UPDATE NO - 148(B) post kar diya hai dosto.
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Sukriya A.B.KING bhai.Superb update
Haa bhai fas to gaye hai. Lakin aaj ke Update me aur jyada bura hoga kuch inke sath. Jst wait and watch.Fas gaye vahot buri tarah se sabke sab or isme bechar ek mar bhi gaya kriti ko tow Rider n bacha lia nahi woh bhi ooper pahoch jati
Baherhal dekhte h kon bach ker aata h or wahi dafan ho jata h
Badhiya zaberdast shaandaar update bhai
Sukriya Black water bhai.Awesome fabulous update Bhai
Sukriya Arvind Sharma bhai.nice updates
Bahut Hi Gajab Update Bro...
Bahut Hi bahtreen update hai bhai...
Bahut bhut sukriya ROAN R bhai.Awesome Update Bro ...
Ab ye sb baat to aap aaj aur kal ke Update me clear ho hi jayega.Mujhe to lagta hai yeh Namit ki karastanni hai jisse Rider aur sabhi log isi dungeon mein khatam ho jaye ...
Tabhi toh dungeon ka colour hi change ho gya aur level hi badh gya hai ...
Aapne kuch bate too sahi sochi hai Sandeep singh nirwan bhai. Aur wo kya hai ye to aapko aage hi pata chlega. Aur haa yaha abhi aur bhi jyada bhsad machane wali hai. Aap bs dekhte jayiye bhai.Namit full mood mai h marne ke aur usne planning bi kar li h ....par abi tak ye suspence h ki red gate achanak se kaise .....aur toh aur ice elves ke aura ko rider sense tak nahi kar paya matlab ghamasan hone wala h gate ke andar aur gine chune log he bachenge....ab bus
Akhir Nomit ne apne phone me kya kiya tha car me baithe huye, kya Usne sirf rider ki info hi dekhi thi Ya kuchh or...UPDATE - 48
Ab tak aapne dekha dosto ki kaise mai, kirti se milta hu aur use ek raid ke liye le jata hu taki wo smjh ske uske aur baki hunturs ke bich kya antar hai. Namit bhi delhi me aa gaya tha. Use lene aur us pr najar rakhne ke liye Monitoring division ka Anurag airport gaya tha. Fir mai White Tiger guild ke Manoj ko bol kr ek C Rank DENGOUN ke gate me jane ki request krta hu. Unke baki Recruit ke sath hum gate ke ander jate hai tbhi wo change ho kr Red gate me change ho jata hai.
AB AAGE...
Anurag , Namit ko airport se receive krke ek mast lack car me drive krte hue le ja raha tha.
Namit car me piche aaram se baitha hua tha.
Namit ( Car ko ek look dekh kr ) " Nice car. "
Anurag ( drive krte hue ) " Lakin, fir bhi ye Kisi S Rank ke Hunter ke travel krne ke liye kafi nahi hai. "
Namit ( window se bahar dekhte hue ) " Well , such kahu to jis speed se ye car chl rahi hai isase acha to mai bhag kar jana pasand krunga. "
Ye sun ke Anurag car ke speed meter ki taraf dekhta hai. Jo ki 90 - 100 km / hour ki speed show kr rahi thi.
Namit ( Anurag se ) " Koi baat nahi, ye batao ki mere bhai ka antim sanskar kaisa raha . "
Anurag " Hme uski body DENGEON sebahr nahi la sake usase phle hi time khtam ho gaya tha. Aur uska antim sanskar privetly kiya gaya. "
" Kya tum uski jaha kabr hai waha jana cahoge ? "
Namit ( wapas bahar dekhte hue ) " Mujhe mare hue logo me koi interest nahi hai. "
" Mujhe kewal mere bhai ke mari hui body me interest hai. "
Anurag " To fir tum kaha jana pasand karoge ? "
Namit " Jahir si baat hai iska answer ek DENGEON hai. "
( Evil smile ke sath ) " Mai use ek DENGEON me dundunga. "
" Ghtiya hunturs pakka ek DENGEON me hi milte hai. "
Anurag ( Namit ko dekhte hue ) " Tum unhe India ke countless no. Of gate me aakhir kaise dundhoge. Tumne kuch socha hai ? "
Tab... Tab... Tab...
