Romance Taqdeer [Completed]

[NewWriter23]

Kaam ke silsile mein matlab naye project start karne ke liye Mumbai aaya raj purani yaadon mein kho gaya tha... waise yaadein ruhi se hi judi thi... par ye kismat kahe ya sanjog, ruhi usike office mein kaam karti hai bataur ek branch manager ke roop mein.... par afsos ruhi ushe nahi pehchaanti....
Well.... har update ke sath kahani interesting hoti jaa rahi hai...
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills writer sahab

Thank you

 

[NewWriter23]

Update 4​

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Raj aab pure hosh mai tha aur sath hi sath behed khush bhi, aur usse pata tha ki Ruhi usse nahi pehechan ti hai.​

​

Raj : hello miss Sharma, I am..​

​

Ruhi, Raj ki bato ko bich mai kat ti huyi...​

​

Ruhi : sir, apko kon nahi janta hai, you are youth icon Mr. Rajveer Singh.​

​

Hehe..nice..​

​

Ruhi pure smile ke sath Raj ko dekh rahi thy, per uske ankho mai ek sukhapan tha jo ki Raj dekh pa raha tha, per wo samajh nahi pa raha tha ki kyun.​

​

Rohan baas Raj ko herani se dekh raha tha, kyun ki Raj kisi ladki ke sath hasna to chodo kisi se thik se baate bhi nahi karta tha per aaj Ruhi ke sath hash bhi raha tha aur ache tarike se baate bhi kar raha tha.​

​

Raj : miss Sharma mujhe pure project file ki details de do, kal se ham kaam suru karenge.​

​

Ruhi : sure sir, I will..ye kehke Ruhi chali jati hai apne kaam ke liye, aur Raj baas Ruhi ko jate huye dekh raha tha.​

​

Ruhi ke jaane ke baad Raj sidhe jake Rohan ke gale lag jata hai khushi se.​

​

Raj : thanks yaar, thanks.. seriously thanks tune mujhe meri jindegi de di.​

​

Rohan ko kuch samajh nahi aaraha tha wo ye samajh raha tha ki raj pagal wagal ho gaya hai.​

​

Rohan : oye pagal ho gaya hai kya? Hua kya hai tujhe?​

​

Raj : yaar Ruhani hi meri Ruhi hai jisse itne saalo se mai dur tha.​

​

kya...kya....mano Rohan ke liye ye sabse bada bomb tha.​

​

Rohan Raj ko ghur te huye : usne tujhe nahi pehchana. (Rohan bhi Ruhi bare mai janta tha)​

​

Raj : yaar bataya tha to tujhe ki wo mujhe nahi pehchan ti, usne baas ek baar sirf mera awaj suni thy, aur mujhe jata hua piche se dekhi thy wo bhi pehli aur akhri baar. Ye saab batate time Raj ke ankho mai anshu thy.​

​

Rohan ne Raj ko gala laga leta hai, ​

​

Rohan : yaar chal usse batate hai ki tu hi Raj hai.​

​

Jesse hi Rohan uthne ko hua to Raj ne usko rok liya.​

​

Raj : nahi, tu usse kuch bhi nahi batayega, aur nahi uske samne mujhe Raj kahega.​

​

Rohan : per....​

​

Raj : yaar mujhe pehle ye janna hai ki uska hua kya hai. Raj bahar kaam kar rahe Ruhi ko dekh raha tha jo bina kisi se baat kiya apna kaam kar rahi thy.​

​

Rohan : wo yasi hi hai jaab se usse mai mila hun. 5 mahine pehle mili thy jaab society mai mere samne wale ghar mai rehne ke liye aayi thy. Mai bhi akela tha to maine usse apni behen bana liya kyun ki pure society mai baas mujhe hi bhai kehke bulati hai.​

​

Raj : uske maa baap kaha hai? bhai bhi tha uska.​

​

Rohan : han hai, uska naam bhi Rohan hi hai aur wo aur uske maa baap saab America mai rehte hai, wo to ruhani ko bhi kehte hai per ye nahi jati, pata nahi kyun?​

​

Raj kuch sochte huye : chal thik hai wapas kaam pe chalte hai, sham ko baat karte hai.​

​

Fir dono conference room se bahar nikal jate hai aur Rohan apne cabin mai chala jata hai aur Raj apne cabin ki aur.​

​

Kuch ladkiya to Raj ko dekh rahe thy aur kuch ladkiya Rohan ko dekh rahe thy jesse abhi mile to kacha kha jayegi.​

​

Ladki 1 : yaar hamare dono boss kya hot and charming hai dil karta hai ki unko abhi propose kar dun.​

​

Ladki 2 : han yaar​

​

Ye dono baate kar rahi thy ki unke piche se Ruhi aajati hai.​

​

Ruhi : kaam bhi kar lo tum dono ya phir yese hi boss ko ghurte rahoge.​

​

Dono ladkiya : ji..ji..mam​

​

Ruhi : mujhe sare project list aur details do.​

​

Fir Ruhi sabhi files ko leke apne cabin mai chali jati hai jo ki Raj ke cabin ke samne hi thy. Raj baas usse hi dekh raha tha.​

