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Incest The Hidden King 👑 (fantasy + magic )

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Update 1

hospital main ek mahila
Bad per padi Thi Jo shayad Soo Rahi Thi us mahila ke bagal main ek ( xxx ) Saal ka bacha bi tha Jo roo Raha tha apni maa ki yeh halat dekar rote rote woh bacha bi apni maa ke bagal main wahi sir rakar Soo gaya

Kuch der main waha per ek admi aya aur jaise hi darwaze ki aahat hui woh mahila jaag gayi aur us admi ko dekar gusse se boli

Mahila : tumhari himmat kesi hui Yaha aane ki

Admi : kyun Kya main Yaha Nahin AA Sakta

Mahila : dafa ho Jao yaha se

Admi : main Apne bete ko Lene aya ho

Mahila : yeh tumhara beta Nahin Hain samje Mera beta Hain sirf aur sirf Mera beta

Admi : Kya kar logi Tum uska kyunke tun khud ab Kuch din ki mehman ho phir

Mahila : woh Jo bi Hain Mera apna masla Hain Tum dafa ho Jao yaha se

Admi : thek hain jaa Raha ho waise bi Kuch din bad jab Tum mar jaogi tab to sirf main hi iska Sahara banoga na aur koi to Hain Nahin iska

Mahila : kyun Nahin Hain iska apna itna Bada parivar Hain iska apna nana nani mama Mami Musi bohut log Hain iske Apne

Admi : hahahaha yeh baat Tum bi ache se janti ho ke tumhare parivar ka har ke sadasya is se nafrat karta Hain aur kyun karta Hain yeh Tum ache se janti ho

Mahila : haa janti ho kyunke Maine Apne pita ki baat ko taal kar tuj kese dhoke baaj se shadi ki Thi aur ab iski saza mujhe mil rahi Hain

Admi : kher yeh baat chodo main Kisi meeting main jaa Raha ko Socha tumse milta chalo kyunke Kuch time bad toh Tum Marne wali ho ishi liye Socha milta chalo much madad chahiye ho toh bol Dena

Mahila : tumhari madad Lene se acha Hain ke main mar Jana Pasand karogi samje ab dafa ho jao

Admi : acha Suno toh

Abhi admi itna hi bola tha ke us mahila ne ek batan press kar diya

"Bipppp"

Ki awaz ke Saath do nurses Ander AA gayi aur boli

Nurse 1 : jee mam boliya Kuch Chahiye apko

Mahila : is admi ko dafa karo Yaha se aur aj ke bad usko yaha per aane mat Dena

Nurse 1 : okay mam (palat kar ) chaliye sir ap Bahar Jao please

Admi : are Suno toh Meri baat

Nurse 2 : please sir ap bahar Jao Nahin humko guards ko bulana padega

Admi : okay okay main jaa Raha ho ( mahila se ) bye sweetheart phir mileage

Mahila : woh din ab kabhi Nahin ayega samje

Phir admi waha se Chala jata Hain aur mahila phir se let jati Hain Lekin woh is baat se anjaan Thi ke us Bache ne sari baate sun li Hain

Kher Kuch der bad ek doctor AA jate Hain aur us mahila se bolte Hain

Doctor : hello juhi madam kesi Hain ap

Us mahila ka Naam juhi hain

Juhi : main thek ho doctor

Doctor : Dekho juhi ek waqt aisa tha jab Tumne Meri madad ki Thi ishi liye main Tumhe ek acha advise deta ho tumko ab apna aghe ka ilaj ab USA main Karna Chahiye kyunke agar ab aur der hi gayi toh shayad ao bach Nahin Paigi

Juhi : apki baat thek Hain doctor main Koshish Karti ho agar Kuch ho sakhe toh

Doctor : yahi better Hoga ap ke Liye

Phir doctor waha se Chala jata Hain aur juhi wahi per beth kar soch ne lag jati Hain ke kese jab uske bap ne uske liye ek ladka dunda tha uski shadi ke Liye Lekin juhi ne shadi wale din Apne boyfriend ke Saath baag gayi Thi kareeb 7 Saal ho gaye inki shadi ke aur in 7 saalo main uske apni mehnat se ek business Shuru Kiya tha aur woh safal bi ho gaya tha Lekin uske husband ne usko dhoka dekar uska Sara business Apne Naam per kar diya aur juhi ko devorce de diya us sadme ko juhi bardashat Nahin kar pai aur behosh ho Gai jab aur jab usko hospital main admit Kiya toh juhi ke Kuch aur bi tests kiye gae us main juhi ko pata Chala ke usko cancel Hain ab uske pass paise bi Nahin the kher Kuch le Dee ke jaise bi ho usne apna ilaz jari rakha

Lekin ab juhi ke pass bi paise khatam hone wale the usko Kuch Samaj Nahin AA Rahi Thi ke woh Kya kare

Juhi Apne hi socho main ghum Thi ke uska beta jaag gaya aur apni maa se bola

Beta : mamma mujhe Pani Pina Hain

Lekin juhi apne hi socho main ghum Thi usko Kuch sunai hi Nahin de Raha tha

Toh uska beta usko hilata Hain aur Bolta hain

Beta : mumma mujhe Pani Pina Hain

Juhi : ( hosh main aate hue ) haa haa beta Kya hua

Beta : mujhe Pani Pina Hain

Juhi : botal main khatam ho gaya Hain Tum Jao Bahar se Pani pikar Aao thek Hain

Beta : okay mamma

Aur jaane lagta hain tab juhi phir se usko awaz deti Hain

Juhi : beta idhar Aao

Beta jee mumma

Juhi : beta yeh lo Kuch paise aur Kuch khane le lee kar aana

Aur woh Chala jata Hain Pani pi kar aur Kuch khane ka lekar jab beta aata Hain toh dekha Hain ke uski maa Kisi se phone per baat kar Rahi Hain
Toh beta wahi khada ho jata Hain

Juhi : Nahin papa main aisa Nahin kar sakti

Juhi"father : ***********

Juhi : main Apne bete ke baghir mar jaogi papa please aisa naa boliye

Juhi"father : *************

Juhi : thek Hain papa main Marna Pasand karogi Lekin
Apne bete ko Nahin chodo gi main bye


Phir juhi call cut kar deti Hain
Aur aur jaise hi sir rakti Hain waise hi uska beta Ander AA jata Hain