Namit apna phone nikal kr usme kuch krne lagta hai aur kahta hai " 21th century me ye koi badi problem nahi hai. "
" E Rank Rider, aisa lagta hai ki wo jst abhi kuch der phle hi ek DENGEON me enter hua hai. "
" DENGEON ke ander ke rule is bahari duniya ke rule se bilkul alga hota hai. "
" Ye to tum jante hi hoge ? "
" Mai unhe wahi ander maar kar dfna du ya nahi, isase tmhara koi matlab nahi hona cahiye. "
Anurag ( santi se ) " Haaa !! "
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INSIDE THE DENGEON
Hum sb DENGEON ke ander khich chuke the. Aur waha charo taraf bs snow hi snow faili hui thi. Uche -2 ped the. Show continuously gir rahi thi. Bhut hi tej thandi hawa bhi chl rahi thi.
Sare tree bhi snow se lade pade the. DENGEON ka gate bhi gayab ho cuka tha. Ye sb dekh kr sare hunturs ek dusre se dar aur surprise se kahne lagte hai.
" Ye kya hai ? "
" Ye to kisi DENGEON ki tarah nahi dikh raha hai. "
" sath me Gate bhi gayab ho cuka hai. "
Mai ( chro taraf dekhte hue apne man me ) ' Mujhe yaha abhi tak Kuch bhi ajib aur shuk karne jaisa feel nahi hua hai. '
' Kya is gate ne hm sub ko simply bs yaha transfer kr diya hai ? '
Kirti ( mujhse ) " Uhmmm... Kya yaha hmare sath kuch galat hua hai ? "
HISSS...... HISSS.......
Tabhi bahut speed se do ice ke bane hue ekdam sharp arrow hmare group ki taraf aate hai. Jinme se ek ka nishana kirti ka face tha.
TAK......
In aate hue Arrow ko mai aasani se dekh leta hu aur turant hi apne left hath ko aage karke mai kirti ke samne wale Arrow ko pakd leta hu.
GUPP...... Aaahhhh........
DHADAAMMMM............
Lakin dusra Arrow ja kr sidhe ek huntur ke sir ke aar paar ho jata hai. Aur wo wahi khtam ho jata hai.
Ahhhhh..... Ahhhhh.....
Kirti aur baki sare hunturs ye sb dekh kr ekdam se dar jate hai. Jinme se kuch ki to dar se chik hi nikal jati hai.
Aur sb hunturs chillate hue kahne lagte hai.
" Ye kya hai ? "
" Koi chup kr ghat lagaye hue hum pr hmla kr raha hai. "
" Us tree ke upar dekho. "
" Yahi log hai wo. "
Hum sb log arrow jidhar se aaya tha usi director me upar tree ki taraf dekhte hai.
Waha tree ke dalo pr 2 log khade dikhayi dete hai. Unke sath me bow and arrow tha. Sath me unki aakhe blue color ki chmak rahi thi. Lakin unka face nahi dikh raha tha hme.
Kuch huntur chilla padte hai " ICE ELVES ?"
Mai ( unko dekhte hue apne man me) ' ICE ELVES, itni duri se bhi mai inko sense nahi kr paya. '
Jo inse kabhi mila hua nahi rahte hai. Wo inke liye ICE ELVES ka word use krte hai.
Lakin jo inka samna kisi fight me kar cuke hote hai. Wo inke liye ek dusre word ka use krte hai .
Wo ELVES jaise beautiful word ki taraf nahi hota hai. We unko hunturs ko bina daya dikhaye , bahut hi khatarnak tarike se marne ke liye aisa kahte hai.
" HYAKKI "
Iska matlab hota hai ' Night Parade of One Hundred Demon ' . Mtlb ye itne jyada khatarnak hote hai ki inmen 100 deamon ke equal strength hoti hai.
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OUTSIDE THE GATE
WHITE TIGER GUILD'S ke Master Sachin ab tak Red Gate ki jagah pr aa chuke the.
Tap... Tap... Tap....
BUZZZZZZ....... BUZZZZZZ......
Wo chl kr Gate ke paas kr usko touch karte apna hath ander dalne ki kosis krte hai.
Sachin " Ye bahut tightly band ho cuka hai. "
" Ye to musibat ki baat ho jayegi. "
" Kya ye C Rank gate nahi tha ? "
Manoj " Aap sahi kah rahe hai sir ye C Rank Gate hi tha. "
Sachin ( Manoj se ) " Kya tumne Indian Hunturs Guild ko call kiya ? "
Manoj ( nirash hote hue ) " Ha maine kiya tha. "
" Lakin wo hme pagal bana rahe hai. Aur kah rahe hai ye pakka C Rank Gate hi hai. "
Sachin ( gusse se daat piste hue ) " Wo sale harami. "
( Apne man me ) ' Red Gaye kewal Higher Rank ke gates me Appear hota hai. '
' wo kahna cahte hai wo magical energy is gate ke dusre side ke different world se aa rahi hai wo bs ek C Rank Gate ki jitni hai ? '
' Isme jarur kuch galtiya hui hai. Quki jo Gaye mere samne khada hai wo km se km B Rank ka to hai hi. '
' agar hum badkismati hue ho yeA Rank ya usase bhi higher ka ho skta hai. '
Manoj " Kya hum is gate ko apne Magical energy sensor se measure kre ? "
Sachin " Jb se Gate Red color me badal gaya hai. Uske baad se Magical energy flow hona band ho cuka hai. To ye karne ka koi fayda nahi hai. "
" Abhi ki current Status ke hisab se , aisa koi bhi rasta nahi hai jisase hum is gate ki ranking ka pata laga sake. "
" Hmare kitne members Gate ke andar gaye hai ? "
Manoj " 12 log sir. "
Sachin " Aur unme se kitne log high Rank wale hai ? "
Manoj " Unme se ek A Rank Vikash hai jise is Raid ka Leader banaya gaya hai. Aur 7 B Rank huntur hai. "
Sachin ( apne man me ) ' Ek A Rank aur 7 B Rank huntur... '
Vinay ( Gate ki taraf dekhte hue ) " Kya new recruit's thik honge ? "
Sachin ( apne man me ) ' Ye Gate pakka Ya to B Rank ya A Rank ka hoga. '
' Mai S Rank hone ki probability nikal deta hu jiske wajagh se puri country khatre me aa skti hai. '
( Gate ki taraf dekh kr bakiyo se kahte hue ) " Agar ye ek B Rank DENGOUN hai to ise clear krne ke liye kam se kam 3 A Rank hunturs ki jarurat padegi. "
" Lakin Agr ye ek A Rank DENGEON hai to ise clear krne ke liye km se km Ek S Rank aur 10 A Rank hunturs ki jarurat padegi. "
" Is liye agr ye ek A Rank DENGEON hai to, hmare liye yahi acha hoga ki hum sbko mara hua hi smjhe. "
" Lakin aur wo lucky hua to mere khyal se sayad 2 ya 3 A Rank aur B Rank hunturs jinda wapas aa jayenge. "
Manoj ( Thoda darte hue ) " D... Darsal Sir !! baat aisi hai ki do aur log is Gate ke andar gaye hai jo hamre Guild ka hissa nahi hai. "
Sachin ( piche mud kr Manoj se ) " Aur wo do log kon hai ? "
Manoj " Unme se ek Huntur aisa hai jis pr haal me hi meri najar padi hai. "
Sachin ( intrest ke sath ) " Ek huntur jine Chief Manoj ko majboor kr diya us pr najar rakhne ko ? "
Manoj " Ji aap bikul thik kah rahe hai. "
Sachin " Aur us huntur ki Ranking kya hai ? A ya B Rank ? "
Manoj santi se apna sir bs naa me hila deta hai.
