolne lagi.


Mahila- Ye kya kiya Sarita tumne Ye kya kar diya. Mere bete ko maar diyaa tumne. Apne bhaai ko goli maar di tumne. Meri mamta ka khoon kar diya tumne. Meri Khokh ujaadane ki koshish ki hai tumne. Are wo mera beta hi nahin tera bhaai bhi hai. Aur tune apne bhaai ke upar hi goli chala diii. Agar mere bete ko kuchh ho gaya na Saritaa to main tujhee jeewan bhar maaf nahi karungii.

Auto Driver- Ye kya kah rahi hoo tum bhagyawaan. Tumhe to apni beti par garv hona chahiye ki wo kitni bahadur hai. itni kathinaiyon aur Pareshaniyon ke bawjood bhi wo apne Farz aur Sachhai ke raaste se nahi bhakti. Usne apne Farz aur rishte me farz ko ahamiyat di. Aur tum usko hi dosh de rahi ho. Ek baar pahle ye to jaan leti ki Sarita ne aisa kyon kiya. Mujhe Sarita ne phone karke pahle hi sab kuchh bata diya tha.

Mahila- Are aisi kaun si baat ho gayi jo isne mere bete ko goli maar di. Are wo iska bhai hai. Jiski yaad mein din raat roti rahti thi. Jisko kaha kaha nahin dhoondha hamne. Kam se kam ek baar ise apne bhaaii se baat to karni chahiye thi. Lekin nahin ab to ye inspector ban gai hai na to apne man ka hi karegi ye. Tumne bahut galat kiya hai Sarita. Main tujhe kabhi maaf nahi karungi.

Ladki- Ye kya bol rahi ho mummy. Aap didiya ko dekho. Inko dekhkar aapko lagta hai ki inhone Jaanbujhkar bhaiyaa par goli chalai hai, bhaiyaa ko jaan se marne ki koshish ki hai. Are Bhaiya ko sabse jyada pyaar didiya hi karti hain. Fir bhi aap aisa bol rahi hain. Are kuchh to majboori rahii hogii didiya ki. Mujhe apniii didiya par puraa bharoshaa hai. Didiya koi galat kaam karr hii nahii sakti.


Itna kahkar wo ladki jakar Sarita ke gale lag jati hai. Sarita apni bahan ke gale lagkar phoot phoot karr rone lagti hai. Tabhi Opration Teater ka darwaza khulta hai aur doctor bahar aate hain aur jo batein batate hain. Use sunkar sabhi rahat ki sans lete hain.


Doctor- Ghabrane ki koi baat nahi hai. Mareej ko do goli lagi thi. Hamne dono goli nikal di hai aur ab mareej khatare se bahar hai. Abhi unhe injection de diya hai. To abhi wo aaram kar rahe hain. Neend se jaagne ke baad aap sab log unse mil sakte hain.


Itna kahkar doctor waha se chale jate hai. Sarita air uske gharwale bahar lagi bench par manish aur hatash hokar baith jate hain.



Sath Bane Rahiye.
Nice starting... sarita ne apne bhai par hi goli mar di..
Sarita Ke bhai ne kuch galat gerkanooni kam kiya hoga or sarita ne apne farz ko nibhate hue majbur hoke goli chala di hogi shayad..
 

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Kahaani ki shuruaat karne se pahle kahaani ke mukhya patron ke bare mein jaan lena jaroori hai.


Patra Parichay In short.


Aanand Joshi- peshe se Auto Driver hain aur Heroin ke pita hain. Bahut hi imaandar aur Usoolon ke pakke insan. Sabhi se mel jol badhakar rahna pasand karte hain.


Raani Joshi- House Wife Aur Heroin ki maa hain. Pati ki Kam kamayi mein bhi poora ghar achhe se sambhalti hain. Apne bete se bahut pyaar karti hain. betiyon ke liye bhi inke dil mein pyaar hai.


Abhishek Joshi- Aanand Joshi aur Raani Joshi ka bada beta hai. Apni dono bahano se bahut pyaar karta hai. Bahut hi shararati aur natkhat hai. Iske sath hi bachpan se hi jaldi gussa aur chhoti si baat ko dil par laga lena iska swabhaav hai. Jiske karan poore pariwar ko pareshani ke daur se gujarna pada.


Sarita Joshi- Aanand joshi aur Rani joshi ki badi beti aur kahaani ki Main heroin. Khoobsurti aisi ki chaand bhi sharmaa jaye. tikhe nain naksh wali ladki. Honth ke niche kala til Sarita ki sundarta mein char chand lagate hain. Ghar mein sabhi se pyaar karne wali, lekin Sabse jyada pyaar wo Apne bhaai Abhishek se karti hai. Abhishek mein uski jaan basti hai. Padhaai mein bahut hoshiyaar aur swabhav se tez gaddar ladki hai.


Manisha- Aanand Joshi aur Raani joshi ki chhoti beti aur kahaani ki doosri heroin. Apni Bahan aur bhaai se bahut pyaar karti hai. Ye bhi apni bahan ki tarah khoobsurat hai. ye bahut hi chulbuli aur shararati hai.



Iske baad jitne bhi Paatr hain sabka introduction short mein hai. Vistrit introduction kahaani ke bich mein aapko pataa chalega.


Mahendra Singh Rathod- Bahut bade business man aur Hero ke pita ji. Dhan Daulat ki koi kami nahi fir bhi sadharan Jeevan jeene wale nek insan. Samaz mein achhi khasi pakad rakhne wale Prabhavshali Vyakti.


Naina Singh Rathod- House wife aur Hero ki maa. Ghar mein inki hi chalti hai. Ye apni Beti aur Apne doosre bete se bahut pyaar karti hain.


Savita- Mahendra aur Naina ji ki Eklauti beti aur Kahani ki tisri heroin. Pyaar se sabhi ise Savi bolte hain. Bahut hi milansar aur saral swabhav ki ladki. Apne ghar mein sabse jyada ye apne Doosre bhaai Ragav se pyaar karti hai.


Nishchal Singh Rathod- Mahendra ji aur Naina ji ka eklauta beta aur Kahani ka main hero. Savita se bahut pyaar karta hai. Sath mein Raghav ko jaan se jyada chahta hai.


Raghav- Ye Kahani ka doora Hero hai. Iske bare main kahani ke Madhya mein details main pata chalega.


