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Sci-FI StRanGe WoRLd : APOCALYPSE

Which part is better in Strange World Series? (strange world series ka konsa part behtar hai?)


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Nevil singh

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This story is entire work of fiction by me.
INDEX



End Of Phase-I
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End Of Phase-II



End Of Phase-III

Prem bhari paati baanchne ke liye taiyaar
 
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Note : Yeh kahani padhne se pehle iss story ka pehla part padhna jaruri hai, varna iss kahani me hone vali ghatna samaj me nahi aayegi
first part ka link iss story ke first post par uplabdh hai


Update : 1 (Beginning of the End)



“WAQT”…yeh ek aisa shabd hai jisse hum sabhi ki zindagiya aapas me judi hui hai, aur iss waqt ke kayi saare naam hai...jaise ki waqt, time, samay adi-adi, lekin kya hum time ko aajtak kabhi samaj paaye hai..?? mere khayal se toh hum waqt ke baare me bas itna hi jante hai jitna hamari kalayi me rahi ghadi..ya fir deewar par lagi hui ghadi me dikhta hai

Par kya sach me waqt ka matlab sirf ek ghadi hota hai..?? shayad haa, aajkal hum ghadi ke suiyo par hi toh chalte hai..yaa yu kahu ke ghadi ki sui ke hisab se hum daudte hai

Lekin shayad daudna hi sabkuch nahi hota..isiliye yahi shabd hamari zindagi ka ek jaruri aur mahatvapurn hissa bana hua hai, aur hamari jindagi me jitna jaruri yeh samay hai..usse kayu gunah jyada hamare ek bada sawaal bhi hai…aakhir me WAQT inta jyada important kyu hai..??

Waqt ya Time..yeh aise shabd hai jo hum din me anginat baar sunte hai, lekin waqt ka sahi matlab aajtak koi bhi nahi samaj paaya..lekin yeh sab jante hai ki hamari duniya issi waqt par tiki hui hai, agar yeh waqt naa hota toh..shayad aaj hum bhi naa hote, kyunki hum insaan yaa fir yeh kahu ki iss pure brahmand me jitni bhi cheeze hai voh sab kahi na kahi isi waqt se judi hui hai

Waqt aisi chiz hai jise hum dekh nahi sakte, na toh hum use chu sakte aur naa hi use paa sakte hai..lekin fir bhi waqt hamari life me itna jyada important kyu hai..?? kya kabhi yeh socha hai ki agar yeh waqt hamari muthi me aajaye toh hum kya kuch nahi kar sakte..??

Yeh sach hai ki waqt se jyada taqatwar shayad hi koi aur chiz ho..par fir bhi hum jese mamuli se insaan bramhand ki sabse taqatwar aur ekloti chiz..yaani waqt ke saath ched-chad karna chahte hai, hum chahte hai ki kudrat ki voh Shakti hamare vash me aajaaye jispar yeh pura universe tika hua hai

lekin yeh kehna galat nahi hoga ki waqt par kaabu paana toh bahut hi badi baat ho gayi, kyunki hum waqt ko mehsus tak nahi kar sakte..bas yeh ehsas jarur rehta hai ki har pal waqt badhte hi jaata hai..aur waqt ko rokna hamare bas ke baahar hai, waqt naa toh rukna janta hai..aur naa hi mudna janta hai, voh toh bas aage badhna janta hai..aur waqt ko rokne ke liye mai yaa aap kuch nahi kar sakte

Jab bhi hamare kaano me waqt ya time shabd sunayi deta hai toh sabse pehle hamari najar sidhe ghadi(watch) par jaati hai, sadiya beet chuki hai..lekin hum naa toh waqt ko kabhi jaan paaye the aur shayad hi hum kabhi waqt ko jaan paayenge

Agar hum ghadi ki aur dekhe toh yeh ehsas hota hai ki waqt aage badh raha hai, jese ki seconds, minutes, hours..aur 24 hour yaani 1 din..1 hafta, 1 mahina, 1 saal aur aage badhte hi rehta hai..laakho crore saal beet chuke hai..lekin aaj bhi waqt shabd sunkar hamare jehen sirf ghadi ki parchayi samne aati hai

hum yeh jaante hue bhi anjaan ban rahe hai ki waqt me ek esi taqat hai jo dikhayi toh nahi deti..lekin hamesa apna rang dikhati hai, ek waqt hi hai jo hamare jakhmo ko bharta hai..ek waqt hi hai jo hamari kadvi yaado ko bhulakar achchi aur meethi yaade banata hai..aur sirf itna hi nahi..badhte waqt ke saath hum bahut kuch sikhte bhi hai, par ek yeh baat bhi sach hai ki kahi baar waqt hume ese jakham de jaata hai jo hum zindagi bhar nahi bhul paate

Iss pure brahmand me humari ek choti si duniya hai, aur isi duniya ka ek behad hi chota sa shabd hai “WAQT”, par yeh shabd jitna chota hai, uske piche ka raaz utna hi jyada gehra hai

waqt ke gujarne par kahi nayi chize aati hai, kahi chize piche chut jaati hai, aur kaafi kuch badal bhi jaata hai..par ek chiz hai jo kabhi nahi badalti..haa sahi samje..chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye waqt kisi ke liye nahi rukta..aur naahi kabhi piche mudkar dekhta hai..Shayad isiliye kaha jaata hai ki ek baar jo beet gaya voh beet gaya, kyunki waqt dubara mudkar kabhi vaapas nahi aata

itna sab jaante hue bhi hamare dimag me kuch sawal akshar ghumte rehte hai..jaise ki agar kisine waqt ke saath chechad ki toh uska anjaam kya hoga..?? Kabhi socha hai ki waqt hamesa aage hi kyu badhta hai..?? kyu hum apni yaadon ko waqt ke saath bhul jaate hai, kyu waqt ko hum kabhi samaj hi nahi paate..?? aakhir esi toh kya chiz hai jo waqt ko itna taqatwar banati hai..??

