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Romance Tumhaare Liye- Ek Prem Kahaani (Completed)

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Sabhi khana khane ke baad apne apne bister par sone chale gaye. Isi tarah din gujarte rahe. Par abhishek ke ravaiye mein Jyada badlav nahi aaya. Haan itna jaroor huwa tha ki ab wo palat kar jawab nahin deta tha. Jab uske papa use dant-te the ya samjhate the, yaa maa samjhati thi, ya Sarita samjhati thi.


Samjhane ke kuchh din baad tak to Abhishek thik rahta tha, lekin uske baad uski harkate fir se shuru ho jati thi. Wo baat baat par maarpit shuru kar deta tha. Jisase uski shikayate ghar par aati rahti thi. Aanand ji Aur Raani ji ne ise apni buri kismet maankar Swikar kar liya tha aur apne kaan me rui daal liiya tha.


Jab bhi koi Abhishek ki shikayat karta to wo dono bol dete the ki aap khud hi apne tarike se use dekh lijiye. Isi chakkar me abhishek kabhi kabhi pit kar bhi ghar aata tha. Kul milakar ye kaha jaye to galat na hoga ki abhishek ke karan hi Aanand ji ko hamesha Sharmindagi Jhelni padti thi, Lekin Sarita ke kuchh Achhe kaam, baat vyavhaar aur badon ke prati samman ke karan Log unki tareef bhi kar dete the.


Sarita bhi Apne maa baap ki takleef samajhti thi isiliye usne Abhishek ko samjhane ka har sambhav prayash kiya. Lekin kahte hain na ki galat raste par jane ke liye bahut si dishaye hoti hain, lekin wapas aane ke liye wo sabhi dishaye band ho jati hain bas ek Sankra rasta nazar aata hai jo har koi paar nahi kar sakta, yahi haal Abhishek ka bhi tha.


Wo koshish to karta tha buri sangat chhodne ki lekin chhod nahi pata tha. Aise hi samay gujarta gaya aur Sarita ki board pariksha bhi ho gayi. Kuchh din baad uski board pariksha ka parinam aa gaya. Sarita 1st Division me paas hui thi wo bhi 95 % Number ke sath. Poore District mein 6ve number par aayi thi.


Sabhi ghar wale aur aas paas ke log jinhone bhi is baare me suna sabhi ne Sarita ki tareef ki. Sabhi ghar wale bahut khush the. Aur sabse jyada khush tha Abhishek. Wo bhale hi kitna hi bigda huwa tha. Lekin apni bahnon se bahut pyaar karta tha.


Isi Khushi me Abhishek ne Sarita aur Manisha ko apne paas bitha liya aur unse kaha.


Abhishek- main bahut khush hoon Sarita. Bahut jyada khush hoon. Jo main kabhi nahi kar paya wo tumne kar dikhaya. Maine to hamesha hi mummy papa ka naam dubaya hai, lekin ek tum hi ho jo unka sir ucha kar deti ho. Main bahut khush hoon aur isi Khushi ke mauke par main tum dono ki drawing banaunga. Bas tum dono Kuchh Samay tak aise hi baithe rahna. Uthana nahi.

Manisha- Lekin bhaiya. Didiya paas hui hai to mithai khilao pahle.

Abhishek- Nahi pahle tum dono ki tasvir banaunga. Uske baad hi mithai lene jaunga.


Aanand ji aur Raani ji ye dekhkar bahut khush the ki Abhishek bigda huwa hone ke baad bhi Apni dono bahano se bahut pyaar karta hai. unke bachho me pyaar bahut hai. Fir Abhishek ne apni drawing ka kamal dikhaya aur 1/2 hours se bhi kam samay me hi Bahut hi achhi hu-ba-hu tasvir apni dono bahanon ki bana di.


Fir kuchh colour aur pencil ki karigari ne tasvir me chaar chand laga diye. Bahut hi khoobsurat tasvir bani thi. Aisa lagta tha jaise Sarita aur Manisha shakshat tasvir me utar gayi ho. Abhishek ne tasvir banane ke baad Sarita ko dikhate huwe kaha.


Abhishek- Dekh Sarita kaisi bani hai tasvir tum dono ki.


Sarita aur Manisha ne tasvir dekhi to wo bhi khush ho gayi. Bahut khoobsurat bani thi un dono ki tasvir. Thodi der Sarita ne tasvir dekhne ke baad kaha.


Sarita- Isme kuchh kami hai bhaiya. Aap yahan baithiye main us kami ko sudhar deti hoon.

Abhishe- Lekin kami kya hai ye to tumne bataya hi nahi.

Sarita- Kami ye hai ki is tasvir me mere pyaare bhaiya ham dono ke sath nahi hain.


Uske baad Sarita ne Abhishek ko baithaya aur Apni karigari ka aisa namuna pesh kiya ki Abhishek ko namuna banakar tasvir mein utar diya. Jab Sarita ne Abhishek ko tasvir dikhayi to Abhishek hanste huwe bola.


Abhishek- hahahaha. Ye main hoon. Tumne to mujhe namuna bana diya Sairta. Tum bhi naa. Hahahaha.

Sarita- (narajgi ke sath) kya bhaiya maine aapki itni achhi tasvir banayi hai aur aap hain ki hasna rahe hain. Jaiye main aapse baat nahin karti.

Abhishek- (apne KAAN PAKADKAR) Are tum to naraz ho gayi. Main to mazak kar raha tha. Tumne bahut achhi koshish ki meri bahanaa. Khair jaisi bhi hai ab tumne banayi hai to Achhi hai. Main ise hamesha apne paas hi rakhunga.


Fir Abhishek ghar ke andar gaya aur ek chikni .05 MM ki polithin le aaya. Aur us tasvir wale kagaj ko us polithin me dalkar Stapler karte huwe apni pursh me rakh liya aur bola.


Abhishek- Ab main ja raha hoon apni bahan ke liye mithai lane.

Aanand ji- Mithai to maine subah hi la li thi. Fir kyon ja rahe ho.

Abhishek- Nahi papa. Meri bahan itne achchhe number se paas hui hai. Main apne paise se apni bahan ke liye mithai lekar aaunga.


Itna kahkar Abhishek mithai lane dukan par chala gaya. Abhishek dukan se mithayi le raha tha. Uski pith road ki taraf thi. Tabhi usne do ladko ko kuchh baat karte suna. Wo dono ladke uske ghar se thodi door hi rahte the apne pariwar ke sath. Unki baat sunkar Abhishek ka dimag satak gaya aur fir wo huwa jo joshi pariwar ne sapne mein bhi nahi socha tha.


P.ladka- Yaar suna hai Apni item bahut Achhe Number se paas hui hai.

D.ladka- Abe tu kiski baat kar raha hai. Kahi wo Sarita ki baat to nahi kar raha hai.

P. ladka- Haan be. Aanand Joshi ke beti Sarita. Suna hai 95% Number laya hai usne.

D.ladka- Haa be. Padhai me wo jitni Hoshiyar hai. Utni mast dikhti bhi hai Sali. Uski jawani bahut hilore maar rahi hai. Dekha nahi kitni mast maal banti ja rahi hai din-ba-din. Use dekhkar to man me halchal hone lagti hai yaar. Control hi nahin hota hai ab. Kash Use Chakhne ka ek mauka mil jaye to zindgi gan jaye.

