Adultery THE SUNSHINE.....love cannot be loved (Xforum Xclusive)

[Lord Saint]

Intezaar first update ke liye....

Chapter 1 by Sunday evening

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[Lord Saint]

UPDATE - 1

Ek sunsan sadak pe tej raftar se bhag rahi ek sports car....Lamborghini aventador jise chala raha tha ek ladka jise dekte hi koi bhi bol sakega usne pi raki he utni nasha me bhi vo car ko thek hi chala raha tha jiske ankhon me bas asuon ka dhara beh rahi he.
Car tej raftar se nh44 pe ja rahi thi ...kuch 2-3 ghate baad car jake ek jagah rukti he voh ek lake he... chandigarh ka bahut hi famous sukhna lake ..vo ladka car se utar tha he aur thodi dur jake sunset ko dekta he..
jise dekte hi uski purani yade taja hojati he aur vo suddenly ghutno ke bal ghir jata he aur rone lagta he aur kehta he ...upar wale agar tujme dil naam ki cheez hoti tho mere takdir me itna dukh diya mene bas ek cheez mangi he tumse sacha pyar uske badle kya diya dukh aur sirf dukh...aur rone lagta he
Ye ladka aur koi nahi humari kahani ka main hero - saksham he (saksham ko sakku bulaunga story m)
Sakku- kyu jaan humare pyar me kya kami thi esa dukh deke chali gayi ...akhir kyu kyu.
ye vaky sakku apne mobile me priya humari main heroine ki photo ko dekh kar keh raha he.
Sakku utke sunset ko dekta hua
apni car me se brandy ki bottle nikal kar pine lagta he gata gat 1/4th bottle khali kar deta he aur car me ake bet jata he aur nashe ki vajeh se so jata he...
*Thode samay baat jab vo jaga tho raat ke 10 baj gaye bahar bhayankar tand thi sardiyo ki vajeh se ..kisi tarah vaha se nikal ke hotel pahuch jata tourist spot hone se as pas me hi hotel Pass me mil jati he aur room book karke sedha jake so jata he .sakku ki bhook mar gayi thi us waqt uske ankho me bas asu the . sote waqt alarm lagake sojata he
*subah 5 baje ut jata he fresh hoke ek rajai odke nikal jata he sunrise dekne ek boat hire karta h
*vaha lake ke pass pahunchk boat p bethke sunrise ko dekte hue apne purane din yaad karne lagta he.


sakku ki sunrise

 

[Lord Saint]

First update dediya h friends pakde review dijiye ga

 

[DARK WOLFKING]

nice starting ,,par update bahut chhota tha ..

 

[Naina]

UPDATE - 1

Ek sunsan sadak pe tej raftar se bhag rahi ek sports car....Lamborghini aventador jise chala raha tha ek ladka jise dekte hi koi bhi bol sakega usne pi raki he utni nasha me bhi vo car ko thek hi chala raha tha jiske ankhon me bas asuon ka dhara beh rahi he.
Car tej raftar se nh44 pe ja rahi thi ...kuch 2-3 ghate baad car jake ek jagah rukti he voh ek lake he... chandigarh ka bahut hi famous sukhna lake ..vo ladka car se utar tha he aur thodi dur jake sunset ko dekta he..
jise dekte hi uski purani yade taja hojati he aur vo suddenly ghutno ke bal ghir jata he aur rone lagta he aur kehta he ...upar wale agar tujme dil naam ki cheez hoti tho mere takdir me itna dukh diya mene bas ek cheez mangi he tumse sacha pyar uske badle kya diya dukh aur sirf dukh...aur rone lagta he
Ye ladka aur koi nahi humari kahani ka main hero - saksham he (saksham ko sakku bulaunga story m)
Sakku- kyu jaan humare pyar me kya kami thi esa dukh deke chali gayi ...akhir kyu kyu.
ye vaky sakku apne mobile me priya humari main heroine ki photo ko dekh kar keh raha he.
Sakku utke sunset ko dekta hua
apni car me se brandy ki bottle nikal kar pine lagta he gata gat 1/4th bottle khali kar deta he aur car me ake bet jata he aur nashe ki vajeh se so jata he...
*Thode samay baat jab vo jaga tho raat ke 10 baj gaye bahar bhayankar tand thi sardiyo ki vajeh se ..kisi tarah vaha se nikal ke hotel pahuch jata tourist spot hone se as pas me hi hotel Pass me mil jati he aur room book karke sedha jake so jata he .sakku ki bhook mar gayi thi us waqt uske ankho me bas asu the . sote waqt alarm lagake sojata he
*subah 5 baje ut jata he fresh hoke ek rajai odke nikal jata he sunrise dekne ek boat hire karta h
*vaha lake ke pass pahunchk boat p bethke sunrise ko dekte hue apne purane din yaad karne lagta he.


sakku ki sunrise

kaafi dard bhari suruwat huyi hai kahani ki....
jaha kahani ka naayak yani saksham aaj bhi tadap uth'ta hai jab bhi apni premika priya aur sath bitaye palon ko yaad karta hai...
lagta hai saksham apne mann mein jaane kitna kuch sameta huya hai, jsiko Lord Saint sahab ne shabdon mein khoob roopantaran kiye hai. Jaise wo kirdaar jivant ho ...yeh kitni badi khoobi hai lekhak ki... ki wo readers ko kahani ke paatr ke sath judne ko majbur kar de ,,,, sach mein sakku kitne gahra dard samete hai. . Shayad jis tarah atit ke panno mein kuch anhoni ghatanaye ghati uske sath , Uski priya ke sath...jo ek kabhi na bhoola na paane wali peeda de gayi hai sakku ko, jo aaj bhi uske dil mein peeda deti hai... us peeda aur dard ko shabdon mein bayan karna namumkin hai ,bas as a reader mehsoos kar sakti hun. Jaise ek udaas shaam ka ant ho.... dard ki barshat mein bhigi kuch bhooli bichhidi yaadein ho uski.....
Ye to pata nahi ki atit ke panno mein kya hua sakku ke sath, par jo bhi hua tha wo kaafi tha uski jindagi ko hi jhanjhor ke rakh dene ke liye... Jise ehsaas kar har reader ke dil mein gahrayi mein ek tees si utarti jaaye...
ek sabse aham baat ye bhi hai ki kahani ka naayak bahot hi dharyashil aur sahanshil hai. Warna kayi mamlo mein kabhi kabhi log galat kabam bhi utha lete hai.....

Btw ek badi galti kar raha hai sakku.... jitna wo un puraani yaadon se judi jagah pe jaayega utna hi ushe dard milega....
I think ushe life mein aage badh jaana chahiye...

Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

 

[Naina]

UPDATE - 1

Ek sunsan sadak pe tej raftar se bhag rahi ek sports car....Lamborghini aventador jise chala raha tha ek ladka jise dekte hi koi bhi bol sakega usne pi raki he utni nasha me bhi vo car ko thek hi chala raha tha jiske ankhon me bas asuon ka dhara beh rahi he.
Car tej raftar se nh44 pe ja rahi thi ...kuch 2-3 ghate baad car jake ek jagah rukti he voh ek lake he... chandigarh ka bahut hi famous sukhna lake ..vo ladka car se utar tha he aur thodi dur jake sunset ko dekta he..
jise dekte hi uski purani yade taja hojati he aur vo suddenly ghutno ke bal ghir jata he aur rone lagta he aur kehta he ...upar wale agar tujme dil naam ki cheez hoti tho mere takdir me itna dukh diya mene bas ek cheez mangi he tumse sacha pyar uske badle kya diya dukh aur sirf dukh...aur rone lagta he
Ye ladka aur koi nahi humari kahani ka main hero - saksham he (saksham ko sakku bulaunga story m)
Sakku- kyu jaan humare pyar me kya kami thi esa dukh deke chali gayi ...akhir kyu kyu.
ye vaky sakku apne mobile me priya humari main heroine ki photo ko dekh kar keh raha he.
Sakku utke sunset ko dekta hua
apni car me se brandy ki bottle nikal kar pine lagta he gata gat 1/4th bottle khali kar deta he aur car me ake bet jata he aur nashe ki vajeh se so jata he...
*Thode samay baat jab vo jaga tho raat ke 10 baj gaye bahar bhayankar tand thi sardiyo ki vajeh se ..kisi tarah vaha se nikal ke hotel pahuch jata tourist spot hone se as pas me hi hotel Pass me mil jati he aur room book karke sedha jake so jata he .sakku ki bhook mar gayi thi us waqt uske ankho me bas asu the . sote waqt alarm lagake sojata he
*subah 5 baje ut jata he fresh hoke ek rajai odke nikal jata he sunrise dekne ek boat hire karta h
*vaha lake ke pass pahunchk boat p bethke sunrise ko dekte hue apne purane din yaad karne lagta he.


sakku ki sunrise

इसलिए ..
..इसलिए ये भटकाव अच्छा नहीं इश्क बुरी बला होती है लग जाये तो आसानी से पीछा नहीं छूटता। हम आपको मना तो नहीं कर सकते पर इतना जरुर कहेंगे की प्रीत का स्वाद जो चखा जुबान ने फिर बेगाने हुए जग से समझो.....

 

[Naina]

Waiting for next update

 

[Lord Saint]

इसलिए ..
..इसलिए ये भटकाव अच्छा नहीं इश्क बुरी बला होती है लग जाये तो आसानी से पीछा नहीं छूटता। हम आपको मना तो नहीं कर सकते पर इतना जरुर कहेंगे की प्रीत का स्वाद जो चखा जुबान ने फिर बेगाने हुए जग से समझो.....

Swaad ka hi tho rog h sabko

 

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