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Romance Taqdeer [Completed]

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Raj aaj sab kuch clear kar dena chahta tha, kyun ki wo nahi chahta tha ki pichli baar ki tarah iss baar bhi galat-fhemi ki wajah se dono alag ho jaye.
Raj : Ruhi mai nahi janta ki abhi tumhare mann kya hai mere liye, per mai tumhe pichle 7 saalo se pyaar kar raha hun...bina kisi umid ke, bina kisi intezar ke, baas tumse pyaar kiya hai Ruhi....
Jaab pehli baar tumhe apne office mai dekha to taab hi pehchan gaya tha mai ki tum meri Ruhi ho.
kyun ki maine tumhe dekha hua tha school mai hi, mai janta tha ki tum kesi dikhti ho per maine koyi dokha nahi diya hai tumhe....
Tumhe maine pehli baar ek puppy ko bachate huye dekha tha tum puri bhig gayi thy aur tumhari ankhe jo mere dil le gayi thy ussi time. Fir kitne din tum mujhe dikhi nahi fir ek din library mai tumhe dekha, jaab tak mai tum tak ja pata tum chali gayi thy per ek kitab gir gayi mere aage, maine dekha to mujhe samajh aaya ki tum ye padh ti ho baas fir hamari baate suru ho gayi.
uss din annual function mai tumhe mil kar saab kuch batana chahta tha per usse pehle hi tumne mujhe galat samajh liya. Mujhe laga ki aagar mai yanha raha to tumhe dukh hoga isiliye Bangalore aagaya per pyaar baas tumse hi kiya baas yanhi sochta raha ki tumhari nafrat mere liye kaam hogi ya badhegi.
jaab mai iss position mai pahuncha to tumhe dhundna mere baye hath ka kaam tha, per maine yesa kiya hi nahi, kyun ki mai nahi chahta tha ki tumhare samne aake tumhe dukh dun.
per jaab tumhe dekha to tum badal gayi thy jo Ruhi hamesha hasti rehti thy jiske ankho mai hamesha ek sararat rehti thy wo kanhi kho gayi thy, isiliye tumhe hamesha tang karta rehta tha, gussa karta tha jisse tum bolne lagi thy jiss din tumne nashe mai kaha ki tum Raj se pyaar karti ho to mera mann kitna khush tha ye mai bata nahi sakta.
roya tha uss din mai bahut per khushi se per ye jaan na chahta tha ki akeli kyun ho tum isiliye bataya nahi ki mai hi Raj hun..chahta tha ki mere karib aane se pehle apni family ke karib aao isiliye tumse dur raha, per..tumne...tumne....mujhe dhund liya....
mai..mujhe samajh nahi aaya ki kya karu..fir tumne kaha dost..to mai samajh nahi paya ki yesa kyun bola tumne kyun ki aur dur rehna mere baas mai nahi tha...itne saalo ke ander hi ander roya tha, bahut roya tha mai..aab aur nahi rona chahta hun..aagar tum han kehti ho to yanhi ro dunga tumhare samne..per na hai to fir se wanhi mukhota daal lunga apne face pe baas tum apne dil per koi bojh maat rakhna..jo dil chahta hai bol do....
Ruhi piche mud ke sidhe Raj ko ek thapad mar deti hai aur rote huye Raj ke gale lag jati hai. Raj ko kuch samajh nahi aaya ki ye kya hua.
Ruhi kuch der tak roti rahi fir Raj se alag hoke ek aur thapad mar di,
Ruhi (gusse se) : tum ek number ke gadhe ho, pagal ho...jyada hi dusro ke bare mai sochte ho....
Ruhi ne ek aur thapad laga diya, Raj ka to dil hi tut gaya. Usse kuch samajh nahi aaraha tha aur upar se usse 3 thapad bhi paad gaye thy, aur gaal pura laal ho gaya tha.
Ruhi baas usse gusse se dekh rahi thy. Raj ka pata hi nahi chala kaab uski ankho se anshu nikal ke uske gaal pe aagaya tha.
Ajib sa dard ho raha tha Raj ko, uska haat uske dil per chala gaya jo dard kar raha tha aur ek hath apne sar per rakh kar piche ki aur jane laga to piche carpet se atak kar gir gaya aur itni jor se gira ki ek hath jo dil pe tha uske upar pura body weight aagaya.
Ruhi jaldi se Raj ke paas gayi aur usse uthake bed pe betha diya, Raj ke hath mai dard tha per dil tutne ke dard ke samne usse mehsus nahi hua...
wo kuch nahi bola, Ruhi baas usse dekhti rahi, fir;
Ruhi : pagal ho tum ek number ke pagal....mere bholu ram...I love you mere bholu ram....per mai abhi gussa hun tumse....
itna bolke Ruhi ne Raj ko gale laga liya, Raj Ruhi ki baate sunke uski jesse sans hi lout aayi ho.
thodi der gale lagne ke baad Ruhi Raj se alag hoti hai aur Raj ka chehra apne hatho mai le ke raj ke mathe pe kiss karti hai, fir Raj ki ankho pe, Raj to baas ankhe band kiye huye iss paal ko ji raha tha, Raj ne Ruhi ko kamar se pakad ke apni aur khinch liya, aur apni ankhe khol ke Ruhi ko dekhne laga.
Ruhi bhi Raj ki bhigi ankho mai hi kho gayi aur wanhi haal Raj ka bhi tha. Pata nahi dono kitne der tak yese hi ek dusro ko apne baho mai bhare rahe.
jesse hi Raj Ruhi ke chehre pe aarahe baal ko hatane ke liye apna hath badhaya to uske hath mai ek dard ki leher doud gayi.
Raj : aaahhhh.....
Ruhi : kya hua?
Raj : sayad jaab gira to body weight hath per aagaya tha to sayad strain ho gaya hai hath....
Ruhi : hath dikhao apka....
Raj : apka..abhi to gusse se tum keh rahi thy aab fir se aap....
Ruhi : wo..wo to mai gusse mai thy....
Raj ne Ruhi ko apne dusre hath se apne karib ek aur baar khincha aur uski ankho mai dekhte huye bola,
Raj : to aab gusse mai ho....
Ruhi : na..nahi...han..han....
Raj aage badh ke Ruhi ke gal pe kiss kar deta hai, to Ruhi ne apni ankhe band kar li.
Raj : aab bhi gusse mai ho....
Ruhi kya bolti uski to bolti hi band ho gayi thy.
Raj : wese gussa kis baat ka hai ye to bata do..teen teen thapad mar liya aur to aur hath bhi tut gaya.
Ruhi Raj ko chod ke reception per phone karne lagi to Raj ne Ruhi ke hath se phone le liya aur rakh diya.
Ruhi : Raj apka hath mai bahut chot lagi hai dekhiye Sujan bhi aagaye hai, apko ilaz ki jarurat hai.
Raj : mai thik hun Ruhi baas thodi se chot hai thik ho jayega per pehle tum mujhe ye batao kyun gusse mai thy.
Ruhi : Raj...pehle aap....
Raj ne Ruhi ke honth le apna hath rakh diya....
Raj : Ruhi mai nahi chahta fir se koyi baat dil mai hi reh jaye..mujhme aab aur himmat nahi hai ki kisi galat-fhemi ko sehne ki..please Ruhi....
Ruhi bhi Raj ka dil haal samajh jati hai,
Ruhi : pehla thapad apko ye sach chipane ke liye ki apne mujhe dekha tha, per taab ham bache thy to ye galti maaf....
Dusra thapad isiliye jaab mujhe pehchan liya tha to dur kyun rahe....
Tisra isiliye ki itne ache kyun ho aap dusro ke baare mai sochte ho..jaab ye pata chala gaya tha ki mai bhi pyaar karti hun apse to kyun pehle family ko milwana tha fir baad mai apne dil ki baat karni thy taab tak agara der ho jati to....isiliye gussa hun baas....
Raj ne apni dil pe hath rakh diya,
Raj : haaye...mujhe nahi pata tha ki tum itni besabar ho mere paas ane ke liye...pehle pata hota to jiss din mili thy usi din gale laga ke saab kuch bata deta meri lady hulk..chalo aab gussa chod do....
Ruhi : pehle hath check....
Raj : ok..ruko mai phone karta hun....
Raj ne kisi ko phone karke room bula leta hai, kuch der baad ek doctor room mai aagaya aur Raj ke hath ko check karke,
Doctor : sir apke hath ki bone mai fracture aagaya hai aur thodi Sujan bhi badh gayi hai to plaster karna padega aap niche wale floor pe ajayiye wanha pe saab kuch arrangement hai.
Raj ne sar ko han mai hila diya aur doctor ke sath chal pada aur Ruhi ko wanhi pe rukhne ko kaha.
bahar aake Raj ne doctor ka gardan pakad liya,
Raj : mere hath mai baas dawab ke karan Sujan aagayi hai tu mere hath plaster laga raha hai, aur konsa doctor without X-ray mai bata deta hai ki bone fracture ho gaya hai....
Doctor : s...si...sir....sir...mujhe...Kabir...sir..ne kaha tha....jaab apka phone aaya to sir...mere sath hi thy to sir ne kaha ki apko jo bhi hua ho madam ke samne kuch jyada...hi bolna....to....
Raj : ye nahi sudhrega....chal tu aab baas dressing kar de....
Doctor : ji sir....
Raj jaab wapas aata hai kamre mai to baas uske hath mai dressing huyi thy jisse dekh ke Ruhi bhi uske paas aajati hai.
Ruhi : apko to....
Raj : thik hun Ruhi mai, koyi plaster nahi lagega...wo mera dost hi hai, aur wese hi bol raha tha Kabir ke kehne pe..taki tum mera ache se jyada dyaan rakho....
Ruhi : Kabir pagal hai..mai to wese bhi apka khyal rakhti....
Raj : sachi....
Ruhi sar ko han mai hila ke Raj ke gale lag jati hai, aur Raj bhi Ruhi ko apne baho mai bharke Rahat ki sanas leta hai.
Raj : tumhe pata hai iss pal ka intezar jaane kabse tha mujhe, jaab mere paas mere sath hogi meri Ruhi ban kar, baas Raj ki Ruhi....
Ruhi : mujhe bhi Raj....
Fir dono alag hoke balcony mai aake beth jate hai, Ruhi Raj ke kandhe pe sar rakh deti hai, aur dono hi apne ankhe band kar lete hai aur baas ek dusre ko mehsus kar rahe thy.
pata nahi kitne dino ya mahino ya saalo se ya khwab dekhe thy jo aaj pura hua hai.
Isse hi to taqdeer kehte hai kaab kya ho jaye kesse ho jaye kisse pata hai.
Nice and superb update...
 

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Chaliye thoda Mumbai ghum aate hai,
Apko yaad to hoga hi Anu kisi ladke ke sath baat kar rahi thy aur ro rahi thy,
Anu : apko itni chot kese lagi sar pe...
ladka : Anu kuch nahi hua hai ye chot to do din pehle ki hai dekho....
Anu : aap kabhi meri baat nahi mante na..hamesha se yese hi karte hai aap aur mujhse har baat manwa lete ho....
Wo ladka hasne lagta hai Anu ki baate sunke....
Anu : Viren ji ander Rohan Bhai bhi hai...
Ji han wo ladka Viren hi tha Raj ka dost, Viren bhi Anu ki baate sunke haste haste chup ho gaya aur Anu ko dekhne laga.
Viren : janta hun Anu...ussi se milne aaya hun..mujhe pata hai ki Raj yanha nahi hai aur Rohan yanha hai akele.
Anu (dhire se) : han apko to saab kuch pata hota hai....
Viren Anu ke sar pe ek chapat lagake,
Viren : han mujhe saab pata hota hai aab chalo....
Anu : apko hamesha kese pata chal jata hai ki mai kya bol rahi hun dhire se....
Viren kuch nahi bolta baas muskura deta hai. Fir dono ander aate hai to hall mai Rohan betha tha. Rohan ne jesse hi Viren ko dekha to khada ho jata hai. Viren bhi bilkul uske samne jake khada ho jata hai aur muskura ke apna hath fela leta hai.
Rohan kuch pal khada raha to Viren ne jese hi hath niche kiya Rohan aage badh ke usse gale laga leta hai. Dono bina kuch bole gale lage rehte. Zara bhi bahar aagayi jaab Anu itne time nahi aayi to, jesse hi Zara ne Viren ko dekha to heran reh gayi.
Zara : Viren bhaijan aap..yanha....
viren bhi Zara ko dekh ke heran tha....
Viren : choti tu yanha....
Rohan : aap dono jante ho ek dusre ko....
Viren : Rohan Zara apne Kabir ki behen hai....
Rohan : kya....sach mai....
Viren : han...
Rohan ko to viswas hi nahi ho raha tha to wo firse Viren ki aur dekhne laga
Viren : choti hostel mai thy jaab tum log wanha thy, teen saal pehle ye hostel se aayi thy.
Rohan : han yaad aaya Kabir kabhi kabhi baat karta tha. Per kabhi socha nahi tha ki Zara apne Kabir ki behen hogi.
Zara : ye ko kya raha hai koi mujhe bhi bataye.
Anu : bhabhi, to aap Kabir ji ki behen ho aur Kabir ji aur Viren ji bhai aur Rohan Bhai ke dost hai. 6 saal purane dost....
Zara herani se sabko dekhne lagti hai.
Zara : to Rohan aap Abu ko bhi jante honge....
Rohan : nahi kabhi mila nahi per Mallik sahab ke bare mai Raj se kafi kuch janta hun, wo sach mai bahut ache admi hai....
Zara : han wo sab ke sath ache hi hai sirf mujhe chod ke....
Zara ki baate sunke Rohan usko herani se dekhne lagta hai.
Rohan : yesa kyun?
Viren : kyun ki unhone Zara ko hostel bhej diya tha aur ye nahi jana chahti thy, taab se ye unse dur dur rehti hai aur janke jeans pehnti hai kyun ki unhe pasand nahi....hehehehe
Rohan bhi hasne lagta hai to Zara Rohan aur Viren ko gusse mai dekhti hai fir apne kamre mai chali jati hai.
Rohan Zara ko awaj deta hai per wo aansuna kar deti hai to Viren Rohan ko jane ke liye kehta hai.
Rohan : per Viren hamme bhi to baat....
Viren Rohan ko bich mai hi rok ke bolta hai,
Viren : dekh hamare bich kabhi koyi galat-fhemi nahi hai na hogi dur reh ke bhi ek dusre ko samajhte thy per Zara aur tera rishta naya hai to ja uske paas....
Rohan han mai sar hila ke Viren ke gale milta hai fir Zara ke paas chala jata hai.
Anu taab se baas Viren ko hi dekh rahi thy. Jesse hi Viren ne Anu ko dekha to Anu ke hath se uska phone chut gaya to Viren ne pakad liya.
Viren : tum bilkul nahi badli ab bhi chize girati rehti ho.
Anu (mann mai) : jaab aap aas paas hote to taab hi yesa hota hai.
Viren Anu ke paas aake Anu ko hilata hai.
Viren : kya hua..kanha kho gayi...
Anu kuch nahi kehti hai baas Viren ke gale laag jati hai.
Viren : Anu..bacha...aab baas rona nahi....
Anu ke ankho mai anshu thy per Viren ki baato pe uske face pe smile aagayi.
Anu : pure 3 saal baad aap mile rahe ho...wese to mera best friend ho per 3 saal tak mujhse bhi baat nahi ki apne..mai gussa hun apse...wo bhi kitna..aur mujhe bacha nahi kehna aab mai badi ho gayi hun.
Viren : ok sorry...aab mai kuch mahine yanhi hun tum sabhi ke sath.
Anu khushi se Viren alag hoke usse dekhne lagti hai.
Anu : sachi....
Viren han mai apna sar hila deta hai to Anu firse khushi se Viren ke gale lag jati hai, aur usse jor se pakad leti hai.
Viren (mann mai) : janta hun Anu tum aab badi ho gayi ho per mai ye nahi samajh na chahta kyun ki jo mai tumhare liye mehsus karta hun wo ham dono ke liye sahi nahi hai baas isiliye khud ko yaad dilata hun ki tum 5 saal choti ho mujhse....
Viren Anu se alag hoke,
Viren : Anu mujhe abhi aram karna hai to mera kanra bata dogi mujhe....
Anu han mai sar hila deti hai aur apne room ke sath wala room Viren ko bata deti hai.
Viren fresh hone jata hai aur Anu wanhi pe beth jati hai.
Anu (mann mai) : pata nahi kaab samajhoge aap ki aap aab mere liye mere best friend hi nahi mere saab kuch ho jaab se pyaar ko samajha hai baas apko hi saab kuch samajha hai aur aap abhi bhi mujhe bachi hi samajhte ho.
Chaliye thoda Raj aur Ruhi ko dekh aate hai....
Raj aur Ruhi dono yese hi bethe thy balcony mai, kuch der baad jab Raj ne Ruhi ko dekha to Ruhi so chuki thy.
Raj (mann mai) : aaj bhi so gayi pata nahi ye ladki itna kese so leti hai. Pagal....
Raj ne Ruhi ko goud mai utha liya aur bed per le jake lita diya. Aur blanket bhi de diya. Raj wanhi kuch der beth kar Ruhi ko dekhta raha fir kuch der baad apne kamre mai chala jata hai, aur khidki per khada ho jata hai aur Ruhi ke baare mai sochne lagta hai.
Sochte huye aaj Raj ke chehre pe muskurahat thy khushi ke. Raj ne phone check kiya to uske chehre pe aur jyada khushi aagayi, Viren aur Rohan ki gale lagne wali photo thy jo usse Anu ne bheji thy.
Raj : to Viren aaj hi aagaya chalo acha hai per aaj usse Anu se kon bachayega...pichle 3 saal ki baate aaj hi karegi uss se..hehehehe.....
Mujse aur Rohan se bhi jyada Anu Viren ke karib hai per ho bhi kyu na..jitna khyal Viren ne 3 saal tak uska rakha sayad hi koyi yesa karta.
Mai janta hun Anu ke dil mai Viren ki jagah bahut khass hai, per Viren ke dil ka mujhe nahi pata....
Per meri Anu ko Viren se acha koyi mil hi nahi sakta, hey bhagwan aap hi saab sahi rakhna.
Jese Raj soch raha tha idhar Anu ne Viren ko Rohan aur Zara ki Love story bata di aur pichle 3 saal ki jo bhi jaruri, bekar saab tarah ki baate batayi ja rahi thy.
Viren baas han mai sar hila kar jawab de raha tha. Aur Zara ki kamre mai Rohan Zara ko mana raha tha, to koyi bhi Viren ko Anu se bachne ka uska koyi chance hi nahi tha.
Anu to yese Viren ko saab bata rahi thy jese wo baas yehi saab sunne aaya hai yanha. Bate karte karte jaab Anu ne Viren ko dekha to Viren so chuka tha wo bhi gehri nind mai.
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Jaab Anu ne Viren ko sota hua dekha to usko gussa aagaya ki kesse wo meri baat sune bina hi so gaye.
Anu : wese to koyi mission ho to puri puri raat jaag lenge aur aab dekho meri bato se hi nind aagayi inhe....
Anu bhi wanhi Viren ke goud mai sar rakhke so jati hai.
Idhar hotel mai Ruhi, Raj, Kabir apne apne apne room mai so rahe thy, Raj ka phone baaj ta hai to Raj bina dekhe hi apna phone utha leta hai....
Raj (nind mai) : hello....
call ke dusre taraf Rohan hi tha....
Rohan : oo..uth ja mere yaar...aaj mai bahut khush hun...
Raj Rohan ki awaj sunke ek hi jhatke mai uth jata hai.
Raj : Rohan kya hua bada khush lag raha hai.
Rohan : han yaar, Viren aaya hai ghar..mai..mai 3 saal baad usse mila..Raj mai bata nahi sakta ki mai kitna khush hun..aur tujhe pata hai Zara apne Kabir ki behen hai.
wait..wait..tujhe pata hi hoga ye ki Zara Kabir ki behen hai...tune mujhe bataya kyun nahi...
Raj : yaar kabhi mouka hi nahi mila aur dimag mai bhi wo baat nahi aayi....
Rohan : chal koyi baat nahi..per aab Kabir se bhi milne ka bahut mann kar raha hai yaar....
Raj : aab to tera sala ban gaya hai wo..mil lena jaab Zara ke ghar walo se uska hath mangne jayega.
Rohan : Zara ke papa to Mallik sahab hai..yaar mai kabhi unse nahi mila..baas tumse suna hai..to....
Raj : yaar mai aaraha hun ghar fir mil kar baat karte hai taab tak tu Viren ko Anu se bacha le....
Rohan : aare han yaar kal raat Zara ke chakar mai usse Anu ke sath akela chod diya tha pata nahi Anu ki baate sunkar kya haal hua hoga mai dekh ke aata hun..bye...
Raj (haste huye) : bye....
fir Raj tayar hoke apne room se bahar aata hai, aur Kabir ke room ka door knock karta hai.
Kabir ne bhi nind mai hi darwaja khola to samne Raj ko dekhta hai fir apne bed pe chala jata hai sone ke liye.
Raj : iska kuch nahi ho sakta hai, jaab bhi kaam se chuti leta hai to pura aalsi ho jata hai.
Raj sidha bathroom mai jata hai aur balti bhar ke pani utha leta hai aur sidha bahar aake Kabir ke upar fenk deta hai, Kabir ek jhatke mai uth ke beth jata hai aur idhar udhar dekhne lagta hai, jaab samne dekhta hai to Raj hath mai khali balti liye khada hua tha.
Kabir (gusse se) : saale..kamine..tune meri jindegi kharab kar di hai..hamesha se meri pyari nind ke piche pada rehta hai...kutte...kya bigada hai meri nind ne tera...aab utha hi diya hai to aaja gale lag ja....
Raj Kabir ka dil ki baat samajh gaya ki ye abhi mujhe pakad ke dhoyega to Raj kamre se bhag jata hai bahar ki taraf, Ruhi bahar hi khadi thy.
Ruhi Raj ko yese bhagte huye dekh ke,
Ruhi : kya subha subha hotel ke corridor ko race ka maidan banaya hai...kya hua..kyun bhag rahe ho aap...
Raj kuch jawab deta uss se pehle Kabir bhi bahar aajata hai, aur Kabir ki halat dekh ke Ruhi hasne lagti hai. Kabir pura gila hua pada tha aur kapde baal se pani ke bund tapak rahe thy.
Ruhi : lagta hai barish baas aap per hi huyi hai wo bhi kamre mai hi....hehehe....
Kabir : aare bhabhi ji..baas iss barish ki kuch bunde apke love per bhi girana chahte hai jinki wajah se meri ye halat huyi hai.
Raj : yaar tu uthta nahi to..chal maaf karde aur tayar ho kar aaja ham tere khane per wait kar rahe hai.
Aur Ruhi ko leke bhag jata hai, aur piche Kabir baas chila ta raha...
Kabir : han..han..ja..ja..dekh lunga tujhe mai, bhabhi bhi meri wajah se hi mili hai tujhe....
Ruhi aur Raj bhagte huye lift ke ander ghus gaye aur niche jane lage, aur lift mai baas ye dono hi thy.
Raj ne Ruhi ko dekha jo apni ankhe band kiye huye hi hanf rahi thy. Raj Ruhi ke bilkul karib aagaya aur dono hatho se Ruhi kr aas paas baho ka ghera bana liya. Ruhi ankhe khol ke Raj ko itne karib dekha to uski ankhe jhuk gayi.
Raj ko Ruhi ki iss aada per aur bhi pyaar aagaya. Raj ne Ruhi ke galo ko apne hath mai bhara aur uske mathe pe kiss kar deta hai aur kiss karne ke baad Ruhi ko dekhne laga to Ruhi ne apni ankhe jhuka li....
Raj : Ruhi baas ek baar dekho meri taraf...
Raj ke itne pyaar se kehne pe Ruhi ne apni ankhe upaar utha ke Raj ke ankho mai dekhne lagi, dono ke hi ankho mai ek dusre ke liye bepanha pyaar tha.
Idhar Rohan phone rakh ne ke baad Viren ko dekhne me liye uske kamre ki aur chala gaya to wanhi darwaja pe hi jake ruk gaya.
Viren betha betha hi so raha tha aur Anu ka sar uske goud mai tha, Rohan ye dekhke muskura utha, Raj ki tarah Rohan bhi Anu ki dill ki baat samajhta tha per Viren ki nahi.
Rohan aage jane hi wala tha ki Anu uthne lagi to Rohan wanhi darwaja ke paas hi ruk gaya.
Anu uthi aur nind bhari ankho mai hi Viren ko dekhne lagi to uske chehre pe badi si muskurahat aagayi. Kuch der tak Anu Viren ko dekhti rahi fir Viren ke kaan ke paas ja kar jor se bolti hai...
Anu : Viren.....ji......
Anu ki itne jor se bolne ki wajah se Viren hadbada ke uth jata hai fir jaab usne Anu ko dekha to....
Viren : Anu..mujhe bolti ho ki bachi nahi ho per ye kya harkar hai....
Anu : ye apki saza raat ko meri puri baate na sunn ke sone ke liye..abhi pichle mahine ki baate bachi hai jaab mai yanha aayi thy.
Viren herani se Anu ko dekhne lagta hai to Rohan bhi ander aajata hai....
Rohan : Viren mujhe tujhse kuch baat karni hai to chal mere sath....aur Viren ko ankh mar deta hai....
Viren bhi samajh gaya wo bhi subha subha Anu ki bate sunne ke mood mai nahi tha...
Viren : han..han..chal mujhe bhi kuch baate karni hai tere rishtey ke bare mai hi chal....
Fir Rohan aur Viren jaldi se bhag jate hai garden mai, garden mai aake ek dusre ko dekh ke jor jor se hasne lagte hai.
Rohan (haste huye) : wese tune hi Anu ko itna bigada hai..kisi ko kuch bolne nahi deti hai aab bhugat tu....
Viren : han to kya hua..wo doll si hai koyi kuch kese bole usse mujhse nahi bardast hota.
Rohan : han wo hamara Anu doll hai puri baas ye doll chup hi achi lagti hai jaab bolna suru kar hai to kya tum, mai, Raj koyi kuch nahi keh sakta.
Viren : han per ek banda hai jo usse chup karwa sakta hai....
Fir dono ek sath bolte hai...
dono : wo hai..hamara Kabir.....
Rohan : han wo to hai....
Fir Rohan chup ho jata hai, to Viren ne Rohan ke kandhe pe hath rakh deta hai aur kehta hai ki,
Viren : aab wo bhi mil jayega....
Rohan bhi Viren ki baate sunke han mai apna sar hila deta hai.
Nice and superb update...
 

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Raj aur Ruhi ek dusre mai hi khoye huye thy. Ruhi baas raj ki ankho mai apne liye pyaar hi pyaar dekh rahi thy. Raj ne Ruhi ke sar se apna sar laga diya aur ankhe band karke iss lamhe ko mehsus karne laga.
Ruhi dhire dhire Raj ke aur karib aagayi aur ankhe band karke apne honth ko Raj ke honth ke paas le aayi per jese hi Ruhi kiss karne hi wali thy ki Raj thoda sa jhuk gaya jisse honth ji jagah Raj ke naak mai kiss ho gayi.
Ruhi ankhe khole herani se Raj ko dekhne lagi.
Raj : tumhari hi wish thy ki meri naak pe kiss karke mera sara gussa khatam karne ki to baas wanhi pura kiya hai aur rahi baat iss kiss ki to ye to mai kabhi bhi le sakta hun per shadi ke baad na...ya abhi..wese mujhe to koyi pareshani nahi hai..aur ankh mar deta hai....
Ruhi saram ke mare Raj ke gale lag jati hai aur Raj hasta hua usse banho mai bhar leta hai.
Ruhi abhi dhyaan deti hai ki lift to chal hi nahi rahi hai to Raj se alag hoke dekhne lagti hai to dekhti hai ki lift ka stop button daba hua tha.
Raj : maine hi lift roki thy thoda time tumhare sath spend karne ke liye.
Ruhi : acha ji..to ye baat hai per mujhe aab bhuk lagi hai to chale....
Raj : jo hukum madam....
Fir dono niche aajate hai aur dekhte hai ki Kabir pehle se hi niche betha unka intezar kar raha hai. Kabir ki nazar jaab in dono pe padi to inko ghurne laga.
Kabir : itni der tak kanha thy tum dono....
Raj : aare yaar lift atak gayi thy to....
Kabir : sale atak gayi thy ya atka di thy...chal chod..khana khate hai, dekh tera to pata nahi per mere bhabhi ko jarur bhuk lagi hogi....
Ruhi : han Kabir ji.....
Raj : to chalo suru karte hai....
Fir teeno khana khane lagte hai.
chaliye thoda Raj ke mumbai ke ghar mai ghum aate hai....
Anu ready hoke dinning table pe bethi thy aur Zara bhi uske sath beth ke kuch kaam kar rahi thy. Rohan aur Viren dono hi kitchen mai thy.
Rohan to baas khada hoke Viren ko dekh raha tha aur Viren khana bana raha tha.
Rohan (herani se) : ye saab punjabi khana kaab sikh gaya tu....
Viren : aab itne mahine Punjab mai raha to sikh hi gaya aur tujhe pata hai na ki mujhe....
Rohan bich mai hi Viren ki baate karke,
Rohan : tujhe ye saab karna acha lagta hai wo bhi haam saab ke liye.
Viren : chal aab ye saab bahar le jane mai meri madat kar....
Rohan han mai sar hilake uski madat karta hai, jaab sabhi kahan aagaya dinning table pe Zara bhi apna kaam band karke khane ko dekhne lagti hai aur Anu to baas gin rahi thy kya kya hai....
Anu : wooooo...hooooo....itna sara khana maza aagaya. Mai to kitne dino se bhai ke hath ka khana miss kar rahi thy per Viren ji apne to kamal kar diya..sach mai...wait nahi ho raha hai...kya ham suru kar sakte hai.....
Viren : han..han..kyun nahi.....
Fir sabhi khane lagte hai aur sabhi Viren ki khane ki tarif kar rahe thy.
Idhar Bangalore se Ruhi, Raj aur Kabir mumbai ke liye nikal gaye khana khane ke baad.
Ruhi aab Raj ke bagal ki seat mai bethi thy aur Kabir piche ke seat mai beth ke apni nind puri kar raha tha.
Raj : Ruhi kya tum mujhe bataogi ki tumhe pyaar ka yehsas kaab hua tha?
Ruhi : mai...wo....
Raj Ruhi ko dekhte huye : please Ruhi mere liye....
Ruhi : thik hai.....
Jaab 11th mai annual day per tumne mujhse kaha tha ki tum milna chahte ho mujhse aur kuch kehna chahte ho to mai bhi kuch batana chahti thy tumhe...apne dil ki baat yanhi ki mujhe tumse pyaar ho gaya hai....
Tumhari baato se, tumhari sayari se, tumse...bahut pyaar karne lagi thy tumhe bina dekhe hi..ye baat maine baas Palak ko batayi thy.
Uss din Palak hamari class ke kuch ladko ko mere paas leke aagayi....
Palak : yaar Ruhi dekh tu meri best friend and childhood friend bhi hai aur mai nahi chahti ki tu hurt ho....
Ruhi : baat kya hai Palak, saaf saaf bol....
Palak : yaar Raj ne tujhse dosti baas ek sart jitne ke liye ki thy..wo koyi tera dost nahi hai usse baas sart ke paise chahiye...baas..wo anath hai aur wese bhi yese loog rishtey ko nahi samajhte hai....
Ruhi : nahi Palak tujhe koi galat-fhemi huyi hai....
Palak : ye dono mere bhi dost hai Ruhi aur jaab maine inhe tere Raj ke bare mai bataya to ye saab mujhe inhi se hi pata chala..ye dekh video....
Video mai Raj kisi sart ke liye han bol raha tha. Ye dekh ke Ruhi tut gayi thy. Taab bhi usne kisi ko bhej ke Raj ko bulati hai.
Ruhi dusri taraf munh karke khadi thy aur baas Raj se itna hi puchi ki,
Ruhi : tumne inn dono se koi bet lagaya tha....
Raj : han...per....
Palak : baas..koyi per...bar...nahi....
Ruhi (rote huye) : I hate you Raj...I really hate you...I don't want to see your face...I trust you but you break my trust...chale jaao yanha se....
Raj ko kuch samajh nahi aaraha tha,
Raj : Ruhi hua kya hai..mere taraf dekho Ruhi...
Ruhi : maine kaha na jao..go away..tumhe samajh nahi aaraha...aagar kabhi mujhe dost bhi samajha hai to jao yanha se aur kabhi mere samne maat aana.
fir ek mahina taak maine kisi se baat nahi ki baas Palak se baat hoti thy. Jese hi 12 class suru huyi to ek din maine Palak aur un ladko ki baate sun li thy..kese Raj ko fasaya tha aur ye saab kuch plan Palak ka tha..baas fir kisi per bhi bharosha nahi raha.. Palak se bhi alag ho gayi aur sabse kinara kar liya.
Papa to wese bhi kaam ki wajah se hamesha dur rehte hai mujhse to mere dur rehne se unhe koyi farak nahi pada..aur America isiliye nahi gayi kyun ki tumse milne ki umid nahi khona chahti thy.
Itna saab sunke Raj Ruhi ko apne karib karta hai aur uske mathe pe kiss karta hai.
Raj : aab saab kuch thik hoga Ruhi..saab kuch...
Ruhi bhi han mai sar hilati hai. Tabhi Kabir bhi uth jata hai.
Kabir : bhabhi....
Ruhi : ji....
Kabir : aap aage ki hamari kahani nahi sunogi....
Ruhi : aap to so hi gaye thy mujhe to sunni thy....
Kabir : to suno aab mai batata hun aage kya hua tha....
 

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Jaab Anu ne Viren ko sota hua dekha to usko gussa aagaya ki kesse wo meri baat sune bina hi so gaye.
Anu : wese to koyi mission ho to puri puri raat jaag lenge aur aab dekho meri bato se hi nind aagayi inhe....
Anu bhi wanhi Viren ke goud mai sar rakhke so jati hai.
Idhar hotel mai Ruhi, Raj, Kabir apne apne apne room mai so rahe thy, Raj ka phone baaj ta hai to Raj bina dekhe hi apna phone utha leta hai....
Raj (nind mai) : hello....
call ke dusre taraf Rohan hi tha....
Rohan : oo..uth ja mere yaar...aaj mai bahut khush hun...
Raj Rohan ki awaj sunke ek hi jhatke mai uth jata hai.
Raj : Rohan kya hua bada khush lag raha hai.
Rohan : han yaar, Viren aaya hai ghar..mai..mai 3 saal baad usse mila..Raj mai bata nahi sakta ki mai kitna khush hun..aur tujhe pata hai Zara apne Kabir ki behen hai.
wait..wait..tujhe pata hi hoga ye ki Zara Kabir ki behen hai...tune mujhe bataya kyun nahi...
Raj : yaar kabhi mouka hi nahi mila aur dimag mai bhi wo baat nahi aayi....
Rohan : chal koyi baat nahi..per aab Kabir se bhi milne ka bahut mann kar raha hai yaar....
Raj : aab to tera sala ban gaya hai wo..mil lena jaab Zara ke ghar walo se uska hath mangne jayega.
Rohan : Zara ke papa to Mallik sahab hai..yaar mai kabhi unse nahi mila..baas tumse suna hai..to....
Raj : yaar mai aaraha hun ghar fir mil kar baat karte hai taab tak tu Viren ko Anu se bacha le....
Rohan : aare han yaar kal raat Zara ke chakar mai usse Anu ke sath akela chod diya tha pata nahi Anu ki baate sunkar kya haal hua hoga mai dekh ke aata hun..bye...
Raj (haste huye) : bye....
fir Raj tayar hoke apne room se bahar aata hai, aur Kabir ke room ka door knock karta hai.
Kabir ne bhi nind mai hi darwaja khola to samne Raj ko dekhta hai fir apne bed pe chala jata hai sone ke liye.
Raj : iska kuch nahi ho sakta hai, jaab bhi kaam se chuti leta hai to pura aalsi ho jata hai.
Raj sidha bathroom mai jata hai aur balti bhar ke pani utha leta hai aur sidha bahar aake Kabir ke upar fenk deta hai, Kabir ek jhatke mai uth ke beth jata hai aur idhar udhar dekhne lagta hai, jaab samne dekhta hai to Raj hath mai khali balti liye khada hua tha.