​

Sham ko office close hone ke baad Rohan apne ghar chala gaya aur Raj bhi uske piche piche usko na bata ke uske ghar chala gaya. Jaab Rohan Raj ko apne ghar mai dekha to.​

​

Rohan : oye tu yanha kya baat hai, Rohan to ye saab Raj bol raha tha per usse ishara kahi aur hi kar raha tha.​

​

Raj ne bhi jaab uss aur dekha to Ruhi tea bana rahi thy.​

​

Rohan : Ruhani ek cup aur bana lo aaj pure ek saal baad mera dost mere ghar aaya hai.​

​

Ruhi bhi Raj ko dekhti hai aur smile kar ke tea banane lag jati hai.​

​

Rohan baas Raj ko ishara kare ja raha tha aur Raj ko baas tang kar raha tha Ruhi ke naam se.​

​

Tabhi Ruhi tea le kar aajati hai aur dono ko ek ek cup de deti hai.​

​

Ruhi : mai chalti hun bhai, aap dono time spend karo.​

​

Rohan usse rokne bala hi tha ki Raj Rohan ko rok leta hai aur Ruhi chali jati hai apne ghar. Raj ke dimag kuch to chal raha tha per kya?​

​

ye aage pata chalega, tab tak ke liye bye bye.​

 

[mashish]

Update 4​

​

Raj aab pure hosh mai tha aur sath hi sath behed khush bhi, aur usse pata tha ki Ruhi usse nahi pehechan ti hai.​

​

Raj : hello miss Sharma, I am..​

​

Ruhi, Raj ki bato ko bich mai kat ti huyi...​

​

Ruhi : sir, apko kon nahi janta hai, you are youth icon Mr. Rajveer Singh.​

​

Hehe..nice..​

​

Ruhi pure smile ke sath Raj ko dekh rahi thy, per uske ankho mai ek sukhapan tha jo ki Raj dekh pa raha tha, per wo samajh nahi pa raha tha ki kyun.​

​

Rohan baas Raj ko herani se dekh raha tha, kyun ki Raj kisi ladki ke sath hasna to chodo kisi se thik se baate bhi nahi karta tha per aaj Ruhi ke sath hash bhi raha tha aur ache tarike se baate bhi kar raha tha.​

​

Raj : miss Sharma mujhe pure project file ki details de do, kal se ham kaam suru karenge.​

​

Ruhi : sure sir, I will..ye kehke Ruhi chali jati hai apne kaam ke liye, aur Raj baas Ruhi ko jate huye dekh raha tha.​

​

Ruhi ke jaane ke baad Raj sidhe jake Rohan ke gale lag jata hai khushi se.​

​

Raj : thanks yaar, thanks.. seriously thanks tune mujhe meri jindegi de di.​

​

Rohan ko kuch samajh nahi aaraha tha wo ye samajh raha tha ki raj pagal wagal ho gaya hai.​

​

Rohan : oye pagal ho gaya hai kya? Hua kya hai tujhe?​

​

Raj : yaar Ruhani hi meri Ruhi hai jisse itne saalo se mai dur tha.​

​

kya...kya....mano Rohan ke liye ye sabse bada bomb tha.​

​

Rohan Raj ko ghur te huye : usne tujhe nahi pehchana. (Rohan bhi Ruhi bare mai janta tha)​

​

Raj : yaar bataya tha to tujhe ki wo mujhe nahi pehchan ti, usne baas ek baar sirf mera awaj suni thy, aur mujhe jata hua piche se dekhi thy wo bhi pehli aur akhri baar. Ye saab batate time Raj ke ankho mai anshu thy.​

​

Rohan ne Raj ko gala laga leta hai, ​

​

Rohan : yaar chal usse batate hai ki tu hi Raj hai.​

​

Jesse hi Rohan uthne ko hua to Raj ne usko rok liya.​

​

Raj : nahi, tu usse kuch bhi nahi batayega, aur nahi uske samne mujhe Raj kahega.​

​

Rohan : per....​

​

Raj : yaar mujhe pehle ye janna hai ki uska hua kya hai. Raj bahar kaam kar rahe Ruhi ko dekh raha tha jo bina kisi se baat kiya apna kaam kar rahi thy.​

​

Rohan : wo yasi hi hai jaab se usse mai mila hun. 5 mahine pehle mili thy jaab society mai mere samne wale ghar mai rehne ke liye aayi thy. Mai bhi akela tha to maine usse apni behen bana liya kyun ki pure society mai baas mujhe hi bhai kehke bulati hai.​

​

Raj : uske maa baap kaha hai? bhai bhi tha uska.​

​

Rohan : han hai, uska naam bhi Rohan hi hai aur wo aur uske maa baap saab America mai rehte hai, wo to ruhani ko bhi kehte hai per ye nahi jati, pata nahi kyun?​

