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Maine to kaha tha ki story plot chahey same ha par baut acha ha good job keep it upaap sahi bol raho ho..
Ye update banarsi paan bale jesa lag raha hai..
sem canditon par likhne ka tarika aacha hai...
es story ne bahut si story ki yad dila di..
me pahle se hi bol raha hu..
es story me jitne bhi femas story thi un sab ko mila kar ek story ban rahi ho esa lagta hai....
age dekhte hai kya hona hai..
maze dar hai ye story bhi es story ko sayad sabhi log kai dino tak bhul nahi payege....
esa muche lagta hai...
baki sab writer ke upar hai
banarsi paan bale me bahut se kirdar the.. Par es me sab alag hai..
ha koi bhi story me ek do update macht kha sakte hai...
jese ki ye bala update..
nice..
Kal de duga bhai..Nahi Bhai Sunday se pahle aana chahiye
Can't wait bro update soon as possible
Keep waiting..Waiting