Sci-FI Treasure ~~ "The Invisible Hunt" {Completed}

[harshit1890]

3.5 Saal se kahani ki tayari kar raha tha, Pichla platform chhuta to kabhi likhne ke barre mein socha nahi par jab kahani ka plot bana aur corona ka asar dunia mein badha to zindagi ki bhag daudh se kuch rahat mili aur mene is kahani ko sabke bich lane ka faisla kiya. Ek aisa chetra tha jisme mene abhi tak koi kahani nahi likhi thi aur ye meri lekhan ki ek akhri script aur genre hai jise mein kosish karunga ki ache se likh sakun. Umeed karunga kuch purane sathi yahan milenge aur kuch naye judhenge.

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[Sandy307]

Baarish bahut tezz gir rahi thi, paton par pani ke shor ke sath vo dono andhere mein bahut tez bhag rahe the. Baarish aur andhere mein kisi tarah vo jungle ke bich mein tehniyun ko hatate hue bhag rahe the.

" dad, dad" jungle mein awaz gunjti par baairsh mein kahin dab jati.

" keep running son, keep running " piche se chillane ki awaz ayi to mei phir tezzi se bhagne laga. Sansein chadd rahi thi pani palkon par gir raha tha. Hum Dono kuch der se is kharab mausam mein bhagte hue kahin pahunchna cha rahe the. Bhagte bhagte mei achanak ek jagah aa ruka jahan baarish se pani jama ho chuka tha aur zor-zor se sansein lene laga.

" dad idhar, meri awaz ko follow karo " mei jungle ki jhadiyun ki taraf dekh raha tha, baarish ke shor mein jese awaz gum ho rahi ho yahi mehsus karke mei phir chillaya " dad mein idhar hun, meri awaz ko follow karo " par jab jhadiyun mein kisi ke ane ka ehsas nahi hua to mei khud us taraf tezi se bada aur jhadiyun ke pas pahunchte hi mei takra gaya aur hum dono zameen par aa gire.

" dad " mene apna sar jhatka aur khada hua, " dad, aap theek ho " aur apne dad ko uthaya.

" yes son.. i am " mei janta tha ki vo theek nahi hai, baarish mein itni der se bhigne ki vajah se unka sharir thanda padne laga hai aur agar jald hi kuch garmi unke sharir ko nahi mili to unka dil jada der shair ke girte tapman mein dhadak nahi payega. Mei dad ke kanpte hathon ko dekh kar is baat ko samajh raha tha.

Asman mein badal bahut tezi se garaz rahe the, tufaan apne charam par tha. " locator kharab ho gaya hai girne ki vajah se "

" sorry dad " ise jada kuch nahi bol paya.

" give me your map " mene dad ko map dia aur torch jala kar map ko dekhne mein madad karne laga aur phir usi map ke uppar magnet rakh kar vo hamari position dekhne lage.

" son, hum sahi jagah par hai bas use pehchanna hai "

" par is badhte tufan mein hume pehle kahin sar chupana hoga varna "

" i know, i know par you know about this mission, iska risk, hum itna pass akar use kho nahi sakte, samajh rahe ho ? "

" ji dad "

" good, mujhe bhaorsa hai ki vo yahin kahin hai hume bas use pehchanna hai " dad asman mein dekhne laga, baarish ki bundon ke alawa bich bich mein bizli ki chamak se unkaa chehra chamak raha tha.

" dad, dad " mere awaz sunte hi vo mere pas aye to mene unhe ishare se samne kuch dikhane ki kosish ki. Unhone torch jala kar dekhne ki kosish bhi ki par andhere mein girti baarish ke alawa kuch nahi dikha.

" kuch samajh nahi aa raha "

" wait dad, bizli kadakne ka wait karo " mera yakeen tha ki jo mene abhi dekha vo sahi tha aur tabhi bizli kadki aur roshni ke hote hi pehle mere chehre par muskan ayi aur phir dad ke chehre par.

" ye wahi hai, ye wahi hai.. " light padhte hi jungle ke bich chamak dekh dono ke chehre khil uthe. " humne kar dikhaya, ye aaj tak ke insani ithias mein sabse badi discovery hogi, well done son " khushi zahir karte hue dad meri pith thap-thapane lage " jaldi chalo ab mujhse intezar nahi ho raha " ankhon mein ek chamak thi aur phir hum dono us taraf badh chale.

Interesting update bro
Father and son looking for treasure or something else let's see they going to find something or not
Hmmm if I'm not wrong then this boy is some how related to that men who masturbating in first update
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[Sandy307]

" kya ye insano ka banaya hua hai ? " dur se jada samjhna mushkil tha par itna dikh raha tha ki kafi saal purana hai aur us samay is tarah ka nirman kaise hua hoga.

" yes son, indeed, jese bade bade pyramids banaye gaye vese ise bhi banaya gaya hoga " unki sansein ukhdi hui thi.

" par kaun si sadi mein? " mei dekh paa raha tha ki pathar se banai gayi boundaries aur uske bich mein ek lamba sidha dancha jiski unchai is andhere mein naap pana mushkil tha, ek aisi cheez vo bhi is jagah par hona ek aisi sabhyata ko ujagar karta hai jiska shayad ab koi astitiv bacha na ho.

" ye pathar hazron saal purana hai " kurdete hue unhone pathar ki mithi ko hath par rakha jo baarish ke pani se beh gaya.

" dad, idhar " mene unki baat ansuni kar sar dhakne ki chatt khoj li. Mujhe ek pathar se bana shade dikh gaya tha, jiske niche khade hone se hum baarish se kuch der bach sakte the. " baarish ka pani ghutne tak hai par sar sukhana hoga apki body ka tampan girta jaa raha hai " mene dad se kaha.

" han han theek hai " humne apna rain coat utar diya, phir bag se sukha kapda nikal kar unhe de dia aur dawai ka daba nikal kar injection refil karne laga.

" baarish ek vajah hai iske pathar ki mithi kamjor hone ki "

" shoulder " mene unke kandhe par injection lagaya aur khud ko laga kar bag mein saman dal kar pack kar dia.