Juhi : are beta AA gaye Tum

Beta : jee mumma aur yeh Dekho khana bi lekar AA gaya

Juhi : very good phir chalo Aao Yaha per beth kar khana kha lo

Beta : jee mumma

Phir dono maa beta khana khate Hain aur Kuch der pyari Pyari baate karte Hain aur dono Soo Jate Hain jaise hi juhi Soo jati Hain thek waise hi uska beta wapis uth kar apni maa ka phone le leta Hain aur lock open Karne Apne nana ji yani juhi ke papa ko call karta Hain Kuch der bad samne se phone utha leta Hain

Juhi'father : haa bolo phir call kyun ki

Juhi'beta : nana jee main *** bol Raha ho juhi mumma ka beta

Juhi'father : bolo kyun call ki

Juhi'beta : please ap mumma ko bacha lo woh bohut bimar Hain

Juhi'father : thek Hain bacha longa Lekin uske liye Tujhe apni mumma se hamesha hamesha ke Liye chod kar Jana Hoga

Juhi'beta : thek main nana ji main taiyar ho Lekin ap wada kijiye ke ap mumma ko thek kar denge

Juhi'father : wada karta ho main tumhari mumma ko bilkul thek kardoga Lekin Tumhe uske liye hamesha hamesha ke Liye Meri beti aur humari Zindagi se chale Jana Hoga

Juhi'beta : okay nana ji main taiyar ho ap abhi AA Jao mumma ko Lene main jaa Raha ho

Aur call cut kar Dena Hain phir wou ek latter lik kar apni maa ke bagal main rak deta Hain aur chupchap waha se Nikal jata Hain

Kareeb 3 baje jab juhi ki neend kul jati Hain toh woh Apne bete ko naa paa kar gabra jati Hain aur uski idhar udhar dundne lag jati Hain aur Jan juhi ki Nazar us latter per padti Hain toh usko utha leti Hain aur padne lag jati Hain

" In latter "

I'm sorry mumma main apko last bar bye bi Nahin bol paya lekin Meri mujbori Thi kyunke nana ji ne mujse promise Kiya hain ke agar main apki Zindagi se Chala Jao toh woh apko thek kar denge ishi liye main jaa Raha ho aur mujhe dundne ki Koshish mat karna bye

Apka beta *****

Jab juhi yeh latter padti Hain toh usko aisa lagta hain ke Kisi ne uski aatma ki uski jaan se Nikal di ho aur woh latter uske haatho se chut jata Hain aur uske ansoo tapak ne lag jata Hain aur woh turant Bahar ki taraf bag jati Hain yeh soch kar ke Kya pata abhi bi uska beta Kahi Bahar ho jaise hi woh Apne room se Bahar Nikal ti Hain thek waise hi waha per juhi ke father AA jate Hain aur woh usko sambal te hain lekin juhi lagatar rooye jaa Rahi Thi aur Apne bete ja Naam pukar Rahi Thi lekin juhi ke father usko zabardasti Apne Saath Lekin kar chale jate Hain aur yeh seen juhi ka beta Kuch Dori per chup kar dek Raha tha aur woh bi rone lag jata Hain


~~aj ke Liye itna hi ~~~~

Agar koi galti ho gayi Hain toh sorry and Pasand aye toh like aur comment lazmi Karna







Congratulations and a very nice start.
 

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Ab aghe hero ki zubani

Jab Maine maa ko jate hue dekha toh bohut duk hua mujhe magar main rone ke ilawa Kuch kar Nahin paa Raha tha kyunke nana ji ne wada Kiya tha ke agar main maa ko chod kar Chala Jao toh woh maa ko bacha lenge ishi waja se mere naa chahte hue bi maa ko chod kar Jana pad Raha hain kher main Kuch der wahi kadha raha phir waha se Chala gaya railway station ki taraf jaha bohut Ziyada bid Thi aur waha per ek train 🚂 kadi thi aur main bi chal kar us train 🚆 main Chad gaya aur ek side main beth gaya Kuch der main train 🚆 chal padhi aur Kuch der bad Tickets check Karne ke liye jab tc aya magar main wahi per sone la natak Karne Laga kyunke bale hi Meri age CHOTI Thi magar galti se bi agar TC yeh poch leta toh main Kya Bolta ke main Kiske Saath aya ho ishi liye maine sone ka natak Kiya Lekin Kuch der bad mujhe Sach much ki neend AA gayi aur much pata hi Nahin Chala ke main kab Soo gaya ho aur Meri neend sidhe subhe kuli jab dekha toh train 🚆 ek station per kadhi Thi toh main train se niche utar kar idhar udhar dekha lwkin Kuch Samaj Nahin ayi ke konsi jagha Hain toh Maine waha Kisi se pocha toh pata Chala ke yeh Mumbai Hain tohain station se Bahar AA gaya aur idhar udhar dekha toh Kuch Samaj Nahin aya ke Kya karo toh main chal padha Bahar ki taraf Kuch der chalne ke bad Maine ek dabha dekha kaha per log nishta kar Rahe the usko dekar mujhe bo bohut bok lag gayi aur main bi ushi taraf chal padha

Lekin problem yeh Thi ke mere pass paise Nahin the toh main wahi per chup kar beth gaya aur jaise hi us dabhe ke Malik ki Nazar dusri taraf gayi toh Maine jaldi se waha per rakhe parathe utha Liye aur wahi per chup kar beth gaya dekha toh 2 parathe mere haath lag gaye the aur main jaldi se beth kar wahi per khane laga ek paratha pura kha gaya aur dusra abhi adha hi gaya tha ke dabhe ke Malik ne mujhe pakad Liya aur mujhe Marne Laga

Malik : oyee Teri himmat kesi hui chori Karne ki

Main : bok lagi Thi aur kalse Kuch Nahin kaya Hain

Malik : acha Lekin main Kya karo agar tujhe book lagi Hain toh

Aur yeh kehkar woh Malik mujhe phir se Marne Laga Lekin tabhi waha per ek admi adhe aya aur us Malik ko pakad kar Piche dakel diya aur mujhe Apne Saath laga Liya

Admi : are yeh Kya kar Rahe ho koi aisa bi karta Hain Bache ke Saath

Malik : acha phir Tum hi batao kese karte Hain ek toh chori uper se seena zori

Admi : are Mera Matlab hai. Ke yeh bacha Hain bhok ladies Hogi becare ko

Malik : acha aur Mera Jo nukshan hua Hain uska Kya kon dega woh

Admi : Me de Dunga bolo kitna paise Hain

Malik paise batata Hain aur admi paise de deta Hain phir woh admi mujko Apne Saath lekar Chala jata Hain aur rishte main mujse Bolta hain

Admi : beta Naam Kya hai. Tumhara

Main : uncle Mera Naam "SURYA" Hain

Admi : acha tumhare maa bap kaha Hain

Main : main anath ho

Admi : oooo chalo koi baat nahin aj se Tum Mera Saath rahoge thek Hain Mera bete ban kar

