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Apki is story ne without incest kaafi lokpriyata hasil ki h..bhot umda story presentation.. awesome writing skill..LAST UPDATE
Kuchh der baad Sab log khana khane ke liye baith gaye. Manisha kisi kaam se kamre mein ja rahi thi to Raghav ne uska hath pakadkar apne kamre mein kheech liya aur darwaza band kar liya, Achanak hui is ghatna se Manisha hadbada gayi. Raghav ne uski taraf dekhte huwe kaha.
Raghav- Ye sab kya karke aayi ho tum bahar??
Manisha- Maine kya kiya??
Raghav- dekho Manisha Abhi main Mazak karne ke mood mein bilkul nahi hoon.
Manisha- Waha to tumhari aawaz hi nahi nikal rahi thi, yahan par dekho kaise tote ki tarah bol rahe ho.
Raghav- Dekho topic mat ghumao.. pahle jo main puchh raha hoon wo batao. Ye sab karne ki kya jaroorat thi??
Manisha- Pahle ye batao ki medona tum par itni meharbaan kyon hain?? aisa kaun sa jadu kar diya hai tumne unpar ki to tumhara naam lete nahi thak rahi hain.
Raghav- Wo sab baad mein bataunga. Pahle tum ye batyao ki ye sab kyon kiya tumne??
Manisha- Naa. Jab tak tum mujhe nahi bataoge. Tab tak main bhi tumhe nahi bataungi.
Raghav- Tum itni jiddi kyon ho Manisha??
Manisha- Tumhari hone wali biwi jo hoon.
Raghav- Matlab kuchh bhi.
Manisha- Kuchh bhi ka kya matlab hai. mein tumhari biwi nahi hoon kya.
Raghav- Badi jaldi hai tumhe meri biwi ban-ne ki. Lekin abhi usme samay hai. Pahle Nishchal ka band to bajne do. Fir meri baari aayegi.
Manisha- Are yaar batao na.
Manisha ki baat sunkar Raghav use us samay ki baat batata hai jab buwa ji ke dil mein Raghav ke liye pyaar ki shuruaat hui thi.
7 MAHINE PAHLE.
(Kahani Ragahav ki jubani)
7 mahine pahle jab buwa dadi ji yaha par aayi thi us samay main bhi ghar mein hi tha do din baad wo kisi kaam se upar kamre mein ja rahi thi to Mummy ji ne unhe kaha.
Mummy ji- aap upar kyon ja rahi hain Buwa ji. Koi kaam ho to bata dijiye Raghav kar dega wo kaam.
Buwa Ji- Dekho bahuriya. Tum us naaspite ko bhale hi apna beta manti ho, lekin hai to wo kisi ka ganda khoon hi na. isliye mere samne us naaspite ka naam mat liya karo. Haan nahi to batao jara.
Mummy ji- Ye aap hamesha Raghav ko tana kyon deti rahti hain Buwa ji. Kitna Achha hai Raghav. Hamesha aapka samman karta hai. Aapki itni jali kati sun-ne ke baad bhi Raghav ne kabhi palatkar aapko jawab tak nahi diya aur aap hain ki hamesha Raghav ko sunati rahti hain.
Buwa Ji- Bahuriya. Ab tum mujhe sikhaogi ki mujhe kya karna hai. Tumhe apni mamta lutani hai to lutao us naaspite par. Lekin mujhse ye ummeed mat karna kabhi. Main bhi kahan Tumse uske bare mein baat karne lag gayi. us naaspite ke chakkar mein to main apna kaam hi bhool gayi. haan nahi to batao jara.
Itna kahkar Buwa dadi ji sidhiyo se upar jane lagi. Wo upar phuch hi chuki thi, do step baki tha chadhne ke liye ki achanak se bhuwa dadi ka pair step se fisal gaya aur buwa dadi ji sidhiyo par gir gayi aur ludhakti hui niche aa gayi.
Buwa dadi ji ke girne ki aawaz mujhe bhi sunayi padi. main apne kamre mein hi tha. main unki aawaz dunkar apne kamre se bahar aane laga to mujhe mummy ji ki aawaz sunayi padi.
Mummy ji- Raghav beta. Jaldi se bahar aa. Buwa ji Sidhiyo se gir padi hain. bahut chot lagi hai unhe.
