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Romance Tumhaare Liye- Ek Prem Kahaani (Completed)

Naina

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ऐसा कुछ नहीं है।
अब निश्चल पर उनका कॉफी राइट थोड़ी ही है।।
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Fiyuuu... chalo meri jaan bachi :happy:
Haan..haan ..bilkul nischal aapke dwara create kiya gaya kirdaar hai... :laugh:
 

Jaguaar

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अब क्या ही बोलें हम इनके बारे में।
आप लोग खुद इनका घमासान कहानी में पढ़ लीजिएगा।।
Iska matlab bandh kamre mein ilu ilu hogaaa:akshay:
 

Mahi Maurya

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:congrats: For starting a new story thread. I hope this story will be completely different from the stories you have written before. I also hope that after writing so many stories, now your writing skills will improve even more. Well the story has started. Let's see what kind of story are you writing. Aakhir me ek baat aur kahuga ki time ki bahut zyada kami hai mere paas is liye agar aapke har update par apni pratikriya na de paau to mind mat karna,,,,:hug:

Best of luck,,,,:good:
धन्यवाद आपका महोदय।।
हम पूरी कोशिश करेंगे।
आपको जब समय मिले तब कहानी पढ़िए।
व्यक्तिगत जीवन ज्यादा जरूरी है।।

प्रतीक्षा रहेगी आपकी।
साथ बने रहिए।।
 

Mahi Maurya

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सुंदर अति सुंदर
शायद ऐसा हो कि अभिषेक एक चित्रकार व कवि बन जाए
और वही उसकी पहचान बन जाए और कमाई का साधन बन जाए
धन्यवाद आपका महोदय।।

अब ये तो अभिषेक के ऊपर है कि वो क्या बनना चाहता है। बाकी आने वाले समय मे पता चल जाएगा।

साथ बने रहिए।।
 
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dhparikh

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UPDATE- 03


Apne kamre mein pahunchkar Raani ji bister par baith gai aur kuchh sochne lagi. Aanand ji abhi tak soye nahin the. Jab unhone apni dharmapatni ko soch mein dooba huwa dekha to unhone Unse poochha.


Aanand ji- Kya baat hai bhagyawaan. Kis soch mein doobi hui ho.

Raani ji- main abhishek ke bartav ko lekar thodi pareshan hoon. Uski padhaai ko lekar chintit hoon.

Aanand ji- Yahi chinta to mujhe bhi khaye ja rahi hai. Pata nahin aage chalkar kya hone wala hai. Kismat mein kya likha hai, main nahin chahta ki abhishek bhi meri tarah muflasi mein apna jeevan gujare. Main chahta hoon ki wo padh likhkar ek kamyaab insan bane.

Raani Ji- Main bhi to yahi chahti hoon ki use jeevan mein koi dukh dard na ho. Wo achhe se padhaai kare aur kaamyaab ho, lekin wo padhaai mein bahut kamjor hai. Main soch rahi hoon ki kyon na uske liye koi tution laga diya jaye. Jisase uski padhai mein sudhar ho sake.

Aanand ji- kah to tum thik hi rahi ho bhagawaan, main kal hi kisi achhe teacher ko dekhta hoon. Ho sakta hai tution se hi uski padhaai sudhar jaye.


Iske baad donon pati patni so gaye. Subah sabko school bhejne ke baad Raani ji ne Aanand ji ke liye bhi tifinn pack kiya. aanand ji bhi apna nashta lekar auto chalane chale gaye.


Isi tarah do din bit gaye. In do dino mein Aanand ji ne apne parichit se tution teacher ke bare mein baat ki thi to unhone ek bahut hi kabil teacher ki vyavastha kar di abhishek ko padhane ke liye.


Tution teacher Roj sham ko aakar ek ghante tak abhishek ko padhane laga. Teacher kyonki bahut kabil tha. Wah abhishek ko har tarah se nipun banane mein jut gaya.


Isi tarah samay gujarta raha, Abhishek ka padhai me bilkul man nahi lagta tha, to teacher ne bhi ek do mahine mein apne hath khade kar diye. Ab to abhishek ki maar-pit aur Shararat ke karan uske naam par shaikayte bhi badhne lagi. Jiske karan kabhi kabhi Aanand ji ki maar bhi padti thi Abhishek ko, maar khane ke kuchh din tak to wo thik se padhta, aur ladai Jhagda nahi karta tha, lekin kuchh din baad phir se uska wahi ravaiya ho jata.


Aanand ji aur raani ji bahut pareshan ho gaye the abhishek ke bartav se, wahi Sarita padhaai me hamesha aowwal aati. Jisase uski Sarahna bhi hoti thi. Manisha bhi padhai me thik thak hi thi. Ek din raat me bachho ke sone ke baad Aanand ji Aur raani ji baithkar baat kar rahe the.


Aanand- Abhishek ka kya hoga bhagyawaan. Roj kisi na kisi ki shikayat aati rahti hai. Wo bahut bigad gaya hai. Mujhe to uska bhavishyaa andhere me dikhayi de raha hai. Sarita ko dekho, Kitni samajhdar hai aur padhai me bhi kitni hoshiyaar hai. Manisha ki bhi koi chinta nahi hai mujhe. Wo bhi padhai me achhi hai , Lekin abhishek ko lekar mujhe din raat chinta lagi rahti hain.

Raani ji- Chinta to mujhe bhi uski lagi rahti hai, lekin Aap Itni chinta mat kiya kariye ji. Gujarte samay ke sath wo sudhar jayega. Abhi bachpna hai usmein. Abhi samajhdari ki kami hai usme. Thoda samay dijiye use. Dhire dhire sab thik ho jayega.

Aanand Ji- Bhagvan kare Sab thik ho jaye. Mujhe to abhishek ki chinta din rat khaye ja rahi hai. Agar Thik se padhai likhai nahi karega to meri tarah hi din raat khatega. Ham to apni jindagi jaise taise gujar rahe hain. Lekin main to chahta hoon ki hamare bachhe achhi jindagi jiye. Lakin Abhishek ko to jaise kuchh fikar hi nahi hai. Har samay ladai jhagda karta rahta hai.

Rani Ji- Aap chinta na kare. Main usase baat karti hoon. Wo meri baat jaroor sunega. Aap dekhna jald hi wo ladai jhagda chhodkar jimmedar ladka ban jayega. Chaliye ab so jaiye raat bahut ho gayi hai.


Uske baad Aanand Jj aur Rani Ji so jate hain. Subah Uthkar raani Ji ne Sabhi bachho ko taiyar kar school bhej diya aur khana banakar aanand ji ko bhi de diya. aur ghar ka aur kaam karne lagi. Jab Abhishek school se ghar aaya to Raani Jj ne use fir se samjhate huwe kaha.


Raani ji- Abhishek tu kab sudharege. Har samay ladai jhagda karta rahta hai. Har koi teri shikayat karta hai. Tu padhai likhai par dhyan de beta. Kyon apne bhavishya ke sath khel raha hai.

Abhishek- Thik hai maa main Is baat ka dhyan rakhunga ki aage se aisa kuchh na ho. Aur main padhai bhi man lagakar karunga. Ab main sone jaun.


Rani ne abhishek ko sone ke liye bhej diya. Sarita aur Manisha bhi so gayi, Abhishek ki baat sun-ne ke baad Raani ji ne jaan liya ki Abhishek sudharne wala nahi hai wo bas uski baat ko tarkakar unke pas se jana chahta tha isliye usne haan kar li. Ab unka bhi pareshan hona banta tha.


Samay apni rafter se chalta raha aur dekhte hi dekhte Abhishek kisi tarah girate padhte passing mark lata gaya aur highschool me pahuch gaya. Sarita 8th class me aur Manisha class 5th me pahuch gayi. Sarita aur Manisha ab ghar ke kamo me Raani ji ka hath batane lagi aur bache huwe samay me apni padhai aur uske baad jo samay bachta usme wo dono khelne jaya karti thi.


Lekin abhishek ke bartav mein abhi tak koi sudhar nahi aaya tha. Ab to uski maar pith bhi badh gayi thi, lekin Abhishek ne kabhi itni buri tarah se kisi ko nahi maara tha. Jisase baat had se jyada badh jaye. Bas 2-4 jhapad ya mukke marta tha.


Fir bhi shikayate to aani hi thi. Aur inhi shikayato ke karan Aanand ji Abhishek ki pitai bhi kar dete the. Lekin abhishek thahra ekdam dheeth aur nirbuddhi. wo na to RaAni ji ki pyaar ki bhasha samajhta tha Aur na hi Aanand ji ki maar ki bhasha. Aur padhaai se to uska nata jaise toot hi gaya tha. Isi ke chalte wo highschool ki board ki pariksha me fail ho gaya.


Usko kewal ek Vishay me dictention mila tha 90 Number wo bhi drawing me. Aur hindi me use 45 Number mile the. Baki ke sabhi Vishayo mein milakar bhi wo 33 Number nahi la paya tha. Yah dekhkar Aanand ji ka gusse ka para high ho gaya aur unhone Abhishek ko ji bhar kar kutaa. Raani ji, Sarita aur Manisha Abhishek ko bachane ke liye bhi aage aaye. Par Aanand jj ne kisi ki bhi nahi suni aur jii bhar kar uski pitaai kar di. Jisake karan poori raat abhishek rota raha.


Raani ji ne raat me khane ke liye use bulaya, lekin usne khana khane se mana kar diya, jiske karan Aanand ji ka gussa aur bhi badh gaya aur wo Abhishek ko marne ke liye uthe. Lekin Raani ji ne unhe shant kara kar khana khane ke liye de diya aur khud khana lekar Abhishek ke kamre me chali gayi, lekin abhishek khana khane ke liye taiyaar nahi hua. Thak haar kar wo wapas bahar chali aai. Fir Sarita na khana khaya aur ek thali khana lekar Abhishek ke paas gayi aur boli.


Sarita- bhaiya khana kyon nahi kha rahe hain aap. Chaliye jaldi se khana khaiye.

Abhishek- Mujhe nahi khana. Tu ja yahaa se.

Sarita- Aap khane se kyon gussa hain. Isne to aapko kuchh nahi kaha. Jo bhi kaha hai papa ne kaha hai to papa ka gussa khane par nikalna achhi baat thodi na hai.

Abhishek- Maine kaha na. mujhe nahi khana. Tujhe ek baar me samajh me nahi aata hai kya.


Abhishek ne ye baat thoda tez aawaz me kahi thi. Jisase Sarita Rone jaisi ho gayi aur uski aankho se do bund aanshu uski aankho se bahar nikal gaye. Abhishek ghar me sabse jyada apni dono bahano ko pyaar karta tha. Unki aankho me aanshu nahi dekh sakta tha, isliye jab Sarita ki aankho me aanshu aaye to use apni bhool ka ehsas huwa ki usne bewajah hi Sarita ko dat diya, isliye usne Sarita ko apne paas bithaya aur uske aanshu pochhte huwe bola.


Abhishek- Are meri lado. Dekho rona nahi. Chalo main khana khata hoon. Apne hantho se khilao mujhe.


Abhishek ki baat sunkar Sarita bahut khush hui aur apne hantho se Sarita Abhishek ko khana khilane lagi. Kamre ke bahar se Raani ji aur Aanand ji ye nazara dekh rahe the. Unhe Abhishek par bhale hi gussa aa raha tha, lekin dono bhai bahano ka pyaar dekhkar dono ko bahut Khushi ho rahi thi. Wo dono chupchap bahar chale gaye aur Aanand ne Rani se kaha.


Aanand ji- Dekha tumne bhagyawan. Kitna pyaar hai dono bhai bahano mein. Sarita ke ek aanshu ne uska sara gussa aur narazgi khatam kar diye. Bhagwan in dono ka pyaar hamesha banaye rakhe.


Aanand ji ne ye duwa bhagwan se maang to li thi, lekin jaroori nahi hai ki ham jo bhi bhagwan se mangte hain wo duwa bhagwan hamesha poori hi kare, aisa hi abhishek aur Gharwalo ke sath bhi hone wala tha. Jiska unhe door door tak anumaan nahi tha. Khair. Sarita ne Abhishek ko khana khila diya tha aur Abhishek ke hanth dhulakar boli.


Sarita- Aaap aisa kyon karte hain bhaiya. Aap ko pata hai papa kitni mehnat karte hain taki ham sab ache se padhe. Lekin aap hamesha pahdai ke alawa wo sab kuchh karte hain jo papa ko achha nahi lagta. Isiliye papa ne aapko mara. Isme papa ki koi galti nahi hai bhaiya. Isme aapko galti hai. Fir bhi aap sabse naraz ho gaye. Mujhko bhi data diya. aapko papa se maffi mangni chahiye.

Abhishek- Achha meri maa. Mujhse galti ho gayi. Mujhe maaf kar de. Main papa se subah mafi mang lunga. Ab to khush ho jaa. Aur mujhe sone de.

Sarita- Bas yahi kariye aap. Ghoomiye, ladhiye- jhagadiye, naraz hoiye aur khana khakar so jaiye. Isle alava padhai bhi hoti hai jo aapki dictionary me nahi hai. Isiliye aapko maar padti hai. Agli baat agar maar padi to main nahi aaungi bachane aapko dekh lena.

Abhishek- haa haa kah to aise rahi hai jaise tu hi mujhe bachati hai har baar. Ab jaa yaha se.


Sarita Abhishek ko jeebh dikhate huwe thali lekar bahar chali gayi aur Abhishek bister par late kar gahri neend me so gaya. Subah bhor me uthkar sabse pahle wo fresh huwa aur fir apne papa ke paas chalga gaya aur unke paas baith kar bola.


Abhishek- papa. Mujhhe maaf kar do. Maine jo kal raat me aap sab ke sath vyavhar kiya uske liye.

Aanand ji- {Abhishek ke sir par pyaar se hath firate huwe} beta ham tumhare koi dusman nahi hain. Agar ham tumhe maarte hain ya data-te hain to tumhare bhale ke liye hi to karte hain. Agar tum thik se padhai karo. Main ye nahi kahta ki tum dictention le aakar dikhao. Main to bas itna chahta hoon ki tum bas paas ho jao. Aakhir padh likh jaoge to kahi kaam handha pakad loge. Tumhari zindagi ache se bitegi. Nahi to beta. Mujhe dekho din bhar khat-ta rahta hoon tab jakar do vakt ki roti ka juwad hota hai. Main nahi chahta beta ki tumhare sath bhi aisa ho. Isliye main tumko data-ta rahta hoon. Padaai karne ke liye kahta hoon.

Abhishek- thik hai papa main poori koshish karunga ki is baar paas ho kar dikhaunga.

Aanand ji- mujhko tumse yahi ummeed hai mere bete. Koshish karna ki tum meri ummeedon par khare utro.


Fir Aanand ji ne apna khana pack karwaya aur Auto lekar apne kaam par chale gaye.



Iske Aage ki Kahaani Agle Bhag mein..
Nice update...
 
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