Shanno devi- Ye hain kahani ki sabse interesting patra. Ye Mahendra ji ki buwa aur Savita, Nishchal aur Raghav ki buwa dadi hain. Purane khayalo ki hain. Inke samne Naina ji aur Mahendra ji jyada nahi bolte. Inka bahut samman karte hain. Jyada Jankari kahani ke madhya mein pata chalegi.


Anant- Kahani mein inka jyada role nahi hai lekin ye Kahani ke tisre hero hain. isliye inka jikar hona jaroori hai.


Charu- Anant ki bahan. Kahani mein inka bhi jyada role nahi hai, lekin ek karan hai jiske liye inka jikar hona jaroori hai.


Sub-Inspector- Mohit Singh, Ranjana Pathak, Vikas kumar & Jawed Akhtar.


Assistant Sub Inspector- Janhavi Kapoor. Kaushal Shukla aur Amit Rawat.


Rawat Sir- Sarita Joshi ke Office Incharge. Kahani mein inka bahut hi Important Role hai.


Boss & Sarkar- Kahani mein main Villene.


Bachha Singh- Kahani ka khalnayak. Isne jeewan mein bas ek hi achha kaam kiya hai. Details kahani ke bich mein pata chalegi.


Raghu- Bachha Singh ka bhaai. Bahut hi handsome aur Atractive Person. Details kahani ke bich mein jab iska role aayega tab pata chalega.


Kaluwa- ye bhi kahani mein villene hi hai. Bachha Singh ke niche kaam karta hai. details baad mein pata chalega.


Neta- Kahani ka villane. Iski koi details nahi hai. Bas ye ek local neta hai, lekin iske kaam bahut bade hain.


Inspector Pradhan- CBI Officer.


Is kahani mein aur bhi patra aayenge. Jinke chhote chhote role rahenge, jinke introduction ki jaroorat nahi hai. unka jikar kahani mein hi ho jayega.


Ek baat Aur Pathko. Kahani poori tarah se kalpnik hai, isliye iski ghatnayein aur patro ka work bhi kalpnik hi hai. Poori kahani Police officers ke ird gird ghoomti hai to work profile policiya hi hai, lekin us work profile mein kuchh work writer dwara dala gaya hai. to ho sakta hai mere wo Pathak bandhu jo police ki Naukri karte ho ya jinhe police ke work profile ka knowledge ho. kahani padhne ke baad wo ye objection na uthaye ki ye kaam aur ye ghanta to police ki work profile se match hi nahi karti. Ye sirf kahani ke hisab se dala gaya hai isliye wo ise anyatha na le. Kahani poori tarah se saaf suthri hai. Na hi isme sex ka koi seen hai aur na hi koi Abuse language hai.


Kahaani ka pahla bhag kal aayega.



Sath Bane Rahiye..
nice intro
 

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UPDATE- 07


Fir dono bahane kuchh der baat karti rahi. Thodi hi der me ladke wale aa gaye. Apni kshamta ke anusar Aanand ji ne poori vyawastha ki thi. Kuchh hi der mein sagai ki rashm shuru ho gayi, lekin sagai hote hote ladke walon ka munh fool gaya. Ladke ke papa to aise bartav karne lage Jaise unke ghar me kisi ki mrityu ho gayi ho.


Ladke ke papa ne Aanand ji ko alag se Baat karne ke liye bulaya. Aanand ji ke sath unke sale bhi the. Ladke ke papa ne Aanand ji se kaha.


L.Papa- Ye kya hai Aanand ji aapne to kaha tha ki aapki khatirdari me koi kami nahi rahegi aur sagai ki rasham bahut ache se hogi, lekin yahan to na khatirdari thik se hui aur na hi sagai ki rasham hi ache se hui. Jab sagai me ye haal hai to shadi me to aap mujhe loot hi loge.

Aanand ji- Are nahi bhai Sahab. Ye aap kaisi baat kar rahe hain. Main apni kshamta se jyada kar raha hoon. Taki meri beti khush rahe. Shadi me koi kami nahi hogi bhai sahab. Hamne poori koshish ki sagai me koi kami na rahne paye. Fir bhi agar koi kami rah gayi ho to aap hamko bata dijiye. Ham poori koshish karenge ki use door kar sake.

L.Papa- dekho Aanand ek to ladke ko apne sone ki janjeer nahi di. Aur aapne sagai mein paise bhi kam diye hain. Aise kaise chalega. Akhir hamne apne bete ki padhai likhai me kitna paisa kharcha kiya hai. Aur tum apni beti ke liye use phokat me apna damad banana chahte ho. Aur sath me hamare sath aaye huwe mehmano ka aapne swagat dhang se nahi kiya.

Aanand ji- ya aap kaisi baat kar rahe hain bhai sahab. Hamne apni taraf se khatirdari me koi kami nahi rakhi. bhai sahib Sagai ke liye paise aur janjeer ki koi baat hui hi nahi thi. Sagai ki anguthi ke alawa maine apni taraf se ek sone ki anguthi di hai. Waise bhi Baat to shadi ke liye hui hai moter Cycle aur 2 lakh rupye ki. Jo main shadi ke samay doonga aapko.

L.papa- Aise kaise main tumhari baat ka bharosha kar loon. Jo insan Sagai me itni kanjoosi kar sakta hai wo Shadi me kya kharcha karega. Mujhe to loot liya tumne sagai mein aur shadi mein to kangal hi bana doge tum mujhe.

S.Mama- Dekhiye bhai sahab Aap ab kuchh jyada hi bol rahe hain. Hamne apni taraf se koi kasar nahi rakhi khatirdari me. Fir bhi agar kahi kami rah gayi ho to hamko maaf kar dijiye. Aur rahi baat Shadi ke samay kiye gaye wade ki to wo ham poori tarah se nibhayenge. Jo hamne dene ke liye kaha hai wo hamm aapko denge.


Sarita ke Mama ki baat sunkar ladke ke papa gusse mein aa gaye aur unhone tez aawaz mein kaha.


L.papa- Kya jyada bol raha hoon main. Mujhe aap dono par tanik bhi bharosha nahi hain. Ab jab tak aap ladke ke liye janjeer aur 50000 Rupaye aur nahi denge. Tab tak Shadi ke baare me bhool jaiye.