Waqt ek aisa paid hai jo sirf badhna janta hai..voh ek esi nadi hai jo hamesa aage ki taraf bahti rehti hai, par sach toh yeh hai ki aaj tak insaan waqt ko nahi pechaan paaya..waqt ki asli tasweer kya hai voh soch bhi naa saka, ek baat yeh bhi jante hai ki agar kabhi waqt ruk gaya toh uske saath hamara astitva bhi khatam ho jayega

Chahe kitni hi saal kyu naa beet jaaye, par ek chiz hai jo kabhi nahi badalti..aakhir me yeh WAQT hai kya..?? Yug badal jaate hai..par waqt apni taqaat hamesa dikhata hai..hamesa apne itihaas ko dohra kar yeh dikhata hai ki hum waqt ki taqat ke aage laachar aur bebaas hai


Location : MediTown
Time : year 3146, Third Blitz Period


uss hadse ko bitte hue aaj karib 1100 saal ho chuke hai, uss hadse ne hum sab ki zindagiyo ko badal kar rakh diya tha..ek aisa waqt aaya tha jab hamari yeh pruthvi maut ke kagar par khadi thi, yaa yu kahu ki hamari pruthvi tabah ho chuki thi aur aaj fir ek baar vohi waqt wapas laut kar aaya hai, vohi barbadi hamare ghar par mandla rahi hai jo 1100 saal pehle hui thi..par sabse bada sawal toh yeh hai ki kya iss baar vakahi me yeh hamara ANT hai..?? kya hum iss ladayi ko kabhi jeet payenge..??

aaj bhi muje unn dardnak cheekho ki awaaz mere kaano me sunayi deti hai, voh bhayank raat muje aaj bhi apni aankho ke samne dikhayi deti hai, aur uss tabahi ko dekhte hi mere mann me bas ek hi baat aati hai, KYA YEH HAMARA ANT HAI..!!!

Ek 25 saal ka ladka apne bed par laite hue soch raha tha..aur jo tasweere uske dimag me ghum rahi thi voh sidhe room ki chhat par project ho rahi thi..voh tasweere thi unn hadso ki jo 1100 saal pehle ghati thi..har tasweer pruthvi ki barbadi ko darsha rahi thi, jaha najar dale vaha sirf rakh aur malba pada hua tha..najara dekh kar saaf lag raha tha ki kuch bahut hi bura hua hai..logo ke marne aur karhane ki cheekhe charo aur se gunj rahi thi..vahi agar asmaan me najar dale toh vaha bhi fighter planes ki awaaz aur unke bich me ho rahe jung ka shor gunj raha tha

Sirf asmaan hi nahi..niche zameen par kuch log haath me laser gun liye behrahmi se maasum logo ko maar rahe the, aaspass ki buildings ko grenades se uda rahe the..toh kahi par pehle se hi tabah ho chuki buildings ka tuta aur jala hua malba pada tha, dekhte hi dekhte sab kuch jalkar rakh ho chuka tha..jaanha najar pahuche vaha sirf khoon aur laashe dikhayi de rahi thi

Yeh hadsa jo unn tasweer me dikh raha hai voh sirf ek soch nahi hai..balki voh ek sachayi thi, ek esi sachayi jisne iss puri duniya ko hila kar rakh diya tha..lekin iss sachayi se uska dhyaan baar-baar uss hadse par jaa raha tha jo uske saath ghata tha..reh-rehkar voh hi tasweer uske aankho ke samne aa jati thi

Voh ladka apni hi soch me ghum tha ki tabhi uske kaano me ek jaani pehchani awaaz sunayi di, awaaz sunte hi usne gehri saans lete hue apni palko ko ek baar japkaya, aur uthkar apne bed par baith gaya

Apni najar ko room ke darwaja ki tarah karte hue apni ek ungli se ishara kiya toh uske room ka darwaza achanak se gayab ho gaya

Darwaje ke thik uss par ek aurat khadi thi..jiski umar karib 50 saal ke aaspass hogi, voh kehti hai "son..kitne din beta, ab toh bahar aaja, tuje vapas aaye hue aaj ek hafta beet chuka hai"

Voh ladka "mom, aap please muje akela chod dijiye, muje abhi kisi se nahi milna"
aur usne bina kuch sune firse ungle se ishara kiya aur voh darwaja automatically vaha par aagaya aur bahar khadi aurat vahi ke vahi khadi rahi

Voh aurat gehri saans lete hue apne man-me kehti hai “pata nahi aisa toh kya hua tha, jabse aaya hai voh bas ese hi hai”

Voh ladka firse apne bed pr lait gaya aur apni aankhe band kar li, tabhi use mehsus hua ki voh uss kamre me akela nahi hai, voh vese hi bed par lete hue bola "please akshita, leave me alone"

Akshita "tu abhi tak uss baat ko lekar baitha hai..??"


Voh ladka apni aankhe kholte hue khada hua, aur uss ladki ke hologram ki aur dekhne laga jo uske bed se kuch hi duri par tha "kese bhul jau..?? Uss ladki ko mai bacha sakta tha, voh meri aankho ke samne mari thi aksh, mai itna khud garz kese ho sakta hu..usko bacha ne ke liye mai kuch naa kar paaya..yanha tak maine koshish tak naa ki"

Akshita "listen sam..jo hua use bhul jaa..kyunki uss hadse me tere koi galti nahi thi...we will talk about this later..but right now they need us and we need to help them"


Sam chalte hue uss ladki ke hologram ke pass aaya, aur uss ladki ki aankho me dekhne laga, "I can’t..mai vaha vapis nahi jaana chahta..please aksh" aur usne apna chehra juka diya

Akshita ne apne haath ko sam ke chehre par rakha, aur sam ka face apni aur kiya "sam, jo hua usme teri koi galti nahi thi..aur tuje khud ko hurt karne ka koi haq nahi banta, mai janti hu tuje iss waqt kesa mehsus ho raha hai, par yaad rakh hum jiss daur se gujar rahe hai, use hum khatam kar sakte hai..saath milkar hum apni earth ko bacha sakte hai"

Sam "nahi aksh, mai kuch nahi kar sakta..tu jaanti hai ki mai vaha vapas kyu nahi jaana chahta"


Akshita iske aage kuch nahi boli, usne sam ko apne seene se laga diya "thik hai sam, as u wish..but please let me help you, mai tuje iss tarah nahi dekh sakti, i want to meet you"

Sam kuch der ese hi raha "okay, come to my place"

Aur fir akshita ka hologram band ho gaya, hamare time me mobile phone se long distance se baat hoti thi, par future me mobile phone ki jagah ek choti si device ne le li thi, uss device ki vajah se insaan khud ki ek solid image ko transfer karke face to face baat kar sakta tha


To be continued….
Nice update bhai
 
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romanchak update ..aksh aur sam past me pahuch gaye the aur aisa kya raaz hai manthan ka jo wo dono jaan gaye hai 🤔.. aur kisiko bataya bhi nahi ..
sab tension me aa gaye the waha ye jaankar ki ladhayi ab astitva ki hai sabke ..

