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Update 27Update : 27 (Another Earth..??)
Kuch der pehle
“not bad mere bhai” kehte hue Samar apne bhai par ghusse barsane laga..lekin samne Trod badi asani se Samar ke har ek vaar ko dodge karte jaa raha tha
Voh dono itni teji se lad rahe the ki niche khadi Shivani aur Aakruti dono hi unhe dekh nahi paa rahi thi..kuch dikh raha tha toh sirf unn dono ke punch ke milne par ho raha ek impact aur uske saath hi asmaan me ajeeb ajeeb kisam ki awaaz ho rahi thi
Trod “you are good, really good” voh samar ke vaar ko haste hue dodge karta hai “but not good enough” kehte hue usne Samar ke chehre par ek punch maara aur fir turant hi hawa me hi round ghumte hue samar ke pait me laat maar di
Yeh sab itni teji se hua ki Samar khud ko sambhal nahi paaya aur utni hi teji se zameern par jaa patka..lekin samar bhi itna jyada furtila tha ki zameen se takrane se thik pehle usne hawa me hi Gulati mari aur voh apne ghutno ke bal baith gaya
Samar ke itni teji se zameen par takrane ki vajah se vaha maujud dhul charo aur fail jaati hai..lekin turant hi Trod upar se lagatar energy blast karne lagta hai..voh kuch der bina ruke lagatar energy bomb se Samar par vaar kar raha tha
Kuch der energy bomb fainkne ke baad Trod ruk jaata hai aur uss dhue me ghor se dekhte hue gehri gehri saans lene laga..jab kuch der baad voh dhua hata toh use Samar ki halki halki parchayi dikhayi deti hai jime Samar ne apne haatho ko chehre ke aage cross kiye rakha tha..aur Trod yeh dekhkar heran reh jaata hai ki Samar ko ek kharoch tak nahi aayi
Trod “amazing” voh samar ki aur dekhkar muskurane laga
Vahi Samar bhi dheere dheere apne haath niche karta hai aur muskurate hue apne bhai ki aur asmaan me dekhne laga
Tabhi achanak se Shivani unn dono par baras padti hai “stoppp, ab ek second ke liye bhi aap nahi ladoge” usne jutha gussa dikhate hue kaha
Ab Shivani ka hukum ho aur dono bhai naa maane aisa ho nahi sakta tha, Trod dheere dheere karte hue niche aata hai aur Samar ki aur haath badhate hue “good, kaafi improvement hai”
Trod ka haath pakadte hue Samar khada hua “aap hi ki badaulat hai..I got a best teacher”
Trod “nahi mere bhai, maana ki maine tuje apni powers ko control karna sikhaya hai..lekin mehnat toh teri hi hai”
Tab tak Shivani aur Aakruti vaha aajate hai “aap dono iss tarah ladna kab band karenge..??” shivani unn dono par chillate hue kehti hai
Samar “gudiya..hum ladd nahi rahe..” voh bolte hue ruk jaata hai
Shivani “hum training kar rahe hai..janti hu janti hu…huh” samar ki baat ko kaatkar use puri karte hue kehti hai
Trod “meri behna, itna gussa naa kiya kar, hume kuch nahi hoga”
Shivani “bade aaye hume kuch nahi hoga kehne vale…huh, aapko pata hai aap dono ke alawa mera koi nahi hai..agar aap mese kisi ek ko kuch ho gaya toh” voh halki si ruansi hokar kehti hai
Samar chalte hue shivani ke pass aaya aur uske gaal khichte hue bola “nautanki..kuch nahi hoga hume”
Shivani bhi samar ke sar par halke se marte hue “jaanti hu bhai, par muje dar lagta hai jab aap dono ese ladte ho, kya aap dono mere khatir normal insaano jesi training nahi kar sakte..??”
