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Fantasy THE WARRIOR OF THE WORLD

Aap sabko iss story ki starting kaisi lagi pls batayiye..?


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UPDATE 1
:vhappy1:Hello dosto ye mera xforum par phela story hai to isko bhot pyaar dijiyega...ye story thora lamba chalega to please bane rahiyega story par or story achhi lage to comment mai zarur batayiyega🥰. To dosto chaliye chaliye chalte hai story par:chudail:
Iss duniya mai itne rahasya chupe hai ki manushya ko un rahasyo ka keval ek chouthai rahasya hi pata hai:dquestion:.
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Ye kahani hai ek ese yodha ki jiske paas apaar alokik shaktiya or bal hai .....jiske saamne puri duniya sar jhukati hai aajtak koi bhi uske samne tik nhi paya.
iss story mai Hetoka name hai "Avinash"
Iske sabhi jaan pehchaan wale isko "Avi" keh kar bulate hai. TO mai story mai Avi hi likhunga



INTRODUCTION TO AVI'S HOUSE

Avi ke ghar mai uske Dad, mom or ek pyari si choti behen rehti hai Avi ki choti behen usse jada choti nhi hai kewal dono mai sirf kuch hi minutes ka antar hai..family members ka intro
  1. Adesh saxena (Avi's father)
  2. Rachna saxena (Avi's mother)
  3. priya saxena (Avi's sister)
Nice update congratulation for New story
 

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UPDATE 1
:vhappy1:Hello dosto ye mera xforum par phela story hai to isko bhot pyaar dijiyega...ye story thora lamba chalega to please bane rahiyega story par or story achhi lage to comment mai zarur batayiyega🥰. To dosto chaliye chaliye chalte hai story par:chudail:
Iss duniya mai itne rahasya chupe hai ki manushya ko un rahasyo ka keval ek chouthai rahasya hi pata hai:dquestion:.
.

Ye kahani hai ek ese yodha ki jiske paas apaar alokik shaktiya or bal hai .....jiske saamne puri duniya sar jhukati hai aajtak koi bhi uske samne tik nhi paya.
iss story mai Hetoka name hai "Avinash"
Iske sabhi jaan pehchaan wale isko "Avi" keh kar bulate hai. TO mai story mai Avi hi likhunga



INTRODUCTION TO AVI'S HOUSE

Avi ke ghar mai uske Dad, mom or ek pyari si choti behen rehti hai Avi ki choti behen usse jada choti nhi hai kewal dono mai sirf kuch hi minutes ka antar hai..family members ka intro
  1. Adesh saxena (Avi's father)
  2. Rachna saxena (Avi's mother)
priya saxena (Avi's sister)

ABB AAGE...
Saxena family India ki sabse richest families mai se ek hai .
Avi ke dad ki kayi sari jagah jagah factories, hotels , malls, buildings etc. Hai ...yani ke ghar mai paiso ki koi dikkat hi nahi hai sab bade pyaar se rehte hai.
Avi ki mom or uski hum umr behn Avi ke uper jaan chidakte hai.
zada pyaar ki wajah se aajkal ke bachhe thode ziddi hojate hai lekin Avi ka swabhaav bhot hi Nirmal or shaant hai na hi wo jaldi kissi se gussa hota or na hi jhagra karta bss wo sabko pyaar hi deta hai.


AAGE...
jaisa maine apko phele bataya ke Avi ke ghar sabhi khushi khushi or pyaar se reh rahe hai.
yaha mai sabhi members ki age batata chalta hu.


Avi's father age-: 47yrs

Avi's mother age-: 40yr

Avi's (Hero)age-: 17yrs

Avi's sister age-: 17 yrs

Avi ki mom ek house wife hai jo apne pariwaar se bhot pyaar karti hai. House wife hone ke baad bhi Avi ki mom bhot inteligent hai phele ve bhi Avi ke dad ke sath unke business mai hath batati thi lekin jabse Avi or priya hue tabse ve unki dekh bhaal ke liye ghar par reh kar hi kaam karti hai sabko alag alag time dena or ghar ke kaam karna unko bhot pasand hai . Unke ghar mai naukoro ki to koi kami nhi hai lekin Avi ki mom ko ghar ka kaam swam karna pasand hai or sath mai ve ye bhi kehti hai ki ghar ke kaam khud karne se ghar ki Barakat bhi hoti hai.
chaliye ab thoda jaanlete hai hamare story ke hero ke baare mai....
Avinash (Avi) jaisa maine app sabko bataya ke Avi apaar alokik shktiyo ka swami hai or veh bhot balshali bhi hai koi bhi yodha ya yeh kahe ki koi bhi shakti uske samne tik nahi paati..:flex1:
Lekin Avi ko ye sab baad mai hi pata chala.
wo ek aam ladko ki tarah hi rehta daily gym karta uske dad ne ghar mai hi apne bachho ke liye gym banwa rakha tha jaha par Avi daily subha jaldi uth kar gym kia karta jisse uske six pack abs bane hue the or sath mai uski body kafi akarshit thi. Avi jaha bhi jata ladkia uspar mar mitti...
Avi ko apni family se bhot pyaar hai....khaaskar apne mom dad se to beintaha pyaar karta hai.. apni humumr behn priya se bhi wo bhot pyaar karta lekin jadatar undono mai bhai-behen ke bich jo choti moti ladai chala karti hai wo chala karti..
Avi or uski family dehradoon ki rehne wali hai or hamare story ke hero ne abhi abhi 12th ke exam diye hai.
Avi ki sister priya bhi ek bhot achhi sharir ki malkin hai.. priya ne apni body ko bhot achhe se maintain kia hai jaha jitna fat hona chahiye utna hai....kul milakar keh sakte hai ki priya ek atom bomb ki tarah hai jo usko dekhle to dekhta hi reh jaye sundar to bhot hai lekin itni sunder ke sath sath uske face par hamesha masumiyat jhalakti hai .....priya bhi apne mom dad se bhot pyaar karti hai pr wo apne bhai se bhi bhot pyaar karti hai kyoki Avi hamesha uski har ichha puri kardia karta...isse wo thori ziddi si hogai hai...jis wajah se agar uske mom dad usko kisi baat ke liye mana karte to wo apne bhai se hi bolkar apni ichha puri karwa hi leti
lekin ziddi ho e ke sath sath wo bhot hi madadgaar ladki hai wo hamesha sabhi madad kia kati hai ...agar koi usse madad maange to wo uski bina madad kiye nhi rehti chahe wo uski pehchaan ka ho ya na ho...ahankaar to usme lesh maatr ka bhi nhi h.
priya ne bhi abhi Avi ke sath sath 12th ke exam diye or abb dono ghar par rehkar apne result Anne or agge ki planning kar rahe hai...
 
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Thankyou mere dosto app sabko mai batana chahunga 12 tarik tak story thora slow chalegi mujhe inn dino kuch kaam hai to app logo se phele hi maafi chahta hu ...aap sab se anurodh hai iss story ko dher sara pyaar dijiyega😘😘😘😘😘
 
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