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Update 88 (A & B) is posted on 537.. Must give your valuable feedback...

End Of The Chepter:-1 is posted on 542...

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[Naina]

My mistake bhawnao me bahkar 12th pass ko 12 sal likh diya

Aur itna bhoolokkar ho ki abhi tak edit bhi nahi kiya.. kahi luci ne dekh liya na to pehle ju ko hi ban kar dega wo bhi definitely

 

[Naina]

Best review chahiye to kahani ki shadgi ko barkarar rakhiye... yun Agra se bhage pagalo jaise harkatein na karne dijiye kirdaaro ko..
aur rahi baat meera ki... Naah ye wo xp wali meera purohit ho bhi nahi sakti coz Meera purohit ka dusra arth shaant, mridu bhashi, samajhdaar,
Aur ye abhi kahani mein kahani mein wali meera...chhori pagal ke sath sath hawasi bhi lage manne...

 

[11 ster fan]

Best review chahiye to kahani ki shadgi ko barkarar rakhiye... yun Agra se bhage pagalo jaise harkatein na karne dijiye kirdaaro ko..
aur rahi baat meera ki... Naah ye wo xp wali meera purohit ho bhi nahi sakti coz Meera purohit ka dusra arth shaant, mridu bhashi, samajhdaar,
Aur ye abhi kahani mein kahani mein wali meera...chhori pagal ke sath sath hawasi bhi lage manne...

Are ye wali Meera nibbi hai...samajho jara ....

 

[Naina]

Are ye wali Meera nibbi hai...samajho jara ....

Aisi nibbi jo maa jaisi aurat ko heart patient bana de apni swaarth ke chalte.. wah bahot khub aise aulad ke liye taaliya bajti rahni chahiye

 

[11 ster fan]

Aisi nibbi jo maa jaisi aurat ko heart patient bana de apni swaarth ke chalte.. wah bahot khub aise aulad ke liye taaliya bajti rahni chahiye

Aise nibbi nibba hamane khub dekhe hai...phir bhi iske liye ...

 

[Naina]

Naina ji ...bura na mano to ek baat kahna chahunga...critic hona ek achchi baat hoti...wo writer ko hint dete rahte h ki kaha pe aur achcha kiya ja sakta h ...but ...sach kahu to kabhi kabhi aapke comments padhke thoda. Bahut gussa bhi aata h ....mana ye bs ek story hi h ..but insan wahi likhta h jo wo sochta h ya mehsus karta h ...achchi baat likhne ya bolne ka mtlb h aap ke kitne bhi burai kyo na ho aapme kahi na kahi ek achcha insan bhi basta h ....aur buri baate ya apmanit sabdo ka prayog ka mtlb hota h ki aap kitne bhi achche kyo na ho aapki jado me ab thodi burai aani suru ho gyi .....jara apni baato ko sochiye
aapne ek 12 sal ki navyuvti ke vishay me ye baat kahi h mana wo kalpanik h but h to ek ladki hi na jiske man me abhi tk koi bura khayal nhi dekha maine ....ek achche alochak ki tarah aap hamesa kuch naya aur behatar likhne ke liye motivate karti dikhi h ...but kuch aise comments bhi h jinse man ki un bhavnao ko thes pahuchti h jo kisi achche alochak se ummid lagaye baitha hota h ....maine ek psychiatrist ki ek baat suni thi jaisa hum bolte ya sochte h vaisa hi banne lag jate h ... isliye maine incest ya adultery jaisi stories padhni hi band kar di....ek ya do kahaniya h jinhw padhta bhi hu to wo portion hi pura chhod deta hu jisme iska jikr ho....khair itni sari baate kahne ke pichhe bs yahi kahna chahta hu ki nain bhai bahut soch samjhkar characters ko akar dete h ...to characters ki alochana tk to baat thik h but ye character assassination karna kich jyada ho jata h .....thoda dhyan dijiyega meri baat pe baaki kisi baat ka bura laga ho to mai dil se mafi chahunga

Sabse ucha mata pita ka darza hota hai, unke liye farz nibhate waqt jaan bhi chali jaye tab bhi kuch Karz reh jaaye....
chaahe kahani ho ya vastavik jivan mein maa se anmol aur koi nahi...
ushi maa ko heart patient bana diya meera ne apne hi matlab ke liye..... are aise kuch sochne se pehle koi aur hota to nadi mein kud jata par aisi giri huyi harkat na karta lekin meera ko aag lagi thi, hawas ne jakar rakha tha isliye apni yoshada jaisi maa ko heart patient hi bana diya... aaj ye kand kar rahi hai, kal ko apne matlab ke liye kisiko bhi marwa bhi degi wo...
Is mamle mein bhi sochna jarur..

 

[Naina]

Aise nibbi nibba hamane khub dekhe hai...phir bhi iske liye ...

Aise nibbe nibbi logo ko to kahi jake chhulu bhar pani mein dub kar mar jaana chahiye....

 

[Naina]

Are ye wali Meera nibbi hai...samajho jara ....

Tamam readers ke mat aur meera ne jo kiya apni hi palan haar maa ke sath, ispe madde nazar rakhte huye aaj se, abhi se meera ko ek naye naam se puraskrit kiya jaata hai....
KHUJLI WALI
MEERA THE KHUJLI WALI GAL

 

[11 ster fan]

Aise nibbe nibbi logo ko to kahi jake chhulu bhar pani mein dub kar mar jaana chahiye....

Are Naina ji thoda rukiye to paraso se sawalo aur roast ki ek update aayegi hamari tarf se...

 

[Naina]

Are Naina ji thoda rukiye to paraso se sawalo aur roast ki ek update aayegi hamari tarf se...

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