S.mama- ye kya bat hui bhai Shahab. Ham aapse itne prem se baat kar rahe hain to aaap dhamki dene par utar aaye hain. Main bhi dekhta hoon ki kaise nahi karte aap shadi. Hamari bitiya koi sajawat ka saman hai kya ki jab man chaha haa kiya aur jab mann chaha na kar diya. jab ham bol rahe hain ki aapko shadi ke samay jo bhi dene ke liye kaha gaya hai wo ham donge to ab aap ki demand badhati ja rahi hai. Ye bilkul bhi sahi nahi hai.

L.papa- Aise kaise nahi denge aap. Aakhir maine apne bete ko palne aur padhai likhai par jo kharch kiya hai wo kaun dega. Aap free me mere kamaau bete ko apna damad banana chahte hain. Ya to meri baat maniye ya to ye Rishta khatam samajhiye.

Aanand ji- nahi nahi bhai sahab aisa mat kahiye. Abhi itni jaldi ye sab kaise arrange karunga main. aap hame kuchh din ka samay dijiye main janjeer aur 50000 Rupaye aapko de dunga. Lekin aap ye Rishta mat todiye. Bahut badnami ho jayegi meri samaz me.

L. Papa- mujhe ab aur koi baat nahin karni. Mujhe abhi ke abhi 50000 rupaye aur sone ki janjeer ladke ke liye chahiye. Nahi to main chala ladke ko lekar apne ghar.

Ladke ke papa ki baat sunkar aanand ji ki aankhon mein aanshu aa gaye. Unhone apni pagdi utar kar ladke ke papa ke pairon mein rakhne lage to Sarita ke mama ne unko rokte huwe kaha.


S.Mama- ye kya kah rahe hain aap jeeja ji. Ye lalchi log hain inke kadmon mein apni izzat rakhne ka koi matlab nahin hai. Itna to main bhi samajh gaya hoon ki inki najar mein paisa hi sabkuchh hai. Ab aap inki koi bhi baat nahin manenge. inki mango ko poora karke aap Sarita ke liye mushkile paida kar rahe hain.


Abhi ye sab bate ho rahi thi ki kisi ne Sarita ko khabar kar di ki Ladke ke papa aur Aanand ji me kuchh kaha suni ho gayi hai to sarita bhi sagai wale kapdon mein hi waha pahuch gayi. Jab usne poori baat suni aur apne papa ko apni pagdi ladke ke baap me pairon mein rakhte huwe dekha to uska matha bhanna gaya. Usne Ladke ke papa ko do took jawab dete huwe kaha.


Sarita- Aap kya shadi ke liye mana karenge. Main ye shadi khud tod rahi hoon. Nahi karni mujhe aap ke bete se shadi. Nikal jaiye aap abhi aur isi samay yahan se aur apne bete ke liye koi aur ladki dhoondh lijiye.


Sarita ki baat sunkar aanand ji ne usase gusse se kaha.


Aanand ji- Ye kya kar rahi ho Tum Sarita. Tum andar jao. Main baat kar raha hoon na.

Sarita- main kyon andar jaaun papa. Aur aap kyon inki baat sun rahe hain. Kyaa apne hame isiliye paal posh kar bada kiya tha ki ek din hamari wajah se in bhikhmango ke samne hanth failana pade. Main ye kabhi bardast nahi karungi ki meri wajah se mare papa ko kisi ke samne hanth fialana pade aur kisi ke shamne sharminda hona pade.

Aap hamara gurur hain papa. Abhiman hain aap hamare. Main apne gurur aur abhiman ko kisi ke samne toot-ta huwa nahin dekh sakti. Aap khud sochiye papa ki abhi meri shadi bhi nahi hui hai to inka ye haal hai. Meri shadi ho jane ke baad to ye sher ho jayenge. Aapse kuchh bhi demand kar denge. Aur aap meri Khushi ke liye inki har demand poori karte firenge. Inke pairo me gir kar royenge, gidgidayenge. Jo main kabhi nahi hone doongi.

Aurat koi sajawatt ki wastu nahi hai papa jo uski boli lagayi jaye. Are thokar marti hoon main inki Daulat aur inke bete ki naukari par. Aap meri shadi kisi gareeb majdoor se kar dena papa. Main roj kamakar kha lungi. Lekin in jaise bhikhmango ke ghar meri shadi mat kariye papa. Meri baat man lijiye papa. Apni Sarita ki baat man lijiye.

S.mama- Sarita sahi kah rahi hai jeeja ji. Ye log lalchi hain shadi ke baad agar inki koi demand ham na poori kar paye to. Aapne socha hai ki ye apni sarita ke sath kitna bura bartav kar sakte hain. Maan jaiye jeeja ji. Main Sarita bitiya ke sath hoon. Aur main bhi nahi chahta ki ab ye shadi ho.


Aanand ko bhi Sarita ki baat sahi lagi. Unhone bhi dabe man se apni sahmati de di. Ladke ke papa ko filhal aisi ummeed nahi thi ki ladki khud aakar shadi ke liye mana kar dengi. Unhone ne socha tha ki Darwaze par Sagaai toot jane ke dar se Aanand ji uski mang puri kar denge, lekin Sarita ke do took inkar ne unki ummido par pani Fer diya. Shadi toot jane ke baad ladke wale apna apna munh lekar waha se chale gaye.


Sarita ke inkar karne ke kuchh hi der me jangal me aag ki tarah charo taraf ye khabar fial gayi ki Sarita ne Shadi se inkar kar diya. fir to wahi huwa jo Aksar ladki ki shadi tootne par hota hai. Jitney munh utni baatein. Koi kah raha tha ki Sarita ne bahut Achha kiya jo Aise lalchi logo ke yaha bahu banker jane se inkar kar diya to koi kah raha tha ki ladki walo ko itna ghamand Shobha nahi deta.


Aanand ji ke padosh me ek naye pariwar ne kuchh samay pahle naya ghar banwaya tha aur wo ghar ke sabhi sadashyo ke sath waha sift hue the. Ghar ke mukhiya pulish mahakame me Inspector the. To unka man samman bhi tha. Unki patni housewife thi. Lekin muhfat thi. Kisi ke samne kuchh bhi bol deti thi. Ye bhi nahi samajh aata tha unko ki unki baat kisi ko buri lag sakti hai.


Hamesha apne pati ke inspector hone ka ghamand dikhati rahti thi. Inka beta Central bank me PO ki post par pichhle sal hi laga tha. Aur bitiya ham umar thii Sarita ki. Isliye dono me thodi bahut batchit ho jati thi, lekin wo bhi apni maa ki tarah hi thi. Padosh me rahne ke karan unko ye bhi pata chal gaya tha ki Abhishek ghar chhodkar chala gaya hai. Aur kisliye gaya hai ye bhi pata tha.


Sagai me shamil hone wo log bhi aaye the Inspector ko chhodkar. To jab unko Bhi ye baat pata chali ki Sarita ne shadi se mana kar diya hai to unhe mauka mil gaya apni baat kahne ka, lekin unhone yah nahi dekkha ki Sarita aur Manisha unke pichhe aa rahi hain. Unhone paas baithi aurat se kaha.


I.wife- Janti ho bahan mujhe to shak hai ki Is Sarita ka kahi na kahi chakkar chal raha hai. Jiske karan usne shadi se mana kar diya. nahi to batao bhala. Naukari wale ladke ko aajkal kaun mana karta hai shadi se.

Aurat- Nahi bahan aisa kuchh nahi hai tum galat samajh rahi ho bahut hi nek bachhiya hain.

I.wife- Tumhe nahi pata kuchh bhi. Ye dono upar se masoom dikhti hain, lekin andar se bahut ghagh hain. mujhe to lagta hai jisase Sarita ka chakkar chal raha hain ye wahi ladke honge. Jinko abhishek ne mara hoga. Bina ladki ki haan ke koi ladka uske baare me aise thodi bol sakta hai. Pata nahi kya sanskar diye hain Aanand ji ne apni betiyon ko. Abhishek ko pata chal gaya hoga in chakkaro ke baare me. Wo to pahle se hi gunda tha. Isliye us ladke ko pit diya.

apne bhaai se badla lene ke liye isne Abhishek ko ghar se nikalwa diya hoga. Koi sanskar nahi hain iske andar. Koi izzat nahi hai unki samaz mein. Are jiske bete aur betiyon ke ye lakshan honge uski kya izzat rahegi samaz me. Mere pati ko dekho. Kitna maan samman hai. Mere bete ko dekho bank me PO hain ye sab Achhe sanskar ka natiza hai. Mujhe dukh hota hai ki aanand ne kaise sanskar diya hain apne bachho ko. Beta gunda ban gaya aur dono betiya chritraheen nikal gayi.


Ye baat sunkar Sarita rote huwe apne kamre me bhag gayi, lekin Manisha aag babula ho gayi aur Chillate huwe bolli.


Manisha- ye kya bol rahi ho aap. Meri didiya ke charitra par itna ghatiya ilzam lagate huwe aapko sharam nahi aati. Meri didiya ganga ki tarah Pavitra hai aur aapko Meri Didiya ke charitra ka certificate dene ki jaroorat nahi hain. Aapki samaj me izzat hai. To ham log bhi aapke yahan bheekh mangne nahi jate. Aap apni izzat apne paas rakhiye.

Aap sanskar ki baat kar rahi hain. To aap apne sanskar dekhiye. Aapke yahi sanskar hain ki aap bina sachhai jane meri didiya par itna ghatiya ilzam laga rahi hain. Aap meri didiya ko kuchh bolne se pahle apni bitiya ki sachhai jakar pata kariye ki wo padhai ka bol kar bahar jati hai to padhai karne jati hain ya ladko ke sath gul chharre udane jati hai.


Mahisha ki tez aawaz sunkar bahut si aurate aur aadmi waha par jama ho gaye the. Us aurat ki beti bhi waha aa gayi thi. Jab usne apne bare me suna to wo bhi apni maa ki tarah shuru ho gayi.


Ladki- Kyo re Manisha. Kya boli tu. Tu mere bare me jasusi karti hain. Tujhe main chhodungi nahi. Meri maa sahi kah rahi hain tum dono bahne charitraheen ho. Koi izzat nahi hai samaj me tum logon ki. Bhaai gunda hai aur bahan badchalan. Are tum logo ko to chullu bhar paani me doobkar mar jana chahiye. Chalo maa yahan se aise lichado ke yahan se koi Rishta nahi rakhna hai hamko.

Anya padosi vyakti- ye tum maa beti kya bole ja rahi ho aanap sanaap. Ham log in bachhiyon ko bachpan se jante hain. In dono bachhiyo jaisa sanskari aur vyavhari. Bado ka aadar karne wali bachhiya yaha aas paas dhoodhne se bhi nahi milengi. Aur inke bete ke bare me kya janti ho tum dono. Wo shararati tha, ladai jhagda karta tha, lekin kabhi bhi kisi ladki se galat vyavhar nahi kiya usne kabhi kisi ki bahan betiyon ko gandi najar se nahi dekha.

Usne un ladko ko isliye mara tha kyonki un dono ne in bachhiyo ke bare me gandi baat ki thi. Tumhare aadmi police me hain to iska ye matlab nahi hai ki tumhare jo munh me aaye wo tum bakti jao. Tum dono ko ye nahi dikh raha hai ki us bachhi par musibato ka pahad toota hai. Uski shadi cancel ho gayi hai. Use dilasha dene ke bajay use badnam kar rahi ho tum dono. Sharam aani chahiye tum dono ko.

I.wife- ham kyon sharam kare. Hamne ya hamari beti ne kahi munh kala nahi kiya hai. Sharam to in dono ladkiyon ko aani chahiye. Jo munh kala karti firti hain. Bhalai ka to jamana hi nahi raha.


Abhi wo Aadmi kuchh aur bolta Usase pahle Aanand ji bich me bole pade.


Aanand ji- Bas kijiye aap log. Kyon meri Sarita ke pichhe pade hain aap sab. Bhagwan ke liye use Baksh dijiye Aur apne apne ghar jaiye. Jo bhi dukh aur musibat hamare upar padi hai use ham jhel lenge. Hame aap logo ki sahanubhuti ki jaroorat nahi hai. Meharbani karke aap log jaiye yahan se.
Aanand ji ki baat sunkar wo dono maa beti bhunbhunati hui apne ghar chali gayi. Uske baad dhire dhire sab paas padosh ke log unke ghar se bahar nikal gaye.



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Saale aise lalchi k gher jaane achcha tha sarita n saaf inkar ker dia lekin sarita ko ek kheech de dena chahiye dulhe k baap ko
Yeh dono maa beti tow badi kameeni h kisi k charitr per kaise keechad uchalna yeh achche se jaanti h
Lekin mujhe aisa lag raha h kisi din khud ki beti bahot bada gul khilaygi tab pata chalega
Manisha ki baato se tow aisa hi lag raha ji ki woh kuch zaroor jaanti h uss ladki character k baare m
Dekhte h aage kia hota h
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Bachpan ke Lekar Jawani tak ke kuchh ansh.


Allahabad shahar ke ek chhote se kabse mein Aanand Joshi apni patni Raani Joshi ke sath rahte the. Jo Lower Middle Class se belong karte the. Unka khud ka auto riksha tha jise chalakar wo apna aur apne pariwar ka gujara karte the. Wo jis makan me rahte the wo 3 kamre ke makaan tha jise unke pitaji ne banwaya tha. Jinki kuchh samay pahle hi mrityu ho chuki hai. Maa to bachpan me hi chal basi thi.


Pita ki mrityu hone ke baad eklauti santan hone ke karan unki sari jyayjat Aanand ji ke naam ho gayi. Aanand ji ek beta aur do betiya thi. Badi beti ka naam Sarita, Chhoti beti ka naam Manisha aur unke pyare bete ka naam Abhishek tha. Aanand Joshi ke Betiyo ki umar me 2 se 2.5 sal ka anter tha. Lekin Abhishek Sarita se 4 varsh bada tha. wo thoda gusse wala aur chhoti si baat ko dil par lagaa lene wala ladka tha. uski padhai bhi der me shuru hui. Padhaai me abhishek kamjor hi sabit huwa.


Abhishek Dono bahano se bada tha Aur beta hone ke karan apni maa ka ladla tha. Aisa nahi tha ki Mr. aur Msr. Joshi ko apni betiyon se pyaar nahi tha. Wo apni betiyon se bhi bahut pyaar karte the, lekin akela beta hone ke karan wo unka ladla tha. Unke sath sath Abhishek dono bahnon ka bhi ladla bhai tha. Dono bahane Hamesha Abhishek ke age pichhe Ghumti rahti thi. Abhishek class 6 mein, Sarita claas 4 mein aur Manisha class 1 mein padhti thi. Abhishek maa baap ke jyada lad pyaar ki wajah se thoda bigad gaya tha aur ladai jhagda bhi karne laga tha.


Ek din english ki class chal rahi thi aur Abhishek baitha hua apni copy me kuchh bana raha tha . Abhishek padhai likhai mein bhale hi kamjor tha, lekin Abhishek ki drawing Apni umar ke Aur bachho ke mukable bahut Aachhi thi. Padhaai likhaa se jyada uski ruchi drawing mein thi. Tabhi teacher ki najar Abhishek par padi. Unhone Abhishek se kaha.


Teacher- Abhisehk. Ram ne Shyam ko khane ke liye 2 Aam diye. Iska Angrezi me anuwad karo.


Lekin Abhishek to apni hi dhun mein drawing kar raha tha. Usne jaise teacher ki baat suni hi nahi ho ya sunkar bhi ansuna kar diya ho. Teacher Abhishek ke paas aa gaye ye dekhne ke liye ki Abhishek kya kar raha hai. Abhishek teacher ko apne paas khada dekh kar apni drowing chhupane laga. Teacher ne uske hanth se paper cheen liya Aur bole.


Teacher- Abhishek. Kya kar rahe ho. Aur ye English ke subject me tum ye drawing kar rahe ho.

Abhishek- wo sir main to wo….

Teacher- Achha to tum mujhe bana rahe the. Waise drawing to tum bahut achhi karte ho, lekin ye drawing ki class nahi hai. Ek to tum padhai me itne kamjor ho aur upar se class me bhi padhai par dyaan dene ke bajay drawing bana rahe ho. Meine tumhe kitni baar manaa kiya hai lekin tum ho ki mante hi nahin ho. Isliye tum bench par khade ho jao. Aur meri class khatam hone tak bench par hi khade raho.


Teacher ne Drawing dekhte huwe muskurate huwe kaha, kyonki Abhishek ne sach me drawing Achhi banai thi. Bas thodi bahut kami thi. Abhishek ne unka kaan aur naak kuchh lamba aur bada kar diya tha, jise dekhkar teacher ke chehre par muskan fail gai thi.


ABhishek ko punishment dekar teacher fir se bachho ko padhane lage. English ki class khatam ho jane ke baad teacher bahar chale gaye to Abhishek ki punishment bhi khatam ho gayi. Wo apni jagah par wapas baith gaya. Teacher ke gaye hue kuchh hi der hui thi ki ek ladke ne uski drawing wala paper le liya aur front me jakar khada ho gaya aur bola.


Ladka- Ye dekho Abhishek ne padhai chhod kitni ghatiya drawing banai hai.

Abhishek- meri drawing de yash. De meri drawing.


Lekin us ladke ne Abhishek ki baat nahi mani aur puri class me ghoom ghoom kar Abhishek ki drawing dikhane laga. Uske baad wo apni pen nikalkar uski drawing par apni pen ghumane laga. Jisase Abhishek ki drawing kharab ho gayi.


Drawing kharab karne ke baad us ladke ne Abhishek ko wo paper wapas kar diya. Apni drawing kharab ho jane par Abhishek ko gussa aa gaya aur usne us ladke ka sir pakadkar 3-4 baar desk par patak diya. jisase uska sir fat gaya aur khoon nikalne laga. Wo ladka jor jor se rone laga.


Ek ladka bhaag kar bahar chala gaya aur principal se Abhishek ki shikayat kar di ki Abhishek ne Yash ka Sir phod diya. Principal Aur kuchh teacher daude daude class me pahuche. To dekha ki yash jameen par apna sir pakadkar bhaitha huwa hai.


Uske sir se khoon nikal raha hai. Wo jor jor se ro raha hai. Abhishek apni seat par baitha huwa chocolate kha raha tha. Principal Sir ko bahut gussa aaya. Wah Ahishek ke paas gaye aur ek jor ka jhapad Abhishek ko rasid kar diya aur bole.


Principal- Ye kya kiya tumne. Iska sir Phod diya aur aaram se baithkar chocolate kha rahe ho. Tumhare andar daya aur insaniyat naam ki koi cheej nahi hai kyaa. Kal tum apne parents ko bulakar lana. Tum jaise shararti bache ko main apne school me nahi rakh sakta.