“Shivani..inke aage yeh kehna bekar hai, yeh hamari baat tab sunenge jab yeh insaan hote” aakruti bhi juth gussa dikhate hue kehti hai
Somewhere Else..Kuch duri par
“voh..voh kya tha manthan” pari ne manthan (mayank) ki aur dekhte hue pucha
Manthan bhi utna hi chaunka hua tha jitna pari, voh bina uski aur dekhe hue “muje nahi pata..mai khud yeh pehli baar dekh raha hu” voh ektak upar asmaan ki aur dekh raha tha jaha kuch der pehle Trod Samar par apne energy blast se vaar kar raha tha
Pari “kya matlab hai tera..?? hum tere earth par nahi hai..??” usne manthan ke haath pakadte hue kaha
Manthan apni najre Pari ki aur karta hai “maine tachyons dekhe..particle accelerator dekha, parallel Earth bhi dekhi..yanha tak ki maine Time-Wraith bhi dekha..usse lada bhi, par aajse pehle maine yeh kabhi nahi dekha jaha koi insaan hawa me udd raha ho”
Pari “iska kya matlab ho sakta hai..??” fir voh apne charo aur dekhte hue “manthan..baaki sab kaha hai..??”
Manthan bhi kuch samaj nahi raha tha ki yeh kya ho raha hai..voh fauran apni watch par kuch buttons press karta hai (jo akshita ki watch thi jisme Gideon ka software tha) “Gideon, yeh ho kya raha hai..?? hum kaha hai”
Gideon “Data Processing…” fir voh hologram Pari ki aur dekhte hue “nice to meet you mam”
Pari ek paal ke liye sochne lagti hai fir use yaad aaya ki Gideon use greet kyu raha hai “hello Gideon” apni cute si smile dete hue bolti hai
Gideon “sir, you are on Earth-48, In the year 2615”
Yeh sunkar Pari aur Manthan dono ek saath “what..??”
Manthan “Gideon..are you sure ki yeh ek aur Earth hai”
Gideon “Affirmative sir, maine apne algorithms aur Earth ki frequency se pata kiya hai ki hum iss waqt Earth-48 par hai”
Pari “par hum toh Earth-2 jaane vale the toh fir hum yanha par kese aagaye..?? aur baaki sab kaha hai..??”
Pari ki awaaz sunkar Gideon “mam, iss baat ka muje idea nahi hai..par shayad aisa lag raha hai ki aapki device theek se kaam nahi kar rahi” Manthan ki aur dekhte hue kehta hai
Manthan “kaam nahi kar rahi..?? kya matlab hai tumhara…??”
Gideon “sir..jo device aapne worm hole create karne ke liye use ki thi..voh worm hole me jaate hi malfunction ho gayi thi”
Manthan “toh kya yeh isi vajah se hua hai..??”
Gideon “I am not sure, mai uss device se properly link nahi hu..isiliye mai kuch bata nahi sakti”
Manthan “lekin gideon, mere pass itna time nahi hai ki mai iss device ko puri tarah study kar pau”
Gideon “sir, uski koi jarurat nahi hai..yeh watch ki technology itni capable hai ki mai apki watch aur extrapolator ko study kar sakta hu”
Manthan “okay Gideon..do it, and please find out ki hum yanha se bahar kese nikle..and baaki sab iss waqt kaha hai”
Gideon “okay sir”
Pari kuch sochte hue “Gideon..yeh konsa city hai..?? aur yanha voh insaan hawa me kese udd raha tha..??”
Gideon “Hum iss waqt East City me hai, and according to this Earth, voh ek alien hai” uske baad Gideon manthan ke extrapolartor ki circuits ko diangnos karne laga
Yeh sunkar manthan kuch soch raha tha, pari usko dekhte hue “kya baat hai manthan..?? kya soch raha hai”
Manthan “pari..agar yeh sach hai ki jise humne dekha voh ek alien hai..toh I think voh Zorian ho sakta..maana ki maine kabhi use apni aankho se nahi dekha..lekin voh alien hai.aur hawa me udd raha hai” voh bolte hue ruk jaata hai
Pari uski aur sawaliya bhari najro se dekhte hue bolti hai “haa toh..?? tu kahi usse ladne ke baare me toh nahi soch raha..??” voh halke gusse se kehti hai
Manthan “nahi pari..mai usse ladne ki nahi soch raha, but agar voh Zorian hai toh shayad voh iss Earth ko bhi tabah kar dega..mai soch raa hu ki hume vaha jaakar dekhna chahiye ki aakhir me voh kar kya rahe hai”
Pari “manthan..i know yeh tere liye kitna mayne rakhta hai, but tu jaanta hai ki voh kya kar sakte hai”
Manthan “haa par..Gideon ne yeh bhi kaha ki voh sirf ek alien hai”
Pari “ho sakta hai Gideon galat bhi ho”
Manthan “ho sakta hai..isiliye mai vanha jaane ke liye soch raha hu..unke baare me kuch toh pata chalega”
Pari “tune dekha na ki voh kya kar sakta hai” thodi pareshan hote hue boli
Manthan “mai uske samne nahi jayenge..promise” usne pari ke chehre ko apne haatho me lete hue kaha
Pari uski aankho me dekhkar “manthu, mai janti hu tu rukega nahi..but mai tere saath chalungi” uspar haq jatate hue kehti hai
Manthan ne pyaar se pari ki aankho me dekha aur uske haath ko pakadkar “thik hai, hum saath jayenge” aur fir voh dono uss aur chale jaate hai jaha unhone uss dhamake ko dekha tha
Kuch der chalne ke baad voh dono ek jungle ke pass pahuch jaate hai, aur uss jungle ko dekhkar voh ek baar ekdusre ki aur dekhte hai
“voh dhamaka yahin par hua tha, fir yeh ghar bacha hua kese hai” pari ne samne ek ghar ki aur ishara karte hue kaha
Manthan “hume chalkar dekhna chahiye” fir voh dono dheere dheere karte hue uss ghar ke pass pahuch jaate hai
Uss ghar ke pass pahuchte hi unhe jatka sa lagta hai..kyunki jo unhone dekha tha vaisa kuch tha hi nahi..balki ghar ke bahar unhe kuch log masti karte hue dikhte hai, aur unhe dekhkar Pari aur manthan ek dusre ke chehre dekhne lage
Vahi samne Shivani, Samar aur Aakruti masti kar rahe the ki achanak se Shivani ki najar Pari aur Manthan par padti hai “bhai..yeh log kaun hai..??”
Samar “kaun ho tum log” ne Manthan ki aur dekhte hue kaha
Samar ki awaaz sunte hi manthan bolta hai “tum sab thik ho..?? aur voh zorian..voh kaha gaya..??”
Samar kuch samaj nahi raha tha ki manthan ne kya bola “haa bhai, hum sab thik hai, lekin yeh Zorian..yeh kya cheez hai” usne sawaliya bhari najro se dekhte hue pucha
Tabhi achanak se Trod vaha par aaya “kya kaha…Zorians” usne thoda darte hue pucha
Samar aur Shivani Trod ki aur dekh rahe the aur uske chehre par darr ki lakire saaf dikh rahi thi, Shivani “bhai..aap thik toh haina..??”
Trod ne ek najar Shivani par daali lekin uski baat ka koi jawab nahi diya aur voh “Zorians…yeh kisne kaha” samar ki aur dekhkar usse sawal karta hai
Samar bhi kuch samaj nahi raha tha ki Trod aisa bartaav kyu kar raha hai, voh vese hi asamaj vale bhaav se “inhone” usne manthan ki aur ishara kiya
Manthan ne dekha ki ek mid-age matlab karib 45 saal ki umaar vala shaks unke samne tha..lekin sirf vahi ek tha jo Zorians ke naam se dar raha hai, Trod “kaun ho tum dono..?? aur Zorians..unka jikra kyu kiya..??”
Manthan “dekhiye mere pass itna waqt nahi hai ki mai aapke sawal ka jawab de paau, lekin yakin maniye yeh Earth bahut badi musibat me hai..maine kuch der pehle yanha..iss jungle ke upar asmaan me ek insaan ko udte dekha tha..vahi Zorian hai..voh iss earth ko bhi tabah kar denge”
Manthan ki baat sunkar Shivani Aakruti aur Samar hasne lagte hai, aur unhe hasta dekh Manthan aur Pari samaj nahi paate ki yeh aise kyu has rahe hai
Manthan “mai yanha seriously earth ke tabah hone ki baat kar raha hu..aur tum sab has rahe ho”
Samar “aur nahi toh kya..voh koi Zorians nahi tha”
Shivani “aapne jisne dekha voh mere bhai the..ha voh alien jarur hai..lekin Zorians nahi, mere dono bhai Nexon planet se aaye hai” usne Samar aur Trod ki aur ishara kiya “and relax, voh mere bhai hi the jinhone 6 mahine pehle hamari earth ko Argus se bachaya tha”
Yeh sunnkar Pari aur Manthan ko bahut bada jatka lagta hai, Manthan aur Pari kuch bhi samaj nahi paa rahe the ki unke saath aakhir me ho kya raha hai
Manthan ajeeb si shakal banate hue puchta hai “argus..?? ab yeh argus kaun hai..??”