" hume ye mithi le jani hai, i need to study this " dad torch ki roshni se diwar par badhbadate hue kuch padne ki kosish karne laga.

" dad, dad "

" han.. " vo mano kisi chiz mein kho gaye the.

" kya padh rahe ho ? "

" nothing, nothing "

" aap kuch bata rahe the us time? "

" mujhe lagta hai ki yahan par koi sheher raha hoga aur yahan ke mausam ki wajah se hi unki prajati ka ant hua hoga "

" par apne to kaha tha ki "

" i know, i know, bahut kuch hai abhi jise hum anjan hai aur jo andar jane ke baad hi pata chalega " unka ishara samne tha. Dad kuch baichan hai, koi baat jo vo abhi chupa rahe hain, par aisa kya ? mein samajh raha tha ki lekin kuch baton ka jawab abhi pana mushkil tha.

" chalein " hum baairsh mein phir nikal gaye aur kuch der chalne ke baad jab vo imrat ke najdeek pahuchne lage tab paya ki imrat ke charon aur pani bhar chukaa hai

" pani ki behne ke tarike ko dekh rahe ho, niche ki taraf ikhata ho raha hai yani niche jane ke liye sidiyan bani hui hogi " bolte hi unhone apna per aage badhaya aur vo sahi sabit hue. Sidhiyan pani ke andar chup gayi thi jo us imarat ki aaur ka rasta bana rahi thi.

" yani imarat ki unchai jo dikh rahi uska kuch hissa pani ke niche hai "

Baarish ke alawa jo uljhan mere man mein thi vo ye ki andar jane ka rasta kahin dikh nahi raha tha aur pani jo charon taraf bhara tha vo badhta jaa raha tha.

" c'mmon son, kya soch rahe ho " meri nazar dad par gayi vo sidiyan utar chuke the.

" dad kitna gehra hai we don't know "

" you know how to swim " unke jawab ke aage koi sawal nahi tha. Mein bhi utarne laga, dil mein ghabrahat thi isliye mene apni nazar dad par lagaye rakhi thi taki dar kam lage aur pani ki height ka andaza lagta rahe. Pani kandhe tak aa chuka tha aur ab shayad koi sidiyan thi bhi nahi. Hum dhire-dhire aage badh rahi the, pani ka dabav aur baarish ne dhema kar dia tha, sans fulne lagi thi, mujhe dad ki chinta hone lagi. " dad are you ok ? " vo meri awaz sun nahi paa rahe the shayad sun kar ansuna kar rahe the.

Asman mein zordar bizli kadki aur ek pal ke liye mein sihar utha, par manzil karib thi shayad utni karib jitni hum dekhna cha rahe the.

Awesome update bro
So they found a lost city maybe they going to find what they r looking for
Let's see what is waiting for them
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[Sandy307]

Asman mein zordar bizli kadki aur ek pal ke liye mein sihar utha, par manzil karib thi shayad utni karib jitni hum dekhna cha rahe the. Ki tabhi ankhon ke samne se dad ojhal ho gaye, " dad... dad " mei chillaya, jitni tez chal sakta tha utni jaldi aage badha aur phir mein bhi pani ke andar dub gaya. Achanak jese jameen hi hata di ho, pani ke andar jatte hi mene torch on ki aur idhar-udhar dekhne laga par andhere mein dad kahin kho se gaye the, mei pani ke andar hi chillaya par usi pal mujhe bahar khinch liya gaya.

" unnghhh.. dad.. " mein sans durust karte hue bola.

" i am here son "

" dad "

" relax, darne ki jarurat nahi hai, its me "

" ok.. uhhhh ok.. " mei ek pal ke liye bahut dar gaya tha.

" lets go, hum bas phuchne wale hain " dad mujhe khinchte hue le jane lage aur jab mene us imarat ki deewar chui tab jakar mujhe thodi rahat mili.

" we need to find the entrance "

" par hum surface se uppar hai to entrace kholte hi andar pani bhar jayega " hum dono sath khade the par baat chilla kar karni padh rahi thi.

" you are wrong son, there must be something to drain out this water, jo yahan ke mausam ko dekhte hue banaya gaya hoga, we just need to find out that liver and pull it "

" but how ? "

" hume surface tak jana hoga "

" ok, i'll go " mei dad ko bhej nahi sakta tha aur ye kaam jaldi bhi karna tha.

" are you sure ? "

" offcourse dad " . Mene bag se oxygen kit, rope aur belt nikali. Ek belt dad ne pehni aur rasi ka ek hissa unke hook mein dal kar dusra apne mein laga liya. Oxygen mask laga kar mein ready tha, ek torch sar par thi, ek chest par aur ek mein apne sath le jaa raha tha.

" listen to me son, liver khinchte hi pani force ke sath drainange system ki taraf jayega, tumhe kisi majbut chiz ko pakdna hoga, understood ? " mene ishare se unhe bataya ki mein samajh gaya hun " good luck " mene ek gehri sans bhari aur pani ke andar ghus gaya. Baarish ki bundein mere sharir par padni bandh hui aur mein pani ki gehrai mein utrata gaya. Nahi janta tha kitna gehra hai par itna pata tha ki mujhe ye kaam jaldi karna hai, dad itni der pani mein rahe to hypothermia ka shikhar ho jayenge. Mein puri takat se aage badh raha tha aur bich bich mein rassi check kar raha tha. Takreeban 15 minute mujhe lage satha tak pahunchne mein. Mei pahunch chuka tha lekin kuch bhi samajh nahi aa raha tha, bade bade pathar ke tukde aur sirf andhera. Mene charon taraf nazar ghumai lekin kahin kuch nahi. Kya karun ? zindagi aur himmat dono tut gayi to ? Man mein sawal aya par agle hi pal dad ka sikhaya sab kuch yaad aa gaya. Mein imarat ke kareeb idhar udhar khojne laga, deewar par hath maar kar dekhne laga ki kahin kuch mil jaye, tab meri nazar ek aakar par gayi jispar kuch bana hua tha par kya ? samjhna mushkil.

Shayad isme kuch mil jaye, mene bari bari se us chakr jese akar mein hath marna shuru kiya aur tabhi mere hath mein kuch aya, jo khinch sakta tha par kya ye sahi liver tha ? agar ise kuch aur ho gaya to ? par iske alawa mere pas aur kaun sa rasta tha ? dheron sawal ke bich mene liver khinch dia jisme meri puri takat lag gayi aur phir

Mind blowing update bro
So they r very near to obtain what they r looking for
Just one obstacle in their way, let's see what going to happen, they r going find the treasure or they r going get in a trouble
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[Sandy307]

Usne gaddi roki aur phone par address dubara padne ke baad ghar ki taraf dekha. Phone par likhe address ke mutabik yahi wala ghar tha, vo gaddi se utari, phone hand bag mein dala aur ghar ki taraf badhi. Darwaje ke samne khade hokar vo door bell khojne lagi lekin vo maujud nahi thi. Usne jab darwaje par knock krne ki kosish ki to use vo khula paya. Usne darwaje par halke hath se dhakka dia aur hil wali saindal ko ek paidi par rakh uppar aa gayi.

Darwaje khulte hi kamra tha jahan table uske uppar laptop rakha tha, zameen par har jagah tissue paper pade the, dustbin ki halat battar thi, use itna ganda laga ki vo niche utar gayi, vo vahan se jane hi vali thi ki uski nazar samne padi. Vo brush karta hua apna lund khujate hue jese vapis bahar wale kamre mein aya to usne dekha, ghar ka darwaja khula hai aur vahan ek ladki khadi hai.

Do inch ki heels, red color ka selevless one piece, chehre par shades, golden color kiye hue khule baal, ameeri aur khubsurti ka jita jata mixture khada tha. Vo janta tha ki usne apna lund khujate hue pakad rakha hai aur vo use hi dekh rahi hai par usne naak sikodi aur brush karte hue washbasin par aya aur wahan thukne laga, chota sa washbasin chitte kuch zameen par to kuch uske andar, kulla bhi uske kuch isi tarah kiya. Kulla karke usne apni tshirt se hi muh pocha aur apni seat par ja baitha, na usne uski taraf dubara dekha na use andar ane ko kaha, jese uske liye vo maujud hi nahi thi.

Do pal vo bahar khade khade is halat ko dekhne ke baad sochna uske liye badi baat ban gayi, shayad koi majburi rahi hogi isliye usne phir paidi par apne kadam rakhe aur vo andar aa gayi. Andar atte hi uski naak mein ek ajeeb si gandh daudh gayi. Vo ek aisi mehak thi jo na khusbhu thi aur na hi badbu, use nahi pata tha lekin vo tissue paper ke andar lipte sperm ki thi jo kafi dino se wahin pade the. Usne kisi tarah apna dhayan use hataya aur table ke is taraf rakhi kursi par ja baithi, jahan baithe hi uske kano mein awaz padi jise sunte hi usne apne shades hataye aur ghurte hue samne dekhne lagi. Laptop mei chal rahi video mein chudai ka scene chal raha tha jise vo bade aram se dekhne baith chuka tha is bedhayani mein ki samne uske wahi ladki baithi hai aur usi ki awaz room mein gunj rahi thi. Akhir usne chupi todi kyun ki ab use ye bardasht nahi ho raha tha " excuse me "

Awaz sun use dhayan aya ki samne koi baitha hai usne laptop screen gira di aur uski taraf dekhne laga par kuch bola nahi. Chehra padna uske kaam ka ek hissa hi tha jo vo kar raha tha.

" hi, i am Pratiksha "

Naam sun vo kursi par piche ki taraf baith gaya " ok "

Vo man hi man ye soch rahi thi ki jise milne vo ayi hai ye admi vo na nikle " are you detective vikrant ? "

" kisne bheja hai tumhe ? "

" walia, Akshad Walia "

" kyun? "

" he want's to hire you " pratiksha ko samajh nahi aya ki vikrant kyun hans pada. Pratiksha ne gusse ko dabate hue kaha, " sorry ? "

" i reject, tum jaa sakti ho "

Vikrant ki baat sun pratiskha khud ko chup nahi rakh payi, " hey you damn it, what you are ? who you are ? i don't care, par tum jese cheap insan ko mein yun kharid kar ek dustbin mein fenk sakti hun, i should have never came to you, you are a bloody cheap person "

Pratiksha ki batein sun vikrant bahut impress hua usne bade simple lehaze mein pucha " tum kitne ki ho ? "

" what ? what did you say ? "

" mei cheap hun, tum kitne ki ho ? kitne mein bikti ho ? " Vikrant ki baat ne pratiksha ko apni jagah se khada kar dia.

" andar ane se pehle samajh gayi thi tumhe dekh kar tum kya ho, kaun ho, fuck you, bloody idiot human being, fuck you " pratiksha gusse mein uske uppar chila rahi thi lekin vikrant ko uska koi asar nahi tha.

vo phir usi andaz mein bola, mano uske bolne ka yahi tarika tha " jab marzi " . Jawab ne pratiksha ka gussa aur badha dia.

" oh god, why akshad wanted me to meet you ? look at you ? self-arogant person look at you, ghatiya log isi tarah rehte hai isliye unki soch bhi wesi hi hoti hai "

Pratiksha abhi bhi shant nahi hui thi, " tumhe hire karna to dur, mein tum par thukna bhi nahi chahti, kyun ki tum meri thuk ke kabil bhi nahi ho, you are disgusting not only you everything in this house is bizzare, shit, mein ayi hi kyun andar, what a fool i am ? i don't know who you are and whatever you name is, i don't care honestly par jitna hi ganda tumhara ghar hai use kahin jada tum, i can't take you more, not a single shit from a person like you, fuck you " akhri baat mein usne ungli dikhai aur jane lagi. Gusse mein uska chehra lal ho chuka tha, bahar nikalte hi usne apna shade lagaya aur apni car ki taraf badh gayi.