Principal Sir ne Abhishek ko ghar jane ke liye bolkar Yash ko hospital bhijwaya. Abhishek Akele hi ghar pahucha to uski maa ne usase kaha


Raani ji- Are mera beta. Aaj to badi jaldi Ghar aa gaya. School ki chhutti ho gayi kya. Aur ye tere gaal kyon lal ho gaye hain. Kya tumne fir kisi se ladai Jhagda kiya hai.
Abhishek- Nahi mammy Wo Principal Sir ne mujhe mara. Principal Sir ne meri chhutti pahle hi kar di. Isliye main pahle ghar aa gaya.


Rani ji - Aise kaise maara unhone tujhe. Koi aise marta hai kya bachhe ko. Main baat karungi tere principal se. Chal hanth munh dho le. Main tere liye khana lagati hoon. Tu khaa le. Sarita aur Manisha ko aane ke baad khana khila dungi.


Abhishek ne apni maa ko maar khane ki poori wajah nahi batai. Isliye Rani Principal Sir ke uppar gussa ho rahi thi. Tabhi Abhishek ne kaha.


ABhishek- mummy. Kal principal Sir ne Aapko aur Papa ko school mein bulaya hai kuchh kam se. wo bol rahe the ki agar aap dono unse milne nahi gaye to wo mujhe school se nikal denge.

Rani ji- Tune kuchh ulta siddha to nahi kiya na school me. Jiski wajah se principal Sir aisa bol rahe the.

Abhishek- Nahi mummy. Maine kuchh nahi kiya. Wo yash hai na usne meri drawing kharab kar di thi. Isliye maine use mara. Isi baat ko lekar principal sir ne mujhe mara aur bole ki kal apni mummy papa ko lekar hi school aana.

Raani ji- Thik hai main chalungi tere sath. Dekhti hoon kaise nikalte hain tujhe school se principal Sir.


Thodi der baad school ki chhutti hone ke baad Sarita aur Manisha bhi Ghar aa gaye. Rani ne unhe bhi pyaar se khana khilaya. Khana khakar wo dono so gaye. Sham ko dono sokar uthi aur Apne Bhai Abhishek ke sath khelne lagi. Aanand ji ke Ghar aane ke baad Raat me khane ke samay Rani Ji ne Aanand ji se kaha.


Raani ji- Suniye ji. Kal Abhishek ke Principal Sir ne hame School me bulaya hai. Unhe kuchh jaruri baat karni hai hamse Abhishek ke bare me.

Aanand Ji- Baat kya karni hogi. Isne fir se kisi se jhagda kiya hoga. Isi silsile me unhone bulaya hoga. Ye jaise jaise bada hota ja raha hai waise waise iski shararat badhti ja rahi hai.

Raani ji- Aap to har samay mere bachhe ko hi koste rahte hain. Abhi iska bachpna hai. Abhi agar shararat nahi karega to kya buddha hone ke baad shararat karega kya. Aapko to hamesha mere bete ki hi galti najar aati hai.

Aanand Ji- Tumhare lad-pyaar ne hi ise bigad rakha hai. Aage chalkar kahi aisa na ho ki tumhe apne is lad-pyaar ki wajah se pachtana pad jaye. Abhi bhi samay hai. Use ache aur bure ke baare me samjhao. Meri to wo suntan nahi hai. Agar maar peet kar use kuchh samjhaunga to ho sakta hai wo aur bhi bigad jaye aur jiddi ho jaye. Tumhari sunta hai to kam se kam tumhi use sahi aur galat ke bare me batao.

Raani Ji- Aapko to hamesha mere bete ki hi galti dikhai deti hai. Fir bhi main use samjhaungi. Chalo ab jaldi se khana khatam karo aur so jao. Subah iske school bhi chalna hai.


Uske baad kisi ne koi baat nahi ki aur khana khakar Aanand Ji apne kamre me sone ke liye chale gaye.



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Abhishek ko drawing pasand hai padhay me dimang lag nahi raha abhishek ka..
 

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UPDATE- 8


Sabke chale jane ke baad Aanand ji jameen par baith kar phoot phoot kar rone lage. Andar Sarita ro rahi thi aur bahar Aanand ji aur Raani ji ro rahe the. Aanand ji aur Raani ji ko rishtedar sambhal rahe the to Sarita ko Manisha sambhal rahe the. Sarita ko Apni shadi tutne ka koi dukh nahi tha balki wo khud apni shadi todkar aai thi.


Lekin inspector ki wife aur beti ki baate unse dil aur dimag ko chhalni kar rahi thi. Uske character par ilzam lagaya tha dono ne. jo usne kabhi sapno me bhi nahi socha tha. Uske baare me un dono ne bola tha. Lekin jaise hi uske kano me aanand ji ke rone ki aawaz sunai padi wo apna dukh dard bhoolkar apne kamre se bhagkar apne mummy papa ke paas aai aur unke gale lagkar rone lagi.


Sabhi rishtedar ki aankho me aanshu the. Sath me paas padosh ke jo log Sarita aur Manisha ko jante the. Sabhi Inspector ki wife aur Beti ki baato se nakhush the. Sabhi rishtedar maan , baap beti ko dilasha dekar chup karwa rahe the. Aanand ji rote huwe bole.


Aanand- Usne meri bachhi ke character par ungli uthaai. Meri bachhi ko gali di usne. Meri bachhi ne kuchh nahi kiya. Meri bachhi galat nahi kar sakti. Wo jhooth bol rahi hai.

Sarita-(rote huwe) papa Aap chup ho jaiye. Usko jo kahna hai kahne dijiye. Uske kahne se Sachhai thodi hi badal jayegi. Aapko mujhpar bharosha hai na papa. Agar aapko mujhpar bharosha hai to mujhe koi fark nahi padkta ki koi mere bare mein kya bolta hai. AB aap chup ho jaiiye papa. Aap hi meri takat ho papa. Agar aap hi toot gaye to mujhe kaun sambhalega. Mujhe is samay aapki sabse jyada jaroorat hai papa.

Manisha- (Sisakte huwe) Haan papa Didiya sahi kah rahi hai. Aap shant ho jaiye. Hamko kisi se matlab nahi hai papa. Bas aap hampar bharosha rakhte hain to duniya kuchh bhi bole hame koi fark nahi padata papa.

Aanand ji- (Rote huwe) Mujhe tum dono par apne se bhi jyada bharosa hai beti. Main to ye sochkar ro raha hoon ki maine tum dono ko jeewan me kabhi khushiya nahi de paya. Hamesha dukh diye hain maine tum dono ko. Mujhe maaf kar do beti.

Sarita- (unka hanth pakadkar) Aap aisa mat kahiye papa. Aap ne kuchh nahi kiya hai. Aap ne hamare liye jo kiya hai wo koi aur nahi kar sakta papa. Aap duniya ke sabse best papa ho. Ab aap shant ho jaiye. Nahi to main aur bhi jor jor se rone lagungi.


Fir Manisha aur Sarita ne apne papa ko uthakar khatiya par baithaya. Manisha ne ek gilas pani lakar apne papa ko diya. Aanand ji ne pani pikar thoda aaram karne ke liye kaha. Kyonki aanand ji Sharirik rup se jyada manshik roop se thak gaye the. Isliye wo wahi khatiya par letkar aaram karne lage.


Subah khushiyo se shuru huwa ye din sham hote hote matam me badal gaya. (Sahi hi hai kisi kisi ke naseeb me khushiyaa aane se pahle itna jyada dukh aata hai ki log hatas ho jate hain apni jindagi se). Raani ji ke bhaiyo ne milkar poora tant, gadda, kurshi aur jo bhi saman Sagai ke liye kiraye par laya gaya tha, unhe wapas pahuchaya.


Sabhi do din tak ruke rahe, lekin ghar ka mahaul aisa ho gaya tha ki jaise ghar me kisi ki mrityu ho gayi ho. Sabhi jaise hansna khana pina sab kuchh bhool gaye the. Do din baad Raani ji ke dono bhaaii apne pariwar ke sath wapas apne ghar chale gaye. Aakhir Sabhi ke ghar me kaam hota hai.


Unke jane ke baad yahan par Raani ji aur Aanand ji ki halat kharab hi thi. To Dono bahano ne Sab kuchh bhulakar khud ko mazboot kiya aur samane aai paristhiti ka samna karte huwe apne maa aur baap ko bhi is vichitra paristhiti se bahar nikala.


Is Stithi se ubarne ke liye aanand ji ko 1 hafte ka samay laga. In 1 hafto me Aanand ji ne Auto bahar nahi nikala tha, lekin wo kab tak aisa karte. Aakhir papi pet ke liye wo apni dincharya par wapas laut aaye. Ab wo wapas pahle ki tarah samanya ho gaye the. Kabhi kabhi unhe ye baat jaroor salti thi ki unki beti ko kisi ne unke samne hi charitraheen kaha tha. Ye yaad aate hi unki aankho me aanshu aa jate the.


Sarita khud ko apna mummy papa ke samne mazboot dikhati, jaise kuchh huwa hi nahi hai, lekin jeb wo akeli hoti to Inspector ki wife aur uski beti ki bate uske dilo dimag me ghunjne lagti. Apne upar lagaye gaye lanchan ko yaad karke uski aankho me aanshu aa jate the. Ye Sab dimaag me aate hi kabhi kabhi to wo itni hatas aur pareshan ho jati ki uske man me galat vichar panapne lagte (Galat vichar se matlab koi ganda khyal nahi hai).


Kabhi sochti ki wo hi apne papa ke dukho ka karan hai usi ke karan aske bhaiya ghar chhodkar chale gaye aur usi ke karan aaj uske papa ki ye halat hui hai. Uske karan hi papa ki kitni beizzati hui thi. Use is ghar me rahne ka koi hak nahi hai. Use mar jana chahiye. Lekin jaise hi ye khyal dimag me aata. To uski rooh kanp jati,


kyonki usne dekha tha ki Abhishek ke chale jane ke baad aanand ji raat raat bhar apni galtiyo ke karan rote the. Agar usne aisa kuchh kiya to Us aurat ka lagaya gaya ilzaam sahi sabit ho jayega. Fir to papa sharmindagi ke karan kuchh bhi ulta siddha kar sakte hain. Nahi nahi main aisa nahi hone doongi. Main papa ko kuchh nahi hone doongi. Main aisa kuchh bhi nahi karungi. Main ye sab karne ke bajay kuchh aisa karungi ki papa ke sir fakar se ucha ho jaye. Logo ke samne papa sina tan kar bol sake ki main unki beti hoon.


Sarita Akele me yahi sab sochti rahti, lekin use kya karna hai ye nirnay wo nahi le pa rahi thi. Aise hi din gujarne lage. Aur Sarita sochti rahi ki use kya karna hai. Is ghatna ko ek mahina bit chuka tha. Ek din Sarita apne mobile me vacancy search kar rahi thi. Tabhi Sarita ki najar Uttar pradesh public Servic Commission ke Vacancy Uttar Pradesh Provincial Civil Service (UPPCS) par padi.


Vacancy ko dekhne ke baad Sarita ko apna rasta mil gaya. Usne nishchay kar liya ki wo Isi madhyam se apne papa ka sir ucha karegi aur un dono ma beti ko dikhaegi ki samaj me unki bhi izzat hai. Sarita ne nischaya to kar liye tha lekin iske pahle use apne papa se baat karni thi. Unse sahmati leni thi. Abhi wo isi soch me thi ki Tabhi Manisha bhi vaha aa gayi. Apni didiya ko soch me dekhkar wo boli.


Manisha- Didiya. O didiya. Kya soch rahi ho. Mujhe bhi batao jara.

Sarita- Mujhe apna target mil gaya hai manisha. Bas ab mujhe us target ko achieve karna hai

Manisha- Kaisa target didiya. Mujhe kuchh samajh nahi aa raha hai.

Sarita- Tumhe pata hai. Jis din se un dono maa beti ne yaha hangama kiya tha. Us din se main yahi sochkar pareshan hoon ki meri wajah se papa ko itne logo ke samne sharminda hona pada. Meri vajah se papa ko Un lalchi logo ke samne mere liye Gidgidana pada. Tabhi se main yahi soch rahi hoon ki mujhe kuchh aisa karna hai ki papa ka sir meri vajah se jhuke nahi balki uchaa ho jaye. Aur mujhe aaj wo rasta najar aa gaya hai. Mujhe meri manjil najar aa gayi hai.

Manisha- par wo manjil hai kya didiya. Mujhe kuchh samajh nahi aa raha hai.

Sarita- ye hai meri manjil jise hasil karke main papa ko gift dena chahti hoon.


Itna kahkar Sarita ne Manisha ke samne apna mobile rakh diya. Manisha ne jab dekha to uski aankhe badi badi ho gayi. Wo apni aankhein badi karke Sarita ko dekhte huwe boli.


Manisha- Uttar Pradesh Provincial Civil Service (UPPCS) matlab police ki Naukri karengi aap. Papa iske liye kabhi taiyar nahi honge. Aur waise bhi ye naukri koi bachho ka khel nahin hai. Iske liye bahut mehnat karni padegi aapko.

Sarita- mujhe pata hai ki iske liye mujhe bahut nahin bahut jyada mehnat karni padegi, lekin main karungi. Papa ke liye main din raat ek kar doongi, lekin ye gift main papa ko jaroor dungi. Papa ko manana mera kaam hai. Ab tum meri thodi help kar dena. Mere support me bol dena.

Manisha- main apni didiya ke liye kuchh bhi karungi.


Itna kahkar Manisha Sarita ke gale lag gayi. Isi tarah din bit gaya. Sham ko jab Aanand ji Auto lekar Ghar aaye to wo bahut khush the. Raani ji ne unki Khushi ka karan poocha to unhone bataya


Aanand ji- Ari bhagywan Sarita ke liye ek Acha Rishta mil gaya hai. Ladka Lucknow me sichai vibhag me clerk hai. Ghar pariwar bhi thik hai. Agar ye Rishta jam gaya to isi sal Sarita ke hanth pile kar denge.

Raani ji- Ye to bahut Khushi ki baat hai. To aap rishte ki baat aage badhaiye fir.

Aanand ji- maine apne dost ko bol diya hai ki wo baat ko aage badhaye. Do char din me wo batane ke liye bola hai.


Sarita apne papa ki baat sun rahi thi. Use samajh nahi aa raha tha ki wo apne papa ki Khushi ko apni baat kahkar gam me to nahi badal degi. Fir bhi usne himmat jutayi aur Aanand ji se kaha.


Sarita- papa mujhe aapse kuchh jaroori baat karni hai.

Aanand ji- Are Sarita beta. Mujhe bhi tumse kuchh jaroori baat karni hai.

Sarita- Aap se jyada jaroori meri baat hai papa. Ek baar meri baat sun to lijiye.

Aanand ji- Thik hai beti batao kya baat hai.

Sarita- Pahle aap wada kariye ki meri baat sunkar aap gussa nahi karenge. Meri baat aap dhyan se sunenge. Aur use samjhne ki koshish karenge. Meri bhavnao ko samajhne ki koshish karenge.

Aanand ji- (Pareshan hote huwe) tu aisa kyon kah rahi hai beti. Kya baat hai.

Sarita- Nahi papa pahle aap wada kariye. Ki aap gussa nahi karenge. Fir main bataungi.

Aanand ji- Thik hai beti wada karta hoon ki main gussa nahi karunga.

Sarita- papa baat ye hai ki Mujhe Abhi shadi nahi karni hai.


Sarita ki baat sunkar Aanand ji Aur Rani ji ke hosh hi udd gaye. Unhe ummeed nahi thi ki Sarita aisa kuchh bolegi. Uski baat sunkar Raani ji ne kaha.


Raani ji- Kyon. Kyon Shadi nahi karogi tum, Shadi ki Umar ho gai hai tumhari. Itna achha Rishta aaya hai hath me. Tere pichhe pichhe teri bahan bhi shadi ki Umar par aa gayi hai.

Sarita- maa main Abhi do sal shadi nahi karna chahti hoon. Mujhe naukari karna hai. kuchh banna hai. Uske baad shadi karni hai.

Aanand ji- ye kya dhun sawar ho gayi hai tujhpar beti. Tujhe pata hai na Apni mali halat. Tere sath tere bahan ki bhi shadi ki jimmedari aa jayeyi mujhpar in do shalo me. Tu khud soch agar tu do sal shadi nahi karegi to tere se pahle to Manisha ki shadi nahi kar sakta hoon na. fir tum dono ki shadi ka bojh eksath kaise utha paungi main beti.

Sarita- maine is bare mein bahut socha hai papa, lekin us (Inspector Wife) ki baat mere dimag me ghumti rahti hain. Main bhi usko batana chahti hoon ki mere papa ki bhi izzat hai. Main use batana chahti hoon ki usne jo ilzam lagaya hai ham dono bahno aur bhai ke upar wo galat hai. Mujhe do sal ka samay de dijiye papa. Uske baad aap jis ladke se bolenge main usase shadi kar lungi. Maine aaj tak apse kuchh nahi manga papa. Aaj maang rahi hoon. Mujhe meri zindagi ke do sal de dijiye papa.


Sarita ye baat karte karte aanand ka hanth pakad kar ro padi. Uske rone se sabhi ki aankho me aanshu aa gaye. Raani ji ne Sarita se kaha.


Raani jii- ham teri bhavnaye samajh rahe hain beti, lekin tum bhi hamari majboori samajhne ki koshishh karo beti. Itna achha Rishta baar baar nahi milta.

Aanand ji- Mujhe apni beti ki kushi sabse jyada pyari hai. Tujhko do sal chahiye na. diya tujhko do sal, lekin beti do sal baad tumhe meri baat man-ni hogi. Kyoki tumse kuchh chhupa huwa nahi hai.

Raani ji - ye aap kya kah rahe hain. Itna achha Rishta naukari wala ladka……….

Aanand ji- (bat ko bich me katkar) Nahi bhagyawan. Meri beti ne pahli baar mujhe kuchh manga hai. Main itna bhi nirdayi nahi hoon ki apni beti ke armano ka gala ghot doon. Main janta hoon ki Khushiya is ghar se ruthi hui hain, lekin samay hamesha ek sa nahi rahta. Ho sakta hain ye koi samay ka chakr ho jo Sarita ke madhyam se kuchh achha karwana chahta ho. Rishton ka kya hain agar bhagwan ki marji hui to isase bhi ache ache rishte aayenge hamari Sarita ke liye.

Sarita- Dhanyawad papa. Apne meri baat mani. Main man lagakar wo kamm karungi jiske liye maine aapse do sal mange hain. Main aapki sar garv se ucha karungi papa.


Itna kahkar Sarita Sisakte huwe Aanand ji se lipat gayi.



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