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Fantasy System - Era of Bloodline

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Hello everyone :hi:
welcome in my new story :smile2: i know thoda late ho gya :verysad: but koi nhi abhi aa gya hai na...
Toh chlo Mera sath ek new safer par..

"System - Era of Bloodline"

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Humans ke alawa earth par bahut si spices hai unmain se ek hai slarkovs..
Agar main galat nahi hu to ap shayad Species kehna chah rahe the? Spices to masale huwe na?

"change heir colour"
Yahan shayad Ap Hair colour kehna chah rahe the? Heir to shayad waaris huwa na?
Prologue

Future ki is timeline par earth bahut se logo ka ghar ka hai... kewal humans ka hi nhi..
Humans ke alawa earth par bahut si spices hai unmain se ek hai slarkovs..

Aur ye pura hai humans ki hi tarah but inmain hoti thi powers jis wajah se ye hamare parivesh aasani se ghul mil gya....

Aur human aur slarkovs ke milan se ek new human spices aayi jinka naam hai
"Mixed Blood" aur is mixed blood main jo ability hoti hai use hi kahte hai "bloodline" jo har kisi ki alag alag hoti hai.

Sam jis time main paida hua us time main bloodline hi sab kuch hoti hai. In sab ke bawjud sam ko Bloodline thi
"change heir colour" jisse use sab ke taane aur gaali sunni padti...

Lekin ek din use mila
"system" jisne uski puri life change kar di... jisne use mauka diya sabko dikhana ka ki "wo bekaar nhi hai"
Baki Prologue acha tha, Umeed karta hu ek kamal ki kahani likho gye ap, Best of luck :good:
 

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Jungle ke beecho beecho ek bade se pahadi par , halki halki dil ko sukoon pahuchane waali thandi thandi hawa chal rhi thi, jisse aas paas ka mohal ek dam saanth ho gya. Pahadi ke upar se dekne par pura jagmagata saher dikhai pad rha tha.

upar se dekne par ye pura seen bada pyara lag rha tha, jo kisi ke bhi dil ko pyara lag sakta hai.

Usi saher ke beech main ek tower tha , jo saher ke beecho beecho main tha jisse nikalne waali roshni aasman ki or chali ja rhi thi.
Whi pahadi par school dress pahne ek ladka khada tha. Jiske baalo ka calour blue, se red , red se green ho rha tha.

saamne saher ki taraf dekte hua uski aankhon main aasu tha, "jab main apne sapne nhi pura kar sakta toh kya main mera zinda rahna ka haq hai?" Usne udaas hote hua bola, " hahaha, main kya kar rha hun? mere jaisa logo ko jeena ka haq bhi nhi hai," apne baare main sochte hua wo apne upar has rha tha.

Sam us time main paida hua tha jaha bloodline hi sab kuch hoti hai. Uske maa aur baap bhi mixed blood tha. Halaki wo low rank ke tha but fir bhi wo society main average tha.


jab sam paida hua, toh uske ma aur baap ka manana tha ki wo ek high rank ki bloodline ko awake karega.
kyuki bloodline hi apke liye sab kuch hota hai, isliya unko sam se bahut umid thi.

Lekin sam ki Bloodline , bloodline history ki sabse kharab bloodline thi. Wo kewal colour change kar sakta hai.

sam ke mom dad bahut udaas hua jab usne is bloodline ko awake kiya. Sam us time 6 saal ka tha, tab se uske mom dad ka behaviour uske liya kharab hota gya, wo bhul gya ki unka koi beta bhi hai , khana tak unhe dena yaad nhi rahta tha.


Samaj bhi use ek trash samjati thi , uske teacher , mom dad , uske classmate har koi use jaleel krta.

Sam ko mbo foundation main jana tha, star or galaxy ki khoj karna uska sapna tha lekin uska sapna uski bloodline ke awake hote hi mar gya.

Jab sam 8 saal ka hua toh uska chota bhai 2 saal ka tha, lekin jaise jaisa uska bhai bada hota gya uska bhi behaviour sabhi ki tarah hota gya aur usne bhi sam ko kewal trash ki tarah dekha.

sam ke bhai ki bloodline usse thik ulti thi ek High class...

ye sabhi baat sam pahadi ke upar khade khade soch rha tha , aur niche ki taraf dekh rha tha.


aaj sam ne deicide kar liya tha ki wo nicha kud kar apni jaan le lega. He wo pahdi ke upar se khada ho kar niche ki taraf dek rha tha. Is pahadi se jameen 1000 feet upar hai.


Gulp!

"yahi par Sam ki journey khatm hoti hai!" Usne apna sir upar ki uthaya aur jor se chilaya. Uski aawaz aas paas gunj uthi. Tabhi uski nazer taare par padti hai jo bahut teji se chamak rha tha.

"Eh?" Sam ne upar dekte hua harani se ghurne laga.

"Us taare main kya dikkat hai? Wo bada kyu hota ja rha hai?"

Sam taare ki taraf bada aur kahta hai ," waise marne se pahle ise dekne main kya dikkat hai".

jaise hi sam ko kuch ahsaas hua uski aankhein hairat se fail gai, "Arre, iska size nhi bada ho rha, ye mera taraf hi aa rha hai!"

ye ahsaas hote hi Sam bhaagne ke liye picha muda, " main marna chahta hun lekin aise nhi, maina achi maut ka sapna dekha hai , saale taare kyun peecha pada hai mere , chala ja na yar"

Sam bhaagte hua ekdm antim kinare par aa gya tha , aur wo dar se kaapte hua aapni aankhe band kar leta hai.

Blam!

Sam ke aankhe band krte hi wo taara pahadi se takra jata jisse bahut tej aawaz aati hai.

Crumble! Crumble! Crumble!

ye takkar se darare pad gai jisse 50feet ke aas paas ki pahadi kaaapne lagi aur dheere dheere girne lagi. Sam jo is 50 feet ke ander tha wo hadbada gya.

"Kiiaarrrhhh!"


Sam ne jor hadbada kar chillana shuru kiya ," ek baar bach jau fir achi jagah jaunge marne pata nhi kaha se yhi aana tha marne".

tabhi Sam ne jab girne shuru kiya toh uski aankhein nam thi aur wo chup ho gya aur uske face par halki si smile aa gai aur dhere se usne kaha," kaash zindagi ne mujhe ek mauka diya hota".

ye kahte hua Sam behosh ho gya.


lekin behosh hote time Sam ne jab bolne ke liya muh khola tha toh usne apne muh main ek red energy jate hua nhi dekhi.
"Huh? Main mara nhi ?"

Sam jo jungle ke beecho beech leta hua tha usne hairani se agal bagal dekha.

"Mujhe toh chot bhi nhi lagi ye kaise possible ho sakta hai," usne apne sharir ka kona kona check kr liya.


puri raat beet gai ?” ye ahsaas hote hi sam ki aankhein hairat se chaudi ho gai, lekin agle hi pal wo ekdm normal ho gya , "kya farak padta hai mere jeene aur marne se baakiyon ke liye toh main waise bhi mara hua hun," wo udaas ho kar badbadaya.

Sam ne upar pahad ki taraf dekna ka socha jaha se wo gira tha ki tabhi uske nazro ke saamne ek notification aa jati hai.


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Agar main galat nahi hu to ap shayad Species kehna chah rahe the? Spices to masale huwe na?


Yahan shayad Ap Hair colour kehna chah rahe the? Heir to shayad waaris huwa na?

Baki Prologue acha tha, Umeed karta hu ek kamal ki kahani likho gye ap, Best of luck :good:
Hehehehe! Thankyouuu bhaiiii...... ha kahani aise hi achi rhegi aage aur achi hoti jaygiii...
Congratulations Ghost Rider ❣️ bro for the new story update jaldi se dena
Bilkul mera bhaiiii .... update posted :heart:
Bhai देवनागिरी me likhna
Bhai abhi Hindglissh main pad lo aage se dono main kosis krunga
Congrats for start new story thread
Thanks sir
:congrats: For starting new story thread.....
Thankyou sir
Nice Update
Thankyou mera bhaiiiiii ....
 

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Jungle ke beecho beecho ek bade se pahadi par , halki halki dil ko sukoon pahuchane waali thandi thandi hawa chal rhi thi, jisse aas paas ka mohal ek dam saanth ho gya. Pahadi ke upar se dekne par pura jagmagata saher dikhai pad rha tha.

upar se dekne par ye pura seen bada pyara lag rha tha, jo kisi ke bhi dil ko pyara lag sakta hai.

Usi saher ke beech main ek tower tha , jo saher ke beecho beecho main tha jisse nikalne waali roshni aasman ki or chali ja rhi thi.
Whi pahadi par school dress pahne ek ladka khada tha. Jiske baalo ka calour blue, se red , red se green ho rha tha.

saamne saher ki taraf dekte hua uski aankhon main aasu tha, "jab main apne sapne nhi pura kar sakta toh kya main mera zinda rahna ka haq hai?" Usne udaas hote hua bola, " hahaha, main kya kar rha hun? mere jaisa logo ko jeena ka haq bhi nhi hai," apne baare main sochte hua wo apne upar has rha tha.

Sam us time main paida hua tha jaha bloodline hi sab kuch hoti hai. Uske maa aur baap bhi mixed blood tha. Halaki wo low rank ke tha but fir bhi wo society main average tha.


jab sam paida hua, toh uske ma aur baap ka manana tha ki wo ek high rank ki bloodline ko awake karega.
kyuki bloodline hi apke liye sab kuch hota hai, isliya unko sam se bahut umid thi.

Lekin sam ki Bloodline , bloodline history ki sabse kharab bloodline thi. Wo kewal colour change kar sakta hai.

sam ke mom dad bahut udaas hua jab usne is bloodline ko awake kiya. Sam us time 6 saal ka tha, tab se uske mom dad ka behaviour uske liya kharab hota gya, wo bhul gya ki unka koi beta bhi hai , khana tak unhe dena yaad nhi rahta tha.


Samaj bhi use ek trash samjati thi , uske teacher , mom dad , uske classmate har koi use jaleel krta.

Sam ko mbo foundation main jana tha, star or galaxy ki khoj karna uska sapna tha lekin uska sapna uski bloodline ke awake hote hi mar gya.

Jab sam 8 saal ka hua toh uska chota bhai 2 saal ka tha, lekin jaise jaisa uska bhai bada hota gya uska bhi behaviour sabhi ki tarah hota gya aur usne bhi sam ko kewal trash ki tarah dekha.

sam ke bhai ki bloodline usse thik ulti thi ek High class...

ye sabhi baat sam pahadi ke upar khade khade soch rha tha , aur niche ki taraf dekh rha tha.


aaj sam ne deicide kar liya tha ki wo nicha kud kar apni jaan le lega. He wo pahdi ke upar se khada ho kar niche ki taraf dek rha tha. Is pahadi se jameen 1000 feet upar hai.


Gulp!

"yahi par Sam ki journey khatm hoti hai!" Usne apna sir upar ki uthaya aur jor se chilaya. Uski aawaz aas paas gunj uthi. Tabhi uski nazer taare par padti hai jo bahut teji se chamak rha tha.

"Eh?" Sam ne upar dekte hua harani se ghurne laga.

"Us taare main kya dikkat hai? Wo bada kyu hota ja rha hai?"

Sam taare ki taraf bada aur kahta hai ," waise marne se pahle ise dekne main kya dikkat hai".

jaise hi sam ko kuch ahsaas hua uski aankhein hairat se fail gai, "Arre, iska size nhi bada ho rha, ye mera taraf hi aa rha hai!"

ye ahsaas hote hi Sam bhaagne ke liye picha muda, " main marna chahta hun lekin aise nhi, maina achi maut ka sapna dekha hai , saale taare kyun peecha pada hai mere , chala ja na yar"

Sam bhaagte hua ekdm antim kinare par aa gya tha , aur wo dar se kaapte hua aapni aankhe band kar leta hai.

Blam!

Sam ke aankhe band krte hi wo taara pahadi se takra jata jisse bahut tej aawaz aati hai.

Crumble! Crumble! Crumble!

ye takkar se darare pad gai jisse 50feet ke aas paas ki pahadi kaaapne lagi aur dheere dheere girne lagi. Sam jo is 50 feet ke ander tha wo hadbada gya.

"Kiiaarrrhhh!"


Sam ne jor hadbada kar chillana shuru kiya ," ek baar bach jau fir achi jagah jaunge marne pata nhi kaha se yhi aana tha marne".

tabhi Sam ne jab girne shuru kiya toh uski aankhein nam thi aur wo chup ho gya aur uske face par halki si smile aa gai aur dhere se usne kaha," kaash zindagi ne mujhe ek mauka diya hota".

ye kahte hua Sam behosh ho gya.


lekin behosh hote time Sam ne jab bolne ke liya muh khola tha toh usne apne muh main ek red energy jate hua nhi dekhi.
"Huh? Main mara nhi ?"

Sam jo jungle ke beecho beech leta hua tha usne hairani se agal bagal dekha.

"Mujhe toh chot bhi nhi lagi ye kaise possible ho sakta hai," usne apne sharir ka kona kona check kr liya.


puri raat beet gai ?” ye ahsaas hote hi sam ki aankhein hairat se chaudi ho gai, lekin agle hi pal wo ekdm normal ho gya , "kya farak padta hai mere jeene aur marne se baakiyon ke liye toh main waise bhi mara hua hun," wo udaas ho kar badbadaya.

Sam ne upar pahad ki taraf dekna ka socha jaha se wo gira tha ki tabhi uske nazro ke saamne ek notification aa jati hai.


-[Welcome host!]


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update posted guys :declare: ... update timily rhega shyad raat ko bhi aaye ... pyar barsa do... story jaise jaise aage jaygi mja badta jayga.... waada rha .... bs support krte rhe...
Like Target - ❣️
Perfect starting Ghost Rider ❣️ bro ❤️
 

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Jungle ke beecho beecho ek bade se pahadi par , halki halki dil ko sukoon pahuchane waali thandi thandi hawa chal rhi thi, jisse aas paas ka mohal ek dam saanth ho gya. Pahadi ke upar se dekne par pura jagmagata saher dikhai pad rha tha.

upar se dekne par ye pura seen bada pyara lag rha tha, jo kisi ke bhi dil ko pyara lag sakta hai.

Usi saher ke beech main ek tower tha , jo saher ke beecho beecho main tha jisse nikalne waali roshni aasman ki or chali ja rhi thi.
Whi pahadi par school dress pahne ek ladka khada tha. Jiske baalo ka calour blue, se red , red se green ho rha tha.

saamne saher ki taraf dekte hua uski aankhon main aasu tha, "jab main apne sapne nhi pura kar sakta toh kya main mera zinda rahna ka haq hai?" Usne udaas hote hua bola, " hahaha, main kya kar rha hun? mere jaisa logo ko jeena ka haq bhi nhi hai," apne baare main sochte hua wo apne upar has rha tha.

Sam us time main paida hua tha jaha bloodline hi sab kuch hoti hai. Uske maa aur baap bhi mixed blood tha. Halaki wo low rank ke tha but fir bhi wo society main average tha.


jab sam paida hua, toh uske ma aur baap ka manana tha ki wo ek high rank ki bloodline ko awake karega.
kyuki bloodline hi apke liye sab kuch hota hai, isliya unko sam se bahut umid thi.

Lekin sam ki Bloodline , bloodline history ki sabse kharab bloodline thi. Wo kewal colour change kar sakta hai.

sam ke mom dad bahut udaas hua jab usne is bloodline ko awake kiya. Sam us time 6 saal ka tha, tab se uske mom dad ka behaviour uske liya kharab hota gya, wo bhul gya ki unka koi beta bhi hai , khana tak unhe dena yaad nhi rahta tha.


Samaj bhi use ek trash samjati thi , uske teacher , mom dad , uske classmate har koi use jaleel krta.

Sam ko mbo foundation main jana tha, star or galaxy ki khoj karna uska sapna tha lekin uska sapna uski bloodline ke awake hote hi mar gya.

Jab sam 8 saal ka hua toh uska chota bhai 2 saal ka tha, lekin jaise jaisa uska bhai bada hota gya uska bhi behaviour sabhi ki tarah hota gya aur usne bhi sam ko kewal trash ki tarah dekha.

sam ke bhai ki bloodline usse thik ulti thi ek High class...

ye sabhi baat sam pahadi ke upar khade khade soch rha tha , aur niche ki taraf dekh rha tha.


aaj sam ne deicide kar liya tha ki wo nicha kud kar apni jaan le lega. He wo pahdi ke upar se khada ho kar niche ki taraf dek rha tha. Is pahadi se jameen 1000 feet upar hai.


Gulp!

"yahi par Sam ki journey khatm hoti hai!" Usne apna sir upar ki uthaya aur jor se chilaya. Uski aawaz aas paas gunj uthi. Tabhi uski nazer taare par padti hai jo bahut teji se chamak rha tha.

"Eh?" Sam ne upar dekte hua harani se ghurne laga.

"Us taare main kya dikkat hai? Wo bada kyu hota ja rha hai?"

Sam taare ki taraf bada aur kahta hai ," waise marne se pahle ise dekne main kya dikkat hai".

jaise hi sam ko kuch ahsaas hua uski aankhein hairat se fail gai, "Arre, iska size nhi bada ho rha, ye mera taraf hi aa rha hai!"

ye ahsaas hote hi Sam bhaagne ke liye picha muda, " main marna chahta hun lekin aise nhi, maina achi maut ka sapna dekha hai , saale taare kyun peecha pada hai mere , chala ja na yar"

Sam bhaagte hua ekdm antim kinare par aa gya tha , aur wo dar se kaapte hua aapni aankhe band kar leta hai.

Blam!

Sam ke aankhe band krte hi wo taara pahadi se takra jata jisse bahut tej aawaz aati hai.

Crumble! Crumble! Crumble!

ye takkar se darare pad gai jisse 50feet ke aas paas ki pahadi kaaapne lagi aur dheere dheere girne lagi. Sam jo is 50 feet ke ander tha wo hadbada gya.

"Kiiaarrrhhh!"


Sam ne jor hadbada kar chillana shuru kiya ," ek baar bach jau fir achi jagah jaunge marne pata nhi kaha se yhi aana tha marne".

tabhi Sam ne jab girne shuru kiya toh uski aankhein nam thi aur wo chup ho gya aur uske face par halki si smile aa gai aur dhere se usne kaha," kaash zindagi ne mujhe ek mauka diya hota".

ye kahte hua Sam behosh ho gya.


lekin behosh hote time Sam ne jab bolne ke liya muh khola tha toh usne apne muh main ek red energy jate hua nhi dekhi.
"Huh? Main mara nhi ?"

Sam jo jungle ke beecho beech leta hua tha usne hairani se agal bagal dekha.

"Mujhe toh chot bhi nhi lagi ye kaise possible ho sakta hai," usne apne sharir ka kona kona check kr liya.


puri raat beet gai ?” ye ahsaas hote hi sam ki aankhein hairat se chaudi ho gai, lekin agle hi pal wo ekdm normal ho gya , "kya farak padta hai mere jeene aur marne se baakiyon ke liye toh main waise bhi mara hua hun," wo udaas ho kar badbadaya.

Sam ne upar pahad ki taraf dekna ka socha jaha se wo gira tha ki tabhi uske nazro ke saamne ek notification aa jati hai.


-[Welcome host!]


...
...

update posted guys :declare: ... update timily rhega shyad raat ko bhi aaye ... pyar barsa do... story jaise jaise aage jaygi mja badta jayga.... waada rha .... bs support krte rhe...
Like Target - ❣️
Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Ghost Rider ❣️ bhai....
Nice and beautiful update....
 
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