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Which part is better in Strange World Series? (strange world series ka konsa part behtar hai?)


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Milan2010

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Update 4
Jada acha to nhi tha pichle update jaisa hi jholjhal wala hi tha.. ek guess h ye pichle story k end me mayank jab inter dimensional explorator use kr k hamare earth se apne earth me jata h tab kahi direct wo yaha aa ke to nhi pahucha ? Qki ho sakta h uska earth destroy ho chuka ho...? Dekhte h kya hota h... Ye Mayank yaha kaise ayega... ? Aur ye dinosaurs ka kuch to jhol h... Ye kisi dusri earth se to nhi aye h jaha purana time chalu ho aur trans dimensional travelling kar ke aa gye ho galti se kahi gate open ho gya ho...
:thanks: ankit bhai :dost:
bhai kuch bhi ho sakta hai
bhai dinosuars ka toh pata nahi h ki kese aaye par voh aakar masti jarur kar rahe h zorinas ki baja kar :D
 

Milan2010

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Update 5
Ye wala dhansu update tha dost... Sam ne to dinosaurs ka jhol hi khatam kar diya... Lekin kya malum kab kya ho jaye.. aur ye Oculus Protocol kya h bhai... Lagta h zorians ki g*nd maarne ka Hathiyar ??... isme lagta h mutual dono side ka nuksaan jada h iss protocol me.. isliye commander use krne se mana kr rha h.
:thanks: ankit bhai :dost:
haaha bhai, isiliye toh akshita sam ko resgin nahi karne de rahi thi
haa oculus protocol kuch kuch aisa hi hai
 
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Milan2010

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Acha update bidu... Ye agar strange world 2 h to first part se kab relate hogi bhai.. ye story me utna maja nhi aa rha h... Aur rahi baat oculus protocol ki jo time traveling h to isska naam DEXTER PROTOCOL rakhne ka tha.. qki dexter b to time ka hi part tha na ??? hahaha. Aur ye Sam chaman chutiya ek maal ko bachane k chakkar me duniya ke baki maal ke bhi L lagane ja rha tha.. pelo pakad ke sale ko ache se.. ? Ye Zorians ko achchhe se झवणे ( its a marathi word, google this) ka... ????
:thanks: ankit bhai :dost:
strange world ke jese hi toh lafde ho rahe hai, relate toh pehle se hi ho rakhi h :D
ha bhai, yeh story straight forward hai, par aage jaakar bahut se jhol hone vale h :cmouth:
haa bhai, maaro uss sam ko :slap:
apun ko naa ata marathi :nana:
 

Milan2010

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Update 7
Ye Sam to ek najar me hi ghayal ho gya Aksh k liye, Just like Milu ???

Lekin story is going very slow man.. where are you ? You have started this story on March 19 aur ek saal me sirf 17 updates... ? Sharam karo mitra... Sale tere laptop me kide padenge agar time pe update nhi diye to...?????? next update padhta hu...
hahahaha bhai
bich me likhna chod diya tha maine isiliye itne kam updates h
aap nahi thena review dene k liye :slap:
bhai lappy ko kuch hua to yeh story khtm nahi hogi
lappy me puri story ka data rakha hua h :D
 

Milan2010

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Update 8

Sam aksh ko kaise dhundha ye pata chala hume lekin kya fayda tha itna lamba chauda explanation dene ka. Khali fukhat adha update barbad kiya dost. Tu khud directly short cut me kisi update me likh sakta tha Aksh kaise ayi uski team me aur Sam k Maa Baap k bare me b short me nikal sakta tha tu... Isse acha ye story ko iss update me aage badhate aap. Khair chhodo age Bakchodi karte h, aur aate h Oculus pe... ?? Ek bahut farzi guess kar rha hu... Time force ya time line me back jaa ke Void (means Blank Space or faltu chiz) remove kroge fir bahut bada jhol hota h future me... Isse lag raha h kahi time traveling kar ke Sam Jab wapas ayega to Aksh usko bhul chuki hogi... matlab aisa hoga ki Aksh usko Janti hi nhi hogi... Kahani ke main character ke hi na L*ude lag jaye... ??
bhai, kuch updates aur kuch characters ki need hoti hai
jaanta hu aapko love story pasand nahi aati, par yeh story ki ek need hoti hai jo character aur story dono ko ek saath pakad kar rakhti hai
i hope shayad aap samaj rahe honge ki yeh dono updates ki story me need kyu thi :dost:
haa ho sakta hai bhai, kyunki commander uss zchiz ko use karne k liye mana kar raha hai
dekhte hai sam kya karta hai
:thanks: ankit bhai :dost: The_lost_love
 