Aakruti jo chup thi voh kuch sochkar “voh iss earth ko bhi tabah kar denge” voh manthan ki baat par bhar dete hue “isse tumhara kya matlab tha..??” usne manthan ki aur dekhte hue sawal kiya
Aakruti ki baat sunkar Samar aur shivani uski aur dekhne lage..unke chehre par jo muskurahat thi voh Aakruti ke pareshan chehre ko dekhkar gayab ho jaati hai, vahi Aakruti “bhai, aap itna dar kyu rahe hai..??” usne Trod ki aur dekhte hue kaha
Trod “Zorians..yeh impossible hai, yeh nahi ho sakta..Zorians sach nahi ho sakte” usne darte hue kaha aur manthan ki aur dekhte hue “tumhe aisa kyu lag raha hai ki Zorians hamari earth ko tabah kar denge”
Samar “bhai..aakhir baat kya hai..?? aap itna toh Argus ke liye bhi nahi dare the”
Manthan “koi muje bataega ki yaha par ho kya raha hai..?? I mean aliens, Nexons aur yeh Argus..yeh sab chal kya raha hai iss earth par”
Iske baad Samar apne planet ki puri kahani suna deta hai, kese voh iss planet par aaya..kese Argus ne dharti par hamla kiya aur kese WAR OF THE WORLDS ki ghatna ghati
Samar ki kahani khatam hone ke baad Aakruti “iss earth par..?? kya tum dusre dimensions se ho..??” ne sawaliya bhari najro se manthan ki aur dekhte hue sawal kiya
Samar ki kahani sunne ke baad manthan ko laga shayad unhe uski kahani samaj aasakti hai..isliye voh apni kahani unhe bata deta hai, jise sunne ke baad vaha kuch der ke liye sannata chaa jaata hai
Samar “ek aur earth..ek aur alien, kabhi socha nahi tha ki life muje yeh sab bhi dikhayegi”
Manthan “aap shayad Zorians ke baare me jaante hai..aap jaante hai ki voh kya kar sakte hai..please muje bataiye ki hum use kese roke”
Trod “agar jo tumne bataya voh sach hai..toh unhe roka nahi jaa sakta..they are invincible”
Samar haste hue “bhai, aap bhul gaye ki hum aliens hai..aur iss pure universe me sabse taqatwar”
Trod “janron, lada unse jaata hai jiska astitva ho, maana ki hum iss universe ki ek powerful race se belong karte hai..but they are not aliens…they are something else”
Samar “mai kuch samja nahi bhai” voh trod ko dekhkar khud pareshan ho jaata hai..kyunki 6 mahino me yeh pehli baar tha jab Trod ne usko uske asli naam se bulaya ho
To be continued…
Arey... maa ke bete... ?? Bc kuch solution nhi mila zorian ko pelne ka to WOW ghused di bich me... dhat teri ki.... Do kahani mix krna chutiyapa h dost.. pahle to aisa villain create kr liya baad me usko thikane lagane k liye experiment krne lage story se... Galat dost... Galat... Lekin apna maal Aakruti... Mmmuuaaahhh ????
Maine jaise hi update padha Trod and Samar, main smjha gya kar diya jhandugiri... Gayi bhaish pani me... ?
Agar manthan trod se help lene aaye h to thik h.... Zorians ki kuch kahani pata chale unki kuch kamjori pata chale to thik h... Lekin iss yudh me WOW??? To koi interest nhi rahega mera story me... ???
Aur haa mere guess bhai sahi ho na ho...Wo to main apna logic lagata hu... Story ko likhne aur change karne ka haq aap ko h... Writer ji... Koi farak nhi padta h, mera guess sahi ho na ho... Qki apan reader h writer thodi na... ??? Ab tum humse hi bet lagane lage guess me to apki samjhi h writer shahab ?????
ye to na ghar ka rha na ghat ka, na earth1 ka na earth2 ka... Dekhte hain yahan se isko kya help milti hai.... Inke Baaki dost kahan fas gye ye bhi dekhna hai... Intjar rahega next update ka 
ab tak aap hi samaj paaye ki yeh update me exactly hua kya tha 
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