Mummy ji ki aawaz sunkar main turant waha par aa gaya. Maine dekha ki buwa dadi ji niche jameen par padi karah rahi hain. Unke pair ke ghutne aur kohaniya chhil gayi thi. usme se khoon nikal raha tha. unki kamar aur nichhle hisse mein andruni chotein bhi aayi thi. mujhe dekhkar mummy ne kaha.
Mummy- Ab khada khada kya dekh raha hai tu. Jaldi se buwa ji ko lekar hospital chal.
(Us samay papa ji kisi kaam se Kanpur se bahar gaye the. Armesh bhi apne business ke silsile mein merut gaya huwa tha.)
Mummy ki aawaz sunkar maine kaha.
Main-Haan mummy main karta hoon kuchh.
Jab main buwa dadi ji ko uthane ke liye aage badha to buwa ji ne dard mein karahte huwe mujhe jhidakte huwe kaha.
Buwa ji- Bahuriya. Is naaspite se kah do ki mujhe hath na lagaye. Kisi aur ko bula do jo mujhe hospital pahucha de. Iske chhune se to main waise hi mar jaungi. Haan nahi to batao jara.
Mummy ji- Ye kya kah rahi hain aap buwa ji. Is samay ghar mein aur koi nahi hai. Armesh bhi bahar gaya hai aur iske papa bhi. Is samaya ap mere bachhe ke bare mein galat salat sochna chhodiye aur apne bare mein sochiye. Is samay aapka Hospital pahuchana jyada jaroori hai.
Mummy ke kahne ke baad bhi buwa dadi ji apni zid par adi hui thi. to maine unki baato ko najarandaz karte huwe age bahkar unhe utha liya. Buwa dadi ji mujhse chhutne ke liye chatpatane lagi aur boli.
Buwa ji- Chhod mujhe naspite. Mujhe hath lagakar apvitra mat kar. Niche utar mujhe naspite.
Main- Aap ko jo bhi kahna ho, jitni bhi galiye mujhe deni ho wo sab aap thik hone ke baad mujjhe de dijiyega, lekin abhi main aapki koi bhi baaat nahi sununga. Is samay aapko hospital le jana jyada jaroori hai. isliye abhi aapko hospital chalna hai.
Uske baad main buwa dadi ji ko uthakar bahar laya aur car mein baitha diya. sath mein mammy bhi thi. main Mummy ji ke sath buwa dadi ji ko hospital lekar gaya. Pure rashte buwa ji dard ki halat mein bhi mujhe ulta siddha sunati rahi. Lekin mujhe us samay unki baato se jyada unki chinta thi. maine hospital mein buwa ji ko admit kiya.
Mummy ji ne papa ji ko phone karke sari baat batayi. Papa ji ne jaldi aane ke liye bol diya. buwa ji ko admit karwane ke baad maine Armesh ko phone karke sari baat batayi. Usne aane ke liye bola to maine use bol diya ki wo apna kaam finish karne ke baad hi aaye. Main yaha par sab sambhal lunga.
Buwa ji tin din hospital mein Rahi. In tin dino mein main unki jali kati suntan raha aur unki sewa karta raha. Tin din baad buwa ji ko hospital se discharge karwakar ghar lekar aaya.
Tab tak papa bhi aa gaye. Ghar mein bhi main buwa ji ki khoob man lagakar sewa ki. Lekin is dauran buwa ji mein ek pariwartan aaya tha. wo mujhse baat to nahi karti thi, lekin ab wo mujhe jali kati bhi nahi sunati thi. maine unke khane se lekar kapde dhulne tak ki, Kyonki main nahi chahta tha ki mummy ko thodi bhi pareshani ho.
Kuchh hi dino mein buwa ji thik ho gayi to ek din mummy aur papa ne buwa ji se baat ki.
Papa- To ab kaisi tabiyat hai aapki buwa ji.
Buwa ji- Ab to main ekdam thik ho gayi hoon betwa.
Mummy ji- Buwa ji. Ham aapse juban nahi lada rahe hain aur na hi aapko nichha dikhane ki koshish kar rahe hain. ek baat kahna chahte hain aapse. Ham log mante hain ki Raghav hamara khoon nahi hai, lekin Abhi wo ham dono ka beta hai.
Ham dono ne apne Nishchal, Savi aur Raghav mein kabhi bhi koi bhed nahi kiya. Raghav ne bhi hamesha har rishte ko samjha hai aur Har rishte ko poori siddat se nibhaya hai. Tabhi to Aaj Savi ko Nishchal se jyada Raghav pyara hai. Hame bhi ye kahte huwe garv hota hai ki Raghav hamara beta hai.
Chalo ek baar aapki baat bhi man lete hain ki Raghav kisi aise maa baap ki aulad tha jisne use tyaag diya. ye bhi maan lete hain ki uski rago mein ganda khoon bah raha tha. lekin Kya aapne kabhi dekha ki usne kabhi bhi kisi se bhi chahe chhota ho ya bada. Ameer ho ya gareeb. Kisi se bhi galat bhasha mein baat ki ho. kabhi kisi ko nuksan pahuchaya ho to wo ganda khoon kaha se ho gaya.
Ham dono ne use pala hai. ham dono ne use parwarish di hai. sahi galat ke bare mein sikhaya hai. Jab aapko Nishchal aur Savita se koi rosh nahi hai to fir hamare bete Raghav se kis liye rosh hai. wo isliye ki Raghav ne meri kokh se janam nahi liya. Kisi ki kosh se janam lene se kisi ka khoon ganda ya saf nahi ho jata buwa ji. Balki uski parwarish ye tay karti hai ki us bachhe ka khoon ganda hai ya saaf.
Agar Aapki najar mein Raghav ka khoon ganda hai to fir Nishchal aur Savi ka khoon bhi to ganda hi huwa na, kyonki Raghav ki tarah maine hi un dono ki parwarish ki hai. aap hi bataiye buwa ji ki agar Raghav ka khoon ganda hota to aapki har baat ka wo jawab deta. Chupchap aapki jali kati bate nahi sunta rahta jo aapne use hamesha sunayi hai.
Agar mere Raghav ka khoon ganda hota to jis din se aap sidhiyo se giri hain tab se lekar ab tak mere Raghav ne aapki sewa karne mein koi kami nahi chhodi. Din raat aapki sewa mein laga raha, bawjood iske ki aapne use hamesha se napasand kiya hai. ye sab usne isliye kiya. Kyonk uski parwarish hamne ki hai. use aise sanskar diye hain. Ab aap hi bataiye ki Hamara Raghav kaha se galat lagta hai aapko.
Agar wo aapka saga Pota bhi hota tab bhi wo itna kuchh nahi karta aapke liye jitna hamare Raghav ne kiya hai aapke liye. Fir aap ye kaise kah sakti hai ki hamare bete ka khoon ganda hai. Aapko jo bhi kahna ho ham dono ko kah liya kijiye, lekin Raghav se kuchh mat kaha kijiye.
Aapko nahi pata ki Jab aap Raghav ko ganda khoon aur Naspita bolti hain to Hamein kitni takleef hoti hai. Ham apka bahut samman aur aadar karte hain Buwa ji, isliye hamesha khamosh rahte hain. Lekin ab aage se aap Hamare bete ko kuchh mat kahiyega.
Ye sab kahte kahte mummy ji ne apne hath jod liye aur rone lagi. Kamre ke bahar main khada mummy ji ki baat sunkar meri aankho se jhar jhar aanshu bahne lage. Mere janamdata ne bhale hi manhoos ya najayaz ya jo bhi karan raha ho mujhe tyagne ka, tyag diya tha,
Lekin mein us ghadi ko apne jeewan ki sabse khusnaseeb ghadi manta tha, jis samay mujhe mere janamdata ne tyaag diya, Kyonki Mujhe itne pyaar aur sneh karne wale maa baap jo mile. Is samay main duniya ka sabse khushnaseeb insan apne aapko maan raha tha. Kyonki mere mummy papa mujhse bepanah pyaar karte hai.
Mujhe itna pyaar aur sneh shayad apne janamdata maa baap se kabhi nahi milta. Main bahar diwaar ke Sahare take lagakar baith gaya aur aanshu bahata raha. Mummy bhi andar baithkar ro rahi thi. papa ji ne buwa ji se kaha.