Kabir (gusse se) : saale..kamine..tune meri jindegi kharab kar di hai..hamesha se meri pyari nind ke piche pada rehta hai...kutte...kya bigada hai meri nind ne tera...aab utha hi diya hai to aaja gale lag ja....
Raj Kabir ka dil ki baat samajh gaya ki ye abhi mujhe pakad ke dhoyega to Raj kamre se bhag jata hai bahar ki taraf, Ruhi bahar hi khadi thy.
Ruhi Raj ko yese bhagte huye dekh ke,
Ruhi : kya subha subha hotel ke corridor ko race ka maidan banaya hai...kya hua..kyun bhag rahe ho aap...
Raj kuch jawab deta uss se pehle Kabir bhi bahar aajata hai, aur Kabir ki halat dekh ke Ruhi hasne lagti hai. Kabir pura gila hua pada tha aur kapde baal se pani ke bund tapak rahe thy.
Ruhi : lagta hai barish baas aap per hi huyi hai wo bhi kamre mai hi....hehehe....
Kabir : aare bhabhi ji..baas iss barish ki kuch bunde apke love per bhi girana chahte hai jinki wajah se meri ye halat huyi hai.
Raj : yaar tu uthta nahi to..chal maaf karde aur tayar ho kar aaja ham tere khane per wait kar rahe hai.
Aur Ruhi ko leke bhag jata hai, aur piche Kabir baas chila ta raha...
Kabir : han..han..ja..ja..dekh lunga tujhe mai, bhabhi bhi meri wajah se hi mili hai tujhe....
Ruhi aur Raj bhagte huye lift ke ander ghus gaye aur niche jane lage, aur lift mai baas ye dono hi thy.
Raj ne Ruhi ko dekha jo apni ankhe band kiye huye hi hanf rahi thy. Raj Ruhi ke bilkul karib aagaya aur dono hatho se Ruhi kr aas paas baho ka ghera bana liya. Ruhi ankhe khol ke Raj ko itne karib dekha to uski ankhe jhuk gayi.
Raj ko Ruhi ki iss aada per aur bhi pyaar aagaya. Raj ne Ruhi ke galo ko apne hath mai bhara aur uske mathe pe kiss kar deta hai aur kiss karne ke baad Ruhi ko dekhne laga to Ruhi ne apni ankhe jhuka li....
Raj : Ruhi baas ek baar dekho meri taraf...
Raj ke itne pyaar se kehne pe Ruhi ne apni ankhe upaar utha ke Raj ke ankho mai dekhne lagi, dono ke hi ankho mai ek dusre ke liye bepanha pyaar tha.
Idhar Rohan phone rakh ne ke baad Viren ko dekhne me liye uske kamre ki aur chala gaya to wanhi darwaja pe hi jake ruk gaya.
Viren betha betha hi so raha tha aur Anu ka sar uske goud mai tha, Rohan ye dekhke muskura utha, Raj ki tarah Rohan bhi Anu ki dill ki baat samajhta tha per Viren ki nahi.
Rohan aage jane hi wala tha ki Anu uthne lagi to Rohan wanhi darwaja ke paas hi ruk gaya.
Anu uthi aur nind bhari ankho mai hi Viren ko dekhne lagi to uske chehre pe badi si muskurahat aagayi. Kuch der tak Anu Viren ko dekhti rahi fir Viren ke kaan ke paas ja kar jor se bolti hai...
Anu : Viren.....ji......
Anu ki itne jor se bolne ki wajah se Viren hadbada ke uth jata hai fir jaab usne Anu ko dekha to....
Viren : Anu..mujhe bolti ho ki bachi nahi ho per ye kya harkar hai....
Anu : ye apki saza raat ko meri puri baate na sunn ke sone ke liye..abhi pichle mahine ki baate bachi hai jaab mai yanha aayi thy.
Viren herani se Anu ko dekhne lagta hai to Rohan bhi ander aajata hai....
Rohan : Viren mujhe tujhse kuch baat karni hai to chal mere sath....aur Viren ko ankh mar deta hai....
Viren bhi samajh gaya wo bhi subha subha Anu ki bate sunne ke mood mai nahi tha...
Viren : han..han..chal mujhe bhi kuch baate karni hai tere rishtey ke bare mai hi chal....
Fir Rohan aur Viren jaldi se bhag jate hai garden mai, garden mai aake ek dusre ko dekh ke jor jor se hasne lagte hai.
Rohan (haste huye) : wese tune hi Anu ko itna bigada hai..kisi ko kuch bolne nahi deti hai aab bhugat tu....
Viren : han to kya hua..wo doll si hai koyi kuch kese bole usse mujhse nahi bardast hota.
Rohan : han wo hamara Anu doll hai puri baas ye doll chup hi achi lagti hai jaab bolna suru kar hai to kya tum, mai, Raj koyi kuch nahi keh sakta.
Viren : han per ek banda hai jo usse chup karwa sakta hai....
Fir dono ek sath bolte hai...
dono : wo hai..hamara Kabir.....
Rohan : han wo to hai....
Fir Rohan chup ho jata hai, to Viren ne Rohan ke kandhe pe hath rakh deta hai aur kehta hai ki,
Viren : aab wo bhi mil jayega....
Rohan bhi Viren ki baate sunke han mai apna sar hila deta hai.

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Raj aur Ruhi ek dusre mai hi khoye huye thy. Ruhi baas raj ki ankho mai apne liye pyaar hi pyaar dekh rahi thy. Raj ne Ruhi ke sar se apna sar laga diya aur ankhe band karke iss lamhe ko mehsus karne laga.
Ruhi dhire dhire Raj ke aur karib aagayi aur ankhe band karke apne honth ko Raj ke honth ke paas le aayi per jese hi Ruhi kiss karne hi wali thy ki Raj thoda sa jhuk gaya jisse honth ji jagah Raj ke naak mai kiss ho gayi.
Ruhi ankhe khole herani se Raj ko dekhne lagi.
Raj : tumhari hi wish thy ki meri naak pe kiss karke mera sara gussa khatam karne ki to baas wanhi pura kiya hai aur rahi baat iss kiss ki to ye to mai kabhi bhi le sakta hun per shadi ke baad na...ya abhi..wese mujhe to koyi pareshani nahi hai..aur ankh mar deta hai....
Ruhi saram ke mare Raj ke gale lag jati hai aur Raj hasta hua usse banho mai bhar leta hai.
Ruhi abhi dhyaan deti hai ki lift to chal hi nahi rahi hai to Raj se alag hoke dekhne lagti hai to dekhti hai ki lift ka stop button daba hua tha.
Raj : maine hi lift roki thy thoda time tumhare sath spend karne ke liye.
Ruhi : acha ji..to ye baat hai per mujhe aab bhuk lagi hai to chale....
Raj : jo hukum madam....
Fir dono niche aajate hai aur dekhte hai ki Kabir pehle se hi niche betha unka intezar kar raha hai. Kabir ki nazar jaab in dono pe padi to inko ghurne laga.
Kabir : itni der tak kanha thy tum dono....
Raj : aare yaar lift atak gayi thy to....
Kabir : sale atak gayi thy ya atka di thy...chal chod..khana khate hai, dekh tera to pata nahi per mere bhabhi ko jarur bhuk lagi hogi....
Ruhi : han Kabir ji.....
Raj : to chalo suru karte hai....
Fir teeno khana khane lagte hai.
chaliye thoda Raj ke mumbai ke ghar mai ghum aate hai....
Anu ready hoke dinning table pe bethi thy aur Zara bhi uske sath beth ke kuch kaam kar rahi thy. Rohan aur Viren dono hi kitchen mai thy.
Rohan to baas khada hoke Viren ko dekh raha tha aur Viren khana bana raha tha.
Rohan (herani se) : ye saab punjabi khana kaab sikh gaya tu....
Viren : aab itne mahine Punjab mai raha to sikh hi gaya aur tujhe pata hai na ki mujhe....
Rohan bich mai hi Viren ki baate karke,
Rohan : tujhe ye saab karna acha lagta hai wo bhi haam saab ke liye.
Viren : chal aab ye saab bahar le jane mai meri madat kar....
Rohan han mai sar hilake uski madat karta hai, jaab sabhi kahan aagaya dinning table pe Zara bhi apna kaam band karke khane ko dekhne lagti hai aur Anu to baas gin rahi thy kya kya hai....
Anu : wooooo...hooooo....itna sara khana maza aagaya. Mai to kitne dino se bhai ke hath ka khana miss kar rahi thy per Viren ji apne to kamal kar diya..sach mai...wait nahi ho raha hai...kya ham suru kar sakte hai.....
Viren : han..han..kyun nahi.....
Fir sabhi khane lagte hai aur sabhi Viren ki khane ki tarif kar rahe thy.
Idhar Bangalore se Ruhi, Raj aur Kabir mumbai ke liye nikal gaye khana khane ke baad.
Ruhi aab Raj ke bagal ki seat mai bethi thy aur Kabir piche ke seat mai beth ke apni nind puri kar raha tha.
Raj : Ruhi kya tum mujhe bataogi ki tumhe pyaar ka yehsas kaab hua tha?
Ruhi : mai...wo....
Raj Ruhi ko dekhte huye : please Ruhi mere liye....
Ruhi : thik hai.....
Jaab 11th mai annual day per tumne mujhse kaha tha ki tum milna chahte ho mujhse aur kuch kehna chahte ho to mai bhi kuch batana chahti thy tumhe...apne dil ki baat yanhi ki mujhe tumse pyaar ho gaya hai....
Tumhari baato se, tumhari sayari se, tumse...bahut pyaar karne lagi thy tumhe bina dekhe hi..ye baat maine baas Palak ko batayi thy.
Uss din Palak hamari class ke kuch ladko ko mere paas leke aagayi....
Palak : yaar Ruhi dekh tu meri best friend and childhood friend bhi hai aur mai nahi chahti ki tu hurt ho....
Ruhi : baat kya hai Palak, saaf saaf bol....
Palak : yaar Raj ne tujhse dosti baas ek sart jitne ke liye ki thy..wo koyi tera dost nahi hai usse baas sart ke paise chahiye...baas..wo anath hai aur wese bhi yese loog rishtey ko nahi samajhte hai....
Ruhi : nahi Palak tujhe koi galat-fhemi huyi hai....
Palak : ye dono mere bhi dost hai Ruhi aur jaab maine inhe tere Raj ke bare mai bataya to ye saab mujhe inhi se hi pata chala..ye dekh video....
Video mai Raj kisi sart ke liye han bol raha tha. Ye dekh ke Ruhi tut gayi thy. Taab bhi usne kisi ko bhej ke Raj ko bulati hai.
Ruhi dusri taraf munh karke khadi thy aur baas Raj se itna hi puchi ki,
Ruhi : tumne inn dono se koi bet lagaya tha....
Raj : han...per....
Palak : baas..koyi per...bar...nahi....
Ruhi (rote huye) : I hate you Raj...I really hate you...I don't want to see your face...I trust you but you break my trust...chale jaao yanha se....
Raj ko kuch samajh nahi aaraha tha,
Raj : Ruhi hua kya hai..mere taraf dekho Ruhi...
Ruhi : maine kaha na jao..go away..tumhe samajh nahi aaraha...aagar kabhi mujhe dost bhi samajha hai to jao yanha se aur kabhi mere samne maat aana.
fir ek mahina taak maine kisi se baat nahi ki baas Palak se baat hoti thy. Jese hi 12 class suru huyi to ek din maine Palak aur un ladko ki baate sun li thy..kese Raj ko fasaya tha aur ye saab kuch plan Palak ka tha..baas fir kisi per bhi bharosha nahi raha.. Palak se bhi alag ho gayi aur sabse kinara kar liya.
Papa to wese bhi kaam ki wajah se hamesha dur rehte hai mujhse to mere dur rehne se unhe koyi farak nahi pada..aur America isiliye nahi gayi kyun ki tumse milne ki umid nahi khona chahti thy.
Itna saab sunke Raj Ruhi ko apne karib karta hai aur uske mathe pe kiss karta hai.
Raj : aab saab kuch thik hoga Ruhi..saab kuch...
Ruhi bhi han mai sar hilati hai. Tabhi Kabir bhi uth jata hai.
Kabir : bhabhi....
Ruhi : ji....
Kabir : aap aage ki hamari kahani nahi sunogi....
Ruhi : aap to so hi gaye thy mujhe to sunni thy....
Kabir : to suno aab mai batata hun aage kya hua tha....
Awesome update..
 
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