Fantasy Saurya - ek youdha (Completed)

Ristrcted · Apr 11, 2020

Hi friend maine xforum pr kafi stories padi hai aur ab mai bhi apni ek story post karne ja raha hu ab jyada wakt na lete huye
story p chalte h jaise jaise log milte rahenge unke bare m batata jaunga .
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Aryanv · Jul 5, 2020

Awesome update bro

Love 1994 · Jul 5, 2020

Killerpanditji(pandit) · Jul 5, 2020

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UPDATE- 77

Ab tak

Varsha sabko apni kahani sunna rahi thi par usko bich mein hi band karna pada kyun ki sabhi ko koi na koi kaam aa gaya tha.

Aage

Chaliye pahle hum Kiran and party ke saath chalte hai jo uss jagah pahuchi hui thi jaha uss ladki ko bahut buri haalat mein dekha gaya tha.

Wo waha puch tach kar rahi thi Mohini bhi ussi mein lagi hui thi wahi Rita bas Kiran ke saath saath chal rahi thi.

Kuch hi der mein ussi jagah par Paridhi bhi pahucti hai.

Paridhi- Kiran ma'm pata nahi kuch bahut hi ajeeb hai iss case mein par samajh nahi aa raha kaise bataun.

Kiran- kya baat hai batao

Paridhi- Ma'm jo ladki hai jispe inn sab khuno ke charge lage hue hai wo mere hisab se to khuni ho hi nahi sakti

Mohini- Kyun aisa kya hua.

Paridhi- Wo ladki andhi hai she is blind iss baat ki reports hai uske ghar mein uski Maa ne dikhayi mujhe maine cross check bhi kiya aur wo sahi the.

Mohini- Par jaisa ki cctv camera mein dikha raha kisi bhi angle se wo andhi to nahi lag rahi.

Paridhi- Yaha par bhi kuch aisa milla hai mujhe ki wo mujhe aur confuse karta jaa raha hai.

Paridhi ne apna phone nikala aur uss CCTV ki videos dikhane lagi usne pahle wo clip dikhayi jisme wo ladki kisi jaanvar ki tarah unn ladko ko maar rahi thi.

Rita- Ye koi insan nahi main daawe se kah sakti hu.

Kiran- Nahi Rita tum jitna insano ko sheeda samajh rahi ho wo utne seedhe nahi hote wo jab girne par aa jaate hai to kisi bhi had tak gir sakte hai arre insano ne to ek hatni jo pregnent thi usko bhi badi buri tarah maar diya wo bhi sirf mazze ke liye kya bataun insano ki daridagi ka aalam tumhe roj rape ho rahe hai muders ho rahe hai ladkiyon ko jalaya jaa raha hai dahej ke naam par aur bhi naa jaane kya kya. Agar batane baith gayi to kuch din beet jaaye saatyad yaa fir mahine yaa saal bhi lag sakte hai kyun ki main tumhe jab ek case batati rahungi ussi tarah ke 20 aur cases hote rahenge....are main bhi kaha ki baat pakad kar baith gayi. Paridhi isse to kuch pata nahi chal raha . Aakhir kya kahna chahti ho tum.

Paridhi- Ruko abye clip dekho jab wo crime spot par pahuchi thi.

Paridhi ne video chalu kiya aur isko dekh kar to sabhi ke hosh udde rah gaye bas ek Rita ko chod kar.

Clip mein dikh raha tha ki wo ladki ek stick ( jo blind logo ke liye hoti hai na wo) uske sahare waha par aa rahi thi. Aankho par wo bada sa jo kala chasmahota hai wo laga hua tha.

Paridhi ne video pause ki aur haatho par zoom kiya.

Paridhi- Iss waqt dekho iss ladki ke naakhon. Bilkul chote chote hai lagta hai aaj hi kata hoga.

Kiran- Hmm ye to sach hai par fir 20 minute mein aiske naakhun kaise aa gaye... Kahi kii iska chahra to nahi use kar raha tha.

Paridhi- Nahi aap iske haath mein wo breslet dekho. Ye iski Dadi ne diya tha isko. Suna hai khandali breslet hai ye in logo ka ek hi hai jo iss ladki ke haath mein hai. Maanti hu koi iski copy bhi bana lega par ab uske haath ki sabse.choti ungli ko dekho waha par shujan dikhayi de rahi hai thodi thik aisi hi shujan isse pahle wale video mein bhi hai matlab ye to pakka hai ki 2no ek hi hai. Par ye clear nahi hai ki isko sab dikhne kaise lag gaya.

Mohini- Video aage play karo.

Paridhi ne clip chalu kar diya. Aage ke clip ko dekh kar to waha par khade sabhi ka khoon hi khol gaya.

Aage ke video mein ye dikh raha tha ki wo jin ladko ka murder hua hai unn sab ne drink ki rakhi thi aur uss ladki ke andhepan ka faayda utha rahe the wo saare usko yaha waha chu rahe the. Jisse bachnevke liye ladki ne shor bhi machaya par koi bhi aage nahi aaya kyunki waha par ke sabhi unn ladko ko jaante the unke baap ko jaante the. Jab koi madad ke liye nahi aaya na tab wo ladki khud hi waha se roote hue jaane lagi par unn ladko se ye bhi naa dekha gaya unhone uski stick fek di ek taraf aur uss ladki ko bhi wahi dhaka de diya.

Iske baad video mein kuch gadbad hua matlab ek pal ko kuch dikhne hi nahi laga bas kuch hi der baad wo ladki unn sab ke saamne khadi thi aur uske naakhun bade hue the aur bhi bahut kuch badla hua tha. Fir kya uss ladki ne ek ek kar ke unn ladko ko nochna shuru kiya aur unn sab ko badi hi berahmi se maar diya.

Mohini- Main inn ladko ko sheedha samajh rahi thi par ye to....

Kiran- Dekha Rita yaha par insan se battar koi nahi hai.

Rita- Hmm samajh gayi Kiran par saayad tumne kuch miss kar diya hai.

Kiran- Hmm pata hai mujhe bhi lag raha hai uss ladki ko kuch to hua tha tabhi wo acchanak se...

Rita- Haa aur pata nahi kyun par mujhe ye kuch jaana pahchana sa laga kahi aur bhi kuch aisa dekh chuki hu mein saayad par yaad nahi aa raha.

Paridhi- Ma'm ab aage kya kare.

Kiran- Ek kaam karo pahle to ye jo clip hai naa jisme wo ladki iss ladki ko pareshan kar rahe the yaha waha touch kar rahe the usko social media par viral kar do bahut dekh liya inke baap logo ko kaise inke naam par naa jaane kya kya bakke jaa rahe hai iss video ke baad unke muh par tala lagega. Tum ye kaam abhi se shuru kar do.

Paridhi bhi haa bol waha se chali gayi.

Mohini- Bhabhi pata hai Saurya ko jab maine iss case ke baare mein kuch bataya tha na to usne kaha tha apni power ka use karo iss baar. To kya hume karna chahiye aisa.

Rita- Tum dono sochte raho main to kar rahi hu.

Rita ne apni aakhen band kari aur video mdein jis ladki ko diekh rahe the uske baare mein sochne lagi par jaise hi usko uss ladki ka pata chala uske haalat ka pata chala wo ek dum se shock rah gayi.

Mohini- Kya pata chala tumko uske baare mein.

Kiran- Ye chahra aisa kyun banaya hua hai.

Rita- Aap dono car mein baitho aur mere bataye hue raasre par chalte jaao.

Dono ne bahut se sawal kiye par Rita ne ek bhi sawal ka uttar nahi diya.

Kuch der ke driving ke baad wo pahuch gaye ek jungle ke pass gadi ka rukna tha ki Rita turant hi car se utri aur daudh laga di ek oor ussi ke piche chal di baaki ki dono aur jab baaki ke dono waha pahuche naa to unke muh khula rah gaya.

Wo ladki ek bade se ped par tangi hui thi. Uske sarir se saayad saara khoon hi nikal liya gaya ho.

Rita- Kisne kiya hoga iss bechari ke saath ye sab iske ander kaa wo dard samajh paa rahi hubmein kitna dard kitna dard hua hoga.

Kiran- Jo bhi hoga usko jhum chodenge nahi. Mohini lagta hai humko apna power use k....

Abhi wo baat puri kar hi rahe the ki Saurya waha gaa gaya.

Saurya- iski jarurat nahi hai iss case ko mein khud dekhunga ab se aur agar jarurat padi to help le lunga ab tum saare ghar chalo main iss nbody koniske ghar pahuchne kr laayak bana deta hu aur waha pahucha dunga.

Wo sab jaana to nahi chahte the par maine unko bhej hi diya.

Unke jaane ke baad.

Main- Saifali uss kitab ne ek jaan le li hai.

Saifali- Kya...Accha mein dekhti hu usko tum bas wo gudiya ek baar usse chutkara le lo.

Main- Hmm thk hai hum lal hi nikalne wale hai.

Saurya yahi baatein karta raha wahi Kiran and party wapas ghar aa chuke the. Mood tinno ka hi kharab tha ho bhi kyun naa ye sab jo dekh liya tha.

Par ye jyada der nahi raha hua kuch yun ki Margret aur Sangeeta dono wapas aa gaye the sayad bahar gaye ho Headmaster ke saath.

Fir kya tha Margret ne sabko bola aage ki kahani sunne ke liye pahle to inn eno ne manna kiya phir kuch jor dene par maan gaye aur toli phir se chal padi Varsha ke room ki oor jaha par Alex Varsha se kuch baatein kar raha tha ki tabhi gate knock hua.

Alex ne gate khola aur jab puri mandali ko dekha to wo samajh gaya ki ab khichayi hogi to pahle to usne wahi rukne ka faisla kiya par Varsha ne khud usko jaane ko bol diya aur wo chala gaya.

Bas aur kya fir shuru ho gayi wahi katha par iss baar thoda piche se hi chala gaya kissing ke time se ye Matgret ka kahna tha ki ye aari baatein ek baar mein puri sunne par hi asli mazza aata hai bas fir kya tha.

Flasback continues

Alex mujhe kiss karne laga main bhi uska shaat dene lagi hum dono tab tak kiss karte rahe jab tak dono ki saanse naa ukhadne lagi fir.

Alex- Tum bahut shunder ho

Main- Tumhe nahi lagta ye pahle kahna chahiye tha.

Alex- Kuch samajh hi nahi aa raha kya bolu kya nahi bas ab aur intezar nahi hota.

Aur fir se wo mujhe kiss karne laga aur iss baar mere kapdon ke uper se hi mere stano ko bhi daba raha tha issi wajah se mere ander ek naya sa romanch paida ho raha tha jiska parinam ye hua ki main usko aur jor jor se kiss karne lagi.

Fir se hum dono ki saasen fulne lagi par hum alag nahi hue usne mujhe guffa ke ek dewar mein chipka diya ab meri pith uske saamne thi pahle to wo bas dekhta raha fir dhere se ek kiss meri pith par ki aur fir apne haatho se meri blouse ki doriyon ko kholne laga aur main bas lambi lambi saanse hi le rahi thi.

Dekhte hi dekhte meri blouse usne utar di aur fir mujhe apni oor ghumaya.

Alex- Arre ye kya hai mujhse bhi chipaogi inhe hm.

Main- Nahi par...

Alex ne mere haath pakde aur unko neeche kar diye aur mere sthano ko dekhne laga aur bas dekhta raha.

Main- Aise kya dekh rahe ho.

Alex - Tum sach mein bahut hi sunder ho aur iss insani roop ka to pucho hi maat.

Bas itna hi kaha usne aur mere sthano par ana haath rakh unko dabane laga. Meri shiskiyan nikal rahi thi.

Main- Hmm aaaraaam se hmmm oohhh dheeree

Usne apna muh rakh diya mere nipple par aur fir jeeb se usse khelne laga.

Main bas shiskiyan leti rahi.

Wo pata nahi kab tak bas aisa hi karta raha ki tabhi mujhe Kiran didi ki baat yaad aayi ki mujhe bhi usko khush karna hai to maine bhi darte hue apna haath uske pant ke paas kiya aur uska wo mere haathon mein touch hua aur maine jhat se apna haath khinch liya.
Meri saanse achanak bahut tej ho gai thi aur usi ke sath maine apni ankhe bhi jor se band karli.

Alex- Kya hua

Main- K...kuch nahi kuch bhi nahi.

Alex- Arre daro nahi waise bhi aaj kuch karne ko nahi kahunga tumhe bas jo mein karta rahu saath deti rahna.

Alex ne fir meri niche ke kapdon ko utara ab mein uske samne bilkul hi nangi khadi thi.

Alex bas dekhe hi jaa raha tha mujhe par wo abhi bhi kapdon mein hi tha.

Main- Tum bhi to utaro apne kapde.

Mera bolna tha bas aur wo bilkul hi nanga ho gaya aur mere saamne khada ho gaya.

Main himmat kar ke fir se uske uss ko chune ke liye apna haath aage karne lagi to usne naa mein sar hillaya aur bola jaise mein kahu bas waise hi karo.

Main- hmm

Alex- Chalo ab let jao.

Main bhi binna kuch bole let gayi mujhe pata tha ki ab kya hoga mujhe sab kuch Kiran didi aur Rita ne bata jo diya tha. To maine apne pair khol liya par apni uss jagah ko apne hathon se dhak rakha tha jisko dekh Alex ko hassi aa gayi.

Wo aaya mere pass aur mere hateli ko chum kar usko waha se hata diya fir meri uss par kiss kiya jisse mujhe bahut hi ajeeb laga.

Alex- Tum to bilkul gilli ho gayi ho.

Main kuch bhi nahi boli.

Alex ne apni jeebh meri uss jagah rakhi aur fir usko chumne aur chatne laga. Main isse chatpatane lagi bahut hi ajeeb lag raha tha par accha bhi sayad bas issi liye mera haath khud uske sar par gayi aur usko daba diya.

Wo bahut der tak waha chumta aur chatta raha. aur mai maze se dohri hoti jaa rahi thi mujhe pata nahi tha ki insaani sharir is mamle me itna sukun deta hoga
Alex laga raha aur har pal mera maza badhta gaya thodi der baad mujhe aisa lagne laga ki mere andar se kuch nikalne wala hai maine alex ke sar ko aur jor se pakda mai jhtapata rahi thi anand se us anokhe ehsas se

Mai jaldi se us sukh ke charam tak pahuchna chahti thi
Aur kuch hi kshan me wo hota bhi lekin ain waqt par alex ne mujhe chhod diya
Mujhe samjh nahi aaraha tha ki akhir ye mere sath kya huwa
Abhi toh mai hawa mai ud rahi thi us adbhut anand ko prapt karne wali thi aur fir achanak ye kya ho gaya

Maine ankhe khol ke dekha toh samne alex mujhe dekh ke muskura raha tha
Use aisa karte dekh ke mujhe itna gussa aaya ki apni aag se use jala deti lekin ye bhi yaad tha ki wo mera sathi hai mai ab use koi hani pahucha nahi sakti

Haa lekin baki chije toh kar sakti hu naa jese tum sab aur har insani aurat karti hai
Wahi gussa hone pe naraj hona ya ruthna bas maine bhi wahi kiya apni ankhe ek taraf karke use band kar diya ab kuch bhi ho usse toh mai baat nahi karne wali thi

Shayad alex bhi ye baat samjh gaya tha

Alex - kya huwa...?

Lekin maine uske baat ka koi jawab nahi diya tab wo upar ki taraf aaya meri dono pair viprit disha me khule huwe they aur wo unke bich me mere upar aaya tha ek baar ko toh uska wo meri yoni ko tuch huwa toh mera pura sharir kaamp gaya aur maine jor se use apni baho me bhich liya

Alex - kya huwa bataogi

Mai - tum.. Tum ruke kyu

Meri baat sunke wo thoda sa hansa lekin meri baat koi jawab diye bager mujhe kiss karne laga aur mai bhi mantrmughdha ho uska sath de rahi thi
Kiss ke sath hi alex mere pure sharir ko sehla raha tha jo kisi bhatti ki tarha tap raha tha
Aisa karte huwe alex ne apna ek hath niche le jake apne usko pakad ke fir se meri yoni pe ghisa wo itna sakht tha ki mai fir se sihar gai aur uske sath hi meri pakad alex ke pith par aur badh gai

Thodi wo der aise hi ragadne ke baad usne kiss todi
Alex - varsha ankhe kholo

Maine ankhe khol ke uski taraf dekha toh aisa laga jese wo kuch mujhse puchna chahta ho
Use aisa dekh kar maine apne honth fir se uske honto se mila liye aur ham fir se kiss karne lage

Meri baat samjh ke usne apna wo meri yoni pe mukh ke lagaya
Jesa tum logo ne bola tha us hisab se mujhe pata tha ki aage kya hoga
Aur huwa bhi wahi

Alex ne ek jor ka dhakka mar ke uska kuch hissa mere andar dal diya mujhe toda dard huwa lekin alex ruka nahi aur fir dusra aur fir tisra aise karte huwe usne pura mere andar dal diya aur uske sath hi alex ki hunkar ki awaj aayi wo bhi pure dragon ki aur meri bhi apne wesi hi awaj nikali jo shayad yaha se bahar tak sunai di hohi

Mujhe tab itna dard huwa tha ki mai apna dragon rup lene ke liye jhatpata rahi thi lekin alex ne mujhe sambhal liya
Uska khud par pura control tha
Warna koi bhi dragon milan ke waqt bekabu ho jate hai
Thodi der wo wese hi ruka raha fir jab mera dard kam huwa toh alex ne apni kamar hilani shuru kar di wo bahut dhire se ye kar raha tha

Lekin mujhe maze ke sath dard bhi bahut ho raha tha lekin thodi hi der me mera dard khatam ho gaya aur bas reh gaya toh wo maze ka ehsas

Ham dono dragon hunkar bharte ek dusre ko chumte tab tak lage rahe jab tak hamara sharir akad nahi gaya aur hame wo apratim sukh prapt nahi huwa

Iske baad jo hua wo bahut hi adbhut tha hum dono ke sharis se 2 gole nikle aur fir hawa msin hi dono ek ho gaye aur thodi der baad wo gola 2 tukdo mein bat kar hum dono ke under samna gayi.

Jab ye hua tha naa tab to meri haalat ka pucho hi maat sharir hadd se jyada dard karne laga dimmag sunn sa pad gaya aur fir ek flash ki tarah hua aakhon ke samne aur sab wapas normal par ye hobe mein bhi bahut time laga tha.. Alex ka bhi saayad yahi haallat tha.

Flashback ends

Varsha- Pata hai kal hi saayad Alex aur Saurya jaa rahe hai uss gudiya ko thikhane lagane.

Mohini- Kya kal par mujge to nahi bataya.

Kiran - Arre batane wala hoga ab tu naraz mat ho jaana bas samjhi.

AJJ KE LIYE ITNA HI ISS UPDATE KO LIKHNE MEIN MERIADAD KI HAI MERE DOST Love 1994 JI NE TO UNKA BAHUT BAHUT DHANYAWAD.

Agle update mein dekhte hai Sun par kya hota hai aur bhi bahut kuch to bane rahiye.

Ek baat aur kuch readers ka kahna hai mein reply nahi de raha. Has ye sach hai par ab se main koshish karunga ki aisa naa ho. Main aaj hi reply dene wala tha par net problem ki wajah se ye update 4the baar mein saayad post ho jaaye to kal se main replydene wala hu

Mast update ????? dost

Killerpanditji(pandit) · Jul 5, 2020

Classified said:
UPDATE - 78

Ab tak

Shaitani kitab ne kisi aur ko apna shikar bana liya tha. Wahi dusri taraf mera aur Alex ka jaana tay ho gaya tha Pavitra agni ki talash mein kal hi.

Aage

Main apne room mein baitha tha soch raha tha uss gudiya ke baare mein. bahut kuch chal raha tha dimag mein jaise wo ladki kon thi jo Henry ke saath wo sab kar rahi thi jiski rakhh ke wajah se wo Gudiya shant hai.
Bahut kuch aise hi soch raha tha ki tabhi darwaja khula.

Mohini thi samne wo mere paas aayi aur baith gayi apna sar mere kandho par rakha usne aur boli.

Mohini- uss ladki ki body chod aaye uske ghar.

Main- kon si ladki lon si body kya bol rahi ho tum.

Mohini- Saurya inn sab mein majak nahi please batao naa usko chod aaye naa.

Main-Arre jaan main sach bol raha hu main bilkul bhi nahi janta tum kya baat kar rahee ho.

Mohini- kya phir wo kon tha jisko hamne uss.......

Saifali - wo main thi. Ab dono utho aur mere sath chalo.

Mohini- Tum Tum to .....

Saifali- arre jiske baare main tum soch rahi ho uska naam change ho gaya hai ab wo Shunaina hai Main Saifali hu wo chotti si bacchi yaad aaya.

Mohini- par tum magic kaise kar sakti ho mera matlab tum to insan ho naa.

Saifali- Sab yahi jaan logi kya. Chalo yaha se jaldi.

Main- Kya baat hai Saifali kuch pareshan si lag rahi ho tum.

Mohini- Tum isse pahle mil chuke ho naa fir mujhe kyun nahi bataya.

Main- Arre yaar bola na usne sab yahi jaan logi kya chalo ab uske saath dekhte hai kya baat hai.

Saifali ne portal khola.

Main aur Mohini chal diye uske saath ussi portal se aur pahuch gaye Saifali ke ghar jaha par Shilpa baithi hui thi.
Mohini ne jaise hi Shilpa ko dekha to shocked rah gayi ek dum se chup ho gayi wo.

Shilpa- Kaisi ho Mohini tum.

Ye kuch sabad jo Shilpa ke muh se nikle the wo MOhini ko apne shock se bahar nikalte hai aur Mohini gusse mein meri oor dekhne lagti hai.

Mohini(Gusse mein)- Saurya kya tum inse bhi mil chuke the.

Main- Haa par usne hi batane se mana kiya tha tumhe wo khud tumse milna chahti thi.....

Mohini- jhooth bol rahe ho tum Shilpa didi aisa kabhi nahi karengi.

Itna bol kar wo meri oor badhne lagi. Saayad mujpe apna gussa nikalne ke liye.

Shilpa- Mohini ruk jaa maine hi bola tha isko. wo waqt sahi nahi tha hamare milne ka aur saayad ye bhi nahi hai.

Mohini- aapne sach mein aapne mana kiya tha par kyun aur waqt sahi nahi se kya matlab hai aapka.

Mohini ye sab bol rahi thi aur uske aakhon se aanshu bah rahe the.

Shilpa- Arre rote nahi hai Mohini main sab batati hu chal chup ho jaa.

Shilpa uske pass jaa rahi thi usko gale lagane par Mohini ne apna haath dikha kar mana kar diya par Shilpa rukki nahi wo uske pass gayi aur usko galle laga liya.

Mohini to aur jyada roone lagi in sab se.

Saifali- Saurya inko yahi chodte hai abhi chalo tumse kuch important baat karni hai.

Main jaana to nahi chahta tha par Shilpa ne bhi ishare se jaane ko bol diya.

Main bhi Saifali ke saath bahar aa gaya hall mein jaha hum baith gaye.

Main- Bolo Saifali kya baat hai par usse pahle ye batao ki Mohini ko yaha kyun le aayi.

Saifali-jarurat padne wali thi hame issliye chalo wo chodo ab sunno tumhe yaha lane ka maksad hai tumhe kuch batana.

Main- hmm batao.

Saifali- wo Shaitani kitab uske kaaran kuch logo ki jaan jaa chuki hai.

Main- Mian tumse iss baare mein baat karne hi wala tha sayad Mujhe pata chal gaya hai wo kitab kiske pass hai.

Saifali- wo kitab kiske paas hai nahi kon uss kitab ke pass hai Saurya aisa bolo. Accha baato kya pata chala hai tumhe.

Main-Ek case hai bahut hi ajeeb jibaare mein Mohini ne bataya ek ladki hai jisne apne naakhuno se kuch logo ko maar diya hai ajeeb hai na mujhe lagta hai wo ladki uss kitab ke bas mein hai.

Saifali- tumhari jaankari adhuri hai Saurya wo ladki ab nahi rahi uss kitab ne usko khatam kar diya main ussi ki wajah se to tumhe yaha laayi hu.

Main- kya uss kitab ne usko maar diya ye to bahut bura hua.

Saifali- agar uske jindgi ke baare mein sunnoge to aur bhi dukh hoga Saurya

Main- Batao mujhe main jaana chahta hu waise nhi jo kuch hua uske sath uska jimmedar mein bhi to hu.

Saifali- Nahi Saurya aisi baat nahi hai wo sab to uski niyati mein hona likha tha.d

Main- ye tum kah rahi ho ye jaante hue bhi ki kahi na kahi uss Shaitani kitab ke yaha aane ke picche mera bhi haath
hai. kaash mein kuch kar paata.

Meri iss baat par uske chahre par ek muskan aa gayi.

Saifali- Tum sach mein Mother Elika ke hi wanasj ho wo bhi aisi hi thi aur tum apne pariksha mein safal rahe.

Main- pariksha! Main kuch samjha nahi.

Saifali- Mother Elika ne bola tha ki tumhari soch ko ek baar jaanch liya jaaye aur tum safal rahe chalo ab ye lo.
Saifali ne mujhe ek lighter jaisa kuch diya.

Main- ye kya hai ?

Saifli- Ye ek yantra hai jisse tum Pavitra agni ke chote se hisse ko yaha laoge taaki hum uski madad se uss Shaitani kitab ko rok sake.

Main- Thik hai par uss ladki ka kya tumne to kuch bataya hi nahi.

Saifali- wo abhi shurakshit hai aur jab tum wo pavitra agni le aaoge tab sab sahi ho jaayega. wo ladki wapas se thik ho jaayegi.

Main- par tumne to kaha ki wo maar......

Saifali- hmm wo mar hi jaati agar main waha na pahuchti tumhare roop mein uss ladki ka jinda rahna bahut hi jyada jaruri hai kyunki wahi hame uss Shaitani kitab tak pahucha sakti hai ek wo hi hai jiske jariye main uss shaitani kitab ko dhundh sakti hu.

Main- Mera roop, Achha iss liye Mohini mujhse puch rahi thi. Thik hai main le aaunga uss Pavitra agni ko.

Wahi dusri oor Mohini ko Shilpa ne gale laga rakha tha aur Mohini khub rooye jaa rahi thi.

Shilpa- Bas kar Mohini kitna royegi ab chup ho jaa aur meri baat sun agar thujhe wo galat lagi na to tu mujhse baat mat karna thik hai.

Mohini- Thik hai batao aap main bhi to sunnu kyun nahi bataya gaya mujhe aapke thik hone ke baare mein iss Saifali ke baare mein.

Shilpa- pahle ye roona band kar tu.

Shilpa ne Mohini ke aanshu saaf kiye aur usko pani pine ko diya firr wo sab batane lagi jaise Saifali ko lag raha tha ki tumlogo ke bich mein koi hai jo kuch aur hi tigdam laga raha hai aur fir uss shak ka sahi nikalna aur fir ye Shaitani kitab ka aana saath hi mein Shilpa ke khud ke shakti ka balaned na hona aur bhi bahut kuch jisse Mohini samajh gayi ki ye sab kyun kiya gaya tha.

Shilpa- ab bata kya humne galat kiya

Mohini- nahi meri Shilpa didi kabhi galat kar hi nahi sakti accha ab ye batao ki mujhe ab kyun bulaya kyunki abhi to apki shaktiyan bhi control mein nahi aayi hai aur aap janti ho ki main aapko chod kar ab jaaungi nahi.

Shilpa- kuch baatein ho gayi hai aisi jinki wajah se tujhe pareshan karna pad raha hai tujhe kal yaha wo Headmaster ko akele lana hai hum ye kaam Saurya se karwa lete par uska jaana bhi utna hi jaruri hai .

Mohini- thik hai main le aaungi unko par uske baad apko bhi mere saath chalna hoga aakhir aap hi to ho jinhone mujhe mere manjil hamare Saurya tak pahuchaya tha.

Shilpa- ye abhi ke liye sahi nahi hoga Mohini par tu chinta mat kar mein aaungi tere paas jald hi par tab tak thoda ruk jaa.

Mohini ne to baccho jaisi jid karna shuru kar diya ke jaana hai matlab jaana hai par Shilpa ne bhi usko samjha bujha kar manna hi liya.

Fir dono aa gaye bahar hall mein jaha main aur Saifali baithe hue baatein kar rahe the.

Saifali- To Mohini sab clear ho gaya na ab tum bas kal jo bola hai wo kar dena.

Mohini- haa thik hai. Accha kya mein aaj raat yaha ruk sakti hu tum dono ke saath.

Saifali- haa kyun nahi. Saurya tum jao ye yahi rukegi aur kaam jaldi karne ki koshish karna kyunki waqt jyada nahi uske pass.

Main- thik hai

Saifali ne ek portal khol diya aur main usme se ho kar pahuch gaya ghar par apne room mein. Maine ghadi dekha to raat ke 11 baj rahe the. Alex ke sath mujhe subah 4 baje nikalna tha to sonne se behtar mujhe dhyaan lagana laga.

Main baith gaya dhyaan lagane.

Waqt ka pata hi nahi chala kab 3 baje wo to red book ki badaulat mein uth gaya usne mujhe dhyaan se jaga diya. maine usse aur uski bahno se thodi der baat ki fir fresh hone laga sab kuch ek baar check kiya uss Gudiya ko liya wo yantra jo Saifali ne diya tha wo liya.

Fir kya tha Alex bhi aa gaya Subah ka waqt tha bas Varsha hi uthi hui thi ussi ne humdono ko naasta karaya aur hum nikal gaye fir apne safar par.

Jyada waqt nahi laga Akex ko Earth ke Grutwakarshan kshektra(Gravity) se bahar nikalne mein. Uske baad shuru hua hamara space mein ghumne ka safar aisa nahi tha ki main pahle nahi aaya tha space mein par ye space har baar aur bhi sunder aur khatarnak dikhayi deta hai.

Alex dhere dhirer chal diya suraj ki oor karib 6 ghante ke safar ke baad hum pauche hue the Murcury planet ke pass. Alex thak nahi raha tha kyun ki usko nayi power milli thi wo bhi solar dragon se yaani Varsha se. jaise jaise hum suraj ke karib jaa rahe the uski energy badti jaa rahi thi

2 ghante aur lage humko suraj tak pahuchne mein jab waha pahuche to garmi se meri haalat kharab ho gayi wo to bhala ho mere Dragon Alex ka jo uss garmi se mujhe bacha raha tha.Suraj ke bilkul karib pahuch kar.

Main- Alex ye Pavitra agni kaha milegi.

Alex- Jaha tak mujhe pata hai naa Surya wo apni jagah badalti rahti hai har pal wo to accha hai mere ander bhi Solar Dragon ki power aa chuki hai ab dekho tum bas kitni jaldi uss Pavitra agni ka pata lagata hu.

AAJ ke liye itna hi

Aage dekhte hai kaise Saurya aur Alex ko Pavitra Agni wali jagah milti hai aur kya itni aashani se sab ho jaayega
jaane ke liye bane rahe
N

Nice update bro ???????? ?????

Ristrcted · Jul 5, 2020

UPDATE - 79

Ab tak

Saurya Alex ke saath pahuch chuka tha Sun ke pass. wahi dusri oor Mohini ko bhi kaam milla tha Headmaster ko Saifali ke pass lane ka.

Aage

Chaliye hum chalte hai pahle Saurya ke pass dekhte hai kya kar raha hai wo.

Alex ke pith par baitha Saurya yaha waha dekh raha hai uss Pavitra agni wale jagah ko. Alex teji se yaha waha ghum raha hai.

Saurya- Arre yaar ye jagah mill kyun nahi rahi upar se ye garmi bhi na.

Alex-(hasta hua) wo to accha hua ki mere pass Solar Dragon ki takat aa gayi warna ye jo sirf tumhe garmi lag rahi hai naa wo garmi tumhe jala deti.

Main- hmm pata hai ab bhaw mat khao jaldi se uss jaagh ko dhundhte hai.

Alex - Haa chahta to main bhi yahi hu par wo jagah mill hi nahi rahi.

Abhi dono baatein hi kar rahe the ki mujhe ek koi jalti hui chiz yaha se waha jaati hui dikhayi di. ye chiz mujhe ab tak 4-5 baar dikh chuki thi par mujhe laga Sun hai gases ki wajah se aag yaha se waha jaa rahi hogi par iss baar kuch ajeeb tha usme. Ajeeb se matlab hai mujhe ek chonch dikhayi di thi aur 2 pankh.

Main- Alex Sun par bhi koi rahta hai kya.

Alex- hmm bahut pahle ek prajati raha karti thi par kuch hua tha jisse wo saare nasth ho gaye the ... par tum ye abhi kyun puch rahe ho.

Maain- Nahi mujhe lagta hai maine kisi ko dekha hai.

Alex jo abhi udd raha tha ek dum se ruk gaya.

Alex- Kya sach mein....agar ye sach hua naa to hame taiyaar........

Alex ki baat puri bhi nahi hui thi ki humpe hamla hua. Ek aag ka gola seedha hamari taraf aaya wo to accha hua Alex ne dusri taraf ho kar hume bacha liya. par kab tak kyun ki hum dono ko hi koi dikh nahi raha tha bas aag ke gole hi aa rahe the hamare oor.

Miane bhi apni Talwar ko yaad kiya jiske mere haath mein aate hi bahut tez roshni hui. Alex wo aag ke gole fenkne wala dono hi ek dum se ruk gaye.

"Kon ho tum ye talwar kaha se aayi tumhare pass."

Alex- Saurya ye talwar kaha se aayi tumhare pass.

Main- Baad mein Alex pahle inn janab se to nipat lee.

Maine talwar ki aawaj ki taraf ki.

Main- jo bhi hai saamne aao bahut hua lukka chippi.

Ab ye kon hai iska pata baad mein chalega hum chalte hai Mohini ke paas dekhte hai wo kya kar rahi hai kya wo Headmaster ko Saifali ke paas laane mein kaamiyab hui yaa nahi.

Mohini shubah pahuchi ghar mein Saifali ne uske liye portal khol diya tha.

Mohini jab pahuchi tab tak Alex aur Saurya nikal chuke the.

Mohini ne thodi der Varsha ke saath practice wagera ki fir sabhi ki training hui.

Training ke baad.

Mohini- Headmaster aap itne din se yaha ho aap kahi ghume bhi ho yaa nahi.

Headmaster- Haa kuch jagahein ghuma hu Margret aur Sangeeta ke saath.

Mohini- Chalo aaj mein ghuma lati hu aapko waise bhi aapse kuch tips bhi leni hai.

Headmaster- Tips? mujhse

Mohini- Haa tips ab jaldi se taiyaar bhi ho jaao aaj main aapko ghumati hu.

Margret aur Sangeeta ne jab aane ko bola to unko kuch bahana kar ke manna kar diya usne.

Thodi hi der main nikal pade Headmaster aur Mohini.

Mohini-(Maan mein) Saifali ready ho na.

Saifali- hum ready hai tum bas aa jao.

Mohini car drive karte hue pahuch gayi ek park jaisi jagah par jaha usne car roki aur Headmaster ko utarne ko bola.

Iss jagah ko Saifali ne pahle hi magic se kuch iss tarah kar diya tha ke jaise hi Headmaster car se utrege wo shidha pahuch jaayenge Saifali ke paas.

Waisa hi hua par ek jagah inn sab ne chuk kar di Headmaster ke power ko aankne mein.

Hua ye Headmaster jaise hi Car se nikle unko bhi kisi magic ka aabhash ho gaya aur wo shatark ho gaye aur unhone uss magic ko fail karne ke liye mantra padhne lage par unhe aabhash hua ki ye koi buri magic nahi hai aur naa hi unko koi nukshan pauchayegi to bas ruk gaye aur dekhte hi dekhte pahuch gaye Saifali ke ghar.

Waha par Shilpa Saifali dono pahle se hi thi.

Headmaster(Shilpa ke aage jhuk kar)- Malika-e-jin

Shilpa- Khade ho jaaye humme aapse kuch baat karni hai.

Headmaster- Ji malika main samjh hi gaya tha jab main car se nikla tabhi kisi acche jaadu ka aabhash hua tha par wo aapka nahi tha fir kiska tha.

Saifali- Mera tha ab aap baith jao aur jo hum puche uska jawab do.

Headmaster- Ji bilkul .

Headmaster bhi baith gaye ek sofe par.

Saifali- Kya aapko Shaitani kitab ke baare mein kuch pata hai.

Kitab ka naam shun kar hi Headmaster thoda pareshan ho gaye.

Headmaster- Ji pata hai.

Shilpa- Bataiye hame.

Headmaster- Malika wo kitab khud Shaithano ke Shaitan ********** ne likhi hai bahut hi takatwar kitab hai aur kahte hai jab se uske likhne wale ki maut hui hai wo kitab usko jinda karne mein laga hai. Wo kitab mere pass hi thi Bansoa mein par pata nahi kaha chali gayi.

Saifali- Itne khatarnak kitab ke saath aap kar kya rahe the.

Headmaster- Ji main uss par adhyayan kar raha tha par ussi beech bahut kuch hua jiski wajah se sab kuch chod hame yaha aana pada

Shilpa- Adhyayan. to kuch pata chala kya.

Headmaster- Haa bhi aur naa bhi pata ai uss kitab ki jitni bhi baatein pata chali mujhe unme se ek bhi sahi nahi hai wo ho hi nahi sakta....par ek baat thi jab bhi uss kitab ko padhna shuru karta mein apni jagah se bhatak jata tha matlab jaise aine agar kitab apne room mein padhni shuru ki to khud ba khud office mein pahuc jaata tha aisa lagta tha wo control kar rahi thi mujhe.

Saifali- Lagta nahi wo aapko control hi kar rahi thi ab iss baat ko chodiye aur bataiye uss kitab kpo roka kaise jaaaye.

Headmaster- ye to pata nahi par ek baat pata hai usme naa B.dragon ke baare mein kuch likha tha ab kya wo yaad nahi aa raha.

Saifali- B.dragon par wo to maar chuka hai. Aap kuch aur yaad karne ki koshish kar kyun ki wo kitab yaha iss Earth par aa pahuchi hai aapke saath aur ab yaha logo ko pareshan kar rahi hai.

Headmaster ke liye ye bahut bada jhatka tha.

Headmaster- Mere kaaran par maine kya.....nahi aisa nahi ho sakta ye kya ho gaya.

Saifali- hmm usne aap par kaabu paa liya tha aur yahha aa gaya aur bhi pata nahi kya kya karwaya hai usne aapse.

Haedmaster- ye kaise ho gaya mujhse ab kya hoga.

Saifali- Jo ho gaya so ho gaya ab hame uss kitab ko rokna hoga warna pata nahi kya ho jaayega. Aap abhi jaao aur haa ab aap yahi Earth par hi ruko kuch din aur humme mil kar uss kitab ko pakadna hoga.

Headmaster- Ji thik hai.

AAj ke liye itna hi aagle update mein dekhte hai wo kon hai jo milla Saurya aur Alex ko Sun par aur ab uss Shaitani kitab ke baare mein janne ke baad kya kadam uthati hai Saifali.

Haa Chota update hai par agla bada hoga minimum 3000 words pakkka

Rahul · Jul 5, 2020

update chota hai lekin badhiya hai bhai ji kal bada wala update dena :hug:

Chinturocky · Jul 5, 2020

बेहतरीन अपडेट

Shahrukh · Jul 6, 2020

Awesome update bhai keep posting

Arjun Singh 72 · Jul 6, 2020

Nice update
Ye sun ke pass Kon rahta h
Keep posting

Black water · Jul 6, 2020

Nice update

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