sam ne apne waqt me kya hua tha ye batana shuru kiya ,,, pari ne protocol istemal karne se rok diya aur jab sam bahar aaya time machine se to machine blast ho gayi ..

pari ne samay ko rewind karke dikhaya aksh ko ,

pari samay me jinda hai 🤔🤔🤔..aur wo space time me rehti hai ye kaise ho gaya ...kya hua tha pari ke saath ..

aur ye zorians ne hamlaa kar diya ware house pe ..
dekhte hai yaha se kaise bachkar nikle the aksh aur sam 🤔🤔..

aur unhone kaise haraya zorians ko ..
:thanks: DARK WOLFKING bhai :dost:
apke review padhkar acha lagta hai, ese hi saath bane rahiye aur review dete rahiye :hug:
pari ke saath kya hua tha yeh toh ab ane wala samay hi bataega
 
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The story is turning according to the need, due to which the story is becoming more interesting..
The story has quite a enthralling twist..
The qualities and passion of a writer is that through the character of story , make story's name meaningful. In which you were completely successful.

In truth, story is becoming even more interesting with the increasing updates.
well let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :applause: :applause:
:thanks: Naina :hug:
jaankar acha laga ki aapko update pasand aaya
 

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Manthan v pari ki nayi yatra aur naye rahshyo se parda uthane waali manmohak kahani ki bahut bahut badhai dost
:thanks: Nevil singh bhai :dost:
yeh yatra kiski hai yeh toh aap padhoge tab hi pata chalega
saath bane rahiye :dost:
 

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Update : 46 (Kudrat se Kuch nahi Chipta)

“murkh insaaan, yeh tumhari aakhri galti thi..ab tumhe humse koi nahi bacha sakta” zorian ka leader gurrate hue unn sabke samne aa khada hua “humlaaa” uska hukum milte hi zorian ki sena ne sabhi par waar karna chalu kar diya

Akshita “sam, Pari kaha hai..??” ne apne charo aur dekhte hue kaha

Ab aage

“Ek min, kya aapne abhi abhi pari kaha..??”
aarav ne akshita aur sam ki baat ko kaat te hue pucha

Sam “haa bhai, pari hi kaha” aur voh Mayank par ek najar daalta hai fir kehta hai “voh teri behen hi thi”

Bhavishya me

Akshita ke kehne ke baad sam ne apne charo aur dekha, lekin use Paridhi kahi nahi dikhayi de rahi thi, aur vahi dusri aur Zorians ki sena ne inn charo par hamla bol diya tha

Par shayad aaj kisi ka naseeb kaam kar raha tha, zorians ke har ek vaar sabhi ke pass toh aa rahe the, lekin unhe kuch bhi chu nahi paa raha tha, laser fire, laser guns har ek vaar inn charo ke pass aate hi gayab ho jaata, aisa lag raha tha maano inn sabke charo aur koi shield ban gayi ho

par kehte haina ki insaan ki kuch aadate esi hoti hai jo khud hi ho jaati hai, Zorians ka hamla dekhkar voh sabhi apni apni guns baahar nikalte hai aur Zorians army par hamla karne lagte hai
dono aur se ghamasaan yuddh hone laga tha..zorians ne ab hathiyaar ke saath-saath khud bhi aage aakar hamla karne lage the..par itihas me aaj yeh pehli baar ho raha tha ki insaani taaqat unn aliens par bhaari pad rahi thi, kyunki yeh pehli baar aisa hua tha ki insaan khud ko bacha paa rahe the..lekin insaan ki ke waat itne taqatwar nahi the ki voh Zorians ko maar paaye..unke vaar sirf Zorians ko chotil kar rahe the

Zorians ke leader (General) ne jab gaur kiya toh use pata lagta hai ki uski sena ka vaar khali jaa raha hai..voh insaano tak pahuchne se pehle hi hawa me gayab ho jaa raha tha, yeh dekhkar voh gusse me aajaata hai aur khud hi maidan me kud padta hai..voh daudte hue insaano ki aur jaane laga aur fir unke karib pahuchte hi voh hawa me ek chalang lagata hai aur apni talwaar nikalkar usne sidhe commander ke haath par vaar kar diya

Achanak se hue iss hamle ke liye commander taiyaar nahi tha, voh kuch samaj paata uske pehle hi general ki talwaar uske haath par padi aur palak japakne se pehle hi uske mooh se dard bhari awaaz uss pure ware house gunj padti hai..kyunki General ke iss vaar se commander ka haath katke gir gaya tha
Apna haath katne ki vajah se commander uss dard ko seh nahi paa raha tha, voh dusre haath se apne haath ko pakadte hue upar dekhkar jor jor chillane laga..aur vahi uss kate hue haath se khoon fuanre ki tarah gir raha tha..khoon itna jyada beh chuka tha ki commander kuch hi pal me behosh hokar gir pada

General ko iss tarah se hamla karte dekhkar uski puri sena vahi ruk jaati hai, aur jor jor se ajeeb tarah awaaz me chillane lagi
Commander ko behosh hote dekh Akshita ne fauran apne watch me kuch buttons dabaye aur uske charo aur mek energy shield aajati hai jisme voh khud ko aur commander ko cover kar deti hai

Vahi dusri Commander ki yeh haalat dekhkar Sam aur bennet dono hi gusse me aakar uske leader ko ghurne lagte hai aur unn dono ne bhi fauran apne aap ko energy shield ke andar cover liya

General ne insaano ki yeh harkat dekhte hue hasne laga “murkh insaan, tum humse kabhi jeet nahi sakte”

Akshita ne apne charo aur dekhte hue kaha jo ab puri tarah Zorians ki sena ke bich gir chuke the “sam..hum gir chuke hai..i don’t know..meri shield kabtak kaam karegi”

Akshita ki baat sunkar Sam ne uspar aur behosh hue commander par ek najar daali, aur fir gusse me aakar usne General par laser gun se humla kar diya jisse uske chehre par ek kharoch aajati hai

Akshita “we have lost sam, I don’t believe it..hum yeh ladayi shuru hone se pehle hi haar gaye” voh ek dum hataash hote hue kehti hai aur uski energy shield bhi gayab ho jaati hai

General “sahi kaha ladki, yeh jung ab khatam ho chuki hai” aur voh joro se hasne lagta hai “vese bhi yeh koi jung thi hi nahi”

“waqt se koi nahi jeet sakta” ek awaaz unn sabhi ko sunayi deti hai “naa insaan..na aliens, jeetaga vahi jo waqt chahega” aur fir kuch duri par neeli rang ki Roshni ubhar aati hai aur usme se Paridhi bahar aati hai

Iss waqt paridhi insaan aur aliens ki sena ke thik beech me thi aur vaha se chalti hui sam ke taraf aati hai, vahi General samne se aati Paridhi ki aur ek pal ke liye dekhta hai aur fir haste hue kehta hai “yeh naamumkim hai, kyunki waqt ab hamara hai” aur voh joro se hasne lagta hai

Paridhi ne halki si Muskaan dete hue kaha “waqt kisika nahi hai, naa insaan ka..aur nahi tumhara”

General sawaliya najro se paridhi ki aur dekhta hai, voh kuch samaj nahi paa raha tha “lagta hai tuje waqt ke baare me kuch jyada hi pata hai” voh haste hue kehta hai “ab muje ek hologram tasweer batayegi ki waqt kya hota hai..ladki shayad tumhe nahi pata par ab waqt par hamara kabja hai”

Pata nahi kyu par Paridhi ko General ki yeh baat pasand nahi aayi, voh gusse me Zorians ki puri sena ko ghurti hai aur agle hi pal Zorians ki puri sena tabaah ho jaati hai..kuch reh jaata hai toh bas unke sade hue kankaal, aur uss kankaal ko bhi rakh banne me der nahi lagti, aur ab uss ware house me keval insaan ke saath sirf General hi bach jaata hai

Ekdum iss tarah se apni sena khatam hote dekh general paagal sa ho jaata hai, voh kuch soche samje bina hi paridhi ki aur japakta hai lekin Paridhi vaha se gayab ho jaati hai aur agle hi pal sam ke pass khadi ho jaati hai

Paridhi ki iss taqaat ko mehsoos hote hi general turant hi piche mudta hai aur haklaate hue kehta hai “ho kaun tum, aur yeh kya kiya hamari sena ke saath”

Pari “vahi hua jo waqt ne chaha..aur vahi hoga jo waqt chahega, vahi hoga jo waqt karega..vahi hoga jo waqt karwaega”

Paridhi ki baat sunne ke baad General gusse me gurrata hai “waqt, waqt waqt..yeh kya laga rakha hai..?? shayad tum nahi jaanti ki waqt ab hamara kuch nahi bigaad sakta..hum jo chahe voh waqt ke saath kar sakte hai”

Paridhi “kya tumhe lagta hai tum kabhi waqt se jeet paoge..??” iss baar pari ki awaaz thodi alag kism ki thi jisse vaha maujud har ek shaks darr jaata hai

General haste hue kehta hai “hum waqt par pehle hi jeet haasil kar chuke hai..waqt ab humara hai, aur voh bhi sirf tum murkh insaan ki madad se, actually hume toh sukragujara hona chahiye tha ki tum insaan ne hamare sabse bade dushman ko hamesa ke liye mita diya, ab vahi hoga jo hum chahenge..mai iss dharti ka naamonishan hi mita dunga..iss nayi duniya me ab dharti naam ka koi grah kabhi Astitva hi nahi karega”

“general..waqt ab sahi ho chuka hai, tum kabhi bhi waqt se jeet nahi paoge”
sam ne muskurate hue kaha aur fir voh paridhi ki aur dekhte hue kehta hai “mai nahi janta tum kaun ho..par itna janta hu ki tum hamari sabse badi taaqat banogi, hum insaan yeh ladayi jarur jeetenge” sam ki aankho me ek alag hi chamak dikhayi de rahi thi aur uski awaaz me ek vishwaas tha

Paridhi ek pal ke liye sam ki aur dekhti hai “mai tumhari koi madad nahi kar sakti…tum insaan ko khud hi apni madad karni hogi, mai sirf tumhe raste dikha sakti hu”

Paridhi ki yeh baat sunkar general thoda hadbadata jaata hai, use kuch alag mehsoos hota hai “yeh..yeh nahi ho sakta, tum..nahi nahi, tum insaan ho, mai..haa tum insaan ho”

Paridhi general ki aur dekhte hue kehti hai “General, fir milenge…vahi par” aur fir achanak se Paridhi, sam aur akshita uss warehouse se gayab ho jaate hai

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Sam “aur fir hum log yanha aagaye aur tumhari baate hume sunayi de gayi”

Akshita jo abhi tak chup thi voh kehti hai “Mayank, time ko restart karke humne bahut badi galti kar di hai, humne Zorians ko voh de diya jiski unko hamesa se talaash thi”

Pari “matlab..??”

Aarav “matlab yeh ki waqt par ab Zorians ka kabja hai, yahi hua hai, haina..??”

Aarav ki baat khatam hone par akshita haa mein apna sar hilaati hai, aur sabhi ek katputli ki tarah jese the vese hi reh jaate hai, kyunki yeh ek aisi baat thi jo behad avishwashniya thi..lekin ek aisa kadwa sach tha jo sabhi ko pata tha

Kuch der ke liye ekdum se sannata chaa jaata hai aur iss sannate ko todte hue Manthan kehta hai “kese..?? I mean yeh possible hi nahi hai..koi bhala time par kese kabja kar sakta hai..??”

Sam “yahi sach hai mere bhai”

Mayank “agar Zorians ka vakahi me waqt par kabja hai toh…” voh bolte hue ruk gaya “yeh sach nahi ho sakta, keh de ki tu majak kar raha hai”

Akshita “kya tuje sach me lagta hai ki hum majak kar rahe hai..??”

Iss baat par Mayank kuch nahi bolta, pari ne apne mann me uth rahe sawal ko puchte hua kaha “tum dono ne yeh kese maan liya ki voh mai hi thi..?? aur tum sure kese ho ki Zorians ne wakahi me waqt par kabja kar liya hai..?? aisa kese ho sakta hai..?? kya hua tha tum dono ke saath..?? aur tum log vapas apne waqt me kese chale gaye the..??”

Akshita “I am sorry pari, sach kahu toh hum inn sawal ke jawaab khud nahi jaante”


Aarav “tum dono khud sure nahi ho ki voh ladki pari hi thi, toh fir uski baat ko itni jyada seriously kyu le rahe ho..??”

Sam ne Mayank ki aur dekhte hue kaha “kyunki usne hume voh bataya hai jo Mayank ne humse chupaya tha”

Mayank thoda hadbadate hue kehta hai “mera koi raaz nahi hai, mai nahi maanta ki voh pari thi”

Akshita “kyu..?? kyunki voh mar chuki hai..??”

Sam “sach me..??” usne sawal karte hue Mayank ki aur dekha

Aarav “muje aisa kyu lag raha hai ki meri behen jinda hai..??”
fir voh kuch pal rukkar kehta hai “kahi voh apke waqt me toh nahi aagayi..jese Mayank dusre earth par chala gaya tha” pata nahi kyu par aarav ko kuch alag mehsoos hone lagta hai

Pathik “you are right, shayad isiliye hume pari ki dead body bhi nahi mili thi..aur naa inn sab ko dusre earth par voh mili”

Mayank naa mein apna sar hilate hue kehta hai “no way, it cannot be possible”

Pathik “kya hua bhai..?? kyu possible nahi hai..??”

Mayank “kyunki voh” voh atak jaata hai

Pathik “kyunki kya..??”

Mayank ne apni aankhe band karte hue kaha “kyunki Pari kabhi vaapas nahi aa sakti..she is dead”

Sam “yahi toh hamari galti hai bhai..hum keval insaan hai..aur hamari soch ek had tak hi simit hai, bhai..mai janta hu ki tune voh baat kyu chupayi hai, par agar hume yeh ladayi jitni hai toh hume saath milkar hi ladna hoga”

Mayank kuch sochte hue kehta hai “agar voh pari thi..aur voh tumhe time-travel karwa sakti hai toh usne tumhe kuch kyu nahi bataya..?? kyu unn saare sawalo ke jawab tumhare pass nahi hai”

Mayank ke mann me ajeeb sa darr utpan hua tha, uska dil joro se dhadakne lagta hai..aisa lag raha tha ki uske dil aur dimaag ke bich me koi jung chal rahi hai..voh apne aap me hi ulaj gaya tha..use khud nahi pata tha voh kya bol raha hai “pari bhala aisa kyu kahegi..?? insaan iss tarah ke koi bhi kaam nahi kar sakte jo tune abhi bataye”

Sam “yakin toh pehle muje bhi nahi ho raha tha..par jo humne dekha..jo humne mehsoos kiya voh kuch alag hi tha”

Akshita “aur Mayank, yeh tu bhi jaanta hai ki voh ab insaan nahi hai”

Mayank gehri saans chodte hue kehta hai “I am sorry aarav, mai nahi chahta tha ki yeh baat tumhe kabhi bhi pata chale” usne aarav ki dekte hue kaha

Mayank ki baat sunne ke baad Aarav ka dil joro se dhadakne lagta hai, use pehle se hi ehsaas ho jaata hai ki shayad ab use kuch aisa sunne ko milega jo usne kabhi socha nahi hoga..par saath me use jo mehsoos ho raha tha voh aur bhi majboot ho jaata hai..lekin voh kuch samaj nahi paa raha tha ki voh mehsoos kya kar raha hai..bas uska dil joro se dhadakne laga tha

Mayank “dosto, maine tumse ek baat chupayi hai, Dexter ko maine nahi maara tha..balki voh maara gaya tha”

Pathik “kese.??”

Mayank ne fir apni kahani ka voh sach bataya jo usne apne mann me daba ke rakha tha, usne sab ko bata diya ki dexter ko marne ke liye use apni pari ko apne haatho se maarna pada
Apni hi kahani batane ke baad voh khud ko sambhal nahi paaya, uska dard fir ek baar uski aankho se baahar aane lagta hai, voh ruansi awaaz me aarav ki aur dekhte hue kehta hai “I am sorry aarav, pata nahi kese..mai voh kabhi nahi karna chahta tha, par…mai voh, bas pata nahi kese..mai, maine pari ki voh baat kese maan li, I am sorry aarav”

Iss sach ko sunne ke baad vaha maujud har ek shaks ki aankhe nam ho jaati hai, lekin Mayank ki iss baat ka sabse gehra asar Aarav par pada tha, voh apna sar jukaye hue apne hi pairo ko taak raha tha..najar uski bhale hi apne pairo par thi..lekin uski aankhe toh apni hi behen ka chehre dekh rahi thi..uska voh hasta hua chehra use apni aankho ke aage dikhayi de raha tha..lekin abhi tak uski aankho se aansu nahi nikle the

Mayank ne dekha ki aarav bina koi harkaat kiye chupchaap baitha hai toh usne Pari ki aur dekha..jo apni nam ankho se kabhi apne bhai ko dekh rahi thi toh kabhi apne pyaar ko dekh rahi thi
Jese hi pari ki najar Mayank ki aankho se mili toh voh samaj jaati hai ki use kya karna hai, voh chalte hue aarav ke pass jaati hai aur pyaar se apne haath ko Aarav ke sar rakhte hue uske baalo ko sehlati hai “bhailu” voh bas itna hi bol paati hai

Vahi pari ka haath apne sar par mehsoos kar aarav khud ko sambhal nahi paaya, voh apna sar uthakar Pari ke chehre ko dekhta hai aur uski aankho me dekhte hue voh pari ke baanho me aajaa hai aur pari ko joro se pakadte hue kehta hai “didi, aap muje chodkar nahi jaa sakti, aap….mai apko kahi nahi jaane dunga, aap meri didi ho” kehte hue voh joro se rone lagta hai

Aarav ki aankho se aansu the jo rukne ka naam nahi le rahe the, shayad yeh pehli baar tha jab voh iss kadar roya tha..itne waqt se jo dard voh apne dil me daba kar rakha tha voh aaj pehli baar uski aankho se aansu bankar bahar aa raha tha

Kudrat bhi kitni ajeeb haina..?? insaan chahe jitni bhi koshish kar le kisi baat ko chupane ki..lekin kabhi na kabhi samne aa hi jaati hai
Insaan chahe lakh koshishe kar le..lekin voh hamesa kudrat ke samne lachar rehta hai..kyunki duniya me shayad yeh kudrat hi ek aisi hai jisse insaan kabhi nahi jeet saka..aur naahi kabhi aane wale kisi bhi waqt me kudrat se jeet payega

Aarav kabhi apne behen ki maut par nahi roya tha..lekin jab aaj voh ro raha hai toh bhi kiske sahare..?? voh aaj pari se hi lipatkar pari ke liye ro raha hai…voh pari jo uski behen nahi hai..par uski behen jarur hai

Pari ne badi muskil se aarav ko chup karate hue kaha “aarav, chup hoja..mai yahi hu..kahi nahi gayi”

Pari ki awaaz sunkar Aarav fauran usse alag ho jaata hai, voh pari ko dekhkar samaj nahi paa raha tha ki voh kya bole “didi..voh mai, pata nahi di..mai” voh samaj hi nahi paa raha tha ki use kya bolna chahiye..ya fir voh yahi tay nai kar paa raha tha ki akhir me uske saath aisa kyu ho raha hai