" 9 lakh ki sandal hai " awaz sun vo ruki aur piche mudi, " aur uspar mere ghar ki tati lagi hai aur tum ek cheap tati kese itni mehngi sandal par le ja sakti ho ? " vikrant muskura raha tha, pratiksha ne ek pal guse mein uski taraf dekha phir apni sandal ki taraf jispar potty lag gayi thi jo shayad usne gusse mein bahar atte waqt dekhi nahi thi, phir bina kuch bole gaddi khol usme ja baithi lekin per andar rakhne se pehle usne apni saindal vahin utar fenki aur gaddi start karke vahan se nikal gayi. Vikrant uski is harkat se bahut impress hua vo ek pal saindal ko hi ghurte hue kuch sochta raha aur darwaje ko band kar apni seat par ja baitha.

Baithe sath vo kuch soch raha tha aur sochte hue usne laptop ki screen kholi aur browser open karke usne google par search kiya, " cheap milf " video play kar pajame ke uppar se apne lund ko sehlane laga.

Awesome update bro
Scene change back to masturbating men so his name is vikrant and he is a detective
According to first and this update maybe vikane job is to find ladies bra panty or maybe how many times a men can masturbate in a day hahahahaha
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[Sandy307]

Ankhon ke aage dhundla pan tha, awaz to aa rahi thi par samjhna mushkil tha, " son, son " kano ne bhi sahi suna aur ankhon ke aage dhundnla pan hat kar dad ka chehra aa gaya. " are you alright ? " unke mathe se khoon nikal raha tha jise dekh do pal tak jo mein samjhne ki kosish kar raha tha ki mein kahan hun vo yaad aa gaya.

Mene jese hi us liver ko khincha kuch hua aur pani ke bhav mein tezi aa gayi, us bhav ne mujhe bhi khincha to mene liver ko majbuti se pakad lia. Pani ka pressure itna tez tha ki mere oxygen kit mein breakage ho gayi. Ek pal ke andar naak mein itna pani ghusa jisne mera dum ghot dia par agle hi pal mene sans rok li aur usi pal jo rassi mujhse bandhi thi uspar dabav pada mein samajh gaya ki dad pani ke bhav mein fanse hai iski wajah se mujhpar aur us liver par pressure aur badh gaya. Sara dabav mere ek hath par tha kyun ki pressure ke chalte mei dusre hath se pakdne mein asmarth ho raha tha par phir bhi kisi tarah kosish karke jese hi mene dusra hath aage karke liver par jor dala aur vo tut gaya, uske baad mujhe kuch yaad nahi mein pani ke bhav mein behta hua kahan gaya.

" son, look at me, are you alright " dad mera chehra pakad kar meri ankhon mein dekh rahe the, mene ishare se unhe bataya ki mein theek hun. " good "

" dad your head is bleeding "

" yeah i know, i know, don't worry i am alright " vo mujhse dur hue aur mein apni jagah se khada hua, dard mujhe bhi ho raha tha par dikhne wali chot nahi lagi thi. Baarish band ho chuki thi, mei apni jagah se khada hua, satah bilkul dhasi hui thi na jane kab se pani jama raha hoga, jagah-jagah pani bhara hua tha bas aur ret jesi mithi hi thi. Chalne mein thodi ladkadhat thi, per mein lagi hogi par dard jada nahi tha isliye mene bina dhayan diye dad ke pas pahuncha.

" tumne jis liver ko khincha uska pani isi ke raste gaya hoga " vo torch se samne gufa mein roshni se mujhe dikha rahe the, kafi chaudi aur gehri thi light se us par dekh pana mushkil tha par uske charon taraf se pani tapak raha tha.

" pani gaya kahan hoga ? "

" samundar mein, par ye rasta sirf pani jane ke liye nahi banaya gaya hoga, hume andar jane ka rasta dhundna hoga tabhi hum kuch jaan payenge, tumne liver kahan se khincha tha mujhe dikhao " dad aur mene apna saman uthaya aur mei unhe vahin le aya jahan se mene liver khincha tha, vo theek imarat ke samne bani thi. Jesa mene samjha tha vo ek gol chakr tha jiske andar cross jesi akriti bani thi, keh nahi sakta cross tha ki nahi par ek symbol tha jesa shayad yahan rehne walle log bhasha mein prayog karte ho, mei to nahi samjha par shayad dad ko kuch samajh aya ye baat unki ankhon mein dikh rahi thi.

Central Jail

Pratiksha ne gaddi park ki aur bag shoulder par dalte hue jail ke andar pahunchi. Andar pahunch kar usne apna phone, bag sab police mein jama karwaya aur ek police wale ke sath coridor se hote hue andar jane lagi. Coridor ke dono side jail mein band kaidi usko ghurte hue sithi marne lage, gande comments se uski izat lutne lage. Kafi had tak usne ignore kiya par control kho kar uski nazar ek kaidi par gayi to paya ki ek kaidi apna lund bahar nikal kar use dekhte hue muth maar raha tha.

Police wale ne usko awaz lagai " andar chaliye madam " pratiksha ko khud par ghin aagayi jab use mehsus hua ki vo abhi ek kaidi ko masturbate karte hue dekh rahi thi. Gate khulte hi police officer machine lekar khada tha usne pratiksha ko hath uppar karne ko kaha. Hath uppar karte hi pratiskha ki shirt uske sine se tight ho gayi. Officer ne machine se janch karte hue apne hath se pratiksha ke kandhon ko chua phir uski pith, phir kamar aur phir uske hips par hath rakh kar unhe daba dia. Pratiksha ne gusse mein muthi band kar li par kuch keh na payi.

officer smile deta hua bola " jaa sakti ho " pratiksha ne uski taraf dekha nahi aur vo vahan se chal di.

" kitne mein bikti ho ? " pratiksha ke jehen mein vikrant ki baat ke alawa kaidi ka muth marna, offier ka uske sharir ko chunna, pichle do dino mein ek sath itni chizon ke hone ka asar bahut gehra ho gaya thaa. Vo ek kamre mein khadi thi, uska dhayan tab tuta jab gate khulne ki awaz ayi, gate khulte hi vo ek hall mein ja pahunchi, hall mein table chair rakhi thi aur vahan kai kaidi baithe apne ghar valon se baat cheet kar rahe the. Vo vahan khadi akshad ka wait karne lagi aur tabhi ek police officer akshad ko lekar aya jise dekh pratiksha hairani mein use dekhne lagi.

Awesome update bro
Both scene in one update good
First scene both r safe with few injuries but that's ok their life is not in danger, now they r looking for way to get in let's see what they going to find
Second scene pratiksha is in jail to meet akshad, why akshad in jail hmmmm suspense nice
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[Sandy307]

Police Officer ke piche se akshad aya jo chain se bandha hua, hathon se lekar pairon tak use bandh rakha tha. Ek danav ko jis tarah kaid kiya jata hai vese akshad ko officer le aya aur salkhnon ke piche khada kar dia, " 5 minute " officer vahan se hat kar piche ja khada hua. Pratiksha ko umid thi ki vo sabki tarah use baith kar baat karega isliye vo chair par baith gayi thi. Akshad ko dekh vo uske pas pahunchi.

Akshad ka pehla sawal " baat hui ? " pratiksha kuch aur puchna chahti thi par sawal sun kar usne pucha nahi.

usne rukhe tone mein jawab dia " han bhi aur nahi bhi "

" kya matlab ? "

" matlab, jis admi ke pas tumne bheja tha vo nihati ghatia hai, mei ek pal uske sath nahi bita sakti, he is a jerk akshad "

" are you mad ? tumhe pata hai mein kis halat mein hun, kya tumhe nahi pata ? " vo thodi unchi awaz mein bol gaya, phir jagah ko dekhte hue usne apni awaz dhime ki " mujhe is case se bahar nikalne wala sirf ek wahi hai pratiksha, you have to talk to him "

" vo nahi manega, he is too stuborn " pratiksha abhi bhi guse mei thi.

" he is vikrant pratiksha, vo jesa bhi hai mujhe uski jarurat hai aur tumhare alawa mein kisi par bhaorsa nahi kar sakta, tum is baat ko samjhti ho ki ye kitna jaruri hai kyun ki is bare mein kisi ko pata nahi chalne chahie, that we hire him " akshad jail ki salkhon se pratiksha ka hath pakadte hue bola.

" you can't hire him akshad, you can't " vo ek kadam piche hui aur use kal ki baat yaad aa gayi.

" then you have to make him hire for me, tumhe ye karna hi hai " akshad ki bar-bar ek hi baat ne usko gussa dila dia.

" itni mushkil se lawyer ki madad se 2 minute niklwaye the tumse and look at you, why don't you trust your lawyers ? you want him so badly akshad "

" beacuse he is the only one who can save me the fuck out of this pratiksha "

" tum uspar kese yakeen kar sakte ho ? have you met him ? he is good for nothing, mein tumhare liye world best detective hire kar sakti hun "

" koi kuch nahi kar payega pratiksha, tum samjhti kyun nahi, mujhe wahi chahie, only he can save me aur tumhare pas waqt bahut kam hai "

" chalo tumhara time khatam ho gaya " piche se officer use khinchne laga.

" mujhe sirf tumpar bharosa hai pratiksha " akshad per ghasita hua dhire-dhire piche jane laga.

" damn it akshad " pratiksha ne apne chehre par aye baal piche kiye, " ok i'll try "

" i know " akshad uski ankh se ojhal hota use pehle pratiksha ne apni baat khatam ki " par mein yahan dubara vapis nahi aungi, people are fucking jerk everywhere " akshad uska jawab nahi de paya.

Awesome update bro
Hmm so akshad want vikrant help but pratiksha don't want that
According to akshad words maybe vikrant is good in his business, not in finding bra panty
What akshad did is he innocent or something else, maybe this going to be a suspense that's going to reveal little bit later
Now let's see what partiksha going to do how she going to convince vikrant
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[Sandy307]

Dad us gol chakr ko dekh kar apni book mein kuch khojne lage jaise unhone pehle se isko dekha hai " this is it, ye dekho " dad ne book mujhe dikhai to hubahu usme vahi chakr bana hua tha. Chakr pani mein saaf samajh nahi aa raha tha aur abhi bhi nahi, vo chakr tha ya kuch aur ye baat aapne aap mein ek rehsaye tha.

" dad, iska matlab kya hai " mei book par padte hue bola.

" pata nahi, ab mujhe yaad aya ki book mei kafi jagah is symbol ka use hua hai, dekho " unhone bich-bich mein kafi bar vo symbol use hota dikhaya, book kafi purani thi, man mein aya puchun ki ye book mili kese ? par, " aksar aisi native language mein jab koi aisa symbol baar-baar use hota hai to iska matlab ye hota hai ki vo chiz unki zindagi se kuch khasa natta rakhti hai aur phir yahi sambol hume is tomb ke bahar bhi mila hai to book aur is jagah ka natta aur bhi jada gehra ho jata hai "

" jese geek suraj ko bhagwan mante the kuch aisa ? " ye mera vichar tha.

" ho sakta hai blkul ho sakta hai, ya phir koi chiz jo unse bhi uppar ho jesa tumne kaha suraj, ancient time mein log use bhagwan mante the kyun ki vo unke liye ek rehsaye tha ki itni energy vali chiz kese ho sakti hai ? to .. to shayad yahan kuch aisa hi ho "

" apko lagta hai ye treasure ka rasta ho sakta hai "

" nahi, nahi mujhe lagta hai yahi hamara treasure hai " dad ki baat hairani vali thi " aur agar mei ye akshar ka matlab samajh gaya to hum us treasure ke pas honge, andar jane ka rasta khojna hoga " dad ke kahe ansuar hum dono ne tomb ke charon aur andar jane ka rasta khojne lage par aisi koi chiz nahi mili jo hume andar jane ka rasta de sake, aisa lagne laga banjar zameen ki imarat ke bich khade ho, humne us chakr se bhi kosish ki par usme bhi kuch nahi tha. Dhup to nahi nikli thi par humidity ki vajah se dad ko sans lene mein takleef hone lagi isliye mene unhe pani ki bottle de di aur khud sochne laga ki kya kare. Samay nikal raha tha par kisi tarah andar jane ka rasta nahi mil raha tha aur jab kuch nahi mila to thak kar mei tomb ki deewar ke shahre baith gaya.

Dad book mein khoj rahe the, mene unhe itna desperate kabhi kisi artifact ke liye nahi dekha tha, kuch tha isme jisko vo pana chahte the, jiske liye unhone maa ki bhi parwah nahi ki aur mera bachpan bhi isi mein kurban karwa dia. Kya jesa vo kehte hai vesa hoga ye treasure sach mein waqt badal dega hamara ?. Mei per se ret kured raha tha, mujhe dad ko mana karna chahie tha har pal ye sawal man mein ata hai lekin vo hamesha kehte the ki har chiz ko mana karna bahut asan hota hai aur asan kaam hamesha hume dhoke mein rakhte hain isliye

" dad, dad " meri awaz sunte hi unhone apni nazar book se hatai, " apko ye dekhna chahie " mei apni jagah se khada hua aur dad mere pas aa khade hue.

" dad jo hum soch rahe the vo galat tha "

" matlab " mene per se jahan par red kuredi thi usko fatafat hath se hataya aur unhe dikhaya. Ret ke niche koi thos chiz gadhi thi, " dig, son dig " hum dono vahan se ret hatane lage aur kuch hi pal mein ret vahan se hat gayi. Mei hanfte hue bola,

" tomb to ret mein dhansa hai dad " ek sher ka dhancha bana tha jiske uppar se ret hatai thi. Khodne par ret niche ki taraf fisal kar jaa rahi thi, jise dekhte hi dad bole " niche jane ka rasta yahin se milega, tie us we will go down "

Kareeb 6 ghante ki mehnat lagi aur hum niche pahunch gaye, sateh par akar tomb ke andar jane ka rast mil gaya, jo adhe se jada ret se bhara hua tha, sham dhal chuki thi " ye ret yahan aise hi ikhati nahi hui, samundar jada dur nahi hai to shayad ek time par samundar ka pani yahan tak akar raha hoga aur yahi wajah rahi hogi yahan ke rehne wali prajati ke ant ki aur jab kuch salon baad samundar ka pani piche gaya to ret se is jagh ko bhar gaya, uske baad baarish hoti rahi aur pani iske uppar jama hota raha " mei dad ki baat dhayan se sun raha tha aur rope khinch kar bag mein saman dal kar unke pas ja khada hua.

" are you ready son ? " mene unhe unka bag-pack dia.

" let's go dad " mei aage badha, ret bhare hone ki vajah se jagah choti thi isliye dekhte hue pehle mei uppar pahuncha aur torch on kar di, dur tak andhera tha yahan se kuch bhi samajh nahi aa raha tha, dad mere piche-piche uppar chade. Unhone bhi apni torch on ki aur hum dono andar ki aaur chal diye.

Awesome update bro
Hmm treasure seems to bi quite valuable that's why they r even risking their life for it
Is they going find the treasure or not
Let's see what going to happen next
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[Sandy307]

Hum shayad ek bade bhawan mein pahunch chuke the, andhera tha par us time light ke do ho sotr hote the ek suraj aur dusri agni. Kuch to bana hi hoga mei diwaron par hath ferta hua dekh raha tha par " you won't find what you are looking for son, remember ye jagah pani ke andar rahi hai vo bhi kafi waqt tak, hume artificial light ka hi istemal karna hoga " dad ki baat sahi thi to mein torch se hi samjhne ki kosish karne lage. Deewaron par alag alag tarah ki akriti bani hui thi jese ki unki sanskriti in deewaron mein sazi hui ho.

" dad apne kuch notice kiya ? "

" vo symbol is hall mein kahin nahi hai "

" han aur mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hai ye jagah " mei apni baat khatam karta use pehle dad ki baat sun kar mei ruk gaya.

" yahan par logon ko zinda garam padart mein dal dia jata tha aur log use jashan maan kar usme shamil hua karte the " dad ne diwar par bane symbol aur book mein likhe shabdon ke matlab se samjhaya. " aur yahan par mukhiya yani is jagah ka sardar baith kar uske mans ko kha kar ye batata tha ki uska sharir kis had tak jala hai, ye parampara thi aur har sal ki jati thi "

" kyun ? "

" kyun ? right question " vo phir padte hue bole, " kyun ki vo dekhne chahte the ki vo vapis aa sakte hain ki nahi "

" mei kuch samjha nahi " dad ne mera sawal suna tha ya nahi keh nahi sakta kyun ki vo kisi soch mein dube hue the. " dad " mei unhe unki soch se bahar nikalne unke pas pahuncha " kya soch rahe ho ? "

" nahi..kuch nahi, hume aage badna hai " dad ke kahe ansuar hum wahan se nikle aur ek andhere coridor mein ja pahunche, dono taraf deewar thi par yahan ki deewar bakiyun se kuch alag tarah bani hui thi, " careful son, na jane kaun kaun se trap ho sakte hai " dad ke bolte hi unhone ek kadadm aage rakha aur vahan ki jameen niche kisak gayi jiske khisakte hi hamare sath vali deewar aage ki taraf badhne lagi. " ohh shit " mere hath se torch gir gayi aur mei deewar par apna zor lagane laga taki vo ruk jaye par aisa hua nahi.

" run " mei aur dad dono tezzi se bhagne lage aur agar hum kud kar niche na gire hote to us deewar ke bich mein aajate. Humne takriban 5 feet ki unchai se chalang lagai thi jiski landing sahi nahi hone ke karan hum dono ko hi chhot lagi thi.

" are you ok dad " mein ghasitte hue unke pas pahuncha.

" no, i guess mera per mud gaya hai " mene bag se spray nikal kar unke per par spray kar dia. " tum theek ho beta ? "

" han thode scretches hain but i am ok " mene dad ko khada kiya.

" there must be more traps here, it means we are going in right directions "

" but ab kahan ? " mene dad ki torch le rakhi thi aur jahan hum khade the uske samne kuch nahi tha, na jane kitna deep thi vo gehrai, torch ki roshni niche sateh tak nahi pahunch paa rahi thi.