Main : thek Hain uncle

Admi : uncle Nahin aj se Tum mujhe papa bologe thek Hain

Main : thek Hain papa

Admi : Tum school jate ho Kya

Main : haan uncle main 1st class tak padha ho

Admi : chalo koi baat nahin ab Tum mere bete ho toh aj se mere Saath rahoge aur mere bacho ke Saath school jaoge thek Hain

main : thek Hain papa

Admi : good chalo ab

Phir hum ishi tarha baate karte hue uske Ghar AA gaye

Short intro

Sanjay Agarwal (33)
Yeh ek bank employee Hain

Santi Agarwal (30)
Yeh ek housewife hain inke 2 bete aur ek beti Hain

1st beta Vikram (***)
Yeh school main 2nd class main Hain

2nd beti mehar (***)
1s class main Hain

3rd beta Manav (***)
Isne abhi school join Nahin Kiya hain

Jaise hi main aur woh admi Ghar main enter karte Hain toh samne se ek aunty ki Nazar hum per padti Hain toh woh foran humari taraf AA jati Hain aur bolti Hain

Aurat : are Sanjay ap wapis kyun aa gaye Kuch chahiye Kya

Sanja : are Nahin Kuch Nahin santi main isko (Meri taraf ishara karte hue ) Ghar tak chodne aya tha

Santi : Kon Hain yeh pyara bacha

Phir Sanjay usko sab Kuch Bata deta Hain jisko sunkar Santi Ko duk hota Hain aur mujhe gale Laga kar kehti Hain

Santi : beta aj se Tum mujhe maa kehna

Main : thek Hain maa

Santi : chalo Tumhe bhok lagi Hogi Chalo nishta karo

Sanjay : acha Santi Suno main jaa Raha ho Bache sab kaha Hain

Santi : Vikram aur mehar school gaye Hain aur manav Bahar gaya Hain kelne

Sanjay : thek Hain main jaata ho bye apna aur surya ka kayal rakna thek Hain

Santi : thek Hain jee ap bi apna kayal rakna bye


Next update main leap ayega aur ho Sakta kuch aur bi ho thank you



~~aj ke Liye itna hi ~~

Agar koi galti ho gayi Hain toh sorry Pasand aye toh like aur comment lazmi dena








Nice start of a new life
 

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Ek or adhuri story jo Puri hote hote rahe gyi
Abhi bhai update nhi doge kya
adhuri nahi chodi story bhai Ne abhi kuch time pehle kaha tha woh dunki marker Turkey jaa raha hain ap sab logo Ko be Iran ke halat pata hain aur yeh becara Iran ke capital Tehran main pass gaya hain 3 month ho gaya hain ab naa ghar aa sakta hain aur naa aghe jaa sakta hain aur Iran ke internet bi band hain ishi liye bhai se koi contact bi nahi ho raha hain I hope ap Sab samaj sakt
 
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10 year later :-
Aise hi samay bitne Laga aur dekte hi dekte 10 Saal guzar gaye Kisi
Ko pata hi Nahin Chala
Vikram manav aur mehar Jo surya ko Pasand Nahin karte the ab usko Apni jaan se bi ziyada Pyar karte the aur Santi maa bi bohut Pyar Karti Hain aur Sanjay ka toh pocho hi mat
Jaha in 10 saalo main surya ko apno ka bohut Pyar Mila wahi surya ko Apne school main ek ladki se Pyar ho gaya tha aur Sahi time dek kar surya ne usko propose bi kar diya aur us ladki ne accept bi kar diya aur dono ek dusre se Pyar Karne Laga surya bi us ladki ko bohut sare ache ache gift diya aur din bar ise baate karta rehta aur Raat ko uske khayalo main rehta infact surya use itna Pyar karta tha ke ek bar usko bacha ne ke Liye 5 gundo se akele lad padha aur un gundo ki achi kasi dulai kardi
Lekin kehna Hain na ke waqt badalne main der Nahin lagti wahi mere Saath hua
Yeh baat tab ki Hain jab main Apne 12th ka result Lene school gaya tha main us din bohut khush tha kyunke is bar
Mere Bhai Vikram ne pure State main top Liya tha 98% ke Saath aur main sirf 2 mark se state top Karne se reh gaya mujhe duk toh hua lekin khushi bi bohut hui ke Mere Bhai ne state top kiya hain
Kher jab main result lekar jaa Raha ke tabhi mujhe Kisi se Piche se awaz lagai jab Maine Piche mud kar dekha toh yeh koi aur Nahin Meri jaan Thi jis se main bohut ziyada Pyar karta tha main foran uske pass gaya toh woh boli
(Doston main abhi ladki ka Naam Nahin likhoga iska intro bad main Hoga okay)
Ladki : mujhe tumse baat Karni Hain
Main : Kya baat Karni Hain
Ladki : woh main woh woh
Main : woh woh Kya baat hain acha chodo jaan yeh Dekho Mera result kitna acha aya Hain
Ladki : mujhe tumse kuch zarori baat Karti Hain
Main : Kya baat Karni hain Bolo
Ladki : mujhe tumhare Saath ab Nahin rehna
Yeh sunkar mujhe ek zordar bijli ka jatka laga
Aur main bola
Main : Kya baat hain mujse koi galti ho gayi Hain Kya
Ladki : Nahin tumse koi galti Nahin hui Hain Lekin ab main is relation main Nahin reh sakti
Main : Lekin kyun waja Kya Hain
Ladki : waja Hain aukat
Tumhare aur mere bech Zameen asman ka fark Hain
Yeh sunkar mujhe ek jatka laga aur mere ansoo dar dar behne Laga toh woh boli
Ladki : kaha main ek rajkumari ki tarha jeene wali aur kaha Tum ek gareeb Tumne Socha bi kese ke main tuj kese 2 Kodi ke ladke ke Saath Pyar kar sakti ho Pyar to dor ki baat Hain main to tujhe apna noukar bi naa rakho
Main bilkul chupchap wahi kada tha ek sabd bi mere moo se Kuch bi Nahin nilkal Raha tha air mere ansoo Nikal Rahe the
Ladki : jante bi ho main Kon Hain Mera standad Kya Hain main amit Singhania ki beti ho air Tum ne soch bi kese liya ke main tuj se Pyar kar sakti ho
Itna time se main chup tha akhir Maine himmat Karke bol diya
Main : lelelekin woh wada Jo Tum ne Kiya tha uska Kya
Ladki : bad main jaye tera wada aur Maine Tere Saath sirf is liye Pyar ka natak Kiya tha take mujhe Yaha ek guard mil sakhe kyunke Yaha per kutte bohut hote Hain muj jaisi beautiful ladki ko chedne ke liye samje aur ajke bad mere Piche mat aana yeh lo tere gifts Jo tune diye tha sab hain aj ke bad mujse kabhi bi Milne ki Koshish mat karna samji
Yeh kehkar woh waha se chali gayi aur main wahi per guttno ke bal beth kar zor zor se rone Laga
Abhi main roo hi Raha tha ke tabhi Mera phone bajne Laga Lekin Maine koi deyan Nahin diya aur call Apne ap cut ho gayi aur jaise hi call cut hoi toh phir phone bajne Laga is bar main toda sambal gaya aur apna phone utha kar dekha toh Vikram Bhai ki call Thi yeh dekar maine foran call utha li toh samne se Vikram bola
Vikram : kaha Hain tu
Main : kyun Kya hua Bhai
Vikram : papa aur mehar Manav ka accident hua Hain jaldi se city hospital AA jaa
Yeh sunte hi main bohut ziyada gabra gaya aur foran call cut kardi aur phone Apne jeb main dal diya aur waha se Bahar aa kar ek auto main beth gaya aur foran city hospital ponch gaya waha jaa kar dekha toh waha per Vikram Bhai aur Santi maa kadi thi
Main : Bhai papa kese Hain doctor Kya Keh Rahe Hain
Vikram : abhi operation chal Raha hain Kuch pata nahin Hain
Yeh sunkar mujhe bohut duk hua aur main waha se Santi maa ke pass jaakar beth gaya aur unse bola
Main : maa please ap hosla rakhiye sab thek ho Jayega
Lekin santi maa Kuch Nahin boli kareeb 1 gante ke bad doctor ICU se Bahar aya toh hum sab bag kar doctor ke pass gaye toh maa doctor se boli
Santi maa : kya hua doctor sab thek toh Hain na
Doctor : I'm sorry hum ne Apke bete aur beti ko bacha Liya Hain Lekin Apke husband coma main chale gaye Hain
"KYA "
aur yeh kehte hi Santi maa Behosh ho gayi
Humne foran maa ko waha se ek room main sift Kiya aur doctor ne usko ek injection Laga diya aur bole
Doctor : ap inko rest Karne dejiye okay
Phir doctor waha se chale gaye aur main aur Vikram Bhai wahi per beth gaye
Aise hi Raat ho gayi aur Raat se subhe kareeb 8 baje ek inspector waha AA gaya aur bole
Inspector : hello bacho kese ho Tum dono
Vikram Bhai aur main : thek Hain sir
Inspector : ap dono main se surya Kon Hain
Main : jee inspector sir main ho surya my n Kya hua
Inspector : woh Kya Hain na ke jis ne Apke father ka accident kiya tha usko humne pakad Kiya hain
Vikram : Kya Sach main inspector usko chodna mat
Inspector : thek Hain lekin woh Keh Raha tha ke surya ne usko mara tha aur ishi liye humne uska accident kiya hain
Aur yeh sunkar main khud shock ho gaya
Main : Kya woh jhot bol Rahe Hain
Inspector : ha humko bi yahi Laga lekin humne jab hum ne poch tach ki
Toh sab Sach tha
Inspector : xxx location per Apne unko mara tha Kuch yad Hain apko
Jaise hi inspector ne us jaga ka naam Liya thek waise hi mujhe sab Kuch Samaj AA gaya ke woh Kon the toh main bola
Main : haa inspector sir us time Maine hi mara tha unko kyunke woh log ek ladki ke Saath galat Karne wale the toh
Inspector : okay koi baat nahin ab hum chalte Hain hum apko yahi batane aye the ke humne unko pakad Liya
Hain ab hum chalte Hain
Main : okay sir bye
Phir inspector waha se Chala gaya abhi inspector waha se gaye hi the ke achanak Kisi ne mujhe kande se pakad kar Piche ki taraf mudha aur ek zordar
"Chaataakkk"
Tapad itni zor ka the ke mujhe din main hu tare Nazar aane Lage
Is hue achanak hamse ne Vikram Bhai bi shock ho gaya tabhi ek awaz gunj utha
"Toh Tum ho woh jiski waha se mere husband aur Bache aj is halat main Hain "
Yeh lafz kehne wali aur koi Nahin balke Meri Santi maa Thi
Main : Nahin maa woh main
Santi maa ( gusse main) : Kya woh main sab Kuch sun Liya Hain Maine Tumhari waja se aj in teeno ki yeh halat Hain
Vikram Bhai : maa ek bar baat toh Suno Meri
Santi maa : Kya Suno main jaa bol sab Kuch sun chuki ho main aur ab mujhe jhoot bolne ki Koshish mat karna samje
Santi maa : kyun Kiya Tumne aisa ( yeh Keh kar mujhe ek aur tapad jad diya ) jante bi ho yeh wahi Sanjay tha jis ne tab Teri ungli pakadi Thi jab tera koi Nahin tha yeh wahi mehar Hain jisne hamesha Apne hisse ka khana tujhe diya aur Tere hisse ki mar usne Kai Hain
Santi maa : aur aj Teri waja se us sabki yeh halat Hain
Santi maa : lekin ab Nahin Chala jaa Yaha se ab main Teri sakal (face ) bi Nahin dekna Chahti bagwan ke Liye Chala jaa Yaha se aur kabhi bi mat aana wapis
Yeh bol kar santi maa ne mujhe dakha de diya waha se main bi bohut Kuch kehna Chahta tha Santi maa ko Lekin Keh Nahin paya aur chupchap ansoo bahate hue waha se Nikal gaya Piche se Vikram Bhai awaze deta tha Lekin Maine koi jawab Nahin diya jab aane ki Koshish ki toh Santi maa ne usko kasam de di ke woh mujhe roke Nahin
Main hospital se sidhe Ghar aa gaya aur Apne Kuch kapde aur documents ek bag main rak Liye aur waha se Nikal gaya Lekin mujhe oata Nahin tha ke jaha Jaana Hain kyunke mere pass paise bi Nahin the kher jaise taise Karke woh din adjust Kiya
Aur agle din mujhe bok bi bohut lagi Thi toh main Nikal gaya Kisi Kam ko dundne

Kam dundte dundte main ek Kuch dor Nikal jata ho aur phir main us jungle se jitni jaldi ho sakhe toh waha se Nikal na tha kyunke kaha jaata Hain ke is jungle main aj tak Jo bi gaya Hain woh zinda wapis Nahin aaya Hain

Abhi main us jungle se aghe bad hi Raha the ke achanak

"SURYA "
"OO SURYA "

Aisi awaz ayi mujhe aisa Laga ke koi mujhe awaz de Raha Hain

Jab us taraf dekha toh waha per koi jungle ke Ander ki taraf koi jaa Raha tha yeh dekar main dar gaya aur sochne Laga

Main : (man me ) akhir yeh Kon Hain Jo is jungle ki ander jaa Raha have n jabke isko pata bi Hain ke Yaha per sirf mout hi mout milte Hain

Main : shayad isko pata naa ho ke yeh jungle main Bhoot Rehte Hain Kya karo Bacho ya Nahin aur woh Ander kar Kya Raha hain

Main : ek bar dekar ssta ho Kya oata rasta batak gaya ho kyun na usko bacha lo aur jaldi se wapis AA Jao haa yahi thek Hain

Yeh soch kar main bagkar jungle ke Ander Chala gaya aur dekha ke waha koi Nahin Hain jab idhar udhar dekha toh koi NAHI n dek Raha tha lekin n achanak hi Meri Nazar niche pad gayi toh dekha ke waha per bohut sare pairo ke nish Hain

Yeh dekar main un pairo ke Nishan ka Piche Piche chalne Laga

Kareeb 1 gante tak us pairo ke Nishan ke Piche karte karte jab waha tak poncha toh samne dekha ke waha per ek gufa Hain Jo ek ajeeb se Hain

Pahle toh socha ke wapis Chala Jao lekin phir Socha ke Yaha tak AA gaya ho toh aghe bi dekte hain

Yahi soch kar jab main us gufa ke Ander Chala gaya Kuch der chalne ke bad waha per Rasta khatam ko gaya aas pass dekha toh waha per kuch Nahin Mila

Kareeb 30 minute dundne ke bad mujhe waha per ek darwaza Mila Jo bilkul is gufa main Jo Matti Thi us jaise dekne se pata ho Nahin chalta me yeh matti Hain ya darwaza

Khair maine us darwaze ko kol kar jaise hi ander inter hua toh dar ke mare tar tar kampne Laga aur mere mate se pasinaa aane Laga


~~aj ke Liye itna hi ~~


Agar koi galti ho gayi Hain toh sorry aur Pasand aye toh like aur comment lazmi dena

Nice update
 

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Kareeb 30 minute dundne ke bad mujhe waha per ek darwaza Mila Jo bilkul is gufa main Jo Matti Thi us jaise dekne se pata ho Nahin chalta me yeh matti Hain ya darwaza

Khair maine us darwaze ko kol kar jaise hi ander inter hua toh dar ke mare tar tar kampne Laga aur mere mate se pasinaa aane Laga


Ab aghe !

Kyunke jaha main kada tha waha se Kuch duri per bohut sare snake 🐍 the Snake itne ziyada the ke ginna mumkin hi Nahin tha

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Snake bohut katarnak lag Rahe the unke kule hue moo ko dek kar jism main khud ba khud kamp sa gaya

Ek pal ke Liye mere dimag main aya ke main wapis Chala Jao Yaha se aur main jaisa hi mudda toh mujhe ek ajeeb ehsas sa hone laga mujhe aisa lag Raha tha ke Mano Yaha koi Hain Jo mujhe pukar Raha Hain aur achanak pata nahin mujhe Kya hua aur mujhe Kya sujhi ke main wapis Piche ghum gaya aur dekne Laga ke aghe Kaise jaya jaa Sakta Hain jab Maine deyan se dekha toh waha per snake ke pass ek Bada ka pathar pada tha aur thek snake ke bich main uper se niche ek rassi latak Rahi Thi aur use aghe ek chota sa pillar bana hua tha in sabko dekar mere chahre per ek muskan AA gayi aur main bag kar us taraf gaya jaha snake tha aur waha per ek Bada sa pathar pada tha us per pair rak kar ek log jump Laga Liya aur jaise hi main niche aane Laga tab mera haath us rassi tak ponch gaya aur Maine usko pakad kar julte hue aghe gaya aur us chote se piller per ek pair rak kar aghe jump Laga Liye aur maim safely niche land ho gaya yeh dekar main bohut khush ho gaya aur main aghe bad gaya


Jaise jaise main aghe bad Raha tha waise waise mujhe dar lag Raha tha ke ab aghe Kya Hoga Kuch pata nahin tha mujhe

Jaise hi main aghe aya toh dekha waha per bohut Sara gold pada hua tha

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Jisko dekar ek bar toh mere man me bi lalach AA gaya ke yeh sab Kuch main Apne Saath le Jao Lekin pata nahin mujhe aisa Kya aur ke main itne sare gold ko bi ignore Karke aghe bad gaya

Toh main ab aghe Chala gaya aur jaha per gold pada tha use jagha se aghe Chala gaya aur eb main ek Haal main AA gaya Maine aas pass dekha toh yeh jagha bilkul Khali tha ass pass dekha toh Jab Maine Lekin Kuch Nazar Nahin aaya toh achanak Meri Nazar uper gayi toh main shock main Jo gaya

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Waha per ek Chirag rakha hua tha Jo chamak Raha tha jisko dek kar ek bar mujhe aisa Laga ke Mano main koi Sapna dek Raha ho Lekin main Maine Apne ap per chutki kati toh Yaqeen ho gaya ke yeh Sapna Nahin Hain toh main aghe bad gaya aur Chirag ko utha ne ke Liye haath lagaya toh mere haath main bohut jalad hone lagi aur todi der bad jab Maine Chirag ko utha Liya aur usko dekne Laga

Todi der bad dekne ke bad Maine Socha aur apni Kismat azmane ke Liye us Chirag ko jisne Laga todi der tak jab Maine us jadui Chirag ko gisne ke bad us Chirag se neele 🔵 rang ka duwa Nikal ne Laga jisko dek kar main dar gaya aur Chirag mere haath se niche gir gaya aur main dar ke mare Piche ho gaya todi der tak duwa Nikal Raha tha uske bad duwa nikalna band ho gaya aur us duwe ne Deere Deere ek bohut badi Akriti main badalne lagi
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Aur phir us Akriti ne ek jinn ka Roop le Liya jis ko dekar main aur bi bohut ziyada dar gaya aur dar ke mare behosh ho gaya

Mujhe is tarha behosh hota dekar jinn muskurane laga aur uske bad .main behosh ho gaya


Wahi jaise hi surya behosh ho gaya tabhi uper aakas main ek tez Roshni hui tabhi
Ek awaz gunji

Awaz : akhir kar Tum Azad ho gaye

Jinn : jee mahaguru Apke ashirwad se main ek bar phir se Azad ho gaya ho

Awaz : Hume khushi hui Tumhe dekar Lekin yad rakna phir se Tum AUR surya Pichli bar ki tarha galti mat karna

