Romance Taqdeer [Completed]

Shanu · Jul 21, 2021

Fabulous update bhai

Naik · Jul 21, 2021

NewWriter23 said:
Update 29

Ruhi : aap bol kyu nahi rahe hai Raj….

Jaab Ruhi Raj se alag hoke Raj ko chehre ko dekhne lagti to Raj ke ankho mai bhi anshu thy aur sath mai ek smile bhi. Ye dekh ke Ruhi heran ho gayi….

Raj bhi Ruhi ka chehra ko apne hath se tham leta hai aur apna sar uske sar se laga leta hai,

Raj : tum soch bhi kese sakti ho ki mai tumhe bhul jaunga Ruhi aur tumhe maafi mangne ki koi jarurat nahi hai, tumne wanhi kiya jo tumhe thik laga. Mai janta hun Jessa Rohan mere liye hai wesa hi palak tumhare liye thy. Tum dil se bachpan se usse apna manti thy, tumhara koi galti nahi hai na hi tum maafi mangogi…

Ruhi fir se Raj ke gale lag gayi aur jor se jakad bhi liya Raj ko jesse wo fir se dur hone lag gaya ho usse aur Ruhi usse chodna nahi chahti ho. Aur subkane lagi….

Raj baas uske baalo ko sehlata raha aur sath hi Shiv ji ko dhanya baad kar raha tha. Kuch der baad Ruhi bhi chup ho jati hai, aur apni pakad dhili kar deti hai. To Raj bhi ruhi se aalag hoke khada ho jata hai. Fir Ruhi bhi khadi hone lagti hai to Raj uske taraf apna hath badha deta hai, to Ruhi bhi uska hath tham leti hai aur khadi ho jati hai.

Raj ne dekha ki uska shirt karab ho gaya hai Ruhi ke rone se, aur Ruhi ki bhi ankhe aur naak laal ho gaye thy itna rone se, per cute bhi bahut lag rahi thy.

Raj : to madam ye batane ka kast kare ki aapko kesse pata chala ki mai hi Raj hun ?

Ruhi bhi Raj ke ankho mai dekhke bolne lagi,

Ruhi : jaab pehli baar aapse mili thy to kuch apnapan laga per samajh mai nahi aaya, fir jaab bhi apke sath hoti to apnapan sa lagta tha, kabhi kabhi apka baato se mujhe mere Raj ki matlab mera dost Raj ki yaad aajati thy to laga ki aap hi me…Raj ho….

Maine to khud ko ek dayere mai band kar liya tha kisi ka bharosha nahi karti thy per jaab aapse mili to aap per Zara bhabhi per khud ba khud bharosha ho gaya. Jaab apko chot lag gayi thy to yesa laga ki kisi apne ko dard hua ho.

Fir agle din jaab aap aaram karne ke jagah office aagaye to mujhe bahut gussa aaya tha per mai samajh nahi pa rahi thy ki ek hi din mai aapse itna lagab kese ho gaya.

Dhire dhire aapke sath se mujhe aap mai hamesha Raj ki hi jhalak dikhayi deti thy, fir jaab aap USA gaye to bahut miss kiya apko jese mai Raj ko karti thy fir apke ghar mai apki school ki photo dekhi to dil ne baas yanhi kaha ki aap hi Raj ho.

Ruhi jaab ye saab bol rahi thy to uske chehre pe ek alag hi chamak thy, wo ye saab bade pyaar se Raj ke ankho mai dekh ke hi bol rahi hoti hai.

Raj baas ye soch raha hota hai ki kesse Ruhi ne usse mehsus kiya aur pehchana usse.

Ruhi : ooh…ham dono bhul hi gaye ki bhabhi ke papa ko bhi milna hai aur baat bhi karni hai jis kaam ke liye aaye thy wo to kar le….

Raj : han…dekho tumhare wajah….

Ruhi : meri wajah se..maine kya kiya…..

Raj : rone mai itna time laga diya…bina ro ke bhi ye bata sakti thy na…baas ya to soti rehti ho ya roti rehti ho…..

Ruhi (gusse mai) : acha to aap mere baare mai yesa sochte ho….aur…aur wo mai jaan ke nahi royi thy….wo..to….

Raj : aare yaar..baas aab gussa mat ho mai to majak kar raha tha aur ye tumne kya laga rakha hai aap..aap…aab tum mujhe mere naam se hi bulaogi Raj samajhi….

Ruhi (mann mai) : aab aap mere baas dost thodi ho jo tum kahungi aur mai bhi apko baas Raj hi kehna chahti hun….

Raj : lo aab bilkul chup ho gayi..kuch to bolo….

Ruhi : aab aap ko aap bolne ki aadat hai to itni jaldi nahi jayegi, aur aaj se mai apko Raj hi kahungi….

Raj : hmm, aab chale….

Ruhi : ji chaliye….

Aab Raj Ruhi ke sath tha to Raj banke per raj ne Ruhi ko ye nahi bataya ki wo pehle se hi janta hai ki wo hi Ruhi hai, Ruhi ko bhi yahi lag raha tha ki raj ko aaj hi pata chala hai per wo bhi janna chahti thy ki Raj ko kya mehsus hota tha aur wo uske liye kya hai, isiliye Ruhi ne Raj ko dost hi kaha tha….

Fir dono nikal jate hai aur thodi der baad Raj ne apni car rokh di ek bahut hi bade se banglow ke samne, ye mumbai wale banglow se kayi guna bada aur sunder tha….

Raj aur Ruhi car se utar jate hai…Raj Ruhi ke paas aake bolta hai….

Raj : ye Janki villa hai Ruhi…meri maa ke naam per maine mere ghar ka naam rakha hai, ye mere sapno ka ghar hai jo maine apni mehnat se khada kiya wese hi jese maa apne sapno ka ghar chahti thy, mai 10 saal ka tha jaab maa mujhe batati thy ki papa hamare liye kabhi na kabhi yesa ghar banayenge, per….

Raj ye bolte huye uske ankho mai anshu aajate hai to Ruhi bhi aage badh ke Raj ke hath ko pakad leti hai….

Ruhi : apko pata hai aap duniya ke sabse ache bete ho aur apke maa papa janha bhi honge baas apko dekh ke garv kar rahe honge ki unka itna acha, pyara, cute sa beta hai….

Raj Ruhi ki baate sunne ke baad uske face pe ek smile aajati hai,

Raj : acha ji..per ye to mujhe kisi ne pehli waar cute kaha hai nahi to akdu..khadus…pata nahi kya kya bolte hai loog to….

Ruhi : kabhi meri nazar se dekho to pata chale….

Raj herani se : kya..kya…kanha tumne….

Ruhi : kya…kuch bhi nahi aab bahar hi rehna hai ya ander bhi chale….

Raj : hmm..chalo….

Jab ruhi ander aati hai to wo baas ghar ko dekti hi reh jati hai, kyun ki wo ander se kafi shandar tha bahar ke mukable.

Ruhi : wooow…..it’s beautiful I love it…. Raj sach mai ye ghar ko mehel se kaam nahi hai.

Ruhi ki baate sunke Raj hasne lagta hai usse dekhte huye,

Ruhi bhi Raj ko dekh ke bolti hai,

Ruhi : aare mai bhi na..are ye lagega kya ye hai aur aap iske raja hai.

Raj : aare bas bas..mai koi raja nahi hun….

Ruhi : aapko nahi pata..maine bol diya to bol diya….

Fir Ruhi aage badh ke pura ghar dekne lagti hai.

Raj (mann mai) : aagar mai raja hun to tum bhi meri aur mere iss ghar ki rani ho..aur hamesha isi tarah khush raha karo yanhi dua meri bhagwan ke paas.

Jab Raj Ruhi ke sath nahi aaya to Ruhi wapas aake dekhti hai ki Raj kisi soch mai hai, to wo aake usse hilake puchti hai,

Ruhi : kanha kho gaye janab….aur iss ghar mai koi aur dikhayi kyun nahi de raha….

Raj : aare madam aab subha ke 5-5.30 baaj rahe hai saab kaam karne wale so rahe honge, piche hi unka room hai. Aur chalo mere sath tum,

Raj chalte huye baas Ruhi ko dekh raha hota hai.

Ruhi : kuch puchna hai aapko.

Raj : hmm….

Ruhi : to pandit ko bulake muhurat nikalu taab puchenge…..

Raj : tum aaj kuch badli badli si lag rahi ho..kuch alag hi..

Ruhi : yesa kuch nahi hai....

Yese hi baate karte karte dono upar aajate hai.

Ruhi : aur han kyun ki mujhe mera raj wapas mil gaya hai aur aaj mai bahut khush hun. Ye sari baate ruhi raj ke ankho mai dekh ke bolti hai.

Raj : chalo bahut baate ho gayi aab iss room mai so jao mai apne kamre mai ja raha hun fir sham ko hame uncle ke ghar bhi jana hai.

Itna bolke raj jane lagta hai to ruhi kuch udash ho jati hai aur room ki aur jane lagti per raj wapas mud ke ruhi ko apne taraf khinch leta hai aur gale laga leta hai.

Raj : mai bhi aaj khush hun bahut khush, Ruhi mai baas jata nahi pa raha hun….tumhe nahi pata iss din ko maine bina kisi umeed ke saalo intezar kiya hai. Mujhe to apni taqdeer pe hi yakin nahi ho raha hai ki tum mujhe wapas mil gayi….

Raj Ruhi se alag hoke uske chehre ko apne hatho mai le kar uske mathe pe kiss karta hai to Ruhi ke ankho mai nami aajati hai.

Raj : aab tum so jao thak gayi hogi aur mai bhi jata hun bahut nind aarahi hai.

Ruhi apna sar han mai hila deti hai..jese hi Raj jane ko hua Ruhi bhi Raj ka hath pakad leti hai, jesse Raj mudta hai aur kuch puchne ko hota hai ki Ruhi uske hoth pe ungli rakh deta hai aur raj ke mathe pe kiss kar deti hai.

Ruhi : aab aap jao aur so jao…fir bhag ke kamre ke ander ghus jati hai.

Raj : pagal ladki…fir apne kamre ki aur chal padta hai….

Idhar ruhi bed pe let ke raj ke baare mai hi soch rahi thy…

Ruhi : itna pyaar karte ho to keh kyun nahi dete ho aap, apki ankho mai dikhta hai jab aap baat kar rahe thy aur fir apne mathe pe hath lagake smile karti hai.

Ye aapka pyaar hi hai jiska yehsas mujhe ho gaya hai. Aap bhi utna hi tadpe ho aur unta hi intezar kiya hai jitna maine, aur aab keh bhi nahi pa rahe ho…. Yese Raj ke baare mai sochti huyi Ruhi nind ki wadiyo mai kho jati hai.

Idhar Raj badi bechani se apne kamre mai ghumta rehta hai. Aur baas yahi soch raha tha ki Ruhi bol kyun nahi deti hai ki pyaar karti hai ye dost dost kyu laga rakhi hai…mai janta hun uss din bhi nashe mai bhi bol diya tha tumne per aaj jab mai samne tha to dost kyun…kyun….

Fir rohan ko phone karta hai, iss waqt zara aur rohan dono pool ke paas mai hi bethe huye thy. Jab rohan raj ka phone dekha to herani huyi usko,

Rohan : hello…Raj….

Fir Raj Rohan ko keh ke usse saab kuch bataane lagta hai.

Rohan bhi Khushi se : aare wah mere sher ye to sabse achi khabar sunayi tune…

Raj : yaar…per wo to dost keh rahi thy, per uski ankhe kuch aur hi bata rahi thy, per wo bol kuch aur hi rahi hai….

Rohan : tu gadha tha, gadha hai aur gadha hi rahega…wese to mere mamle mai bada love guru baan raha tha to aab thoda sabar to rakh….

wo ek daam se kese tujhe keh degi I love you…aur tune hi kaha tha ki ladke hi pehle bolte hai…wese meri maan to jaldbaji maat karna…dono sath mai time spend karo thoda, fir tu bol diyo…apni dil ki baat.

Raj gehri sans leke : hmmm…ye baat to sahi hai teri chal bye…nind aarahi hai mujhe..

Rohan : aur yaad rakhna behen hai meri koi dukh maat pahuchana usse….

Raj : tujhse jyaad pyaar karta hun usse….

Rohan : han han…ashiqui mai janta hun…..

Fir Raj bhi phone rakhke so jata hai, 10.30-11 baje Raj uthta hai aur naha ke tayar ho jata hai fir kamre se bahar aata hai taab tak saab kaam karne wale uth ke apne apne kaam mai busy thy.

Saab Raj ko dekh ke good morning wish karte hai, saab ko pata tha ki Raj kabhi bhi ghar aajata hai to koi heran nahi tha.

Raj : aaj do loogo ka breakfast bana na hai, mere saath koi aur bhi hai aur wo mere paas wale kamre mai hi hai to koi disturb na karna usse….

Itna bol ke Raj Ruhi ko dekhne ke liye uske kamre ki taraf chala jata hai.

Ruhi puri nind mai thy, aur befikar so rahi thy aur uske chehre pe abhi ek bahut hi pyaari se muskurahat thy, Raj ne darwaj khat khatane ke liye hath badhata hai to wo khul jata hai, aur Raj ander chala jata hai.

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Naik · Jul 21, 2021

NewWriter23 said:
Update 30

Jesse hi Raj ander ghusta hai to Ruhi ko dekhta hi reh jata hai, aur apne mann mai baas yahi sochne lagta hai ki koi itna pyara kese ho sakta hai, bilkul massom si, chuyi muyi si lag rahi thy Ruhi sote huye….

Abhi Raj Ruhi ko dekh hi raha hota hai ki Ruhi kuch badbadane lagti hai, to Raj usko sunne ke liye bilkul uske karib aajata hai.

Ruhi (nind mai) : haye..kitne cute hai mera Raj, bilkul cutipie ki tarah, pata nahi gussa kanha se aagaya itna..mera to mann karta hai ki uski naak pe kiss karu aur sara gussa bhaga dun….

Raj ko Ruhi ki baate sunke apne mann mai bahut hasta hai, fir Ruhi ke kaan ke paas jake bolta hai,

Raj : apka cutipie apko uthne ka intezar kar raha hai madam to jaldi se uthiye.

Raj ke baate sunke Ruhi bhi uth jati hai per uske chehre mai se muskurahat ja hi nahi rahi thy, wo aab bhi soch rahi thy ki wo ek sapna hai ki Raj usse uthane aaya hai.
Per jaab Ruhi apni ankhe khol ke samne Raj ko dekti hai to hadbada jati hai….

Ruhi : aa….aap…sach mai…..

Raj : ji mai sach mai hun aur kitna soti ho yaar tum, chalo utho aab aur fresh ho jao mai niche tumhara wait kar raha hun khane pe….

Ruhi : wo…wo….

Raj : kya hua….

Ruhi : wo mere paas…kapde nahi hai…..

Raj : itni si baat ye cupboard kholo aur jo pasand aaye wo pehen lena….

Ruhi jhat se uthke cupboard khol leti hai to usme bahut se dress thy aur 6 saree bhi thy wo sabhi simple thy per behed hi khubsurat.

Ruhi : ye kiski hai..Anu to ye nahi pehen ti janha tak mai janta hun usko.

Raj : han wo use nahi karti ye, ye saab tumhara hai..pichle 6 salo se kharid ke rakha hua hai, aur ye saree tumhare har saal birthday pe kharid ta tha aur ye jo kamra hai wo bhi tumhare liye aur isme rakhe sari chize bhi.

Raj ki baate sunke Ruhi ke ankho mai anshu aajate hai aur Ruhi aage badhkar Raj ko kash ke gale laga leti hai. Raj bhi thoda heran tha aur khush bhi. Jese hi Raj Ruhi ko dekhta hai to Ruhi ro rahi hoti hai, to Raj Ruhi ko chehre ko tham leta hai apne hatho se aur uski anshu ko pochne lagta hai.

Raj : sssshhh….mujhe inn ankho mai se aage kabhi bhi anshu nahi chahiye..aur jaldi se ready hoke niche aajao..mai wait kar raha hun….

Ruhi han mai apna sar hila leti hai, aur Raj chala jata hai niche aur Ruhi ek saree utha ke chal deti hai fresh hone….

Kuch time baad Ruhi tayar hoke niche aati hai, wo ek meroon green colour ka saree aur uske sath matching earrings chote chote, baal ko ek side kiya hua tha, thoda sa make up saree se match hota hua.

Jaab Ruhi niche aayi to Raj baas dekta hi raha use, jese jese Ruhi niche utara rahi thy, Raj ko yese laag raha tha ki uska dil bahar aajayega uske sarir se.

Aur kaam karne wale bhi baas Ruhi aur raj ko hi dekh rahe hote hai,

Naukar 1 : yaar yesa lagat hai ki yanhi hamare madam banengi….

Naukar 2 : bhai mujhe bhi yanhi lagta hai, kyun ki aaj tak iss ghar mai Anu madam ke alawa koi aur ladki aayi hi nahi hai, aur na hi sir aaj tak kisi ladki ko yese dekhe hai.

Naukar 1 : han bhai.

Ruhi niche aake Raj ke samne beth jati hai, aur Raj ko ek chutki kaat leti hai….Raj bhi apne hosh mai aajata hai.

Ruhi : kya hua Raj, kya dekh rahe thy, kya mai achi nahi lag rahi hun…

Raj : bahut achi lag rahi ho…..

Ruhi : thanks Raj….

Raj : Raj se kuch bola nahi ja raha tha badi muskil ye bolta hai, kuch socha tumne….

Ruhi herani se : kis bare mai….

Raj : yanhi ki uncle se kya baat karni hai…..

Ruhi (jor se) : kya…aapne socha nahi kuch…hai bhagwan kya hoga inka….

Raj : aare yaar mai majak kar raha hun..baat kar lunga mai uncle se tum baas mujhe support de dena thik hai.

Ruhi : ji….

Fir dono hi yese baate karte karte khana khatam karte hai, khane ke time bhi Raj baas Ruhi ko dekh raha hota hai aur iska yehsas Ruhi ko bhi ho gaya tha aur wo baas saram maare laal hua lada tha.

Jaab khana khatam hota hai to Ruhi aur Raj ke ankhe milti hai to Ruhi zyada sarmane lagti hai aur Raj bhi hadbada jata hai aur apna phone nikal ke baate karte huye bahar ki aur chala jata hai.

Raj : Viren kab tak mujhe join karoge....aur sham tak ek khush khabri bhi deni hai tumhe to iss baar phone utha lena.

Dusri taraf : bhai kaal sham taak ye mission pura ho jayega to tujhe mai parso tere ghar per hi milunga aur Rohan kesa hai?

Raj : sham ko tujhe batata hun wo kesa hai chal bye..khyal rakhna….

Dusre taraf : ham..chal bye….

Fir Raj Ruhi ko leke Zara ke ghar chala jata hai. Wo ek bunglow ke ander chale jate hai aur jake wanha beth jate hai, kuch der baad ek budha admi aata hai aur jaab Raj ki nazar uske upar padti to wo uthke jake unke gale milta hai.

Raj : kese hai Mallik sahab.

Mallik : thik hun barkhudar, tum batao aur wo Ruhi ko dekhne lagte.

Ruhi bhi unke paas jake hath jod ke unko namaste karti hai to wo bhi Ruhi ke sar pe hath rakh deta hai.

Mallik : ye bachi kon hai Raj….

Raj : ye meri bahut purani dost hai aur hamare sath hi kaam karti hai, per mai aaj aapke paas kuch jaruri baat karne aaya hun.

Mallik : bolo Raj….

Raj : Mallik sahab…Zara ke bare mai baat hai….

Mallik ji thode sakte mai aagaye jaab ye suna….

Mallik : fir se kisiko pit dala usne ya kuch aur kiya….

Raj : are nahi Mallik sahab pichle tin saalo mai wo mere sath hai aur yesa kuch nahi kiya usne….

Mallik : to kya baat hai….

Ruhi se aur raha nahi gaya to wo apne jagah se uthke aake Mallik ji ke ghutne ke paas beth jati hai aur bolne lagti hai,

Ruhi : uncle Zara kisi se pyaar karti hai aur shadi karna chahti hai.

Mallik ji ye sunke uthne ke huye to Ruhi ne unka hath pakad liya.

Ruhi : uncle aap pehle puri baat sun lijiye fir kuch karna….

Ruhi ki baate sunke wo rukh jate hai, Ruhi bhi apni baate ko jari rakhti hai.

Ruhi : uncle Zara jisse pyaar karti hai wo aur koi nahi Raj ke bachpan ke dost aur mere bhai Rohan hai. Wo bahut ache hai. Janha taak mujhe pata hai aap Raj per bahut bharosha karte hai to yanhi bharosha aap aab bhi rakhiye, aagar Rohan Bhai sahi nahi hote Zara ke liye to Raj kabhi bhi apke paas nahi aate.

Raj : ji Mallik sahab aur jante hai aap, Rohan koi aur nahi mera Wanhi dost hai jo mere sath yanha tha aur mere har sukh dukh mai mere sath khada raha hai. Aap hamesha mujhse uske baare mai baate karte thy aur uske baare mai puchte thy na to apki beti ko bhi wanhi pasand aaya. Mai galat ho sakta hun per Rohan kabhi nahi…..

Mallik : iss bachi se uska rishta kesse….

Fir Raj Ruhi aur Rohan ke baare mai saab kuch bata deta hai.

Mallik : mujhe itna acha ladka to khud dhundne se bhi nahi milta. Mujhe ye rishta manjur hai.

Ruhi (khushi se) : thanks uncle aab mai Zara ko Zara bhabhi hi bolungi.

Raj bhi khushi se Mallik ke gale lag jata hai.

Mallik : per shadi yanhi hogi tum Zara aur Rohan ko lekar jaldi se yanha iss seher mai aajao baki baate fir kabhi karenge.

Raj : ji Jessa aapko sahi lage.

Dono jesse hi Jane ke liye nikalte hai to Ruhi kisi se takra ke girne lagti hai per uss admi se pakadne se pehle hi Raj Ruhi ko pakad leta hai.

Raj : tum thik to ho….

Ruhi han mai apna sar hila deti hai.
Raj aur Ruhi samne dekhte hai to ek 6 feet ka ladka gora chehera, halki si beard, kali ankhe, aur black pathani suit mai tha. Wo Raj ko herani se dekh raha tha aur Raj usse….

Raj : tum yanha…kese….

Wo ladka : yanhi mai tujhse puchu to….

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Naik · Jul 21, 2021

NewWriter23 said:
Update 31

Raj aur wo ladka baas ek dusre ko dekhe hi ja rahe thy, fir haste huye ek dusre ke gale lag jate hai. Ruhi herani se dono ko dekh rahi hoti hai. Wo ladka bhi Raj se alag hoke Ruhi ko dekhne lagta hai fir bolta hai,

Ladka : Raj..tune bataya nahi ki tune shadi kar li, aur jake Ruhi ke aage khada ho jata hai.

Ladka : hello bhabhi ji….

Ruhi gusse se Raj ko dekhne lagti hai Raj to baas hass raha tha.

Raj : oo…baas kar meri koyi shadi nahi huyi hai aur Ruhi dost hai meri aur Ruhi ye Zara ka bada bhai Kabir hai.

Ruhi Kabir ko namaste karti hai.

Kabir : sorry..bha…mera matlab Ruhi ji…wo aaj tak kisi ladki ke sath isse dekha nahi to mujhe laga….

Tabhi Raj ko ek call aajata hai to wo bahar chala jata hai aur Ruhi ko Kabir baas dekhta hi rehta hai. To Ruhi ko bahut ajib lagti hai to wo bhi bahar jane lagti hai to Kabir bhi sath hi chalne lagta hai.

Kabir : ek baat bolu Ruhi ji aapse….

Ruhi : Ruhani..mera naam Ruhani hai Ruhi sirf Raj hi bula sakte hai mujhe….

Kabir : chaliye to Ruhani ji aap Raj se pyaar karte ho na….

Ruhi herani se Kabir ko dekhne lagti hai….

Kabir bhi apne baate jari rakhte huye : aur Raj bhi aapse pyaar karta hai.

Ruhi : ye..ye saab kya bol rahe hai aap….

Kabir : wanhi jo sach hai apki ankho mai dikta hai Raj ke liye pyaar….

Ruhi kuch bolne hi wali thy ki Raj wanha aajata hai to Ruhi bolte bolte rukh jati hai.

Raj : Kabir Zara ne apne liye ladka dhund liya hai, aur fir sari baate bata deta hai. To tujhe thik laga na….

Kabir : dekh Rohan ko mai janta hun aur usse acha ladka Zara ko mil hi nahi sakta hai.

Raj : han wo to hai….

Kabir : tu wo chod tu ye bata ki tu kaab shadi kar raha hai….

Raj Ruhi dekhta hai aur bolta hai : pehle ladki to han kare fir aage kuch hoga….

Ruhi inke baate na sunke jake sidhe car mai beth jati hai, Raj bhi Kabir ko jawab de ke apna sar hilake car ki aur chala jata hai….

Kabir wanh khade khade badbadata hai : aag to dono taraf lagi hai….

Raj aur Ruhi dono thodi der ke drive ke baad ghar pahunch jate hai.

Raj : Ruhi ham aaj raat ko nikal rahe hai…

Ruhi kuch udas ho jati hai, wese hi bolti hai : hmm..itni jaldi….

Raj : han kal Zara aur Rohan ko bata kar unhe yanha Mallik sahab se bhi milwana hai.

Ruhi : thik hai….fir Ruhi apne kamre mai chali jati hai aur apne mann mai badbadane ke wajaye sach mai bol deti hai.

Ruhi : abhi to mile thy, paas bhi nahi aaye aur firse dur….

Raj bahar khada sun raha tha aur muskura raha tha. Tabhi Raj ke piche koyi apna hath rakh deta hai to Raj piche mud kedekhta hai jo heran ho jata hai. Piche Kabir khada tha.

Raj : tu hamara picha kar raha tha?

Kabir : karna pada kyun ki tu mujhe bye bolke bhi nahi aaya.

Raj : tu ek bye ke liye to yanha nahi aasakta..bata kya baat hai….

Kabir : wo..mujhe Zara aur Rohan se Abu se pehle milna hai to mai tumhare sath hi ja raha hun….

Raj : kuch jaruri baat hai….

Kabir : yaar bhai hun to….samajha kar na….aur Rohan se bhi milne ka maan hai….

Raj : ok ok no problem to ham baas kuch hi der mai nikalte hai….

Kabir : to..wese ye ruhani meri bhabhi hi hai na….

Raj Kabir ko dekhne lagta hai, to Kabir ne Raj ko ankh mar deta hai, jesse ye keh rhaa ho ki mujhe to pehle hi pata lag gaya tha.

Kabir : tujhe mai 6 saal se janta hun, tu jaab se yanha aaya tha taab se, tu kisi ladki se baat to dur dekhta bhi nahi tha aur iss ladki se….

Raj : Kabir wo ladki meri Ruhi hai….jo mere jine ki wajah hai….

Kabir Raj ko herani se dekhne lagta hai, fir bolta hai : to ye hai wo..teri dream girl jiske liye tune yanha ki har ladki ka dil tod diya..wow yaar..wese bhabhi bahut khubsurat hai….

Raj haste huye Kabir ke gale lag jata hai aur tabhi Ruhi bhi bahar aajati hai….

Ruhi : aap..aap dono yanha…..

Raj ne jese hi mud ke dekha to dekhta reh gaya, kyun ki abhi Ruhi ek salwar suit mai thy aur uske sath saab kuch matching ki pehni thy....

Raj (dhire se) : ye ladki to aaj meri jaan hi leke manegi….

Ruhi ne ek aur baar wanhi sawal karti hai….

Raj : wo mai tumhe dekhne….mera matlab..bulane..han bulane aaya tha aur Kabir bhi aagaya…to hamare sath hi jayega….

Ruhi ne han mai sar hilaya aur Raj Kabir ke sath hi niche aagayi….

Kabir (haste huye) : tera to usse dekhte hi bura haal ho jata hai to bolega kesse…..

Raj : tu na..baas yaar chup hoja aab….wese bhi aab raha nahi jata dur….chal chod aab ye bata ki baat kya hai jo tu ja raha hai mere sath kyun ki mera itna kehne per bhi tu kabhi ye field chod ke kahi nahi gaya…aur aab….

Kabir : yanha ka kaam khatam hua Raj…aab thode din chuti pe hun…to Abu se pehle Rohan se milna chahta hun aur kuch baate clear karna chahta hun aur fir se sath chahta hun..uska….

Raj : Rohan ko nahi pata Zara tumhari behen hai aur Zara ko bhi Rohan ka nahi pata….

Kabir : to fir sahi hai mere liye, easy hoga dono ko samajhana….

Raj : hmm…wese Rohan ko ye pata hai ki mai tumse aur Viren se dono se baate karta hun aur kaam bhi kar raha hun…per wo kuch nahi bolta mujhse..baas tum dono ko miss na karna yanhi dikhata hai….

Kabir : janta hun wo apne aapko bahut dur rakh raha hai per kaab tak dur rahega….

Raj : aab lag raha hai ki saab thik ho hi jayega….

Raj, Kabir aur Ruhi teeno mumbai ki aur nikal jate hai, aur Raj car drive kar raha tha, Kabir uske paas samne betha tha aur Ruhi piche. Raj ne to back mirror Ruhi ke chehre pe hi set kar liya tha, aur Raj ki ankhe to baas Ruhi pe set thy.

Kuch dur aane per Kabir ka phone per message aaya to Kabir kuch sochne lagta hai fir piche Ruhi ko dekh ke bolta hai,

Kabir : Ruhani ji apko bukh nahi lagi hai….

Ruhi : han lagi to hai….

Kabir : Raj..aage ek resort hai Wanha rok dena..wanha kafi acha khana milta hai.

Raj : ok….

Kuch der mai teeno ek resort ke samne khade thy, teeno ander chale jate hai aur khana order kar dete hai aur Ruhi fresh hone ke liye chali jati hai. Jesse hi Ruhi jati hai to Raj Kabir se puchta hai,

Raj : kya hua….

Kabir : wo kaal jiss neta ko mara tha uski party ne hungama kiya hai aur road jam kar diya hai aage se to, yanhi rukhna hoga..sir ka message hai ki wo handle kar lenge hame baas kuch din koi mission nahi karna hai to isiliye mujhe bhi chuti leni padi.

Raj : ok chalo acha hi hai, ham Rohan ki shadi pe pura dhyaan denge….

Kabir : han Viren bhi free ho gaya hoga..wo aab tak Punjab mai hi hai ya aagaya….

Raj : kaam to ho gaya hai Wanha aab aajayega wo kaal sham tak….

Kabir lambi sans leke,

Kabir : char saal baad ham charo sath honge Raj….tu to Rohan se mil liya karta tha per hamse to usne khud hi duri bana li yaar aur Viren to kabhi kuch nahi bolta baas kuch bhi karo baas muskura kar chala jata hai.

Raj : wo issliye kyunki ham saab mai se sabse samajhdar wanhi hai Rohan ke baad Viren hi hai jo kisi bhi situation ko handle kar sakta hai….

Kabir (gusse se) : tere kehna ka matlab mai samajhdar nahi hun….

Tabhi Ruhi aakar beth gayi aur Kabir ko dekhne lagi jo gusse se Raj ko dekh raha tha.

Ruhi : Kabir kya hua hai apko, aap itne gusse mai kyun ho....

Kabir : Raj ko lagta hai ki Viren mujhse jyada samajhdar hai….

Ruhi : aab ye Viren kon hai….

Kabir : hamara jigri yaar….

Raj : oye..Ruhi ko kese pata hoga….

Ruhi : to batao…mujhe bhi janna hai ki ye 6 saal kese gujre thy….

Raj : ok..per pehle khana kha lo..wese bhi aaj raat yanhi rukhna hai aage dange ho gaye hai aur rasta band hai..maine room book kar liya hai….

Ruhi : ooh..chalo aaj apki kahani sunugi….

Saab khana kahne lage….

Mumbai….Raj ke ghar…..

Zara Anu ke sath kitchen mai thy aur Rohan office ka kaam kar raha tha. Tabhi doorbell baji to Anu darwaja kholne gayi..per jese hi Anu ne darwaja khola to koyi nahi dikha….

Anu thoda sa bahar aayi to koi piche se ander jane laga to Anu bina dekhe boli….

Anu : to apki yese aane ki aadat badli nahi..mujhe laga itna time dur rahe ho to badal gaye honge….

Admi : tum bhi to nahi badli..hamesha ki tarah pehchan hi liya wo bhi bina dekhe….

Anu jese hi piche ki aur palti to dekh ke dar gayi…uski ankho se anshu aagaye….

Anu : apko ye chot kese…kaab…aap apna dhyaan kyun nahi rakhte….

Udhar Ruhi, Raj, Kabir khana kha kar Ruhi ke kamre mai ikathe ho gaye. Sabhi bed pe beth gaye..Ruhi ne to pop corn bhi manga liya tha.

Raj : Ruhi ye saab sunne se pehle mujhe ek wada chahiye….

Ruhi : kessa wada Raj….

Raj : yanhi ki jo bhi tumhe aaj pata chalega tum kabhi kisiko nahi bataogi..kyun ki ye ham charo se judi kahani hai, mai, Rohan, Kabir aur Viren…..

Aur ye baat to Zara ko bhi nahi pata, per han Anu saab janti hai….

Ruhi herani se kabhi Raj ko dekhti to kabhi Kabir ko….

Ruhi : yasi kya baat hai….

Raj : bharosa hai….

Ruhi : khud se bhi jyada….

Raj : to wada….

Ruhi ne Raj ka hath pakad liya,

Ruhi : wada….

Kabir : oye…Romeo Juliet..ham bhi hai yanha pe….

Ruhi aur Raj Kabir ki baat sunke baas idhar udhar dekhne lagte hai. Thodi der baad,

Raj : han to kahani suru karte hai.

Behtareen zaberdast shaandaar update bhai

NewWriter23 · Jul 21, 2021

Update 32

Flashback;

6 saal pehle jaab mai mumbai chodne ka faisla liya to Rohan bhi mere sath hi chal pada. Kaka ne Bangalore ke ek anath ashram mai baat kar li thy aur hame wanha bhej diya

Mai, Rohan aur Anu ne school se transfer certificate banwa liye thy. Mai aur Rohan aab bade ho hi gaye thy, per ham dono ko Anu ki chinta thy kyunki wanha per wo sabse karib Rohan aur kaka se hi thy per yanha aake wo bilkul chup si ho gayi thy.

Hamme jo kamra mila wanha per pehle se hi ek ladka reh raha tha aur Anu ko maine bhi raji karwa liya hamare kamre mai rehne ke liye kyun ki mai aur Rohan nahi chahte thy ki wo koi dusra kamre mai akeli gum sum si rahe.

Jo ladka hamare sath reh raha tha uska naam Viren tha. Jo baas apne mai hi rehta..kisi se baat nahi karta..dekhne mai wo hamse kuch bada lagta tha. Pata nahi kyun saab ladke usse darte thy aur ham dono ko bhi usse dur rehne ke liye bolte per jo anath ashram ke owner thy wo mujhe aur Rohan ko hamesha Viren ke sath rehne ke liye kehte....

Abhi flashback chal rahi thy ki Kabir bich mai bol padta hai....

Kabir : yaar..kab se ye Viren Viren hi lag rakha hai mere baare mai bhi bata....

Raj : tujhse baad mai mila tha....

Ruhi : lagta hai Kabir ki Viren se nahi banti....

Raj : nahi Ruhi jese mai aur Rohan hai wese hi Viren aur Kabir hai bachpan ke dost per pichle 3 saal se Viren se naraj hai Kabir aur baat bhi nahi ki isiliye ye itna chid raha hai....

Kabir : chal..chal...kuch bhi..tu aage bata....

Raj : hmm.....

Mai aur Rohan ne pehla ek hafta to Anu ko sambhalne mai laga diya. Uski koyi room mate bhi nahi thy. Wo chahti hi nahi thy kisi se bhi baat karna, usse lagta tha ki wo jiske sath bhi bolegi wo usse dur chala jayega....

Mujhse bhi kaam bolti thy. Hamesha Rohan hi behla fusla kar khana khila deta tha usse.

Aur mujhe ham teeno ka admission ki bhi tension thy to Anu ko jyaada kuch bol nahi pata tha. Ham teeno ko jiss school mai Viren padhta tha wanhi admission mil gaya. Mai aur Rohan dono Viren ke sath +2 mai thy aur Anu 8th mai thy.

Pehle 6 mahine ki fees to mere aur Rohan ke paas thy, to hamne pehle hi meri, Rohan ki aur Anu ki 6 mahine ki fees bhar di, kyun ki itne paise apne paas rakhne ka bhi dar lagta tha.

Per mujhe aage ki soch kar nind nahi aati thy. Anu wese to 14 saal ki ho gayi thy per thy puri bachi. Bahut massom si..maine aur Rohan ne bahut hi pyaar se aaj tak pala hai usse, to dar lagta tha iss nayi jagah se ki Anu baas thik rahe.

Jis din pehla din tha ham school jane ke liye ready huye to hame tie nahi bandhni aayi..ham dono munh latka kar beth gaye kyun ki mumbai mai kaka ye kaam karte thy.

Tabhi Viren ready hoke aaya aur ham hath mai tie liye yese betha dekh ke saab samajh gaya.

Viren : dono khade ho jao...

Mai aur Rohan ne baas ek dusre ko dekhne lage....

Viren : sunayi nahi diya..khade ho jao....

Mai aur Rohan dar ke mare khade ho gaye, kyun ki Viren ki body bahut achi thy, per mere aur Rohan ko lambayi achi thy per body nahi thy.

Viren ne pehel Rohan ka tie bandha aur fir meri aur fir ham dono ka baal bhi sahi kiya.

Viren : ham..aab ache lag rahe ho dono...to chalo....

Ham dono ne han mai sar hilaya aur bahar jane lage, tabhi Anu ander aagayi. Anu ke baal bhi khule thy aur tie bhi uske hath mai thy.

Anu : Rohan Bhai meri choti to kaka banate thy aur tie bhi kaka hi bandhte thy. Fir udas hoke bed pe beth jati hai

Viren Anu ko dekha to muskurake uske paas chala jata hai aur uske hath se tie leta hai, to Anu badi badi ankho se Viren ko dekhne lagti hai, fir Viren Anu ko tie bandhne lagta hai.

Viren Anu ko tie bandhne ke time hi Rohan aur Raj ko dekhke kehta hai,

Viren : Rohan aaj school se aake tum iski choti banna sikhoge aur Raj tum tie bandhna.

Mai aur Rohan dono ne sar han mai hila diya, fir Viren ne Anu ki choti banane lagta hai to Anu dur jane lagti hai to ham dono aage badhkar usko hasane lagte hai, to kuch time baad Anu bhi khilkhilakakar hasne lagti hai.

Fir ham charo school ke liye nikal gaye. Wanha pahunch ke ham dono Viren ke sath hi rahe Anu ko school chodne ke baad, Viren bhi ham dono ko leke chala gaya ek aur ladke se milwane ke liye.

Viren : Rohan, Raj ye mera jigri dost Kabir hai aur Kabir ye hai wo dono jinke baare me, mai tumhe bataya tha.

Kabir Rohan aur mere charo aur gol gol ghumne laga. Per ham dono aram se bina dare khade thy.

Kabir (gusse se) : tum dono ko mujhse dar nahi lag raha hai kya....

Raj : dar uska hi rakhna chahiye jo apse jyada takatwar ho ya jiske sath aap koi mukabala nahi kar sakte....

Kabir : to mai tumse jyada takatwar nahi hun.....

Rohan : nahi bilkul bhi nahi ham dono ek ek karke bhi tumhara samna kar sakte hai jese ki ham dono Viren ka nahi kar sakte....

Rohan aur Raj ki baate sunke Kabir ka munh utar jata hai, per Viren hasne lagta hai.

Kabir : yaar mai fir se har gaya tum dono daare kyu nahi yaar....

kabir udas sa Viren ko dekh raha hota hai aur Viren baas has raha tha. Rohan aur mai pehli baar dekha tha jaab Viren ko haas raha tha.

Raj : Viren kya tum hamara dost banoge....

Raj ki baate sunke Viren chup ho jata hai, kuch der baad bolta hai,

Viren : mai tumhara dost hi hun agar dost nahi hota to subha koyi madat nahi karta...mai jyada dost nahi banata per ek hafta tumko dekha maine kese tum ek dusre ko sambhal rahe ho..baas tum dono ne hi mere dil mai apni jagah bana li.

Rohan : to Kabir kya tum bhi hamse dosti karoge....

Kabir : aare aaj se Kabir baas Viren ka hi dost raha hai per tum log aab Viren ke dost ho to mere bhi dost huye....

Fir ham charo gale mil jate hai aur class mai chale jate hai. yese hi hamare dosti ki suruwat huyi thy....

Lunch time mai ham charo Anu ki class mai jate hai to Anu ek side mai akeli hi bethi thy. To saab uske paas gaye. Jese hi Anu ne mujhe aur Rohan ko apne samne dekha to mere gale lag ke rone lagi.

Raj : kya hua Anu....kyun ro rahi hai meri princess....

Anu baas roye ja rahi thy. Mai baas Anu ko gale lagaya hua tha aur Rohan bhi ham dono ko aur Anu ka sar sehla raha tha. Saab class ke bache baas hame hi dekh rahe thy,

Raj (jor se) : kya aab ek bhai apni behen ko chup bhi nahi karwa sakta….

Meri baate sunke saab idhar udhar dekhne lagte hai, to mai bhi wanha na rukh ke Anu ko leke bahar park mai aajata hun, aur ek bench pe beth jata hun aur usko apne paas betha leta hun.

Rohan, Viren aur Kabir mere samne hi khade rehte hai. Tabhi ek ladka aake kehta hai,

Ladka : Rajveer aur Rohan ko office mai bula rahe hai kuch sign karna hai admission form mai.

Raj : Anu beta..baas mai abhi aaya tu yanhi beth..dekh ye Viren hai aur ye Kabir hai mere aur Rohan Bhai ke dost, tu ghabarana nahi ye dono yanhi tere paas hai mai abhi aaya.

Anu subkate huye han mai apna sar hila deti hai. Rohan aur mai dono chale jate hai. Viren aage badh ke Anu ke paas beth jata hai aur uske sar pe hath rakh deta hai, to Anu firse badi badi ankhe karke Viren ko dekhne lagti hai.

Viren : kya hua..ro kyu rahi ho..kisine kuch kaha….

Anu baas Viren ko dekti rahi aur chup rahi….

Viren : kya hua..please batao….

Viren ke itne pyaar se puchne pe Anu thodi der dekti rahi usse fir bol padi,

Anu : wo..wo..na class mai mera koi dost nahi hai..mai...mai akeli thy…subha se..aur mujhe dar lag raha tha….

Viren ne apna rumal nikal ke Anu ko diya aur Kabir ko ishara kiya to Kabir bhi lag gaya Anu ko hasane ke liye, thodi si kosis ke baad Anu bhi rona chod ke hasne lagti hai.

Fir Viren uth ke ek ladki ko Anu ke paas le aaya, jo ki Anu ki class ki hi thy aur usse Anu ki dosti bhi karwayi. Uska naam Nibbi tha.

Kabir Nibbi ko bahut chidhata tha. Per Nibbi usse kuch nahi kehti baas muskura ke reh jati.

Tabhi mai aur Rohan bhi aagaye apna kaam pura karke, aur Anu ko khush dekhke hame rahat mili.

Yese hi hamare din gujar rahe thy aur ham saab dost aab aur bhi karib aagaye thy. Per Viren har raat kisi ko bina bole kahi chala jata aur subha hone se pehle aajata tha. Mujhe aur Rohan ko ye baat kuch thik nahi lagi to ek din ham dono ne puri raat jaag ke Viren ka wait karte rahe. Jese hi Viren aaya to ham dono ko samne hi betha paya to wo muskura utha.

Viren : janta tha, tumhe kuch doubt aagaye hai, aur mujhe puchoge kabhi, wese mai bhi batane wala tha chalo aaj hi bata deta hun, kyun ki tum mere best Friend ho isliye, per ye raaz hi rakhna please.

Raj aur Rohan : thik hai, tu bata to sahi….

Viren : mai ek undercover agent hun ETF team ka jo direct army chief ke under kaam karti hai. Mere papa pehle head thy iss team ke per 3 saal pehle unki mout ho gayi aur maa bhi ye Sadma jhel nahi payi per papa ki icha thy ki mai bhi desh ki seva karu to unke dost ne mujhe unhi ki jagah join karne ko kaha per mai 18 saal ka nahi tha taab, isiliye yanha aagaya aur aab 19 ka hun to pichle saal hi join kiya tha maine per abhi meri training hi chal rahi hai.

Mai aur Rohan baas herani se Viren ko dekhe ja rahe thy.

Raj : to issliye tumhari body itni achi bani hai.

Viren : promise karo ye kisiko bhi pata nahi chale.

Ham dono ne bhi usko promise kar diya.

Tabhi Ruhi bich mai hi bol padti hai,

Ruhi : to tumhara dost secret agent hai..sachi….

Raj : han baba..sachi….

Ruhi ka yesa reaction dekhke Kabir bolta hai,

Kabir : aare abhi to kahani suru huyi hai aage aage suniye aur kya kya milega aapko….

Raj to baas Ruhi ko hi dekhne mai hi khoya hua tha. To Kabir bhi Raj ka maje lene ke mood mai tha, to Kabir Ruhi ke samne hi Raj se puchta hai….

Kabir : ham charo ki dosti lajawab hai na….

Raj jo pura Ruhi mai hi khoya hua tha,

Raj : han to….

Kabir : Ruhi bhi tujhe janti hai na kabse…

Raj : han to….

Kabir : Ruhi kitni sunder hai na….

Raj : han to….

Kabir : teri dost hai na….

Raj : han to….

Kabir : aur tu Ruhi se pyaar karta hai na….

Raj : han to….

Kabir : to kya bhabhi ne sun liya hai….

Jese hi Raj ko hosh aaya to usse pata chala ki usne kya kya bol diya hai Ruhi ko dekhte huye, aur Ruhi to baas Raj ko dekh rahi thy.

Kabir : dekho yaar aab tum dono apni kahani ke baare mai baat karo ye kahani to aab mumbai mai jake hi puri hogi.

Mai ja raha hun apne kamre mai sone ke liye tum subha tak saab kuch clear kar lena.

Kabir to chala jata hai Wanha se per Raj ki jaan ko latka jata hai.

Ruhi bina kuch bole hi bed se uthke kamre ki balcony mai chali jati hai aur jake khadi ho jati hai. Mann hi mann Ruhi behed hi khush thy per Raj ko tang karna chahti thy.

Raj bhi himmat karke Ruhi ke paas chala jata hai, aur jake Ruhi ke piche jake khada ho jata hai.

Ajay · Jul 21, 2021

NewWriter23 said:
Update 31

Raj aur wo ladka baas ek dusre ko dekhe hi ja rahe thy, fir haste huye ek dusre ke gale lag jate hai. Ruhi herani se dono ko dekh rahi hoti hai. Wo ladka bhi Raj se alag hoke Ruhi ko dekhne lagta hai fir bolta hai,

Ladka : Raj..tune bataya nahi ki tune shadi kar li, aur jake Ruhi ke aage khada ho jata hai.

Ladka : hello bhabhi ji….

Ruhi gusse se Raj ko dekhne lagti hai Raj to baas hass raha tha.

Raj : oo…baas kar meri koyi shadi nahi huyi hai aur Ruhi dost hai meri aur Ruhi ye Zara ka bada bhai Kabir hai.

Ruhi Kabir ko namaste karti hai.

Kabir : sorry..bha…mera matlab Ruhi ji…wo aaj tak kisi ladki ke sath isse dekha nahi to mujhe laga….

Tabhi Raj ko ek call aajata hai to wo bahar chala jata hai aur Ruhi ko Kabir baas dekhta hi rehta hai. To Ruhi ko bahut ajib lagti hai to wo bhi bahar jane lagti hai to Kabir bhi sath hi chalne lagta hai.

Kabir : ek baat bolu Ruhi ji aapse….

Ruhi : Ruhani..mera naam Ruhani hai Ruhi sirf Raj hi bula sakte hai mujhe….

Kabir : chaliye to Ruhani ji aap Raj se pyaar karte ho na….

Ruhi herani se Kabir ko dekhne lagti hai….

Kabir bhi apne baate jari rakhte huye : aur Raj bhi aapse pyaar karta hai.

Ruhi : ye..ye saab kya bol rahe hai aap….

Kabir : wanhi jo sach hai apki ankho mai dikta hai Raj ke liye pyaar….

Ruhi kuch bolne hi wali thy ki Raj wanha aajata hai to Ruhi bolte bolte rukh jati hai.

Raj : Kabir Zara ne apne liye ladka dhund liya hai, aur fir sari baate bata deta hai. To tujhe thik laga na….

Kabir : dekh Rohan ko mai janta hun aur usse acha ladka Zara ko mil hi nahi sakta hai.

Raj : han wo to hai….

Kabir : tu wo chod tu ye bata ki tu kaab shadi kar raha hai….

Raj Ruhi dekhta hai aur bolta hai : pehle ladki to han kare fir aage kuch hoga….

Ruhi inke baate na sunke jake sidhe car mai beth jati hai, Raj bhi Kabir ko jawab de ke apna sar hilake car ki aur chala jata hai….

Kabir wanh khade khade badbadata hai : aag to dono taraf lagi hai….

Raj aur Ruhi dono thodi der ke drive ke baad ghar pahunch jate hai.

Raj : Ruhi ham aaj raat ko nikal rahe hai…

Ruhi kuch udas ho jati hai, wese hi bolti hai : hmm..itni jaldi….

Raj : han kal Zara aur Rohan ko bata kar unhe yanha Mallik sahab se bhi milwana hai.

Ruhi : thik hai….fir Ruhi apne kamre mai chali jati hai aur apne mann mai badbadane ke wajaye sach mai bol deti hai.

Ruhi : abhi to mile thy, paas bhi nahi aaye aur firse dur….

Raj bahar khada sun raha tha aur muskura raha tha. Tabhi Raj ke piche koyi apna hath rakh deta hai to Raj piche mud kedekhta hai jo heran ho jata hai. Piche Kabir khada tha.

Raj : tu hamara picha kar raha tha?

Kabir : karna pada kyun ki tu mujhe bye bolke bhi nahi aaya.

Raj : tu ek bye ke liye to yanha nahi aasakta..bata kya baat hai….

Kabir : wo..mujhe Zara aur Rohan se Abu se pehle milna hai to mai tumhare sath hi ja raha hun….

Raj : kuch jaruri baat hai….

Kabir : yaar bhai hun to….samajha kar na….aur Rohan se bhi milne ka maan hai….

Raj : ok ok no problem to ham baas kuch hi der mai nikalte hai….

Kabir : to..wese ye ruhani meri bhabhi hi hai na….

Raj Kabir ko dekhne lagta hai, to Kabir ne Raj ko ankh mar deta hai, jesse ye keh rhaa ho ki mujhe to pehle hi pata lag gaya tha.

Kabir : tujhe mai 6 saal se janta hun, tu jaab se yanha aaya tha taab se, tu kisi ladki se baat to dur dekhta bhi nahi tha aur iss ladki se….

Raj : Kabir wo ladki meri Ruhi hai….jo mere jine ki wajah hai….

Kabir Raj ko herani se dekhne lagta hai, fir bolta hai : to ye hai wo..teri dream girl jiske liye tune yanha ki har ladki ka dil tod diya..wow yaar..wese bhabhi bahut khubsurat hai….

Raj haste huye Kabir ke gale lag jata hai aur tabhi Ruhi bhi bahar aajati hai….

Ruhi : aap..aap dono yanha…..

Raj ne jese hi mud ke dekha to dekhta reh gaya, kyun ki abhi Ruhi ek salwar suit mai thy aur uske sath saab kuch matching ki pehni thy....

Raj (dhire se) : ye ladki to aaj meri jaan hi leke manegi….

Ruhi ne ek aur baar wanhi sawal karti hai….

Raj : wo mai tumhe dekhne….mera matlab..bulane..han bulane aaya tha aur Kabir bhi aagaya…to hamare sath hi jayega….

Ruhi ne han mai sar hilaya aur Raj Kabir ke sath hi niche aagayi….

Kabir (haste huye) : tera to usse dekhte hi bura haal ho jata hai to bolega kesse…..

Raj : tu na..baas yaar chup hoja aab….wese bhi aab raha nahi jata dur….chal chod aab ye bata ki baat kya hai jo tu ja raha hai mere sath kyun ki mera itna kehne per bhi tu kabhi ye field chod ke kahi nahi gaya…aur aab….

Kabir : yanha ka kaam khatam hua Raj…aab thode din chuti pe hun…to Abu se pehle Rohan se milna chahta hun aur kuch baate clear karna chahta hun aur fir se sath chahta hun..uska….

Raj : Rohan ko nahi pata Zara tumhari behen hai aur Zara ko bhi Rohan ka nahi pata….

Kabir : to fir sahi hai mere liye, easy hoga dono ko samajhana….

Raj : hmm…wese Rohan ko ye pata hai ki mai tumse aur Viren se dono se baate karta hun aur kaam bhi kar raha hun…per wo kuch nahi bolta mujhse..baas tum dono ko miss na karna yanhi dikhata hai….

Kabir : janta hun wo apne aapko bahut dur rakh raha hai per kaab tak dur rahega….

Raj : aab lag raha hai ki saab thik ho hi jayega….

Raj, Kabir aur Ruhi teeno mumbai ki aur nikal jate hai, aur Raj car drive kar raha tha, Kabir uske paas samne betha tha aur Ruhi piche. Raj ne to back mirror Ruhi ke chehre pe hi set kar liya tha, aur Raj ki ankhe to baas Ruhi pe set thy.

Kuch dur aane per Kabir ka phone per message aaya to Kabir kuch sochne lagta hai fir piche Ruhi ko dekh ke bolta hai,

Kabir : Ruhani ji apko bukh nahi lagi hai….

Ruhi : han lagi to hai….

Kabir : Raj..aage ek resort hai Wanha rok dena..wanha kafi acha khana milta hai.

Raj : ok….

Kuch der mai teeno ek resort ke samne khade thy, teeno ander chale jate hai aur khana order kar dete hai aur Ruhi fresh hone ke liye chali jati hai. Jesse hi Ruhi jati hai to Raj Kabir se puchta hai,

Raj : kya hua….

Kabir : wo kaal jiss neta ko mara tha uski party ne hungama kiya hai aur road jam kar diya hai aage se to, yanhi rukhna hoga..sir ka message hai ki wo handle kar lenge hame baas kuch din koi mission nahi karna hai to isiliye mujhe bhi chuti leni padi.

Raj : ok chalo acha hi hai, ham Rohan ki shadi pe pura dhyaan denge….

Kabir : han Viren bhi free ho gaya hoga..wo aab tak Punjab mai hi hai ya aagaya….

Raj : kaam to ho gaya hai Wanha aab aajayega wo kaal sham tak….

Kabir lambi sans leke,

Kabir : char saal baad ham charo sath honge Raj….tu to Rohan se mil liya karta tha per hamse to usne khud hi duri bana li yaar aur Viren to kabhi kuch nahi bolta baas kuch bhi karo baas muskura kar chala jata hai.

Raj : wo issliye kyunki ham saab mai se sabse samajhdar wanhi hai Rohan ke baad Viren hi hai jo kisi bhi situation ko handle kar sakta hai….

Kabir (gusse se) : tere kehna ka matlab mai samajhdar nahi hun….

Tabhi Ruhi aakar beth gayi aur Kabir ko dekhne lagi jo gusse se Raj ko dekh raha tha.

Ruhi : Kabir kya hua hai apko, aap itne gusse mai kyun ho....

Kabir : Raj ko lagta hai ki Viren mujhse jyada samajhdar hai….

Ruhi : aab ye Viren kon hai….

Kabir : hamara jigri yaar….

Raj : oye..Ruhi ko kese pata hoga….

Ruhi : to batao…mujhe bhi janna hai ki ye 6 saal kese gujre thy….

Raj : ok..per pehle khana kha lo..wese bhi aaj raat yanhi rukhna hai aage dange ho gaye hai aur rasta band hai..maine room book kar liya hai….

Ruhi : ooh..chalo aaj apki kahani sunugi….

Saab khana kahne lage….

Mumbai….Raj ke ghar…..

Zara Anu ke sath kitchen mai thy aur Rohan office ka kaam kar raha tha. Tabhi doorbell baji to Anu darwaja kholne gayi..per jese hi Anu ne darwaja khola to koyi nahi dikha….

Anu thoda sa bahar aayi to koi piche se ander jane laga to Anu bina dekhe boli….

Anu : to apki yese aane ki aadat badli nahi..mujhe laga itna time dur rahe ho to badal gaye honge….

Admi : tum bhi to nahi badli..hamesha ki tarah pehchan hi liya wo bhi bina dekhe….

Anu jese hi piche ki aur palti to dekh ke dar gayi…uski ankho se anshu aagaye….

Anu : apko ye chot kese…kaab…aap apna dhyaan kyun nahi rakhte….

Udhar Ruhi, Raj, Kabir khana kha kar Ruhi ke kamre mai ikathe ho gaye. Sabhi bed pe beth gaye..Ruhi ne to pop corn bhi manga liya tha.

Raj : Ruhi ye saab sunne se pehle mujhe ek wada chahiye….

Ruhi : kessa wada Raj….

Raj : yanhi ki jo bhi tumhe aaj pata chalega tum kabhi kisiko nahi bataogi..kyun ki ye ham charo se judi kahani hai, mai, Rohan, Kabir aur Viren…..

Aur ye baat to Zara ko bhi nahi pata, per han Anu saab janti hai….

Ruhi herani se kabhi Raj ko dekhti to kabhi Kabir ko….

Ruhi : yasi kya baat hai….

Raj : bharosa hai….

Ruhi : khud se bhi jyada….

Raj : to wada….

Ruhi ne Raj ka hath pakad liya,

Ruhi : wada….

Kabir : oye…Romeo Juliet..ham bhi hai yanha pe….

Ruhi aur Raj Kabir ki baat sunke baas idhar udhar dekhne lagte hai. Thodi der baad,

Raj : han to kahani suru karte hai.

Mast update

mashish · Jul 21, 2021

NewWriter23 said:
Update 32

Flashback;

6 saal pehle jaab mai mumbai chodne ka faisla liya to Rohan bhi mere sath hi chal pada. Kaka ne Bangalore ke ek anath ashram mai baat kar li thy aur hame wanha bhej diya

Mai, Rohan aur Anu ne school se transfer certificate banwa liye thy. Mai aur Rohan aab bade ho hi gaye thy, per ham dono ko Anu ki chinta thy kyunki wanha per wo sabse karib Rohan aur kaka se hi thy per yanha aake wo bilkul chup si ho gayi thy.

Hamme jo kamra mila wanha per pehle se hi ek ladka reh raha tha aur Anu ko maine bhi raji karwa liya hamare kamre mai rehne ke liye kyun ki mai aur Rohan nahi chahte thy ki wo koi dusra kamre mai akeli gum sum si rahe.

Jo ladka hamare sath reh raha tha uska naam Viren tha. Jo baas apne mai hi rehta..kisi se baat nahi karta..dekhne mai wo hamse kuch bada lagta tha. Pata nahi kyun saab ladke usse darte thy aur ham dono ko bhi usse dur rehne ke liye bolte per jo anath ashram ke owner thy wo mujhe aur Rohan ko hamesha Viren ke sath rehne ke liye kehte....

Abhi flashback chal rahi thy ki Kabir bich mai bol padta hai....

Kabir : yaar..kab se ye Viren Viren hi lag rakha hai mere baare mai bhi bata....

Raj : tujhse baad mai mila tha....

Ruhi : lagta hai Kabir ki Viren se nahi banti....

Raj : nahi Ruhi jese mai aur Rohan hai wese hi Viren aur Kabir hai bachpan ke dost per pichle 3 saal se Viren se naraj hai Kabir aur baat bhi nahi ki isiliye ye itna chid raha hai....

Kabir : chal..chal...kuch bhi..tu aage bata....

Raj : hmm.....

Mai aur Rohan ne pehla ek hafta to Anu ko sambhalne mai laga diya. Uski koyi room mate bhi nahi thy. Wo chahti hi nahi thy kisi se bhi baat karna, usse lagta tha ki wo jiske sath bhi bolegi wo usse dur chala jayega....

Mujhse bhi kaam bolti thy. Hamesha Rohan hi behla fusla kar khana khila deta tha usse.

Aur mujhe ham teeno ka admission ki bhi tension thy to Anu ko jyaada kuch bol nahi pata tha. Ham teeno ko jiss school mai Viren padhta tha wanhi admission mil gaya. Mai aur Rohan dono Viren ke sath +2 mai thy aur Anu 8th mai thy.

Pehle 6 mahine ki fees to mere aur Rohan ke paas thy, to hamne pehle hi meri, Rohan ki aur Anu ki 6 mahine ki fees bhar di, kyun ki itne paise apne paas rakhne ka bhi dar lagta tha.

Per mujhe aage ki soch kar nind nahi aati thy. Anu wese to 14 saal ki ho gayi thy per thy puri bachi. Bahut massom si..maine aur Rohan ne bahut hi pyaar se aaj tak pala hai usse, to dar lagta tha iss nayi jagah se ki Anu baas thik rahe.

Jis din pehla din tha ham school jane ke liye ready huye to hame tie nahi bandhni aayi..ham dono munh latka kar beth gaye kyun ki mumbai mai kaka ye kaam karte thy.

Tabhi Viren ready hoke aaya aur ham hath mai tie liye yese betha dekh ke saab samajh gaya.

Viren : dono khade ho jao...

Mai aur Rohan ne baas ek dusre ko dekhne lage....

Viren : sunayi nahi diya..khade ho jao....

Mai aur Rohan dar ke mare khade ho gaye, kyun ki Viren ki body bahut achi thy, per mere aur Rohan ko lambayi achi thy per body nahi thy.

Viren ne pehel Rohan ka tie bandha aur fir meri aur fir ham dono ka baal bhi sahi kiya.

Viren : ham..aab ache lag rahe ho dono...to chalo....

Ham dono ne han mai sar hilaya aur bahar jane lage, tabhi Anu ander aagayi. Anu ke baal bhi khule thy aur tie bhi uske hath mai thy.

Anu : Rohan Bhai meri choti to kaka banate thy aur tie bhi kaka hi bandhte thy. Fir udas hoke bed pe beth jati hai

Viren Anu ko dekha to muskurake uske paas chala jata hai aur uske hath se tie leta hai, to Anu badi badi ankho se Viren ko dekhne lagti hai, fir Viren Anu ko tie bandhne lagta hai.

Viren Anu ko tie bandhne ke time hi Rohan aur Raj ko dekhke kehta hai,

Viren : Rohan aaj school se aake tum iski choti banna sikhoge aur Raj tum tie bandhna.

Mai aur Rohan dono ne sar han mai hila diya, fir Viren ne Anu ki choti banane lagta hai to Anu dur jane lagti hai to ham dono aage badhkar usko hasane lagte hai, to kuch time baad Anu bhi khilkhilakakar hasne lagti hai.

Fir ham charo school ke liye nikal gaye. Wanha pahunch ke ham dono Viren ke sath hi rahe Anu ko school chodne ke baad, Viren bhi ham dono ko leke chala gaya ek aur ladke se milwane ke liye.

Viren : Rohan, Raj ye mera jigri dost Kabir hai aur Kabir ye hai wo dono jinke baare me, mai tumhe bataya tha.

Kabir Rohan aur mere charo aur gol gol ghumne laga. Per ham dono aram se bina dare khade thy.

Kabir (gusse se) : tum dono ko mujhse dar nahi lag raha hai kya....

Raj : dar uska hi rakhna chahiye jo apse jyada takatwar ho ya jiske sath aap koi mukabala nahi kar sakte....

Kabir : to mai tumse jyada takatwar nahi hun.....

Rohan : nahi bilkul bhi nahi ham dono ek ek karke bhi tumhara samna kar sakte hai jese ki ham dono Viren ka nahi kar sakte....

Rohan aur Raj ki baate sunke Kabir ka munh utar jata hai, per Viren hasne lagta hai.

Kabir : yaar mai fir se har gaya tum dono daare kyu nahi yaar....

kabir udas sa Viren ko dekh raha hota hai aur Viren baas has raha tha. Rohan aur mai pehli baar dekha tha jaab Viren ko haas raha tha.

Raj : Viren kya tum hamara dost banoge....

Raj ki baate sunke Viren chup ho jata hai, kuch der baad bolta hai,

Viren : mai tumhara dost hi hun agar dost nahi hota to subha koyi madat nahi karta...mai jyada dost nahi banata per ek hafta tumko dekha maine kese tum ek dusre ko sambhal rahe ho..baas tum dono ne hi mere dil mai apni jagah bana li.

Rohan : to Kabir kya tum bhi hamse dosti karoge....

Kabir : aare aaj se Kabir baas Viren ka hi dost raha hai per tum log aab Viren ke dost ho to mere bhi dost huye....

Fir ham charo gale mil jate hai aur class mai chale jate hai. yese hi hamare dosti ki suruwat huyi thy....

Lunch time mai ham charo Anu ki class mai jate hai to Anu ek side mai akeli hi bethi thy. To saab uske paas gaye. Jese hi Anu ne mujhe aur Rohan ko apne samne dekha to mere gale lag ke rone lagi.

Raj : kya hua Anu....kyun ro rahi hai meri princess....

Anu baas roye ja rahi thy. Mai baas Anu ko gale lagaya hua tha aur Rohan bhi ham dono ko aur Anu ka sar sehla raha tha. Saab class ke bache baas hame hi dekh rahe thy,

Raj (jor se) : kya aab ek bhai apni behen ko chup bhi nahi karwa sakta….

Meri baate sunke saab idhar udhar dekhne lagte hai, to mai bhi wanha na rukh ke Anu ko leke bahar park mai aajata hun, aur ek bench pe beth jata hun aur usko apne paas betha leta hun.

Rohan, Viren aur Kabir mere samne hi khade rehte hai. Tabhi ek ladka aake kehta hai,

Ladka : Rajveer aur Rohan ko office mai bula rahe hai kuch sign karna hai admission form mai.

Raj : Anu beta..baas mai abhi aaya tu yanhi beth..dekh ye Viren hai aur ye Kabir hai mere aur Rohan Bhai ke dost, tu ghabarana nahi ye dono yanhi tere paas hai mai abhi aaya.

Anu subkate huye han mai apna sar hila deti hai. Rohan aur mai dono chale jate hai. Viren aage badh ke Anu ke paas beth jata hai aur uske sar pe hath rakh deta hai, to Anu firse badi badi ankhe karke Viren ko dekhne lagti hai.

Viren : kya hua..ro kyu rahi ho..kisine kuch kaha….

Anu baas Viren ko dekti rahi aur chup rahi….

Viren : kya hua..please batao….

Viren ke itne pyaar se puchne pe Anu thodi der dekti rahi usse fir bol padi,

Anu : wo..wo..na class mai mera koi dost nahi hai..mai...mai akeli thy…subha se..aur mujhe dar lag raha tha….

Viren ne apna rumal nikal ke Anu ko diya aur Kabir ko ishara kiya to Kabir bhi lag gaya Anu ko hasane ke liye, thodi si kosis ke baad Anu bhi rona chod ke hasne lagti hai.

Fir Viren uth ke ek ladki ko Anu ke paas le aaya, jo ki Anu ki class ki hi thy aur usse Anu ki dosti bhi karwayi. Uska naam Nibbi tha.

Kabir Nibbi ko bahut chidhata tha. Per Nibbi usse kuch nahi kehti baas muskura ke reh jati.
Tabhi mai aur Rohan bhi aagaye apna kaam pura karke, aur Anu ko khush dekhke hame rahat mili.

Yese hi hamare din gujar rahe thy aur ham saab dost aab aur bhi karib aagaye thy. Per Viren har raat kisi ko bina bole kahi chala jata aur subha hone se pehle aajata tha. Mujhe aur Rohan ko ye baat kuch thik nahi lagi to ek din ham dono ne puri raat jaag ke Viren ka wait karte rahe. Jese hi Viren aaya to ham dono ko samne hi betha paya to wo muskura utha.

Viren : janta tha, tumhe kuch doubt aagaye hai, aur mujhe puchoge kabhi, wese mai bhi batane wala tha chalo aaj hi bata deta hun, kyun ki tum mere best Friend ho isliye, per ye raaz hi rakhna please.

Raj aur Rohan : thik hai, tu bata to sahi….

Viren : mai ek undercover agent hun ETF team ka jo direct army chief ke under kaam karti hai. Mere papa pehle head thy iss team ke per 3 saal pehle unki mout ho gayi aur maa bhi ye Sadma jhel nahi payi per papa ki icha thy ki mai bhi desh ki seva karu to unke dost ne mujhe unhi ki jagah join karne ko kaha per mai 18 saal ka nahi tha taab, isiliye yanha aagaya aur aab 19 ka hun to pichle saal hi join kiya tha maine per abhi meri training hi chal rahi hai.

Mai aur Rohan baas herani se Viren ko dekhe ja rahe thy.

Raj : to issliye tumhari body itni achi bani hai.

Viren : promise karo ye kisiko bhi pata nahi chale.

Ham dono ne bhi usko promise kar diya.

Tabhi Ruhi bich mai hi bol padti hai,

Ruhi : to tumhara dost secret agent hai..sachi….

Raj : han baba..sachi….

Ruhi ka yesa reaction dekhke Kabir bolta hai,

Kabir : aare abhi to kahani suru huyi hai aage aage suniye aur kya kya milega aapko….

Raj to baas Ruhi ko hi dekhne mai hi khoya hua tha. To Kabir bhi Raj ka maje lene ke mood mai tha, to Kabir Ruhi ke samne hi Raj se puchta hai….

Kabir : ham charo ki dosti lajawab hai na….

Raj jo pura Ruhi mai hi khoya hua tha,

Raj : han to….

Kabir : Ruhi bhi tujhe janti hai na kabse…

Raj : han to….

Kabir : Ruhi kitni sunder hai na….

Raj : han to….

Kabir : teri dost hai na….

Raj : han to….

Kabir : aur tu Ruhi se pyaar karta hai na….

Raj : han to….

Kabir : to kya bhabhi ne sun liya hai….

Jese hi Raj ko hosh aaya to usse pata chala ki usne kya kya bol diya hai Ruhi ko dekhte huye, aur Ruhi to baas Raj ko dekh rahi thy.

Kabir : dekho yaar aab tum dono apni kahani ke baare mai baat karo ye kahani to aab mumbai mai jake hi puri hogi.

Mai ja raha hun apne kamre mai sone ke liye tum subha tak saab kuch clear kar lena.

Kabir to chala jata hai Wanha se per Raj ki jaan ko latka jata hai.

Ruhi bina kuch bole hi bed se uthke kamre ki balcony mai chali jati hai aur jake khadi ho jati hai. Mann hi mann Ruhi behed hi khush thy per Raj ko tang karna chahti thy.

Raj bhi himmat karke Ruhi ke paas chala jata hai, aur jake Ruhi ke piche jake khada ho jata hai.

Super duper update to raj agent hai

Ajay · Jul 21, 2021

NewWriter23 said:
Update 32

Flashback;

6 saal pehle jaab mai mumbai chodne ka faisla liya to Rohan bhi mere sath hi chal pada. Kaka ne Bangalore ke ek anath ashram mai baat kar li thy aur hame wanha bhej diya

Mai, Rohan aur Anu ne school se transfer certificate banwa liye thy. Mai aur Rohan aab bade ho hi gaye thy, per ham dono ko Anu ki chinta thy kyunki wanha per wo sabse karib Rohan aur kaka se hi thy per yanha aake wo bilkul chup si ho gayi thy.

Hamme jo kamra mila wanha per pehle se hi ek ladka reh raha tha aur Anu ko maine bhi raji karwa liya hamare kamre mai rehne ke liye kyun ki mai aur Rohan nahi chahte thy ki wo koi dusra kamre mai akeli gum sum si rahe.

Jo ladka hamare sath reh raha tha uska naam Viren tha. Jo baas apne mai hi rehta..kisi se baat nahi karta..dekhne mai wo hamse kuch bada lagta tha. Pata nahi kyun saab ladke usse darte thy aur ham dono ko bhi usse dur rehne ke liye bolte per jo anath ashram ke owner thy wo mujhe aur Rohan ko hamesha Viren ke sath rehne ke liye kehte....

Abhi flashback chal rahi thy ki Kabir bich mai bol padta hai....

Kabir : yaar..kab se ye Viren Viren hi lag rakha hai mere baare mai bhi bata....

Raj : tujhse baad mai mila tha....

Ruhi : lagta hai Kabir ki Viren se nahi banti....

Raj : nahi Ruhi jese mai aur Rohan hai wese hi Viren aur Kabir hai bachpan ke dost per pichle 3 saal se Viren se naraj hai Kabir aur baat bhi nahi ki isiliye ye itna chid raha hai....

Kabir : chal..chal...kuch bhi..tu aage bata....

Raj : hmm.....

Mai aur Rohan ne pehla ek hafta to Anu ko sambhalne mai laga diya. Uski koyi room mate bhi nahi thy. Wo chahti hi nahi thy kisi se bhi baat karna, usse lagta tha ki wo jiske sath bhi bolegi wo usse dur chala jayega....

Mujhse bhi kaam bolti thy. Hamesha Rohan hi behla fusla kar khana khila deta tha usse.

Aur mujhe ham teeno ka admission ki bhi tension thy to Anu ko jyaada kuch bol nahi pata tha. Ham teeno ko jiss school mai Viren padhta tha wanhi admission mil gaya. Mai aur Rohan dono Viren ke sath +2 mai thy aur Anu 8th mai thy.

Pehle 6 mahine ki fees to mere aur Rohan ke paas thy, to hamne pehle hi meri, Rohan ki aur Anu ki 6 mahine ki fees bhar di, kyun ki itne paise apne paas rakhne ka bhi dar lagta tha.

Per mujhe aage ki soch kar nind nahi aati thy. Anu wese to 14 saal ki ho gayi thy per thy puri bachi. Bahut massom si..maine aur Rohan ne bahut hi pyaar se aaj tak pala hai usse, to dar lagta tha iss nayi jagah se ki Anu baas thik rahe.

Jis din pehla din tha ham school jane ke liye ready huye to hame tie nahi bandhni aayi..ham dono munh latka kar beth gaye kyun ki mumbai mai kaka ye kaam karte thy.

Tabhi Viren ready hoke aaya aur ham hath mai tie liye yese betha dekh ke saab samajh gaya.

Viren : dono khade ho jao...

Mai aur Rohan ne baas ek dusre ko dekhne lage....

Viren : sunayi nahi diya..khade ho jao....

Mai aur Rohan dar ke mare khade ho gaye, kyun ki Viren ki body bahut achi thy, per mere aur Rohan ko lambayi achi thy per body nahi thy.

Viren ne pehel Rohan ka tie bandha aur fir meri aur fir ham dono ka baal bhi sahi kiya.

Viren : ham..aab ache lag rahe ho dono...to chalo....

Ham dono ne han mai sar hilaya aur bahar jane lage, tabhi Anu ander aagayi. Anu ke baal bhi khule thy aur tie bhi uske hath mai thy.

Anu : Rohan Bhai meri choti to kaka banate thy aur tie bhi kaka hi bandhte thy. Fir udas hoke bed pe beth jati hai

Viren Anu ko dekha to muskurake uske paas chala jata hai aur uske hath se tie leta hai, to Anu badi badi ankho se Viren ko dekhne lagti hai, fir Viren Anu ko tie bandhne lagta hai.

Viren Anu ko tie bandhne ke time hi Rohan aur Raj ko dekhke kehta hai,

Viren : Rohan aaj school se aake tum iski choti banna sikhoge aur Raj tum tie bandhna.

Mai aur Rohan dono ne sar han mai hila diya, fir Viren ne Anu ki choti banane lagta hai to Anu dur jane lagti hai to ham dono aage badhkar usko hasane lagte hai, to kuch time baad Anu bhi khilkhilakakar hasne lagti hai.

Fir ham charo school ke liye nikal gaye. Wanha pahunch ke ham dono Viren ke sath hi rahe Anu ko school chodne ke baad, Viren bhi ham dono ko leke chala gaya ek aur ladke se milwane ke liye.

Viren : Rohan, Raj ye mera jigri dost Kabir hai aur Kabir ye hai wo dono jinke baare me, mai tumhe bataya tha.

Kabir Rohan aur mere charo aur gol gol ghumne laga. Per ham dono aram se bina dare khade thy.

Kabir (gusse se) : tum dono ko mujhse dar nahi lag raha hai kya....

Raj : dar uska hi rakhna chahiye jo apse jyada takatwar ho ya jiske sath aap koi mukabala nahi kar sakte....

Kabir : to mai tumse jyada takatwar nahi hun.....

Rohan : nahi bilkul bhi nahi ham dono ek ek karke bhi tumhara samna kar sakte hai jese ki ham dono Viren ka nahi kar sakte....

Rohan aur Raj ki baate sunke Kabir ka munh utar jata hai, per Viren hasne lagta hai.

Kabir : yaar mai fir se har gaya tum dono daare kyu nahi yaar....

kabir udas sa Viren ko dekh raha hota hai aur Viren baas has raha tha. Rohan aur mai pehli baar dekha tha jaab Viren ko haas raha tha.

Raj : Viren kya tum hamara dost banoge....

Raj ki baate sunke Viren chup ho jata hai, kuch der baad bolta hai,

Viren : mai tumhara dost hi hun agar dost nahi hota to subha koyi madat nahi karta...mai jyada dost nahi banata per ek hafta tumko dekha maine kese tum ek dusre ko sambhal rahe ho..baas tum dono ne hi mere dil mai apni jagah bana li.

Rohan : to Kabir kya tum bhi hamse dosti karoge....

Kabir : aare aaj se Kabir baas Viren ka hi dost raha hai per tum log aab Viren ke dost ho to mere bhi dost huye....

Fir ham charo gale mil jate hai aur class mai chale jate hai. yese hi hamare dosti ki suruwat huyi thy....

Lunch time mai ham charo Anu ki class mai jate hai to Anu ek side mai akeli hi bethi thy. To saab uske paas gaye. Jese hi Anu ne mujhe aur Rohan ko apne samne dekha to mere gale lag ke rone lagi.

Raj : kya hua Anu....kyun ro rahi hai meri princess....

Anu baas roye ja rahi thy. Mai baas Anu ko gale lagaya hua tha aur Rohan bhi ham dono ko aur Anu ka sar sehla raha tha. Saab class ke bache baas hame hi dekh rahe thy,

Raj (jor se) : kya aab ek bhai apni behen ko chup bhi nahi karwa sakta….

Meri baate sunke saab idhar udhar dekhne lagte hai, to mai bhi wanha na rukh ke Anu ko leke bahar park mai aajata hun, aur ek bench pe beth jata hun aur usko apne paas betha leta hun.

Rohan, Viren aur Kabir mere samne hi khade rehte hai. Tabhi ek ladka aake kehta hai,

Ladka : Rajveer aur Rohan ko office mai bula rahe hai kuch sign karna hai admission form mai.

Raj : Anu beta..baas mai abhi aaya tu yanhi beth..dekh ye Viren hai aur ye Kabir hai mere aur Rohan Bhai ke dost, tu ghabarana nahi ye dono yanhi tere paas hai mai abhi aaya.

Anu subkate huye han mai apna sar hila deti hai. Rohan aur mai dono chale jate hai. Viren aage badh ke Anu ke paas beth jata hai aur uske sar pe hath rakh deta hai, to Anu firse badi badi ankhe karke Viren ko dekhne lagti hai.

Viren : kya hua..ro kyu rahi ho..kisine kuch kaha….

Anu baas Viren ko dekti rahi aur chup rahi….

Viren : kya hua..please batao….

Viren ke itne pyaar se puchne pe Anu thodi der dekti rahi usse fir bol padi,

Anu : wo..wo..na class mai mera koi dost nahi hai..mai...mai akeli thy…subha se..aur mujhe dar lag raha tha….

Viren ne apna rumal nikal ke Anu ko diya aur Kabir ko ishara kiya to Kabir bhi lag gaya Anu ko hasane ke liye, thodi si kosis ke baad Anu bhi rona chod ke hasne lagti hai.

Fir Viren uth ke ek ladki ko Anu ke paas le aaya, jo ki Anu ki class ki hi thy aur usse Anu ki dosti bhi karwayi. Uska naam Nibbi tha.

Kabir Nibbi ko bahut chidhata tha. Per Nibbi usse kuch nahi kehti baas muskura ke reh jati.
Tabhi mai aur Rohan bhi aagaye apna kaam pura karke, aur Anu ko khush dekhke hame rahat mili.

Yese hi hamare din gujar rahe thy aur ham saab dost aab aur bhi karib aagaye thy. Per Viren har raat kisi ko bina bole kahi chala jata aur subha hone se pehle aajata tha. Mujhe aur Rohan ko ye baat kuch thik nahi lagi to ek din ham dono ne puri raat jaag ke Viren ka wait karte rahe. Jese hi Viren aaya to ham dono ko samne hi betha paya to wo muskura utha.

Viren : janta tha, tumhe kuch doubt aagaye hai, aur mujhe puchoge kabhi, wese mai bhi batane wala tha chalo aaj hi bata deta hun, kyun ki tum mere best Friend ho isliye, per ye raaz hi rakhna please.

Raj aur Rohan : thik hai, tu bata to sahi….

Viren : mai ek undercover agent hun ETF team ka jo direct army chief ke under kaam karti hai. Mere papa pehle head thy iss team ke per 3 saal pehle unki mout ho gayi aur maa bhi ye Sadma jhel nahi payi per papa ki icha thy ki mai bhi desh ki seva karu to unke dost ne mujhe unhi ki jagah join karne ko kaha per mai 18 saal ka nahi tha taab, isiliye yanha aagaya aur aab 19 ka hun to pichle saal hi join kiya tha maine per abhi meri training hi chal rahi hai.

Mai aur Rohan baas herani se Viren ko dekhe ja rahe thy.

Raj : to issliye tumhari body itni achi bani hai.

Viren : promise karo ye kisiko bhi pata nahi chale.

Ham dono ne bhi usko promise kar diya.

Tabhi Ruhi bich mai hi bol padti hai,

Ruhi : to tumhara dost secret agent hai..sachi….

Raj : han baba..sachi….

Ruhi ka yesa reaction dekhke Kabir bolta hai,

Kabir : aare abhi to kahani suru huyi hai aage aage suniye aur kya kya milega aapko….

Raj to baas Ruhi ko hi dekhne mai hi khoya hua tha. To Kabir bhi Raj ka maje lene ke mood mai tha, to Kabir Ruhi ke samne hi Raj se puchta hai….

Kabir : ham charo ki dosti lajawab hai na….

Raj jo pura Ruhi mai hi khoya hua tha,

Raj : han to….

Kabir : Ruhi bhi tujhe janti hai na kabse…

Raj : han to….

Kabir : Ruhi kitni sunder hai na….

Raj : han to….

Kabir : teri dost hai na….

Raj : han to….

Kabir : aur tu Ruhi se pyaar karta hai na….

Raj : han to….

Kabir : to kya bhabhi ne sun liya hai….

Jese hi Raj ko hosh aaya to usse pata chala ki usne kya kya bol diya hai Ruhi ko dekhte huye, aur Ruhi to baas Raj ko dekh rahi thy.

Kabir : dekho yaar aab tum dono apni kahani ke baare mai baat karo ye kahani to aab mumbai mai jake hi puri hogi.

Mai ja raha hun apne kamre mai sone ke liye tum subha tak saab kuch clear kar lena.

Kabir to chala jata hai Wanha se per Raj ki jaan ko latka jata hai.

Ruhi bina kuch bole hi bed se uthke kamre ki balcony mai chali jati hai aur jake khadi ho jati hai. Mann hi mann Ruhi behed hi khush thy per Raj ko tang karna chahti thy.

Raj bhi himmat karke Ruhi ke paas chala jata hai, aur jake Ruhi ke piche jake khada ho jata hai.

Superb update

NewWriter23 · Jul 21, 2021

Ajay said:
Mast update

mashish said:
Super duper update to raj agent hai

Ajay said:
Superb update

Thank you

Mr. Nobody · Jul 21, 2021

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Update 32

Flashback;

6 saal pehle jaab mai mumbai chodne ka faisla liya to Rohan bhi mere sath hi chal pada. Kaka ne Bangalore ke ek anath ashram mai baat kar li thy aur hame wanha bhej diya

Mai, Rohan aur Anu ne school se transfer certificate banwa liye thy. Mai aur Rohan aab bade ho hi gaye thy, per ham dono ko Anu ki chinta thy kyunki wanha per wo sabse karib Rohan aur kaka se hi thy per yanha aake wo bilkul chup si ho gayi thy.

Hamme jo kamra mila wanha per pehle se hi ek ladka reh raha tha aur Anu ko maine bhi raji karwa liya hamare kamre mai rehne ke liye kyun ki mai aur Rohan nahi chahte thy ki wo koi dusra kamre mai akeli gum sum si rahe.

Jo ladka hamare sath reh raha tha uska naam Viren tha. Jo baas apne mai hi rehta..kisi se baat nahi karta..dekhne mai wo hamse kuch bada lagta tha. Pata nahi kyun saab ladke usse darte thy aur ham dono ko bhi usse dur rehne ke liye bolte per jo anath ashram ke owner thy wo mujhe aur Rohan ko hamesha Viren ke sath rehne ke liye kehte....

Abhi flashback chal rahi thy ki Kabir bich mai bol padta hai....

Kabir : yaar..kab se ye Viren Viren hi lag rakha hai mere baare mai bhi bata....

Raj : tujhse baad mai mila tha....

Ruhi : lagta hai Kabir ki Viren se nahi banti....

Raj : nahi Ruhi jese mai aur Rohan hai wese hi Viren aur Kabir hai bachpan ke dost per pichle 3 saal se Viren se naraj hai Kabir aur baat bhi nahi ki isiliye ye itna chid raha hai....

Kabir : chal..chal...kuch bhi..tu aage bata....

Raj : hmm.....

Mai aur Rohan ne pehla ek hafta to Anu ko sambhalne mai laga diya. Uski koyi room mate bhi nahi thy. Wo chahti hi nahi thy kisi se bhi baat karna, usse lagta tha ki wo jiske sath bhi bolegi wo usse dur chala jayega....

Mujhse bhi kaam bolti thy. Hamesha Rohan hi behla fusla kar khana khila deta tha usse.

Aur mujhe ham teeno ka admission ki bhi tension thy to Anu ko jyaada kuch bol nahi pata tha. Ham teeno ko jiss school mai Viren padhta tha wanhi admission mil gaya. Mai aur Rohan dono Viren ke sath +2 mai thy aur Anu 8th mai thy.

Pehle 6 mahine ki fees to mere aur Rohan ke paas thy, to hamne pehle hi meri, Rohan ki aur Anu ki 6 mahine ki fees bhar di, kyun ki itne paise apne paas rakhne ka bhi dar lagta tha.

Per mujhe aage ki soch kar nind nahi aati thy. Anu wese to 14 saal ki ho gayi thy per thy puri bachi. Bahut massom si..maine aur Rohan ne bahut hi pyaar se aaj tak pala hai usse, to dar lagta tha iss nayi jagah se ki Anu baas thik rahe.

Jis din pehla din tha ham school jane ke liye ready huye to hame tie nahi bandhni aayi..ham dono munh latka kar beth gaye kyun ki mumbai mai kaka ye kaam karte thy.

Tabhi Viren ready hoke aaya aur ham hath mai tie liye yese betha dekh ke saab samajh gaya.

Viren : dono khade ho jao...

Mai aur Rohan ne baas ek dusre ko dekhne lage....

Viren : sunayi nahi diya..khade ho jao....

Mai aur Rohan dar ke mare khade ho gaye, kyun ki Viren ki body bahut achi thy, per mere aur Rohan ko lambayi achi thy per body nahi thy.

Viren ne pehel Rohan ka tie bandha aur fir meri aur fir ham dono ka baal bhi sahi kiya.

Viren : ham..aab ache lag rahe ho dono...to chalo....

Ham dono ne han mai sar hilaya aur bahar jane lage, tabhi Anu ander aagayi. Anu ke baal bhi khule thy aur tie bhi uske hath mai thy.

Anu : Rohan Bhai meri choti to kaka banate thy aur tie bhi kaka hi bandhte thy. Fir udas hoke bed pe beth jati hai

Viren Anu ko dekha to muskurake uske paas chala jata hai aur uske hath se tie leta hai, to Anu badi badi ankho se Viren ko dekhne lagti hai, fir Viren Anu ko tie bandhne lagta hai.

Viren Anu ko tie bandhne ke time hi Rohan aur Raj ko dekhke kehta hai,

Viren : Rohan aaj school se aake tum iski choti banna sikhoge aur Raj tum tie bandhna.

Mai aur Rohan dono ne sar han mai hila diya, fir Viren ne Anu ki choti banane lagta hai to Anu dur jane lagti hai to ham dono aage badhkar usko hasane lagte hai, to kuch time baad Anu bhi khilkhilakakar hasne lagti hai.

Fir ham charo school ke liye nikal gaye. Wanha pahunch ke ham dono Viren ke sath hi rahe Anu ko school chodne ke baad, Viren bhi ham dono ko leke chala gaya ek aur ladke se milwane ke liye.

Viren : Rohan, Raj ye mera jigri dost Kabir hai aur Kabir ye hai wo dono jinke baare me, mai tumhe bataya tha.

Kabir Rohan aur mere charo aur gol gol ghumne laga. Per ham dono aram se bina dare khade thy.

Kabir (gusse se) : tum dono ko mujhse dar nahi lag raha hai kya....

Raj : dar uska hi rakhna chahiye jo apse jyada takatwar ho ya jiske sath aap koi mukabala nahi kar sakte....

Kabir : to mai tumse jyada takatwar nahi hun.....

Rohan : nahi bilkul bhi nahi ham dono ek ek karke bhi tumhara samna kar sakte hai jese ki ham dono Viren ka nahi kar sakte....

Rohan aur Raj ki baate sunke Kabir ka munh utar jata hai, per Viren hasne lagta hai.

Kabir : yaar mai fir se har gaya tum dono daare kyu nahi yaar....

kabir udas sa Viren ko dekh raha hota hai aur Viren baas has raha tha. Rohan aur mai pehli baar dekha tha jaab Viren ko haas raha tha.

Raj : Viren kya tum hamara dost banoge....

Raj ki baate sunke Viren chup ho jata hai, kuch der baad bolta hai,

Viren : mai tumhara dost hi hun agar dost nahi hota to subha koyi madat nahi karta...mai jyada dost nahi banata per ek hafta tumko dekha maine kese tum ek dusre ko sambhal rahe ho..baas tum dono ne hi mere dil mai apni jagah bana li.

Rohan : to Kabir kya tum bhi hamse dosti karoge....

Kabir : aare aaj se Kabir baas Viren ka hi dost raha hai per tum log aab Viren ke dost ho to mere bhi dost huye....

Fir ham charo gale mil jate hai aur class mai chale jate hai. yese hi hamare dosti ki suruwat huyi thy....

Lunch time mai ham charo Anu ki class mai jate hai to Anu ek side mai akeli hi bethi thy. To saab uske paas gaye. Jese hi Anu ne mujhe aur Rohan ko apne samne dekha to mere gale lag ke rone lagi.

Raj : kya hua Anu....kyun ro rahi hai meri princess....

Anu baas roye ja rahi thy. Mai baas Anu ko gale lagaya hua tha aur Rohan bhi ham dono ko aur Anu ka sar sehla raha tha. Saab class ke bache baas hame hi dekh rahe thy,

Raj (jor se) : kya aab ek bhai apni behen ko chup bhi nahi karwa sakta….

Meri baate sunke saab idhar udhar dekhne lagte hai, to mai bhi wanha na rukh ke Anu ko leke bahar park mai aajata hun, aur ek bench pe beth jata hun aur usko apne paas betha leta hun.

Rohan, Viren aur Kabir mere samne hi khade rehte hai. Tabhi ek ladka aake kehta hai,

Ladka : Rajveer aur Rohan ko office mai bula rahe hai kuch sign karna hai admission form mai.

Raj : Anu beta..baas mai abhi aaya tu yanhi beth..dekh ye Viren hai aur ye Kabir hai mere aur Rohan Bhai ke dost, tu ghabarana nahi ye dono yanhi tere paas hai mai abhi aaya.

Anu subkate huye han mai apna sar hila deti hai. Rohan aur mai dono chale jate hai. Viren aage badh ke Anu ke paas beth jata hai aur uske sar pe hath rakh deta hai, to Anu firse badi badi ankhe karke Viren ko dekhne lagti hai.

Viren : kya hua..ro kyu rahi ho..kisine kuch kaha….

Anu baas Viren ko dekti rahi aur chup rahi….

Viren : kya hua..please batao….

Viren ke itne pyaar se puchne pe Anu thodi der dekti rahi usse fir bol padi,

Anu : wo..wo..na class mai mera koi dost nahi hai..mai...mai akeli thy…subha se..aur mujhe dar lag raha tha….

Viren ne apna rumal nikal ke Anu ko diya aur Kabir ko ishara kiya to Kabir bhi lag gaya Anu ko hasane ke liye, thodi si kosis ke baad Anu bhi rona chod ke hasne lagti hai.

Fir Viren uth ke ek ladki ko Anu ke paas le aaya, jo ki Anu ki class ki hi thy aur usse Anu ki dosti bhi karwayi. Uska naam Nibbi tha.

Kabir Nibbi ko bahut chidhata tha. Per Nibbi usse kuch nahi kehti baas muskura ke reh jati.
Tabhi mai aur Rohan bhi aagaye apna kaam pura karke, aur Anu ko khush dekhke hame rahat mili.

Yese hi hamare din gujar rahe thy aur ham saab dost aab aur bhi karib aagaye thy. Per Viren har raat kisi ko bina bole kahi chala jata aur subha hone se pehle aajata tha. Mujhe aur Rohan ko ye baat kuch thik nahi lagi to ek din ham dono ne puri raat jaag ke Viren ka wait karte rahe. Jese hi Viren aaya to ham dono ko samne hi betha paya to wo muskura utha.

Viren : janta tha, tumhe kuch doubt aagaye hai, aur mujhe puchoge kabhi, wese mai bhi batane wala tha chalo aaj hi bata deta hun, kyun ki tum mere best Friend ho isliye, per ye raaz hi rakhna please.

Raj aur Rohan : thik hai, tu bata to sahi….

Viren : mai ek undercover agent hun ETF team ka jo direct army chief ke under kaam karti hai. Mere papa pehle head thy iss team ke per 3 saal pehle unki mout ho gayi aur maa bhi ye Sadma jhel nahi payi per papa ki icha thy ki mai bhi desh ki seva karu to unke dost ne mujhe unhi ki jagah join karne ko kaha per mai 18 saal ka nahi tha taab, isiliye yanha aagaya aur aab 19 ka hun to pichle saal hi join kiya tha maine per abhi meri training hi chal rahi hai.

Mai aur Rohan baas herani se Viren ko dekhe ja rahe thy.

Raj : to issliye tumhari body itni achi bani hai.

Viren : promise karo ye kisiko bhi pata nahi chale.

Ham dono ne bhi usko promise kar diya.

Tabhi Ruhi bich mai hi bol padti hai,

Ruhi : to tumhara dost secret agent hai..sachi….

Raj : han baba..sachi….

Ruhi ka yesa reaction dekhke Kabir bolta hai,

Kabir : aare abhi to kahani suru huyi hai aage aage suniye aur kya kya milega aapko….

Raj to baas Ruhi ko hi dekhne mai hi khoya hua tha. To Kabir bhi Raj ka maje lene ke mood mai tha, to Kabir Ruhi ke samne hi Raj se puchta hai….

Kabir : ham charo ki dosti lajawab hai na….

Raj jo pura Ruhi mai hi khoya hua tha,

Raj : han to….

Kabir : Ruhi bhi tujhe janti hai na kabse…

Raj : han to….

Kabir : Ruhi kitni sunder hai na….

Raj : han to….

Kabir : teri dost hai na….

Raj : han to….

Kabir : aur tu Ruhi se pyaar karta hai na….

Raj : han to….

Kabir : to kya bhabhi ne sun liya hai….

Jese hi Raj ko hosh aaya to usse pata chala ki usne kya kya bol diya hai Ruhi ko dekhte huye, aur Ruhi to baas Raj ko dekh rahi thy.

Kabir : dekho yaar aab tum dono apni kahani ke baare mai baat karo ye kahani to aab mumbai mai jake hi puri hogi.

Mai ja raha hun apne kamre mai sone ke liye tum subha tak saab kuch clear kar lena.

Kabir to chala jata hai Wanha se per Raj ki jaan ko latka jata hai.

Ruhi bina kuch bole hi bed se uthke kamre ki balcony mai chali jati hai aur jake khadi ho jati hai. Mann hi mann Ruhi behed hi khush thy per Raj ko tang karna chahti thy.

Raj bhi himmat karke Ruhi ke paas chala jata hai, aur jake Ruhi ke piche jake khada ho jata hai.

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