Sachin " To kya Ek S Rank huntur is Gate ke ander hai ? "
Manoj ( ek lambhi saas lete hue ) " Nahi !! Wo ek E Rank huntur hai. "
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INSIDE THE DENGEON
Hmare samne ek huntur ki body padi hui thi jisko un ELVES ne mara tha.
Mai ( uski body ko dekh ke apne man me kahta hu ) ' Inki najre bahut tej hai. '
' Inhone hmare Attack force me se 2 sbse kamjor huntur ko itni dur se bhi dekh liya. '
( ELVES ki taraf dekh kr ) ' Agr yahi 2month phleki baat hoti to inme se ek arrow ka nishana meri taraf hota. '
Mai dhyan se dekhta hu to ab mujhe unka face bhi saaf dikh raha hota hai. Undono ke kaan lambe aur nukile the. Dono smile kr rahe hote hai.
Tabhi Unme se ek apne anguthe se mujhe chidata hai. Sayad jo Arrow maine pakda tha wo isi ka tha.
TADAK......
Mai ye dekh kr apne hath me pakde hue us ice ke arrow ko tod deta hu. Aur smile krte hue unko dekh kr kud se kahta hu ' Ohh.... !!! ' Mai tmhe apne hatho se marunga. '
Run.... Run.....
Aur uske hi agle second dono waha pedo se bhut teji se gayab ho jate hai.
Hum sb abhi ye sb dekh hi rahe the ki vikash kahta hai " Mere khyal se to Mujhe nahi lagta ki ye hmara swagat kar rahe the. "
" Mujhe pakka nahi pata ki tum logo me se kitne log is situation ko smjh rahe ho. Lakin mai bata du ki hum sub ek Red Gate ke ander hai. "
" Hum yaha se tab tk bahar nahi ja skte jb tak ki, ya to hum sare yahi mare jaye ya fir isase phle Gate open ho jaye. "
Jo hunturs ye baat nahi jante the wo sb ye sunte hi shocked ho jate hai aur dar se kahte hai.
" Ek Red GATE ? "
Kirti ( mujhse ) " Sir ! Ye Red Gate kya hota hai ? "
Mai " Ye ek special Gate hota hai jo hme ek dusre world se jodta hai. "
" Ek baar agr hmne iske andar kadam rakh diya to ye puri tarah se band ho jata hai. Aur bahar se hmari madad ko koi bhi iske ander nahi aa skta hai. "
" Ye ek aisi jagah hai jaha se hum tb tak bach kr bhag nahi skte jb tak ki hum ya to Boss Monster ko na maar de ya fir ye Gate apne aap open na ho jaye. "
" Sidhe sabdo me kahe to hum yaha bahut buri tarah fas chuke hai. "
Aaj ke liye bs itna hi dosto !!
Aapke review nd suggestions ka wait rahega comments ke through !!
Apna pyar aise hi banaye rakhiye !!
Sukriya Aaryapatel bhai.Excellent work bhai..... awesome update
Ab wo to aapko aaj kl me pata chl hi jayega.Akhir Nomit ne apne phone me kya kiya tha car me baithe huye, kya Usne sirf rider ki info hi dekhi thi Ya kuchh or...
Bilkul sahi kaha aapne Sachin ka bhi yahi reaction tha. Bilkul samne ki meri guild ka manager ek E Rank ke Hunter pr najar rakhe hue hai.Vahi Manoj ke Apne boss ko yah kahna ki dungan me ek E rank hunter gya hai kya reaction rha hoga, mujhe to soch kr hi hasi aa rhi hai ek aisa hunter jisne Manoj ko apni taraf attract kiya hai vo ek E-rank hunter hai, aisa jarur man me aayega uske...
Ye to bs aane wala time hi bata skta hai.Dungan me rider ne Kirti ko abhi us teer se to bcha liya pr kya vo aage bhi Uski madad kr payega un elves se... Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast