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Milan2010

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:?: ye wala dimention mein jaane ka rasta mille to batane ka apan ko
apan nikal lega waha ke liye.....
:faint: ye to bahut tezz banda hai aur sayad ab iskko ye samajh mein aane wala hai ki ye time travel nahi hai balki kuch aur hi hai :approve:
Ek minute
Manthan ko wo sapne aane lage jab ye yaha pe aaya tha
Pari ko bhi iske yaha pe aane ke wajah se sapne aate hai ????
:thanks: Ristrcted :dost:
ju naa reh paoge vaha par :doh:
pari ka toh meko nahi malum, voh toh bht pyaari h toh mai sirf usko dekhta hu :love:
baaki ju khud puch lena pari se
 
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Update : 2 (College ka Pehla Din)


Vaise toh hamari zindagi me sabse hasin pal toh tab hota hai jab hum so rahe hote hai, ya yu kahu ki raat ka samay, aur jyadatar log raat ke waqt ghar par hote hai


Kudrat ne ek khubsurat duniya banayi hai, aur usi duniya ke do waqt, ek toh hai din, aur dusra hai raat, jyadatar toh din me log busy rehte hai, aur shayad isiliye raat ko har jagah shanti chayi hui hoti hai

Iss shanti ne hamare man ko bhi bahut aram milta hai, aur raat ke waqt duniya khubsurat lagne lagti hai aur usme chand ki roshni uss khubsurati me char chand laga deti hai

Raat ko pyaar ka waqt bhi kaha jaata hai, yani ki har premiyo ko joda ek dusre ki baaho me khoya hota hai, lekin kehte haina ki jab chiz jitni jyada shant hoti hai, voh andar hi andar itni hi khatarnak bhi hoti hai, matlab ki yeh rate jinti shant hoti hai, apne andar bahut si baate chupayi rehti hai


Aaj ki raat bhi shayad aisa hi kuch hone vala tha, jo iss manav duniya ka hila dega..kuch esi ghatnaye ghatne vali thi..ya fir yu kahu ki manav ki soch ko badal dega


Raat apne puri josh me thi, uss jagah par chand ki roshni ek matra thi, aur usi me 60-65 saal ka Buddha admi lathi ke sahare chal raha tha..uske chalne ki vajah se uske pairo ki awaaz uss jungle ki shanti ko bhang kar rahi thi

Kehte hai ki raat ko hume dar uss waqt lagta hai jab humara dil pehle se dara hua ho, par inn chacha ji ke saath kuch alag tha

Haroj isi waqt voh yaha se gujarte the, par aaj unka dil me dar sat ha, iski vajah voh khud nahi jante the

Voh apne aap se “aaj ki yeh shanti badi hi ajib hai, aisa lag raha hai mano ki koi bahut bada tufaan aane vala hai, madad karna bhagwan, insaano ki madad karna”


Kabhi kabhi hume bhavishya me hone vali ghatividhiyon ka pehle se abhas ho jata hai, jese ki inn chacha ji ke saath hua, unhe lagne laga tha jese ki kuch bahut bura hone vala hai, shayad voh thodi thodi der me apne piche dekhte hai, aur aisa karte hue voh apne ghar ki aur badh rahe the, jo issi jungle ke bich me basa hua ek bahut hi chota sa ganv tha..lekin chalte hue achanak se unke pair vahi par ruk gaye, aur aankhe khuli khuli reh gayi


Jab voh khud se baat karte hue chal raha the, uss waqt unhone ek awaaz suni, voh awaaz bhi kaafi bhayanak thi, yeh sunte hi unke haath me rahi laathi gir gayi, aur voh turant hi uss taraf dekhne lage jaha se unhe yeh awaaz sunai di thi, uss aur ka najara dekh kar unki aankhe apne aap hi badi ho gayi aur voh ek tak samne ki aur dekhne lage


Thodi hi dur par ek dhamaka hua tha aur usi dhamake ki vajah se vaha par aag lag gayi thi, par chacha ji ko nahi pata tha ki yeh dhamaka kese hua, voh turant apni laathi uthate hai aur uss aur jaane lage

Vese toh voh jagah jyada dur nahi thi, isliye voh kuch hi der me uss aag vaali jagah ke najdik pahuch gaye, jaha par unhone dekha ki jungle ke andar ke hisse me aag lagne ki vajah se kaafi saare paid jal kar rakh ho chuke the, aur iss aag ki vajah se janwar ne afra tafri macha rakhi thi