Jinn : ap nischit Rahe is bar hum se koi galti Nahin Hogi

Awaz : yahi Sahi rahega aur haa jitni jaldi ho sakhe surya ke Jeevan ki Yatra ka aramb karwao kyunke agar woh phir se Apne kidd se Azad ho gaya toh agar tridev bi Kuch Nahin kar payege

Jinn : ap Sahi Keh Rahe Hain bohut jald main sab thek kar dunga kyunke agar aj main aur mere aaka Yaha per Meri galti ki waja se hua

Awaz : haa Sahi kaha tumhari galti AUR surya ki nadani se surya ko ab prem ke Saath Kuch aur bi sakhana Hoga apko

Jinn : jaisa ap kahe

Awaz : ab hum chalte Hain surya putra ka deyan rakna

Jinn : ap nischit Rahe mahaguru pranam

Awaz : Vijaybava


Phir awaz aani band ho jati Hain phir jinn surya ko dekar Bolta hain

Jinn : aaka aj bi ap me chahre per woh bolapan aur prem chalakta Hain Jo pahle tha mujhe maaf Karna Meri waja se apki aj yeh halat Hain Lekin ab ki bar main aisa Nahin hone Dunga

Phir jinn ek chutki bajata hain aur surya ko dere dere apni ankheen kul ta Hain aur kada hokar aas pass dekta hain toh achanak uski Nazar us Jin per padti Hain toh surya phir se dar jata Hain

Surya ko is tarha darta dekhkar jinn halka sa muskurata hain aur phir Bolta hain

Jinn : are are ap dariye mat aaka main apka gulam ho apko mujse darni ki koi zarorat Nahin Hain

Surya : ddddekho mmmujhe jaane do waarna mainnnn apppko chooddo gaaa Nahin

Jinn : are Maine kaha na ap mat dariye mujse main apka gulam ho main apka har Aadesh manoga

Surya yeh sunkar pahle khush hota Hain phir Bolta hain

Surya : Kya Tum Sach Keh Rahe ho

Jinn : haa aaka main Sach Keh Rahe ho agar Yaqeen Nahin AA Rahe Hain toh ap Aadesh kijiye

Surya : Hhhmmmmm toh thek Hain mujhe bohut buk lagi Hain mujhe khana khana Hain

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Apne samne itna Sara khana dekar surya ki buk aur ziyada bad gayi aur woh tut padha khana per aur pura table Khali kardi usne kyunke surya ko bohut ziyada buk lagi Thi

Khana khane ke bad jinn sab Kuch gayab kar deta Hain aur phir jinn surya se Bolta hain

Jinn : aaka ab hum chale Yaha sr

Surya : kyun Kya hua

Jinn : aaja yeh gufa ab nisht hone wali Hain

Surya : kyaaa Lekin kyun aur kese

Jinn : aaka yeh gufa sirf mere is jadui Chirag ki waja se Sahi salamat kadi thi warna kab ki vir gayi hoti

Surya : Lekin jayege kaha yahi Samaj Nahin AA Raha hain

Jinn : Matlab main samji Nahin

Surya : Mera is dunya main koi Nahin Hain toh kaha raho

Jinn : maf karna aaka Lekin apko ab mere kayal se apni maa ke pass wapis chale Jana chahiye

Surya ko ek jatka lagta hain aur Bolta hain

Surya : apko kese pata Meri maa ke bare main

Jinn : (jhoot bolte hue ) maaf Karna aaka jab ao behosh the tab maine apki sari yaade pad li aur dek bi li ishi liye mujhe sab pata hain

Surya : yeh Tumne acha Nahin Kiya

Jinn : maff Karna aaka galti ho gayi

Surya : chalo maaf Liya Lekin agli bar aisa mat karna

Jinn : thek Hain aaka

Surya : acha jab pata chal gaya Hain phir bi bol Rahe ho ke maa ke pass chale Jao jabke Maine nana ji se Kya waha Kiya tha tumko pata Hain na

Jinn : haa aaka mujhe pata Hain lekin ab woh badal gaye Hain

Surya : acha aur apko kese pata

Jinn : acha apko Yaqeen Nahin Hain na toh thek Hain ap khud hi jaa kar dek lo apni ankhoo se agar woh Sach main badal gaye Hain toh so sabko Sach Bata Dena aur aur mahine badala toh wapis chale Jana

Surya : shayad Tum thek Keh Rahe ho mujhe Kam se Kam Ek bar dek Lena Chahiye aur agar mahin bi badle toh Kam se Kam Ek akri baar maa ko toh dek lunga na

Jinn : haa main bi toh yahi Keh Raha ho

Surya : thek Hain main taiyar ho jaane ke Liye



~~aj ke Liye itna hi ~~~


Pasand aye toh like aur comment lazmi dena agar koi galti hui Hain toh maaf Karna thank you






Mast likh rahe ho bhai. Nice update
 

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Ab aghee!!!
Main : Tum ek Kam karo mujhe batao ke is waqt Meri maa kaha Hain aur Kya kar Rahi Hain aur Kon Kon Hain uski family main
Jinn : thek Hain aaqa
Introduction
Veer Singh Raghuvanshi (dadaji )
Veer Singh ji ko sab log raja Sahab ke Naam se bulate Hain kyunke yeh suryanagar ( Jo farzi Naam Hain real main Hain ya Nahin pata nahin Hain aur agar Hain toh iske aas pass 52 gao Hain ya Nahin pata nahin ) aur uske aas pass ke 52 gao ke raja Hain Yaha ke sab log isko devta ki tarha pojte Hain aur iske Saath hi pure Rajasthan per iski hukumat Hain
Maya Singh Raghuvanshi ( dadi ji ) yeh house wife Hain inke 3 bete Hain aur 2 betiya Hain
Vinod Singh Raghuvanshi ( veer Singh ji ka Bada beta )
Yeh kehne ko toh businessman Hain Lekin Sach yeh Hain ke yeh underworld ka don Hain
Santi Singh Raghuvanshi (Vinod Singh ki wife )
Apne husband ke har ache Bure Kam main Saath deti Hain aur inka 1 beta Hain aur 2 betiya Hain
Vikram ( age 22 ) yeh Dil ke bohut ache Hain bilkul Apne dadaji ki tarha
Sapna ( age 21 ) college student
Sonia (age 20 ) college student
Rekha Thakur ( veer Singh ki Badi beti )
Sanjeev Thakur ( Rekha ke husband )yeh ek businessman Hain
Inke 2 betiya Hain
Ishita Thakur (age 20 ) college student
Diya Thakur (age 19 ) college student
Sakti Singh Raghuvanshi (veer Singh ka dusra beta)
Isne shadi bohut late ki Thi kyunke yeh pahle Apna business ke Liye London chale gaye the iski shadi iske chote Bhai ke Saath hui thi aur yeh Apne step son hmse bohut pyar karte Hain hamesha uski dundnlte Rehte Hain lekin aj tak usko Nahin mile
Juhi Singh Raghuvanshi (sakti Singh ki wife )
Yeh hamesha chupchap Rehti Hain koi Kuch Piche toh haa ya naa main Jawad deti Hain iski shadi ke bad aj tak yeh wapis Apne Mayke Nahin gayi Hain Inka sirf ek beta Hain
Surya Singh Raghuvanshi (age 18 ) ( hero of the story)
Rakhi Sharma (veer Singh ki dusri beti )

Jitesh Sharma ( Rakhi ke husband) businessman Hain
Inka ek beta Hain aur 2 betiya Hain
Yash Sharma (age 20 ) college student Hain
Dipali (age 19 ) yeh dono judwa Hain college student
Mitali (age 19 ) yeh dono judwa Hain college student
Paramveer Singh Raghuvanshi ( veer Singh ka 3ra beta ) yeh Apne bade bhai Vinod Singh ke har ache Bure Kam main uska Saath deta Hain
Purvi Singh Raghuvanshi ( paramveer Singh ki wife ) inki sirf ek beti Hain
Shivani (age ***) 11th pad Rahi Hain
Nana ji ke Ghar ka intro
Digvijay Thakur ( nana jee)
Chaya Thakur (nani jee)
Inke 2 bete Hain aur 3 betiya Hain
Rakesh Thakur ( Digvijay ka pahla beta )
inka family business Hain woh sambal the Hain
Bela Thakur ( Rakesh ki wife )
Inke 2 betiya Hain
Manisha ( age 20 ) College student
Rashmi (age 19 ) college student
Juhi Singh Raghuvanshi (digvijay ki beti )
Sakti Singh Raghuvanshi (juhi ke husband)
Inka 1 beta Hain
Surya singh Raghuvanshi


Trisha Verma ( digvijay ki beti )
Tilak Verma ( Trisha ka husband ) Inka 1 beta Hain
Vinay Verma (age 20 ) college student Hain Lekin galat friendship main rehkar ab yeh bi gunde jaisa ho gaya Hain
Mahesh Thakur ( digvijay ka 2ra beta )
Madhu Thakur ( Mahesh ki wife ) inke 2 betiya Hain
Priya ( age 19 ) college student

Laxmi ( age 18 ) college student
Kamini Kapoor ( digvijay ki 2ri beti )
Sanjay Kapoor ( Kamini ke husband
Inki 2 betiya Hain
Swara ( age 19 ) yeh dono judwa Hain college student
Ragini (age 19 )yeh dono judwa Hain college student
Abhi aur bi characters Hain jinka intro story ke Saath Saath hota rahega
Main : acha Lekin abhi bi baat wahi Hain hum aisa hi toh Nahin jaa sakte na ke maa main sa gaya apka beta surya with Yaqeen Nahin karenge
Jinn : haa aaqa aur ap abhi jaa bi Nahin sakte
Main : Kyun Nahin jaa Sakta
Jinn : woh ishi liye Raghuvanshi bohut taqatvar parivar Hain aur uske bohut sare dusman Hain aur ek dusman Apne dusman ki jankari zaror rakta Hain aise main usko Raghuvanshi parivar ke har sadasya ke bare main pata hoga toh woh Sahi time dekar war zaror karega
Main : haan Tum Sahi Keh Rahe ho ab mujhe chup kar Apne family ke har dusman ki khatam Karna Hoga
Jinn : haa aaqa aur Raghuvanshi parivar ka sabse Bada dusman Hain Pawan Thakur yeh aur vinod dono crime pathner Hain Lekin iske ilawa Pawan pure Raghuvanshi parivar ko khatam Karna Chahta Hain
Main : Matlab humara sabse pahla target yeh Hain
Jinn : haa aaqa aur ek bi Hain
Main : Vinod Singh Raghuvanshi yahi naa
Jinn : haa aaqa
Main : uske liye toh main special Kuch soch kar rakhuga
Jinn : thek Hain aaqa
Main : jinn Kya aisa ho Sakta Hain ke Tum Apne Jadu se fighting aur marshal art sab Kuch sikha do
Jinn : haa aaqa ho Sakta Hain aaqa mere pahle wale aaqa ko is bramhand ki har fight aati Thi Lekin uske ek dusman ne ek aisi chal Chali ke uske apno ne hi usko mar diya usne Marne se pahle apni fighting aur marshal art ka Sara gyaan mujhe diya tha woh main apko dek sakta ho
Main : toh thek Hain jaldi se do
Jinn : thek Hain aaqa ap apni ankheen band kar lo
Phir Maine apni ankheen band kardi aur jinn ne ek mantra padha aur mere head 🗣️ per haath rakha
Aur mantra padne lada
Dere dere mere dimag main sab Kuch aane Laga aur mere sir main bi Dard Karne Laga
Kareeb 2 minutes bad usne apna haath mere head 🗣️ se jata Liya aur bola
Jinn : aaqa ho gaya Hain ab apni ankheen kholo
Phir Main apni ankheen kolta ho aur mere dimag main har tarha ki fight aur marsal art ki sab teck nek AA jati Hain aur main bohut khush hits ho aur Bolta ho
Main : thank you jinn Tumne Meri bohut help ki Hain
Jinn : koi baat nahin waise ek baat main apko Batana bol gaya aaqa
Main : konsi baat
Jinn : woh Sara gold Jo apko Mila tha na gufa main with sab apka ho Chuka Hain
Main ( khushi se chillate hue ) kyaaa sachhh mainnn
Jinn : haa aaqa
Main : Lekin kese
Jinn : aaqa is dunya main bohut se logo ne mujhe hasil Karni ki koshish ki Hain Lekin jab bi with us gufa tak ponchte main usko gold ki lalach de deta aur woh gold lekar chale jate Lekin jab Aao aye toh apne aisa Nahin Kiya balke Apne mujhe chunna ishi liye woh sab apka hua
Main : thank you jinn tumhari waja se yeh sab hua Hain
Jinn : ( man me ) maaf Karna aaqa Main ao se jhoot bol Raha ho woh sab apka Hain aur apka hi rahege aur woh Jo fight Maine Apke Jadu se apki dimag main Dala tha woh sab Apke dimag main pahle se tha Jo Apke Piche janm se Maine sirf apko yad Dilla Hain
Main : Kya soch rahe ho jinn
Jinn : Kuch Nahin aaqa chaliye ab chalte Hain Jaipur
Main : haa chalo
Phir jinn ne ek chutki bajai aur hum dono Jaipur ponch gaye Jo toda sunsan jagha Thi hum waha se Nikal kar road ko taraf Nikal gaye aur Texi lekar sidhe city ki taraf Nikal gaye Kuch der main hum city ponch gaye aur hum dono Texi se niche utre aur Maine texi wale ko paise diya aur hum aghe ko chal diye abhi hum jaa hi Rahe the ke
Humari left side main bohut sari gadiya AA aur jaa Rahi the aur jitne bi log the sabke sab businessman the toh Maine jinn se kaha
Main : Jao pata karo ke yeh Kya ho Raha hain
Jinn : jee aaqa
Aur chal diya jinn pata Karna todi der bad woh wapis AA gaya aur mujse bola
Jinn : aaqa yaha per is company ki Leilami chal Rahi Hain
Main : kyun
Jinn : aaqa is company ke 2 pathner the UN dono ne in company per bohut mehnat ki aur India ke top 10 main le aye Lekin abhi Kuch time pehle is company ke 2no pathner main se ek pathner ne doka de diya aur sab Kuch jitna paise tha sab lekar bag gaya ishi liye yeh company diwaliya ho gayi
Jinn : aur iski company ke 2nd pathner ko police ne pakad kar jail main dal diya
Main : Hhhaaaaammmm
Jinn aisa hi Sakta Hain ke yeh company main karid lo
Jinn : abhi lo aaqa
Yeh kehkar abhi woh chuki bajane hi wala tha ke maine usko rok diya aur bola
Main : Nahin jinn aise Nahin Tim ek Kam karo Jadu se Mere account banao aur us main paise dalo aur itne ke yeh company main karid sakho
Jinn : abhi lo aaqa
Main : Lekin deyan rakna aisa Karna ke police aur CBI ki nazar se Bach sakho
Jinn : thek Hain aaqa
Phir main ander Chala gaya aur jinn wahi ruk kar Kuch Karne laga
Jab main Ander poncha toh dekha waha per bohut sare businessman mojud the
Poch ne per pata Chala auction kareeb 1 ghante bad Hain toh wahi per with Karne laga
Toh ek gante bad ek lady mike lekar stage per gayi aur boli
Lady : ladies and gentlemen jaise ke ap sab jante Hain ke hum sab Yaha per khurana group of company ke auction main aye Hain toh Bina deri Kiya shuru karte Hain
Lady : is company ki started boli Hain 200 crore
Admi 1 : 250 crore
Admi 2 : 260 crore
Admi 3 : 280 crore
Admi 4 : 300 crore
Aise ki dere dere chalte hur boli kareeb 500 crore tsk ponch gayi
Phir akhir main ek admi bola
Admi : 800 crore
Lady pahle muskurai aur phir boli
Lady : Soo ladies and gentlemen koi aur hain Jo sakti Singh Raghuvanshi ko chalange kar sakhe
Lekin sab log chup Rahe kyunke sab log jante the ke sakti Singh Raghuvanshi ke koi Nahin Jeet Sakta
Lady : alright then so final boli Hain 800 crore
800 crore. one
800 crore. Two
809 crore
Abhi woh three bolne hi wali Thi ke ek awaz gunji uthi
Awaz : 1000 crore
Sab log is awaz wale ki taraf dekne Lage aur sabko herani huike akhir aisa Kon Hain Jo sakti Singh Raghuvanshi ko chalange kar Raha Hain sakko herani ho Rahi thi ke yeh koi 19 20 Saal ka ladka Hain
Toh lady boli
Lady : Dekho Bache Yaha koi mazak Nahin chal Raha hain Jao Yaha se
Main : 1100 crore
Lady : Dekho jao Yaha ke agar paise Nahin Dee paye toh phir hum police ko call kar denge
Main : yeh company mujhe har keemat per chahiye
Lady ek bar sakti Singh Raghuvanshi ki taraf dekti Hain toh woh haa main sir hilata Hain phir lady bolti Hain
Lady : thek Hain phir
1200 crore. One
1200 crore. Two
1200 crore. Three
Lady : congratulations Mr yeh company ab apki hui
Main uski taraf jate hue
Main : thank you so much
Lady : toh bataiye kis Naam se company register karwani hain
Main : ( Kuch soch kar) SSR is Naam se
Lady : nich name
Main : thank you ap account number dijiye kis account main paise transfer karna hain
Lady : xxxxxxxxxx account number is main transfer kardo
Main : okay
Lady : and ap Kal is ( card dete hue ) adress per sa jaye apko company ke paper mil jayege
Main : okay mam
Phir main waha se mud kar Jane laga toh waha per sakti Singh Raghuvanshi AA gaye
( Doston Yaha per main sakti Singh Raghuvanshi ki jahaj Dad likhoga okay)
Dad : congratulations Mr
Main : surya Naam Hain Mera sir
Dad : ohh congratulations Mr surya

Main : thank you very much sir agar ap chahte toh asani se mujse beat kar sakte the Hain

Dad : kyunke mujhe oats tha ke agar main auction main boli ko jitni uper tak lekar Jao Tum harhal main usko hasil Karke rahoge ishi liye main out ho gaya auction se

Main : thank you sir abhi apse bohut Kuch sikna Hain

Dad : ab toh milte rahege

Main : haa sir kyun Nahin

Dad : okay then phir milte Hain

Main : okay sir bye

Phir dad chale gaye aur main bi wapis Bahar ki taraf gaya toh waha per jinn pahle se kada tha main use bola

Main : chalo jinn humko jail Jana Hain

Jinn : Lekin kyun waha per Kya Kam Hain

Main : Kisi se Milne Jana Hain

Jinn : kis se milna Jaana Hain

Main (smile ke Saath ) : is company ke ex onwer se Milne

Jinn : use kyun Milne Jana Hain

Main : pata chal Jayega


~~~ aj ke Liye itna hi ~~~

Sorry guys Kal update diya tha Lekin woh Kuch reader's ko Pasand Nahin aya toh usko wapis delete kar diya

And 2nd next Kuch update main story ko juhi ke point of view se bi chalaya Jayega

And last Maine update bohut pahle ready Kiya tha Lekin woh galti se delete ho gaya toh jaldi Jaldi main Kaise bi update taiyar hua with de diya

Agar galti hui Hain toh maaf karna and Pasand aye toh like aur comment lazmi dena
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