Pari “aarav, mai tumhari pari toh nahi hu..par mai tera dard ache se samaj sakti hu, kyunki kahi na kahi maine bhi apne pyare se chote bhai ko khoya hai”

Aarav “nahi di, muje yeh dimensions ki baate samaj me nahi aati..aur naa hi muje unpar yakeen hai, mai bas itna janta hu ki 1.5 saal pehle maine apni behen ko khoya tha jo muje ab vapas mili hai..ab mai aapko dubara nahi khona chahta”

Yeh sunkar pari aarav ko jor se apne baahon me bhar leti hai, kyunki ab uske pass bolne ke liye kuch tha hi nahi

“maine socha nahi tha ki mera bhai itna jyada samajdar hai” ek behad pyaari si awaaz unn sabhi ko sunayi deti hai, jise sunkar sabhi ke rongte khade ho jaate hai

Sam aur Akshita jaante the ki yeh kaun hai, vahi dusri aur Mayank aur aarav kisi putale ki tarah apne samne khadi uss Paridhi ko dekh rahe the jo sabke samne fir ek baar uss nile rang ki Roshni se baahar aati hai

Note : Paridhi – Earth-2, jaha par uski maut ho gayi thi, jise baad me Mayank na apne haatho se maara tha
Pari – Earth-1, jise Mayank apne saath lekar aaya tha


Mayank ek pal ke liye apne samne khadi Paridhi ko dekh raha tha..jo abhi neele rang ki Roshni me kaid thi, thik usi tarah jese usne sabse pehle Dexter ko dekha tha
Mayank ko yeh samaj me nahi aa raha tha ki Paridhi vapas kese aa sakti hai..?? kyunki jab usne aakhri baar Paridhi ko dekha tha tab usne Mayank ke haatho me apni jaan di thi..toh ab yeh kese possible ho sakta hai..??

Vahi dusri aur Aarav kabhi apne pass me khadi Pari ko dekh raha tha toh kabhi usse thodi dur khadi Paridhi ko jo neele rang ki Roshni ke andar thi
Aarav “d….dddiii…idi..??” usne hakalte hue Paridhi ko dekhte hue pucha

Paridhi ne pyaari si smile dete hue apna chehra haa mein hilaya “nahi aarav, par haa..main teri behen Paridhi hi hu”

Aarav firse halkte hue kehta hai “kk…ke..e……sseee….eeee”

Paridhi ne aarav ke sawal ka jawab nahi diya, aur Mayank ki aur dekhte hue kaha “tuje iss tarah dekhkar muje lag raha hai shayad hum pehle mil chuke hai…yaaa..yeh hamari pehli mulakat hai..??” usne thoda sochte hue kaha

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Update : 41 (Ek aur Anokha Khel)

“hello..hello….koi sun raha hai..we need heeeeellllllllpppppp”
ek dard bhari awaaz ek baar fir uss room me gunj uthi, koi kuch samaj paata usse pehle hi jordar dhamake ki awaaz sunayi di aur dusre hi pal sab kuch ekdum se shaant ho gaya

“dammidd” iss dhamake ki awaaz sunne ke baad Bennet apne haath ko desk par marte hue chillaya “we lost another one”

“behave yourself bennet”
ek khaufnaak awaaz bennet ke kaano me padti hai, jise sunkar bennet samaj jaata hai ki uske pass kaun khada hai

“I am sorry commander, but I just can’t take it..yeh aaj ke din me panchvi baar hua hai, we are just loosing more and more” kehte hue voh apne commander ki aur mooda jo usse kuch duri par khada tha

Commander “I know it son, but filhaal abhi hum kuch nahi kar sakte, atleast jabtak sam aur akshita vaapas nahi aajate”

Bennet “sir, sam aur akshita kab vaapas aayenge hume nahi pata..voh vapas aayenge ya nahi mai toh yeh bhi nahi jaanta”

Commander “we can just hope ki voh jald hi vapas aajaye”

Bennet “I am sorry sir, par agar aise hi haalat rahe toh hum jyada din tik nahi payenge..almost humari earth puri tarah se tabah ho chuki hai”

Commander “mai majboor hu bennet”

Bennet “apko aisa kyu lag raha hai ki sam aur akshita dono vaapas aayenge..??”

Commander “mai nahi janta, par filhaal hum plan ke mutabik hi kaam karenge..atleast jitna waqt sam ne manga hai”

Bennet “sir, agar ese hi baithe rahe toh haalat aur kharab ho jayenge”

Commander “we have to take risk..agar use fail hona hota toh humne use kabka kho diya hota, but voh pehle bhi time-travel karke vaapas aaya hai..aur iss baar bhi voh jarur vaapas aayega”

Bennet “common sir, aap special force ke head hote hue bhi esi baate kar rahe hai..??”

Commander “mai janta hu bennet yeh baithe rehne ka time nahi hai..yeh action lene ka time hai..mai bas hamare plan ke hisab se chalne ke liye keh raha hu, jo uss din tay hua tha..jabtak 3 din pure nahi ho jaate mai yeh manunga ki sam aur akshita dono sahi Salamat hai aur unka mission abhi tak pura nahi hua hai”


Bennet nirasha bhari awaaz me kehta hai “sir chahta toh mai bhi yahi hu..but koi nahi janta ki yeh time-portals asal me kaam kese karte hai..aur…” voh bolte hue ruk jaata hai

Commander “just few more hours bennet, agar voh dono vaapas nahi aate fir mai yeh maan lunga ki hamara mission fail ho chuka hai”

Bennet “sir, with all your respect..mai bas yeh puchna chahta hu ki agar…agar voh dono vaapas nahi aaye toh hamara backup plan kya hoga..?? yeh ladayi jeetna hamare bas ke baahar hote jaa raha hai”


Commander kuch sochte hue “fir hamare pass OCULUS PROTOCOL ke use karne ke alawa aur koi rasta nahi rahega” usne saans chodte hue kaha aur screen par rahi tasweer ko dekhne laga jo pruthvi ki tabahi ko darsa rahi thi

Kuch der tak unn tasweero ko dekhne ke baad commander ne pucha “any news bennet..??”

Bennet “not yet sir”

Commander “anything”
usne apne sawal ko firse dohraya..iss ummid me ki shayad bennet iss baar kuch aur jawab de

Bennet “nothing sir, muje koi bhi energy signatures nahi mil rahe” iss baar usne apna jawab puri detail ke saath diya

Commander “keep looking” aur fir voh vaha se chale jaata hai aur bennet vahi baithkar kuch der ke liye apni aankhe band kar deta hai

Time : 3146, 11:00 PM, 3 din pehle
Location : Coronal City

“are you sure sam..?? tu sach me yeh karna chahta hai”
bennet ki awaaz sam aur akshita ke kaano me sunayi di

“bennet, hume yeh karna hi hoga..hamare ghar ke liye” sam ne apne kaan par pehni device par haath rakhte hue kaha

Bennet “dekh sam, tere mom dad ke khona ka dukh muje bhi hai..so please mai aakhri baar keh raha hu..gusse me aakar kuch aisa vesa naa kar dena jisse hume hi nuksaan ho”

Sam “mai thik hu..muje yeh karna hi hoga..ab yeh time-portals hi hamari aakhri ummid hai”

Bennet “you are the boss par yeh yaad rahe..agar kuch bhi gadbad hui toh tum dono fauran yaha vaapas aaoge”

Sam “don’t worry bennet, we will be fine..kuch nahi hoga”

Commander “sam..it’s my order”

Sam “right sir, I will return”


Commander ki awaaz sunkar Akshita ne jawab diya “aap fikar na kijiye sir, koi bhi gadbad hoti hai toh hum dono fauran vapas laut aayenge”

Commander “good, we are counting on you..good luck”

Sam “thank you sir, bas ek request hai, agar hum dono 3 din me vapas naa aaye toh samaj jaana ki hamara yeh mission fail ho gaya hai and we are dead”

Bennet “don’t ever talk like that, tuje yaha vapas aana hi hoga”

Sam “bennet, hume har tarah se prepare rehna padega, it’s war mere bhai”


Itna kehne ke baad sam call disconnect karta hai aur voh akshita ko dekhte hue uske haath ko pakadkar kehta hai “dar lag raha hai”

Akshita “muje bhi, par hume yeh karna hi hoga”


Sam haa mein apna sar hilata hai “right then, let’s do it” aur fir voh dono hi apni aankhe band karke uss portal ki aur badhe aur vaha se gayab ho gaye


Back to Headquarters
Commander aur bennet dono hi screen par dekh rahe the, screen par coronal city ka naksha tha aur ek jagah par do heat signatures dikhayi de rahe the..jo achanak se hi gayab ho jaate hai, jise dekhkar commander kehta hai “yeh heat signatures…”

Bennet ne uski baat ko pura karte hue kaha “voh dono sam aur akshita ke the”

Commander “that means they are gone”
uske baad voh vaha se chala gaya aur bennet apne kaam me lag gaya

Bennet lagatar coronal city par najar rakhe hue tha, aur uske saath me voh pure earth par uss unknown energy ko dhundhne ki koshish kar raha tha jo uss time-portals se nikal ke aa rahi thi…aur use karib 13 jagah esi mili jaha par bennet ko uss unknown energy ke traces milte hai



“I hope ki tum dono sahi Salamat ho” bennet ne uss pal ko yaad karte hue kaha jab sam aur akshita uss time-portals me gaye the, jiske baad voh apne kaam me lag jaata hai

Tabhi achanak se uss room me alert ka alaram bajne laga aur red light pure kamre me flash hone lagti hai, yeh dekh bennet fauran screen par dekhne lagta hai
Alaram ki awaaz sunte hi commander bhi uss room me aajata hai aur voh puchta hai “kya hua bennet”

Bennet “don’t know sir, muje kuch high intensity ke energy signals mil rahe hai”

Commander “kis tarah ke”

Bennet “unknown hai sir, aur voh aa rahe hai..”
voh bolte hue ruk jaata hai

Commander “kaha se..??” voh bhi screen ki aur dekhkar chup ho jaata hai kyunke uske sawaal ka jawab bennet ne pehle se hi screen par laa diya tha

Bennet “it’s time portals sir”

Commander “what’s happening out there”

Bennet “mai khud nahi janta sir, iss tarah ke signals muje aajse pehle kabhi nahi mile”

Commander “muje uss jagah ke fauran satellites images chahiye”

Bennet “already working sir”
ne apne samne rahe hologram screen par kuch buttons ko touch kiya aur ek badi si image coronal city ki uss screen par aagayi

“Yeh vahi jagah hai jaha par sam aur akshita ko akhri baar dekha gaya tha” screen par rahi tasweer ko dekhte hue bennet ne kaha

Commander aur bennet dono hi ektak unn tasweero ko dekhe jaa rahe the, halaki screen par kuch saaf dekhayi nahi de raha tha…lekin unn tasweer ko dekhkar koi bhi bata sakta hai ki vaha par ho kya raha hai

Uss jagah par dhool ka bhawandar bana hua tha jo har second aur bhi bhayankar banta jaa raha tha, tabhi achanak se uss jagah par alag alag gatividhya hone lagti hai..achanak se uss jagah hawa me hi ek ajeeb tarah ki Roshni dekhayi deti hai, jo kuch hi pal me golakar me tabdil ho gayi aur uss golakar ke charo aur alag alag rang ki Bijli kadakne lagti hai
thik uss golakar ke bich me gehra andhera jama hua tha…lekin yeh andhkar bhi jyada der naa ruka aur andhere ko chirte hue ekdum se ujala ho gaya aur joro se dhamaka hone laga

Dhamaka hote hi kuch pal ke liye screen puri tarah se blank ho gayi, Bennet alag alag tarike se uss jagah ki tasweer ko dekhne ki koshsh kar raha tha lekin use kuch nahi mila

Commander “what the hell was that”

Bennet “it’s nothing sir”
ne hakalate hue apna jawab diya

Bennet ke ese jawab par commander ghurate hue kehta hai “uss jagah par muje ek dhamaka hote hue dikha aur tu keh raha hai it’s nothing”

Bennet “sir, mere kehne ka voh matlab nahi tha, I mean to say voh time-portals..uski voh energy..”
voh bolte hue ruk jaata hai

Commander “kya..??” shayad use anuman ho gaya tha ki bennet kya kehna chahta hai, isiliye iss baar uske awaaz me narmi ke saath saath halka sa darr tha

Bennet “sir, voh time-portals nahi rahe..they are just completely vanished”

Commander “it’s impossible..kya yeh Zorians ka kaam hai..??”

Bennet “nahi sir, Zorians iss waqt apne ship me hai, they are not here”


Commander kuch bolne jaata uske pehle hi uss screen par fir ek baar tasweer aane lagti hai, jo waqt ke saaath ekdum saaf hoti chali gayi

Kuch der pehle jo dhool ka toofan tha voh ekdum se shant ho chuka tha, jo Bijli uss jagah chamak rahi thi voh bhi ab puri taraf se band ho gayi thi, aur vahi bennet lagatar dusri screen se unn time-portals ko dhundhne ki naakaam koshishe kar raha tha

Bennet “yeh nahi ho sakta, no no no no…” voh teji se bahut sare commands ek saath de raha tha, lekin samne se jawab har baar negative hi aa raha tha

Commander “are you sir bennet, ki voh time portals ab nahi rahe..??”

Bennet “sir, jo energy signals muje abtak mil rahe the voh achanak se gayab ho chuke hai..aur sirf itna hi nahi, yeh dekhiye”
usne alag alag do tasweer uss screen par khol di “sir yeh pehli tasweer dhamake ke pehle ki hai aur dusri abhi ki”

Commander ne uss tasweer ko dekhte hue pucha “yeh hai kya..??”

Bennet “sir, maine uss energy ki intensity ko naapne ke liye kuch algorithms banaye the, yeh usi ka result hai..achanak se hi aaj uss energy ki intensity ekdum se badh jaati hai aur fir ab zero”

Commander “tune kaha tha ki pure planet par karib 13 time-portals hai, uska kya hua..??”

Bennet “har jagah same result hai sir”

Commander “yeh kese possible hai..?? time-portals ka apne aap samne aana aur fir ese hi apne aap gayab ho jaana..kuch toh hai jo hum samaj nahi paa rahe”

Bennet “pata nahi sir yeh sab kya ho raha hai, but agar yeh sach hai toh sam aur akshita kabhi vaapas nahi aa payenge”

Commander “keep trying son, ho sakta hai hamari satellites kaam nahi kar rahi”

Bennet “sir, hume kese bhi karke unn time-portals ko firse activate karna hi hoga..varna sam aur akshita ki vajah se puri time-line bigad sakti hai”


Commander ne apne watch me time dekhte hue kaha “then I think it’s time to use OCULUS PROTOCOL”

Bennet “right sir, I will start it’s procedure, lekin usse pehle mai ek akhri baar time-portals ko dhundhne ki koshish karnunga”

“it won’t work bennet, time portals jaa chuke hai”
ek awaaz bennet aur commander ke kano me gunjti hai

Voh dono hi turant piche mudkar dekhte hai toh unhe sam buri haalat me khada dikhayi padta hai, voh dono kuch bol paate usse pehle hi sam vahi par gir pada aur behosh ho gaya

Sam ke girte hi uske baaju me khadi akshita fauran niche baith gayi aur sam ki nabs dekhne lagti hai
Yeh sab itni jaldi me hua ki bennet aur commander kuch pal ke liye putle ki tarah khade rehte hai, lekin jab akshita ki awaaz unn dono ke kaano me padti hai toh voh fauran harkat me aajate hai “bennet, please help him”

Bennet fauran sam ke pass gaya, aur akshita ke saath milkar sam ko medical room me le gaya, aur vaha uski treatment AI’s ke jariye shuru ho jaati hai

Commander “how is this possible..??”

Bennet “tum dono yanha achanak kese..?? aur voh time-portals..unka kya hua..?? mai unn time-portals ko ab trace nahi kar paa raha hu”

Bennet ki baat sunkar akshita aur bhi jyada pareshan ho jaati hai. “what..?? mai nahi jaanti bennet, infact muje toh yeh bhi nahi malum ki hum yanha kese aagaye..?? it’s just impossible”
voh haklate hue kehti hai

Commander ko kuch shaq hota hai “who are you..??”

Akshita “sir it’s me, Akshita”
uske saath hi vaha par ek AI ki awaaz gunjti hai “identity confirmed”

AI ki baat sunne ke baad Commander thode normal ho jaate hai aur akshita se sawaal karte hai “yeh sab ho kya raha hai..??”

Akshita “sir..yeh toh muje bhi nahi malum, but agar hum yanha par hai toh matlab saaf hai ki hamari time-line thik ho chuki hai..par dusri aur yeh impossible hai..hume yanha nahi hona chahiye tha”
voh bahut hi jyada pareshan thi

Bennet “tere kehne ka kya matlab hai..?? vanha par hua kya tha..?? sab thik toh haina”

Commander “time-line thik ho gayi hai..iska kya matlab tha”


Akshita ke liye yeh sab samaj paana bahut muskil tha, shayad isiliye usne dono ko sabkuch batana shuru kar diya..har ek ghatna ko batane ke baad usne kaha “isliye maine kaha ki time-line thik ho chuki hai..shayad” fir voh rukkar kehti hai “lekin agar aisa hota toh hum yaha nahi hote..kyunki Mayank ne already yeh kaha tha ki hum vaapas kabhi bhi apne ghar nahi jaa sakte”

Bennet halke se haste hue kehta hai “heh, pehle time-portals, time travel, uske baad Dimension travel aur last me universal dominators, mai pagal ho jaunga”

Bennet ki baad sunne ke baad commander aur akshita dono uski aur dekhte hai, Akshita “shayad ab sam hi kuch bata sakta hai ki past me aisa toh kya hua ki hum dono yanha aagaye”

Commander “usko thik hone me kitna time lagega..??”

Bennet “sir, sam ki haalat bahut kharab hai, use thik hone me kam se kam 6 hours jayenge”

Commander “hamare pass utna waqt nahi hai”

Bennet “I am sorry sir, mai kuch nahi kar sakta”

Akshita “bennet, I think muje teri madad chahiye”

Bennet “haa bolna”

Akshita “agar timeline sahi ho gayi hai toh kya pata hume past me kuch mil jaaye..ho sakta hai ki uss hadse ke baare me hi hume kuch mil jaaye”

Bennet “good idea, let’s go”
jiske baad voh dono vapas uss room me chale jaate hai aur commander kuch der vahi rukkar apne cabin me chala gaya

To be continued….
Update 41

Update to sahi tha lekin ghanta kuch nhi smjha bhai... Itne dino baad update post karoge aur jh*nt bhar ka recap doge kya to samjhega bhai... Chalo aage padhta hu... Lekin ab jaldi reply dene ka mann nhi hai 😂 Qki story ki wat laga di h tumne... Itna slow kare ke... science fiction story flow me honi chahiye qki itne sare terms and terminology use kiya hai tumne ki dimag ghum jaye aur uppar se fir 8,9 mahine ka gap... Wow.... Great.. 😂
 
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