Romance Tumhaare Liye- Ek Prem Kahaani (Completed)

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Mahi Maurya

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Shayad ladkiyon se maar khata hua entry lega yaa police ke dande khata hua yaa phir mandir ke bahar se chappal churata hua yaa phir nashe mein tull gande naale mein padha hua milega :lol1::lol1::lol1::lol1::lol::lol::lol::roflol::roflol::roflol:
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कितना सही अनुमान लगाया है आपन महोदय,
हम तो कुछ और सोच रहे थे, लेकिन आपने मेरा काम आसान कर दिया है। अब इसी में से एक टॉपिक लेकर उनका आगमन करवाते हैं।
पहला वाला आईडिया मुझे शानदार लगा है।।😃😁🤣
 

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:congrats: Mahi jii new story ke liye. Is story ki shuruaat hi mazedar hui hai ummid hai ki aage bhi ye aur naye rang lekar aaye. Ab rahi nishchal nam ke character ki to is character se kafi ummide hai kyu ki ye character nainu ji ki story ka bhi main character raha hai.
धन्यवाद आपका महोदय।
कोशिश पूरी रहेगी कि किसी को निराश न होना पड़े, जहां तक निश्चल की बात है तो उसका भी किरदार यहाँ पर धांसू ही है लेकिन वो पाठकों को तब पसंद आवेगा जब वो नैन महोदय की कहानी के निश्चल नामक किरदार को दिमाग से निकालकर फ्रेश निश्चल को ध्यान में रखकर कहानी पढ़ेंगे।।
 

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Shayad ladkiyon se maar khata hua entry lega yaa police ke dande khata hua yaa phir mandir ke bahar se chappal churata hua yaa phir nashe mein tull gande naale mein padha hua milega :lol1::lol1::lol1::lol1::lol::lol::lol::roflol::roflol::roflol:
ab to definitely ju ke Story characters to giyo :D taiyar rahna :D
 

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कितना सही अनुमान लगाया है आपन महोदय,
हम तो कुछ और सोच रहे थे, लेकिन आपने मेरा काम आसान कर दिया है। अब इसी में से एक टॉपिक लेकर उनका आगमन करवाते हैं।
पहला वाला आईडिया मुझे शानदार लगा है।।😃😁🤣
aur aapne bhi ek uljhan ko aasan kar di hai... chalo ab bina hichichaye bedharak har kirdaar ki aisi ki taisi deni hai..... :D
 

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कितना सही अनुमान लगाया है आपन महोदय,
हम तो कुछ और सोच रहे थे, लेकिन आपने मेरा काम आसान कर दिया है। अब इसी में से एक टॉपिक लेकर उनका आगमन करवाते हैं।
पहला वाला आईडिया मुझे शानदार लगा है।।😃😁🤣
Aree aap chahe toh charo le sakti hai. One by one
 

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UPDATE- 02


Subah sabse pahle Raani ji ki neend khuli, usne uthkar ghar ki saf safai shuri kar di. Thodi der baad aanand ji uthe. Aur unhone Abhishek, Sarita aur Manisha ko uthaya. Sabhi ne uthkar nahaya aur School jane ke liye taiyar hone lage. Raani ji ne sabhi ke liye tifin pack kiya aur Abhishek ko taiyaar hone me madad karne lagi. Sarita aur Manisha apne se taiyar hone lagi. Ye dekhkar aanand ne kaha.


Aanand ji- Is umar me bhi tum ise taiyar karwa rahi ho, jabki tumhe Sarita aur Manisha ko taiyaar karna chahiye. Tumhe nahi lagta ki tum apne bete ke chakkar me apni betiyon ke sath anyay kar rahi ho.

Raani ji- Are meri dono betiyan bahut samajhdar hain wo apna kham khud kar leti hain, lekin mera beta abhi nadan hai. Bina madad ke ye koi kaam thik se nahi kar paata hai isliye main iski madad kar rahi hoon.

Aanand Ji- Jab tun use khud se kuchh karne dogi tabhi to use kuchh aayega. Bachho se dular karna buri baat nahi hain Bhagyawan, lekin itna bhi dular nahi karna chahiye. Ki unki aadat bigad jaye.

Raani Ji- Aap subah subah fir se shuru ho gaye. Aapko to bas har samay mere bete ko kuchh bhi kahne ka mauka milna chahiye bas. Chalo ab jyada baat mat karo. Yaad hai ki nahi aapko ki hame Abhishek ke School bhi chalna hai principal se milne ke liye.

Aanand Ji- haan yaad hai mujhe aur mujhe pata hai ki principal ne kisliye bulaya hoga. Agar aaj iski koi complain mili to main iski tange tod dunga. Dekh lena tum.