Papa ji- Haan buwa ji. Raghav bahut achha ladka hai. Aap ek baar uske baare mein apna najariya badaliye. Ek baar use Savi aur Nishchal ki tarah dekhiye fir aapko pata chalega ki wo heera hai. Bahut naseeb wale maa baap ko aise honhar aur heera jaisa beta milta hai.
Buwa dadi ji bas Mummy papa ki baatein sun rahi thi. Itne din maine buwa dadi ji ki jo sewa ki thi. use dekhkar buwa dadi ji ko bhi mummy papa ki baato mein sachhai najar aa rahi thi. thodi der ki khamoshi ko todte huwe buwa dadi ji ne kaha.
Buwa Ji- Shayad tum dono sahi kah rahe ho. main hi Raghav ko nahi samajh paayi aur hamesha bhala bura use bolti rahi. Mujhe ab samajh mein aa raha hai ki sanskar aur pariwarish se hi insan achha aur kharab banta hai.
mujhe apni galti ka ehsas ho gaya hai bahuriya. Mujhe maaf kar do tum dono. Ab Raghav ke liye mere dil mein koi mail nahi hai. Tumne sahi kaha Mahendar. Raghav sach mein heera hai heera.
Aaj buwa ji ki ye baat sunkar mujhe aseem aanand ki prapti ho rahi thi. mujhe aisa lag raha tha ki mera man tript ho gaya hai. Main Andar jakar Buwa dadi ji. Papa ji aur mummy ji se lipatkar rona chahta tha lekin maine apne jajbato par kisi tarah kabu kiya aur apne kamre mein chala gaya.
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Us din ke baad se Buwa dadi ji ka man meri taraf se ekdam saaf ho gaya. Ab buwa dadi ji mujhe kabhi bhi bhala bura nahi kahti aur pyaar karti hain.
Raghav ki poori baat sun-ne ke baad Manisha ne kaha.
Manisha- Achha ye baat hai medona ke badlav ke pichhe. Achha huwa ki budhiya sidhiyo se ludhak gayi. nahi to wo hamesha tumhe bhala bura kahti rahti. Mujhe ye bilkul bhi achha nahi lagta tha.
Raghav- Aaisa nahi bolte Manisha. Wo badi hain hamse.
Manisha- Badi hain to kya huwa. Wo kuchh bhi karengi kya. Jo bhi huwa achha hi huwa. To tum isiliye mera phone nahi utha rahe the aur mujhse baat karne ki fursat nahi thi tumhare paas. Na hi kabhi tum mujhse milne aaye is bich.
Raghav- Haan wo buwa ji ki dekhbhal ke sath sath business ke kaam mein bhi bahut busy tha.
Manisha- Achha. To maine isi wajah se sabke samne bol diya. yahi tumhare ignorance ki saza hai. Manisha se panga lena tumhe hamesha mahnga padega Mr. Raghav.
Raghav- Achha ye baat hai. Mujhe bhi tumse apna purana hisab kitab chukana hai.
Itna kahkar Raghav ne apna chehra aage badhaya hi tha ki tabhi Sarita ki aawaz sunayi padi jo Manisha ko bula rahi thi.
Sarita- Manisha kaha ho tum. Sab tumhara khane par intezar kar rahe hain. jaldi aao.
Sarita ki aawaz sunkar Manisha jhat se waha se muskurati hui nikal gayi.
Sabhi log khana kha chuke the to ab jane ki taiyari kar rahe the. Kuchh hi der mein Sarita & Family waha se chali gayi.
Isi tarah din gujarne lage. Phone par Sarita aur Nishchal ki tatha Raghav aur Manisha ki baat chit hoti thi. kabhi kabhi Savita se bhi sarita aur Manisha ki baat ho jati thi.
2 Mahine baad.
Aaj Sarita ka ghar Rang birange phoolo se sajaya gaya tha. Kyonki Aaj Sarita ki shadi thi. Aaj Joshi pariwar mein do khushiya ek sath aayi thi. Aaj Hi Manisha ka UP Teacher ka Result ghoshit huwa tha aur Manisha paas ho gayi thi. ghar mein doguna Khushi ka mahaul tha.
Sarita ne shadi mein Apne purane collegue ko bhi invite kiya tha. Mohit aur Jawed to Nishchal ki taraf se aane wale the. Baki Kaushal, Vikas, Ranjana aur Janhavi Sairta ke yaha pahuche the,
Amit shadi mein nahi aaya tha. Kyonki uski wife pregnant thi. Manisha subah se bhagdaud kar rahi thi. Abhishek bhi mehmano ke swagat mein laga huwa tha. Kuchh hi der mein barat aa gayi.
Sarita aaj surkh lal jode mein bahut khoobsurat lag rahi thi. Nishchal chahkar bhi usase najarein nahi hata pa raha tha. Nishchal bhi sherwani mein bahut handsome lag raha tha. Dono aaj Shadi ke Pavitra bandhan mein bandhne ja rahe the. Vivah ki poori rasham sage sambandhiyo aur pariwar wali ki upasthithi mein sampan hui.
Vivah achhe se sampan hone ke baad vidayi ki bela aa gayi. Sarita sabhi ke gale milkar khoob royi. Sabhi ne Sarita aur Nishchal ko unke Achhe Vaivahik jeewan ki badhai aur shubkamnayein di.
Sarita vida hokar Nishchal ke ghar mein aa gayi thi. Sari Rashm khatam hone ke baad Rat mein wo Nishchal ke kamre mein baithi hui thi. poora karma rang birange khushbudar phoolo se sajaya gaya tha. Sarita kamre mein baithi Nishchal ka intezar kar rahi thi. Jab Nishchal kamre mein aaya to Sarita apnea ap mein hi simat gayi. Uski sanse tez ho gayi.
Nishchal Sarita ki bechaini ko Achhi tarah se samajh raha tha, Kyonki thodi bahut ghabrahat to use bhi ho rahi thi. Wah Chalta huwa Sarita ke paas aakar baith gaya. Dono kal se shadi ki Rasham aur aur Rashme nibhate nibhate thak gaye the. Baithne ke baad Nishchal ne kaha.
Nishchal- Tum thik ho??
Sarita- (hans kar) Aapko kya dikh raha hai.
Nishchal- wo maine isliye poocha ki main thak gaya hoon.
Sarita- Haal to mera bhi kuchh kuchh aisa hi hai.
Nishchal- Kya main tumhari god mein apna sir rakh sakta hoon.
Sarita- Kya ab bhi poochhna jaroori hai. ab main aapko patni hoon.
Nishchal- wo to hai. lekin fir bhi tum lady don bhi to ho.
Sarita Nishchal ki baat sunkar muskura di. Nishchal ne apna Sir Sarita ki god mein rakh diya. Pahle to Sarita ko thoda asahaz mahsoos huwa fir thodi der baad wo Nishchal ke balo mein ungaliya firane lagi..
Nishchal ne Sarita ka hath pakad liya aur uski aankho mein dekhte huwe uska hath chum liya. Sarita ne jhukkar uska matha chum liya. Nishchal ne Sarita se kaha.
Nishchal- Hmmmm. To kaisa lag raha hai tumhe Mrs. Sarita Nishchal Singh Rathod Bankar.
Nishchal ki baat sunkar Sarita muskurane lagi to Nishchal ne kaha.
Nishchal- Are Muskurane ke liye maine nahi kaha tha. maine jo pucha hai wo batao.
Sarita- Ye bhi koi puchhne wali baat hai. is Khushi ko to bas mahsoos kiya ja sakta hai.
Nishchal- Achhaa. Par meri to puchho hi mat. Main to bahut hi Jyada khush hoon.
Sarita- Achhaaa.
Sarita ne ye baat unghate huwe kahi to Nishchal turant uski god se uthkar baith gaya aur bola.
Nishchal- tumhe to neend aa rahi hai. Jao aur change kar lo. Mujhe bhi neend aa rahi hai.
Sarita- Hmmmmm. (apne man mein) main bahut khushnaseeb hoon ki mujhe aap jaisa achha pati mila hai. jise apni biwi ki parwah hai. jo mujhe achhi tarah se samajhta hai.
Sarita ne jakar apne kapde badal liya aur aakar Nishchal ke bagal mein let gayi. uski aankh pata nahi kab lag gai use pata hi nahi chala. Subah jab uski aankh khuli to usne apne aapko nishchal ki baho mein paya. Nishchal abhi bhi so raha tha.
Sarita ne uski taraf dekha aur uske chehre par muskan aa gayi. Sarita ne dhire se Nishchal ke mathe par kiss kiya aur jhat se uthkar bathroom ki taraf bhagi.