Voh abhi uss aur dekh hi rahi the, ki unhone ke awaaz suni..voh awaaz sunti hi unhone apni dahini aur dekha, jaha par ek 22-23 saal ka ladka langdate hue chal raha tha, uski halat bahut hi jyada kharab ho chuki thi, jab uss chacha ne uske najdik jaakar dekha toh unhone paaya ki jaha se voh chalta hua aa raha hai uss jagah uske khoon gira hua hai, jo sidhe uss jagah jaa raha tha jaha par aag lagi thi


Achanak se voh ladka ladkhadte hue vahi gir gaya, toh voh chacha turant uss ladke ke pass gaye aur jaake usko sambhala

Lekin uss ladke ka chehra dekhkar toh unki aankhe ek pal ke liye band ho gayi, kyunki uss ladke ki chehra par har taraf khuun laga hua tha, uske kapde bhi adhe fate hue the, ya yu kahu ki uss aag ki vajah se jal chuke the


Tabhi voh ladka kuch badbadata hai, lekin uski awaaz bahut hi dhimi thi, jis vajah se voh chacha ko samaj nahi aa raha tha ki voh kya keh raha hai


Voh ladka haklate hue “pppp….pp…lll…zzz ss..ssss..aaa..vv…..eeeee hhhhhe……e.eeee……rrrrr, ppp…..lllll…..zzzzz”


Lekin voh chahca kuch bhi samaj nahi paa rahe the, aur waqt ke saath uss ladke ki saanse fulti jaa rahi thi, aur achanak se voh vahi par gir gaya

Tabhi vaha par daudte hue kuch log aagaye, jo shayad usi gaanv se the jaha par yeh chacha rahte the, voh sab iss aag ko dekhkar chaunk gaye the, kyunki unhe pata tha ki jungle me achanak se aag nahi lagti, matlab kuch toh gadbad hui hai


Unn ganv vasiyo mese ek shaks chacha ke pass aaya aur kahta hai “chacha, aap yaha kya kare rahe hai..?? aur aur yeh chora kaun hai..??”


Voh chacha uss shaks ki aur dekhte hue kahta hai “pata nahi manshukh, yeh uss jungle ki aur se yaha aaya hai”



Mansukh “kyyaaaa..?? lekin chacha ji voh toh…”


Masukh ki baat ko voh chacha kaat te hue “muje malum hai, lekin iss chore ki halat bahut najuk hai, ise mere ghar le aao, fauran” kehte hue chacha ji khade hue aur voh vaha se apne ghar ki aur chal diye


Fir mansukh ne uss ladke ko apne kandhe par uthaya aur voh bhi unke piche chalne laga, aur baaki ke gaanv vale uss aag ko shant karne me jut gaye



Next Day

“noooooooooo….please leave me, please, dekh yeh tu sahi nahi kar raha, mai tujse keh rahi hu, please rukja”



Kehte hue ek ladki aage aage daud rahi thi, aur uske piche ek ladka haath me tomato ketchup ki bottle liye hue daud raha tha

Voh ladka teji se daudte hue uss ladki ko pakad leta hai aur fir voh sara ketchup uss ke baalo me gira deta hai, aur fir voh jor jor se hasne laga


Yeh dekhkar voh ladki rone jesa muh banate hue apne baalo ko pakadti hai, aur voh uss ladke ko dikhate hue “huh, tu nahi mana na, mere sare baal bigad diye”


Tabhi voh ladka kuch kehta uske pehle hi uss ladki ke upar se thanda paani gira, aur iske saath hi Pari joro se saans lete hue uth gayi, aur jor se haafne lagi

Voh aapni saanso ko sambhalte hue apne haath apne chest par rakhti hai, aur dusre haath se chehre par aaye hue baalo ko side karti hai, aur tabhi use kisi ki hasne ki awaaz sunayi di

Awaaz sunte hi use der nahi lagi ki yeh koi aur nahi balki Aarav hai, voh jaldi se apne chehre se paani hatati hai aur aarav ki aur gusse se dekhne lagi


Lekin aarav toh bas jor se hase jaa raha tha “kya didu, aap bhi had karti ho, kabse utha raha tha”


Pari gusse “iss tarah koi uthata hai bhala”


Aarav “haa….badi didi ko ese hi uthate hai”


Pari “kya kaha tune, ruk abhi batati hu”
aur voh aarav ko pakadne ke liye uske piche bhaagi, par aarav daudte hue bathroom me ghus gaya aur pari bahar se chillate hue “aarav bahar aa, mai kehti hu abhi bahar aa”


Aarav “sorry di, mai nahi aata”
aur pari bahar se hi chillane lagti hai


Pari ki iss tarah chillane ki awaaz sunkar uski mom vaha jaati hai, aur fir voh pari se puchti hai “kya hua, subah subah kyu chilla rahi hai itna”


Pari thand ki vajah se kaanp rahi thi, voh kanpte hue kahti hai “dekho na mumma, iss pagal ne kya kiya, koi subah subah iss tarah se uthata hai, voh bhi sardi me thande paani se” aur voh thar thar kanpne lagi


Mom “tum dono bhi na, jaa ab jaldi se jaake fresh hoja”



Pari “kya mumma, ab dekho na mere baalo me firse shampoo karna padega”


Aarav andar se “kya shampoo, matlab ki aaj firse bottle khali hogi, aur har baar ki tarah muje laani hogi”


Pari gusse se “haaaa, ab bahar nikal jaldi se”


Aarav bahar aata hai, aur apni di ki pith par halke se pinch karte hue bahar chala jata hai, ise dekhkar Pari kehti hai “oooouuuuccccchhhhh, pagal, gadha kahi ka”


Uske baad pari jaldi se bathroom me chali jaati hai, voh nahte hue apne man me sochti hai “aaj firse yeh sapna, ohh god, pata nahi aajkal ese sapne kyu aate hai, vese toh yeh sapne unko aate hai jinke bf hote hai, par mera toh koi bf nahi hai, kya pata iss nayi clg me koi mil jaye” yeh sochkar hi voh sharmane lagi thi


Yahi sab sochte hue voh fresh hokar bahar aagayi, aur firse sochne lagi “mai bhi na kitni pagal hu, yeh toh voh Kruti ki vajah se hai, haa voh haroj apne bf ki baate karti hai isliye aise sapne aa rahe hai”



Tabhi uske bhai ki awaaz firse sunayi di jo pari ke room ke bahar khada tha “didi, jaldi karo, late ho jaogi..kitna nahogi ab, lagta hai aaj muje bina nahe hi school jana padega”


Pari apne room se hi awaaz deti hai “ha bas, aa rahi hu, tu jaa” fir voh apne bed ke pass aayi jaha par uska phone rakha hua tha


Vaise toh madam notifications check karne vali thi, par mobile par time dekhkar voh khudse hi bol padi “kyaaaa..?? ek ghanta, itni jyada der lag gayi” kehte hue usne phone ko vahi rakh diya aur apni almari kholi


Aur aaj firse almari ke samne khadi hokar sar khujalane lagi “ab aaj kya pehnu, yeh vali, nahi yeh toh maine last week hi pehni thi, ye vali..nahi yeh colour pasand nahi hai, mumma koh keh dungi yeh kisiko de de” voh karib 3-4 dress select karti hai aur fir “kal layi voh vali dress pehen leti hu” fir thoda rukkar “nahi nahi, voh nayi dress me clg ke pehle din pehnungi, vese bhi aaj sirf registration hi toh karna hai” Aur voh ek blue colour ki one piece select karti hai


Lekin Pari ne yaha bhi 20 min nikal diye, aur voh bhi sirf kapde select karne me, aur uske baad aur 20 minutes ready hone me



Yaar had hai, sirf itna likhne me mere haath dard karne lage, pata nahi yeh ladkiya itna time kyu lagati hai, plsz itna time mat lagao yaar..Request hai


Uske baad Pari niche aayi, aur sabke saath breakfast kiya aur fir voh vaha se college ke liye nikal padi

Vaise toh college bhi Delhi me hi thi, par voh college kaafi famous thi, aur uss college ka ek rule tha, jisme har student ko compulsory hostel me rehna tha, Bas yahi vajah thi ki Pari ko bhi hostel jana pad raha tha


Pari ki ek achi friend thi KRUTI, jo karib 20 minute se Pari ka Metro station par intezaar kar rahi thi, pari ko aate dekh Kruti uspar chillati hai

Kruti “kya yaar, kitna late karti hai, itna wait toh mai Rahul ko bhi nahi karwati”



Pari “sorry sorry, chal ab jaldi se”

Uske baad dono ladkiya ek saath college ke liye nikalti hai


Kruti : 22-23 years ki modern ladki thi, dekhne me ekdum sexy aur pari ke jesi hi khubsurat, Pari aur Kruti bachpan se hi achi dost thi, aur yahi vajah thi ki inn dono ne ek hi college me admission liya, vaise toh Kruti ka ek bf hai Rahul, jo dusre city se masters degree karne vala hai


Ab aisa toh ho nahi sakta ki do ladkiya jab ek saath ho aur chup rahe, yaha bhi yahi hua, lag gayi dono baato me, aur baate bhi kya, do hi topics hote hai, ek toh bf aur dursa fashion, pata nahi kya kya baate kar rahi thi

Yaar reham karo, muskil se upar vala scene likha hai, mere me itni himmat nahi hai ki innki baato ko sun pau, aur agar sun bhi lu toh yaha likh paane ki himmat nahi hai mujme, muje masum ladke par raham karo yaar, aur khud hi soch lo ki yeh dono kya baate kar rahi hogi :D


Khair inki baate toh khatam nahi honi thi, par metro toh khatam honi hi thi, matlab ki metro ka last stop aagaya

Metro station se nikal kar inhone ek taxi li, aur taxi se voh dono college pahuch gayi, jisme unhe karib 35 minutes lage


College ke gate ke andar enter hote hi Paridhi ne Kruti se pucha “yaar tuje pata hai ki ab hume kaha jana hai”


Kruti “nahi yaar, chal na administrative me jaakar puchte hai”
, fir yeh dono college ki admin office ki aur chal padi, aur raste me Paridhi ki najar kisi par padi, use dekhkar Pari vahi par ruk jaati hai


Pari ki iss tarah se rukne par Kruti usko sawaliya najro se dekhne lagi, aur voh pari se puchti hai “aaj kya bhul gayi tu..?? plsz aaj mat kehna ki abhi tuje ghar jana hai”


Pari “please keh de ki yeh sapna hai, plsz plsz”
Voh apne aankhe joro se bandh karte hue kahti hai


Pari ki iss tarah kehne par Kruti uss ki aur dekhti hai, aur fir Pari ki najro ka picha karte hue usne uss shaks ko dekha jise dekhkar Paridhi ka behaviour change ho gaya


To be continued…
Nice update bhai
 
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“aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh” kahrate hue voh ladka bistar se khada hokar baith gaya, uske sar par patti bandhi hui thi, aur thik aisa hi haal uske baaki sharir ke hisso par tha


Haath, pair aur kamar par bhi kapdo ki patti bandhi hui thi, jisse saaf pata chal raha tha ki uska ilaj kisi vaidh ne kiya hai, matlab ki ganv me hua hai

Kal raat jo khun uske sharir par laga tha, voh sab uss budhe chacha ne saaf kar diya tha, uski halat bahut hi jyada kharab thi, kyunki sharir ke har hisse me chot lagi hui thi..aur aaj uska chehra dekhkar lag raha tha ki voh ek 22-23 saal ka jawan ladka hai


Iss ladke ki kahrane ki awaaz sunkar ek 21 saal ki ladki uske jopde me aaye, vaise toh iss ladki ne ek sadharan se kapde hi pehne hue the, dikhne me bhi thik hi thi, par fir bhi uska chehra khubsurat tha, usne dekha ki uske baapu jis ladke ko lekar aaye hai voh jag chuka hai..voh turant chillati hai “baapuuu, jaldi aayie” aur tabhi uski najar uss ladke par padi


Voh ladka apne sar par ek haath rakhe hue baitha tha, aur apni aankho ko khol bandh kar raha tha, tabhi usne apna dusra haath bhi apne sar par rakh diya aur jor se dabate hue usne apne sar ko upar niche karne laga, yaha tak ki usne apni aankho ko bhi joro se band kiya hua tha

Darsal uske sar me bahut hi tej dard ho raha tha, aur saath me uske dimag ek scene bar bar aa raha tha, thoda dhundhala sat ha, lekin voh scene uske dimag se hat hi nahi raha tha, voh dekh raha tha ki jaha voh khada hai vaha charo aur aag lagi hui hai, aur aisa lag raha tha ki shayad voh uss aag me kahi bhag raha hai, ya fir uss aag se bahar nikalne ki koshish kar raha hai


Voh ladki yeh dekhkar thoda ghabra jaati hai..aur voh sehmi hui do kadam uss ladei ki aur badhi aur haklate hue “aa..aaa..pp ttth..ikk toh haina”


Yeh sunkar bhi voh ladka jyada kuch nahi karta, upar se voh apne sar ko teji se idhar udhar karne laga, aur uske kahrane ki awaaz badhti hi jaa rahi thi “aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa”


Voh ladki firse chillati hai “bbaaaappppppuuuuuuuuu”


Tabhi uss jopde me uss ladki ke baapu..yani voh chacha aate hai, aur aate hi uss ladki par baras padte hai “kahe itna bhok ri hai chori” aur uski najar uss ladke ke par padi, aur uski halat dekhkar “chal jaa, jaldi se jaakar paani le aa”


Voh ladki “jii baapu” kehte hue voh ladki vaha se chali gayi


Tabhi voh ladka ek aur baar jor se kahrata hai aur uske baad turant hi voh apne aap piche gir jaata gai, jese kisi tufan ke jaane ke baad jo shanti hoti hai, thik usi tarah voh ladka bhi shant ho chuka tha


Uss ladke ke kahrane ki awaaz itni jyada bhayanak thi ki ganv ke sabhi log chache ke ghar aagaye..yeh gaanv ke saare ghar jopde jese the..matlab ki puri tarah jopde nahi the, kaache pakke ghar jo dikhne me jopde jaise the..sabne aate hi chacha ji sawalo ko bauchar kar di ki yeh awaaz kesi thi


Tabhi voh ladki ek lote me paani bharkar le aayi “yeh lijiye baapu” kehte hue usne voh lota uss chacha ko de diya


Voh chacha paani ke chinte uss ladke ke chehre par maare, lekin kuch nahi hua, toh aaye hue logo mese kisine pucha “kya yeh mar gaya chacha”


Voh chacha ne uss ladke ki nabj dekhi, aur apna sar naa me hilate hue “iii mansukh kaha thehar gaya, subah se gaya hai, abhi tak lauta ni kaa uss sahri babu ko leke”


Tabhi voh mansukh uss kamre aaya “aagaya chacha”


Uske saath ek aur shaks tha jo dikhne se doctor lagta hai, voh aake uss ladke ko check karta hai, aur fir apne kaan se stethoscope nikal kar gale me lagaya aur fir kaha “yeh toh coma me chala gaya hai”



Chacha “iska matbal”



Dr “chacha, yeh ek tarah ki neend hai, jisme insaan kab uthega voh koi nahi bata sakta”


Chacha “are baba, ab kya hoga”




Dr “vaise yeh hai kaun..?? aur kaha se aaya hai”



Mansukh “pata nahi babu, yeh chora chacha ji ko uss jungle ki pass se mila tha, bechare ki halat bahut kharab thi, toh hum ise yaha le aaye, aur chacha ne iski marampatti ki”


Dr firse ek aur baar uss ladke ko dekhta hai, aur luckily unhe uss ladke ki jeans me se uska wallet mila, jo kuch kuch jal chuka tha, dr ne thodi sawdhani se uss ladke ki wallet se uski ID nikali..vese toh id bhi kaafi jal gayi thi..par usme se use kuch dikha “Junior..” iske aage jo likha tha voh jal gaya tha..isliye voh dr bhi kuch naa padh paaya



Mansukh “eee ka hai dr babu”


Dr “yeh iska ID hai, matlab ki yeh ek card hai, jisse iske bare me pata chal sake”




Mansukh “toh ke pata chala kuch..??”



Dr “jyada kuch toh dikh nahi raha, par shayad iska naam Mayank hai..vese toh card jhal chukka hai, par mai koshish karta hu kuch pata chale toh” aur uske baad voh dr vaha se chala jaata hai


Mansukh “chacha ab kaa karenge, yeh choro toh so gaya hai”



Chacha “jab tak yeh jaag nahi jaata, ise yahi rehne do”


Tabhi voh chacha ki ladki “par bapu, yeh uss jungle me kyu gaya hoga, voh bhi itni raat ko”



Chacha “betiya..yeh sehri log hai, tum toh janet hona, uss jungle me toh seher se bahut sare log ghumne ke liye aawaat hai, bas usi me se hoga yeh bhi”



Tabhi koi aur kehta hai “ha chacha, yeh sahi kahat ho aap, raat hone ke baad bhi yeh sehri log yaha se nahi jaate”


Mansukh “par chacha, agar ae baat hai toh, ise dhundne koi kyu nahi aaya”




Chacha “uuuu dhamake se shayad yahi bacha ho”


Mansukh “haa..ieee ho sakat hai, agar koi hoga toh voh yaha ise dhundta hua aahi jayega”



Yeh ganv uss jungle ke pass me bana hua tha, vese toh yeh gaanv bahut hi chota tha, muskil se 10-12 ghar the, aur voh log vahi par sabko jungle ghumate ya chote mote kaam karke apna bharanposhan karte the, aur jaha kudrat itni khubsurat ho, vaha par log ghumne bhi bahut jaate hai


In DELHI


Kruti ko aisa laga ki jese Paridhi chalte hue ruk gayi hai, isliye voh mudkar Paridhi ki aur dekhti hai, toh voh chalkar pari ke pass aayi aur use pucha “ab kya hua tuje”


Pari apni aankho ko michte hue “please please keh de ki mai sapna dekh rahi hu”


Kruti ne dekh liya ki Pari ne aisa kyu kiya, darasal Paridhi ne ek Manthan ko dekh liya tha, jo bachlaer me unhi ke class me tha, aur clg ke pehle din se akhri din tak Manthan aur Pari ka har baat par ladai hoti thi, aur yaha bhi usko dekhkar Pari ka bartav badal gaya


Use dekhkar Kruti jor jor se hasne lagi, aur use iss tarah hasta dekh Pari Kruti ko gusse se apni kohni marti hai “tu has rahi hai” aur voh apna muh fula deti hai


Kruti “hahaha..toh kya karu, tu hi bata, tu Manthan se dar gayi”



Pari ispar aur jyada gussa ho gayi, voh kruti par bhadak te hue “oyyee..sun mai nahi darti use, samji”


Kruti “voh toh dikh raha hai”
aur firse voh hasne lagi


Pari “dekh, mene kaha na mai nahi darti usse, muje laga ki ab isse picha chutega, par muje kya pata tha ki yeh yaha par bhi aa tapkega”



Kruti “ek baat batau, teri kismat hi kharab hai”


Pari “meri nahi uski kismat bol”




Kruti “are yaar tun usse frienship kyu nahi kar leti, yaar tum dono ke jagde suljate suljate mai pak gayi hu”


Pari “usse aur friendship…never”
aur voh aage chal di, jaha par bhid jami hui thi


Uss bhid ke karib jaakar pata chala ki yaha par koi form diya jaa raha hai..jise manually fill karke submit karna hai

Yeh sunkar Kruti “kya bakchodi hai yeh, aaj ke time me bhala kaun haath se form bharta hai”



Pari “hehehe, aisa bolna ki tuje aisi bhid me nahi jana”



Kruti “hihihi, toh fir tu hi le aana baby :kiss:



Pari “ha thik hai thik hai, jaati hu” voh ajib sa muh banate hue uss bhid me ghus gayi

Thodi mehnat ke baad voh akhir counter tak pahuch hi gayi, lekin uski badkismat, akhri form tha..toh jese hi usne apna haath form par rakha, kisi aur ne bhi ussi form ko pakad liya..tabhi unn dono ki hi najar takrayi, aur uske baad dono ek saath bol pade “tttuuuummmmm”


Voh ladka koi aur nahi manthan tha, voh “tu yaha kya kar rahi hai”



Pari “muje tujse koi baat nahi karni, haath hata, yeh form mene liya hai”


Manthan “kya majak hai, chod ise”


Pari “mai kyu chodu, yeh form mene pehle liya hai”




Manthan “dekh aaj pehla din hai, meko gussa mat dila, varna”



Pari “varna kya” kehte hue usne form ko apni aur khicha


Manthan ne bhi form ko apni aur khicha aur isi khicha khichi me voh akhri form bhi fat gaya, jiske baad dono hi ek dusre par aarop lagane lage


Pari gusse “dekha, sab teri vajah se hua”



Manthan “meri ya teri vajah se”



Pari “ha teri vajah se, mene kaha tha ki form chod de, lekin nahi, bhai ko mardangi jo dikhani thi, lekin tu toh chuha hai”



Manthan “dekh, ab tu kuch jyada hi bol rahi hai”


Inn dono ke ladne ki awaaz Kruti sun leti hai, aur voh apne maathe par rakhte hue “ohhh gooddd, yaha par nahi plsz” kehte hue voh pari ke pass pahuch gayi


Lekin shayad usne der kar di thi, tabhi college ke HOD vaha par aagaye, aur inn dono ko aise ladta dekhkar unhe apne cabin me bulwaliya

Inn dono ko aise jagadta dekh HOD ne unhe ek week ke liye restigate kar diya, aur yeh baat yeh dono hi jante the ki rules ke mamle me yeh college bahut hi jyada strict hai


Jab Manthan aur Pari HOD ki cabin se bahar nikle, unn dono ne hi ek dusre ko man me galiya di aur ghurte hue nikal gaye


Pari ka chehra dekhkar Kruti samaj gayi ki andar kuch toh bura hua hai, voh puchti hai “pari..kya hua..??”


Pari “sab uss gawar ki vajah se, use toh mai chodungi nahi”




Kruti “are par yeh toh bata ki hua kya hai..??”

Fir pari use sab kuch bata deti hai, aur saath me manthan ko bahut sari galiya deti hai


Khair kuch der baad jab naye forms aaye, isbar sabne baari baari se form liye aur shanti se fill karke submit kiye, aur next day se college chalu hone vali thi, yaani aajka din sabke ke liye khali tha


Manthan ka din vese bhi aaj kharab raha, toh voh campus se bahar nikalkar sidhe ek shop me gaya aur vaha se advance(cigarette) ka box lekar funkne laga

Aaj manthan ko pari par bahut hi jyada gussa aaraha tha, khair use bhi yahi laga tha ki Pari se uska picha hamesha ke liye chut gaya, lekin unn dono ki kismat hi yaha par khich laayi thi

Khair aaj jo hua uski vajah se Manthan bahut hi jyada gusse me tha, voh karib 2 cigarette funk chukka tha, lekin use khud nahi pata tha ki voh kaha jaa raha hai, voh toh bas apni masti me cigarette funkne me laga tha


Thik usi waqt ek ladki ne Manthan ko cigarette pite hue dekh liya..voh manthan ko gusse se ghur rahi thi, aur tabhi voh apne pair patakte hue Manthan ke pass gayi aur jor se usko khich liya

Iss khichai ki vajah se Manthan gir gaya, aur uske haath me rah cigarette gir gayi, lekin iss khichai se shayad Manthan hakikat me vapis aaya tha, aur voh joro se hanfne laga


Tabhi uss ladki ne gusse se kaha “tu pagal toh nahi ho gaya”


Lekin manthan ne kuch nahi kaha, voh toh bas samne ki aur dekh raha tha, jaha par ek bus ka accident hote hue bacha tha, aur voh driver Manthan ko galiya dete hue chala gaya


toh voh samne vala shaks gusse me ghurte hue “firse……”


To be continued…
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Hello everyone.

We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of XForum


"The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).

Jaisa ki aap sabko maloom hai abhi pichhle hafte hi humne USC ki announcement ki hai or abhi kuch time pehle Rules and Queries thread bhi open kiya hai or Chit Chat thread toh pehle se hi Hindi section mein khula hai.

Well iske baare mein thoda aapko bata dun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kisi bhi prefix ki short story post kar sakte ho, jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words tak ho sakti hai. Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap is contest mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa roop dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko poora XForum dekhega, Ye ek bahot accha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories ke liye kyunki USC ki stories ko poore XForum ke readers read karte hain.. . Isliye hum aapse USC ke liye ek chhoti kahani likhne ka anurodh karte hain.

Aur jo readers likhna nahi chahte woh bhi is contest mein participate kar sakte hain "Best Readers Award" ke liye. Aapko bas karna ye hoga ki contest mein posted stories ko read karke unke upar apne views dene honge.

Winning Writers ko Awards k alawa Cash prizes bhi milenge jinki jaankaari rules thread mein dedi gayi hai, Total 7000 Rupees k prizes iss baar USC k liye diye jaa rahe hain, sahi Suna aapne total 7000 Rupees k cash prizes aap jeet shaktey hain issliye derr matt kijiye or apni kahani likhna suru kijiye.

Entry thread 7th February ko open hoga matlab aap 7 February se story daalna shuru kar sakte hain or woh thread 28th February tak open rahega is dauraan aap apni story post kar shakte hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna shuru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega.

Aur haan! Kahani ko sirf ek hi post mein post kiya jaana chahiye. Kyunki ye ek short story contest hai jiska matlab hai ki hum kewal chhoti kahaniyon ki ummeed kar rahe hain. Isliye apni kahani ko kayi post / bhaagon mein post karne ki anumati nahi hai. Agar koi bhi issue ho toh aap kisi bhi staff member ko Message kar sakte hain.


Rules Check karne ke liye is thread ka use karein — Rules & Queries Thread

Contest ke regarding Chit Chat karne ke liye is thread ka use karein — Chit Chat Thread



Prizes
Position Benifits
Winner 3000 Rupees + Award + 5000 Likes + 30 days sticky Thread (Stories)
1st Runner-Up 1500 Rupees + Award + 3000 Likes + 15 day Sticky thread (Stories)
2nd Runner-UP 1000 Rupees + 2000 Likes + 7 Days Sticky Thread (Stories)
3rd Runner-UP 750 Rupees + 1000 Likes
Best Supporting Reader 750 Rupees Award + 1000 Likes
Members reporting CnP Stories with Valid Proof 200 Likes for each report



Regards :- XForum Staff


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Hello everyone.

We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of XForum


"The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).


"Chance to win cash prize up to Rs 8000"
Jaisa ki aap sabko maloom hai abhi pichhle hafte hi humne USC ki announcement ki hai or abhi kuch time pehle Rules and Queries thread bhi open kiya hai or Chit Chat thread toh pehle se hi Hindi section mein khula hai.

Well iske baare mein thoda aapko bata dun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kisi bhi prefix ki short story post kar sakte ho, jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words ke bich honi chahiye (Story ke words count karne ke liye is tool ka use kare — Characters Tool) . Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap is contest mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa roop dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko poora XForum dekhega, Ye ek bahot accha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories ke liye kyunki USC ki stories ko poore XForum ke readers read karte hain.. Aap XForum ke sarvashreshth lekhakon mein se ek hain. aur aapki kahani bhi bahut acchi chal rahi hai. Isliye hum aapse USC ke liye ek chhoti kahani likhne ka anurodh karte hain. hum jaante hain ki aapke paas samay ki kami hai lekin iske bawajood hum ye bhi jaante hain ki aapke liye kuch bhi asambhav nahi hai.

Aur jo readers likhna nahi chahte woh bhi is contest mein participate kar sakte hain "Best Readers Award" ke liye. Aapko bas karna ye hoga ki contest mein posted stories ko read karke unke upar apne views dene honge.

Winning Writer's ko well deserved Cash Awards milenge, uske alawa aapko apna thread apne section mein sticky karne ka mouka bhi milega taaki aapka thread top par rahe uss dauraan. Isliye aapsab ke liye ye ek behtareen mouka hai XForum ke sabhi readers ke upar apni chhaap chhodne ka or apni reach badhaane kaa.. Ye aap sabhi ke liye ek bahut hi sunehra avsar hai apni kalpanao ko shabdon ka raasta dikha ke yahan pesh karne ka. Isliye aage badhe aur apni kalpanao ko shabdon mein likhkar duniya ko dikha de.

Entry thread 15th February ko open ho chuka matlab aap apni story daalna shuru kar sakte hain or woh thread 5th March 2024 tak open rahega is dauraan aap apni story post kar sakte hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna shuru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega.

Aur haan! Kahani ko sirf ek hi post mein post kiya jaana chahiye. Kyunki ye ek short story contest hai jiska matlab hai ki hum kewal chhoti kahaniyon ki ummeed kar rahe hain. Isliye apni kahani ko kayi post / bhaagon mein post karne ki anumati nahi hai. Agar koi bhi issue ho toh aap kisi bhi staff member ko Message kar sakte hain.



Story se related koi doubt hai to iske liye is thread ka use kare — Chit Chat Thread

Kisi bhi story par apna review post karne ke liye is thread ka use kare — Review Thread

Rules check karne ke liye is thread ko dekho — Rules & Queries Thread

Apni story post karne ke liye is thread ka use kare — Entry Thread

Prizes
Position Benifits
Winner 4000 Rupees + Award + 5000 Likes + 30 days sticky Thread (Stories)
1st Runner-Up 1500 Rupees + Award + 3500 Likes + 15 day Sticky thread (Stories)
2nd Runner-UP 1000 Rupees + 2000 Likes + 7 Days Sticky Thread (Stories)
3rd Runner-UP 750 Rupees + 1000 Likes
Best Supporting Reader 750 Rupees + Award + 1000 Likes
Members reporting CnP Stories with Valid Proof 200 Likes for each report



Regards :- XForum Staff
 
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