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Abtak apne padha

Achanak mere sapne Mai naradmuni padhare ..

Mai - pranam muniwar

Narad muni- wats khush raho ...wats ab tumhe apne safar par Jana hga ..apno ka moh chorna hga tumhare liye bht log intejar Kar rhe h ..tum grihast jiwan ke liye apitu bht bade karyo ke liye aaye ho ..apne udesyo ko pehchano ....

Mai- muniwar Mai janta hu parantu Mera v to mere mata pita pariwarjano ke liye koi kartwaya hai uska my

Narad muni- ha putra Mai janta hu parantu tum unki chinta na karo ...or samaye samaye par tum aate rehna

Mai- Jo aagaya muniwar waise mujhe Jana kha hai sbsai pehle ..Mai apne safar ki suruwat kaha sai karu

Narad muni - iska jawab Mai tumhe parso dunga.... Tum tab Tak apne pariwar jano ke sath bitao or apne pita ko vta Dena .


Yeah bol narad muni anterdhyan ho Gaye or mujhe gehri soch Mai chor Gaye ...

Ab aage

Aagle din Mai uth Kar nitya karm Karne ke paschat snan karke apne dhyan mudra Mai baith gaya ... Aj Mera man thoda vichlit tha isliye dhyan lagane Mai dikkat ho rhi thi.
to Mai uth gya or papa ke pass Chala gaya jaha wo sofe par baithe news paper padh rhe the..
Wo mujhe apne pass Mai baith liye or puche .

Papa- KY baat hai sb thik to hai na

Mai- ha SB thik hai kue

Papa- SB thik hai to Tera muh utra hua kue hai

Mai- NH aisa to kuch NH hai Papa apko aise hi lag Raha hai

Fir Papa mujhe pakar Kar apne room Mai le Gaye jaha unhone Mera hath apne sar par rakh Diya to majburan mujhe unhe sari baat btani padi ...

Papa- khus hokr yeah to bht khusi ki baat hai beta ismai udas hone ki koi baat nh hai ..Mai to khush hu ki yeah sobhagya mere bete ko Mila ...apne Ghar Mai to SB khusi dete hai par duniya ko khusi dene Wala hi asli hero hota hai ...I proud of u beta ..

Mai- par Papa mere Jane ke baad sb kese rahenge and Mai kese rahunga

Papa- beta sb ko aadat ho jayege tu chinta na Kar ha muskil to hai par samaye sb Kar dega
Maine Papa ko Gale laga liya ..mujhe pata hai wo mujhe khush dikhane ki kosis Kar rhe hai par aisa NH hai wo v andar sai bht dukhi hai..

Fir Mai waha sai uth Kar Bahar Chala aaya jaha mujhe Chachi mil Gaye unsai v bht der Tak baate kiya kafi din ho gaya tha sbsai bate kiye hue

Isi tarah sbsai bate karta Raha aj sb BHT khush the ki Mai unsai itni bate kiya uske baad mummy sai bate kiya ....maa to maa hoti hai wo jhat smjh Gaye or Gale sai laga liya fir boli

Mummy- beta tu dhukhi kue ho Raha hai itna bta or jhut mat bolna ..Mai tujhe kisi kasam Mai NH bandhna chati isliye khut mat bolna

Mummy ki iss baat sai mujhe majbooran unhe Puri baat btani hi pari jiska jawab unhone BHT khush hokr dia

Mummy- beta manti hu mujhe dhukh jarur hoga tumsai bicharne ka par usse Jada khusi hoge ki mere bete nai mere jaise kitni hi maa ke Ghar ki rakhsha karega ...hamesha beta Satya ki rah par chalna or kitni hi musibat aaye apne apko hamesha sant rakhna ..kueki sant dinag sahi rah btata hai wohi kroth vinash ki or le jata hai ....

Isi tarah ki dhero bate karte hu last Mai Mai pahucha apni Radha ke pass

Radha apni room Mai baithi kuch soch rahi thi Mai uske room Mai gaya par wo apne dhyan Mai magn hi thi Maine use Puch

Mai- Radha KY Kar rhi ho

Par usnai koi reply NH dia..Mai usse hilaya tb uska dhyan tuta tab usnai pucha

Radha - are subham tm kb aaye bolo ky baat hai

Mai- itni gehri soch Mai kaha dubi hue thi

Radha - kahi NH tm btao aj mere liye kaha sai time mil gaya

Mai- aisa kue Bol rahi ho tmhare liye to time hi time hai

Wo- ha pata hai kitna

( Radha mere bht close thi sayad Mai use like v karne lag gaya tha par yeah galat tha ...jb sai Mai wapas aaya tha sbsai Jada dhyan wohi Mera rakhti thi)

Mai- KY hua KY soch rahi thi tm itna btao

Wo - kuch NH tm kaha ja rahe ho yeah btao
Mai(shock)- kahi NH aisa kue Bol rahi ho padhne jaunga naa

Wo - NH tm SB mujhsai jhut bolte ho Papa mummy tm sb

Mai( shock and sad) - aisa kue Bol rahi ho ..aisa kuch NH hai

Wo - Mera hath apne sar par rakh Kar to khao mere kasam aaj uski ankho Mai aansu the or ajib kasis ..mujhe kuch samjh hi NH aaraha tha ...

Maine utha or Jane laga to usnai bola tm chale jao par Mai jakr gate lock kiya or uske pass aakr baith gaya ..wo mujhe ektak dekh rahi thi...tab Maine faisla kiya or use suru sai lekar last Tak sb Bata Diya iss bich uske chehre ke haw bhaw badlte rahe par wo Shanti sai sb sunti rahi ....jab maine sb Bata Diya tab v wo shant rahi or mere or dekhti rahi ..mujhe kuch samjh hi NH aaraha tha ki KY Kar rhi hai KY nahi...

Thode der or shant rehne ke baad uske ankho Mai ek chamak sa aaya fir wo boli.

Radha- itna sb kuch tumne hum sabsai chupaya or aisa v hota hai par mujhe khusi hai ki tumne akhir Mai mujhe SB bta dia ha mujhe kuch kuch doubt tha par itna NH ...

Mai- to akhir tum sb samjh gaye ho to yeah v Jan lo kl sai Mai ja Raha hu apne safar par bich bich Mai aata rahunga par kb yeah NH pata or aage ky hai wo v NH pata

Radha- Mai v tumhare sath jaungi ....

Mai- NH yeah NH ho sakta hai ...waha safar Mai bht khatra hga kitna itna andaja to mujhe v NH hai ...Mai tumhare ko itne bade khatre Mai NH daal sakta hu ..

Radha - dekho subham Mai v tumko kuch btanA chati hu ..waise to ladkiya kavi aise bate NH btati hai par Mai tumhare sath koi risk NH Lena chati hu..
Har ladki ka sapno ka rajkumar hota hai waise Mai v chati hu ki mere sapno ka rajkumar hi mujhe mile par ajtk mujhe aisa koi NH Mila par jb tum aaye to tumme mujhe wo sari khubi dikhi ..Mai tumhare close hote Gaye or last Mai tumsai na chate hue v pyar Kar baithi ...jb pyar hua to room Mai baith Kar apne ko bht kosa v ki tm mere Bhai ho yesb galat hai ..par SB bekar Mai apne aap ko NH rok paye ....par aj jb mujhe SB tumne Bata dia to ab mujhe koi dar NH ab chayea Jo ho jaye Mai agar shadi karungi to sirf tumsai NH to nh karungi....

Mai- dekho Radha yesb galat hai ...Bhai behan ke bich yesb NH hta hai ..or mujhe to yebhi NH pata ki aage KY hga KY nahi ..kese mere jindagi rahege..sayad mere jindagi pariwar pyar shadi wagerah hai v NH ...yesb mere liye sambhav NH hai Radha ...or kl ko na jane mere jindagi Mai bht ladkiya v aasakti hai tb tum KY karoge ...

Radha- dekho Mai sbke liye tayar hu ..agar tum NH mile to Mai Marne ko v tayar hu...or rahi baat ladkiyo ki to mujhe isse koi problem NH hai mujhe mere hisse ka pyar chayea Baki mujhe NH Matlab ...ha mujhe bht Jalan v hgi or dikkat v par mujhe pata hai tum yesb janbujh Kar NH Kar rhe ho ...

Mai- NH aisa NH ho sakta hai tum samjhti kue NH ho

Wo- kue tumhare jindagi Mai koi or hai to Bata do..

Mai- NH koi NH hai par NH ho sakta or yeah bolkar Mai aagaya waha sai apne room Mai ..Mai v Radha ko pasand karta tha par iska matlb yeah to NH ki Mai apni khusi ke liye uski jindagi kharab Kar du..

Mere jindagi na Jane kb kaha rahunga ..kb KY hga ..kl hga v ya nh Mai v NH janta ...jindagi v ajib hai par khusi v hai ki Mai kisi ke kaam aaraha hu...

Tabhi Mai dhyan Mai baitha thori.der dhyan kiya to mere kano Mai aawaz aaye subham mere Bache yeah tum KY Kar rhe ho

Mai- KY hua Prabhu Maine KY kiya

Awaz- yeah Janam tumhara sbko khusi dene ke liye hi hua hai or tum dukhi Kar rhe ho

Mai- Prabhu Mai uski jindagi kharab NH karna chata hu

Awaz- iss sansar Mai sbki niyati atal hai ...tum bas karm karo fal ki chinta na karo putra..or Radha to tumhare sakti hai ..tumhare jindagi Mai bht aayenge ..tumhe bht logo ki awasakta hai isliye inhe jodte jao ..kueki muskilo Mai SB mil.kar hi Hal ho payega ..yeah tumhare kamjori NH sakti hai.

Mai- par Prabhu yeah bin saktio ke kese kuch karege ..

Awaz- ha tumhara sochna Satya hai putra ..iska Hal v tumhe kl narad Muni sai mil jayega ...or Avi to tumhe vhi apni saktio ko jagrit karna hai or Pana hai ...

Mai- jaisa Prabhu apki aagya

Or fir awaz aana band ho gaya or Mai dhyan sai uth gaya
..
Ab Mera man sant ho gaya tha or Mai waha sai Radha ke kamre ki taraf gaya to dekha wo ro rahi thi or uske hatho Mai koi sisi type ki thi or dusre hatho Mai mere taswir thi ...Jise dekh Kar wo Bol rahi thi

Radha( taswir sai) - Mai tumhare Bina nahi ji sakti or tum mujhe NH pyar karte to Mai jinda rehkar KY karungi isliye Mai aj maar jaungi ...

Or sisi kholne lagi ...yeah sun kar mujhe dukh hua ki agar Mai deri karta to aaj Radha ko kho baithta ..

Maine jaldi sai wo sisi uske hatho sai liya or usko feka or ek thappar mara usko or Gale sai laga liye ...

Dono ke ankho Mai aansu the ...wo mujhe kas Kar pakri thi or Mai v

Mai- yeah tum KY Kar rhi ho ..tumhare Bina Mera KY hga socha kavi

Wo- to Mai ky karti tum to mujhe chor Kar ja rahe ho to isse acha marna pasand karungi

Mai- aage sai aisa kavi socha na to dekh lena ..I love you Mai v Tere Bina NH ji sakta Mai pagl tha Jo tumko chorne ka socha

Wo yeah sun kar khush ho Gaye or I love you bole ja rahi thi ..


Dosto aj try kiya BHT bada update dene ka ..and Mai late post jarur karta hu par update aate rahenge ...Mai bg rehta hu dusro ki story v parta hu ..apni v likhta hu ..or Ghar ke kaam v karta hu ...dosto yeah story dhire jarur chalege par chalte rahege aplog chinta na Kare ...

And Ghar par rahe SB ..stay at home ..stay safe ...
Brilliant update writer sahab.... extraordinary :rose:
 

Mahakal jai

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Abtak apne padha

Mai- yeah tum KY Kar rhi ho ..tumhare Bina Mera KY hga socha kavi

Wo- to Mai ky karti tum to mujhe chor Kar ja rahe ho to isse acha marna pasand karungi

Mai- aage sai aisa kavi socha na to dekh lena ..I love you Mai v Tere Bina NH ji sakta Mai pagl tha Jo tumko chorne ka socha

Wo yeah sun kar khush ho Gaye or I love you bole ja rahi thi ..

Ab aage

Fir thoda waqt or humne sath Mai Gujara or fir Mai bakio ke sath nikal pada masti krne mall..

aisse hi raat ko khana kha Kar aaya fir Maine sbko bta dia ki Mai apni studies ke liye ja Raha hu sath Mai Radha v ja rahi hai kueki hmlg ka medical hai to sath Mai hi padhenge..

Ye sun kar sb sad ho Gaye par Papa shock ho Gaye ...fir akele Mai Milne par unhone mujhe pucha

Papa- yeah ky hai Radha kue

Fir Maine Papa ko sari baat btaye Jo unke liye thodi shocking thi paar wo man Gaye fir kueki unhe PTA h na to Mai jhuth Bolta hu or na hi iss mamle Mai maajak karunga unsai ...

Aise hi wo din sabke sath bate masti karte hue bit gaya ..

Agli subha Mai jaldi utha fir apne sb kaam Karne ke baad Radha ko dekh to wo uthi hue apni or mere packing ko final touch de rahi thi ..fir Mai dhyan Mai baitha to fir awaz aaye narad Muni ki..

Narad muni- putra samaye aagaya hai

Mai- ha muniwar

N.m- to tum tayar ho prasthan krne ke liye apne naye safar ki or ...jaha sai ek naye adhyaye ki suruwat hogi ...

Mai- ha muniwar Mai tayar hu par muniwar Radha ki sikhsha or rakhsha ka KY hga

Muniwar- vats uski sikhsha to tum doge or rakha karne ke liye v tum sikha doge ..usko tumko tayar karna hga ..

har insane ke andar kuch khash saktiya hoti hai unhe tumko uske jagrit karwana hai aage tumhare madad ke liye samaye par kuch guruwar aate rahenge ...

waise adhunik certificate wagerah sb ho jayega uski chinta mat karo putra..

Mai- jaise aagya muniwar

N.m- atti uttam putra..sbsai pehle tumko or Radha ko yaha sai Himachal Pradesh ke himu name ke jagah Jana hai jaha aage ka tumko wahi jakr pata chalega...

Mai- jaise aagya muniwar..

N.m- tm yaha sai jungle Jana jaha sai tumko waha Tak Jana hai...

Mai- jaise aagya guruwar

Yeah bol guruwar ki aawaz aana band ho gaya or Mai dhyan sai utha to dekha Radha waha baithi thi bed Mai ....wo muskura rahi thi ..maine usse pucha

Mai- aise kue muskura rahi ho

Radha- dekh rahi hu kitne pyare or masum lag rahe ho

Mai- tm v na ..waise tayari ho Gaye

Wo- ha SB taayari hai ..

Mai- thik hai tm tayar ho jao....and Jada saman mat lena..Jo Jada jaruri hai bas wohi

Wo- okk bolkar tayar hone chali Gaye ...

Fir humlg tayar hokar Bahar aagaye jaha sb the...unke Charo sai saaf pata chal Raha tha ki wo udas hai par fir v hasne ki kosis Kar rhe the ..

humlg sbsai mile ...sbnai Hume ache sai padhne or rehne or roj baat karne ka Farman suna dia ..

fir humlog Papa ke sath nikal pade maine Papa ko jagah btaya jaha wo humlg ko chore or BHT sare bate Radha or mere ko samjhaye....

Fir humlg waha sai andar ki taraf chal diye or papa kuch der Tak dekhte rahe fir waha sai chale Gaye ...

or humlog andar aakar waha sai Maine Radha ka hath pakra or saman ki taraf dekhte hue gayab hokar pahucha Himachal ke himu gao ke Bahar kuch Khali jagah Mai purane kapro Mai those fate purane the or saman v kuch thoda sa thaila Mai Badal gaya ....

Jise dekh Radha chok Gaye or mujhe boli

Radha- yeah ky hai..

Mai -insb ki aadat daal lo ..Avi tumhe bht kuch dekhna hai ..isliye ghabrao mat ..Maine tumko pehle hi bola tha ki mat aao yeah jiwan bht kathin hai par tm Mani hi NH

Radha- Mai to har jagah khush hu ..bs tm sath hone chaheye .. Fir chaye jitni kathinayea aaye koi dikkat NH ...par Mai tumhare Bahar NH ji sakti or .

uski aankhe name ho Gaye..Mai uske aankho ko saaf kiya or bola tum ro mat baat baat Mai ..

Wo- tum rulate hi kue ho motu

Mai- mujhe motu bola jao tum chipkali

Wo- mai chipkali NH hu tum motu

Mai - tum chipkali chipkali wo v badi wali jao

Issi tarah nokjhok chal Raha tha ki man Mai aawaz aaye ..tumlog baad Mai ladh Lena Avi jao .
.fir Mai bola ji...Jise sun Radha boli KY ji..Mai fir usse pura baat btaya Jise sun wo shock v hue or haste hue chalne lagi...

Humlog chalte rahe ki gaw aaya to dekha mere man Mai Prabhu ki awaz aaye jismai unhone mujhe SB btaya ki mujhe yaha KY karna hai Jo aplogo ko baad Mai pata chalega ....

Radha nai pucha ki aage KY karna to Maine bola tm sawal BHT puchti ho pratiksha or karm karo Uttar mil gaya samaye par ....usse kuch samjh to NH aaya par usko mere upar purn viswash tha isliye usnai aage NH Puch ..usko pata hai Mai Jo karunga wo uchit karunga ..

Fir humlog ja rahe the ki kuch gaw wale aaye or humlog sai puche

Gaw wale - bhaiya kha ja rahe ho

Mai- bhaiya humlg kaam dhundhne aaye hai

Gaw wale - ky kaam karte ho tmlg

Mai- bhaiya rasoyeya hai ..khana bnate haai ...

Gaw wale - KY baat bhaiya sahi samaye par aaye ho ..tumhare kismat achi hai ...aaj hi thakur ji ke aadmi aaye the rasoyeya ko dhundhne ke liye ..unka purana rasoyea aaj hi Chala gaya uski putra ki tabyat achanak kharab ho gaya ...

Mai- yeah to bura hai ki uske putra ki tabyat achanak kharab ho Gaye..iswar uske putra ko thik Kare..

Gaw wale- bhaiya tm bht ache ho isliye tmhe btate hai ki waha sambhal Kar rehna thakur ache NH hai apna or apni patni ka dhyan rakhna ...

Mai- bhaiya dhanyabad apka ..

Fir wo gaw Wala mujhe lekar thakur ke haweli ki taraf le gaya jaha jate hue hamare bate hote rahi ...uska name shyam tha ..acha tha wo ..fir wo humare haweli ke samne le gaya jaha darban nai Hume roka or aane ka Karan pucha...

Darban- ruko Bhai kaha chale ja rahe ho ..koun ho tumlog or yaha KY kaam hai

Shyam-ji Kaka Mai shyam gaw ka hu

Darban- are ha shyam tum..yelog koun hai apne gaw ke to NH lagte

Shyam- ji Kaka aaj hi aaye hai ..unhe kaam ki talash thi ..to le aaya yaha

Darban- KY kaam karte hai yelog

Shyam- ji rasoyeya hai ..rasoye ka kaam karte hai

Darban- acha ruko Mai andar Malik ko sandesha bejwata hu

Fir wo kisi ko bolkar andar bulawa bheje ..jaha sai thodi hi Der Mai Hume andar bulaya gaya ...

Jab hume wo aadmi Jo bulawa laya tha sath legaya ..bht hi aalisan haweli thi ..alag hi rutba ..thode der Mai hall Mai le jakar wo mujhe rukne ko bola ...

Thodi der Mai waha ek aadmi or aurat aaye ..aadmi ki umra koi 50 ke aspas hgi or aurat ki umra 30-32 ke aaspass ..pehnawe sai hi lag rahe the yaha ke thakur thakurain. .wo dono aakar sofe par baith Gaye ...or hum Tino khare the fir unhone shyam sai wohi Puch Jo darban nai pucha fir unhone shyam ko Bahar Jane ko bola uske baad..

Thakur- to tum dono rasoyea ho...

Mai- ji

Thakur - name ky hai tumhara or kaha Ghar hua tumhara

Mai- ji Mera name subham hai or yeah mere joru Radha ...humlg Bihar sai hai

Thakur - koi pehchan Patra wagerah

Mai- ji yeah Raha ..fir Maine use kuch kagaj dikhaye

Thakur- hmm to tmlg Bihar sai ho..tmlogo ko yeah gaw ka pata kisnai dia..

Mai- ji humlog kaam ki talash Mai ghum rahe the ki bagal wale gaw Mai Hume btaya gaya ki yaha dekh lai sayad humlog ke layak.kaam mil jaye..

Thakur- khana wagerah Mai SB banene jante v ho ya nh

Mai- ji hukum sb bana lete hai ...

Itne der sai thakurain chup thi or mereko sirf ghur hi rahi thi..fir wo boli

Thakurain- ky KY jante ho

Mai- ji sb bna Leta hu

Tb thakur ko call aaya to wo thakurain ko bol Kar Chala gaya ki tum dekh lo

Thakurain - hmm tb to badiya hai ..waise dekh Kar to lagta hai kahi ke raja ya pehlwan jaisa..Hatha Katha sarir ..chehre par tez wagerah

( man mai- isko to dekhne ka man Kar rahai hai isse sewa karwani parege)

Mai- ji kaha Malkin bas upar wale ki Daya sai


Malkin- hmm thik hai tm aaj sai kaam par lag jao ...tumko dono ko 30000 RS pagar dungi or kaam acha laga to badha dungi ..lekin chutti NH milege ..khana ke sath sath Jo kaam bola Jaye sb karna parega ..

Mai- ji sukriya Malkin

Fir thakurain ek noukar ko bolkar haweli Mai hi ek kamra khulwa Kar humlog ko de diya or boli

Thakurain- aise to Bahar noukro ke liye quarter bna hua hai par tum rasoye ka kaam karoge to tum yehi rahoge to acha hai pata NH kab KY jarurat padh Jaye...

Yeah bol wo Chali Gaye or wo naukar Hume humara kamra dikha dia Jo rasoye ke bagal Mai tha.....


Bhai log update aagaya ..Ghar Mai raheye update aaram sai padhyea safe raheye or ache ache comments dijiye jisse mai jaldi jaldi update de saku ..umid hai apko update achi lagegi
 
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