Sarita ki chudiyo ki khanak aur payal ki chham chham se Nishchal ki bhi neend khul gayi. par usne apni aankh nahi kholi aur Sarita ki harkat par muskurane laga.
Sarita aur Nishchal jab fresh hokar bahar nashte ki table par aaye aur sabhi ko pranam kiya. Nashta karne ke baad Savita ne unhe haneymoon ke liye Manali ki do tickets diye to Sarita ne kaha.
Sarita- Iski kya jaroorat hai di.
Savi- (chhedte huwe) Ab mujhe ye bhi batana padega kya??
Savita ki baat sunkar Sabhi muskurane lage. Jab Sarita ko iska ehsas huwa ki usne kya kaha hai to wo sharma gayi aur apne kamre mein bhag gayi.
Agle din Sarita aur Nishchal Manali jane ke liye apni apni packing kar rahe the to Nishchal ne use apni baho mein bharte huwe kaha.
Nishchal- To tum sath mein chalne ke liye ready ho.
Sarita- maine to apni Sari Zindagi aapke naam kar di hai. Aap jaha main waha. Isme puchhne ki kya baat hai. AApke sath ab umar bhar ka safar hai mera.
Nishchal- Tum yakin rakho. Tumhara ye sath Jiwan ke kisi bhi mod par tumhe akela nahi chhodega. Har kadam par tumhare sath khada rahungaa. Meri har dhadkan dhadkegi sirf Tumahre liye, Meri har khushi hogi Sirf tumhare liye, main jo bhi karunga sirf Tumare Liye.
Sarita- Mujhe apne aapse bhi jyada aap par yakin hai.
Nishchal ne Sarita ka hath pakadte huwe kaha.
Nishchal- Tumhara ye yakeen main tutne nahi doonga.
Itna kahkar Nishchal ne Sarita ka hath chum liya to Sarita ne sharma kar apni najarein jhuka li.
Uske baad Sarita aur Nishchal haneyvmoon par manali chale gaye.
Raghav aur Manisha ki baat cheet phone par jari thi. Haneymoon ne wapas aane ke baad sabhi apni apni zindagi mein vyast ho gaye.
3 Mahine baad
Aaj Nishchal, Sarita aur Manisha apne jeewan ka ek naya Adhyay shuru karne ja rahe the, kyonki Sarita aur Nishchal ko training ke liye letter aaya tha aur Manisha ko teacher ki joining ke liye.
Tino apne apne jeewan ki nayi shuruaat ke liye nikal chuke the.
Dosto aur Pathko.
Ye kahani yahi samapt hoti hai. ye kahani meri soch se jyada lambi ho gayi. Ye kahani aap sabhi pathko ko kaisi lagi ye jaroor bataiyega.
Is kahani ke baad main ek Suspence Thriller kahani shuru karungi. Jiska naam hai Begunaah Katil. Lekin ye kahaani kab shuru hogi iske bare mein mujhe khud nahi pata. Isliye jab ye kahani shuru hogi tab Is kahani par bhi aap sabhi ke bharpoor pyaar aur Sahyog ki Ummeed rahegi.
Jate Jate chand pantiyan meri taraf se aap sabhi pathko ke liye. Shayad aap sabhi ko ye pasand aaye.
Tumhi to meri jaan ho. suno naa.
Tumhi se to meri pahchan hai. suno na.
Tum jo nahi to kuchh bhi nahi Zindagi mein.
Tumhi to mere jeewan ka Abhiman ho. Suno na.
Tumhari berukhi se dard hota hai mujhe.
Hanso aise jo mere dard ka nidan ho. suno na.
Tumhare rahne se Mahakta hai ye ghar aangan.
Tumhi to bhagwan ka Anmol vardaan ho. suno na.
Tum jo aaye to Zindagi poolo si mahak uthi.
Tumhe dekhkar main Khushi se chahak uthi.
Suraj ki kirne neer se jaise karti hain athkheli
Tumhari baho mein aakar waise main bahak uthi.
Samapt/The End/ Khatam.
पूर्ण/समाप्त/खत्म
Hame is kahani se jodne ke liye thank you so much
Aage v aisi hi kahaniyan likhti rahiye or hame jodti rahiye
Thanks a lot