​

Raj kuch sochte huye : chal thik hai wapas kaam pe chalte hai, sham ko baat karte hai.​

​

Fir dono conference room se bahar nikal jate hai aur Rohan apne cabin mai chala jata hai aur Raj apne cabin ki aur.​

​

Kuch ladkiya to Raj ko dekh rahe thy aur kuch ladkiya Rohan ko dekh rahe thy jesse abhi mile to kacha kha jayegi.​

​

Ladki 1 : yaar hamare dono boss kya hot and charming hai dil karta hai ki unko abhi propose kar dun.​

​

Ladki 2 : han yaar​

​

Ye dono baate kar rahi thy ki unke piche se Ruhi aajati hai.​

​

Ruhi : kaam bhi kar lo tum dono ya phir yese hi boss ko ghurte rahoge.​

​

Dono ladkiya : ji..ji..mam​

​

Ruhi : mujhe sare project list aur details do.​

​

Fir Ruhi sabhi files ko leke apne cabin mai chali jati hai jo ki Raj ke cabin ke samne hi thy. Raj baas usse hi dekh raha tha.​

​

Sham ko office close hone ke baad Rohan apne ghar chala gaya aur Raj bhi uske piche piche usko na bata ke uske ghar chala gaya. Jaab Rohan Raj ko apne ghar mai dekha to.​

​

Rohan : oye tu yanha kya baat hai, Rohan to ye saab Raj bol raha tha per usse ishara kahi aur hi kar raha tha.​

​

Raj ne bhi jaab uss aur dekha to Ruhi tea bana rahi thy.​

​

Rohan : Ruhani ek cup aur bana lo aaj pure ek saal baad mera dost mere ghar aaya hai.​

​

Ruhi bhi Raj ko dekhti hai aur smile kar ke tea banane lag jati hai.​

​

Rohan baas Raj ko ishara kare ja raha tha aur Raj ko baas tang kar raha tha Ruhi ke naam se.​

​

Tabhi Ruhi tea le kar aajati hai aur dono ko ek ek cup de deti hai.​

​

Ruhi : mai chalti hun bhai, aap dono time spend karo.​

​

Rohan usse rokne bala hi tha ki Raj Rohan ko rok leta hai aur Ruhi chali jati hai apne ghar. Raj ke dimag kuch to chal raha tha per kya?​

ye aage pata chalega, tab tak ke liye bye bye.​

Beautiful update

 

[NewWriter23]

Beautiful update

Thank you

 

[NewWriter23]

Update 5​

​

Aage jitne bhi flashback chalega wo sabhi purple colour likhunga. To janha bhi purple colour dikhega samajh jana ki flashback chal raha hai.​

​

Jaab Raj ne Ruhi ki paper ko padha to usne ek aur paper pe kuch likh ke Wanha se chala gaya.​

​

Jaab agle din Ruhi wapas library mai aake kitab nikal ti hai to usko wo paper milta hai.​

​

Raj : Ruhi tumne mujhe apna dost kaha mujhe bahut khusi huyi, aur mera naam janna tha na tumhe to mera naam Raj hai aur aaj se apke chehre pe hasi lana mera kaam hai.​

​

Ruhi ye padh kar bahut khusi hoti hai fir wo kuch likhe ke wapas chali jati hai.​

​

jaab agle din Raj aake padhta hai, to padh ke bahut khush ho jata hai.​

​

Ruhi : pata hai apko mai to apki bahut badi wali fan hun, har magazine mai maine aapke likhe huye lekh padha hai wo bahut ache hote hai. Aapke pehle lekh se lekar aab tak ke lekh saab hai mere paas.​

​

Jaab Raj kisi soch mai dub tha to Rohan usse hilata hai,​

​

Rohan : oye bhai tu thik to hai na, aur mujhe Ruhani ko kyun rokne nahi diya tu kuch bhi baat kar leta uske sath nahi to kuch time hi spend kar leta uske sath.​

​

Raj : ho gaya, aab meri baat sun, Ruhi bilkul bhi yesi nhi thy. Bahut bolti thy aur khush bhi rehti thy har waqt per aab wo bilkul badal gayi hai, bas mujhe yanhi pata karna hai.​

​

Rohan,Raj ki sabhi bate sunne ke baad,​

​

Rohan : Raj mujhe lagta hai ki sayad tere jane baad usse dukh hua ho aur yesi ho gayi ho, ya fir tujhse pyaar karti ho bata na payi ho.​

​

Raj : hahahaha..aur kuch bhi bol de, usne khud mujhse kaha tha ki wo mujhko nafrat karti hai. Pyaar to dur ki baat hai. Puri society mai sirf tujhse baat karti hai, hai na, tune yahi kaha tha na ?​

