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Sci-FI Treasure ~~ "The Invisible Hunt" {Completed}

Does Anyone read Sci-fi Treasure Story ? (Is Yes, discuss on this thread)


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harshit1890

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3.5 Saal se kahani ki tayari kar raha tha, Pichla platform chhuta to kabhi likhne ke barre mein socha nahi par jab kahani ka plot bana aur corona ka asar dunia mein badha to zindagi ki bhag daudh se kuch rahat mili aur mene is kahani ko sabke bich lane ka faisla kiya. Ek aisa chetra tha jisme mene abhi tak koi kahani nahi likhi thi aur ye meri lekhan ki ek akhri script aur genre hai jise mein kosish karunga ki ache se likh sakun. Umeed karunga kuch purane sathi yahan milenge aur kuch naye judhenge.

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harshit1890

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Very nice update ............
2nd update bhi mysterious hai ................
Ab wo dono baap beta kia search kr rahe hain ............ koi khazana, koi rare artifact , ya kuch aur ........... ???
lets see wahan kia milta hai ..............

Waiting for next update ...............

Thanks bhai.. :hug: keep reading
 

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" kya ye insano ka banaya hua hai ? " dur se jada samjhna mushkil tha par itna dikh raha tha ki kafi saal purana hai aur us samay is tarah ka nirman kaise hua hoga.

" yes son, indeed, jese bade bade pyramids banaye gaye vese ise bhi banaya gaya hoga " unki sansein ukhdi hui thi.

" par kaun si sadi mein? " mei dekh paa raha tha ki pathar se banai gayi boundaries aur uske bich mein ek lamba sidha dancha jiski unchai is andhere mein naap pana mushkil tha, ek aisi cheez vo bhi is jagah par hona ek aisi sabhyata ko ujagar karta hai jiska shayad ab koi astitiv bacha na ho.

" ye pathar hazron saal purana hai " kurdete hue unhone pathar ki mithi ko hath par rakha jo baarish ke pani se beh gaya.

" dad, idhar " mene unki baat ansuni kar sar dhakne ki chatt khoj li. Mujhe ek pathar se bana shade dikh gaya tha, jiske niche khade hone se hum baarish se kuch der bach sakte the. " baarish ka pani ghutne tak hai par sar sukhana hoga apki body ka tampan girta jaa raha hai " mene dad se kaha.

" han han theek hai " humne apna rain coat utar diya, phir bag se sukha kapda nikal kar unhe de dia aur dawai ka daba nikal kar injection refil karne laga.

" baarish ek vajah hai iske pathar ki mithi kamjor hone ki "

" shoulder " mene unke kandhe par injection lagaya aur khud ko laga kar bag mein saman dal kar pack kar dia.

" hume ye mithi le jani hai, i need to study this " dad torch ki roshni se diwar par badhbadate hue kuch padne ki kosish karne laga.

" dad, dad "

" han.. " vo mano kisi chiz mein kho gaye the.

" kya padh rahe ho ? "

" nothing, nothing "

" aap kuch bata rahe the us time? "

" mujhe lagta hai ki yahan par koi sheher raha hoga aur yahan ke mausam ki wajah se hi unki prajati ka ant hua hoga "

" par apne to kaha tha ki "

" i know, i know, bahut kuch hai abhi jise hum anjan hai aur jo andar jane ke baad hi pata chalega " unka ishara samne tha. Dad kuch baichan hai, koi baat jo vo abhi chupa rahe hain, par aisa kya ? mein samajh raha tha ki lekin kuch baton ka jawab abhi pana mushkil tha.

" chalein " hum baairsh mein phir nikal gaye aur kuch der chalne ke baad jab vo imrat ke najdeek pahuchne lage tab paya ki imrat ke charon aur pani bhar chukaa hai

" pani ki behne ke tarike ko dekh rahe ho, niche ki taraf ikhata ho raha hai yani niche jane ke liye sidiyan bani hui hogi " bolte hi unhone apna per aage badhaya aur vo sahi sabit hue. Sidhiyan pani ke andar chup gayi thi jo us imarat ki aaur ka rasta bana rahi thi.

" yani imarat ki unchai jo dikh rahi uska kuch hissa pani ke niche hai "

Baarish ke alawa jo uljhan mere man mein thi vo ye ki andar jane ka rasta kahin dikh nahi raha tha aur pani jo charon taraf bhara tha vo badhta jaa raha tha.

" c'mmon son, kya soch rahe ho " meri nazar dad par gayi vo sidiyan utar chuke the.

" dad kitna gehra hai we don't know "

" you know how to swim " unke jawab ke aage koi sawal nahi tha. Mein bhi utarne laga, dil mein ghabrahat thi isliye mene apni nazar dad par lagaye rakhi thi taki dar kam lage aur pani ki height ka andaza lagta rahe. Pani kandhe tak aa chuka tha aur ab shayad koi sidiyan thi bhi nahi. Hum dhire-dhire aage badh rahi the, pani ka dabav aur baarish ne dhema kar dia tha, sans fulne lagi thi, mujhe dad ki chinta hone lagi. " dad are you ok ? " vo meri awaz sun nahi paa rahe the shayad sun kar ansuna kar rahe the.

Asman mein zordar bizli kadki aur ek pal ke liye mein sihar utha, par manzil karib thi shayad utni karib jitni hum dekhna cha rahe the.
 

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Asman mein zordar bizli kadki aur ek pal ke liye mein sihar utha, par manzil karib thi shayad utni karib jitni hum dekhna cha rahe the. Ki tabhi ankhon ke samne se dad ojhal ho gaye, " dad... dad " mei chillaya, jitni tez chal sakta tha utni jaldi aage badha aur phir mein bhi pani ke andar dub gaya. Achanak jese jameen hi hata di ho, pani ke andar jatte hi mene torch on ki aur idhar-udhar dekhne laga par andhere mein dad kahin kho se gaye the, mei pani ke andar hi chillaya par usi pal mujhe bahar khinch liya gaya.

" unnghhh.. dad.. " mein sans durust karte hue bola.

" i am here son "

" dad "

" relax, darne ki jarurat nahi hai, its me "

" ok.. uhhhh ok.. " mei ek pal ke liye bahut dar gaya tha.

" lets go, hum bas phuchne wale hain " dad mujhe khinchte hue le jane lage aur jab mene us imarat ki deewar chui tab jakar mujhe thodi rahat mili.

" we need to find the entrance "

" par hum surface se uppar hai to entrace kholte hi andar pani bhar jayega " hum dono sath khade the par baat chilla kar karni padh rahi thi.

" you are wrong son, there must be something to drain out this water, jo yahan ke mausam ko dekhte hue banaya gaya hoga, we just need to find out that liver and pull it "

" but how ? "

" hume surface tak jana hoga "

" ok, i'll go " mei dad ko bhej nahi sakta tha aur ye kaam jaldi bhi karna tha.

" are you sure ? "

" offcourse dad " . Mene bag se oxygen kit, rope aur belt nikali. Ek belt dad ne pehni aur rasi ka ek hissa unke hook mein dal kar dusra apne mein laga liya. Oxygen mask laga kar mein ready tha, ek torch sar par thi, ek chest par aur ek mein apne sath le jaa raha tha.

" listen to me son, liver khinchte hi pani force ke sath drainange system ki taraf jayega, tumhe kisi majbut chiz ko pakdna hoga, understood ? " mene ishare se unhe bataya ki mein samajh gaya hun " good luck " mene ek gehri sans bhari aur pani ke andar ghus gaya. Baarish ki bundein mere sharir par padni bandh hui aur mein pani ki gehrai mein utrata gaya. Nahi janta tha kitna gehra hai par itna pata tha ki mujhe ye kaam jaldi karna hai, dad itni der pani mein rahe to hypothermia ka shikhar ho jayenge. Mein puri takat se aage badh raha tha aur bich bich mein rassi check kar raha tha. Takreeban 15 minute mujhe lage satha tak pahunchne mein. Mei pahunch chuka tha lekin kuch bhi samajh nahi aa raha tha, bade bade pathar ke tukde aur sirf andhera. Mene charon taraf nazar ghumai lekin kahin kuch nahi. Kya karun ? zindagi aur himmat dono tut gayi to ? Man mein sawal aya par agle hi pal dad ka sikhaya sab kuch yaad aa gaya. Mein imarat ke kareeb idhar udhar khojne laga, deewar par hath maar kar dekhne laga ki kahin kuch mil jaye, tab meri nazar ek aakar par gayi jispar kuch bana hua tha par kya ? samjhna mushkil.

Shayad isme kuch mil jaye, mene bari bari se us chakr jese akar mein hath marna shuru kiya aur tabhi mere hath mein kuch aya, jo khinch sakta tha par kya ye sahi liver tha ? agar ise kuch aur ho gaya to ? par iske alawa mere pas aur kaun sa rasta tha ? dheron sawal ke bich mene liver khinch dia jisme meri puri takat lag gayi aur phir
 

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Oye Terri , nayi story ..... :happy: :happy: :happy: :happy: :happy: :happy: :happy:
Harshit bhai ki new story....:adore: Waah , let's read it out .....:reading:
Ek aur sawaal:itsme2: , last platform par ek aur story thi , lust love wali , uska kuch hoga kyaaa

Sid bro :vhappy: han corora effect :D

Are uska backup nahi hai aur na meko chracter ke naam yaad hai :(
 

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Very nice and fantastic update ................
Keep it up bro ............
Waiting for next update .....................
 
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