Raani Ji- Thik hai pahle chalo to sahi baad me dekh lenge ki kya karna hai.


Uske baad Abhishek Apni dono bahano ke sath school chala gaya. Thodi der baad Raani ji aur Aanand ji bhi unke School chale gaye aur jakar principal Sir se mile.


Aanand Ji- Namaste Sir, main Abhishek ka papa Aanand. Abhishek ne bataya ki aapne hame bulaya hai.

Principal Sir- Achha to aap hain uske papa, dekhiye mr. Aanand. Ham aapke bachhe ko apne school me nahi padha payenge. Ham usko apne school se nikal rahe hain.

Aanand ji- Lekin baat kya hai sir ji. Usase koi galti hui hai kya.

Principal Sir- Galti nahi Anand ji. Gunaah huwa hai. Aapko pata hai kal ek mamooli bat par isne apni kaksha ke ek ladke ka sir phod diya. Ek to padhaii me bhi bahut kamjor hai. Teacher padhate hain to wo drawing banata rahta hai. Mujhe nahi lagta ki use padhane ka koi fayda hone wala hai. Aise bachhe ko main apane school me rakh kar aur bachho ke liye khatra nahi uthana chahta. Kya pata kal ko wo fir kisi aur ke sath aisa kare.

Aanand Ji- Lekin Sir ji Wo abhi bachh hai. Use itni samajh nahi hai Abhi. Aap Aakhiri baar use maaf kar dijie. Main use samjhaunga. Main aapko bharosha dilata hoon ki aapko dobara shikayak ka mauka nahi milega.

Principal Sir- Dekhie Anand ji. Aapka beta samjhane aur samajhne ki sari sima paar kar chuka hai. Mujhe nahi lagta ki use koi fark padne wala hai, fir bhi main aapko aakhiri mauka de raha hoon. Agar iske baad usne aisa kuchh kiya to main use apne school se nikal donga.

Aanand Ji- Ji bahut bahut dhanyawaad aapka sir. Main use samjhaunga. Aage se wo aisi shararat nahi karega.

Principal sir- Ji jaroor. Aisa ho jaye to bahut achha hai.


Uske baad Aanand Ji aur Raani Ji Principal Sir ke room se bahar aaye aur jakar apni auto me baith kar ghar aa gaye. Gahr aakar Aanand Joshi ne kaha.


Aanand Ji- Dekkh Liya Tumne Bhagyawan. Isiliye main tumhe hamesha samjhata rahta tha ki Use Achhe Sanskar do. Lekin tumne hamesha uska bachpana samajh kar najarandaz kar diya. dekho aaj kya kiya usne. Aaj kisi ek ka sir phoda hai usne. Kal kisi Aur ke sath aisa karega. Fir kya karenge ham.

Raani Ji- Mujhe kya pata tha ki wo aisa kuchh karega. Main to bas use dulaar karti thi. Sochti thi ki dhire dhire khud samajh jaega. Lekin mujhe nahi pata tha ki wo itna bigad jayega.

Aanand Ji- Aaj tum bich me mat aana. Aane do aaj use main Achhe se khabar leta hoon uski.


Itna kahkar Aanand Ji Auto lekar sawari ke liye chale jate hain. School ki chhutti hone ke baad Abhishek Apni dono bahano ke sath ghar aa gaya. Ghar aane ke baad Rani ne Abhishek, Sarita aur Manisha ko khana khilaya aur unhe sone ke liye bhej diya. Sham ko jab Abhishek So kar utha to Rani ne use apne paas baithaya aur pyaar se samjhaya.


Raani.Ji- Beta ye tumne kya kiya School ma. Yash ka Sir phod diya. ye bahut galat hai beta. Agar wo ulta tumhare sath bhi aisa karta to.

Abhishek- Lekin mummy usne meri drawing kharab kar di thi. Isliye maine use mara.

Rani- Lekin Itni Chhoti si baat ke liye tumhe use nahi Marna chahiye beta. Drawing to tum dobaara bana sakte ho, lekin jo tumne us ladke ka sir phoda hai. Isase to usko Dard huwa hoga. Agar use jyada chot lag jati to use hospital le jana padta. Jisase uske mummy papa bahut pareshan hote. Tumne uska sir phod diya hai. Wo school nahi aa payega. Jisase uski padhai ka bahut nuksan hoga. Ladai jhagda karna Achhi baat nahi hain. Agar koi tumhare sath aisa kare to tumhe achha lagega kya. Tumhare mummy papa agar pareshan honge to tumhe achha lagega kya.

Abhihsek- Nahi mujhe bilkul bhi achha nahi lagega.

Raani ji- to fir. Jaise tumko Achha nahi lagega. Waise hi tumne jis lagke ko mara hai usko bhi achha nahi lagega. Kya tum fir aisi saitani karogi. Kisi ko pareshan karogi. Ye galat baat hai. Koi tumhe kuchh kahe to tum koi jawab hi mat do. Kuchh din baad wo tumhe kuchh kahna hi band kar dega. Ek achhe bachhe bankar padhaai karo. Taaki teacher bhi tumse pyaar karein.

Abhishek- Nahi. Main ab kisi ko nahi marunga mummy. Sab ke sath ache se rahunga.

Raani Ji- Ye hui na ache bachho wali baat. Chalo ab jakar padhai karo. Tumhare principal sir kah rahe the ki tum padhai bilkul bhi nahi karte. Din bhar bas drawing hi karte rahte ho. Beta drawing karni achhi baat hai lekin iska ye matlab nahi hai ki tum padhaai karna hi band kar do. Agar padhai nahi karoge to tum fail ho jaoge. Agar tum fail ho jaoge to tumhare papa ko aur mujhe bilkul bhi achha nahin lagega. Agar tum fail ho gaye to papa tumhein marenge bhi.

Abhishek- Nahi mummy. Papa ko bolna ki wo mujhe na mare. Main khub man lagakar padhaai karunga. Aur ahhe number launga.

Raani- Thik hai beta Ager tumm Achhe se padhai karoge to papa tumhe nahi marenge. AB Jao padhai karo. Aur apni bahano ko bhi padhne ke liye bol do.


Raani ji ki baat sunkar abhishek apni kitab lekar padhane baith gaya aur sath me Sarita aur Manisha ko bhi apne sath padhne baitha liya. Lekin abhishek thahra moti buddhi ka ladka, use padhne me bilkul ruchi nahi rahti thi. 10 minute padhne ke baad usne apni penchil aur copy nikali aur drawing banane laga. Use drawing banate dekh Sarita ne kaha.


Sarita- bhaiya Aap padh kyon nahi rahe ho. Mummy ne padhne ke liye bola hai aur aap drawing bana rahe hain. Aise to aap fail ho jayenge.

Abhishek- Main kya karu Sarita. Mujhe padhna bilkul bhi acha nahi lagta. Padhai ke naam par mera sharir kampne lagta hai. Mujhe drawing karna bahut achha lagta hai.

Sarita- lekin bhaiya. Ye to galat hai. Mummy ko jhooth bolkar aap drawing kar rahe ho. Jabki teacher ne bataya hai ki mummy papa se jhooth nahi bolna chahiye.

Abhishek- Tu nahi samjhegi Sarita. Jo teacher ne bataya hai wo padhai ke liye nahi tha. Wo kisi doosre cheej ke liye bataya hoga.

Sarita- Haan bhaiya tum thik kah rahe ho. Achha aap drawing karo, lekin papa se bachkar karna drawing nahi to papa ne dekh liya to bahut maar padegi aapko.

Abhishek- main to papa se chhupakar hi drawing karta hoon, lekin tum papa ko mat bata dena iske bare me. Nahi to sach me papa mujhe marenge.


Uske baad Sarita aur Manisha apna homework karne lage aur abhishek tarah tarah ke drawing banane laga. Isi tarah ek hours tak tino apni kitab kapiyo me ghuse rahe. Padhai khatam ho jane ke baad tino ghar me hi khelne lage. Raat 8 baje tak Aanand ji Auto lekar ghar aa jate hain.


Raani ji unhe pine ke pine ke liye pani deti hai. Pani pine ke baad Aanand ji raani ji se puchhte hain.


Aanand ji- Abhishek kaha hai bhagyawaan. Dikhai nahi de raha hai.

Raani ji- wo tino bagal wale kamer me khel rahe hain. Ek baat aur kahni hai aapse. Abhishek ko mariyega mat. Main usko achhi tarah se samjha diya hai. Wo bol raha tha ki ab wo kisi ke sath maar-pit nahi karega. Is baar jane dijie use.

Aanand ji - Arei bhagyawan. Main uska dushman nahi hoon. Mujhe bhi apne bete ki fikar hai. Bas thoda sakhti karni padti hai ki kahi bacha hanth se na nikal jaye. Isliye main usase sakhti se pesh aata hoon. Ab agar tumne baat kar hi li hai to thik hai.


Uske baad sabhi milkar khana khate hain aur bachho ko sulakar Rani Ji kitchen samet kar sone ke liye apne kamre me chali jati hain..


Iske Aage ki Kahaani agle Bhag mein..
 

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कहानी का दूसरा भाग लिख दिए हैं मित्रों और पाठकों।।

पढ़िए, आनंद लीजिए और अपने महत्त्वपूर्ण विचार भी व्यक्त कीजिए।।
 
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