​

Rohan : han yaar, wo pehle nahi thy mere itna close. Ek din mai office se ghar aaraha tha ki maine dekha kuch ladke ek ladki ko ched rahe thy, to maine unke paas jake uss ladki ke bachane laga to unme se ek ladka ne,​

​

ladka : kyun be kon lagti hai teri ye?​

​

Mujhe bhi uski baat ka gussa aagaya to aur gusse mai bol diya ki behen lagti hai. Tab wo sare ladke wanha se bhag gaye aur Ruhani aake mere gale lag gayi, uska ro ro ke bura hal ho gaya tha, to maine bhi usko ghar le aaya aur ek bade bhai ki tarah hi sambhala, taab se wo mujhe bhai kehti hai aur mujhe bhi Ruhani ke roop mai ek pyari si behen mil gayi hai.​

​

Ye baate bolte waqt Rohan ke ankhe gili thy per chehre pe muskan thi aur Raj ki bhi ankhe gili thy.​

​

Rohan, Raj ko dekhte huye : chal ye bata tu kya soch raha hai Ruhi ke bare mai?​

​

Raj : baas usse khush dekhna chahta hun, chal kal se Ruhani ko fir se Ruhi banane ka kam suru, mere paas ek plan hai.​

​

Fir Raj, Rohan ko apna sara plan bata deta hai, aur plan sunne ke baar Rohan ka has has ke bura hal ho raha tha.​

​

Rohan : yaar ye saab tu kar lega na ?​

​

Raj (gusse ho ke) : yaar kar lunga tu to yesa na bol.​

​

Rohan : chal thik hai mai bhi tere sath hun, mere se jitna ho sake utna madad kar dunga.​

​

fir dono bahut se baate karte hai aur Raj bhi Rohan ke ghar mai hi ruk jata hai, fir dono raat ko dinner karke so jate hai.​

​

Agli subha Raj to so raha tha per Rohan uth jata hai jaldi, aur Raj ko dekhte huye,​

​

Rohan : yaar tere jesse yaar ke liye to jaan bhi de sakta hun, aur Ruhani ko bhi khushi se jindegi jite huye dekhna chahta hun, baas tum dono jaldi se ek ho jao. Mai apne yaar ko Ruhani ke yaadon mai tadapta hua dekha hai.​

​

Rohan apne aap mai bate kar raha tha Raj ko dekhte huye ki Raj ki bhi nind khul jati hai.​

​

Raj : oye kiss karne ka irada to nahi hai tera jo mujhe yese ghur raha hai. Wese mujhe ladki pasanad hai tera pata nahi, hehehe...​

​

Rohan bhi Raj ke baate sunke hasne lag jata hai, "yaar mujhe bhi ladki hi pasand hai, per aaj tak koi mili hi nahi jo mere dil ki ghanti baja de".​

​

Raj : don't worry mere hero aaj tujhe teri dream girl jarur milegi mera dil kehta hai.​

​

Rohan : chal dekhte hai.​

​

ye dono baate kar rahe thy ki, tabhi.....​

 

[Naina]

Update 4​

​

Raj aab pure hosh mai tha aur sath hi sath behed khush bhi, aur usse pata tha ki Ruhi usse nahi pehechan ti hai.​

​

Raj : hello miss Sharma, I am..​

​

Ruhi, Raj ki bato ko bich mai kat ti huyi...​

​

Ruhi : sir, apko kon nahi janta hai, you are youth icon Mr. Rajveer Singh.​

​

Hehe..nice..​

​

Ruhi pure smile ke sath Raj ko dekh rahi thy, per uske ankho mai ek sukhapan tha jo ki Raj dekh pa raha tha, per wo samajh nahi pa raha tha ki kyun.​

​

Rohan baas Raj ko herani se dekh raha tha, kyun ki Raj kisi ladki ke sath hasna to chodo kisi se thik se baate bhi nahi karta tha per aaj Ruhi ke sath hash bhi raha tha aur ache tarike se baate bhi kar raha tha.​

​

Raj : miss Sharma mujhe pure project file ki details de do, kal se ham kaam suru karenge.​

​

Ruhi : sure sir, I will..ye kehke Ruhi chali jati hai apne kaam ke liye, aur Raj baas Ruhi ko jate huye dekh raha tha.​

​

Ruhi ke jaane ke baad Raj sidhe jake Rohan ke gale lag jata hai khushi se.​

​

Raj : thanks yaar, thanks.. seriously thanks tune mujhe meri jindegi de di.​

​

Rohan ko kuch samajh nahi aaraha tha wo ye samajh raha tha ki raj pagal wagal ho gaya hai.​

​

Rohan : oye pagal ho gaya hai kya? Hua kya hai tujhe?​

​

Raj : yaar Ruhani hi meri Ruhi hai jisse itne saalo se mai dur tha.​

​

kya...kya....mano Rohan ke liye ye sabse bada bomb tha.​

​

Rohan Raj ko ghur te huye : usne tujhe nahi pehchana. (Rohan bhi Ruhi bare mai janta tha)​