Milan2010

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Update : 18 (Ek aur Baar)

Voh jese jese chalte hue aage badh raha tha, uske dimaag me bhi uss manjar ki har ek tasweer ubhar ke uske aankho ke samne aa rahi thi, jo manjar usne dexter ke andar dekha tha voh ek-ek pal aaj uski aankho ke samne mandla raha tha, use kuch bhi samaj me nahi aa raha tha ki voh iss waqt kese react kare

Tabhi use achanak se voh chiz dikh jaati hai, jise dekhkar uska pura sharir hil jaata hai, use itne jyada gussa aata hai ki voh chillakar kehta hai “naaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii”

Ab aage….

Yanha ke haalat dekhkar Manthan ka dimaag chakrane laga tha, kabhi voh is taraf dekhta toh kabhi uss taraf dekhta..lekin har baar use sirf aur sirf tabahi hi dikhayi de rahi thi
Aur iss tarah ke haalat ko dekhkar uske dimaag me bahut saari baate ghum rahi thi, kahi dimaag me kahi sawaal umad rahe the lekin uske pass kisi bhi sawal ka koi jawab nahi tha “mere toh kuch bhi samaj me nahi aa raha hai, aakhir yeh..yeh kese ho sakta hai” ekak use voh yaad aata hai jab usne Dexter ko chune ke waqt dekha tha “yaani uss din jo Dexter ne muje apna bhavishya dikhaya tha, voh sahi tha” fir voh apne haath me rahi watch ki aur dekhte hue kehta hai “kaash ke iss waqt mere pass Gideon hota, muje voh laptop vanha chodkar nahi aana chahiye tha”
Manthan ke pass Gideon ki chip jarur thi, lekin voh use istemaal nahi kar sakta tha, kyunki Gideon ka pura software Manthan (Earth-1) ke laptop me tha

Rajendra “ek min, tu yeh bhul raha hai” usne Gideon ki chip dete hue kaha

Manthan “nahi papa..yeh maine aapke liye hi rakhi thi”


Rajendra “thanks beta, par sach kahu toh yeh earth abhi Gideon ke liye taiyaar nahi hai, hum jese hai hi vese thik hai”

Manthan samaj jaata hai ki Rajendra ne aisa kyu kaha tha, isiliye voh bhi jyada behas nahi karta aur uss chip ko lekar apni watch me fit kar deta hai


Iss tarah ki tabahi dekhne ke baad uske mann me ek hi khayaal aata hai “muje kisi bhi haal me jald se jald CDC lab pahuchna hoga, sirf vahi ek jagah hai jaha se mai Gideon ko dubara access kar sakta hu” lekin jo nazaare uske samne the use dikhkar ek baar uska dil thoda sa dagmaga jaata hai fir voh apne charo aur dekhte hue kehta hai “iss haalat me mai CDC lab kese pahuchunga..?? aur agar CDC lab bhi ke bhi yeh halaat honge tab kya..??” fir voh apni aankhe band karte hue “mai toh yeh bhi nahi janta ki iss waqt me kanha par hu..?? yeh bhi toh ho sakta hai ki mai apne earth par naa aakar kisi aur hi earth par aagaya hu” sawaal toh kahi saare the, lekin kisi ek ka bhi jawab Manthan ke pass filhaal nahi tha

Uski aankho ke samne jo najaare the thik vese hi tasweer usne apne bhavishya ki dekhi thi “Jo kuch bhi dexter ne muje dikhaya tha voh aaj sahi saabit ho raha hai, Hamari prithvi ka ant ese hoga yeh muje Dexter ne bahut pehle hi dikhaya diya tha, par kyu..?? Dexter muje yeh kyu dikhana chahta tha, ya fir kuch aisa hai jo mere ke samaj ke bahar hai”

Ek pal ke liye uske maann me yah bhi vichar aata hai “kya muje yanha se vaapas jaana chahiye..??” kuch sochkar voh extrapolator ko press karne hi jaa raha tha ki achanak se uski najar ek roshni par padi

Uss roshni ki raftaar ko dekhkar Manthan ko yeh samajne me der nahi lagi ki voh kya chiz hai, Manthan ko gussa bhi aa raha tha aur uske dimaag me kahi saari baate ghum rahi thi, voh uss roshni ko dekhkar fauran uske aur jaane laga, tabhi uski najar thode dur par khade Sam par padi jo iss baat se bekhakar tha ki voh uss teji se aati hui roshni ke raste me khaada hai
Manthan daudte hue hi teji se chillata hai “nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo” aur usne Sam ko dhakka markar gira diya aur voh khud uss roshni ke bich me aagaya

Yeh vahi roshni thi jo kuch der pehle Sam aur baakiyo ke samne se gujari thi, Manthan apni pura taqat lagakar uss jeev ko rokne ki koshish kar raha tha jo uss roshni ke andar thi, Manthan ke iss tarah se uss jeev ko rokne ki vajah se vaha ekdum se charo aur tej roshni fail jaati hai, uss roshni ki tivrata itni jyada badh gayi thi ke vanha maujud har kisiko apni aankho ko band karna pada

Lekin shayad manthan ka uss jeev ko rok paana bahut hi jyada muskil tha, uss jeev ki taqaat itni jyada thi ki manthan ke pair ladkhadane lage aur voh apne ghutno ke bal aagaya, lekin fir bhi manthan haar mann ne ko taiyaar nahi tha
Par kehte haina ki insaan ke taqat ki ek had hoti hai, voh jeev apni taaqat se Manthan ko piche ghasine laga..dheere dheere karte hue uss jeev ki rafter badhne lagi thi..aur jeev manthan ko thik uss aur ghasit raha tha janha abhi bake le log maujud the

Manthan ab uss jeev ke aage kamjor padne laga tha, use ehsaas ho gaya tha ki ab voh jyada der uss jeev ko nahi rok paayega, voh vese hi bina piche dekhe chillata hai “get away, gooooo, mai ise jyada der tak nahi rok paunga, go noww” voh chillate hue sabko vaha se jaane ke liye kehta hai

Manthan ki awaaz sunkar Sam turant khud ko sambhal leta hai aur voh akshita ko pakad kar vaha se dur jaane laga, manthan ki awaaz sunkar pathik aur Aarav bhi yahi karte hai
Pathik muskil se uss roshni ke aage apni aankhe khuli rakh paa raha tha, iske bawjood bhi baar baar uss ladke ki aur dekh raha tha jo iss waqt uss roshni ki chapet me the, uss ladke ki awaaz sunkar Pathik ke mann me bas yahi chal raha tha “yeh..yeh awaaz, yeh manthan hi hai” ki yeh shaks aur koi nahi balki uska dost Manthan hai

Jese hi sablog thode dur ho gaye, manthan ne apne hathiyaar daal diye, uske aisa karte hi vaha par ek tej dhamaaka hua aur uske saath hi Manthan hawa me uchal kar gir pada aur voh jeev 1 second ke andar hi vanha se gayab ho gaya
Kuch der ke liye hi sahi par uss jagah ko dhamake ki roshni ne apni chapet me le liya tha, jab voh roshni dheere dheere kam hui toh Sam daudte hue uss shaks ke pass gaya jisne abhi uski jaan bachayi thi
Sam “thank you so much” kehte hue voh Manthan ko khada karta hai

Akshita, pathik aur Aarav tino hi yanha aajate hai, aur Manthan ko dekh Aarav ka gussa fut padta hai, aur vahi apne dost ko dekhkar Pathik ki khushi uske chehre par jalakne lagi

Sam “kaun ho toh tum..?? aur vo..vvohhh kya chiz thi..??”