P.ladka- Tu sahi kah raha hai be. Are Sarita to jo hai so hai hi. Tune kabhi Chhoti wali ko dekha hai. Manisha ko. Wo bhi Sali abhi chhoti hi hai, lekin is umar me bhi bahut katili ho gayi hai. Use dekhkar bhi mere munh me paani aa jata hai. Dono bahane ekdam patakha ban chuki hain. Man to karta hai ki dono ko Utha kar Kahin le jaun aur unke sath……………………………….


Ladke ke Aur shabd uske munh me hi rah gaye, Kyonki Abhishek na uski pith par apni kohni ka bharpoor waar kiya tha. Wo ladka dard se bilbilane laga.


(Darasal abhishek ne shuru mein unki baaton par dhyaan nahin diya, lekin jab unke munh se Sarita ka naam suna to uske kaan khade ho gaye).

Apna dost ka hal dekhkar doosra ladaka Abhishek ko marne aaya. Lekin Abhishek ne Ek joordar laat uske pet par maari. Uske baad Abhishek ne Aas paas dekha to use dukan ke bahar ek bans ka danda dikhai diya jo halwai ne kutto ko darane ke liye rakha tha. Abhishek ne wo danda utha liya aur dono ladko ko buri tarah marne laga aur bolne laga.


Abhishek- Sale Madar……d, Bhos……..le, meri bahano par buri najar rakhta hai, unke bara me gandi baat bolta hai. Aaj tum dono ko jinda nahi chhodunga. Meri bahane meri jaan hain aur tum dono ne meri jaan par buri nazar dali. Main tum dono ki aankhe phod dunga.


Abhishek bahut buri tarah se un dono ladko ko maar raha tha. Aas paas ke kuchh log Abhishek ko pakadne ke liye aaye. Lekin abhishek kisi ke kaboo mein nahi aa raha tha, wo bas lagatar un ladkon ko mare ja raha tha. Aur bad badbadaye ja raha tha. Thodi hi der me wo ladke Adhmari halat me ho gaye. Agar Abhishek unhe thodi der aur marta to dono ladke mar hi jate,


3-4 logo ne kisi tarah abhishek ko un lagko se kheechkar alag kiya aur use kheechte huwe uske ghar ki taraf le jane lage. Lekin abhishek baar baar unse apne aapko chhudane ki koshish karta aur bolta.


Abhishek- Chhod do mujhe. Mar dalunga salo ko. meri bahano par gandi najar rakhte hain sale. Chhodo mujhe. Ek ko bhi nahi chhodunga main.


Wo tino Aadmi kisi tarah Abhishek ko Uske ghar tak le jate hain. Shor sharaba sunkar jab Aanand ji bahar aate hain to unhe samajhte der nahi lagti ki Abhishek na fir se jhagda kiya hai, lekin unhe is baare me kuchh nahi pata tha ki jhagda karne ki main vajah kya thi, isliye unhone un aadmiyo se poocha.


Aanand- Kya huwa bhai. Fir se isne jhagda kiya kya kahi.

Aadmi- Jhagda nahi kiya Aanand ji. Jaan se marne ki koshish ki isne …………… aur ………… ladko ko, wo to sahi samay par ham logo ne ise pakad liya, nahi to aaj wo dono ladke to gaye hi samajh lijie. Lekin isne unhe itna jyada maar diya hai ki kahi koi mar mura na jaye. Shayad unhone kuchh kaha tha abhishek se jiske karan abhishek ne unko mara.


Aadmi ki baat sunkar Abhishek ke papa ne Abhishek ka gireban pakad kar use jhinjhodate huwe poocha.


Aanand Ji- Ab kya yahi karne ko baki rah gaya tha kya. Sab kuchh to tu kar chuka hai, Kisi ki jaan lena baki rah gaya tha, aaj tune wo bhi karne me koi kasar nahi chhodi.

Abhishek- Isme meri koi galti nahi hai, wo dono Sarita aur Manisha ke baare me gandi gandi bate kar rahe the isliye mujhse bardast nahi huwa aur maine unhe mara.


Abhishek ki baat sunkar Aanand ji ko bahut gussa aa gaya, Sachhai pata na hone ke karan unhe ye laga ki abhishek apne aapko bachane ke liye bahaane bana raha hai. Unhone gusse se garajte huwe abhishek se kaha.


Aanand ji- Ek to itna bada kand karke aaya hai aur upar se jhooth bhi bol raha hai. Tujhe sharam nahi aati. Apni karni ka thikra apni bahano par phod raha hai. Kis janam ka badla le raha hai mujhse tu. Tujhe paida karke Hamne aisa kaun sa paap kar diya jo tu hame ye din dikha raha hai. Aaj tak main teri har galtiyon ko jyada gambhirta se nahi leta tha, lekin tu sudharne wala nahi hai. Aaj main tujhe aisa sabak sikhaunga ki tu hamesha yaad rakhega.


Itna kahkar Aanand ji ne Abhishek ke upar apne thappado ki barsat kar di. Use tab tak marte rahe jab tak wo thak nahi gaye. Jab thak gaye to wo wahi jameen par baithkar rone lage. Abhishek ne Apne papa ko dekhte huwe kaha.


Abhishek- maine kuchh nahi kiya papa. Wo dono Sarita aur Manisha ke baare me gandi gandi bate kar rahe the. Isliye maine unhe mara. Kya maine galat kiya.

Aanand ji- haa tumne galat kiya. Agar wo kuchh bol rahe the to maar pit karne ki kya jaroorat thi. Unhe samjha bhi to sakte the. Tumne hame kahi munh dikhane layak nahi chhoda. Har jagah se tumhari shikayate milti rahi hain. Kabhi bhi tumne hamare bare me socha hai. Tumhare jaisa beta hone se Achha hai ki mera koi beta hi nahi hota.

Kab tak apne baap ki chhati par baitha use takleef deta rahega. Agar tujhme jara bhi sharam aur ham logo ke liye ijjat baki hai tere dil me to chala ja yaha se aur fir kabhi apni shakal bhi mat dikhana. Main bhi samajh loonga ki mera koi beta tha hi nahi.


Aanand ji ki baat sunkar raani aur Sarita ne unhe samjhate huwe kaha.


Sarita- ye kya kah rahe hain aap papa. Mana ki Bhaiya ne galat kiya hai, lekin Iske liye Aap unhe itni badi Saza mat dijiye. Hamare eklaute bhai hain ye.

Raani ji- Haan Ji. Apne Iklaute bete ko Aise koi Ghar se nikal jane ke liye kahta hai kya.


Abhishek na jab Sarita ke munh se ye suna ki wo bhi use galat samajh rahi hai to use bahut takleef hui ki uski bahan bhi usko galat samajh rahi hai. usne Sarita se kaha.


Abhishek- Tumne mujhko galat kaha sarita. Maine kya galat kiya. Wo tumhare aur Manisha ke baar me gandi gandi bate kar raha tha. Isliye maine mara. To kya maine galat ho gaya.

Sarita- Haan Bhaiya. Apne galat kiya hai. Mana ki wo hamare bare me galat bol rahe the, lekin Maar pit iska hal nahi hai. Ham unke ghar unke mammy papa se shikayat karte. Wo unhe marte. Aap kaun hote hain unhe marne wale. Wo bhi itni buri tarah se mara aapne unhe. Agar un donon ko kuchh ho gaya to aapko pata hai ki kitni badi musibat aa sakti hai ham sab par. Har samasya ka samadhan ladai jhagda hi nahi hota. Kuchh bate pyaar se bhi samjhai jati hain. Kitno ko marenge aap bhaiya. Aaj un dono ne kaha. Aap ne unhe mara. Kal koi aur kahega. To aap unhe maroge. Parso sara mohalla kahega to Kis kis se ladenge aap.

Abhishek- Main Sab ko maar dalunga jo tum dono ke bare me bura bolega. Kisi ko nahi chhodunga.

Aanand- Are nalayak Abhi bhi tu yahi khada hai. Kya mujhe maar kar hi tujhe chain milega. Maine kitne Armaan sajaye the ki mera beta bada hokar mera naam roshan karega. Mere budhape ke sahara banega, lekin tumne Achha naam roshan kiya hai mera. Are begairat. Agar tujhme jara bhi sharam bachi hai to nikal ja mere ghar se. aur dobara kabhi apni shakal mat dikhana.


Ye baat lagbhag har baap apne bachho se bol deta hai jab wo bahut gusse mein hota hai. Ek najariye se dekha jaye to abhishek ne yahan par kuchh galat nahin kiya tha, kyonki is baat baat uski bahanon ki thi, lekin wo iske pahle itni baar ladaai jhagda kar chuka tha ki uska ye jhagda jo usne apni bahano ke liye kiya tha wo bhi galat hi najar aane laga tha uske papa ko jo abhi bahut gusse mein the. Rahi sahi kasar Sarita ne ye bolkar poori kar di ki abhishek ne galat kiya hai. Bachpan se hi chhoti- chhoti baton ko dil se lagaane wale abhishek ne Sarita ki is baat ko bahut jyada dil pe le liya. Abhishek ne Sarita ko dekhte huwe kaha.


Abhishek- Sarita mujhe papa ki baat sunkar itna bura nahi laga jitna tumhari baato ka.


Itna kahkar Abhishek ghar ke andar chala gaya aur apna saman ek bag me rakhne laga. Raani ji Sarita aur Manisha sabhi uske pichhe gaye aur use rokte rahe. Lekin wo nahi mana. Bas yahi kahta raha ki Use Sarita ki baton ne dukhi kiya. Use Sarita se aisi ummeed nahin thi. Wo apna bag lekar kamre se bahar aaya aur jane laga to Raani, Sarita aur Manisha use rokne ki koshish karne lage to Aanand ji ne kaha.


Aanand ji- Jane do isko. Badi garmi chadhi hain iske khoon me na. Jab duniya ki thokre khayega tab akal aayegi. Jab jindagi ki hakikat ka samna hoga tab aante dal ka bhav pata chalega. ChAr din baad jab khoon ka ubaal kam hoga to apni galtiyan najar aayegi ise. Tab pata chalega ki duniya apne hisab se nahin chalti. Hame duniya ke hisab se chalna padta hai.


Aanand ji ki baat sunkar Abhishek Sabhi se apne ko chhudakar ghar se bahar nikal gaya.



Iske Aage ki Kahaani Agle Bhag mein..
Superbbb Updatee

Toh aakhir kaar Anand ji ke sabr ka baand toot hi gaya aur unhone woh boldiya jo unko nhi bolna chahiye tha. Aur unka saath diya Sarita ne jiski baat ko apne dil se laga baitha hai Abhishek aur ghar chorr ke chala gaya.

Dekhte hai kaha gaya hai Abhishek aur kyaa karta hai ab. Shayad isi ke baad woh pure parivaar ko hospital mein hi milta hai.
 

Jaguaar

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उनकी कहानी में आपने जरूर कोई कांड किया होगा तभी वो उखड़े उखड़े लग रहे हैं।😃😃
Aisa kuch nhi hai. Aur main koi ukhda hua nhi hu. Main toh bas masti kar raha hu
 

aalu

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adhyay 3...

papa jee aur mumma jee soch rahe hain kee beta hamara aisa kaam karega,, jag mein hamara wo naam karega magar yeh toh koi na jaane manzil hain unki doozi yehan... ab padhne likhne mein man nahin lagta hain toh tution lagwaya lekin master jee bhi bhaag liye... ab itna honahar student hain kee saare subject mila ke bhi passing marks nahin aate hain... chitrakari aur hindi ko chhor ke... kyun bhai in do cheejo se itna pyar kyun bhala... baakio se kya koi udhar liya tha jo bachte phir rahe ho...

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khair uski samashya wahee jaane... samay ke saath dhethai badhti gayee aur chhoti nadaniya ab bari pareshani ban gayee... toh auto mein passenger na milne ka frustration abhishek babu pe nikal diye.. jam ke pela,,, ab itne bara ho gaya hain,,, tab bhi maar kha ke rota hai,,, abee mard ko dard nahin hota yeh bhool gaya...

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waise sarita se bahut pyar hain abhi khana khila rahi hain baad mein goli khilayegi...
 

aalu

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adhyay 4...

abhishek toh full on rowdy banne wale raste pe chala jaa rha hain... badhiya hain baap tempo chalata hain behen police waali aur bhai gangster... aur maa wo dukhiyari bechari... waise kahani mein kabhi abhishek kaa view nahin dikhaya gaya hain... akhir" main aisa kyun hoon" gana dekh ke bhi usko NDA mein jaane ka khayal nahin aaya...

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aise bachhe ko dekh ke aas pados waale kahenge chhor do.. jona rahe bahe,, bahne do... matlab jiss disha mein jaa raha hain jaane do na roko usse... lekin maa baap apni aankhon ke samne apni aulad ko bigarte kaise dekh shakte hain... unhe toh apni har santan pyari hoti hain... waise yeh shab iss sarita kee wajah se ho raha hain... agar wo bhi luchhhi lafangi,,, beedi,, khaini,, guthkha tambaako bechana shuru kar deti toh akela abhishek ko gaali nahi parti... dono mil baant ke kha lete...

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khair bechara abhishek,,,
 

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Sabhi khana khane ke baad apne apne bister par sone chale gaye. Isi tarah din gujarte rahe. Par abhishek ke ravaiye mein Jyada badlav nahi aaya. Haan itna jaroor huwa tha ki ab wo palat kar jawab nahin deta tha. Jab uske papa use dant-te the ya samjhate the, yaa maa samjhati thi, ya Sarita samjhati thi.


Samjhane ke kuchh din baad tak to Abhishek thik rahta tha, lekin uske baad uski harkate fir se shuru ho jati thi. Wo baat baat par maarpit shuru kar deta tha. Jisase uski shikayate ghar par aati rahti thi. Aanand ji Aur Raani ji ne ise apni buri kismet maankar Swikar kar liya tha aur apne kaan me rui daal liiya tha.


Jab bhi koi Abhishek ki shikayat karta to wo dono bol dete the ki aap khud hi apne tarike se use dekh lijiye. Isi chakkar me abhishek kabhi kabhi pit kar bhi ghar aata tha. Kul milakar ye kaha jaye to galat na hoga ki abhishek ke karan hi Aanand ji ko hamesha Sharmindagi Jhelni padti thi, Lekin Sarita ke kuchh Achhe kaam, baat vyavhaar aur badon ke prati samman ke karan Log unki tareef bhi kar dete the.


Sarita bhi Apne maa baap ki takleef samajhti thi isiliye usne Abhishek ko samjhane ka har sambhav prayash kiya. Lekin kahte hain na ki galat raste par jane ke liye bahut si dishaye hoti hain, lekin wapas aane ke liye wo sabhi dishaye band ho jati hain bas ek Sankra rasta nazar aata hai jo har koi paar nahi kar sakta, yahi haal Abhishek ka bhi tha.


Wo koshish to karta tha buri sangat chhodne ki lekin chhod nahi pata tha. Aise hi samay gujarta gaya aur Sarita ki board pariksha bhi ho gayi. Kuchh din baad uski board pariksha ka parinam aa gaya. Sarita 1st Division me paas hui thi wo bhi 95 % Number ke sath. Poore District mein 6ve number par aayi thi.


Sabhi ghar wale aur aas paas ke log jinhone bhi is baare me suna sabhi ne Sarita ki tareef ki. Sabhi ghar wale bahut khush the. Aur sabse jyada khush tha Abhishek. Wo bhale hi kitna hi bigda huwa tha. Lekin apni bahnon se bahut pyaar karta tha.


Isi Khushi me Abhishek ne Sarita aur Manisha ko apne paas bitha liya aur unse kaha.


Abhishek- main bahut khush hoon Sarita. Bahut jyada khush hoon. Jo main kabhi nahi kar paya wo tumne kar dikhaya. Maine to hamesha hi mummy papa ka naam dubaya hai, lekin ek tum hi ho jo unka sir ucha kar deti ho. Main bahut khush hoon aur isi Khushi ke mauke par main tum dono ki drawing banaunga. Bas tum dono Kuchh Samay tak aise hi baithe rahna. Uthana nahi.

Manisha- Lekin bhaiya. Didiya paas hui hai to mithai khilao pahle.

Abhishek- Nahi pahle tum dono ki tasvir banaunga. Uske baad hi mithai lene jaunga.


Aanand ji aur Raani ji ye dekhkar bahut khush the ki Abhishek bigda huwa hone ke baad bhi Apni dono bahano se bahut pyaar karta hai. unke bachho me pyaar bahut hai. Fir Abhishek ne apni drawing ka kamal dikhaya aur 1/2 hours se bhi kam samay me hi Bahut hi achhi hu-ba-hu tasvir apni dono bahanon ki bana di.


Fir kuchh colour aur pencil ki karigari ne tasvir me chaar chand laga diye. Bahut hi khoobsurat tasvir bani thi. Aisa lagta tha jaise Sarita aur Manisha shakshat tasvir me utar gayi ho. Abhishek ne tasvir banane ke baad Sarita ko dikhate huwe kaha.


Abhishek- Dekh Sarita kaisi bani hai tasvir tum dono ki.


Sarita aur Manisha ne tasvir dekhi to wo bhi khush ho gayi. Bahut khoobsurat bani thi un dono ki tasvir. Thodi der Sarita ne tasvir dekhne ke baad kaha.


Sarita- Isme kuchh kami hai bhaiya. Aap yahan baithiye main us kami ko sudhar deti hoon.

Abhishe- Lekin kami kya hai ye to tumne bataya hi nahi.

Sarita- Kami ye hai ki is tasvir me mere pyaare bhaiya ham dono ke sath nahi hain.


Uske baad Sarita ne Abhishek ko baithaya aur Apni karigari ka aisa namuna pesh kiya ki Abhishek ko namuna banakar tasvir mein utar diya. Jab Sarita ne Abhishek ko tasvir dikhayi to Abhishek hanste huwe bola.


Abhishek- hahahaha. Ye main hoon. Tumne to mujhe namuna bana diya Sairta. Tum bhi naa. Hahahaha.

Sarita- (narajgi ke sath) kya bhaiya maine aapki itni achhi tasvir banayi hai aur aap hain ki hasna rahe hain. Jaiye main aapse baat nahin karti.

Abhishek- (apne KAAN PAKADKAR) Are tum to naraz ho gayi. Main to mazak kar raha tha. Tumne bahut achhi koshish ki meri bahanaa. Khair jaisi bhi hai ab tumne banayi hai to Achhi hai. Main ise hamesha apne paas hi rakhunga.


Fir Abhishek ghar ke andar gaya aur ek chikni .05 MM ki polithin le aaya. Aur us tasvir wale kagaj ko us polithin me dalkar Stapler karte huwe apni pursh me rakh liya aur bola.


Abhishek- Ab main ja raha hoon apni bahan ke liye mithai lane.

Aanand ji- Mithai to maine subah hi la li thi. Fir kyon ja rahe ho.

Abhishek- Nahi papa. Meri bahan itne achchhe number se paas hui hai. Main apne paise se apni bahan ke liye mithai lekar aaunga.


Itna kahkar Abhishek mithai lane dukan par chala gaya. Abhishek dukan se mithayi le raha tha. Uski pith road ki taraf thi. Tabhi usne do ladko ko kuchh baat karte suna. Wo dono ladke uske ghar se thodi door hi rahte the apne pariwar ke sath. Unki baat sunkar Abhishek ka dimag satak gaya aur fir wo huwa jo joshi pariwar ne sapne mein bhi nahi socha tha.


P.ladka- Yaar suna hai Apni item bahut Achhe Number se paas hui hai.

D.ladka- Abe tu kiski baat kar raha hai. Kahi wo Sarita ki baat to nahi kar raha hai.

P. ladka- Haan be. Aanand Joshi ke beti Sarita. Suna hai 95% Number laya hai usne.

D.ladka- Haa be. Padhai me wo jitni Hoshiyar hai. Utni mast dikhti bhi hai Sali. Uski jawani bahut hilore maar rahi hai. Dekha nahi kitni mast maal banti ja rahi hai din-ba-din. Use dekhkar to man me halchal hone lagti hai yaar. Control hi nahin hota hai ab. Kash Use Chakhne ka ek mauka mil jaye to zindgi gan jaye.

P.ladka- Tu sahi kah raha hai be. Are Sarita to jo hai so hai hi. Tune kabhi Chhoti wali ko dekha hai. Manisha ko. Wo bhi Sali abhi chhoti hi hai, lekin is umar me bhi bahut katili ho gayi hai. Use dekhkar bhi mere munh me paani aa jata hai. Dono bahane ekdam patakha ban chuki hain. Man to karta hai ki dono ko Utha kar Kahin le jaun aur unke sath……………………………….


Ladke ke Aur shabd uske munh me hi rah gaye, Kyonki Abhishek na uski pith par apni kohni ka bharpoor waar kiya tha. Wo ladka dard se bilbilane laga.


(Darasal abhishek ne shuru mein unki baaton par dhyaan nahin diya, lekin jab unke munh se Sarita ka naam suna to uske kaan khade ho gaye).

Apna dost ka hal dekhkar doosra ladaka Abhishek ko marne aaya. Lekin Abhishek ne Ek joordar laat uske pet par maari. Uske baad Abhishek ne Aas paas dekha to use dukan ke bahar ek bans ka danda dikhai diya jo halwai ne kutto ko darane ke liye rakha tha. Abhishek ne wo danda utha liya aur dono ladko ko buri tarah marne laga aur bolne laga.


Abhishek- Sale Madar……d, Bhos……..le, meri bahano par buri najar rakhta hai, unke bara me gandi baat bolta hai. Aaj tum dono ko jinda nahi chhodunga. Meri bahane meri jaan hain aur tum dono ne meri jaan par buri nazar dali. Main tum dono ki aankhe phod dunga.


Abhishek bahut buri tarah se un dono ladko ko maar raha tha. Aas paas ke kuchh log Abhishek ko pakadne ke liye aaye. Lekin abhishek kisi ke kaboo mein nahi aa raha tha, wo bas lagatar un ladkon ko mare ja raha tha. Aur bad badbadaye ja raha tha. Thodi hi der me wo ladke Adhmari halat me ho gaye. Agar Abhishek unhe thodi der aur marta to dono ladke mar hi jate,


3-4 logo ne kisi tarah abhishek ko un lagko se kheechkar alag kiya aur use kheechte huwe uske ghar ki taraf le jane lage. Lekin abhishek baar baar unse apne aapko chhudane ki koshish karta aur bolta.


Abhishek- Chhod do mujhe. Mar dalunga salo ko. meri bahano par gandi najar rakhte hain sale. Chhodo mujhe. Ek ko bhi nahi chhodunga main.


Wo tino Aadmi kisi tarah Abhishek ko Uske ghar tak le jate hain. Shor sharaba sunkar jab Aanand ji bahar aate hain to unhe samajhte der nahi lagti ki Abhishek na fir se jhagda kiya hai, lekin unhe is baare me kuchh nahi pata tha ki jhagda karne ki main vajah kya thi, isliye unhone un aadmiyo se poocha.


Aanand- Kya huwa bhai. Fir se isne jhagda kiya kya kahi.

Aadmi- Jhagda nahi kiya Aanand ji. Jaan se marne ki koshish ki isne …………… aur ………… ladko ko, wo to sahi samay par ham logo ne ise pakad liya, nahi to aaj wo dono ladke to gaye hi samajh lijie. Lekin isne unhe itna jyada maar diya hai ki kahi koi mar mura na jaye. Shayad unhone kuchh kaha tha abhishek se jiske karan abhishek ne unko mara.


Aadmi ki baat sunkar Abhishek ke papa ne Abhishek ka gireban pakad kar use jhinjhodate huwe poocha.


Aanand Ji- Ab kya yahi karne ko baki rah gaya tha kya. Sab kuchh to tu kar chuka hai, Kisi ki jaan lena baki rah gaya tha, aaj tune wo bhi karne me koi kasar nahi chhodi.

Abhishek- Isme meri koi galti nahi hai, wo dono Sarita aur Manisha ke baare me gandi gandi bate kar rahe the isliye mujhse bardast nahi huwa aur maine unhe mara.


Abhishek ki baat sunkar Aanand ji ko bahut gussa aa gaya, Sachhai pata na hone ke karan unhe ye laga ki abhishek apne aapko bachane ke liye bahaane bana raha hai. Unhone gusse se garajte huwe abhishek se kaha.


Aanand ji- Ek to itna bada kand karke aaya hai aur upar se jhooth bhi bol raha hai. Tujhe sharam nahi aati. Apni karni ka thikra apni bahano par phod raha hai. Kis janam ka badla le raha hai mujhse tu. Tujhe paida karke Hamne aisa kaun sa paap kar diya jo tu hame ye din dikha raha hai. Aaj tak main teri har galtiyon ko jyada gambhirta se nahi leta tha, lekin tu sudharne wala nahi hai. Aaj main tujhe aisa sabak sikhaunga ki tu hamesha yaad rakhega.


Itna kahkar Aanand ji ne Abhishek ke upar apne thappado ki barsat kar di. Use tab tak marte rahe jab tak wo thak nahi gaye. Jab thak gaye to wo wahi jameen par baithkar rone lage. Abhishek ne Apne papa ko dekhte huwe kaha.


Abhishek- maine kuchh nahi kiya papa. Wo dono Sarita aur Manisha ke baare me gandi gandi bate kar rahe the. Isliye maine unhe mara. Kya maine galat kiya.

Aanand ji- haa tumne galat kiya. Agar wo kuchh bol rahe the to maar pit karne ki kya jaroorat thi. Unhe samjha bhi to sakte the. Tumne hame kahi munh dikhane layak nahi chhoda. Har jagah se tumhari shikayate milti rahi hain. Kabhi bhi tumne hamare bare me socha hai. Tumhare jaisa beta hone se Achha hai ki mera koi beta hi nahi hota.

Kab tak apne baap ki chhati par baitha use takleef deta rahega. Agar tujhme jara bhi sharam aur ham logo ke liye ijjat baki hai tere dil me to chala ja yaha se aur fir kabhi apni shakal bhi mat dikhana. Main bhi samajh loonga ki mera koi beta tha hi nahi.


Aanand ji ki baat sunkar raani aur Sarita ne unhe samjhate huwe kaha.


Sarita- ye kya kah rahe hain aap papa. Mana ki Bhaiya ne galat kiya hai, lekin Iske liye Aap unhe itni badi Saza mat dijiye. Hamare eklaute bhai hain ye.

Raani ji- Haan Ji. Apne Iklaute bete ko Aise koi Ghar se nikal jane ke liye kahta hai kya.


Abhishek na jab Sarita ke munh se ye suna ki wo bhi use galat samajh rahi hai to use bahut takleef hui ki uski bahan bhi usko galat samajh rahi hai. usne Sarita se kaha.


Abhishek- Tumne mujhko galat kaha sarita. Maine kya galat kiya. Wo tumhare aur Manisha ke baar me gandi gandi bate kar raha tha. Isliye maine mara. To kya maine galat ho gaya.

Sarita- Haan Bhaiya. Apne galat kiya hai. Mana ki wo hamare bare me galat bol rahe the, lekin Maar pit iska hal nahi hai. Ham unke ghar unke mammy papa se shikayat karte. Wo unhe marte. Aap kaun hote hain unhe marne wale. Wo bhi itni buri tarah se mara aapne unhe. Agar un donon ko kuchh ho gaya to aapko pata hai ki kitni badi musibat aa sakti hai ham sab par. Har samasya ka samadhan ladai jhagda hi nahi hota. Kuchh bate pyaar se bhi samjhai jati hain. Kitno ko marenge aap bhaiya. Aaj un dono ne kaha. Aap ne unhe mara. Kal koi aur kahega. To aap unhe maroge. Parso sara mohalla kahega to Kis kis se ladenge aap.

Abhishek- Main Sab ko maar dalunga jo tum dono ke bare me bura bolega. Kisi ko nahi chhodunga.

Aanand- Are nalayak Abhi bhi tu yahi khada hai. Kya mujhe maar kar hi tujhe chain milega. Maine kitne Armaan sajaye the ki mera beta bada hokar mera naam roshan karega. Mere budhape ke sahara banega, lekin tumne Achha naam roshan kiya hai mera. Are begairat. Agar tujhme jara bhi sharam bachi hai to nikal ja mere ghar se. aur dobara kabhi apni shakal mat dikhana.


Ye baat lagbhag har baap apne bachho se bol deta hai jab wo bahut gusse mein hota hai. Ek najariye se dekha jaye to abhishek ne yahan par kuchh galat nahin kiya tha, kyonki is baat baat uski bahanon ki thi, lekin wo iske pahle itni baar ladaai jhagda kar chuka tha ki uska ye jhagda jo usne apni bahano ke liye kiya tha wo bhi galat hi najar aane laga tha uske papa ko jo abhi bahut gusse mein the. Rahi sahi kasar Sarita ne ye bolkar poori kar di ki abhishek ne galat kiya hai. Bachpan se hi chhoti- chhoti baton ko dil se lagaane wale abhishek ne Sarita ki is baat ko bahut jyada dil pe le liya. Abhishek ne Sarita ko dekhte huwe kaha.


Abhishek- Sarita mujhe papa ki baat sunkar itna bura nahi laga jitna tumhari baato ka.


Itna kahkar Abhishek ghar ke andar chala gaya aur apna saman ek bag me rakhne laga. Raani ji Sarita aur Manisha sabhi uske pichhe gaye aur use rokte rahe. Lekin wo nahi mana. Bas yahi kahta raha ki Use Sarita ki baton ne dukhi kiya. Use Sarita se aisi ummeed nahin thi. Wo apna bag lekar kamre se bahar aaya aur jane laga to Raani, Sarita aur Manisha use rokne ki koshish karne lage to Aanand ji ne kaha.


Aanand ji- Jane do isko. Badi garmi chadhi hain iske khoon me na. Jab duniya ki thokre khayega tab akal aayegi. Jab jindagi ki hakikat ka samna hoga tab aante dal ka bhav pata chalega. ChAr din baad jab khoon ka ubaal kam hoga to apni galtiyan najar aayegi ise. Tab pata chalega ki duniya apne hisab se nahin chalti. Hame duniya ke hisab se chalna padta hai.


Aanand ji ki baat sunkar Abhishek Sabhi se apne ko chhudakar ghar se bahar nikal gaya.



Iske Aage ki Kahaani Agle Bhag mein..
Bahut hi shaandar update diya hai Mahi Maurya ji...
Nice and awesome update...
 

aalu

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adhyay 5...

waise abhishek itna bigra hone ke baad bhi apni behno se itna pyar kaise kar shakta hain... akhir wo pyar usse apni galtiyan kyun nahin dikhata hain.. kyun nahin dekhta hain wo kee uske wajah se uske pyar karne waalo ke oopar kya beet rahi hain... kya bas khokhle jajbat hi dikhane aate hain,,, kabhi sachhi jimmedariyan nibhani nahin aati hain... baap aur bete mein toh waise hi adhiktar gharo mein thani pari rahti hain ek umar ke baad...

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lekin maa se behen se toh usse pyar hain kya unki wajah se khud ko badalne kee kosis nahi karta hain... wo chand dino tak badalna toh bachhe karte hain jaise daant parne par thori der shant baith jaye aur phir bhool jaate hain... wo ab bachaa nahi nhain ghar ka sabse bara ladka hain... waise londe ko koi londiya nahin mili kya bahar,,, wahee hain jo sudhar shakti hain thora... jawani mein na baap kee maar na maa ke aansoo,, na behen kee pukar... sudharti hain toh bas uske ashique ka pyar...

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waise abhishek jaise namune lagbhag har jagah dekhne ko mil jaate hain... khushi ke mauke ko itna gamgeen din bana diya... gussa tha nikala bhi lekin ek limit mein hi shab theek lagta hain... kya bas asleel baate bolne bhar se jaan le lega... usse uski had nahin pata hain... aur bahut jaldi hurt ho jata hain... khair ghar se toh nikal liya ab wapas aata hain ya phir puri tarah se barbad hota hain..
 

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UPDATE- 05


Sabhi khana khane ke baad apne apne bister par sone chale gaye. Isi tarah din gujarte rahe. Par abhishek ke ravaiye mein Jyada badlav nahi aaya. Haan itna jaroor huwa tha ki ab wo palat kar jawab nahin deta tha. Jab uske papa use dant-te the ya samjhate the, yaa maa samjhati thi, ya Sarita samjhati thi.


Samjhane ke kuchh din baad tak to Abhishek thik rahta tha, lekin uske baad uski harkate fir se shuru ho jati thi. Wo baat baat par maarpit shuru kar deta tha. Jisase uski shikayate ghar par aati rahti thi. Aanand ji Aur Raani ji ne ise apni buri kismet maankar Swikar kar liya tha aur apne kaan me rui daal liiya tha.


Jab bhi koi Abhishek ki shikayat karta to wo dono bol dete the ki aap khud hi apne tarike se use dekh lijiye. Isi chakkar me abhishek kabhi kabhi pit kar bhi ghar aata tha. Kul milakar ye kaha jaye to galat na hoga ki abhishek ke karan hi Aanand ji ko hamesha Sharmindagi Jhelni padti thi, Lekin Sarita ke kuchh Achhe kaam, baat vyavhaar aur badon ke prati samman ke karan Log unki tareef bhi kar dete the.


Sarita bhi Apne maa baap ki takleef samajhti thi isiliye usne Abhishek ko samjhane ka har sambhav prayash kiya. Lekin kahte hain na ki galat raste par jane ke liye bahut si dishaye hoti hain, lekin wapas aane ke liye wo sabhi dishaye band ho jati hain bas ek Sankra rasta nazar aata hai jo har koi paar nahi kar sakta, yahi haal Abhishek ka bhi tha.


Wo koshish to karta tha buri sangat chhodne ki lekin chhod nahi pata tha. Aise hi samay gujarta gaya aur Sarita ki board pariksha bhi ho gayi. Kuchh din baad uski board pariksha ka parinam aa gaya. Sarita 1st Division me paas hui thi wo bhi 95 % Number ke sath. Poore District mein 6ve number par aayi thi.


Sabhi ghar wale aur aas paas ke log jinhone bhi is baare me suna sabhi ne Sarita ki tareef ki. Sabhi ghar wale bahut khush the. Aur sabse jyada khush tha Abhishek. Wo bhale hi kitna hi bigda huwa tha. Lekin apni bahnon se bahut pyaar karta tha.


Isi Khushi me Abhishek ne Sarita aur Manisha ko apne paas bitha liya aur unse kaha.


Abhishek- main bahut khush hoon Sarita. Bahut jyada khush hoon. Jo main kabhi nahi kar paya wo tumne kar dikhaya. Maine to hamesha hi mummy papa ka naam dubaya hai, lekin ek tum hi ho jo unka sir ucha kar deti ho. Main bahut khush hoon aur isi Khushi ke mauke par main tum dono ki drawing banaunga. Bas tum dono Kuchh Samay tak aise hi baithe rahna. Uthana nahi.

Manisha- Lekin bhaiya. Didiya paas hui hai to mithai khilao pahle.

Abhishek- Nahi pahle tum dono ki tasvir banaunga. Uske baad hi mithai lene jaunga.


Aanand ji aur Raani ji ye dekhkar bahut khush the ki Abhishek bigda huwa hone ke baad bhi Apni dono bahano se bahut pyaar karta hai. unke bachho me pyaar bahut hai. Fir Abhishek ne apni drawing ka kamal dikhaya aur 1/2 hours se bhi kam samay me hi Bahut hi achhi hu-ba-hu tasvir apni dono bahanon ki bana di.


Fir kuchh colour aur pencil ki karigari ne tasvir me chaar chand laga diye. Bahut hi khoobsurat tasvir bani thi. Aisa lagta tha jaise Sarita aur Manisha shakshat tasvir me utar gayi ho. Abhishek ne tasvir banane ke baad Sarita ko dikhate huwe kaha.


Abhishek- Dekh Sarita kaisi bani hai tasvir tum dono ki.


Sarita aur Manisha ne tasvir dekhi to wo bhi khush ho gayi. Bahut khoobsurat bani thi un dono ki tasvir. Thodi der Sarita ne tasvir dekhne ke baad kaha.


Sarita- Isme kuchh kami hai bhaiya. Aap yahan baithiye main us kami ko sudhar deti hoon.

Abhishe- Lekin kami kya hai ye to tumne bataya hi nahi.

Sarita- Kami ye hai ki is tasvir me mere pyaare bhaiya ham dono ke sath nahi hain.


Uske baad Sarita ne Abhishek ko baithaya aur Apni karigari ka aisa namuna pesh kiya ki Abhishek ko namuna banakar tasvir mein utar diya. Jab Sarita ne Abhishek ko tasvir dikhayi to Abhishek hanste huwe bola.


Abhishek- hahahaha. Ye main hoon. Tumne to mujhe namuna bana diya Sairta. Tum bhi naa. Hahahaha.

Sarita- (narajgi ke sath) kya bhaiya maine aapki itni achhi tasvir banayi hai aur aap hain ki hasna rahe hain. Jaiye main aapse baat nahin karti.

Abhishek- (apne KAAN PAKADKAR) Are tum to naraz ho gayi. Main to mazak kar raha tha. Tumne bahut achhi koshish ki meri bahanaa. Khair jaisi bhi hai ab tumne banayi hai to Achhi hai. Main ise hamesha apne paas hi rakhunga.


Fir Abhishek ghar ke andar gaya aur ek chikni .05 MM ki polithin le aaya. Aur us tasvir wale kagaj ko us polithin me dalkar Stapler karte huwe apni pursh me rakh liya aur bola.


Abhishek- Ab main ja raha hoon apni bahan ke liye mithai lane.

Aanand ji- Mithai to maine subah hi la li thi. Fir kyon ja rahe ho.

Abhishek- Nahi papa. Meri bahan itne achchhe number se paas hui hai. Main apne paise se apni bahan ke liye mithai lekar aaunga.


Itna kahkar Abhishek mithai lane dukan par chala gaya. Abhishek dukan se mithayi le raha tha. Uski pith road ki taraf thi. Tabhi usne do ladko ko kuchh baat karte suna. Wo dono ladke uske ghar se thodi door hi rahte the apne pariwar ke sath. Unki baat sunkar Abhishek ka dimag satak gaya aur fir wo huwa jo joshi pariwar ne sapne mein bhi nahi socha tha.


P.ladka- Yaar suna hai Apni item bahut Achhe Number se paas hui hai.

D.ladka- Abe tu kiski baat kar raha hai. Kahi wo Sarita ki baat to nahi kar raha hai.

P. ladka- Haan be. Aanand Joshi ke beti Sarita. Suna hai 95% Number laya hai usne.

D.ladka- Haa be. Padhai me wo jitni Hoshiyar hai. Utni mast dikhti bhi hai Sali. Uski jawani bahut hilore maar rahi hai. Dekha nahi kitni mast maal banti ja rahi hai din-ba-din. Use dekhkar to man me halchal hone lagti hai yaar. Control hi nahin hota hai ab. Kash Use Chakhne ka ek mauka mil jaye to zindgi gan jaye.

P.ladka- Tu sahi kah raha hai be. Are Sarita to jo hai so hai hi. Tune kabhi Chhoti wali ko dekha hai. Manisha ko. Wo bhi Sali abhi chhoti hi hai, lekin is umar me bhi bahut katili ho gayi hai. Use dekhkar bhi mere munh me paani aa jata hai. Dono bahane ekdam patakha ban chuki hain. Man to karta hai ki dono ko Utha kar Kahin le jaun aur unke sath……………………………….


Ladke ke Aur shabd uske munh me hi rah gaye, Kyonki Abhishek na uski pith par apni kohni ka bharpoor waar kiya tha. Wo ladka dard se bilbilane laga.

(Darasal abhishek ne shuru mein unki baaton par dhyaan nahin diya, lekin jab unke munh se Sarita ka naam suna to uske kaan khade ho gaye).

Apna dost ka hal dekhkar doosra ladaka Abhishek ko marne aaya. Lekin Abhishek ne Ek joordar laat uske pet par maari. Uske baad Abhishek ne Aas paas dekha to use dukan ke bahar ek bans ka danda dikhai diya jo halwai ne kutto ko darane ke liye rakha tha. Abhishek ne wo danda utha liya aur dono ladko ko buri tarah marne laga aur bolne laga.


Abhishek- Sale Madar……d, Bhos……..le, meri bahano par buri najar rakhta hai, unke bara me gandi baat bolta hai. Aaj tum dono ko jinda nahi chhodunga. Meri bahane meri jaan hain aur tum dono ne meri jaan par buri nazar dali. Main tum dono ki aankhe phod dunga.


Abhishek bahut buri tarah se un dono ladko ko maar raha tha. Aas paas ke kuchh log Abhishek ko pakadne ke liye aaye. Lekin abhishek kisi ke kaboo mein nahi aa raha tha, wo bas lagatar un ladkon ko mare ja raha tha. Aur bad badbadaye ja raha tha. Thodi hi der me wo ladke Adhmari halat me ho gaye. Agar Abhishek unhe thodi der aur marta to dono ladke mar hi jate,


3-4 logo ne kisi tarah abhishek ko un lagko se kheechkar alag kiya aur use kheechte huwe uske ghar ki taraf le jane lage. Lekin abhishek baar baar unse apne aapko chhudane ki koshish karta aur bolta.


Abhishek- Chhod do mujhe. Mar dalunga salo ko. meri bahano par gandi najar rakhte hain sale. Chhodo mujhe. Ek ko bhi nahi chhodunga main.


Wo tino Aadmi kisi tarah Abhishek ko Uske ghar tak le jate hain. Shor sharaba sunkar jab Aanand ji bahar aate hain to unhe samajhte der nahi lagti ki Abhishek na fir se jhagda kiya hai, lekin unhe is baare me kuchh nahi pata tha ki jhagda karne ki main vajah kya thi, isliye unhone un aadmiyo se poocha.


Aanand- Kya huwa bhai. Fir se isne jhagda kiya kya kahi.

Aadmi- Jhagda nahi kiya Aanand ji. Jaan se marne ki koshish ki isne …………… aur ………… ladko ko, wo to sahi samay par ham logo ne ise pakad liya, nahi to aaj wo dono ladke to gaye hi samajh lijie. Lekin isne unhe itna jyada maar diya hai ki kahi koi mar mura na jaye. Shayad unhone kuchh kaha tha abhishek se jiske karan abhishek ne unko mara.


Aadmi ki baat sunkar Abhishek ke papa ne Abhishek ka gireban pakad kar use jhinjhodate huwe poocha.


Aanand Ji- Ab kya yahi karne ko baki rah gaya tha kya. Sab kuchh to tu kar chuka hai, Kisi ki jaan lena baki rah gaya tha, aaj tune wo bhi karne me koi kasar nahi chhodi.

Abhishek- Isme meri koi galti nahi hai, wo dono Sarita aur Manisha ke baare me gandi gandi bate kar rahe the isliye mujhse bardast nahi huwa aur maine unhe mara.


Abhishek ki baat sunkar Aanand ji ko bahut gussa aa gaya, Sachhai pata na hone ke karan unhe ye laga ki abhishek apne aapko bachane ke liye bahaane bana raha hai. Unhone gusse se garajte huwe abhishek se kaha.


Aanand ji- Ek to itna bada kand karke aaya hai aur upar se jhooth bhi bol raha hai. Tujhe sharam nahi aati. Apni karni ka thikra apni bahano par phod raha hai. Kis janam ka badla le raha hai mujhse tu. Tujhe paida karke Hamne aisa kaun sa paap kar diya jo tu hame ye din dikha raha hai. Aaj tak main teri har galtiyon ko jyada gambhirta se nahi leta tha, lekin tu sudharne wala nahi hai. Aaj main tujhe aisa sabak sikhaunga ki tu hamesha yaad rakhega.


Itna kahkar Aanand ji ne Abhishek ke upar apne thappado ki barsat kar di. Use tab tak marte rahe jab tak wo thak nahi gaye. Jab thak gaye to wo wahi jameen par baithkar rone lage. Abhishek ne Apne papa ko dekhte huwe kaha.


Abhishek- maine kuchh nahi kiya papa. Wo dono Sarita aur Manisha ke baare me gandi gandi bate kar rahe the. Isliye maine unhe mara. Kya maine galat kiya.

Aanand ji- haa tumne galat kiya. Agar wo kuchh bol rahe the to maar pit karne ki kya jaroorat thi. Unhe samjha bhi to sakte the. Tumne hame kahi munh dikhane layak nahi chhoda. Har jagah se tumhari shikayate milti rahi hain. Kabhi bhi tumne hamare bare me socha hai. Tumhare jaisa beta hone se Achha hai ki mera koi beta hi nahi hota.

Kab tak apne baap ki chhati par baitha use takleef deta rahega. Agar tujhme jara bhi sharam aur ham logo ke liye ijjat baki hai tere dil me to chala ja yaha se aur fir kabhi apni shakal bhi mat dikhana. Main bhi samajh loonga ki mera koi beta tha hi nahi.


Aanand ji ki baat sunkar raani aur Sarita ne unhe samjhate huwe kaha.


Sarita- ye kya kah rahe hain aap papa. Mana ki Bhaiya ne galat kiya hai, lekin Iske liye Aap unhe itni badi Saza mat dijiye. Hamare eklaute bhai hain ye.

Raani ji- Haan Ji. Apne Iklaute bete ko Aise koi Ghar se nikal jane ke liye kahta hai kya.


Abhishek na jab Sarita ke munh se ye suna ki wo bhi use galat samajh rahi hai to use bahut takleef hui ki uski bahan bhi usko galat samajh rahi hai. usne Sarita se kaha.


Abhishek- Tumne mujhko galat kaha sarita. Maine kya galat kiya. Wo tumhare aur Manisha ke baar me gandi gandi bate kar raha tha. Isliye maine mara. To kya maine galat ho gaya.

Sarita- Haan Bhaiya. Apne galat kiya hai. Mana ki wo hamare bare me galat bol rahe the, lekin Maar pit iska hal nahi hai. Ham unke ghar unke mammy papa se shikayat karte. Wo unhe marte. Aap kaun hote hain unhe marne wale. Wo bhi itni buri tarah se mara aapne unhe. Agar un donon ko kuchh ho gaya to aapko pata hai ki kitni badi musibat aa sakti hai ham sab par. Har samasya ka samadhan ladai jhagda hi nahi hota. Kuchh bate pyaar se bhi samjhai jati hain. Kitno ko marenge aap bhaiya. Aaj un dono ne kaha. Aap ne unhe mara. Kal koi aur kahega. To aap unhe maroge. Parso sara mohalla kahega to Kis kis se ladenge aap.

Abhishek- Main Sab ko maar dalunga jo tum dono ke bare me bura bolega. Kisi ko nahi chhodunga.

Aanand- Are nalayak Abhi bhi tu yahi khada hai. Kya mujhe maar kar hi tujhe chain milega. Maine kitne Armaan sajaye the ki mera beta bada hokar mera naam roshan karega. Mere budhape ke sahara banega, lekin tumne Achha naam roshan kiya hai mera. Are begairat. Agar tujhme jara bhi sharam bachi hai to nikal ja mere ghar se. aur dobara kabhi apni shakal mat dikhana.


Ye baat lagbhag har baap apne bachho se bol deta hai jab wo bahut gusse mein hota hai. Ek najariye se dekha jaye to abhishek ne yahan par kuchh galat nahin kiya tha, kyonki is baat baat uski bahanon ki thi, lekin wo iske pahle itni baar ladaai jhagda kar chuka tha ki uska ye jhagda jo usne apni bahano ke liye kiya tha wo bhi galat hi najar aane laga tha uske papa ko jo abhi bahut gusse mein the. Rahi sahi kasar Sarita ne ye bolkar poori kar di ki abhishek ne galat kiya hai. Bachpan se hi chhoti- chhoti baton ko dil se lagaane wale abhishek ne Sarita ki is baat ko bahut jyada dil pe le liya. Abhishek ne Sarita ko dekhte huwe kaha.


Abhishek- Sarita mujhe papa ki baat sunkar itna bura nahi laga jitna tumhari baato ka.


Itna kahkar Abhishek ghar ke andar chala gaya aur apna saman ek bag me rakhne laga. Raani ji Sarita aur Manisha sabhi uske pichhe gaye aur use rokte rahe. Lekin wo nahi mana. Bas yahi kahta raha ki Use Sarita ki baton ne dukhi kiya. Use Sarita se aisi ummeed nahin thi. Wo apna bag lekar kamre se bahar aaya aur jane laga to Raani, Sarita aur Manisha use rokne ki koshish karne lage to Aanand ji ne kaha.


Aanand ji- Jane do isko. Badi garmi chadhi hain iske khoon me na. Jab duniya ki thokre khayega tab akal aayegi. Jab jindagi ki hakikat ka samna hoga tab aante dal ka bhav pata chalega. ChAr din baad jab khoon ka ubaal kam hoga to apni galtiyan najar aayegi ise. Tab pata chalega ki duniya apne hisab se nahin chalti. Hame duniya ke hisab se chalna padta hai.


Aanand ji ki baat sunkar Abhishek Sabhi se apne ko chhudakar ghar se bahar nikal gaya.


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Behtareen update,
To kya Abhishek hamesha ke liye chala gaya, aur goli wale kand me milega ya isi tarah kai baar gayab ho chuka hai.
धन्यवाद आपका महोदय,
आप का प्रश्न सही है। लेकिन अभी जवाब दे देने पर कहानी का सस्पेन्स खत्म हो जाएगा। इसलिए आगे की कहानी पढ़ते रहिए पता चल जाएगा।

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adhyay 3...

papa jee aur mumma jee soch rahe hain kee beta hamara aisa kaam karega,, jag mein hamara wo naam karega magar yeh toh koi na jaane manzil hain unki doozi yehan... ab padhne likhne mein man nahin lagta hain toh tution lagwaya lekin master jee bhi bhaag liye... ab itna honahar student hain kee saare subject mila ke bhi passing marks nahin aate hain... chitrakari aur hindi ko chhor ke... kyun bhai in do cheejo se itna pyar kyun bhala... baakio se kya koi udhar liya tha jo bachte phir rahe ho...
ये केवल रानी और आनंद की ही सोच नहीं है ये लगभग हर उस मा बाप की सोच है जिनके घर का बेटा वयस्क हो रहा होता है। लेकिन हर मां बाप की इच्छा पूरी नहीं होती। कुछ अभिषेक जैसे बेटे भी होते हैं जिन्हें अपनों का दुःख दर्द नहीं दिखाई देता है।। पढ़ाई में पहले से ही कमजोर है। लड़ाई झगड़े अलग से करता है।।
khair uski samashya wahee jaane... samay ke saath dhethai badhti gayee aur chhoti nadaniya ab bari pareshani ban gayee... toh auto mein passenger na milne ka frustration abhishek babu pe nikal diye.. jam ke pela,,, ab itne bara ho gaya hain,,, tab bhi maar kha ke rota hai,,, abee mard ko dard nahin hota yeh bhool gaya...

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waise sarita se bahut pyar hain abhi khana khila rahi hain baad mein goli khilayegi...
वो तो है। समय के साथ उसमें सुधार होने चाहिए था लेकिन हुआ इसके बिल्कुल विपरीत। इसी कारण पूरा परिवार परेशान रहा है और आगे चलकर उनके जीवन मे और भी ज्यादा परेशानी आने वाली है।

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