" no, no no no.. " dad badhbadaye, " ye dead end nahi ho sakta " vo apni taraf ki deewaron par hath marne lage taki koi gupt rasta mil jaye, par gupt rasta hone ka koi reason nahi tha kyun ki jisne bhi ye trap banaya tha vo to chahta tha ki koi bhi is jagah tak na pahunche jahan hum khade hain, yani rasta aage janne ka hai. Mene bag se glow stick nikal kar niche fenk di aur niche jhanka, bingo niche pathar tha utna hi bada jitne bade par hum khade the.

" good work son " Rope ki madad se mein aur dad niche utare aur hume ek gate dikha jo band pada tha. Mene use dhakka dene ki kosish ki jise mitthi utar kar jhadne lagi par vo khula nahi. " koi tarika hoga iske kholne ka bhi "

" no i think i got this " mene puri takat se use dhakka dia to vo piche ki taraf gir gaya. Meri force itni thi ki mein bhi uske sath niche ja gira us gehrai mein jahan se zinda vapis ana namumkin tha.

" vikrant " dad ke chillane ki awaz mere kano mein gunji aur phir gum ho gayi.

Pratiksha uske darwaje par khadi use dekh rahi thi, dadhi itni jada thi ki chehra pehchana namumkin baal ghungrale aur ankhon par kala chasma chadaye vo so raha tha. Vikrant ke liye uske man mein nafrat panap chuki thi par vo phir bhi uske darwaje par khadi thi. Andar ghuste hi uski naak mein wahi gandh phir ghul gayi jise vo kabhi bhul nahi sakti thi, pura kamra utna hi ganda tha jitna ki us din, usne heel se zameen par tissue paper ko side kiya aur table ke samne ja khadi hui, na boli na koi shor kiya bas use dekhti rahi.

Vikrant ki taraf se jab koi halchal nahi hui to pratiksha bol hi padi " tum jaag rahe ho ya so rahe ho nahi janti par mere jism ko ghurne mein tumhe maza mil gaya ho to hum baat kar sakte hain " Pratiksha ki baat sun vikrant ne apna chasma hataya aur ubasi angdaiyan lete hue apni jagah se khada hua aur piche vale kamre mein chala gaya.

Mind boggling update bro
So I'm right vikrant is the one who was finding the treasure with his dad, but for now it's a suspense what happen their is vikrant dad alive aur not
Partiksha again in vikrant house what partiksha going to do and what vikrant going to do
Let's see what's next
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[Sandy307]

Pratiksha vahan khadi vikrant ke mutne ka shor sun rahi thi phir flush chalne ki awaz ayi aur vikrant brush karte hue bahar aya aur washbasin mein thukne laga. Pratiksha ye sab bade dhayan se dekh rahi thi. Thukte hue vikrant ek dum se piche muda aur use ghurte hue bola " mein band ankhon se aur band kapdon mein logon ko dekhna pasand nahi karta, vikrant ne pratiksha ko uppar se lekar niche tak dekha, usne ek tight shirt pehni hui thi jisme uski chatiyun ka ubhar jhalak raha tha " uske muh se tooth-paste behta hua gale tak pahunch raha tha jise usne hath se saaf kar phir thukte hue muh dhone laga. Pratiksha ko uspar ghin aur gussa dono aya par kuch bol na saki. Vikrant shirt se muh pochta hua aya aur kursi par ja baitha, na jane kyun pratiksha ki nazar us washbasin par gayi jo dur se hi behad ganda dikh raha tha phir usne apni ankh band ki aur gehri sans lete hue vikrant ki taraf dekha.

" hume tumhari madad chahie " uske kehte hi vikrant ne baithne ka ishara kiya, is baat ki use umid nahi thi, vo kursi par baith gayi. Vo bas jald se jald baat karke yahan se jana chahti thi.

" aur kitne log ho tum " uske baithte hi vikrant bola.

" dekho, mr "

" detective vikrant " vikrant ne uski baat kaat di.

" detective vikrant, mei tumse Akshad walia ke case ke silsale mein baat karne ayi hun "

" ok " bol kar vo chup ho gaya aur usne laptop ki screen utha di. Ab pratiksha aur vikrant ke bich vo screen bhi thi jise dekh pratiksha ko us din ki yaad aa gayi jab usme chudai ki awazein aa rahi thi. Uska dhayan us taraf chala gaya jiske baad use phir sari baat yaad aa gayi, vikrant ka use kharidne ki baat karna, inspector ka use chuna pata nahi kyun par bar-bar ye baat use tang kar rahi thi.

" Akshad walia ka case, ye wala " dhayan uska tab tuta jab samne usne newspaper dekha jiski taraf usne ishare se vikrant ko bataya.

" President ki beti ke sath rape aur murder, aropi Manish Mehra sakht kaid mein "

" who is manish mehra ? "

" tum batao tumne ishara kia "

" par isme koi manish mehra nahi " pratiksha ke kehne par vikrant ne dhang se dekha, " behenchod, muth mar-mar ke meri ankhein khap gayi hai "

" sorry ? " pratiksha ko kano par vishwas nahi hua jo usne abhi suna. Vo kuch kehti use pehle vikrant news paper utha kar padne laga.

" manish mehra ne to apne biwi ke ashiq ke tatte kaat dalle " usne akbhar wahan vapis rakh dia. " sorry meri ankhon ki galti " pratiksha kuch bolne se pehle akhbar dekhna chahti thi, kya vakai mein usne apni biwi ke ashiq ke tatte katte hain ? " galla katta hai " vikrant usko pakdte hue bola to pratiksha ke chehre ka rang fika padh gaya.

" akshad ko tumhari help ki need hai " pratiksha ne baat badal di.

" mei koi ashram nahi chalata jo madad karunga, detective hun mera kaam sabut dhundna hai bhale ki vo kisi ki jawani ka kyun na ho " vo janti thi ki vikrant uske sharir ko ghur raha hai, uski nazar uski chatiyun par tiki hai, na jane kis had tak soch kar man hi man mere sharir ke sath ? itna sochte hi pratiksha ko khud par ek bar phir ghin aa gayi.

Pratiksha mudde ki baat par kayam rahi " president ki beti ka rape aur murder charge hai akshad par "

" ok " vikrant ke itne sukhe hue jawab se vo irritate hone lagi.

" aur uske pas jada time nahi hai, kuch hi dino mein usko chair par baitha dia jayega "

" seriously ? " vikrant kursi se aage ki taraf aya.

" yes "

" wao " pratiksha ye reaction dekh bol padi, " what so wao in that ? "

" i thought, fansi se uppar saza nahi hai, apke husband ko koi aur ladki nahi mili ? "

" Akshad is not my husband & he didn't do it "

" didn't do what, rape or murder ? "

" nothing, he did nothing "

" tum itni sure kese ho ? "

" kyun ki mujhe pata hai "

" kaise ? "

" kyun ki mei akshad ko janti hun "

" kabse ? "

" kafi salon se "

" kitne ache se ? "

" bahut ache se "

" kis hadh tak ? "

" excuse me ? "

" kis hadh tak ? "

" us hadh tak nahi jaisa tum soch rahe ho "

" phir tum ek mard ko nahi janti " sawal jawab ke bich vikrant phir kursi par piche hokar baith gaya. Pratiksha uski taraf dekhti rahi aur ek pal dono chup rahe.

" what do you want to know ? "

" akhbar mein likha sach hai ya juth, soch kar mujhe iska jawab dena "

" sach hota to mei akshad ke liye nahi us ladki ke liye ati " vikrant uske jawab se impress hua. " ok "

" to ? " pratiksha ko jawab mein na han nazar aaya na-hi na

" tumhare pas jo bhi evidence hai vo mujhe kal de jana "

" it means i hired you " pratiksha ke chehre par muskan thi use laga usne vikrant ko akhir kharid hi lia. Vikrant uski baat par muskura dia, usne apna lund khujaya, pratiksha ko hath chalte dikhe to vo andaza laga kar samajh gayi.

Vo jada der baith is admi ki gandagi bardasht nahi kar sakti thi, vo apni jagah se khadi hui, ankhon par shade lagaye, " your fees ? " Vikrant ki nazar laptop ki screen par thi, pratiksha yun hi khadi rahi jese uske liye vo maujud hi nahi hai.

" you " bade hi normal andaz mein vikrant ne jawab dia aur screen par wapis dekhne laga.

" excuse me what ? " pratiksha ko ek pal laga samjhne mein ki vikrant ne kis baat ka jawab dia hai.

" my fees is you " vikrant ne bina uski taraf dekhe jawab dia.

" are you fucking kidding me right now ? "

" you hire me so my fees is you " vo abhi bhi uski taraf nhi dekh raha tha aur baat karne ke tarike se lag raha tha jese ab use baat karne mein koi interest nahi hai. Pratiksha ne apne shades uppar kiye, bolne ke liye muh khola phir hans di aur mud kar jane lagi par bahar gaye bina vo phir mudi " fuck you, bloody asshole, fuck you " usne ye baat bina chillaye kahi.

" hmm same thing " vikrant ka lehza dekh pratiksha gusse ka control nahi kar payi.

" listen to me you bastard " pratiksha ne table par zor se hath mara aur uski taraf jhuk gayi, ispar vikrant ne uski taraf dekha, chehra behad sundar tha par filal gusse mein tha, phir uski nazar niche sarki aur uski chatiyun par tham gayi. Jhukne se shirt loose ho gayi jise pratiksha ke cleavage ke sath uski grey color ki pehni hui bra ko vo dekhne laga, agle hi pal jab pratiksha ne ye bhanp liya to gusse se uska matha phir gaya.

" oh my god, he is such a pervert, why akshad why ? " vo itni tez chillai ki pura kamra uski awaz mein dub gaya " i don't kow why the fuck he wants you "

" taki tum asli mard ko jaan sako "

" shut-up just shutup, you'll go in fucking hell, understand fucking hell, mei hi bevkuf thi jo akshad ke khatir yahan aa gayi. Tum kya akshad ko save karoge you can't save yourself, dekho khud ko, just look at you, tum soch bhi kese sakte ho ki tum mere sath ? " usne ek second ka pause liya " fuck you, fuck you " usne kursi par zor se laat mari aur bag utha kar vahan se chali gayi. Gusse mein uski sansein bahut jada tez chal rahi thi, vo gaddi mein baithi usne apna bag fainka aur ek pal zor-zor se sansein lene lagi. Sochte hue use sab batein yaad ane lagi jiske yaad atte hi use khud par ghin aur gussa dono ane laga.

Vo zor zor se gaddi par marne lagi " shit, shit, shit, shit, fuck " phir khud ko sambhalte hue baal piche kiye aur sansein kabu karte hue bag se mobile phone nikal kar number dial kiya.

" mr dixit " samne se phone uthte hi boli.

" yes naina tell me "

" do you know who is vikrant, detective vikrant "

" no why ? "

" because akshad wants to hire him "

" what ? tumhe kese pata ? & why he wants to hire a detective " uski awaz mein chinta aur ghabrahat thi.

" because he asked me to do so & he thinks ki vahi use bacha sakta hai "

" mene kabhi nahi suna iske bare mein and akshad didn't told me about him "

" usne sirf mujhe bataya hai mr. dixit aur apko batane se bhi mana kiya hai "

" but why ? naina do you think akshad know about us ?"

" i don't think so, apne bhi nahi jante ise, kisi ne iske bare mein nahi suna to question is how did Akshad know about him ? " usne phone cut karke ek bar vikrant ke ghar ki taraf dekha aur vahan se nikal gayi.

" interesting " vikrant laptop par chal rahi dono ki conversation ko sun kar muskura dia.

Awesome update bro
One girl two name interesting interesting
So it seems partiksh or naina is not the right person, maybe she done something bad or maybe not
How did vikrant able to hear the conversation between partiksha and mr. Dixit
Is vikrant going to do something
Let's see what next
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[StarDust]

Harshit,

do you feel, your writing is polished in this story ? Do you feel you're meeting your own benchmarks here which you have set up of your own ?