Manthan “yakeen kar mere bhai, agar maine keh bhi diya tab bhi tu yakeen nahi kar paayega”

Pathik turant hi aakar Manthan ke gale lagta hai “bhai, tu zinda hai..?? muje laga tha ki…” voh iske aage kuch nahi keh paata

Manthan ne abhi tak Pathik aur Aarav ko nahi dekha tha, kyunki voh sab uske piche se aate hai, vahi Pathik ki yeh harkat dekhkar Sam aur akshita kuch samaj nahi paa rahe the, Pathik fir usse alag hote hue Sam ko kehta hai “yeh manthan hai, jiske baare me maine bataya tha”

Koi kuch kehta uske pehle aarav aakar gusse me ek mukka Manthan ke chehre par jad deta hai “kyu..?? kyu maara meri behan ko” aur voh manthan ka gala dabane laga

Aarav ko dekhkar Manthan samaj jaata hai ki usne aisa kyu kiya, voh bas haklate hue itna kehta hai “I am sorry, I am really sorry”

Aarav ke iss bartav ko dekhkar voh Manthan ko chudata hai, aur aarav ko samjate hue “aarav, shant hoja, please mere bhai yeh waqt aapass me ladne ka nahi hai, hume saath milkar yeh ladayi ladni hogi”

Aarav “mai ek khooni ke saath kabhi kaam nahi kar sakta” kehte hue voh vanha se jaane lagta hai

Manthan usko rokne ki koshish karta hai, lekin Pathik ne Manthan ko rok diya aur use kahi saare sawaal karne laga “nahi bhai, iss waqt use jaane de, par tu bacha kese..?? aur tu..tu 1.5 saal se kaha tha..??”

Pathik ko vapas dekhkar Manthan bhi kaafi khush tha, lekin Pathik ki aakhri baat sunkar manthan puri tarah se hil jaata hai “kya kanha tune..?? 1.5 saal..??” fir voh apne mann me kehta hai “1.5 saal..yeh kese possible ho sakta hai, mai toh vanha par sirf 8 mahine hi ruka tha” filhaal voh iss baare me jyada nahi sochta, “yaani yeh meri hi earth hai, aur maine apni hi earth ki tabahi ko dekha tha, par kese..?? kya hua tha uss raat ko..??” fir voh pathik se sawaal karta hai “bhai, yeh sab ..yeh sab kese hua..?? kahi yeh sab hamare experiment ki vajah se toh nahi hua..??”

Pathik naa mein apna sar hilate hue kehta hai “nahi bhai, yeh CDC lab ke experiment ki vajah se nahi hua” voh thoda rukkar “hum par hamla hua hai, Aliens ka, yeh sab unhi ne kiya hai, bhai unhone sabkuch tabah kar diya, sirf gine chune log hi ab iss duniya me bache hue hai”

Manthan par yeh baat kisi bomb ki tarah lagti hai, voh apne charo aur dekhta toh kabhi Pathik ki aur dekhta, fir voh sam ki aur dekhte hue kehta hai “yeh dono kaun hai”

Sam “agar maine bata diya toh tuje yakeen nahi hoga”

Yeh sunkar manthan sam ki aur ajeeb najro se dekhne lagta hai, toh pathik use samjate hue kehta hai “haa bhai, yeh sach keh raha hai, hamare saath bahut kuch hua hai, jispar yakeen karna bahut hi muskil hai”

Manthan “try me, kyunki jin haalat se mai gujara hu, usse toh jyada namumkin aur kuch nahi ho sakta”

Pathik “bhai, base par chalkar tuje sab kuch bata denge, par tune mere sawaal ka jawaab nahi diya”

Manthan apne haath par jo chot lagi thi, uspar rumaal lagte hue kehta hai “yeh bahut hi lambi kahani hai bhai, baad me bataunga”

Fir voh sab chalte hue base ki aur jaane lagte hai, toh mayank kehta hai “aliens, yeh kab aaye yanha par..?? aur kya sach me muje yanha se gaye hue 1.5 saal ho gaya hai..??”

Sam “yeh bhi bahut lambi kahani hai” jaahir hai sam ko manthan ka iss tarah se aana aur kuch naa batana use pasand nahi aaya tha, isiliye voh baar baar vahi baate dohraye jaa raha hai jo Manthan insa kehta hai

Manthan fir ek baar sam ki aur dekhta hai lekin kuch kehta nahi, Pathik sochte hue kehta hai “haa manthan, tuje yanha se gaye hue karib 16 mahine beet chuke hai”

Akshita “thanks, sam ko bachane ke liye”

Sam fir apna sawaal dohrate hue “par voh tha kya..?? uss roshni ke andar kuch toh tha”

Manthan haa mein apna sar hilaata hai “haa, voh ek aisa jeev hai jiske baare me jaanna humare insaani dimaag ke bahar hai”

Sam “kisi bhi chiz ki raftar itni tej nahi ho sakti, aur jo cheez itne teji se chal rahi hai use rokna ek aam insaan ke baas ka nahi hai” voh manthan par shak jatate hue kehta hai

Manthan haste hue sam ki baat ka jawaab deta hai “ha sahi kaha bhai, par yakeen maan mai insaan hi hu, bas thoda sa alag hu isiliye shayad tuje yeh ajeeb lag raha hai”

Kuch der chalne ke baad yeh sab base par aajaate hai, Manthan vanha ke haalat dekh nahi paata, yanha ke halat toh itne jyada kharab honge voh sapne me bhi nahi soch paa raha tha, use bas ab sabkuch janna tha ki aakhir me yanha par hua kya tha
Pathik sabko side me aane ke liye kehta hai aur kuch der ke baad Siddhi vanha par aajati hai
Siddhi ke aate hi Manthan ki najar uss par jaati hai, Unn dono ki hi najre ek pal ke liye aapass me mil jati hai, par Manthan jyada der uski aankho me nahi dekh paaya aur apni najre Siddhi par se hata deta hai

Manthan ke jinda hone ki khabar Aarav ne use pehle hi de di thi, aur jab usne Manthan ko apni aankho ke samne dekha toh uski khushi ka thikana nahi tha, unn dono ke bich me jo kuch bhi hua tha uske baad bhi kahi na kahi Siddhi ke mann me aaj bhi Manthan ke liye feelings thi, shayad isi vajah se manthan ke iss tarah ka bartaav voh sehan nahi kar paati hai, use samaj me gaaya tha ki Manthan aaj bhi usse utni hi nafrat karta hai jitni pehle karta tha, aur iss baat ka usse bahut hi jyada dukh ho raha tha
Voh chalte hue Manthan ke pass aati hai, aur uska haath pakad te hue kehti hai “I am sorry” lekin manthan kuch nahi bolta “ab tak naaraz hai mujse..??”

Manthan naa mein apna sar hilaate hue kehta hai “kyu..?? kyu kiya tha tune aisa”

Manthan ki awaaz jab uske kaano me padi toh Siddhi khud ko sambhal nahi paayi, uski aankho se aansu nikal aate hai “I am sorry manthan..really sorry, par mai majboor thi, maine kabhi bhi nahi socha tha ki tu mujse pyaar karne lagega, muje laga tha ki hum sirf achche dost hai”

Manthan “yeh baat tu pehle bhi toh muje bata sakti thi”

Siddhi “I am sorry manthan, mai jaanti hu ki tune yeh baat muje kabhi nahi batayi thi, par kya karu..mai bas darr gayi thi, uss waqt muje aur kuch nahi suj raha tha, par tere jaane ke baad muje realise hua ki maine kitni badi galti kar di thi..I am really sorry, janti hu maine tuje bahut hurt kiya hai, par kya tu muje kabhi maaf kar paayega..??” usne ek sawaal manthan ke liye choda

Manthan “haa siddhi, maine tuje kabka maaf kar diya hai, shayad galti meri bhi thi, muje iss tarah se react nahi karna chahiye tha” aur voh apne haath se Siddhi ke chehre se aansuo ko hata deta hai

Uske baad Siddhi ek baar Manthan ke gale milti hai “I am very happy ki tu zinda hai”

Sam kehta hai “ab agar tumhara milan khatam hua hai toh kya hum kuch kaam ki baat kare..??”

Manthan “thik hai, mai sabkuch bataunga, par pehle muje yeh janna hai ki what the hell is going on here”

To be continued…
 

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