​

Raj : yaar bataya tha to tujhe ki wo mujhe nahi pehchan ti, usne baas ek baar sirf mera awaj suni thy, aur mujhe jata hua piche se dekhi thy wo bhi pehli aur akhri baar. Ye saab batate time Raj ke ankho mai anshu thy.​

​

Rohan ne Raj ko gala laga leta hai, ​

​

Rohan : yaar chal usse batate hai ki tu hi Raj hai.​

​

Jesse hi Rohan uthne ko hua to Raj ne usko rok liya.​

​

Raj : nahi, tu usse kuch bhi nahi batayega, aur nahi uske samne mujhe Raj kahega.​

​

Rohan : per....​

​

Raj : yaar mujhe pehle ye janna hai ki uska hua kya hai. Raj bahar kaam kar rahe Ruhi ko dekh raha tha jo bina kisi se baat kiya apna kaam kar rahi thy.​

​

Rohan : wo yasi hi hai jaab se usse mai mila hun. 5 mahine pehle mili thy jaab society mai mere samne wale ghar mai rehne ke liye aayi thy. Mai bhi akela tha to maine usse apni behen bana liya kyun ki pure society mai baas mujhe hi bhai kehke bulati hai.​

​

Raj : uske maa baap kaha hai? bhai bhi tha uska.​

​

Rohan : han hai, uska naam bhi Rohan hi hai aur wo aur uske maa baap saab America mai rehte hai, wo to ruhani ko bhi kehte hai per ye nahi jati, pata nahi kyun?​

​

Raj kuch sochte huye : chal thik hai wapas kaam pe chalte hai, sham ko baat karte hai.​

​

Fir dono conference room se bahar nikal jate hai aur Rohan apne cabin mai chala jata hai aur Raj apne cabin ki aur.​

​

Kuch ladkiya to Raj ko dekh rahe thy aur kuch ladkiya Rohan ko dekh rahe thy jesse abhi mile to kacha kha jayegi.​

​

Ladki 1 : yaar hamare dono boss kya hot and charming hai dil karta hai ki unko abhi propose kar dun.​

​

Ladki 2 : han yaar​

​

Ye dono baate kar rahi thy ki unke piche se Ruhi aajati hai.​

​

Ruhi : kaam bhi kar lo tum dono ya phir yese hi boss ko ghurte rahoge.​

​

Dono ladkiya : ji..ji..mam​

​

Ruhi : mujhe sare project list aur details do.​

​

Fir Ruhi sabhi files ko leke apne cabin mai chali jati hai jo ki Raj ke cabin ke samne hi thy. Raj baas usse hi dekh raha tha.​

​

Sham ko office close hone ke baad Rohan apne ghar chala gaya aur Raj bhi uske piche piche usko na bata ke uske ghar chala gaya. Jaab Rohan Raj ko apne ghar mai dekha to.​

​

Rohan : oye tu yanha kya baat hai, Rohan to ye saab Raj bol raha tha per usse ishara kahi aur hi kar raha tha.​

​

Raj ne bhi jaab uss aur dekha to Ruhi tea bana rahi thy.​

​

Rohan : Ruhani ek cup aur bana lo aaj pure ek saal baad mera dost mere ghar aaya hai.​

​

Ruhi bhi Raj ko dekhti hai aur smile kar ke tea banane lag jati hai.​

​

Rohan baas Raj ko ishara kare ja raha tha aur Raj ko baas tang kar raha tha Ruhi ke naam se.​

​

Tabhi Ruhi tea le kar aajati hai aur dono ko ek ek cup de deti hai.​

​

Ruhi : mai chalti hun bhai, aap dono time spend karo.​

​

Rohan usse rokne bala hi tha ki Raj Rohan ko rok leta hai aur Ruhi chali jati hai apne ghar. Raj ke dimag kuch to chal raha tha per kya?​

ye aage pata chalega, tab tak ke liye bye bye.​

to ruhi bas raj ko as a boss pehchaanti hai..... wohi raj bhi pehchaan batana nahi chaahta, shayad ye jaanne ki koshish kar raha ho ki ushe raj yaad hai ki nahi... wohi rohan ko bhi request kiya ki ye raaz, raaz hi rahe....
So raj nikla rohan ke ghar taaki ruhi ka didaar kar sake....
waise ruhi ko jab pata chale ki ye raj wohi raj hai to............
Khair.... kaafi dilchasp update tha
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

 

[Naina]

Update 5​

Aage jitne bhi flashback chalega wo sabhi purple colour likhunga. To janha bhi purple colour dikhega samajh jana ki flashback chal raha hai.​

Jaab Raj ne Ruhi ki paper ko padha to usne ek aur paper pe kuch likh ke Wanha se chala gaya.​

Jaab agle din Ruhi wapas library mai aake kitab nikal ti hai to usko wo paper milta hai.​

Raj : Ruhi tumne mujhe apna dost kaha mujhe bahut khusi huyi, aur mera naam janna tha na tumhe to mera naam Raj hai aur aaj se apke chehre pe hasi lana mera kaam hai.​

Ruhi ye padh kar bahut khusi hoti hai fir wo kuch likhe ke wapas chali jati hai.​

jaab agle din Raj aake padhta hai, to padh ke bahut khush ho jata hai.​

Ruhi : pata hai apko mai to apki bahut badi wali fan hun, har magazine mai maine aapke likhe huye lekh padha hai wo bahut ache hote hai. Aapke pehle lekh se lekar aab tak ke lekh saab hai mere paas.​

Jaab Raj kisi soch mai dub tha to Rohan usse hilata hai,​

Rohan : oye bhai tu thik to hai na, aur mujhe Ruhani ko kyun rokne nahi diya tu kuch bhi baat kar leta uske sath nahi to kuch time hi spend kar leta uske sath.​

Raj : ho gaya, aab meri baat sun, Ruhi bilkul bhi yesi nhi thy. Bahut bolti thy aur khush bhi rehti thy har waqt per aab wo bilkul badal gayi hai, bas mujhe yanhi pata karna hai.​

Rohan,Raj ki sabhi bate sunne ke baad,​

Rohan : Raj mujhe lagta hai ki sayad tere jane baad usse dukh hua ho aur yesi ho gayi ho, ya fir tujhse pyaar karti ho bata na payi ho.​

Raj : hahahaha..aur kuch bhi bol de, usne khud mujhse kaha tha ki wo mujhko nafrat karti hai. Pyaar to dur ki baat hai. Puri society mai sirf tujhse baat karti hai, hai na, tune yahi kaha tha na ?​

Rohan : han yaar, wo pehle nahi thy mere itna close. Ek din mai office se ghar aaraha tha ki maine dekha kuch ladke ek ladki ko ched rahe thy, to maine unke paas jake uss ladki ke bachane laga to unme se ek ladka ne,​

ladka : kyun be kon lagti hai teri ye?​

Mujhe bhi uski baat ka gussa aagaya to aur gusse mai bol diya ki behen lagti hai. Tab wo sare ladke wanha se bhag gaye aur Ruhani aake mere gale lag gayi, uska ro ro ke bura hal ho gaya tha, to maine bhi usko ghar le aaya aur ek bade bhai ki tarah hi sambhala, taab se wo mujhe bhai kehti hai aur mujhe bhi Ruhani ke roop mai ek pyari si behen mil gayi hai.​

Ye baate bolte waqt Rohan ke ankhe gili thy per chehre pe muskan thi aur Raj ki bhi ankhe gili thy.​

Rohan, Raj ko dekhte huye : chal ye bata tu kya soch raha hai Ruhi ke bare mai?​

Raj : baas usse khush dekhna chahta hun, chal kal se Ruhani ko fir se Ruhi banane ka kam suru, mere paas ek plan hai.​

Fir Raj, Rohan ko apna sara plan bata deta hai, aur plan sunne ke baar Rohan ka has has ke bura hal ho raha tha.​

Rohan : yaar ye saab tu kar lega na ?​

Raj (gusse ho ke) : yaar kar lunga tu to yesa na bol.​

Rohan : chal thik hai mai bhi tere sath hun, mere se jitna ho sake utna madad kar dunga.​

fir dono bahut se baate karte hai aur Raj bhi Rohan ke ghar mai hi ruk jata hai, fir dono raat ko dinner karke so jate hai.​

Agli subha Raj to so raha tha per Rohan uth jata hai jaldi, aur Raj ko dekhte huye,​

Rohan : yaar tere jesse yaar ke liye to jaan bhi de sakta hun, aur Ruhani ko bhi khushi se jindegi jite huye dekhna chahta hun, baas tum dono jaldi se ek ho jao. Mai apne yaar ko Ruhani ke yaadon mai tadapta hua dekha hai.​

Rohan apne aap mai bate kar raha tha Raj ko dekhte huye ki Raj ki bhi nind khul jati hai.​

Raj : oye kiss karne ka irada to nahi hai tera jo mujhe yese ghur raha hai. Wese mujhe ladki pasanad hai tera pata nahi, hehehe...​

Rohan bhi Raj ke baate sunke hasne lag jata hai, "yaar mujhe bhi ladki hi pasand hai, per aaj tak koi mili hi nahi jo mere dil ki ghanti baja de".​

Raj : don't worry mere hero aaj tujhe teri dream girl jarur milegi mera dil kehta hai.​

Rohan : chal dekhte hai.​

ye dono baate kar rahe thy ki, tabhi.....​

aha ek aur behtareen update...
Waise writer sahab ke soch aur kalpna ko manna padega ki jis tarike se apne Kalpana jariye aise shabdo ka roop deke kahani mein darshaya hai... sach mein saraahaneeya aur prashansaniya hai..

kahani mein ek romance, suspense, emotions ke sath sath ek manmahok mahol banane mein aap mahir hai... jishe padhte waqt kahani ki prati dilchaspi badhti jaye...
aur jo scenes create ki hai update ke har ek point pe wo sach mein adbhut aur kabile tarif hai... jagah, paristhiti, waqt aur kirdaar... kaise, kaha, kis tarah se, kis karm mein rahenge kahani mein bhumika nibhate huye iska sathik mulyankan karke update ko jis tarah pesh ki hai hum readers ke samaks wo apne apme bemisaal hai..
Aise hi likhte rahiye aur readers ka manoranjan karte rahiye
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills writer sahab

 

[NewWriter23]

to ruhi bas raj ko as a boss pehchaanti hai..... wohi raj bhi pehchaan batana nahi chaahta, shayad ye jaanne ki koshish kar raha ho ki ushe raj yaad hai ki nahi... wohi rohan ko bhi request kiya ki ye raaz, raaz hi rahe....
So raj nikla rohan ke ghar taaki ruhi ka didaar kar sake....
waise ruhi ko jab pata chale ki ye raj wohi raj hai to............
Khair.... kaafi dilchasp update tha
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

aha ek aur behtareen update...
Waise writer sahab ke soch aur kalpna ko manna padega ki jis tarike se apne Kalpana jariye aise shabdo ka roop deke kahani mein darshaya hai... sach mein saraahaneeya aur prashansaniya hai..

kahani mein ek romance, suspense, emotions ke sath sath ek manmahok mahol banane mein aap mahir hai... jishe padhte waqt kahani ki prati dilchaspi badhti jaye...
aur jo scenes create ki hai update ke har ek point pe wo sach mein adbhut aur kabile tarif hai... jagah, paristhiti, waqt aur kirdaar... kaise, kaha, kis tarah se, kis karm mein rahenge kahani mein bhumika nibhate huye iska sathik mulyankan karke update ko jis tarah pesh ki hai hum readers ke samaks wo apne apme bemisaal hai..
Aise hi likhte rahiye aur readers ka manoranjan karte rahiye
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills writer sahab

Thank you, itne pyare pyare comments ke liye

 

[NewWriter23]

Update 6​

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Rohan Bhai..Rohan Bhai..kanha hai aap..Bhai...​

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Ye awaj sunke Raj ko to mano uska dil ka murad mil pura ho gaya ho, to wo Rohan ko ishara kar deta hai sone ke liye, Rohan bhi samajh jata hai, wo bhi bed pe chale jata hai sone ke liye.​

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Raj bhi uth ke bahar chala jata hai, Ruhi ki ankhe band thy to usne baas kisiki aane ki Aahat suni.​

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Ruhi : bhai..."aaj to mai hi pehle uth gayi per subah subah naha kar aayi to khana banate time meri ankho mai kuch chala gaya hai, kese mai girte padte aapke paas aayi hun ye mai hi janti hun, aur mere ghar ka pani ka bhi pata nahi kya hua wo bhi band ho gaya hai, baas aap pani de do mai apna face saaf kar lungi.​

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Raj to baas khamosh hi khad hua tha aur baas Ruhi ko hi dekhe ja raha tha.​

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Ruhi : Rohan Bhai aap sun to rahe hai na?​

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Ruhi ke jor se bolne ke wajah se Raj apne khyalo se bahar aata hai, usne bina kuch bole Ruhi ke paas jake uska hath pakad leta hai aur washroom ke taraf le chalta hai.​

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Ruhi ko kuch ajib sa mehsus hua jaab Raj uska hath pakda to, wo kuch samajh nahi pa rahi thy. Raj ne Ruhi ko leke sink ke samne khada kar diya aur tap on kar diya aur Ruhi ka hath pani mai de diya, aur Ruhi apna face wash karne lagi aur Raj wapas aagaya per wo darwaja ke paas hi khada ho gaya.​

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Raj baas Ruhi ko pyaar bhari nazron se dekhe ja raha tha. Ruhi ke chehre pe usse ke gile baal aarahe thy to wo usko apne kaan ke piche kar rahi thy.​

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Raj wanhi khad ho ke apne mann mai : Ruhi tum pehle se bhi jyada khubsurat ho gayi ho aur tumhare ye jo ankhe hai na aaj ke baad kabhi bhi koi anshu nahi aayenge, kyun ki mai aane hi nahi dunga ye mera wada hai.​

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Ruhi apne ankhe saaf karke jese hi piche mudi to Raj ko piche khada paya to wo thoda dar gayi thy. Aur ye baat sayad Raj samajh gaya tha isi liye Ruhi ke bolne se pehle hi Raj bol padta hai,​

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Raj : dekhiye aap ki ankhe band thy aur sayad ankho mai kuch chala gaya tha aur Rohan so raha tha aur jaab se aap aayi ho taab se baas boli hi ja rahi thy isiliye maine bina kuch bole hi apko washroom le aaya. Sorry agar apko bura laga ho to. Aur mene aaj tak koi bhi ladki ko yesi wesi najar se dekhi nahi hai aur na hi....​

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Raj baas bolte hi ja raha tha to Ruhi ne Raj ki bato ko bich mai kat te huye,​

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Ruhi : Boss..Boss..aap kitne jyada bolte hai, pehle sun to lijiye mai kya bolna chahta hun ya fir kya soch raha hun, pehli baas maine apke baare mai kuch bhi yesa wesa nahi socha hai, aur aap mere bhai ke best friend hai, aur maine apke bare mai bahut kuch padha hua hai. Aur dusri baat ladkiya hi apko yesi wesi nazron se dekhti hai na ki aap ye bhi mai janta hun.​

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Ruhi ke yese bolne se Raj bhi khush hota ki chalo Ruhi uske bare mai kuch galat nahi soch rahi hai aur iss liye Raj bhagwan sukriya aada karta hai.​

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Ruhi : aab hame bahar chalna chahiye sir...​

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Raj : han kyun nahi, aur aap office ke bahar mujhe boss na bola kare sirf Rajveer bulaya kare.​

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Ruhi, Raj ko bilkul simple aur clearly bol deta hai ki, "aap mere boss hai aur mere bhai ki ache dost bhi, aur mujhe koi aur naya rishta nahi chahiye.​

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Raj sofe pe beth ke : ok thik hai jese apke marji.​

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Ruhi : sorry sir aagar apko bura laga ho to...​

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Raj : nahi yesi koi baat nahi hai, aur mujhe acha laga ki apne openly aur clearly ye bol diya, I like it.​

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Per ye baate Rohan ko hazam nahi huyi, wo suru se hi in dono ko dekh raha tha aur inke baate bhi sun raha tha.​

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Rohan (mann mai) : oye pagal ho gaya hai kya, yanha ruhani ne naam lene se mana kar diya hai aur ye hass raha hai, apna hath jod ke, hey bhagwan pyaar mai kese kese log ho jate hai, mujhe to isse dur hi rakhna.​

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Fir Rohan bahar aajata hai jesse usse kuch pata hi na ho, jaab bahar aake Ruhi ke samne khada hota hai to,​

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Rohan : aare Ruhi, itne subha subha, kuch chahiye tha kya tumhe.​

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wo bahut hi acha acting kar raha tha aur yesa acting dekhke Raj apne mann mai waah waah kar raha tha aur hase ja raha tha.​

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Ruhi : nahi nahi bhai kuch nahi, wo pata nahi mere ghar ka pani kese band ho gaya hai sayad kuch problem ho gayi hai aap office ke baad dekh lena please.​

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Rohan : chal thik hai mai dekh lunga, tujhe bhi nahana hai to yanhi naha le aur thoda nasta bana dena please.​

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Ruhi : nahi nahi bhai maine aaj subha subha hi naha liya tha, aur nasta bana dunga. Wese aap aaj itne late kese uthe aap?​

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Baas Ruhi ka itna bolna tha ki Raj ki khasi nikal gayi aur Rohan ki hassi, aab kya bolte Rohan acting kar raha tha Raj ke kehne pe. Isiliye Rohan ke kuch bolne se pehle hi Raj bol padta hai,​

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Raj : wo baat kya hai ki kal ham kuch jyada hi late night tak baate kar te rahe issi liye aaj uthne mai deri ho gayi.​

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Ye bolte bolte jaab Raj ne ghadi mai time dekha to, oh shit.....7 baj rahe thy, mai late ho gaya, mai abhi chalta hun, bye Rohan, bye miss Ruhani, mai aap dono ko office mai milunga.​

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Ye kehke Raj jaldi se bhag jata hai, aur Ruhi baas herani se Raj ko dekhe ja rahi thy kyun usse kuch samajh nahi aaraha tha ki isse achanak hua kya.​

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Ruhi, Rohan ko dekhke : isse hua kya, abhi to bade aram se bethe huye thy yese achanak.​

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Rohan : behena ye secret hai Raj ka, tu yesa kar nasta bana le aur Raj ke liye bhi bana lena kyun ki wo aaj nasta kiye wager hi office aayega. Mai chalta hun tayar hone ke liye, fir chal deta hai Rohan.​

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Ruhi wanhi bethe bethe baas Raj ke baare mai soch rahi thy, wo ye baat se bhi heran thy ki wo Raj ke bare mai kyun soch rahi thy, fir baad mai apna dimag jhatake nasta tayar karne chali jati hai.​

 

[Naina]

Rohit ka baat maanke rohan sone ka acting kiya taaki raj thodi bahot baat kar sake ruhi se.... aur plan work bhi kiya....
waise itna kuch karne kya jarurat, direct bol kyun nahi deta ki wo raj hai..
Khair..... shayad dhire dhire pata chale ruhi ko ye baat ki wo rajveer hi raj hai aur raj bhi yahin chaahta hai...
Har update ke sath kahani interesting hoti jaa rahi hai
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills