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Milan2010

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Kehte hai ki hum insaano ko neend ki shakht jarurat hoti hai, aur isliye bhagwan ne raat banayi hai, jisme har insaan din ki saari thakawat so kar nikalta hai, lekin insaan ka dimag raat me bhi kaam karna band nahi karta

Haa..dimag, yeh hamare liye ek bahut hi ehem hissa hai, akhsar raat me sapne ya yu kahe dreams hume aate hai, har koi raat ko sapne dekhta hai, par kya raat ko sapne aana sahi hai..??


“Dream” yeh ek aisa shabd hai jo har insaan ki zindagi se juda hai, dreams bhi kahi tarah ke hote hai, jese ki kisi ko amir banna hai, ya kisi ko gf/bf chahiye, acha ghar chahiye, adi adi, aur bhi kahi sare dreams hote hai, jise pura karne ke liye hum apni puri jaan laga dete hai


Lekin inn sapno ke alawa bhi kayi aur sapne hote hai, jise hum sirf soch sakte hai, mehsus kar sakte hai…lekin use pura karne ke liye hum kuch nahi kar sakte

Yeh sapne hum akshar raat ko sote waqt dekhte hai, par kya inn sapno ka koi arth bhi hota hai..?? ya sirf voh ek bhram(illusion) hai, jo hum dekhte hai, kabhi kabhi koi sapna sach ho jata hai, ya fir hume ehsas hota hai ki aisa kuch hamare saath pehle ho chukka hai, ya fir kabhi kabar sapne me jo dikhayi deta hai voh asal zindagi me hamare saath ho jata hai

Aaj tak hum yeh samaj nahi paaye ki hume raat ko sapne kyu aate hai, kabhi kabhi toh hume kuch esi chize dikhayi deti hai, jo humne naa toh kabhi dekhi hai, aur naa hi aisa iss bhramand me hone ka astitva hota hai, toh fir hume aise chize dikhayi kyu deti hai..??


Khair agar sapno ke upar mai likhne baitha toh bahut kuch likh dunga, so dekhte hai ki iss story me kya hota hai, kudrat, sapne, jahan, duniya, bahut kuch hai jiske baare me insaan kuch nahi janta, ya fir jaan nahi paaya


Yeh kahani bhi kuch esi hi hai, kahani ki shuruwat bhi ek sapne se hi hoti hai


Time karib subah ke 6 baj rahe honge, aur jagah thi India ki sabse crowded city Delhi ki, jaha par logo ki chahal pahal 24 hours chalti hai


Ek 21-22 saal ki ladki teji se daud rahi thi, uski tej chalti sanso se saaf pata chal raha tha ki voh kaafi der se daud rahi hai

voh daudte hue ek jagah jaakar ruk jaati hai, aur joro se haanfne lagi, apne haatho ko apni chati par rakhkar ukhdi hui sanso ko sambhalne lagi


khud ko sambhalne ke baad voh samne rahe park ke board ko dekhti hai, jispar likha tha LAW Garden, naam dekhkar uske chehre par ek muskaan aajati hai, aur voh uss garden me chali jaati hai

gate ke andar jaate hi left side par bacho ke khelne ke liye kuch rides banayi hui thi, jaha par bache masti karte hue khel rahe the, aur unhe dekhkar unke parents bahut khus the


khair voh ladki yeh sab kuch najar andaaz karte hue uss garden me andar chale jaa rahi thi, aur thodi der chalne ke baad voh ek jagah ruk jaati hai, voh ek ped ki niche khade ladke ko dekh rahi thi, jo ped ki aad liye khada tha aur kisi ka intezaar kar raha tha


khair usne apna chehra niche kiya hua tha jis vajah se use pata hi nahi chala ki voh jiska intezaar kar raha hai voh aa chuki hai

ladki use dekhkar bahut khush ho jati hai, uske dil ki dhadkan badh jaati hai, voh chote chote kadamo se uss ladke ki aur badh rahi thi, aur jese hi voh uss ladke ke pass pahuchi, uss ladke ne apna chehra upar kiya

voh iss ladki ko bahut hi gusse se ghur raha tha, aur ise dekhkar turant kahta hai “ab kyu aayi hai yaha..?? tuje jo karna tha voh tu kar chuki”


Voh ladki “please, aisa mat bol, ek baar meri baat toh sun..”


Voh ladka ladki ki baat ko bich me hi kaatkar kahta hai “nahi mai kuch nahi sunna chahta, tu hamesa late karti hai”


Voh lakdi bahut hi masumiyat se apne kaan pakadti hai, aur ek pyaari si smile karte hue “I am solly naa” yeh dekhkar voh ladka khud ko rok nahi paaya, aur voh turant uss ladki ko apne gale laga deta hai


Voh ladki bhi uss ladke ki baanho me simat ti chali jaati hai, aur use kaske hug karti hai, fir voh ladka kehta hai “tu janti hai, mai tujse kabhi bhi jyada der tak gussa nahi reh sakta”


Voh ladki kuch kehna chahti hai, par pata nahi kyu, par uske saath kuch ajib sa hua, sab kuch jese gayab ho gaya, aur use kuch sunai dene laga “princess utho jao beti, bahut der ho gayi” kehte hue ek 45-50 saal ki aurat apni beti ko uthati hai, aur voh ladki apni aankhe kholkar turant uth jaati hai


Mom “toh aaj meri princess inti khush kyu hai..??”


Voh ladki muskurate hue “kuch nahi mumma, bas ese hi”


Mom “acha..toh ab aap mujse baat chupaogi haaahhh, kahi kal college me koi propose toh nahi karne vala”



Voh ladki sharma kar apne Mom ke gale lagti hai, aur kehti hai “nahi mumma, aaj tak aisa koi ladka nahi mila, aur vese bhi mai aapko chodkar kahi nahi jaane vali”


Mom “acha acha baba, chalo jaldi se fresh hokar niche aajao”
aur fir voh vaha se chali jaati hai


Fir voh ladki angdayi lete hue khadi hui, aur voh fresh hone chali jaati hai, lekin uske chehre par abhi bhi vohi smile thi, jo uske sapne me thi..ya yu kahe ki sote hue jab uski mom ne dekhi thi


Voh towel lapate hue bathroom se bahar aati hai, aur har ladki ke jese almari ke aage khadi ho jati hai, aur apne lips par haath rakhte hue sochti hai ki aaj konse kapde pehnu


Voh sochti hai “iss duniya me kapde chunna bahut hi muskil hai, ohhh gooddd please help me, kya pehnu aaj”


Fir voh sochti hai “aaj na mai papa se kahungi ki muje naye kapde chahiye” fir voh ek light pink top aur white jeans select karti hai

Ab uski almari me around 25-30 alag alag kapde rakhe hue the, ya shayad use bhi jyada, aur fir unhe pehenkar ready ho gayi



Ready hone ke baad, jese hi voh niche jaane ko hui, use kuch yaad aaya, aur voh khud se hi ek sawal karti hai “aaj achanak se aisa sapna..kuch nahi samaj nahi aaya, par tha bahut hi pyaara, pata nahi voh kaun tha, uska chehra dekh hi nahi paayi..bas ek ehsas jarur hua, kahi aisa toh nahi haina ki sach me koi muje propose karega” fir voh iska jawab khud hi deti hai “nahi nahi, aisa thodi na hota hai, vese bhi yeh ek sapna hi toh tha, aur aaj ke time me aisa toh koi nahi karta, sab timepass karte hai”



Yahi sab sochte hue voh apne room se bahar aayi aur aakar niche hall me rahe dinning table ke pass aagayi, jaha par uski puri family baithi hui thi, aur uska wait kar rahe the


Ladki “good morning Dad”


Ladki ke papa “good morning princess”


Tabhi uska chota bhai jo vaha pass me baitha hua bread kha raha tha voh kehta hai “aagayi maharani ji aap, mumma aap toh kabhi ise kuch kehti hi nahi ho, hamesa muje hi dant ti rahti ho, agar mai 1 second bhi late ho jau toh pura ghar sir par utha leti ho, lagta hai aap mujse jyada didi se pyaar karti ho”


Mummy “chup kar, pagal kahi ka, kuch bhi mat bol”


Dad “hahahaha, bas bas, aur sun champ, hum dono hi tum dono se bahut pyaar karte hai”


Ladka “par papa, aaj toh Sunday hai, aaj bhi sone nahi diya muje, dekho na kitna jaldi utha diya”



Ladki “ek din jaldi uth gaya toh usme koi gunah nahi hai”
fir voh apne papa se kahti hai “papa, muje shopping karni hai, please na plsz plsz plsz, muje naye kapde chahiye, mai vaha kya lekar jaungi”



Dad “thik hai princess, hum sham ko aate waqt le aayenge”



Ladki apne dad ko gale lagate hue “thanks Dad, aap bahut ache hai”


Dad haste hue “bas bas, chal ab jaldi se breakfast karle, hume der ho rahi hai”


Tabhi ladki ka bhai kehta hai “ha didi, khalo, vese bhi aaj aapka ghar me akhri din hai, kalse toh aap hostel me jaa rahi ho”


Ladki apna muh rone jaisa banati hai, aur yeh dekhkar uski mummy uss ladke ko halka sa chapat marti hai aur “pagal, aisa nahi bolte, agar voh chali gayi fir tu ladega kiske saath”


Ladka “acha haina, fir aram se pure din masti karunga, aur vese bhi muje apni chize share nahi karni padegi”
kehte hue voh apni pocket se ek chocolate nikalta hai, aur use apni didi ko dikhate hue kha jata hai


Yeh dekhkar voh ladki turant khadi ho jati hai “oyee rukk, tune meri choclate kyu li, hamesa khud ki choclates kha jata hai aur fir meri bhi, ruk abhi batati hu” kehte hue voh apne bhai ko marne daudti hai, aur voh ladka apni seat se uthkar bhagne lagta hai


Ladki chillate hue apne bhai ke piche bhag rahi thi “ruk ja aarav, please meri chocolate de, varna”


Aarav “varna kya di”
voh chocolate ka ek bite leta hua sofe ke aage aagaya


Voh ladki apne haath marte hue apni chocolate lene ki koshish kar rahi thi, “varna bahut marungi tuje”


Aarav “acha aisa hai, fir toh thik hai” aur voh kehte hue puri chocolate kha jata hai


Use dekhkar voh ladki turant apne bhai ke pass aati hai aur use mukke marne lagti hai, jiska Aarav par koi asar nahi ho raha tha


Tabhi unki mummy kehti hai “Aarav, Paridhi beta ruk jao, ladna band karo”



Pari “mummy, dekha na aapne, isne meri puri chocolate kha li”



Mummy “koi baat nahi, tera bhai hi toh hai”



Pari “par mummy, yeh hamesa meri chocolates kha jaata hai”




Mummy haste hue use ek chocolate deti hai, use dekhkar Pari ke chehre par bahut badi muskaan aajati hai, aur voh jat se chocolate lekar khane lagti hai, aur apne bhai ki aur dikhate hue chidati hai

Yeh dekhkar unn dono ke mom dad ke chehre par hasi aajati hai


Pari ki mom, uske chehre par pyaar se firate hue “kabtak bachi rahegi tu, ab toh badi ho ja, kalse teri ek nayi life shuru hone vali hai, ek dum choti bachi hai”


Pari thodi si ruansi hote hue “kya mumma, aap bhi, aap ko toh pata hai, chocolates meri fav hai, iske bina toh mai nahi reh sakti” aur fir voh apne mummy ke gale lag jaati hai aur “muje nahi banna bada vada, chota hi rehna hai, taaki aapke pass reh saku”


Mummy “aisa nahi hota betu, har insaan ek na ek din bada hota hi hai”


Aarav “didi, aapko chota banna haina, toh aap chuha I mean chuhiya ya fir chiinti kyu nahi ban jaati, voh toh sabse choti hoti hai”



Aarav “are didi, mai ek baat toh bhul hi gaya”



Pari “kya..??”



Aarav “voh aapke daant sad gaye hai, check up karwa lena, varna nayi clg me sabko aapko sadau kehkar bulayenge”




Pari yeh sunkar thoda gussa hoti hai aur “kya kaha tune, ruk abhi batati hu tuje”


Tabhi dad “bas bas, baad me dikha dena, abhi chalo, late ho rahe hai”


Fir voh sab ghumne nikal jaate hai, pure din ghumne ke baad, sham ke waqt voh sab mall me jaate hai, jaha par Pari apne liye shopping karti hai

Karib 3 hours ki shopping ke baad, yeh family raat ko bahar se hi dinner karti hai, aur raat ke karib 11 baje aone ghar vapis aajati hai

Ghar aane ke baad Aarav siddha main hall me rakhe sofe par ulta lait jata hai, aur baaki sab dusre sofe me adjust ho jaate hai


Thodi der rest karne ke baad, Mom “chalo tum dono, apne apne kamre me jao, subah jaldi bhi toh uthna hai”


Paridhi aur Aarav “yes mom” fir voh dono goodnight wish karte hai, aur fir apne apne room me chale jaate hai


Unke jaate hi Pari ki mom vahi sofe par baith jaati hai, voh thodi dukhi lag rahi thi, toh pari ke dad unke pass jaate hai, aur kandhe par haath rakhte hue “kya hua..?? aaj hamari madam itni dukhi kyu hai..??”



Mom “kal se yeh ghar kitna suna suna ho jayega, matlab ki Pari ke jaate hi”



Dad “ha voh toh hai, par aaj ke generation me bache apni manjil khud tay karte hai, aur hume toh garv hona chahiye ki hamari beti bhi vohi karne vaali hai, agar hum ese dukhi rahenge toh use kitna bura lagega”


Mom “haa, aap bilkul sahi keh rahe hai”
fir yeh dono bhi apne room me chale jaate hai


Upar Paridhi, apne room me baithe hue apna saman dekh rahi thi, packing toh usne kar li thi, par aaj ke shopping ke baad voh bahut hi khus thi, kyunki aaj usne bahut saari shopping ki thi

Use toh pata hi nahi tha ki kab Aarav uske pass aake khada ho gaya, voh bas apne kapde dekhne me busy thi, Tabhi use ehsas hua ki vaha par koi khada hai, usne dekha toh paya ki vahi par Aarav khada hai


Paridhi “kya hai..?? soja jakar, dekh abhi koi shararat nahi”



Aarav ek dum masumiyat se kahta hai “di, mai koi shararat nahi kar raha, mai aapke pass hi aaya tha”


Aarav ke iss tarah kehne se Paridhi ne uski aur dekha toh paya I aarav ka chehra murajaya hua hai, voh turant khadi hoke Aarav ke pass jaati hai aur pyaar se puchti hai “kya hua bhai..?? tu itna udas kyu hai”


Aarav kuch nahi bolta, sidhe Paridhi ke gale lag jaata hai, aur rone lagta hai

Aarav ke iss tarah karne par Paridhi ka dil dukhne lagta hai, kyunki usne aajse pehle kabhi bhi aarav ko esa karte nahi dekha tha, voh pyaar se apne bhai ke sar par haath firati hai aur kahti hai “kya hua betu, ese kyu ro raha hai tu..?? mumma ne kuch kaha kya”


Aarav vese hi apni didi ke gale lage hue apne sar ko naa mein hilata hai, aur ruanse gale se kahta hai “nahi di, aap mat jao na, please ruk jao, I promise mai aapko kabhi tang nahi karunga, kabhi sharart nahi karunga, aapki chocalates bhi nahi khaunga, par please aap mat jao, muje bilkul bhi acha nahi lagega aapke bina”


Yeh sunkar toh Paridhi ki bhi aankhe gili ho jati hai, voh chahe kitna bhi jagde Aarav se, par uske bina voh bhi nahi reh sakti thi

Paridhi pyaar se aarav ke aansuo ko hatate hue kahti hai “ssssshhhhhhh chup ho ja, tu toh mera strong bhai haina, aur mai kaha jaa rahi hu, bas 2 years hi toh hai, jese hi masters khatam hoga, mai vapis aajaungi, aur chuttiyon me toh mai ghar aaungi hi na, chal ab jaldi se chup hoja” Aur voh aarav ke aankho se aaye hue aansuo ko hata deta hai


Aarav fir apni jeb se ek chococalte nikal ta hai, aur fir voh Paridhi ko deta hai, Pari ne dekha ki Aarav ne apni sabse fav chocalte use di hai, toh voh firse aarav ko apne gale lagati hai, aur pyaar se uske gaal par kiss karti hai, jisse aarav thoda chidkar “kya didi aap bhi, mera pura gaal gila kar diya”


Paridhi chocolate ko side me rakhte hue Aarav ko gudgudi karne lagti hai, aur fir voh dono hi pillow fight karte hai, aur tarah tarah ki masti puri raat karte hai, aur vese hi masti karte karte voh dono kab so jaate hai, unhe pata bhi nahi chalta



Vahi kahi dur, ek sumsan sa jungle, jaha par bahut hi jyada sannata tha, ek aisa sannata ki jaha par kisi bhi insaan ka dil kaanpne lage, aur upar se thand ke mausam ki vajah se kohra jama hua tha

Raat apne puri josh me thi, uss jagah par chand ki roshni ek matra thi, aur usi me 60-65 saal ka Buddha admi lathi ke sahare chal raha tha..uske chalne ki vajah se uske pairo ki awaaz uss jungle ki shanti ko bhang kar rahi thi..ki tabhi..tabhi kuch hua vaha par, kuch aisa jo shayad aajtak kabhi nahi hua tha


To be continued….
 
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Milan2010

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Update : 2 (College ka Pehla Din)


Vaise toh hamari zindagi me sabse hasin pal toh tab hota hai jab hum so rahe hote hai, ya yu kahu ki raat ka samay, aur jyadatar log raat ke waqt ghar par hote hai


Kudrat ne ek khubsurat duniya banayi hai, aur usi duniya ke do waqt, ek toh hai din, aur dusra hai raat, jyadatar toh din me log busy rehte hai, aur shayad isiliye raat ko har jagah shanti chayi hui hoti hai

Iss shanti ne hamare man ko bhi bahut aram milta hai, aur raat ke waqt duniya khubsurat lagne lagti hai aur usme chand ki roshni uss khubsurati me char chand laga deti hai

Raat ko pyaar ka waqt bhi kaha jaata hai, yani ki har premiyo ko joda ek dusre ki baaho me khoya hota hai, lekin kehte haina ki jab chiz jitni jyada shant hoti hai, voh andar hi andar itni hi khatarnak bhi hoti hai, matlab ki yeh rate jinti shant hoti hai, apne andar bahut si baate chupayi rehti hai


Aaj ki raat bhi shayad aisa hi kuch hone vala tha, jo iss manav duniya ka hila dega..kuch esi ghatnaye ghatne vali thi..ya fir yu kahu ki manav ki soch ko badal dega


Raat apne puri josh me thi, uss jagah par chand ki roshni ek matra thi, aur usi me 60-65 saal ka Buddha admi lathi ke sahare chal raha tha..uske chalne ki vajah se uske pairo ki awaaz uss jungle ki shanti ko bhang kar rahi thi

Kehte hai ki raat ko hume dar uss waqt lagta hai jab humara dil pehle se dara hua ho, par inn chacha ji ke saath kuch alag tha

Haroj isi waqt voh yaha se gujarte the, par aaj unka dil me dar sat ha, iski vajah voh khud nahi jante the

Voh apne aap se “aaj ki yeh shanti badi hi ajib hai, aisa lag raha hai mano ki koi bahut bada tufaan aane vala hai, madad karna bhagwan, insaano ki madad karna”


Kabhi kabhi hume bhavishya me hone vali ghatividhiyon ka pehle se abhas ho jata hai, jese ki inn chacha ji ke saath hua, unhe lagne laga tha jese ki kuch bahut bura hone vala hai, shayad voh thodi thodi der me apne piche dekhte hai, aur aisa karte hue voh apne ghar ki aur badh rahe the, jo issi jungle ke bich me basa hua ek bahut hi chota sa ganv tha..lekin chalte hue achanak se unke pair vahi par ruk gaye, aur aankhe khuli khuli reh gayi


Jab voh khud se baat karte hue chal raha the, uss waqt unhone ek awaaz suni, voh awaaz bhi kaafi bhayanak thi, yeh sunte hi unke haath me rahi laathi gir gayi, aur voh turant hi uss taraf dekhne lage jaha se unhe yeh awaaz sunai di thi, uss aur ka najara dekh kar unki aankhe apne aap hi badi ho gayi aur voh ek tak samne ki aur dekhne lage


Thodi hi dur par ek dhamaka hua tha aur usi dhamake ki vajah se vaha par aag lag gayi thi, par chacha ji ko nahi pata tha ki yeh dhamaka kese hua, voh turant apni laathi uthate hai aur uss aur jaane lage

Vese toh voh jagah jyada dur nahi thi, isliye voh kuch hi der me uss aag vaali jagah ke najdik pahuch gaye, jaha par unhone dekha ki jungle ke andar ke hisse me aag lagne ki vajah se kaafi saare paid jal kar rakh ho chuke the, aur iss aag ki vajah se janwar ne afra tafri macha rakhi thi


Voh abhi uss aur dekh hi rahi the, ki unhone ke awaaz suni..voh awaaz sunti hi unhone apni dahini aur dekha, jaha par ek 22-23 saal ka ladka langdate hue chal raha tha, uski halat bahut hi jyada kharab ho chuki thi, jab uss chacha ne uske najdik jaakar dekha toh unhone paaya ki jaha se voh chalta hua aa raha hai uss jagah uske khoon gira hua hai, jo sidhe uss jagah jaa raha tha jaha par aag lagi thi


Achanak se voh ladka ladkhadte hue vahi gir gaya, toh voh chacha turant uss ladke ke pass gaye aur jaake usko sambhala

Lekin uss ladke ka chehra dekhkar toh unki aankhe ek pal ke liye band ho gayi, kyunki uss ladke ki chehra par har taraf khuun laga hua tha, uske kapde bhi adhe fate hue the, ya yu kahu ki uss aag ki vajah se jal chuke the


Tabhi voh ladka kuch badbadata hai, lekin uski awaaz bahut hi dhimi thi, jis vajah se voh chacha ko samaj nahi aa raha tha ki voh kya keh raha hai


Voh ladka haklate hue “pppp….pp…lll…zzz ss..ssss..aaa..vv…..eeeee hhhhhe……e.eeee……rrrrr, ppp…..lllll…..zzzzz”


Lekin voh chahca kuch bhi samaj nahi paa rahe the, aur waqt ke saath uss ladke ki saanse fulti jaa rahi thi, aur achanak se voh vahi par gir gaya

Tabhi vaha par daudte hue kuch log aagaye, jo shayad usi gaanv se the jaha par yeh chacha rahte the, voh sab iss aag ko dekhkar chaunk gaye the, kyunki unhe pata tha ki jungle me achanak se aag nahi lagti, matlab kuch toh gadbad hui hai


Unn ganv vasiyo mese ek shaks chacha ke pass aaya aur kahta hai “chacha, aap yaha kya kare rahe hai..?? aur aur yeh chora kaun hai..??”


Voh chacha uss shaks ki aur dekhte hue kahta hai “pata nahi manshukh, yeh uss jungle ki aur se yaha aaya hai”



Mansukh “kyyaaaa..?? lekin chacha ji voh toh…”


Masukh ki baat ko voh chacha kaat te hue “muje malum hai, lekin iss chore ki halat bahut najuk hai, ise mere ghar le aao, fauran” kehte hue chacha ji khade hue aur voh vaha se apne ghar ki aur chal diye


Fir mansukh ne uss ladke ko apne kandhe par uthaya aur voh bhi unke piche chalne laga, aur baaki ke gaanv vale uss aag ko shant karne me jut gaye



Next Day

“noooooooooo….please leave me, please, dekh yeh tu sahi nahi kar raha, mai tujse keh rahi hu, please rukja”


Kehte hue ek ladki aage aage daud rahi thi, aur uske piche ek ladka haath me tomato ketchup ki bottle liye hue daud raha tha

Voh ladka teji se daudte hue uss ladki ko pakad leta hai aur fir voh sara ketchup uss ke baalo me gira deta hai, aur fir voh jor jor se hasne laga


Yeh dekhkar voh ladki rone jesa muh banate hue apne baalo ko pakadti hai, aur voh uss ladke ko dikhate hue “huh, tu nahi mana na, mere sare baal bigad diye”


Tabhi voh ladka kuch kehta uske pehle hi uss ladki ke upar se thanda paani gira, aur iske saath hi Pari joro se saans lete hue uth gayi, aur jor se haafne lagi

Voh aapni saanso ko sambhalte hue apne haath apne chest par rakhti hai, aur dusre haath se chehre par aaye hue baalo ko side karti hai, aur tabhi use kisi ki hasne ki awaaz sunayi di

Awaaz sunte hi use der nahi lagi ki yeh koi aur nahi balki Aarav hai, voh jaldi se apne chehre se paani hatati hai aur aarav ki aur gusse se dekhne lagi


Lekin aarav toh bas jor se hase jaa raha tha “kya didu, aap bhi had karti ho, kabse utha raha tha”


Pari gusse “iss tarah koi uthata hai bhala”


Aarav “haa….badi didi ko ese hi uthate hai”


Pari “kya kaha tune, ruk abhi batati hu” aur voh aarav ko pakadne ke liye uske piche bhaagi, par aarav daudte hue bathroom me ghus gaya aur pari bahar se chillate hue “aarav bahar aa, mai kehti hu abhi bahar aa”


Aarav “sorry di, mai nahi aata” aur pari bahar se hi chillane lagti hai


Pari ki iss tarah chillane ki awaaz sunkar uski mom vaha jaati hai, aur fir voh pari se puchti hai “kya hua, subah subah kyu chilla rahi hai itna”


Pari thand ki vajah se kaanp rahi thi, voh kanpte hue kahti hai “dekho na mumma, iss pagal ne kya kiya, koi subah subah iss tarah se uthata hai, voh bhi sardi me thande paani se” aur voh thar thar kanpne lagi


Mom “tum dono bhi na, jaa ab jaldi se jaake fresh hoja”



Pari “kya mumma, ab dekho na mere baalo me firse shampoo karna padega”


Aarav andar se “kya shampoo, matlab ki aaj firse bottle khali hogi, aur har baar ki tarah muje laani hogi”


Pari gusse se “haaaa, ab bahar nikal jaldi se”


Aarav bahar aata hai, aur apni di ki pith par halke se pinch karte hue bahar chala jata hai, ise dekhkar Pari kehti hai “oooouuuuccccchhhhh, pagal, gadha kahi ka”


Uske baad pari jaldi se bathroom me chali jaati hai, voh nahte hue apne man me sochti hai “aaj firse yeh sapna, ohh god, pata nahi aajkal ese sapne kyu aate hai, vese toh yeh sapne unko aate hai jinke bf hote hai, par mera toh koi bf nahi hai, kya pata iss nayi clg me koi mil jaye” yeh sochkar hi voh sharmane lagi thi


Yahi sab sochte hue voh fresh hokar bahar aagayi, aur firse sochne lagi “mai bhi na kitni pagal hu, yeh toh voh Kruti ki vajah se hai, haa voh haroj apne bf ki baate karti hai isliye aise sapne aa rahe hai”



Tabhi uske bhai ki awaaz firse sunayi di jo pari ke room ke bahar khada tha “didi, jaldi karo, late ho jaogi..kitna nahogi ab, lagta hai aaj muje bina nahe hi school jana padega”


Pari apne room se hi awaaz deti hai “ha bas, aa rahi hu, tu jaa” fir voh apne bed ke pass aayi jaha par uska phone rakha hua tha


Vaise toh madam notifications check karne vali thi, par mobile par time dekhkar voh khudse hi bol padi “kyaaaa..?? ek ghanta, itni jyada der lag gayi” kehte hue usne phone ko vahi rakh diya aur apni almari kholi


Aur aaj firse almari ke samne khadi hokar sar khujalane lagi “ab aaj kya pehnu, yeh vali, nahi yeh toh maine last week hi pehni thi, ye vali..nahi yeh colour pasand nahi hai, mumma koh keh dungi yeh kisiko de de” voh karib 3-4 dress select karti hai aur fir “kal layi voh vali dress pehen leti hu” fir thoda rukkar “nahi nahi, voh nayi dress me clg ke pehle din pehnungi, vese bhi aaj sirf registration hi toh karna hai” Aur voh ek blue colour ki one piece select karti hai


Lekin Pari ne yaha bhi 20 min nikal diye, aur voh bhi sirf kapde select karne me, aur uske baad aur 20 minutes ready hone me



Yaar had hai, sirf itna likhne me mere haath dard karne lage, pata nahi yeh ladkiya itna time kyu lagati hai, plsz itna time mat lagao yaar..Request hai


Uske baad Pari niche aayi, aur sabke saath breakfast kiya aur fir voh vaha se college ke liye nikal padi

Vaise toh college bhi Delhi me hi thi, par voh college kaafi famous thi, aur uss college ka ek rule tha, jisme har student ko compulsory hostel me rehna tha, Bas yahi vajah thi ki Pari ko bhi hostel jana pad raha tha


Pari ki ek achi friend thi KRUTI, jo karib 20 minute se Pari ka Metro station par intezaar kar rahi thi, pari ko aate dekh Kruti uspar chillati hai

Kruti “kya yaar, kitna late karti hai, itna wait toh mai Rahul ko bhi nahi karwati”



Pari “sorry sorry, chal ab jaldi se”

Uske baad dono ladkiya ek saath college ke liye nikalti hai


Kruti : 22-23 years ki modern ladki thi, dekhne me ekdum sexy aur pari ke jesi hi khubsurat, Pari aur Kruti bachpan se hi achi dost thi, aur yahi vajah thi ki inn dono ne ek hi college me admission liya, vaise toh Kruti ka ek bf hai Rahul, jo dusre city se masters degree karne vala hai


Ab aisa toh ho nahi sakta ki do ladkiya jab ek saath ho aur chup rahe, yaha bhi yahi hua, lag gayi dono baato me, aur baate bhi kya, do hi topics hote hai, ek toh bf aur dursa fashion, pata nahi kya kya baate kar rahi thi

Yaar reham karo, muskil se upar vala scene likha hai, mere me itni himmat nahi hai ki innki baato ko sun pau, aur agar sun bhi lu toh yaha likh paane ki himmat nahi hai mujme, muje masum ladke par raham karo yaar, aur khud hi soch lo ki yeh dono kya baate kar rahi hogi :D


Khair inki baate toh khatam nahi honi thi, par metro toh khatam honi hi thi, matlab ki metro ka last stop aagaya

Metro station se nikal kar inhone ek taxi li, aur taxi se voh dono college pahuch gayi, jisme unhe karib 35 minutes lage


College ke gate ke andar enter hote hi Paridhi ne Kruti se pucha “yaar tuje pata hai ki ab hume kaha jana hai”


Kruti “nahi yaar, chal na administrative me jaakar puchte hai”, fir yeh dono college ki admin office ki aur chal padi, aur raste me Paridhi ki najar kisi par padi, use dekhkar Pari vahi par ruk jaati hai


Pari ki iss tarah se rukne par Kruti usko sawaliya najro se dekhne lagi, aur voh pari se puchti hai “aaj kya bhul gayi tu..?? plsz aaj mat kehna ki abhi tuje ghar jana hai”


Pari “please keh de ki yeh sapna hai, plsz plsz” Voh apne aankhe joro se bandh karte hue kahti hai


Pari ki iss tarah kehne par Kruti uss ki aur dekhti hai, aur fir Pari ki najro ka picha karte hue usne uss shaks ko dekha jise dekhkar Paridhi ka behaviour change ho gaya


To be continued…
 

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“aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh” kahrate hue voh ladka bistar se khada hokar baith gaya, uske sar par patti bandhi hui thi, aur thik aisa hi haal uske baaki sharir ke hisso par tha


Haath, pair aur kamar par bhi kapdo ki patti bandhi hui thi, jisse saaf pata chal raha tha ki uska ilaj kisi vaidh ne kiya hai, matlab ki ganv me hua hai

Kal raat jo khun uske sharir par laga tha, voh sab uss budhe chacha ne saaf kar diya tha, uski halat bahut hi jyada kharab thi, kyunki sharir ke har hisse me chot lagi hui thi..aur aaj uska chehra dekhkar lag raha tha ki voh ek 22-23 saal ka jawan ladka hai


Iss ladke ki kahrane ki awaaz sunkar ek 21 saal ki ladki uske jopde me aaye, vaise toh iss ladki ne ek sadharan se kapde hi pehne hue the, dikhne me bhi thik hi thi, par fir bhi uska chehra khubsurat tha, usne dekha ki uske baapu jis ladke ko lekar aaye hai voh jag chuka hai..voh turant chillati hai “baapuuu, jaldi aayie” aur tabhi uski najar uss ladke par padi


Voh ladka apne sar par ek haath rakhe hue baitha tha, aur apni aankho ko khol bandh kar raha tha, tabhi usne apna dusra haath bhi apne sar par rakh diya aur jor se dabate hue usne apne sar ko upar niche karne laga, yaha tak ki usne apni aankho ko bhi joro se band kiya hua tha

Darsal uske sar me bahut hi tej dard ho raha tha, aur saath me uske dimag ek scene bar bar aa raha tha, thoda dhundhala sat ha, lekin voh scene uske dimag se hat hi nahi raha tha, voh dekh raha tha ki jaha voh khada hai vaha charo aur aag lagi hui hai, aur aisa lag raha tha ki shayad voh uss aag me kahi bhag raha hai, ya fir uss aag se bahar nikalne ki koshish kar raha hai


Voh ladki yeh dekhkar thoda ghabra jaati hai..aur voh sehmi hui do kadam uss ladei ki aur badhi aur haklate hue “aa..aaa..pp ttth..ikk toh haina”


Yeh sunkar bhi voh ladka jyada kuch nahi karta, upar se voh apne sar ko teji se idhar udhar karne laga, aur uske kahrane ki awaaz badhti hi jaa rahi thi “aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa”


Voh ladki firse chillati hai “bbaaaappppppuuuuuuuuu”


Tabhi uss jopde me uss ladki ke baapu..yani voh chacha aate hai, aur aate hi uss ladki par baras padte hai “kahe itna bhok ri hai chori” aur uski najar uss ladke ke par padi, aur uski halat dekhkar “chal jaa, jaldi se jaakar paani le aa”


Voh ladki “jii baapu” kehte hue voh ladki vaha se chali gayi


Tabhi voh ladka ek aur baar jor se kahrata hai aur uske baad turant hi voh apne aap piche gir jaata gai, jese kisi tufan ke jaane ke baad jo shanti hoti hai, thik usi tarah voh ladka bhi shant ho chuka tha


Uss ladke ke kahrane ki awaaz itni jyada bhayanak thi ki ganv ke sabhi log chache ke ghar aagaye..yeh gaanv ke saare ghar jopde jese the..matlab ki puri tarah jopde nahi the, kaache pakke ghar jo dikhne me jopde jaise the..sabne aate hi chacha ji sawalo ko bauchar kar di ki yeh awaaz kesi thi


Tabhi voh ladki ek lote me paani bharkar le aayi “yeh lijiye baapu” kehte hue usne voh lota uss chacha ko de diya


Voh chacha paani ke chinte uss ladke ke chehre par maare, lekin kuch nahi hua, toh aaye hue logo mese kisine pucha “kya yeh mar gaya chacha”


Voh chacha ne uss ladke ki nabj dekhi, aur apna sar naa me hilate hue “iii mansukh kaha thehar gaya, subah se gaya hai, abhi tak lauta ni kaa uss sahri babu ko leke”


Tabhi voh mansukh uss kamre aaya “aagaya chacha”


Uske saath ek aur shaks tha jo dikhne se doctor lagta hai, voh aake uss ladke ko check karta hai, aur fir apne kaan se stethoscope nikal kar gale me lagaya aur fir kaha “yeh toh coma me chala gaya hai”



Chacha “iska matbal”



Dr “chacha, yeh ek tarah ki neend hai, jisme insaan kab uthega voh koi nahi bata sakta”


Chacha “are baba, ab kya hoga”



Dr “vaise yeh hai kaun..?? aur kaha se aaya hai”



Mansukh “pata nahi babu, yeh chora chacha ji ko uss jungle ki pass se mila tha, bechare ki halat bahut kharab thi, toh hum ise yaha le aaye, aur chacha ne iski marampatti ki”


Dr firse ek aur baar uss ladke ko dekhta hai, aur luckily unhe uss ladke ki jeans me se uska wallet mila, jo kuch kuch jal chuka tha, dr ne thodi sawdhani se uss ladke ki wallet se uski ID nikali..vese toh id bhi kaafi jal gayi thi..par usme se use kuch dikha “Junior..” iske aage jo likha tha voh jal gaya tha..isliye voh dr bhi kuch naa padh paaya



Mansukh “eee ka hai dr babu”


Dr “yeh iska ID hai, matlab ki yeh ek card hai, jisse iske bare me pata chal sake”



Mansukh “toh ke pata chala kuch..??”



Dr “jyada kuch toh dikh nahi raha, par shayad iska naam Mayank hai..vese toh card jhal chukka hai, par mai koshish karta hu kuch pata chale toh” aur uske baad voh dr vaha se chala jaata hai


Mansukh “chacha ab kaa karenge, yeh choro toh so gaya hai”



Chacha “jab tak yeh jaag nahi jaata, ise yahi rehne do”


Tabhi voh chacha ki ladki “par bapu, yeh uss jungle me kyu gaya hoga, voh bhi itni raat ko”



Chacha “betiya..yeh sehri log hai, tum toh janet hona, uss jungle me toh seher se bahut sare log ghumne ke liye aawaat hai, bas usi me se hoga yeh bhi”



Tabhi koi aur kehta hai “ha chacha, yeh sahi kahat ho aap, raat hone ke baad bhi yeh sehri log yaha se nahi jaate”


Mansukh “par chacha, agar ae baat hai toh, ise dhundne koi kyu nahi aaya”



Chacha “uuuu dhamake se shayad yahi bacha ho”


Mansukh “haa..ieee ho sakat hai, agar koi hoga toh voh yaha ise dhundta hua aahi jayega”


Yeh ganv uss jungle ke pass me bana hua tha, vese toh yeh gaanv bahut hi chota tha, muskil se 10-12 ghar the, aur voh log vahi par sabko jungle ghumate ya chote mote kaam karke apna bharanposhan karte the, aur jaha kudrat itni khubsurat ho, vaha par log ghumne bhi bahut jaate hai


In DELHI


Kruti ko aisa laga ki jese Paridhi chalte hue ruk gayi hai, isliye voh mudkar Paridhi ki aur dekhti hai, toh voh chalkar pari ke pass aayi aur use pucha “ab kya hua tuje”


Pari apni aankho ko michte hue “please please keh de ki mai sapna dekh rahi hu”


Kruti ne dekh liya ki Pari ne aisa kyu kiya, darasal Paridhi ne ek Manthan ko dekh liya tha, jo bachlaer me unhi ke class me tha, aur clg ke pehle din se akhri din tak Manthan aur Pari ka har baat par ladai hoti thi, aur yaha bhi usko dekhkar Pari ka bartav badal gaya


Use dekhkar Kruti jor jor se hasne lagi, aur use iss tarah hasta dekh Pari Kruti ko gusse se apni kohni marti hai “tu has rahi hai” aur voh apna muh fula deti hai


Kruti “hahaha..toh kya karu, tu hi bata, tu Manthan se dar gayi”



Pari ispar aur jyada gussa ho gayi, voh kruti par bhadak te hue “oyyee..sun mai nahi darti use, samji”


Kruti “voh toh dikh raha hai” aur firse voh hasne lagi


Pari “dekh, mene kaha na mai nahi darti usse, muje laga ki ab isse picha chutega, par muje kya pata tha ki yeh yaha par bhi aa tapkega”



Kruti “ek baat batau, teri kismat hi kharab hai”


Pari “meri nahi uski kismat bol”



Kruti “are yaar tun usse frienship kyu nahi kar leti, yaar tum dono ke jagde suljate suljate mai pak gayi hu”


Pari “usse aur friendship…never” aur voh aage chal di, jaha par bhid jami hui thi


Uss bhid ke karib jaakar pata chala ki yaha par koi form diya jaa raha hai..jise manually fill karke submit karna hai

Yeh sunkar Kruti “kya bakchodi hai yeh, aaj ke time me bhala kaun haath se form bharta hai”



Pari “hehehe, aisa bolna ki tuje aisi bhid me nahi jana”



Kruti “hihihi, toh fir tu hi le aana baby :kiss:



Pari “ha thik hai thik hai, jaati hu” voh ajib sa muh banate hue uss bhid me ghus gayi

Thodi mehnat ke baad voh akhir counter tak pahuch hi gayi, lekin uski badkismat, akhri form tha..toh jese hi usne apna haath form par rakha, kisi aur ne bhi ussi form ko pakad liya..tabhi unn dono ki hi najar takrayi, aur uske baad dono ek saath bol pade “tttuuuummmmm”


Voh ladka koi aur nahi manthan tha, voh “tu yaha kya kar rahi hai”



Pari “muje tujse koi baat nahi karni, haath hata, yeh form mene liya hai”


Manthan “kya majak hai, chod ise”


Pari “mai kyu chodu, yeh form mene pehle liya hai”



Manthan “dekh aaj pehla din hai, meko gussa mat dila, varna”



Pari “varna kya” kehte hue usne form ko apni aur khicha


Manthan ne bhi form ko apni aur khicha aur isi khicha khichi me voh akhri form bhi fat gaya, jiske baad dono hi ek dusre par aarop lagane lage


Pari gusse “dekha, sab teri vajah se hua”



Manthan “meri ya teri vajah se”



Pari “ha teri vajah se, mene kaha tha ki form chod de, lekin nahi, bhai ko mardangi jo dikhani thi, lekin tu toh chuha hai”



Manthan “dekh, ab tu kuch jyada hi bol rahi hai”


Inn dono ke ladne ki awaaz Kruti sun leti hai, aur voh apne maathe par rakhte hue “ohhh gooddd, yaha par nahi plsz” kehte hue voh pari ke pass pahuch gayi


Lekin shayad usne der kar di thi, tabhi college ke HOD vaha par aagaye, aur inn dono ko aise ladta dekhkar unhe apne cabin me bulwaliya

Inn dono ko aise jagadta dekh HOD ne unhe ek week ke liye restigate kar diya, aur yeh baat yeh dono hi jante the ki rules ke mamle me yeh college bahut hi jyada strict hai


Jab Manthan aur Pari HOD ki cabin se bahar nikle, unn dono ne hi ek dusre ko man me galiya di aur ghurte hue nikal gaye


Pari ka chehra dekhkar Kruti samaj gayi ki andar kuch toh bura hua hai, voh puchti hai “pari..kya hua..??”


Pari “sab uss gawar ki vajah se, use toh mai chodungi nahi”



Kruti “are par yeh toh bata ki hua kya hai..??”

Fir pari use sab kuch bata deti hai, aur saath me manthan ko bahut sari galiya deti hai


Khair kuch der baad jab naye forms aaye, isbar sabne baari baari se form liye aur shanti se fill karke submit kiye, aur next day se college chalu hone vali thi, yaani aajka din sabke ke liye khali tha


Manthan ka din vese bhi aaj kharab raha, toh voh campus se bahar nikalkar sidhe ek shop me gaya aur vaha se advance(cigarette) ka box lekar funkne laga

Aaj manthan ko pari par bahut hi jyada gussa aaraha tha, khair use bhi yahi laga tha ki Pari se uska picha hamesha ke liye chut gaya, lekin unn dono ki kismat hi yaha par khich laayi thi

Khair aaj jo hua uski vajah se Manthan bahut hi jyada gusse me tha, voh karib 2 cigarette funk chukka tha, lekin use khud nahi pata tha ki voh kaha jaa raha hai, voh toh bas apni masti me cigarette funkne me laga tha


Thik usi waqt ek ladki ne Manthan ko cigarette pite hue dekh liya..voh manthan ko gusse se ghur rahi thi, aur tabhi voh apne pair patakte hue Manthan ke pass gayi aur jor se usko khich liya

Iss khichai ki vajah se Manthan gir gaya, aur uske haath me rah cigarette gir gayi, lekin iss khichai se shayad Manthan hakikat me vapis aaya tha, aur voh joro se hanfne laga


Tabhi uss ladki ne gusse se kaha “tu pagal toh nahi ho gaya”


Lekin manthan ne kuch nahi kaha, voh toh bas samne ki aur dekh raha tha, jaha par ek bus ka accident hote hue bacha tha, aur voh driver Manthan ko galiya dete hue chala gaya


toh voh samne vala shaks gusse me ghurte hue “firse……”


To be continued…
 
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